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Yooh - snow storm -euphoria-

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 27, 2014 at 3:48:51 PM

Artist: Yooh
Title: snow storm -euphoria-
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: 制作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest SDVX bemani dj TAKA Takayuki Ishikawa beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD Lust
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3146kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED (5 stars, 394 notes)
  2. BASIC (2.91 stars, 153 notes)
  3. BEGINNER (1.15 stars, 94 notes)
  4. EUPHORIC (4.2 stars, 890 notes)
  5. EXHAUST (5 stars, 528 notes)
  6. INFINITE (5 stars, 666 notes)
  7. Lust's NOVICE (4.73 stars, 236 notes)
Download: Yooh - snow storm -euphoria-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WHOOSH BANG wowowereewwwwwwwwwwurrrerwwwwwwwwww BANG BANG

Novice by Lust.
Every other difficulty is by me.

New difficulty (again) and file. Redownload if before 2014/05/19.
thelewa


omg this was awesome
yoshilove
おお・・・
nice song~ map!!!
Lust
And here we are

"NOVICE"
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: snow storm -euphoria- [EXH effect] Yooh.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48113
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:snow storm -euphoria-
TitleUnicode:snow storm -euphoria-
Artist:Yooh
ArtistUnicode:Yooh
Creator:ktgster
Version:Lust's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:dj TAKA 作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection- Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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onotoleonide
omg cool
DakeDekaane
Hi~
Modding as requested~

[General]
:!: Disable Letterboxing during breaks and Widescreen Support in all difficulties. Lust's diff has both disabled while yours have both enabled.
:!: Disable/enable countdown in all difficulties. Lust's diff has it disabled while yours have it enabled.

[BASIC]
I suggest to use a AR4 as minimum here, I feel AR3 too slow considering this diff has a considerable objects density, take in mind too many objects in screen would stress new/mid players.
00:01:447 (1,2) - How about reversing (Ctrl+G) both? This would create a smoothie flow from (2) to 00:04:113 (1). Remember to put it in an appropiate place if you do.
00:28:113 (3) - NC.
00:52:113 (3,1) - While I see this as a nice detail, considering this is the lowest diff, could you remove this overlap?
01:46:112 (1) - Remove NC.

[NOVICE]
Okay, I'm going to suggest AR7 to improve readability.
It requires a bit of work in comboing, for example 00:04:113 (1,2,1,2) could fit in a single combo, this gets a bit annoying because you have 1 object combos 00:10:113 (1) which could fit in a larger one 00:09:446 (1,2,1), thus not derping around with the HP drain. tl;dr stick with NC'ing each downbeat (longest white tick).
00:22:113 (3,4,5) - The rhythm here is 1/3, so this circles in 1/2 feels awkward, try a rhythm with a 2/3 slider followed by a circle 1/3 beat later, or a 1/3 slider with 2 repeats.
00:25:446 - 00:32:113 - Map this like the rest of the difficulties? For some reason this doesn't feel good being a break, if you want to keep it, remove 00:32:113 (1), so the player begins again in 00:33:446 (1), which somehow feels more natural.
00:54:113 (3,4) - Put first the slider and then the circle, 00:54:446 has a strong beat which feels weird releasing the button, it plays better being hit.
00:56:780 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this in 00:57:113, this will match nicely with the sound there. Additionally, you could add a note in 00:57:280.
01:06:780 (1,2) - This being 3/2 sliders doesn't compliment the song too nicely because there's no reverse feeling in this part, rather make them 3/1 sliders.
01:29:446 (2) - Make it a 1/1 slider so it matches with the sound in 01:29:779.
01:30:946 (3) - If you do what I suggested above, remove the repeat here to have kinda the same pattern here.
01:50:632 (1) - This should be a 1/1 slider, theres no sound in 01:51:324 .
01:52:478 (1) - As above, a 1/1 slider should fit better here, but this time because 01:52:939 is stronger than 01:53:170, so this plays weird with that beat being ignored.
01:53:401 (2,3) - How about doing this, this way you'll cover the piano better as you'd not be ignoring 01:54:657.

[ADVANCED]
This is awesome.
00:22:113 - Maybe add in some way the 1/3 rhythm here, it feels a bit empty here.

[EXHAUST]
Holy ---- all these streams, got rekt in the middle.
00:47:280 (1) - Shouldn't this begin in 00:47:446?

[INFINITE]
I wont mess with holy land, rhythm is clean so I have nothing to suggest here. Just some stuff I decided to nitpick regarding hitsounding.
00:35:946 (8) - I really don't see why you silenced this, there's a sound in the music, so even a soft-hitnormal one would make it here.
00:36:113 (1) - ^
00:40:780 (1,2,3,4) - Not silencing the ends of this like you did in previous parts?
Okay, even if I hate sliders with silenced ends, I found this map makes good use of them and made me even suggest to do it, nice job.

That'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, very good mapset overall, good luck \o/
Topic Starter
ktgster
DakeDekaane

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~
Modding as requested~

[General]
:!: Disable Letterboxing during breaks and Widescreen Support in all difficulties. Lust's diff has both disabled while yours have both enabled.
:!: Disable/enable countdown in all difficulties. Lust's diff has it disabled while yours have it enabled. - fixed all

[BASIC]
I suggest to use a AR4 as minimum here, I feel AR3 too slow considering this diff has a considerable objects density, take in mind too many objects in screen would stress new/mid players. - sure
00:01:447 (1,2) - How about reversing (Ctrl+G) both? This would create a smoothie flow from (2) to 00:04:113 (1). Remember to put it in an appropiate place if you do. - done
00:28:113 (3) - NC. - also done
00:52:113 (3,1) - While I see this as a nice detail, considering this is the lowest diff, could you remove this overlap? - not the easiest thing to fix. Is stacking okay?
01:46:112 (1) - Remove NC. - done

[ADVANCED]
This is awesome.
00:22:113 - Maybe add in some way the 1/3 rhythm here, it feels a bit empty here. - done

[EXHAUST]
Holy ---- all these streams, got rekt in the middle.
00:47:280 (1) - Shouldn't this begin in 00:47:446? - nope, its actually hitting on the buildup before it emphasizes

[INFINITE]
I wont mess with holy land, rhythm is clean so I have nothing to suggest here. Just some stuff I decided to nitpick regarding hitsounding.
00:35:946 (8) - I really don't see why you silenced this, there's a sound in the music, so even a soft-hitnormal one would make it here. - guess it sounded like a hold, changed
00:36:113 (1) - ^ - ^
00:40:780 (1,2,3,4) - Not silencing the ends of this like you did in previous parts? - fixed
Okay, even if I hate sliders with silenced ends, I found this map makes good use of them and made me even suggest to do it, nice job.

That'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, very good mapset overall, good luck \o/

Gotta wait for Lusty.
Lust
dakedekaane

DakeDekaane wrote:

[NOVICE]
Okay, I'm going to suggest AR7 to improve readability.i think its fine, the way I mapped it was to have a lot of objects on the screen
It requires a bit of work in comboing, for example 00:04:113 (1,2,1,2) could fit in a single combo, this gets a bit annoying because you have 1 object combos 00:10:113 (1) which could fit in a larger one 00:09:446 (1,2,1), thus not derping around with the HP drain. tl;dr stick with NC'ing each downbeat (longest white tick).the NCs are used to accent the song, in a lower difficulty, HP drain is pretty meaningless, so not like having some new combos here and there is going to affect anything
00:22:113 (3,4,5) - The rhythm here is 1/3, so this circles in 1/2 feels awkward, try a rhythm with a 2/3 slider followed by a circle 1/3 beat later, or a 1/3 slider with 2 repeats. adjusted
00:25:446 - 00:32:113 - Map this like the rest of the difficulties? For some reason this doesn't feel good being a break, if you want to keep it, remove 00:32:113 (1), so the player begins again in 00:33:446 (1), which somehow feels more natural. removed the note, I want the break there so that players can ease in to the slower section, not like there is anything interesting going on in the break anyway
00:54:113 (3,4) - Put first the slider and then the circle, 00:54:446 has a strong beat which feels weird releasing the button, it plays better being hit. adjusted
00:56:780 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this in 00:57:113, this will match nicely with the sound there. Additionally, you could add a note in 00:57:280. [/color]
01:06:780 (1,2) - This being 3/2 sliders doesn't compliment the song too nicely because there's no reverse feeling in this part, rather make them 3/1 sliders. alrighty then
01:29:446 (2) - Make it a 1/1 slider so it matches with the sound in 01:29:779. the slider tick covers it
01:30:946 (3) - If you do what I suggested above, remove the repeat here to have kinda the same pattern here.i think it is fine
01:50:632 (1) - This should be a 1/1 slider, theres no sound in 01:51:324 . the player just needs to hold down the button longer, i think it makes the last part more interesting the way it is
01:52:478 (1) - As above, a 1/1 slider should fit better here, but this time because 01:52:939 is stronger than 01:53:170, so this plays weird with that beat being ignored. adjusted
01:53:401 (2,3) - How about doing this, this way you'll cover the piano better as you'd not be ignoring 01:54:657. added a note instead

thanks for the mod!

diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: snow storm -euphoria- [EXH effect] Yooh.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48113
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:snow storm -euphoria-
TitleUnicode:snow storm -euphoria-
Artist:Yooh
ArtistUnicode:Yooh
Creator:ktgster
Version:Lust's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:dj TAKA 作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection- Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest
BeatmapID:395853
BeatmapSetID:158075

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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pkk
Hey there, it seems like Winek has agreed to mod this map but he's a bit busy right now, so he has given me permission to mod in his place. I hope you don't mind.

tl;dr I am Winek

BASIC

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[BASIC]
  1. 00:06:780 (1) - this is just me, but I think sometimes things (specifically sliders) look better when you don't have them in a straight line. In this case, 00:06:113 (4,1) - makes a straight line with the slider body of (4). Try something like below:

    Another reason why I think moving (1) up a bit is better is because it's on a downbeat and you have the clap and whistle sounds on it, creating emphasis. I think it would create even more emphasis if you moved it so it did not create a straight line with 00:06:113 (4) - since you 'd have to move your cursor up after playing 00:06:113 (4) - , which is illustrated in the diagram above.
  2. 00:33:446 (1) - I feel that this would look better if you made the curves a bit sharper. I think sharper curves would match the piano part in the music better, below is one example.

