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Kurosaki Maon - fuss fuzz

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Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
乃好 thou bad~
晚了一些> < ~~
[General]
  1. 乃是怎么加的音效 咱完全没法查因为看不到
[Insane]
  1. 这个1/3的节奏居然od8呀 要不要这么鬼畜 强烈建议-1
  2. 00:19:228 - 这个circle好奇怪 感觉不需要 仔细听了下也没有音呀
  3. 01:03:123 (1) - 这个circle时间点应该在这里01:03:228 -
  4. 01:09:860 (2) - 这个折返感觉在这个难度不太合适
    这样呢？

  5. 01:39:215 - 这里缺个object
  6. 00:10:807 - 这里也缺呢
  7. 00:24:281 - 这里照乃这样map的话应该有circle的吧
  8. 00:24:597 - 这里也应该是个节点的感觉
  9. 00:23:965 - 这个也是
  10. 00:35:334 (3) - 这里没有音 感觉硬加上去怪怪的 打起来也不舒服 （好像这里有好多这样的 如果是故意自创音节的话就ignore吧> <
  11. 01:19:965 - 从这个时间点开始咱觉得乃这个rhythm彻底反掉惹 这个circle01:20:176 (2) - 应该移动到这个时间点01:20:492 - , 然后01:20:807 (2) - 在01:21:123 - ，01:21:439 (2) - 在01:21:755 - （乃现在这个哒音前加note是很破坏节奏的做法> < 阵型什么的要乃自己来了..
  12. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - 这个建议不要叠到一起, 做出渐进梗才好 像这样
  13. 01:27:531 (1) - 这里应该很激烈呀 不要折返呀> <(因为之前是一个连打 后面接这个折返明显龙头蛇尾的感觉> < 其实是咱觉得3分拍子最好不用折返的>///<
  14. 01:41:320 (4) - 节奏上的建议 其实咱觉得这个circle是滑条反而更好 （但是好像spacing会有些问题
    像这样的
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:18:281 - 这里不map上咩？
  2. 00:04:176 - 这里好多地方都对玩家不太友好呢，鼠标可能会很困扰吧（所以小凛咱觉得乃这个难度不用做的那么满节奏 像这里00:04:492 (2) - 完全可以一个circle就可以了00:08:597 (5) - 这个也是 00:24:071 (5) -
  3. 00:19:860 (2) - 这个滑条从00:19:965 - 开始好一些
  4. 开头不考虑ds开的小一些咩？ 感觉有些跳
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:176 (3) - 这个乃放到01:16:492 - 应该会更好一些 （不喜欢ignore就好 其实1/3的normal完全不知道怎么摸> <
就这么多惹T T
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

乃好 thou bad~
晚了一些> < ~~
[General]
  1. 乃是怎么加的音效 咱完全没法查因为看不到在这里加的
[Insane]
  1. 这个1/3的节奏居然od8呀 要不要这么鬼畜 强烈建议-1好
  2. 00:19:228 - 这个circle好奇怪 感觉不需要 仔细听了下也没有音呀这里有音的
  3. 01:03:123 (1) - 这个circle时间点应该在这里01:03:228 - 这个音确实在01:03:123
  4. 01:09:860 (2) - 这个折返感觉在这个难度不太合适试了一下还是比较喜欢原来的方案
    这样呢？

  5. 01:39:215 - 这里缺个object加上了
  6. 00:10:807 - 这里也缺呢这里跟的是那几个比较明显的音，所以没加note
  7. 00:24:281 - 这里照乃这样map的话应该有circle的吧这里加了感觉有点别扭啊
  8. 00:24:597 - 这里也应该是个节点的感觉^
  9. 00:23:965 - 这个也是^
  10. 00:35:334 (3) - 这里没有音 感觉硬加上去怪怪的 打起来也不舒服 （好像这里有好多这样的 如果是故意自创音节的话就ignore吧> <感觉有这个note会更充实一点 :(
  11. 01:19:965 - 从这个时间点开始咱觉得乃这个rhythm彻底反掉惹 这个circle01:20:176 (2) - 应该移动到这个时间点01:20:492 - , 然后01:20:807 (2) - 在01:21:123 - ，01:21:439 (2) - 在01:21:755 - （乃现在这个哒音前加note是很破坏节奏的做法> < 阵型什么的要乃自己来了..这里感觉还好啊，看看其他人怎么说
  12. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - 这个建议不要叠到一起, 做出渐进梗才好 像这样因为想不到好办法所以叠到一起了，现在改了
  13. 01:27:531 (1) - 这里应该很激烈呀 不要折返呀> <(因为之前是一个连打 后面接这个折返明显龙头蛇尾的感觉> < 其实是咱觉得3分拍子最好不用折返的>///<这个折返没什么问题啊
  14. 01:41:320 (4) - 节奏上的建议 其实咱觉得这个circle是滑条反而更好 （但是好像spacing会有些问题
    像这样的
    经前辈点拨后发现把4和5改成一个滑条会更好
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:176 (3) - 这个乃放到01:16:492 - 应该会更好一些 （不喜欢ignore就好 其实1/3的normal完全不知道怎么摸> 01:16:176是一个长音的开头啊，放到01:16:492会很奇怪的
就这么多惹T T
非常感谢～
ExtremelyAvg
43 posts
Joined July 2013
ExtremelyAvg
01:35:110 (1,2,3) - The sliders seem out of place in the beatmap since its the only time that happens.
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Ksiyas wrote:

01:35:110 (1,2,3) - The sliders seem out of place in the beatmap since its the only time that happens.
Here follows the guitar :D
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
M4M~~~~
[Normal]
00:15:860 (3) - center on the white line
[Hard]
00:51:228 (2) - sounds better on white tick
01:02:913 (3) - end it here 01:03:439
[Insane]
This diff look fine to me no problems spotted

That's all I have sorry for small mod :(
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

zorefire wrote:

M4M~~~~
[Normal]
00:15:860 (3) - center on the white line fixed
[Insane]
This diff look fine to me no problems spotted

That's all I have sorry for small mod :(
Thank you very much~
DeletedUser_2243638
DeletedUser_2243638
Mod Request~

Normal

00:13:018 add circle
00:30:386 ^
01:48:899 (2) a bit irritating for a beginner, maybe use circles and use simple beats

Fycho's Hard

00:03:544 (5,6) unexpected Insane-Jump
00:16:807 (1,2,3) too jumpy
00:18:386 (5,6,7) ^
01:16:071 (3,4) try to place this in a different way, it's irritating
01:17:439 (1,2) remove the jump

Insane

00:04:071 (1,2) maybe an overlap of these two would be nicer :D
00:10:176 (4,5,6) to place them like this is hard to read, you could make a slider of 5+6 and place 4 in the beginning of that
00:11:334 (1,2) overlap
00:21:860 remove NC
00:22:176 add NC
00:27:860 (4,5) make a slider of these two
00:32:913 (5,6) ^
00:37:965 (4,5) ^
00:40:807 remove NC
00:41:018 add NC
00:49:650 (2,3,4) try to make this scene jumpier, there is much time between the objects ^^
01:03:123 (1,2) slider? to map the singing is really nice but people who don't know the song will have problems to play it when it isn't mapped "easy"
01:22:176 (2) irritating you should invert this
01:25:320 (1,2,3) make jumps? ^^

really nice song and map, I like the Insane with the streams <3
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Julini wrote:

Mod Request~

Normal

00:13:018 add circle
00:30:386 ^
01:48:899 (2) a bit irritating for a beginner, maybe use circles and use simple beats

Insane

00:04:071 (1,2) maybe an overlap of these two would be nicer :DI want to keep this
00:10:176 (4,5,6) to place them like this is hard to read, you could make a slider of 5+6 and place 4 in the beginning of thatI don't think it 's hard for a Insane diff
00:11:334 (1,2) overlapI want to keep this
00:21:860 remove NC
00:22:176 add NC
00:27:860 (4,5) make a slider of these two
00:32:913 (5,6) ^
00:37:965 (4,5) ^
00:40:807 remove NC
00:41:018 add NC
00:49:650 (2,3,4) try to make this scene jumpier, there is much time between the objects ^^
01:03:123 (1,2) slider? to map the singing is really nice but people who don't know the song will have problems to play it when it isn't mapped "easy"Fixed
01:22:176 (2) irritating you should invert this I prefer this jump
01:25:320 (1,2,3) make jumps? ^^Fixed

really nice song and map, I like the Insane with the streams <3
Thank you very much~
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Hi~

[General]
Just a suggestion, it feels much more intuitive to have a note at 00:01:544 -
Well if you ever do, don't forget to adjust offset


[Normal]
I think AR5 would be more fitting to this song
00:18:702 (3) - It would sound better and be more intuitive if you put this on 00:19:018 - so you're not ignoring the snare here.
01:10:807 - add a circle here? I personally don't like ignoring snares..
01:35:110 (1,2) - Check DS here. its 1.1

[Fycho's Hard]
AR8 for the same reason above
00:47:439 (2) - stack error
01:36:373 (1,2) - this would be easier to read if they had the same spacing as 01:36:057 (4,1) - Plus I don't think it's necessary to emphasize this drums with a jump

[Insane]
01:04:176 (1,2,3) - anti jump would fit nice here
01:07:965 - add a circle here? feels empty and awkward without clicking this drum
01:50:162 (7) - I think the flow would make more sense if it was more closer to the center. Somewhere like 292x312

Well made :3 Good luck!
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

No Dap wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Just a suggestion, it feels much more intuitive to have a note at 00:01:544 -
Well if you ever do, don't forget to adjust offset I think 00:01:650 is better :D


[Normal]
I think AR5 would be more fitting to this songI prefer AR4
00:18:702 (3) - It would sound better and be more intuitive if you put this on 00:19:018 - so you're not ignoring the snare here.I want to keep this
01:10:807 - add a circle here? I personally don't like ignoring snares..fixed
01:35:110 (1,2) - Check DS here. its 1.1fixed

[Insane]
01:04:176 (1,2,3) - anti jump would fit nice hereI prefer overlap here
01:07:965 - add a circle here? feels empty and awkward without clicking this drumfixed
01:50:162 (7) - I think the flow would make more sense if it was more closer to the center. Somewhere like 292x312moved to (340,160)

Well made :3 Good luck!
Thank you very much~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho

OblivioN wrote:

[Fycho's Hard]
fycho的gd啊:3
00:24:386 (1) - 不和00:24:071 (5) - 平行么？ 这改动比较大
01:03:544 finish 对
01:10:807 (2) - 没有和01:11:123 (1) - 平行的样子故意不平行的，平行就没那个意境
[Other]
唔，听起来觉得很棘手的节奏……加油！.w.（my mod虽然不一定有用但是可以凑数【喂

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:18:281 - 这里不map上咩？ 不，1/3双连略难
  2. 00:04:176 - 这里好多地方都对玩家不太友好呢，鼠标可能会很困扰吧（所以小凛咱觉得乃这个难度不用做的那么满节奏 像这里00:04:492 (2) - 完全可以一个circle就可以了00:08:597 (5) - 这个也是 00:24:071 (5) - 滑条反而是比circle简单的，而且我觉得滑条和适合这里
  3. 00:19:860 (2) - 这个滑条从00:19:965 - 开始好一些不好啊，我跟的那个地鼓音
  4. 开头不考虑ds开的小一些咩？ 感觉有些跳fine imo
就这么多惹T T

zorefire wrote:

[Hard]
00:51:228 (2) - sounds better on white tick stress is at 1/3 sanp
01:02:913 (3) - end it here 01:03:439 I followed hi-hat, fine imo

Julini wrote:

Fycho's Hard

00:03:544 (5,6) unexpected Insane-Jump only fix this
00:16:807 (1,2,3) too jumpy
00:18:386 (5,6,7) ^
01:16:071 (3,4) try to place this in a different way, it's irritating
01:17:439 (1,2) remove the jump
I think the jumps are fine, since they are 1/1 jumps so not that hard in reading

No Dap wrote:

[Fycho's Hard]
AR8 for the same reason above yea, I thought this at first, fixed
00:47:439 (2) - stack error lazy to fix, fine in playing
01:36:373 (1,2) - this would be easier to read if they had the same spacing as 01:36:057 (4,1) - Plus I don't think it's necessary to emphasize this drums with a jump fixed by changing the spacing

Well made :3 Good luck!
thank you guys:3
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Alarido
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Joined September 2012
Alarido

Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods

(See the requesting post)



[Insane]
♥ The rhythms feel good (inclusive for HT players), hitsounding is well made and there's a certain variety on patterns (:
♥ No complaints here.

[Fycho's Hard]
00:46:702 (3,2) - Hope you snap both to grid, both at x:68 y:184, so their heads will stack perfectly (:
00:48:702 (1) - Here, feels better disable both Grid Snap and Distance Snap and move it manually to x:138 y:249.
:?: 01:16:492 (4) - Here is more a PAP -- "Pay Attention Point" -- because you (and others) might can see the sliderhead, even though it's partially hidden under (3)'s path. Probably one BAT or a more skilled modder will point it out and suggest some fixing here. I'm not suggesting nothing 'coz I find it amazing as it is.

[Normal]
:?: 00:30:702 (1) - It's nearer than it should be. Since it's clearly not possible move the slider down, I suggest adding a note on 00:30:386.
:?: 00:32:597 (1) - This placement can be a bit confusing for HD/FL players, at least for playing at first time. (The same does not happen at 00:49:650 (1) because of the slider arrow, then there's OK).
:?: 01:48:899 (2) - For the same reason pointed at 00:32:597 (1), it may be a controversial point, considering it's a Normal diff.

Aaaaaand that's it ^^

Good luck on ranking soon (:

Att.
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Alarido wrote:

Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods

(See the requesting post)



[Insane]
♥ The rhythms feel good (inclusive for HT players), hitsounding is well made and there's a certain variety on patterns (:
♥ No complaints here.

[Normal]
:?: 00:30:702 (1) - It's nearer than it should be. Since it's clearly not possible move the slider down, I suggest adding a note on 00:30:386.fixed
:?: 00:32:597 (1) - This placement can be a bit confusing for HD/FL players, at least for playing at first time. (The same does not happen at 00:49:650 (1) because of the slider arrow, then there's OK).I will keep this,it is easy enough
:?: 01:48:899 (2) - For the same reason pointed at 00:32:597 (1), it may be a controversial point, considering it's a Normal diff.^

Aaaaaand that's it ^^

Good luck on ranking soon (:

Att.
Thank you very much~
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
From my queue

纳尼= =1/3歌 看不懂

[Normal]

感觉有点空拍太多

01:48:689 (2) - 滑条 01:48:689 - 01:49:320

[打包飞秋]

00:10:492 有个鼓音

00:18:281 ^

00:34:386 加note ？

00:50:597 (4) - 我觉得扔出来好点

01:00:702 (4) - ^

00:56:807 短滑条到 00:56:913

01:24:597 (3) - 感觉不是很好 这梗

[Insane]

00:10:492 和 00:10:807 加note

00:43:018 (1) - 这减速 真讨厌

00:45:544 (1) - ^ 其他不提惹

01:09:755 (1) - 虽有鼓音 感觉删了好 连打后又来俩连 有点坑

01:36:899 (8,9) - 试试俩滑条

01:49:952 (6,7) - 合并试试

1/3不会玩
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

moonlightleaf wrote:

From my queue

纳尼= =1/3歌 看不懂

[Normal]

感觉有点空拍太多

01:48:689 (2) - 滑条 01:48:689 - 01:49:320从这里开始很别扭的


[Insane]

00:10:492 和 00:10:807 加note这里跟的是那几个比较明显的音，所以没加note

00:43:018 (1) - 这减速 真讨厌stress

00:45:544 (1) - ^ 其他不提惹^

01:09:755 (1) - 虽有鼓音 感觉删了好 连打后又来俩连 有点坑这是最高难度，坑点没关系

01:36:899 (8,9) - 试试俩滑条要怎么变成两个滑条？

01:49:952 (6,7) - 合并试试感觉不错，改了

1/3不会玩
非常感谢～
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
1,136 posts
Joined September 2009
Kenezz
Hi there, from my queue~

[General]
  1. The background looks kinda pixelated, I highly recommend change it for another one, maybe try with this: http://puu.sh/880eC.jpg. If you add with this bg, modify the color combos of you want.
  2. What is the sense to put "H.O.T.D & HOTD" in the tags? Maybe I would just leave "HOTD" but the other one is senseless for me. Furthermore, put "ending 7" instead ed7.
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:492 (4) - Add new combo here and delete it from the next slider (this is better for the voice).
  2. 00:37:018 (4) - If you fix the previous point, be sure to add new combo here.
  3. 00:36:386 (2) - This slider will look better if you rotate by 15° clockwise. 00:32:597 (1) - This one for example looks good because follow the straight side of 00:33:228 (2).
  4. 01:02:281 (1,2) - I really don't like this way to overlap the sliders, try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/881eU.jpg VS http://puu.sh/881jg.jpg In this case I rotate (2) by 30° anti-clockwise and adjust the other slider.
  5. 01:42:057 (4) - Rotate by 20° and place in x:192 y:204, imo looks and flows better.
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:18:281 - This part could flow better if you add a circle here, now feels like something missing after a 2/3 slider.
  2. 00:41:650 - Same as before. If you add, put the circle stacked in the start of (7)
  3. 00:49:650 (1,2,3,4) - Because your own style in all the map, this pattern don't works very well, I higly suggest avoid the stack between sliders.
  4. 00:59:755 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, I point this because in all your map you don't use spacing like this and could be confusing.
  5. 00:51:544 - Considers add a stack circle here.
  6. 01:02:913 (3) - This slider sounds reallly weirdo because first: the repeat follow the voice and then, the end follow the track... I suggest do something like in Insane.
  7. 01:37:531 (4) - Please add a new combo here and remove to the next slider.
  8. 01:42:583 (4) - Same as above.
  9. 01:40:162 (1,2,3) - These sliders don't fits in the track very well in compared of 01:38:162 (2,3,1,2,3), I suggest put two sliders instead these, http://puu.sh/88CZc.jpg, check the insane, there the sliders works good.
  10. 01:47:952 - Considers add stack circle here
[Insane]
  1. imo AR8 works better, the SV is not fast enough, but just saying~
  2. 00:05:334 - Considers add a circle here, now sounds kinda empty
  3. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - This part could be best if you add 1/3 sliders instead of each circle http://puu.sh/88Kx1.jpg fits better and are more playable.
  4. 00:10:386 (5) - If you add with the before point add a new combo here and remove in 00:11:334 (1).
  5. 00:48:071 (1) - Although is new combo for the SV change, this could be a little bit confusing and misunderstood for the jump, I suggest preserve the normal distance between this and the before slider like the others sliders like this.
  6. 01:00:281 - Add a circle here to follow best the slider.
  7. 01:37:531 (10) - Please add a new combo here and remove to the next slider.
  8. 01:46:373 (7) - Same as before.
It's all, I hope it helps you~
Good luck~
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Kenezz wrote:

Hi there, from my queue~

[General]
  1. The background looks kinda pixelated, I highly recommend change it for another one, maybe try with this: http://puu.sh/880eC.jpg. If you add with this bg, modify the color combos of you want.I want to keep this BG,it is not pixelated
  2. What is the sense to put "H.O.T.D & HOTD" in the tags? Maybe I would just leave "HOTD" but the other one is senseless for me. Furthermore, put "ending 7" instead ed7.fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:492 (4) - Add new combo here and delete it from the next slider (this is better for the voice).fixed
  2. 00:37:018 (4) - If you fix the previous point, be sure to add new combo here.fixed
  3. 00:36:386 (2) - This slider will look better if you rotate by 15° clockwise. 00:32:597 (1) - This one for example looks good because follow the straight side of 00:33:228 (2).fixed
  4. 01:02:281 (1,2) - I really don't like this way to overlap the sliders, try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/881eU.jpg VS http://puu.sh/881jg.jpg In this case I rotate (2) by 30° anti-clockwise and adjust the other slider.fixed
  5. 01:42:057 (4) - Rotate by 20° and place in x:192 y:204, imo looks and flows better.I want to keep this
[Insane]
  1. imo AR8 works better, the SV is not fast enough, but just saying~I prefer AR9
  2. 00:05:334 - Considers add a circle here, now sounds kinda emptya circle has already been placed here
  3. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - This part could be best if you add 1/3 sliders instead of each circle http://puu.sh/88Kx1.jpg fits better and are more playable.here follows the obvious sound
  4. 00:10:386 (5) - If you add with the before point add a new combo here and remove in 00:11:334 (1).
  5. 00:48:071 (1) - Although is new combo for the SV change, this could be a little bit confusing and misunderstood for the jump, I suggest preserve the normal distance between this and the before slider like the others sliders like this.fixed
  6. 01:00:281 - Add a circle here to follow best the slider.try but no change
  7. 01:37:531 (10) - Please add a new combo here and remove to the next slider.fixed
  8. 01:46:373 (7) - Same as before.fixed
It's all, I hope it helps you~
Good luck~
Thank you very much~
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic


[Normal]

00:04:176 (1) - blanket please~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519622

[Fycho's Hard]

00:12:913 (5) - this one? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519628
00:23:755 (4) - ctrl + g?
00:28:492 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519630
00:43:965 (2) - ctrl + g

good map! no pick!
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

HabiHolic wrote:



[Normal]

00:04:176 (1) - blanket please~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519622 fixed

good map! no pick!
Thank you very much~
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hi there!
mod from queue ~ :3
kinda late tho, sorry. >:

mapset looks really nice overall, can't say much. >:

[Normal]
just some blankets you could refine.. ;-;
  1. 00:26:281 (2) - move end to 358|293, middle anchor to 454|295
  2. 00:27:860 (1) - end: 275|239, middle: 224|320
  3. 00:28:807 (2) - if you fixed the above, move to 280|139 to fix DS, then end: 436|69, middle: 340|64
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:02:807 (3) - move middle anchor down for better blanket
  2. 00:14:281 (1) - ctrl +g two times, then move last anchor a bit further down for better symmetry
  3. 00:17:439 (3) - move to 388|40 for better symmetry (with 00:16:807 (1,2,4) - )
  4. 00:35:650 (3,4) - could improve movement if you place 4 further down
    example1
    or bend 3 in the opposite direction
    example2
    I know it's most likely intentional, but imo it's still a bit too abrupt as it is now
  5. 00:42:071 (1) - stack correctly below 00:41:334 (5) -
  6. 00:44:913 (2,3) - blanket could be a bit better. .o.
  7. 00:49:650 (1,2,3,4) - make sure they're stacked correctly
  8. 00:59:755 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 01:28:162 (2,3) - blanket?
sorry for nitpicking. ;-;

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:387 (3,4) - blanket? .o.
  2. 01:11:334 (6,7) - ctrl +g ?
  3. 01:33:426 (4,5) - ^
    justpersonal preferance, and it works so well in this diff, imo. ;w;
Sorry, that's all. u_u
good luck getting this ranked!
*squee* o/
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
mod from queue ~ :3
kinda late tho, sorry. >:

mapset looks really nice overall, can't say much. >:

[Normal]
just some blankets you could refine.. ;-;
  1. 00:26:281 (2) - move end to 358|293, middle anchor to 454|295
  2. 00:27:860 (1) - end: 275|239, middle: 224|320
  3. 00:28:807 (2) - if you fixed the above, move to 280|139 to fix DS, then end: 436|69, middle: 340|64
All fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:387 (3,4) - blanket? .o.
  2. 01:11:334 (6,7) - ctrl +g ?
  3. 01:33:426 (4,5) - ^
    justpersonal preferance, and it works so well in this diff, imo. ;w;
I want to keep these :(
Sorry, that's all. u_u
good luck getting this ranked!
*squee* o/
Thank you very much~
eironeia
88 posts
Joined June 2013
eironeia
From my queue~
Normal
00:19:334 (4) - NC here and remove NC at 00:19:650 (1)
From 00:22:492 (1) to 00:30:702 (1) - Your combo intervals are a bit weird in this interval. Add NC every preferably 2 bars.
01:20:597 (3) - Improve blanketing here by moving this slider to x:164 y:220
Nice map, this.
Fycho's Hard
00:39:228 (6) - I find this object to feel too close to the slider before. Maintain same spacing as in 00:37:334 (2,3)
00:50:807 (1,2) - You were following the guitar at 00:49:650 (1,2,3,4) so I would advocate for a circle overlapping the tail of 00:51:228 (2) for consistency's sake. Distance with 00:51:860 (3) may need to be reconsidered if you decide to follow this change.
01:02:913 (3) - May I suggest:

Using 1/4 beat snapper for this slider fits the music much more.
01:16:492 (4) - The half overlap with slider 3 kinda looks messy to me, but it may be a personal thing. I would move this a bit up to prevent this though.
01:25:005 (1) - Did you want this circle to be perfectly aligned with the slider before? If so move to x:251 y:342
01:40:162 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nice to turn these into:

As they would follow the guitar, nice and coherent. (Also you were following the guitar at 01:38:794 (1,2,3,4) so this would be a natural conclusion)
Insane
General: I think AR8 is better for this diff :v Because you are mapping at 1/3, the BPM appears less than 190 anyway, so the objects don't appear as fast as the BPM suggests.
00:26:913 (1) - Remove NC and add at 00:27:228 (2) because it feels better when the vocals start.
00:31:860 (1) - Remove NC and add at 00:32:281 (3)
01:13:544 (1) - Remove NC here. You went for a 4-bar long combo for every other point in the chorus before this one, so consistency.
01:14:281 (1) - Add NC here to add emphasis to stream.
01:22:492 (3) - Add NC here because of the previous 3 combos being only for 1 bar, just to top that off because 4 is the magic number.
Good luck for ranking! I think all of your diffs play quite beautifully, just a few things here and there, as well as a bit of nazi on my part. Enjoy :3
Btw
I thought we've met somewhere...

