1. Another (4.05 stars, 409 notes)
2. Mei's Beginner (1.47 stars, 102 notes)
3. Normal (2.12 stars, 206 notes)
4. wantuole's Hyper (3 stars, 264 notes)

Mei wrote:

萌！



弱弱的问一句：要不要gd啊。。。。

OrangeNeKo wrote:

Insane

01:42:120 (1,2,3) - 不放个跳么
01:43:532 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:37:532 (1,2,3) - 试试这样?

L4D MOE

Left 4 Dead wrote:

OrangeNeKo wrote:

Insane

嘿嘿嘿，兔饼骗分大失败。如果兔饼你承认自己萌的话，或许还会考虑下给你kds哦？（坏笑

1. 00:25:532 (3,4) - 建议围好
2. 00:37:179 (5,6,1) - 试的时候断了滑条，我思考5尾部压重，6和1是直线，目押有点难度，考虑换排列或者搞出点曲线
3. 01:16:356 (6) - 建议尾部whistle换到开头，配合乐音
4. 建议曲末接消音转盘

1. 00:23:061 (1,1) - 后一个滑条头部向前一个重叠，个人感觉最好是后面三滑条向内正三角
2. 00:24:826 (1,2,3) - 个人建议和前面对称，一个稀饭
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:650 (3,3) - 建议遮好
4. 00:30:120 (1) - 尾部拉到红线，也能配合下后面的节奏
5. 00:39:650 (2,2) - 后一个滑条尾部和前面的泡泡叠上
6. 00:50:061 (2,5) - 也是两个配合着叠上比较好看
7. 00:58:179 (2,1) - ↑
8. 01:12:297 (4,1) - 1叠到4，正三角
9. 01:28:356 (3,1,2,3,4) - 试的时候50了一个，这个弯不太好读，建议连打起始挪到滑条3开头
10. 01:53:767 (1,6) - ↑
11. 01:59:414 (5,4) - ↑别忘了挪这个02:02:040 (2) -
12. 02:04:096 - 个人建议尾部加一个消音转盘

ids wrote:

黑~
来自m4m

wantuole's Hard

• 
  
  

1. 00:25:532 (3,4) - 建议围好
2. 00:37:179 (5,6,1) - 试的时候断了滑条，我思考5尾部压重，6和1是直线，目押有点难度，考虑换排列或者搞出点曲线
3. 01:16:356 (6) - 建议尾部whistle换到开头，配合乐音
4. 建议曲末接消音转盘

Insane

1. 00:23:061 (1,1) - 后一个滑条头部向前一个重叠，个人感觉最好是后面三滑条向内正三角
2. 00:24:826 (1,2,3) - 个人建议和前面对称，一个稀饭
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:650 (3,3) - 建议遮好
4. 00:30:120 (1) - 尾部拉到红线，也能配合下后面的节奏
5. 00:39:650 (2,2) - 后一个滑条尾部和前面的泡泡叠上
6. 00:50:061 (2,5) - 也是两个配合着叠上比较好看
7. 00:58:179 (2,1) - ↑
8. 01:12:297 (4,1) - 1叠到4，正三角
9. 01:28:356 (3,1,2,3,4) - 试的时候50了一个，这个弯不太好读，建议连打起始挪到滑条3开头
10. 01:53:767 (1,6) - ↑
11. 01:59:414 (5,4) - ↑别忘了挪这个02:02:040 (2) -
12. 02:04:096 - 个人建议尾部加一个消音转盘

好，美丽，已赞过

Mei wrote:

送你一分（请叫我雷锋

[insane]

1. 00:09:650 (3) - 以前教我作图的前辈说过最好不要用滑条尾去压有重音的长白线，所以可以试试这样
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:17:767 (2,3,1,2) - 这里试试这样，吧 00:18:120 (3,1) - 做成00:17:767 (2) - 旋转120度/240度然后可以排成这样一个图案（我个人感觉美观会加分>.>
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:32:414 (3,4) - 修一下blanket
   