  3. 00:11:446 (5,6) - since you have a lot of hit circles in a row, it could be made more interesting if you turned these two hit circles into a slider. This makes this section a bit more interesting/fun to play, and it also matches the music since this is when the piano plays ascending notes. I guess you could say that it also sounds like someone dragging their hand up a piano, and since you also drag sliders, I suppose a slider fits this part.
  4. 00:22:113 (5) - this might look better if you curve it so it points down.

    The current slider shape looks too vertical to me. If you want to keep the general direction, you can rotate it counter clockwise:

    The reason having it point upwards doesn't look good in my opinion is because it sort of makes this section look like a line of objects instead of groups of objects, but this is just my opinion after all.
  5. 00:26:780 (2,1) - I question your decision in stacking these two objects, in my opinion it feels awkward to play since there is a long time between the two objects so it seems natural to have some space between them. If the two objects came within two beats of each other it would be fine. If you insist on keeping these two close to each other (it looks like distance snap won't allow the slider to be placed anywhere on the screen), I would suggest moving (1) down and to the right a little bit, while still overlapping with (2).

    Same at 00:36:113 (1,2) -
  6. 01:00:779 (2,1) - If possible, I think the blanket can be improved.
  7. 01:52:478 (2) - blanket can be improved here, try moving last point to x 124 y 24
  8. 01:56:005 (1) - consider changing this to just a hit circle and adding a spinner after it

    The reason for this is because you currently have the slider to match the piano note, but the slider ends before the piano note does, making the slider placement seem awkward. I think the spinner after the hit circle suits it better since the spinner gives it a fading-out effect, which you can achieve by making timing points along the spinner until the end with decreasing volume.

Lust's NOVICE

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[Lust's NOVICE]
  1. 00:17:946 (2,3,4) - if this isn't supposed to be in a line, consider making it a bit more noticeable. I think arranging it like below gives it some nice flow.

  2. 00:43:446 (2) - consider a placement like below for better flow, and to also make it look nicer.

  3. 01:06:780 (1,2) - I think it's better if you have them on the white/red/white ticks instead of on the blue ticks. Extend them so that they end on white ticks as it sounds better that way, you can see for yourself. The first repeat slider matches the piano in the background, but overall it feels much better on white ticks. I think you might have changed this back with the previous mod.

  4. 01:28:446 (3,1) - I think this is fine the way it is, but if you want to try something cool then consider the following: ctrl+g at 01:28:446 (3) - , and move 01:28:779 (1) - so the head stacks with the tail of 01:28:113 (2) - . This creates some nice flow~ flow like a river

  5. 01:36:112 (2) - the flow into this slider from 01:35:446 (1) - is fine the way it is, but if you ctrl + g 01:36:112 (2) - then it might flow even better. I'd test it out a couple of times to confirm.
  6. 01:56:005 (1) - same suggestion as pointed out for the BASIC difficulty.


ADVANCED

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[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:28:113 (1) - since this is insane difficulty, I think it's fine to increase the note density. Try something like below to match the music:

  2. 01:29:446 (3) - consider ctrl+g for better flow, I think it's more fun this way. Same at 01:30:779 (3) -
  3. 01:31:446 (1,2,1,2) - I think you can come up with a more interesting pattern.

    The notes highlighted in the picture are the first two notes, 01:31:446 (1,2) - . I think this pattern suits the music nicely as it sort of goes back and forth in the music, which is what this pattern achieves. Test it out, I think it's pretty fun.
  4. 01:50:521 - this is really optional, but maybe adding a note here would sound better as it matches the piano
  5. 01:56:005 (1) - same suggestion as mentioned in the BASIC difficulty

EXHAUST

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[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:40:780 (1,2,3,4) - since these notes are stuttering, it might be a good idea to make these jumps. Below is one way in which you can place the objects, but I'm sure you can find a much better way.

  2. 00:59:780 (8,8) - consider ctrl+g on each of them separately to make it more interesting so that the sliders go different ways.

INFINITE difficulty was fun until I died halfway through because I'm terrible at streams. Sorry I didn't mod it since I don't have a clear grasp of what expert difficulties are supposed to be like. Anyways, great song~
Have fun mapping!
Topic Starter
ktgster
Getting lazy.

pkmnyab

pkmnyab wrote:

Hey there, it seems like Winek has agreed to mod this map but he's a bit busy right now, so he has given me permission to mod in his place. I hope you don't mind.

tl;dr I am Winek


[BASIC]


  1. 00:06:780 (1) - this is just me, but I think sometimes things (specifically sliders) look better when you don't have them in a straight line. In this case, 00:06:113 (4,1) - makes a straight line with the slider body of (4). Try something like below:
    Another reason why I think moving (1) up a bit is better is because it's on a downbeat and you have the clap and whistle sounds on it, creating emphasis. I think it would create even more emphasis if you moved it so it did not create a straight line with 00:06:113 (4) - since you 'd have to move your cursor up after playing 00:06:113 (4) - , which is illustrated in the diagram above. - nope, you're adding another change to how the song is being played by moving it up. It also ruins the technique with 00:04:780 (2,3) and you're basically emphasizing the note before the slider
  2. 00:33:446 (1) - I feel that this would look better if you made the curves a bit sharper. I think sharper curves would match the piano part in the music better, below is one example. - done
  3. 00:11:446 (5,6) - since you have a lot of hit circles in a row, it could be made more interesting if you turned these two hit circles into a slider. This makes this section a bit more interesting/fun to play, and it also matches the music since this is when the piano plays ascending notes. I guess you could say that it also sounds like someone dragging their hand up a piano, and since you also drag sliders, I suppose a slider fits this part. - I see what you're saying, but I really can't feel something that a slider would do better than what I already have here
  4. 00:22:113 (5) - this might look better if you curve it so it points down.
    The current slider shape looks too vertical to me. If you want to keep the general direction, you can rotate it counter clockwise:
    The reason having it point upwards doesn't look good in my opinion is because it sort of makes this section look like a line of objects instead of groups of objects, but this is just my opinion after all. - bad flow, changed the slider position and the shape
  5. 00:26:780 (2,1) - I question your decision in stacking these two objects, in my opinion it feels awkward to play since there is a long time between the two objects so it seems natural to have some space between them. If the two objects came within two beats of each other it would be fine. If you insist on keeping these two close to each other (it looks like distance snap won't allow the slider to be placed anywhere on the screen), I would suggest moving (1) down and to the right a little bit, while still overlapping with (2). - problem is, you're asking for an anti jump at beginner. Granted, its a 4/1, but its pretty daunting to players who would press it as soon as the note appears and would look like it should have been a 1/2 or some sort
    Same at 00:36:113 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:00:779 (2,1) - If possible, I think the blanket can be improved. - fixed
  7. 01:52:478 (2) - blanket can be improved here, try moving last point to x 124 y 24 - wrong coordinates, fixed regardless
  8. 01:56:005 (1) - consider changing this to just a hit circle and adding a spinner after it
    The reason for this is because you currently have the slider to match the piano note, but the slider ends before the piano note does, making the slider placement seem awkward. I think the spinner after the hit circle suits it better since the spinner gives it a fading-out effect, which you can achieve by making timing points along the spinner until the end with decreasing volume. - a spinner is completely unfitting. Theres no tension behind it and you're basically spinning on nothing. A circle would be better alone, but I'm not going to change to that to emphasize the piano

[ADVANCED]


  1. 00:28:113 (1) - since this is insane difficulty, I think it's fine to increase the note density. Try something like below to match the music: - its still a calm part. Denied since it would be the only part that is 1/2 in this section only unsupported by the music
  2. 01:29:446 (3) - consider ctrl+g for better flow, I think it's more fun this way. Same at 01:30:779 (3) - gotta deny again. You're doing a backwards flow after the slider. It also ruins the triangle formation you play at these parts and adding the only jumps in this map
  3. 01:31:446 (1,2,1,2) - I think you can come up with a more interesting pattern.
    The notes highlighted in the picture are the first two notes, 01:31:446 (1,2) - . I think this pattern suits the music nicely as it sort of goes back and forth in the music, which is what this pattern achieves. Test it out, I think it's pretty fun. - used sliders instead
  4. 01:50:521 - this is really optional, but maybe adding a note here would sound better as it matches the piano - offsync note, nope
  5. 01:56:005 (1) - same suggestion as mentioned in the BASIC difficulty - same as BASIC
[EXHAUST]


  1. 00:40:780 (1,2,3,4) - since these notes are stuttering, it might be a good idea to make these jumps. Below is one way in which you can place the objects, but I'm sure you can find a much better way. - the way I parts with C2 is straight lines. About every part like this is straight lines and I want to keep consistency of that.
  2. 00:59:780 (8,8) - consider ctrl+g on each of them separately to make it more interesting so that the sliders go different ways. - its the same kind of sound and you ruin the flow if I use CTRL + G on this
INFINITE difficulty was fun until I died halfway through because I'm terrible at streams. Sorry I didn't mod it since I don't have a clear grasp of what expert difficulties are supposed to be like. Anyways, great song~
Have fun mapping!