My luck :v
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

eironeia wrote:

From my queue~
Normal
00:19:334 (4) - NC here and remove NC at 00:19:650 (1)fixed
From 00:22:492 (1) to 00:30:702 (1) - Your combo intervals are a bit weird in this interval. Add NC every preferably 2 bars.fixed
01:20:597 (3) - Improve blanketing here by moving this slider to x:164 y:220fixed
Nice map, this.
Insane
General: I think AR8 is better for this diff :v Because you are mapping at 1/3, the BPM appears less than 190 anyway, so the objects don't appear as fast as the BPM suggests.I prefer AR9 but I will change it if other people think AR8 is better
00:26:913 (1) - Remove NC and add at 00:27:228 (2) because it feels better when the vocals start.no,I think add at 00:26:913 is better
00:31:860 (1) - Remove NC and add at 00:32:281 (3)^
01:13:544 (1) - Remove NC here. You went for a 4-bar long combo for every other point in the chorus before this one, so consistency.fixed
01:14:281 (1) - Add NC here to add emphasis to stream.fixed
01:22:492 (3) - Add NC here because of the previous 3 combos being only for 1 bar, just to top that off because 4 is the magic number.I want to keep this
Good luck for ranking! I think all of your diffs play quite beautifully, just a few things here and there, as well as a bit of nazi on my part. Enjoy :3
Btw
I thought we've met somewhere...

My luck :vlol
Thank you very much~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
thanks guys xD, fixed some stuff. Too many to reply everything, since they are little things imo, for reasons please find me in game.
SPOILER
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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 64176
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69544
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:fuss fuzz
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:thou bad
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:Highschool of the Dead
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eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue.

[Normal]
These combo changes are to be consistent with 01:04:807 - 01:14:597
01:17:439 (5,1) - nc on (5) remove on (1)
01:20:597 (3,4,1) - nc on (3) remove on (1)
01:23:439 (2) - nc

[Fycho's Hard]
00:17:439 (3,4,5) - try putting (5) somewhere else,there is different time between these but spacing is same.
01:06:281 - maybe try adding a circle here. stack on 01:06:386 (1) -
01:31:215 (3) - nc
01:40:162 (1,2,3) - maybe make these into 1/3 reverse sliders then put them closer

[Insane]
00:15:439 (1) - remove nc

That's all. Best of luck :)
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

[Normal]
These combo changes are to be consistent with 01:04:807 - 01:14:597
01:17:439 (5,1) - nc on (5) remove on (1)fixed
01:20:597 (3,4,1) - nc on (3) remove on (1)fixed
01:23:439 (2) - ncfixed

[Insane]
00:15:439 (1) - remove ncfixed

That's all. Best of luck :)
Thank you very much~
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
Hi from my modding queue

[General]
non

[Normal]
00:37:018 to 00:38:913 - It sounds a little boring with only drums. Try adding some hitnormal sounds I Suggest put hitnormal on Combo(2) and (4)
00:40:807(3) - Remove hitnormal then add hitnormal to 00:41:018 . It's better
00:41:439(4) - ^
01:30:689(2) - Put hitnormal
01:31:952(3) - ^

[Insane]
00:01:650 - Recommended pattern http://puu.sh/8psKx.PNG

That's all
Good luck mapping :)
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

arviejhay wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

[General]
non

[Normal]
00:37:018 to 00:38:913 - It sounds a little boring with only drums. Try adding some hitnormal sounds I Suggest put hitnormal on Combo(2) and (4)fixed
00:40:807(3) - Remove hitnormal then add hitnormal to 00:41:018 . It's betterI want to keep this
00:41:439(4) - ^^
01:30:689(2) - Put hitnormaladded hitnormal at (1)
01:31:952(3) - ^fixed

[Insane]
00:01:650 - Recommended pattern http://puu.sh/8psKx.PNGI don't like this :(

That's all
Good luck mapping :)
Thank you very much~
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
From queue:

[Normal]
00:03:228 (3) - Soft whistle on the end.
00:39:544 (1) - Normal sampleset (Shift W) on the end.
00:44:597 (1) - Soft whistle on the end.
01:04:807 (1) - Normal sampleset on the end.
01:08:597 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.
01:11:123 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.
01:21:860 (3) - Maybe a finish or a soft whistle on the end.
01:31:320 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.
01:33:215 (2) - Soft whistle on the end.
01:45:215 (1) - Soft whistle on the end.
01:48:689 (2) - Add a note here.