4. 01:03:297 (3,4,1) - 试试这样，吧3移到x100 y272 , 把1移到x296 y32
   
   Picture

   
5. 01:04:708 (1,4) - 避免一下overlap（虽然我觉得也不是太必要，不过随手就能解决的
   
6. 01:13:532 (1,2,3) - 这3个也能做成那种依次120度旋转的图形
   
7. 01:25:356 (4,5) - 没包好
   
8. 01:39:650 (4) - 也是滑条尾巴压到重音了，试着改成3/4滑条+1个note这样的节奏啊

[wantuole's hard]

1. 00:33:650 (3,4) - 干脆做个bat喜闻乐见的blanket啊
   
2. 00:38:591 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个听起来不太舒服，因为00:39:297 (2,4) - 这2个滑条都都把尾巴压在人声上了感觉有点弱（不知道怎么说，反正试试这样
   
   Picture

   
3. 01:01:885 (1,3) - 这两个叠啊（貌似有点难
   
4. 01:09:297 (4,5) - 感觉和下一个滑条离得有点远啊，试试移到x132 y220

[normal]

• 
  normal 不要变速比较好吧。。。。可能会被狗说

1. 01:16:708 (1,1) - normal里面这个有点太近了，建议直接把1删掉

ez谁做的真是aji
顺便射一射

Thanks for Modding!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

01:31:444 - 这里想办法插个note吧
01:50:591 (1) - 改成两个短滑条来突出一下spada这个主题或许不错

还有就是这个背景用故事版做成滚动的就好了, 再加个云彩特效, 给人一种乡村小城市的氛围, 然后结合主题, 就是一个这一首歌带起了2dx21spada整个碟子的那种感觉

就是那种慢速的滚动, 在慢慢移动的火车上远望城市的那种感觉

送你个star

tm1209 wrote:

Insane：
我感觉OD8更好，能提升一些难度:3
00:29:061 (3) - 这里之后放个转盘可能会好点？
其他好像没问题了呢:3
音效改成和音乐里面的鼓点相似或许打起来会更爽
大概就是这样了吧

Thanks For Modding!

lkx_Shore wrote:

From m4m

[General]
没有break,去掉letterbox
02:04:096 - 虽然有一点提前音...但我觉得用70bpm最好

[Insane]
OD+1 曲子很平淡没啥特别的变化，OD7太送了..
01:48:385 - 加note?和这里差不多01:31:179 (2,3,4) -
02:02:312 - 其实这里加note更好啊。

[Wantuole's Hard]
OD+1
00:49:708 (2) - 这个红线滑条打起来有点别扭..
01:27:297 (3) - 换1/2滑条然后加note更好

[Normal]
00:26:944 (1) - 折返一下就没必要下后面那1/2滑条...多余的节奏
02:01:179 (1,2,3) - NC?...敢低难度这里堆一块容易当成一种速度的

Thanks for Modding!

orza6006 wrote:

M4M from my queue

Hmm... it's beatmania IIDX so you could rename difficulties to Mei's Beginner, Standard, wantuole's Hyper and Another to reflect the source material

Mei's Easy

00:16:356 (5,1) - Nice slider wrapping
00:34:003 (5) - Ctrl-G and then move everything accordingly to keep distance snap equal
00:52:003 (1) - Either move to 96/40 for better flow into the slider, or 96/28 so it's on the same level as the slider on the other side
01:59:061 (1) - Make the end of the spinner more quiet so it doesn't intrude into the ending

Normal

AR5 maybe?
00:11:061 (5,6) - Incredibly Nazi but 5 to 312/184 and 6 to 92/224. Also having 6 curve the other way would improve flow
00:34:356 (6) - Maybe move this out, I'm not sure about objects under slider ends in Normal difficulty
01:06:120 (4) - Curve the other way for better flow
01:24:826 (1) - Nazi but angle this ever so slightly clockwise (outward) so it resembles the slider on the other end a little more
02:01:179 (1,1,1) - Nice ending

wantuole's Hard

HP+1 perhaps? It's probably OK how it is though
00:30:120 (2) - NC here, this note doesn't have any relation to the note before it
00:43:885 (3) - This is fine, but it might be nice to stack it on the head of the previous slider
00:46:003 (1,1,1) - Nice usage of NCs
00:55:885 (2) - If you move to 288/128 the flow will be nicer, and then you can move 5 so that the end stacks with it
01:31:356 (1,2) - The distance between these should be increased to fit in with the ones that come afterwards