Thanks for modding!
Maeglwn
this map sucks



this map sucks
Basic
00:48:113 (1,2) - these 2 sliders seem to play weird off of each other. consider blanketing or something?
01:02:988 (2,3) - uhhhhh.. what is this? this is way too hard for any regular "basic" difficulty. is it snapped wrong or is it meant to be like this?
01:42:112 (1,2) - why not just copy? one's tilted more than the other. kicks in ocd bad
01:56:005 (1) - single and a spinner seems like it might be better here

Lust's Novice
EW IT's A LUST MAP
00:25:446 - break doesn't coincide with other maps, or at least the easier diff. seems out of place. consider filling break
00:35:946 (5,1) - stack 5 on 1
00:40:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this entire thing seems very hard for a "novice" level map
00:44:113 (1,1) - why double spinner?
01:06:780 (1,2) - seems like these both could go slightly longer
01:52:247 (3,1) - blanket this
01:56:005 (1) - same thing as with novice. maybe I'm wrong in saying it, but I just feel like it'd be so much better

Advanced
00:17:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - move 2 down instead of up
01:08:113 (1) - doesn't fit with music
01:31:446 (1,2,1,2) - random 2s under the sliders are hard to read, only notes in the song that are stacked on the ends
01:56:005 (1) - same as above

Exhaust
the main issue in this diff is that there's too many stacks at the start of streams and in random places where they just don't fit. there's too many to list, and tghat might just be a personal issue, so I'm not going to make a big deal out of it

Infinite
yea I think this entire diff is just massively overmapped, I don't want to mod it
00:45:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - in particular these are painful
01:01:946 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - way too hard to read and play
01:12:613 (5,6,7) - weird overlap with 6 from previous combo that doesn't fully go away before it plays
01:16:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - makes player think it's a stream jump when there's a space. space it out more and don't curve 5/6 up until 3 like that
01:37:362 (8,1,2) - needs more of a loop, hard to read
Topic Starter
ktgster
Maeglwn

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

Basic
00:48:113 (1,2) - these 2 sliders seem to play weird off of each other. consider blanketing or something? - subjective. Won't change since its not even weird
01:02:988 (2,3) - uhhhhh.. what is this? this is way too hard for any regular "basic" difficulty. is it snapped wrong or is it meant to be like this? - this is too hard? It's just a 1/1 with more snap than the other parts
01:42:112 (1,2) - why not just copy? one's tilted more than the other. kicks in ocd bad - this is a build up as you can hear on 01:43:112
01:56:005 (1) - single and a spinner seems like it might be better here - a spinner is completely unfitting. Theres no tension behind it and you're basically spinning on nothing. A circle would be better alone, but I'm not going to change to that to emphasize the piano

Advanced
00:17:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - move 2 down instead of up - unnecessary snapping there
01:08:113 (1) - doesn't fit with music - how does it not fit? The 1/2 are there and theres really nothing wrong with the sliders
01:31:446 (1,2,1,2) - random 2s under the sliders are hard to read, only notes in the song that are stacked on the ends - k this is Advanced, stacking should be little to no problems with them already. This isn't like Novice
01:56:005 (1) - same as above - same as before

Exhaust
the main issue in this diff is that there's too many stacks at the start of streams and in random places where they just don't fit. there's too many to list, and tghat might just be a personal issue, so I'm not going to make a big deal out of it - that just sounds like you can't really play them. All those triples before streams are before downbeats making them fit decently

Infinite
yea I think this entire diff is just massively overmapped, I don't want to mod it
00:45:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - in particular these are painful - no not really, they aren't overmapped and make the part more emphasized
01:01:946 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - way too hard to read and play - not even close to unreadable. the part is NC'd and this is Infinite, you should be able to play these decently well
01:12:613 (5,6,7) - weird overlap with 6 from previous combo that doesn't fully go away before it plays - fixed
01:16:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - makes player think it's a stream jump when there's a space. space it out more and don't curve 5/6 up until 3 like that - the testers I got had no problems reading that. Notes fade out faster during play making it much easier to read this
01:37:362 (8,1,2) - needs more of a loop, hard to read - same as 01:01:946 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5)

Fixed timing and some other parts.
Lust
maeglwn

Maeglwn wrote:

hello
Lust's Novice
EW IT's A LUST MAP EW ITS A MAEGLWN MOD
00:25:446 - break doesn't coincide with other maps, or at least the easier diff. seems out of place. consider filling break i think its fine, accents the song nicely and drops the note density
00:35:946 (5,1) - stack 5 on 1 why? that'll make for a very big jump lol
00:40:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this entire thing seems very hard for a "novice" level map i think its fine
00:44:113 (1,1) - why double spinner? because it fits the song
01:06:780 (1,2) - seems like these both could go slightly longer extended
01:52:247 (3,1) - blanket this Eh, I don't really think it'll be that much of a difference
01:56:005 (1) - same thing as with novice. maybe I'm wrong in saying it, but I just feel like it'd be so much better dont you mean the basic? and i think its fine

thanks for the mod!

my diff
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48113
Countdown: 0
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Title:snow storm -euphoria-
TitleUnicode:snow storm -euphoria-
Artist:Yooh
ArtistUnicode:Yooh
Creator:ktgster
Version:Lust's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest SDVX bemani dj TAKA Takayuki Ishikawa beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD Lust
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DeletedUser_1574070
ok from #modhelp

first of all, I don't mod cs5 maps. cuz I'm not good at it and I don't know how to judge those maps even though I do cs5 sometimes(probably i'm lying)

EXHAUST
00:35:780 (4) - sound volume should be lower imo

01:31:446 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - couldn't understand with the distance change. I think making both 0.7 is better like what you did on here 01:43:446 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part got same distance so I think in order to give consistency to your map, changing former one is better.

01:52:478 (1) - I think lowering velocity of sliders can make better following atmosphere
01:53:990 (2) - in exhaust I think expressing that triplet sounds could be better instead of using sound-ignoring reverseslider.

thats all

Advanced
I found nuthin on Advanced

For Lust
00:02:780 (1) - should move just a little (awkward overlapping)
00:33:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - is there any reason you began mapping here? imo, mapping this breaktime should be better
00:44:113 (1) - why don't you end spinner here 00:45:113 - ?
00:47:446 - putting a circle here?
01:06:780 (1,2) - ?! am I mis-downloaded? It doesn't make sense

Basic
found nuthin on here, either

gl anyway
Lust
Kloyd

Kloyd wrote:

00:02:780 (1) - should move just a little (awkward overlapping) this was intentional
00:33:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - is there any reason you began mapping here? imo, mapping this breaktime should be better i think its fine
00:44:113 (1) - why don't you end spinner here 00:45:113 - ? hmm alright
00:47:446 - putting a circle here? no thanks
01:06:780 (1,2) - ?! am I mis-downloaded? It doesn't make sense thought this was fixed in the last update

thanks for the mod!

diff
osu file format v12

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Artist:Yooh
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Creator:ktgster
Version:Lust's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest SDVX bemani dj TAKA Takayuki Ishikawa beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD Lust
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waxman
[INFINITE]
01:19:113 (5) - NC. This is one of the hardest section you know. SO WE NEED HPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHP like this.
Maybe there are people....... WOW THIS IS FKING HARD SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII....
I just want to save this world.
01:19:446 (9) - ^

[EXHAUST]
THIS IS A RANKED MAP IKR.
00:44:780 (9) - NC. it's for me. because I'm a beginner to beat them.^^ I can hear form people who always failed at this section. SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
MORE HPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
No problem. waxman is here. he can save this world. :(

SH1T MODDING.
KILL ME!
What can I do bro??????????????????????????????????????????
I have no idea why this map is on Pending Beatmaps.
Topic Starter
ktgster
Kloyd

Kloyd wrote:

ok from #modhelp

first of all, I don't mod cs5 maps. cuz I'm not good at it and I don't know how to judge those maps even though I do cs5 sometimes(probably i'm lying)

[EXHAUST]

00:35:780 (4) - sound volume should be lower imo - removed whistle only for the whoosh

01:31:446 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - couldn't understand with the distance change. I think making both 0.7 is better like what you did on here 01:43:446 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part got same distance so I think in order to give consistency to your map, changing former one is better. - thats because the 2nd set of streams actually gets stronger to what the rest of the kiai is

01:52:478 (1) - I think lowering velocity of sliders can make better following atmosphere - probably, but this sounds like a small burst of 1/2, not changing
01:53:990 (2) - in exhaust I think expressing that triplet sounds could be better instead of using sound-ignoring reverseslider. - unfortunately, thats actually 1/6 and is faster than the rest of this slow part. Not only that, you would need to go faster than 1/2 spacing which makes it very surprising for the players

thats all


waxman

waxman wrote:

[INFINITE]

01:19:113 (5) - NC. This is one of the hardest section you know. SO WE NEED HPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHPHP like this.
Maybe there are people....... WOW THIS IS FKING HARD SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII....
I just want to save this world. - added NC's to all the 4 pairs
01:19:446 (9) - ^

[EXHAUST]

THIS IS A RANKED MAP IKR.
00:44:780 (9) - NC. it's for me. because I'm a beginner to beat them.^^ I can hear form people who always failed at this section. SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
MORE HPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP - except all the streams are 16 notes and so changing one part means changing the others. You also add unnecessary NC's
No problem. waxman is here. he can save this world. :(

SH1T MODDING.
KILL ME!
What can I do bro??????????????????????????????????????????
I have no idea why this map is on Pending Beatmaps. - uhhhhhhhh wut
waxman
I GUESS THIS IS ALMOST A RANKED MAP. I can't wait for ranked. So this map needs 12 kudosu stars for Bubble, right?