[Insane]
I think AR8 would fit the rhythm of the song better. The song is too swingy for AR9 imo.
01:07:860 (2,3) - Bring this stack down and to the left. It doesn't play well as a jump to (4), especially when it's the same gap as (5,6).
01:35:110 (1,2,3) - Just make this a stream. 1/6 length sliders are ridiculous.
01:39:215 (2,3) - Not sure about this jump.
Other than that it plays pretty well.
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Normal]
00:03:228 (3) - Soft whistle on the end.no need to use whistle here
00:39:544 (1) - Normal sampleset (Shift W) on the end.added whistle here
00:44:597 (1) - Soft whistle on the end.fixed
01:04:807 (1) - Normal sampleset on the end.added whistle here
01:08:597 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.fixed
01:11:123 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.fixed
01:21:860 (3) - Maybe a finish or a soft whistle on the end.I prefer the original
01:31:320 (3) - Soft whistle on the start.fixed
01:33:215 (2) - Soft whistle on the end.fixed
01:45:215 (1) - Soft whistle on the end.fixed
01:48:689 (2) - Add a note here.?

[Insane]
I think AR8 would fit the rhythm of the song better. The song is too swingy for AR9 imo.fixed
01:07:860 (2,3) - Bring this stack down and to the left. It doesn't play well as a jump to (4), especially when it's the same gap as (5,6).this is a Insane diff,maybe no problem
01:35:110 (1,2,3) - Just make this a stream. 1/6 length sliders are ridiculous.^
01:39:215 (2,3) - Not sure about this jump.^
Other than that it plays pretty well.
Thank you very much~
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
Hi

From my queue

[Normal]

00:14:281 (1) - Make the additions from drum to auto and replace finish with whistle on head
00:34:492 (1) - ^
00:41:439 (4) - Make the additions from drum to auto on tail
00:43:965 (3) - Make additions auto and replace finish with whistle
00:45:544 (2) - Sampleset: Normal, Additions: Soft and add whistle on head
00:49:018 (3) - whistle
00:55:650 (2) - Sampleset: Normal, Additions: Soft and add whistle on head
01:02:913 (2) - Sampleset: Drum and add whistle on tail
01:25:005 (1) - Add Finish on head and whistle on tail
01:25:952 (2,3,4) - add whistle

[Insane]
00:43:018 (1) - Unexpected SV Change
00:45:544 (1) - ^
00:46:176 (1) - ^
00:53:123 (1) - ^
00:55:650 (1) - ^
01:03:123 (1) - Remove NC
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

vahn10 wrote:

Hi

From my queue

[Normal]

00:14:281 (1) - Make the additions from drum to auto and replace finish with whistle on head
00:34:492 (1) - ^
00:41:439 (4) - Make the additions from drum to auto on tail
00:43:965 (3) - Make additions auto and replace finish with whistle
00:45:544 (2) - Sampleset: Normal, Additions: Soft and add whistle on headfixed
00:49:018 (3) - whistle
00:55:650 (2) - Sampleset: Normal, Additions: Soft and add whistle on headfixed
01:02:913 (2) - Sampleset: Drum and add whistle on tail
01:25:005 (1) - Add Finish on head and whistle on tail
01:25:952 (2,3,4) - add whistle
added some whistles
[Insane]
00:43:018 (1) - Unexpected SV Change
00:45:544 (1) - ^
00:46:176 (1) - ^
00:53:123 (1) - ^
00:55:650 (1) - ^
01:03:123 (1) - Remove NCfixed
Thank you very much~
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
as ur req

Insane

  1. 00:28:071 (5) - 莫名觉得这里应该加个nc，那样更好读，否则有点抓不住节奏
  2. 00:33:123 (6) - ^
  3. 00:38:176 (5) - ^，其他还有些类似的地方。。。
  4. 到后面一直在顺时针转啊噗

Fycho's Hard

  1. 只能跪orz

Normal

  1. 一开始音效会不会太响了点？
  2. 其他真没啥
有点骗kd嫌疑。。。射一发再说。。。

话说我超喜欢这个曲子啊，只是懒比没开坑。。。现在给你做个ex你还要么？

good luck
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

Insane

  1. 00:28:071 (5) - 莫名觉得这里应该加个nc，那样更好读，否则有点抓不住节奏这里是按DS排下来的，刻意加nc会不会有点别扭
  2. 00:33:123 (6) - ^
  3. 00:38:176 (5) - ^，其他还有些类似的地方。。。
  4. 到后面一直在顺时针转啊噗其实整张图都是在绕圈

Fycho's Hard

  1. 只能跪orz+1

Normal

  1. 一开始音效会不会太响了点？开头音量改成55%了，Insane也改了
  2. 其他真没啥
有点骗kd嫌疑。。。射一发再说。。。

话说我超喜欢这个曲子啊，只是懒比没开坑。。。现在给你做个ex你还要么？不打算再加diff了，所以只好拒绝前辈的好意了 :(

good luck
非常感谢～
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
射個星就算了
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

IamKwaN wrote:

射個星就算了
跪谢前辈 :)
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
hihihi

[insane]
  1. 00:02:913 00:05:439 00:07:965 我看了一下，你前面的节奏和蕾丝菊的下发是一样的，虽然你用间距来表现节奏但是我个人打起来还是觉得比较难，在这几个地方加上note虽然有点overmap，但是在读图和consistency上都很有帮助，因为是insane吗所以我建议你大胆的加上，后面类似的地方也请斟酌下（其实就是长白线的地方可以试试不空
  2. 00:10:386 (5,6,7,1,2) - 这个地方节奏这样感觉不太好，试试这个
    Picture

