Zero__wind wrote:

Hello Rare

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
Plz disable the widescree support for Mickey's Hard to be consistent fixed

Easy
HP2 for better better diff spread? as the Normal diff is only with HP4 i don't think so.
00:05:930 (2) - I recommend to change this into a 3/2 reverse slider instead and add a circle at 00:07:430 - , making the rhythm like 00:11:930 (2,3) - , because the beat at 00:06:492 - is more important imo no change.
00:09:680 (3) - this slider is running out of the playfield, plz make something different to avoid this I think you can try to use the space on the right like the pic below if you feel hard to rearrange the placement here are you sure this slider is unrankable because of off screen? even though, this slider isn't touch to window border.

SPOILER

00:13:055 (3) - a drum finish at end is preferred, like that in Lunatic diff added finish to head.
00:33:305 (2,3) - maybe you'd like to make them a blanket, like 01:18:305 (2,3) - it's intentional. i won't change it.
01:33:305 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:49:430 - a whistle at this point and on 00:49:805 (4) - would fit the music nicely, referring to 02:01:430 (4,5) - fixed
01:48:680 (3,4) - ^ ^
03:01:430 - 03:01:805 - ^ ^
03:11:930 (2) - missing a normal sample on head to go with the drums, also you could consider a soft whistle addition for either this slider's head or tail added normal sampleset

Normal
00:05:555 (1,2) - I recommend to move the soft whistle from 1 to 2's head like 03:05:930 (2) - , I think it would fit the music better added whistle to head
00:11:930 (3) - would you plz avoid using 1/2 sliders which reverses multiple times like this in E&N diff? I think this kind of stuff is really unfriendly to new players, because the slider is short that they simply don't have enough time to react how many times the slider would repeat. you can try something like the pic below to solve this problem i want to keep my current pattern.

SPOILER

00:13:430 (2) - try a drum finish here? like I've mentioned in Easy diff added finish to (1) to end
03:13:430 (2) - ^ ^
00:44:180 (1) - this slider is running out of the playfield, plz use something else instead to avoid this may try with two circles instead like the pic below

SPOILER

00:49:430 (5) - highly recommended to change as well, same reason as 00:11:930 (3) - , the easiest solution here should be to make it reverse once less and adjust the spacing a bit like ↓ of course you could try something else i won't change.

SPOILER

01:44:180 (1) - same as 00:44:180 (1) -
01:49:430 (5) - same as 00:49:430 (5) -
03:11:930 (3) - same as 00:11:930 (3) -

Mickey's Hard
Pretty good, I'm totally fine with this diff

Lunatic
00:49:055 (9,10) - this jump is a bit big imo, because there're no heavy drum and cymbal sounds in the music at this point, not like 00:31:805 (5,6,1) - . So I'm thinking that maybe you could make 00:49:055 (9,10) - like 01:07:805 (9,10) - ? that would be more intuitive imo i don't think so.
02:16:430 (3) - this slider shouldn't be a 3/4 slider as it doesn't go along with anything in the music, I think you should try to make 02:14:930 (3) - a 3/4 slider instead, to catch the beat at 02:15:211 - , referring to 02:20:930 (3) - i won't change it.
And the most important thing for this diff is that, could you consider making the AR lower than 9? I think it's gerneraly too high now. It may make some particular pattern easier to read, but for most parts of the map, it seems too fast. After some testplay with different AR setting, I personaly recommend AR8.5 as a appropriate choice. If you don't like decimal difficulty setting, I think AR8 is still better than AR9, plz have a try.
many test player said "AR9 is np. you don't have to change it".
I'm won't change it because there is no problem to play test.

Pretty good mapset
Call me back~

Andrea wrote:

Cute song and map, good job! :3

CDFA wrote:

01:54:305 (4) - 0/10 would not play