(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Lust
leggo
69653863
Mod request from my queue
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

This song is weird... somehow it's not like usual Beatmania songs idk

General
  1. Hitclap file is somehow way too loud. Maybe you could tune down it's volume a bit (on the soundfile, not ingame)
  2. 01:50:632 - You might like the idea to use muted sliderslide sound here.
Basic
  1. Use OD4? Better diff spread.
  2. 00:07:780 - Add note here to give the pattern some variation.
  3. 00:22:613 (1) - Ain't this too early? Move the spinnerstart to the next white tick '-'
  4. 00:33:446 (1) - Bad design. As I can't seem to give better sliderwave design (the starting position just didn't gave much chance) care to put a simple 1-curved slider isntead?
  5. 00:48:113 (1) - Second sliderpoint is slightly a bit too high, put it lower and the sliderwave will look better.
  6. 01:02:988 (2,3) - Huh?
  7. 01:30:112 (3,2) - Imperfect stack?
  8. 01:50:632 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
Novice
  1. Feels like Normal+ )-:
  2. OD6 made the diffspread with Basic way too high. OD5 maybe?
  3. 00:02:113 (3,1) - Bad overlap.
  4. 00:15:446 (2,3) - If you could blanket this it'll be nice.
  5. 00:22:613 (1) - Too early, see my mod point on Easy
  6. 00:44:113 (1,1) - I don't like this, merge both into one? I mean, it's not really a Normal-thingy to have double spinners
  7. 01:02:780 (1,3) - Blanket-spacing too close.
  8. 01:20:113 (1,2) - Spacing too high.
  9. 01:38:446 (1,1) - ^
  10. 01:56:012 (1) - I don't like the idea of a tightcurved slider. A simple-curved slider would follow the music better
Advanced
  1. 00:12:780 (4) - If you could Ctrl+G, it'll flow better!
  2. 00:31:446 (2,2) - Curve design didn't follow music, idk maybe change?
  3. 00:45:113 (6,7) - Replace with a slider? I mean you already used circle patterns right on 00:44:113 (1,2,3,4) - . Have some variation.
  4. 01:56:012 (1) - Ugly )-: Simpler curve instead?
spotless

Exhaust
  1. 00:28:780 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Not a good streamwave. You could copypaste 00:29:113 (8,9,10,11,1) - to the beginning as they resembles better curve. Readjust positions here and there and you'll have a nicer streamwave.
  2. 00:47:280 (1) - Less symmetric )-:
  3. 01:16:113 (1,2,3,4) - You could gain more flow if you switch (2)'s and (4)'s place with (3) and giving a little jump to 01:16:780 (5) -
spotless [2]

Infinite
  1. I understand this is an Extra diff but I guess you should put HP6 because of <absolutely> lot of streams and CS5.
  2. 01:56:012 (1) -
    185,339,116012,6,0,B|328:368|304:240|456:272,1,270.000010299683,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Awesome map. Good luck for rank!
Leader
Kinda late

[General]
  1. 01:56:012 (1) - I didn't really like this because I believe a spinner would fit more a silent end than a slider like you did in every diff. I'd personally go for a note + spinner
[BASIC]
  1. 00:01:447 (1,2) - I can suggest to start with a kinda symmetric pattern that just looks a bit more polished than the current one. Not an issue, but just leaving it here
  2. 00:29:446 (3,4) - - I felt a lack of rhythm here, probably new players will find this part even harder to catch than me. You are missing a loud sound in 00:30:446 - and the transition between 3 and 4 doesn't look easy to understand due to piano. That's why I'd rather replace these notes with two sliders
  3. 00:33:446 (1) - You can change this slider's shape in order to continue the elliptical pattern (00:34:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - )
  4. 01:02:988 (2,3) - Seems like something is wrong here
  5. 01:43:446 (1,2) - That sound after these notes actually makes me think more of a slidertrack than a empty part
  6. 01:50:632 (1,2) - Blanket could have been done better here
[Lust's NOVICE]
  1. 00:02:113 (3,1) - Is this overlap really necessary? You should also be consistent and reduce 00:02:780 (1) - by 1/2 like you did it afterwards
  2. 00:10:113 (1) - Changing slider's shape and direction so that it will leads you to the next pattern would be better in my opinion. Here's an example of what I'd like to have, sadly there's no enough room to have a proper curve:
  3. 00:19:280 (2,3) - I believe that this would flow better, try it out:
  4. 00:38:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Are you really sure that this diff can be considered as a NOVICE? There are way too many 1/2s that can be pretty hard to hit for not experienced players. Also, we have 180bpm, which are not easy to play
  5. 00:48:113 - This kiai section has the same issue as I stated above. In my opinion you should make things easier to keep the spread polite, consider checking this whole part
  6. 01:18:780 (1,2,3) - They are rhythmically wrong since they should be two 1/2 sliders with 2 repeats each, you can clearly hear the emphasis on 01:19:446 -, which currently has a repeat instead of a head
  7. 01:43:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would prefer a proper pattern here, it looks random :C
  8. 01:51:555 (2) - There shouldn't be any repeat here, it currently lands on nothing

    Pretty good, but it bothers me: it's still a bit too hard
[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:38:780 (1,2) - I would prefer some 1/2 slider here

    Great diff
[EXHAUST]

  • OD8 would be an awesome challenge, but 7 is also okay
  1. 00:29:780 (2) - I believe this slider should be splitted in a 1/2 slider + note, if you listen carefully 00:30:113 - has a louder sound than the previous two
  2. 00:33:446 (1) - I testplayed this twice and this slider felt a bit odd to me, I believe you should replace with notes (you can also increase spacing in order to emphasize the louder sound they have) and go straight to 1/6 sliders. Having a 1/4 notes -> 1/4 slider -> 1/6 slider transition feels weird to play in my opinion
  3. 01:24:279 (7) - Although it's a different part of the song, this slider needs to be splitted as I stated above (apply on 01:25:613 (7) - as well), if not even splitted in 3 notes (a lot better)
  4. 01:53:990 (2) - I would remove the repeat here and have a 1/4 slider starting on blue tick, sounds fair and also emphasize the final sound more
[INFINITE]
  1. 00:17:030 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - Odd spacing, can't you just make one simple curve?
  2. 00:49:613 (2,3,4) - What about making them parallel to previous stream? Would be a nice idea (you will obviously keep the different spacing due to emphasis)
  3. 00:50:780 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - You may want to incline this more in order to get it symmetric to 00:51:446 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  4. 00:59:446 (9) - What about a NC here in order to emphasize the "whoosh" sound? Same on 01:00:780 (9) - and others
  5. 01:54:439 - Actually, stream should start from here. If you now find this stream too hard, you can still try for a reverse slider

    Wonderful challenge!
That's all I guess, great map around here.
Topic Starter
ktgster
inverness

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

This song is weird... somehow it's not like usual Beatmania songs idk

General
  1. Hitclap file is somehow way too loud. Maybe you could tune down it's volume a bit (on the soundfile, not ingame) - done
  2. 01:50:632 - You might like the idea to use muted sliderslide sound here. - also done
Basic
  1. Use OD4? Better diff spread. - might as well
  2. 00:07:780 - Add note here to give the pattern some variation. - this ruins the consistency in the beginning and theres really no need for a variation when you only did something once
  3. 00:22:613 (1) - Ain't this too early? Move the spinnerstart to the next white tick '-' - done
  4. 00:33:446 (1) - Bad design. As I can't seem to give better sliderwave design (the starting position just didn't gave much chance) care to put a simple 1-curved slider isntead? - alright
  5. 00:48:113 (1) - Second sliderpoint is slightly a bit too high, put it lower and the sliderwave will look better. - fixed
  6. 01:02:988 (2,3) - Huh? - guess I didn't delete the note when testing for blankets, removed
  7. 01:30:112 (3,2) - Imperfect stack? - stack?
  8. 01:50:632 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. - fixed
Advanced
  1. 00:12:780 (4) - If you could Ctrl+G, it'll flow better! - ehh the flow after that is iffy, but w/e
  2. 00:31:446 (2,2) - Curve design didn't follow music, idk maybe change? - made it a straight to keep consistency of quick 1/2's
  3. 00:45:113 (6,7) - Replace with a slider? I mean you already used circle patterns right on 00:44:113 (1,2,3,4) - . Have some variation. - done
  4. 01:56:012 (1) - Ugly )-: Simpler curve instead? - fixed
spotless

Exhaust
  1. 00:28:780 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Not a good streamwave. You could copypaste 00:29:113 (8,9,10,11,1) - to the beginning as they resembles better curve. Readjust positions here and there and you'll have a nicer streamwave. - fixed
  2. 00:47:280 (1) - Less symmetric )-: - sliders are hard
  3. 01:16:113 (1,2,3,4) - You could gain more flow if you switch (2)'s and (4)'s place with (3) and giving a little jump to 01:16:780 (5) - kinda want to keep this without using any weird jumps. Also 01:15:780 (12,1) would end up being in a straight line screwing up the finish of a stanza
spotless [2]

Infinite
  1. I understand this is an Extra diff but I guess you should put HP6 because of <absolutely> lot of streams and CS5. - ruins HP spread and you're basically screwed if you can't keep up with the 180 bpm streams
  2. 01:56:012 (1) - added
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Awesome map. Good luck for rank!

