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Nekomata Master feat. *spiLa* - Clumsy thoughts

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月12日 at 10:37:50

Artist: Nekomata Master feat. *spiLa*
Title: Clumsy thoughts
BPM: 153
Filesize: 5562kb
Play Time: 04:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (1.6 stars, 212 notes)
  2. alacat's Normal (1.6 stars, 349 notes)
  3. Elvis' Insane (4.64 stars, 1031 notes)
  4. Hard (3.34 stars, 676 notes)
Download: Nekomata Master feat. *spiLa* - Clumsy thoughts
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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May, 2013.
Easy - happy623
Normal - alacat
Hard - Kloyd
Insane - EvilElvis
Last edited by DeletedUser_1574070 , edited 7 times in total.
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
http://puu.sh/7H5zB.osu
finished
DeletedUser_1574070
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EvilElvis wrote:

http://puu.sh/7H5zB.osu
finished

thx so much!

you're so pro / gonna submit this next month just wait!
DeletedUser_1574070
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DeletedUser_1574070
guys somebody plz guest my normal and easy........
alacat
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2011
alacat
http://puu.sh/8L45G.osu

omatase! preview point wasure naide ne!!
DeletedUser_1574070
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alacat wrote:

http://puu.sh/8L45G.osu

omatase! preview point wasure naide ne!!

AZAMATH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Skystar
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Joined May 2011
Skystar
KOROSENSEI
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Amamiya Yuko wrote:

KOROSENSEI

hai douzo
69653863
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Joined January 2012
69653863

Mod request from my queue™

Guide
Formatting details:
  1. Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
  2. Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
  3. Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.
Additional notes:
  1. I cannot mod special game modes.
  2. Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
  3. If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.
Some useful links for mapping:
  1. Analyzing flow in beatmaps
  2. Mapping polarity
  3. How to make beautiful sliders
  4. How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
  5. Difficulty naming
  6. Advanced Timing

welp sorry late

[ General]
  1. 01:41:082 - title text would be better if moved here. also consider using colors as white title text doesn't seem to go well with white bg
  2. countdown is unfitting imo
  3. no tags? really?

[ 623's Easy]
  1. 00:06:964 (1) - the first curve (2nd slidernode) is currently not a good curve, bending slightly high, try to lower it down a bit
  2. 00:32:062 (3,1) - blanket could be improved.
  3. 00:33:631 (1,1) - is unsnapped sliderhead intentional? if no, please stack both sliderhead at same place
  4. 00:49:317 (1,2) - this is strongly potential for sliderblanket
  5. 00:52:454 (1) - curve looks imbalanced, try to use 2 slidernodes instead of 1 to draw perfect curve http://puu.sh/a1OCC/0da772c0bc.jpg
  6. 01:34:807 (1) - second curve is imbalanced and badly blankets the next circle, try to proportionally align the slidernodes http://puu.sh/a1OHh/0245e59b17.jpg
  7. 01:55:199 (1) - assymetric
  8. 02:50:101 (1,2) - blanket could be improved
  9. 03:19:905 (1) - long sliders are truly potential for sliderarts, considering you draw a lot of them, why not draw one here (donut shapes are not good for longer sliders, looks boring imo)
  10. 04:14:807 (1,2) - blanket could be improved

[ alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:27:356 (1) - considering the way you curve most sliders, this sliderwave is not curved enough. i also spot clones of it so if you fixed this you'd better fix the clones either.
  2. 02:14:023 (1) - you didn't usually draw sliderkinks this way
  3. 03:37:944 (4) - clap should be on slidertail instead