Insane

00:19:708 (2) - Move to 196/244 for better flow
00:23:767 (1) - To 236/164 for better stacking with the others
00:26:591 (6) - The slider end could be stacked better with 3's end but I know grid snap gets in the way, so either leave it or play around with it a little to get them to stack properly
01:08:591 (1) - Maybe you could re-angle so you could get the end to stack with 2 and the head to stack with the yellow 3?
01:11:944 (2,3,1,2,3) - Nice stacking
01:24:826 (1,2,3,4) - For a nicer shape, have 244/140, 300/276, 332/128, 224/228 in that order
01:25:532 (5) - Stack end with 1
02:03:251 (3,4) - The hitsounds should be quieter here to represent the slowing down in the song

All difficulties are very nice, so not much for me to point out I'm afraid. I tried my best though.

Good luck getting this ranked, I don't think it needs much more work before it's time to call a BAT.

Hmm, you starred my map, so I guess I'll return the favour. Starred!

fanzhen0019 wrote:

斯巴达元素
先mark 我记得以前好像下过

fanzhen0019 wrote:

General

• iidx的命名习惯是Beginner Normal Hyper Another 你可以考虑一下

Easy

Hitsounds

• Clear

Arrangement & Design

• 工整 没啥好说的

Standard

Hitsounds

• Clear

Arrangement & Design

• 01:37:885 (1) - 我觉得可以new combo

1. 01:53:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - wocao

玩脱Hyp

Hitsounds

• 开头建议在短白线都下whistle
  感觉下的有点意识流 但都是whistle也没啥关系

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:46:003 (1,1) - 叠了 挪一挪
2. 00:47:767 (3,4) - 没包好
3. 01:19:356 (4) - 其实可以放到01:20:238 (3) - 这个位置
4. 01:28:356 (1) - 建议加大和前面的spacing 这有点欺诈了

Another

Hitsounds

• 没啥问题

Arrangement & Design

• Excellent

这歌是我过的第一个SPA啊
赶紧找BAT
GL!

Thanks for Modding!

Left 4 Dead wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
01:48:385 - 加note?和这里差不多01:31:179 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这里的排列不好改动，所以没改 这啥理由，这是音乐游戏，先有节奏再有排列...

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
01:48:385 - 加note?和这里差不多01:31:179 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这里的排列不好改动，所以没改 这啥理由，这是音乐游戏，先有节奏再有排列...

1. uncheck widescreensup

SPOILER

SPOILER

1. 00:13:708
2. 00:15:120
3. 00:16:179
4. 00:16:885
5. 00:22:179
6. 00:23:591
7. 00:24:650
8. 00:26:414

SPOILER

Pandiar wrote:

request from Mei sama


[General]

1. uncheck widescreensup

[Mei's Beginner]
00:48:120 (1) - how about this? for better flow

SPOILER

good

[Normal]
00:35:061 (1,2,3) - try to this rhythm

SPOILER

01:20:944 (1) - NC?

good

[wantuole's Hyper]
Why don't put the note?
good flow is wasted

1. 00:13:708
2. 00:15:120
3. 00:16:179
4. 00:16:885
5. 00:22:179
6. 00:23:591
7. 00:24:650
8. 00:26:414

KIAI TIME is also same


[Another]
00:06:650 (3) - i think it is little close. move about x316 y272 is better
00:25:003 (2) - for better flow

SPOILER

00:26:238 (6) - x488 y156
00:26:944 (8) - x440 y257
00:29:061 (3) - x264 y344?
00:46:356 (2) - NC because SV is changing
00:46:708 (3) - ^
01:03:650 - remove green line?

It was interesting >o<


good luck ~ !

Fixed Giving a slider a NC in special may be not good, so I make the slider into two circles (Actually, I think I made it harder for playing )

Well, because the Another isn't very difficult, so I think it is necessary to make some blanks for reducing the difficulty of the Hyper...However, if more people mention this, I would think about it. Thanks anyway

Thanks for Modding! ... and cute Mei!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

baka cb will mod it, stay tuned.