Leader

Leader wrote:

Kinda late

[General]
  1. 01:56:012 (1) - I didn't really like this because I believe a spinner would fit more a silent end than a slider like you did in every diff. I'd personally go for a note + spinner - it just feels weird to spin when its just a low key piano note and isn't really that long. Also reasons said before
[BASIC]
  1. 00:01:447 (1,2) - I can suggest to start with a kinda symmetric pattern that just looks a bit more polished than the current one. Not an issue, but just leaving it here - so basically, place the slider at 1 which can cause overlaps making it hard for beginners to play
  2. 00:29:446 (3,4) - - I felt a lack of rhythm here, probably new players will find this part even harder to catch than me. You are missing a loud sound in 00:30:446 - and the transition between 3 and 4 doesn't look easy to understand due to piano. That's why I'd rather replace these notes with two sliders - done
  3. 00:33:446 (1) - You can change this slider's shape in order to continue the elliptical pattern (00:34:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - ) - due to the previous mod, this is going to be keeped/changed
  4. 01:02:988 (2,3) - Seems like something is wrong here - ^
  5. 01:43:446 (1,2) - That sound after these notes actually makes me think more of a slidertrack than a empty part - used a slider
  6. 01:50:632 (1,2) - Blanket could have been done better here - fixed
[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:38:780 (1,2) - I would prefer some 1/2 slider here - hard to do without making it looks ugly, all the sliders need to be straight for good consistency

    Great diff
[EXHAUST]

  • OD8 would be an awesome challenge, but 7 is also okay
  1. 00:29:780 (2) - I believe this slider should be splitted in a 1/2 slider + note, if you listen carefully 00:30:113 - has a louder sound than the previous two - used circles since 1/2 slider is just bleh on this
  2. 00:33:446 (1) - I testplayed this twice and this slider felt a bit odd to me, I believe you should replace with notes (you can also increase spacing in order to emphasize the louder sound they have) and go straight to 1/6 sliders. Having a 1/4 notes -> 1/4 slider -> 1/6 slider transition feels weird to play in my opinion - this was 1/6, call this fixed
  3. 01:24:279 (7) - Although it's a different part of the song, this slider needs to be splitted as I stated above (apply on 01:25:613 (7) - as well), if not even splitted in 3 notes (a lot better) - done
  4. 01:53:990 (2) - I would remove the repeat here and have a 1/4 slider starting on blue tick, sounds fair and also emphasize the final sound more - or I can just use a 1/6 repeat slider here
[INFINITE]
  1. 00:17:030 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - Odd spacing, can't you just make one simple curve? - but 9 is a blue tick note, it makes more sense to map it like this
  2. 00:49:613 (2,3,4) - What about making them parallel to previous stream? Would be a nice idea (you will obviously keep the different spacing due to emphasis) - alright
  3. 00:50:780 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - You may want to incline this more in order to get it symmetric to 00:51:446 (1,2,3,4) - uhhh fixed I guess
  4. 00:59:446 (9) - What about a NC here in order to emphasize the "whoosh" sound? Same on 01:00:780 (9) - and others - nah, the sound doesn't change a lot with these whooshes
  5. 01:54:439 - Actually, stream should start from here. If you now find this stream too hard, you can still try for a reverse slider - added an extra 1/6

    Wonderful challenge!
That's all I guess, great map around here.
onotoleonide

inverness wrote:

Novice
  1. Feels like Normal+ )-:
but it's actually normal+ because this spread is like E+ N+ H+ I+ (also extra)
Lust
inverness

inverness wrote:

Novice
  1. Feels like Normal+ )-: ok
  2. OD6 made the diffspread with Basic way too high. OD5 maybe? I originally had it OD5, but a mod or something suggested for me to change it to 6! Oh well, I feel better at 5 anyway.
  3. 00:02:113 (3,1) - Bad overlap. actually wondering how the hell this happened, anyway, fixed
  4. 00:15:446 (2,3) - If you could blanket this it'll be nice. its too far in the timeline to matter
  5. 00:22:613 (1) - Too early, see my mod point on Easy fixed
  6. 00:44:113 (1,1) - I don't like this, merge both into one? I mean, it's not really a Normal-thingy to have double spinners as you said, its normal+ and i think it fits, newer players need to get some stamina somehow!
  7. 01:02:780 (1,3) - Blanket-spacing too close. i think its fine
  8. 01:20:113 (1,2) - Spacing too high. i think its fine
  9. 01:38:446 (1,1) - ^ ^
  10. 01:56:012 (1) - I don't like the idea of a tightcurved slider. A simple-curved slider would follow the music better only a stylistic difference, no change here


Leader

Leader wrote:

[Lust's NOVICE][list]
[*]00:02:113 (3,1) - Is this overlap really necessary? You should also be consistent and reduce 00:02:780 (1) - by 1/2 like you did it afterwards fixed in inverness's mod
[*]00:10:113 (1) - Changing slider's shape and direction so that it will leads you to the next pattern would be better in my opinion. Here's an example of what I'd like to have, sadly there's no enough room to have a proper curve: sure
[*]00:19:280 (2,3) - I believe that this would flow better, try it out: nice!
[*]00:38:780 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Are you really sure that this diff can be considered as a NOVICE? There are way too many 1/2s that can be pretty hard to hit for not experienced players. Also, we have 180bpm, which are not easy to play theyll get it eventually
[*]00:48:113 - This kiai section has the same issue as I stated above. In my opinion you should make things easier to keep the spread polite, consider checking this whole part same answer as stated above
[*]01:18:780 (1,2,3) - They are rhythmically wrong since they should be two 1/2 sliders with 2 repeats each, you can clearly hear the emphasis on 01:19:446 -, which currently has a repeat instead of a head fixed
[*]01:43:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would prefer a proper pattern here, it looks random :C stylistic difference, no change ere
[*]01:51:555 (2) - There shouldn't be any repeat here, it currently lands on nothing i think its fine

Sorry for the delay
Thanks for the mods!

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247,150,48780,2,0,L|161:162,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,236,49113,5,0,0:0:0:0:
86,307,49280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,354,49446,6,0,P|197:337|225:246,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,218,49946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,185,50113,2,0,L|430:140,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,54,50446,5,0,1:0:0:0:
313,73,50613,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,139,50780,6,0,P|224:104|243:18,1,120,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,73,51280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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182,199,51946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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496,152,53946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,90,54113,1,0,1:0:0:0:
341,112,54280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,92,54447,2,0,L|177:107,1,60,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,74,54780,6,0,P|105:110|152:179,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
130,265,55280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,322,55446,2,0,L|325:341,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
400,374,55946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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439,123,56613,1,2,0:2:0:0:
356,85,56780,2,0,P|394:41|465:29,2,120,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
315,165,57613,5,0,0:0:0:0:
267,241,57780,1,2,1:2:0:0:
183,215,57946,1,2,0:2:0:0:
99,179,58113,2,0,L|32:278,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,353,58613,1,4,1:0:0:0:
168,327,58780,6,0,P|232:316|287:328,1,120,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
464,335,59446,6,0,L|413:264,1,60,8|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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240,136,60613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,197,60780,6,0,L|125:246,1,60,8|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
213,277,61113,2,0,L|173:333,1,60,8|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
262,359,61446,6,0,L|370:291,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,279,61946,1,2,0:2:0:0:
480,193,62113,2,0,P|497:143|486:60,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
402,77,62613,1,2,0:2:0:0:
344,146,62780,6,0,P|318:115|326:26,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
402,77,63280,1,2,0:2:0:0:
422,164,63446,2,0,P|400:203|327:224,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
257,172,63946,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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59,263,64613,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,306,64780,1,0,1:0:0:0:
226,302,64946,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,257,65113,6,0,L|363:222,1,60,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
402,303,65446,2,0,L|461:268,1,60,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
460,181,65780,6,0,L|408:150,1,60,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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253,24,69446,5,10,1:2:0:0:
253,24,70113,1,10,1:2:0:0:
253,24,70780,6,0,L|253:149,1,120,10|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,71280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
135,270,71446,2,0,P|182:306|257:304,1,120,10|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,248,72113,6,0,P|363:212|288:214,1,120,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,72613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,271,72780,2,0,L|57:174,1,120,10|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,55,73446,6,0,L|269:152,1,120,8|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
212,224,73946,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,313,74113,2,0,P|266:296|301:222,1,120,10|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
368,171,74613,1,2,1:2:0:0:
432,108,74780,6,0,P|388:85|315:99,1,120,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
242,139,75280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,75446,2,0,L|83:193,1,120,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
8,172,75946,1,2,1:2:0:0:
26,260,76113,6,0,P|82:278|119:337,1,120,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,364,76780,2,0,P|236:346|199:287,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,119,77446,6,0,L|290:158,1,120,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
392,304,78113,2,0,L|278:265,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,268,78613,1,2,1:2:0:0:
104,301,78780,6,0,L|43:328,2,60,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,79280,1,0,1:0:0:0:
125,204,79446,2,0,L|61:219,2,60,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
214,193,79946,1,0,1:0:0:0:
263,117,80113,5,4,1:0:0:0:
367,262,80446,2,0,L|434:147,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
482,86,80946,5,2,1:2:0:0:
396,56,81113,2,0,L|331:66,1,60,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
263,117,81446,2,0,L|208:79,2,60,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
281,205,81946,1,0,1:0:0:0:
341,271,82113,6,0,P|297:292|223:271,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,272,84779,6,0,P|303:305|242:309,2,90,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,256,85446,2,0,L|456:200,1,60,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,117,85779,2,0,L|450:61,1,60,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,30,86113,6,0,P|305:33|268:60,2,90,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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343,253,87113,2,0,L|316:306,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,358,87446,6,0,P|154:358|77:283,1,180,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,217,88113,2,0,P|51:177|62:151,1,60,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,79,88446,2,0,P|46:55|73:49,1,60,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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191,340,90779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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191,340,91446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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394,147,92446,5,8,1:2:0:0:
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300,336,94112,6,0,P|352:335|412:227,1,180,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,288,112478,6,0,P|212:310|148:271,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,133,114664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Raiku
Raiku mod!

[Beginner]

00:40:113 (1,2) - I suggest perhaps moving these notes as a set towards the left a little to promote flow out of the preceding slider and giving enough momentum for the player using slider 2 to ease them into the spinner better (http://puu.sh/8yfGV.jpg).

00:52:113 (3,1) - I recommend moving these sliders down a touch to narrow the gap between the blanket to make the blanket space consistent with the spacing of the other blankets earlier in the song, alternatively make the other blankets the same as this etc. (http://puu.sh/8yitu.jpg).

00:56:113 (1) - Move the tail and head of this slider in towards the blanketed note a touch to form a perfect blanket using the approach circle as a guide for the curve like so (http://puu.sh/8yixg.jpg).