  3. 00:20:281 (6,7,8) - 6，7大跳但是7，8又小跳了，这里的间距感觉不太合理，建议这样
    Picture
  4. 00:24:281 这里建议加个note
  5. 00:43:018 (1) - 这个确实有点初见杀，但是貌似也没什么问题
  6. 01:02:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议这样，你现在这个滑条开头跟鼓结尾跟人声，有点不伦不类，建议2个都跟了
    Picture
  7. 01:23:018 这里可以加个2连，听起来没有空拍就不会感觉太违和
  8. 01:27:531 (1,2) - blanket
  9. 01:37:636 (2,3,4,5) - 个人觉得这样还好打些
    Picture


[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:08:281 (4) - 这个向上弯感觉好些
  2. 00:18:281 这里加个note和00:18:386 (5) - 叠起来？
  3. 00:31:860 这里加个note
    Picture
  4. 00:42:071 (1,2) - 试试这样，这里空拍太多感觉不太舒服
    Picture
  5. 00:51:228 (2,3) - 试试这样
    Picture
做得很好｡･ω･｡)b，送你一分
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[insane]
  1. 00:02:913 00:05:439 00:07:965 我看了一下，你前面的节奏和蕾丝菊的下发是一样的，虽然你用间距来表现节奏但是我个人打起来还是觉得比较难，在这几个地方加上note虽然有点overmap，但是在读图和consistency上都很有帮助，因为是insane吗所以我建议你大胆的加上，后面类似的地方也请斟酌下（其实就是长白线的地方可以试试不空 这几个地方加了有点别扭啊
  2. 00:10:386 (5,6,7,1,2) - 这个地方节奏这样感觉不太好，试试这个 这里我想保留
    Picture

  3. 00:20:281 (6,7,8) - 6，7大跳但是7，8又小跳了，这里的间距感觉不太合理，建议这样 ^
    Picture
  4. 00:24:281 这里建议加个note 感觉不加比较好 :(
  5. 00:43:018 (1) - 这个确实有点初见杀，但是貌似也没什么问题
  6. 01:02:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议这样，你现在这个滑条开头跟鼓结尾跟人声，有点不伦不类，建议2个都跟了 好
    Picture
  7. 01:23:018 这里可以加个2连，听起来没有空拍就不会感觉太违和 空着感觉没什么问题
  8. 01:27:531 (1,2) - blanket 好
  9. 01:37:636 (2,3,4,5) - 个人觉得这样还好打些 还是更倾向于原来的
    Picture


做得很好｡･ω･｡)b，送你一分
非常感谢~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[Insane]
  1. 01:19:018 - clap
先留名 我回家再edit仔細mod下 現在手邊沒板子不太好摸
(另外快把這圖救回來啊 看到graveyard就不想摸ˋ_ˊ)

Edit:
[General]
  1. Source: 学園黙示録 HIGHSCHOOL OF THE DEAD
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:597 (7,8) - 這兩個好像離太近了些? 我建議你把(5,7)做個互換, 差不多像下面圖的這個感覺 (位置可以自己稍微調一下)
    SPOILER
  2. 00:21:123 (8) - 另外感覺這個要nc
  3. 00:22:492 (3,4) - 這類的pattern我覺得你要注意一下, 像是這裡slider+note就比較好打, 但00:26:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種都是note的如果音樂沒有聽熟就比較難抓, 畢竟vocal突然頓了一下不是1/1嘛. 這裡比較好的解決方法就是把00:28:071 (5,6) - 合成一個slider會比較好按, 以後要多注意一下
  4. 01:15:755 - 不跟vocal? 可以做個1/3slider或是兩個圈也行
  5. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - 挺適合soft-whistle的
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:21:439 - 感覺這裡可以normal-sampleset 鼓聲挺強的
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Flask wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:19:018 - clap
先留名 我回家再edit仔細mod下 現在手邊沒板子不太好摸
(另外快把這圖救回來啊 看到graveyard就不想摸ˋ_ˊ)

Edit:
[General]
  1. Source: 学園黙示録 HIGHSCHOOL OF THE DEAD 改了
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:597 (7,8) - 這兩個好像離太近了些? 我建議你把(5,7)做個互換, 差不多像下面圖的這個感覺 (位置可以自己稍微調一下) 好
    SPOILER
  2. 00:21:123 (8) - 另外感覺這個要nc 好
  3. 00:22:492 (3,4) - 這類的pattern我覺得你要注意一下, 像是這裡slider+note就比較好打, 但00:26:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種都是note的如果音樂沒有聽熟就比較難抓, 畢竟vocal突然頓了一下不是1/1嘛. 這裡比較好的解決方法就是把00:28:071 (5,6) - 合成一個slider會比較好按, 以後要多注意一下 这里都是按照DS排列下来的 :( 保留下来恶心一下人吧
  4. 01:15:755 - 不跟vocal? 可以做個1/3slider或是兩個圈也行 好
  5. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - 挺適合soft-whistle的 改了
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:21:439 - 感覺這裡可以normal-sampleset 鼓聲挺強的 好
非常感谢～
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