[ Hard]
  1. 00:44:611 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - though current formation might be your preference, somehow hexagonal formation is also recommendable
  2. 00:50:101 (3,4,5,6) - not a good flow. i suggest to ctrl+g this 00:50:493 (5,6) - (would form a triangular clockwise flow) that might flow better. don't mind the jump created on next slider as it still plays good
  3. 01:00:886 (6,7,8,9) - i question these spacing tbh, in first 3 circles the distance is regarded as jump and in the last circle it is a normal spacing; which could also lead to misread. maybe try this antijump http://puu.sh/a1PuD/c0ff4bb789.jpg thats all i can suggest
  4. 01:03:435 (5,6) - this stack is not good imo, it doesn't follow anything (i assume you're following vocal vaccuum here. but normal spacing is way better in following it imo)
  5. 01:14:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure about these spacing. either space them normally OR space them way closer (current spacing is like, i don't know, hanging between stream spacing and normal spacing, which i find confusing)
  6. 01:15:984 (1,4) - maybe you can try http://puu.sh/a1PDB/aecfac4dff.jpg idk
  7. 01:25:395 (1,2,3) - why not unified rotate value? it'll look better if you be like, for example rotating second slider 60deg and third slider 60deg too (third slider is cloned from second slider)
  8. 01:26:572 (4,5) - ctrl+g works better i think
  9. 01:37:944 (1) - this curve is, idk, it's way too bent. maybe try this drawing http://puu.sh/a1PO1/d71916eed1.jpg (also notice that curve could be potential for blankets, especially for blanketing next 2 circles)
  10. 02:27:356 (8,2) - any reason why these are not snapped along?
  11. 02:28:140 (1,3) - blanket-spacing is too close.
  12. 02:56:180 (5) - thought you might be able to apply somehow-similar-mod that i stated for 01:00:886 (6,7,8,9) -
  13. 03:03:435 (3,4,5,6,1) - broken flow, check this diagram http://puu.sh/a1Q7L/9a2bfbe3e6.jpg either you rotate circles (4 of them) bit down or ctrl+g slider, or what you want.

nice mapset, i like it

take my star, good luck! edit: can't shoot because graved .___.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue™


[ 623's Easy]
  1. 00:06:964 (1) - the first curve (2nd slidernode) is currently not a good curve, bending slightly high, try to lower it down a bit
  2. 00:32:062 (3,1) - blanket could be improved.
  3. 00:33:631 (1,1) - is unsnapped sliderhead intentional? if no, please stack both sliderhead at same place
  4. 00:49:317 (1,2) - this is strongly potential for sliderblanket I still want to keep this, because I want to keep the flow with 00:50:886 (2,1) -
  5. 00:52:454 (1) - curve looks imbalanced, try to use 2 slidernodes instead of 1 to draw perfect curve http://puu.sh/a1OCC/0da772c0bc.jpg
  6. 01:34:807 (1) - second curve is imbalanced and badly blankets the next circle, try to proportionally align the slidernodes http://puu.sh/a1OHh/0245e59b17.jpg
  7. 01:55:199 (1) - assymetric
  8. 02:50:101 (1,2) - blanket could be improved
  9. 03:19:905 (1) - long sliders are truly potential for sliderarts, considering you draw a lot of them, why not draw one here (donut shapes are not good for longer sliders, looks boring imo)
  10. 04:14:807 (1,2) - blanket could be improved

nice mapset, i like it

take my star, good luck! edit: can't shoot because graved .___.
everything is applied except the one I mentioned, thanks for improving my blankets xD/

hi
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Master feat. spiLa - Clumsy thoughts.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Clumsy thoughts
TitleUnicode:Clumsy thoughts
Artist:Nekomata Master feat. *spiLa*
ArtistUnicode:Nekomata Master feat. *spiLa*
Creator:Kloyd
Version:623's Easy
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:418010
BeatmapSetID:158297

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SliderTickRate:1

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Curisu
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Amazing hitsounding technique.
00:00:690 ~ 00:06:964 - imo you should reduce the volume for 20%(or more) at every point you use a normal-hit
00:11:474 (5) - remove whis ; 00:11:670 (6) - add whis. imo fits the tune better
00:20:297 (1,4) - remove whis
00:20:493 (2,3) - add clap ; 00:21:670 and 00:23:239 - remove clap(all or the first one) - the music actually featured a light clap in 00:20:493. Also, self-created rhythm featured in 00:21:670 and 00:23:239 should be used for just once imo.
00:48:631 (6,2) - remove these circles to highlight these two notes: 00:48:729 (1,3)
00:59:121 (1) - x=305, y=122 ; 00:59:317 (2) - x=203, y=294 ; 00:59:905 (1,2) - should be at the same place of 00:58:337 (2,4)
01:41:474 ~ 01:52:454 - some hitsounds seems too quiet for me
01:46:572 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use a regular stream instead imo. doesn't fit the style of the map.
02:21:082 (1) - http://puu.sh/ameJQ/e9a32e9e8c.jpg
02:49:121 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/ameRb/aaeb9e1209.jpg
03:20:297 (3) - x=98, y=213 ; 03:20:493 (4) - x=260, y=115 ; 03:20:886 (6) - x=230, y=339. mind your blanket.
03:45:395 (3) - x=164, y=263 blanket again.
04:28:010 (2,3) - remove
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