01:16:113 (1) - Similarly to before, tuck the head of this slider to make sure the curve follows the approach circle (http://puu.sh/8yjMP.jpg).

01:35:446 (3) - I recommend move the tail point of this slider to the right a touch to neaten the blanket (http://puu.sh/8ylNB.jpg).


[Lust's NOVICE]

00:05:280 (2) - I recommend moving this circle more to the right a touch to accentuate the curve the slider creates for the flow in this section. Moving this circle aids the player in following this flow and creating dynamic movement for the map (http://puu.sh/8ym1E.jpg).

00:21:446 (1,2,1) - I personally feel that placing this pattern rather than a square, adds a little more fragmented variety to the section. I felt that by taking into account the style you are going for in this map, structuring the pattern like this would greatly benefit the flow (http://puu.sh/8yme3.jpg).

00:22:780 (1) - End the slider realistically on the downbeat here. I'm not dismissing your placement as I see that it accentuates the jet sound exuding from this point in a creative manner, but if you take into account the spin whilst playing, the spinner subtly ends when the soaring sound starts so you get a chance for the incredible hitsound to sound like it is projecting this soaring sound, like a missile!

00:38:780 (1,2,3,4) - I strongly suggest lowering the position of these guys, this way you are creating a giant approach to a massive crescendo which arcs at the top in the next combo and into the crux of the song. Notice that with this change in position you are greatly enhancing the progressive flow I see you have achieved in this section (http://puu.sh/8ymwo.jpg). Another fun alternative would be the variety approach seeing as you already have a straight line single tap section at the end of the single tap part (00:40:780 (1,2,3,4)). A little like this (http://puu.sh/8ymNg.jpg).

00:43:446 (2) - I suggest you move this slider down a touch so that the cursor movement from the exit of the preceding slider naturally flows into the head of this slider like so (http://puu.sh/8ymTC.jpg).

00:49:113 (1,2) - I recommend you move these notes a little so that they account for the angle of the slider preceding them. I felt that this section could have enhanced flow by opening up the section a little by creating an almost curve a little like this (http://puu.sh/8ynfv.jpg).

00:56:780 (3) - Pull the tail point of this slider in a little using the approach circle as a guideline for the slider curve to create an even more perfect blanket a little like so (http://puu.sh/8ynlC.jpg).

00:57:613 (1,2,3) - I think what would benefit the map to match the crazy scattered sound in the back would be some appropriately placed scattered single tap notes in a neat little zig-zag that cleverly flows into the slider following this section. Tell me what you think taking what I said into account and mabye it might be a worthwhile change (http://puu.sh/8ynpR.jpg).

01:05:113 (1,2) - The distance between these two sliders is slightly greater than the following sliders, adjust the distance accordingly so that they both match, pretty much a pixelsworth of change.


[ADVANCED]

00:39:446 (3,4,1) - Ensure that the spacing between these two kicksliders follows the same spacing as the rest of the notes in the song. Here's how I placed them (http://puu.sh/8ynTc.jpg).

Really well done diff.


[EXHAUST]

00:02:780 (1) - I felt that you should angle this sliders tail downwards just a touch to meet the angle of the line of flow coming into this slider a little something like this (http://puu.sh/8yo3z.jpg).

00:29:030 (7,8,9) - I'm sure that this is intended to accentuate the piano, but I have to mention whether or not these three notes were intended to be more spaced out that the rest of the stream?

01:17:446 (1,2,3,4) - The new combo section of this stream seems to be a touch more cramped than the rest of the stream, perhaps even it out a little unless intended? Very minor issue but may affect the streamers ability to react to the change in a beatmap where the rest of the streams are rather super consistent in spacing.

01:42:112 (1) - I suggest raise the note above the triple towards the top taking into account the difference in angles between the end of the first triple and the start of the next triple a little like so as my cursor naturally flows out of the preceding slider into this spot (http://puu.sh/8yoGE.jpg).

01:44:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend rotating this combo on the selection centre so that it becomes perfectly in line with the preceding 5 note bursts angle for perfect symmetry (http://puu.sh/8yoLt.jpg).


[INFINITE]

00:09:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I recommend re-positioning this stream so that it starts just above the note of the last combo so that the defining turn point of the stream is more easily identifiable and manageable than before. Something similar to this (http://puu.sh/8yoZO.jpg).

00:16:113 (1,2) - I highly suggest lowering these two notes just a touch so that the starting notes of all the triples are perfectly lined up together with these two notes that are angled parallel to the succeeding triples (http://puu.sh/8yp4C.jpg). Following this, I believe it would make a lot of sense to move these two notes (00:15:780 (3,4)) a touch to the right to make sure that the spacing between the notes equals the spacing of the notes between the triples like so (http://puu.sh/8ypja.jpg).

Another alternative to this is to flat out mirror the triples like so (http://puu.sh/8ypmy.jpg).

00:33:113 (5,6,7,8) - I recommend you gradually reduce the hitsounds going into the piano kicksliders here to reduce the harmful abruptness of hitsound lowering on the consistency of this section. It really hits you how suddenly it happens.

01:16:113 (1,2,3) - At the very least, this section could be made more manageable, readable and less awkward by first of all rotating this triple to an angle of about 5 degrees and then making sure that 1 and 3 stack on the preceding combos circle 5 and 6 to create a gap filler but also to prevent messy overlaps marring the readability, but ALSO to make sure that this triple angles itself perfectly towards circle 4 of this combo to make sure the flow is perfect and avoids any extra movement at such a crucial point (http://puu.sh/8ypRq.jpg).

Perhaps you could angle this slider accordingly too (http://puu.sh/8ypUG.jpg).

01:18:280 (3,4,5,6) - I felt that this corner of the stream was a little to abrupt and sharp a turn for a smooth stream with no apparent purposefully implemented cornering, I believe this part of the stream should be sharp but smooth like you did in the first section of this stream perhaps a little something like this (http://puu.sh/8yq7B.jpg)?

01:39:946 (6,7,8) - I personally believe this part of the stream could benefit from not being linear but enjoying its flow out of the prior curved stream and into a flowy joiner stream without any linearity (http://puu.sh/8yqg2.jpg).

01:41:279 (6) - I suggest moving this note up and to the right a little to avoid an unsymmetrical in curve stream. What this movement does is make sure you have the same curve (http://puu.sh/8yqzV.jpg). You may have to deal with the issue of losing the blanket or you can re-adjust the previous stream so that it evens itself out into the same blanket.


Excellently executed mapset, well done. This was a lot of fun to mod and I can't wait for a similar spread.
Topic Starter
ktgster
Raiku

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[Beginner]

00:40:113 (1,2) - I suggest perhaps moving these notes as a set towards the left a little to promote flow out of the preceding slider and giving enough momentum for the player using slider 2 to ease them into the spinner better (http://puu.sh/8yfGV.jpg). - ehh it ruins what I had for this part, although I did copypaste the earlier 1,2 and used it here

00:52:113 (3,1) - I recommend moving these sliders down a touch to narrow the gap between the blanket to make the blanket space consistent with the spacing of the other blankets earlier in the song, alternatively make the other blankets the same as this etc. (http://puu.sh/8yitu.jpg). - I can't really see what you're going for.... The spacing is bigger due to the spacing change in the kiai causing inconsistency throughout the whole map since every blanket will either have to be 0.9x or 1.0x spacing

00:56:113 (1) - Move the tail and head of this slider in towards the blanketed note a touch to form a perfect blanket using the approach circle as a guide for the curve like so (http://puu.sh/8yixg.jpg). - fixed

01:16:113 (1) - Similarly to before, tuck the head of this slider to make sure the curve follows the approach circle (http://puu.sh/8yjMP.jpg). - fixed

01:35:446 (3) - I recommend move the tail point of this slider to the right a touch to neaten the blanket (http://puu.sh/8ylNB.jpg). - done

[ADVANCED]

00:39:446 (3,4,1) - Ensure that the spacing between these two kicksliders follows the same spacing as the rest of the notes in the song. Here's how I placed them (http://puu.sh/8ynTc.jpg). - I did something else I guess

Really well done diff.


[EXHAUST]

00:02:780 (1) - I felt that you should angle this sliders tail downwards just a touch to meet the angle of the line of flow coming into this slider a little something like this (http://puu.sh/8yo3z.jpg). - fixed

00:29:030 (7,8,9) - I'm sure that this is intended to accentuate the piano, but I have to mention whether or not these three notes were intended to be more spaced out that the rest of the stream? - magically, that happened

01:17:446 (1,2,3,4) - The new combo section of this stream seems to be a touch more cramped than the rest of the stream, perhaps even it out a little unless intended? Very minor issue but may affect the streamers ability to react to the change in a beatmap where the rest of the streams are rather super consistent in spacing. - sounds like a pixel is a problem for streamers, the stream is fixed up a bit since it really looked ugly

01:42:112 (1) - I suggest raise the note above the triple towards the top taking into account the difference in angles between the end of the first triple and the start of the next triple a little like so as my cursor naturally flows out of the preceding slider into this spot (http://puu.sh/8yoGE.jpg). - done

01:44:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend rotating this combo on the selection centre so that it becomes perfectly in line with the preceding 5 note bursts angle for perfect symmetry (http://puu.sh/8yoLt.jpg). - now I have no idea why that was not copypasted, fixed


[INFINITE]

00:09:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I recommend re-positioning this stream so that it starts just above the note of the last combo so that the defining turn point of the stream is more easily identifiable and manageable than before. Something similar to this (http://puu.sh/8yoZO.jpg). - from the way it looks, it plays both awkward and looks ugly in comparison to what I have now. The stream slides down so it shouldn't be hard to identify the spacing change

00:16:113 (1,2) - I highly suggest lowering these two notes just a touch so that the starting notes of all the triples are perfectly lined up together with these two notes that are angled parallel to the succeeding triples (http://puu.sh/8yp4C.jpg). Following this, I believe it would make a lot of sense to move these two notes (00:15:780 (3,4)) a touch to the right to make sure that the spacing between the notes equals the spacing of the notes between the triples like so (http://puu.sh/8ypja.jpg). - the complication of this. Just went and copypasted

00:33:113 (5,6,7,8) - I recommend you gradually reduce the hitsounds going into the piano kicksliders here to reduce the harmful abruptness of hitsound lowering on the consistency of this section. It really hits you how suddenly it happens. - okay

01:16:113 (1,2,3) - At the very least, this section could be made more manageable, readable and less awkward by first of all rotating this triple to an angle of about 5 degrees and then making sure that 1 and 3 stack on the preceding combos circle 5 and 6 to create a gap filler but also to prevent messy overlaps marring the readability, but ALSO to make sure that this triple angles itself perfectly towards circle 4 of this combo to make sure the flow is perfect and avoids any extra movement at such a crucial point (http://puu.sh/8ypRq.jpg). - getting a few of changes on this suggestion. I made a jump between note 3 and 4 so it should be a lot readable while still following what I had

01:18:280 (3,4,5,6) - I felt that this corner of the stream was a little to abrupt and sharp a turn for a smooth stream with no apparent purposefully implemented cornering, I believe this part of the stream should be sharp but smooth like you did in the first section of this stream perhaps a little something like this (http://puu.sh/8yq7B.jpg)? - so sharp, fixed

01:39:946 (6,7,8) - I personally believe this part of the stream could benefit from not being linear but enjoying its flow out of the prior curved stream and into a flowy joiner stream without any linearity (http://puu.sh/8yqg2.jpg). - ehhh, getting rid of the blue tick note fits much better and allows a straight line to fit in much better

01:41:279 (6) - I suggest moving this note up and to the right a little to avoid an unsymmetrical in curve stream. What this movement does is make sure you have the same curve (http://puu.sh/8yqzV.jpg). You may have to deal with the issue of losing the blanket or you can re-adjust the previous stream so that it evens itself out into the same blanket. - that was a blanket? Done


Excellently executed mapset, well done. This was a lot of fun to mod and I can't wait for a similar spread.
Lust
raiku

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod![Lust's NOVICE]

00:05:280 (2) - I recommend moving this circle more to the right a touch to accentuate the curve the slider creates for the flow in this section. Moving this circle aids the player in following this flow and creating dynamic movement for the map (http://puu.sh/8ym1E.jpg). alright

00:21:446 (1,2,1) - I personally feel that placing this pattern rather than a square, adds a little more fragmented variety to the section. I felt that by taking into account the style you are going for in this map, structuring the pattern like this would greatly benefit the flow (http://puu.sh/8yme3.jpg). fixed

00:22:780 (1) - End the slider realistically on the downbeat here. I'm not dismissing your placement as I see that it accentuates the jet sound exuding from this point in a creative manner, but if you take into account the spin whilst playing, the spinner subtly ends when the soaring sound starts so you get a chance for the incredible hitsound to sound like it is projecting this soaring sound, like a missile dont know what you mean here

00:38:780 (1,2,3,4) - I strongly suggest lowering the position of these guys, this way you are creating a giant approach to a massive crescendo which arcs at the top in the next combo and into the crux of the song. Notice that with this change in position you are greatly enhancing the progressive flow I see you have achieved in this section (http://puu.sh/8ymwo.jpg). Another fun alternative would be the variety approach seeing as you already have a straight line single tap section at the end of the single tap part (00:40:780 (1,2,3,4)). A little like this (http://puu.sh/8ymNg.jpg). i think its fine

00:43:446 (2) - I suggest you move this slider down a touch so that the cursor movement from the exit of the preceding slider naturally flows into the head of this slider like so (http://puu.sh/8ymTC.jpg). The flow comes off of the slider, like a sling. so no change here

00:49:113 (1,2) - I recommend you move these notes a little so that they account for the angle of the slider preceding them. I felt that this section could have enhanced flow by opening up the section a little by creating an almost curve a little like this (http://puu.sh/8ynfv.jpg). i like how this pattern is done, no change here

00:56:780 (3) - Pull the tail point of this slider in a little using the approach circle as a guideline for the slider curve to create an even more perfect blanket a little like so (http://puu.sh/8ynlC.jpg). fixed the blanket

00:57:613 (1,2,3) - I think what would benefit the map to match the crazy scattered sound in the back would be some appropriately placed scattered single tap notes in a neat little zig-zag that cleverly flows into the slider following this section. Tell me what you think taking what I said into account and mabye it might be a worthwhile change (http://puu.sh/8ynpR.jpg). did something similar

01:05:113 (1,2) - The distance between these two sliders is slightly greater than the following sliders, adjust the distance accordingly so that they both match, pretty much a pixelsworth of change. fixed

thanks for the mod!

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Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
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Lust
here is a quickie for the road
double post, who cares

Mapset is already fantastic, so not much to really say

[BASIC]
Clean difficulty
  1. 00:10:780 (3,4,5,6) - 4 hit circles in a row seems a bit tedious for the lowest difficulty, maybe switch them up with sliders or something
  2. 00:13:113 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
  3. 00:21:780 (4,5) - (Nazi) blanket is slightly off
  4. 00:22:780 (1) - Maybe remove this spinner and have a break, so that easy players can have a rest from all the action, or alternatively you can extend the spinner to 00:25:446 - to make a nice effect
  5. 00:41:446 (1) - Never thought I'd see the day, a 5 second spinner in the lowest difficulty??! I have problems with doing that now, you'll kill newer players haha, I would suggest mapping it out
  6. 00:52:780 (4,1) - (1) can better blanket (4)'s slider end. Ctrl+G (4) and use its approach circle to assist you in this
  7. 01:15:780 (3,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
  8. 01:25:779 (4,1) - ^
  9. 01:34:112 (1,2,3) - I understand you have a pattern going on here, but this is actually some weird flow and hard to play. You go up, back down, and then back up then down again! I would angle 01:35:446 (3) - 's slider track to the right, so that it slings down in to the following pattern, providing a smoother, crisp play.
  10. 01:46:296 (1) - Move this over a 1/2, having it too close to the circle is too sudden
[Lust's NOVICE]
Perfect diff! Holy snap this is the best novice I have seen in a long time. Why does everyone complain it is so hard? Its great!

[ADVANCED]
Great, nothing to complain about here

[EXHAUST]
Cool to look at in the editor...LOL
  1. 00:01:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I found these patterns a too linear, which in turn made them awkward to play! I would have the circles curve up in to the following slider for smoother, nicer play.
  2. 00:22:530 (1) - I would extend this spinner to 00:25:446 - for a cooler effect. Right now the spinner seems dead with no sound to land on
  3. 01:41:279 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Curves in at the beginning
  4. 01:41:779 (8) - If you fix the above be sure to copy pasta to this
[INFINITE]
Even cooler to look at in the editor!
  1. 01:38:779 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing seems a bit excessive here. I would lower the distance a bit
Ok lets get this money in the cut forreal on the low
Topic Starter
ktgster
Lust

Lust wrote:

here is a quickie for the road
double post, who cares

Mapset is already fantastic, so not much to really say

[BASIC]
Clean difficulty
  1. 00:10:780 (3,4,5,6) - 4 hit circles in a row seems a bit tedious for the lowest difficulty, maybe switch them up with sliders or something - 00:10:113 (2) lacks emphasize if any of those notes are sliders. Considering that your NOVICE is like 2x harder, it shouldn't be a problem
  2. 00:13:113 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved - fixed
  3. 00:21:780 (4,5) - (Nazi) blanket is slightly off - no clue
  4. 00:22:780 (1) - Maybe remove this spinner and have a break, so that easy players can have a rest from all the action, or alternatively you can extend the spinner to 00:25:446 - to make a nice effect - extended spinner
  5. 00:41:446 (1) - Never thought I'd see the day, a 5 second spinner in the lowest difficulty??! I have problems with doing that now, you'll kill newer players haha, I would suggest mapping it out - oh I seen worse. Its not that long compared to some other diffs that have spinners at the end this long unless its a problem right now
  6. 00:52:780 (4,1) - (1) can better blanket (4)'s slider end. Ctrl+G (4) and use its approach circle to assist you in this - fixed
  7. 01:15:780 (3,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved - fixed
  8. 01:25:779 (4,1) - ^ - ^
  9. 01:34:112 (1,2,3) - I understand you have a pattern going on here, but this is actually some weird flow and hard to play. You go up, back down, and then back up then down again! I would angle 01:35:446 (3) - 's slider track to the right, so that it slings down in to the following pattern, providing a smoother, crisp play. - it fits pretty well and its not like a little challenging flow is bad. Moving this also causes a overlap on the next slider and I don't want to mess with that
  10. 01:46:296 (1) - Move this over a 1/2, having it too close to the circle is too sudden - don't really get what you mean, I can't really alter this part at all
[EXHAUST]
Cool to look at in the editor...LOL
  1. 00:01:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I found these patterns a too linear, which in turn made them awkward to play! I would have the circles curve up in to the following slider for smoother, nicer play. - and in return, you have curves that play wonky and screw up the flow. You could curve downwards which would be a better fit, but curves aren't really the best way to map this part. I did make them more straight
  2. 00:22:530 (1) - I would extend this spinner to 00:25:446 - for a cooler effect. Right now the spinner seems dead with no sound to land on - its suppose to be a dead spinner. The difference between this and the BASIC is the player skill level. Not only that, 00:22:530 (1) is very strong and just making it land on a spinner blows that note away
  3. 01:41:279 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Curves in at the beginning - fixed
  4. 01:41:779 (8) - If you fix the above be sure to copy pasta to this - done
[INFINITE]
Even cooler to look at in the editor!
  1. 01:38:779 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing seems a bit excessive here. I would lower the distance a bit - kept 1/3 spacing, removed jump
Ok lets get this money in the cut forreal on the low
Leader
Fixed a couple patterns on Lust's diff, rest is nice

have my first bubble \:D/
Lust
woot
Asphyxia
Talked with ktgster a bit, gave some patterns a bit more spacing and improved a blanket I guess. Going to re-bubble this since someone else wanted to get here and because there's a huge spacing error in Lust's difficulty that he doesn't wanna fix lol 01:06:113 (2,1) - So for the ranking BAT, check that one carefully.

~ rebub ~


Awesome difficulties with awesome song >w< no kds obviously

Lust fixed that, great!
Lust
holy shit thats huge

fixed

diff
osu file format v12

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Title:snow storm -euphoria-
TitleUnicode:snow storm -euphoria-
Artist:Yooh
ArtistUnicode:Yooh
Creator:ktgster
Version:Lust's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags:作決定記念 リミックスコンテスト Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest SDVX bemani dj TAKA Takayuki Ishikawa beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD Lust
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451,307,90112,6,0,P|359:333|261:307,1,180,2|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
191,340,90779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,288,90946,2,0,L|60:256,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,340,91446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,162,91779,5,8,1:2:0:0:
354,286,92112,2,0,L|394:230,1,60,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,147,92446,5,8,1:2:0:0:
234,63,92779,6,0,P|196:55|95:136,1,180,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
37,206,93446,2,0,L|132:286,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
300,336,94112,6,0,P|352:335|412:227,1,180,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,248,94779,2,0,L|270:134,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,105,95279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,117,95446,6,0,P|102:70|131:37,2,90,8|2|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,184,96112,2,0,L|83:235,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,308,96446,2,0,L|78:359,1,60,2|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
163,356,96779,5,8,1:2:0:0:
240,310,96946,2,0,P|283:298|367:318,1,120,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
430,361,97446,2,0,L|476:242,1,120,8|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
454,160,97946,1,2,0:2:0:0:
414,79,98112,2,0,L|336:66,1,60,8|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
264,74,98446,5,10,1:2:0:0:
90,122,98779,6,0,P|77:206|168:248,1,180,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,212,99446,1,10,1:2:0:0:
291,146,99612,2,0,P|315:189|291:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,314,100112,2,0,L|108:333,1,120,10|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,270,100612,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,184,100779,6,0,P|161:160|231:212,1,180,10|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,226,101446,2,0,P|389:277|472:253,1,180,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
474,163,102112,6,0,L|356:142,1,120,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
277,97,102612,1,2,1:2:0:0:
196,55,102779,2,0,L|86:138,1,120,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
48,300,103446,5,0,1:0:0:0:
137,300,103612,1,0,1:0:0:0:
227,300,103779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,300,104112,5,0,1:0:0:0:
469,236,104279,1,0,1:0:0:0:
405,172,104446,1,0,1:0:0:0:
225,176,104779,6,0,P|259:136|326:139,2,120,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
140,207,105612,1,2,1:2:0:0:
134,297,105779,1,2,1:2:0:0:
256,192,106112,12,8,108860,0:2:0:0:
333,364,110637,6,0,P|367:327|363:250,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,170,111326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,123,111556,2,0,L|331:55,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,201,112252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,288,112479,6,0,P|212:310|148:271,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,281,113171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,113402,2,0,P|71:157|71:131,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,143,114321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,133,114658,1,2,0:0:0:0:
465,292,116006,38,0,B|403:322|336:254|291:287,1,180.000006866455,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Asphyxia
seems that Lust's difficulty got updated, rebubbling
Raging Bull
wooosh woosh tilt screen zsszzzssszs wooosh bang bang dtddtdttddtt flip screen zz sss zz bababababang bang woosh
Avena

Raging Bull wrote:

wooosh woosh tilt screen zsszzzssszs wooosh bang bang dtddtdttddtt flip screen zz sss zz bababababang bang woosh
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Irreversible
[General]

I really don't approve of this custom hitsound, it sounds finished way too abrupt ( speaking of n:c2 hitnormal).. I wish it was unrankable
01:50:637 - Lower the volume a bit? The slider ticks seem quite noisy to me.
01:56:006 - No comment to the slider slide, mute it?

[Basic]

00:10:113 - The hitsound at the slider head seems wrong to me, please use a not custom one instead.
00:40:113 (1) - OMFG A JUMP, nah it's k if you want it like this.
01:32:112 (2) - I think this one is way too hidden. Please go for another placement.


[Lust's Novice]

00:19:280 (2) - Try to avoid the overlap here, something like http://puu.sh/8GwpS/b6d526c9f9.jpg also provides a better flow.
00:40:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too hard for a normal diff, implying that you've already used 1.5 DS which is quite high. To make a proper spread, try to get some sliders in this part.
01:00:613 - Delete this circle to get consistency with before? Seems cool.
01:05:446 - You have the same slider like 01:05:113 - , but imo the music is completely different here, so I wouldn't go with an ongoing pattern at all here! Try to put a single circle, it also fits, if not better.
01:06:113 (2,1) - Odd flow, those sliders don't really compliment each other. 01:06:113 (2) - I'd try another shape for this one, because the symmetry after is cool.
01:18:780 (1,2) - Tha'ts quite stressful for a normal.. any chance you could make it easier? Or at least not double repeated?
01:21:446 (1) - NC
01:38:446 (1,1,2,3) - 1) The hitsounds are so spammed here, I was really confused! 2) The rhythm is quite messed up here, since I don't think slider 1 goes well with the song itself, and this 01:39:446 - circle plays weird for me as well, i'd go for shortening 01:38:779 (1) - this one, and try another rhythm instead
01:43:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You have 3 times the same rhythm, why not going with something triangle shaped, or rotated by 120°? You know, that there is a clearly seen pattern.

For spread reasons too: You could try to get rid off some 1/2 notes! But yeah.. not too much, elsewhise the spread between this and Advanced wouldn't be too good as well :/
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[Advanced]

01:16:780 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please make this part a bit easier, the spread goes bad here and to be honest; 5-stream , circle, 5-stream, circle, etc. are very hard to play. You could try making this: http://puu.sh/8GwPs/035aa51be5.jpg
01:45:112 (2) - Unsnapped.

Well, before I go on modding, there is something that seems not appropriate for me; the spread between Novice / Advanced / Exhaust. The main problem is the note density; Novice: only 1/2 | Adanvced: Streams up to 5 (which is actually acceptable, but still take a look at what I've written above) | Exhaust: streams up to 12+ , and this is where it goes really bad. I think there is another diff needed, which fills the gap between Advanced and Exhaust.

Popping it because of this issue, sorry. Let me know your further plans tho, so we can come up with the best possible solution.
Topic Starter
ktgster
Irreversible

Irreversible wrote:

[General]

I really don't approve of this custom hitsound, it sounds finished way too abrupt ( speaking of n:c2 hitnormal).. I wish it was unrankable - :D
01:50:637 - Lower the volume a bit? The slider ticks seem quite noisy to me. - slider ticks on these sliders sound fine to me
01:56:006 - No comment to the slider slide, mute it? - fixed

[Basic]

00:10:113 - The hitsound at the slider head seems wrong to me, please use a not custom one instead. - that also means applying the same changes to the other diffs. The hitsound is consistent with the song regardless
00:40:113 (1) - OMFG A JUMP, nah it's k if you want it like this. - fixed
01:32:112 (2) - I think this one is way too hidden. Please go for another placement. - fixed with some help from Irre

[Advanced]

01:16:780 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please make this part a bit easier, the spread goes bad here and to be honest; 5-stream , circle, 5-stream, circle, etc. are very hard to play. You could try making this: http://puu.sh/8GwPs/035aa51be5.jpg - changed 5 stream notes to triples. Hope thats better now
01:45:112 (2) - Unsnapped. - blame lines

Well, before I go on modding, there is something that seems not appropriate for me; the spread between Novice / Advanced / Exhaust. The main problem is the note density; Novice: only 1/2 | Adanvced: Streams up to 5 (which is actually acceptable, but still take a look at what I've written above) | Exhaust: streams up to 12+ , and this is where it goes really bad. I think there is another diff needed, which fills the gap between Advanced and Exhaust.

Popping it because of this issue, sorry. Let me know your further plans tho, so we can come up with the best possible solution.

Going to add another diff.
Kodora
IRC mod for a new diff.

SPOILER
01:59 ktgster: would you mind modding 1 diff in a map
02:00 Kodora: hm?
02:00 Kodora: i guess i can
02:01 *ktgster is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420012 Yooh - snow storm -euphoria-]
02:01 ktgster: please mod the Exhaust
02:01 Kodora: ok, downloading
02:03 *Kodora is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420012 Yooh - snow storm -euphoria- [EXHAUST]]
02:07 Kodora: IRC mod would be fine?
02:08 ktgster: sure
02:09 Kodora: 01:50:637 - i kinda feel that this offset is a bit late
02:09 Kodora: maybe it is just me but not sure
02:09 Kodora: maybe -5 would work
02:11 ktgster: too early in that case
02:12 Kodora: 00:05:863 - i'd add note here, whole section 00:05:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sonds better as one stream
02:12 Kodora: actually hard to mod this, very nice & solid made
02:12 Kodora: 00:09:863 - same here
02:13 ktgster: okay
02:13 Kodora: 00:11:613 (9,10,11,12) - also this part was really strange since it is sounds as one stream and it is should be one stream
02:14 Kodora: 00:12:780 (3,4,5) - and this shouldn't be triplet, remove 00:12:863 (4) - please
02:15 ktgster: 00:12:863 (4) - there is a sound here
02:16 ktgster: fixed the first point though
02:16 Kodora: 00:14:946 - also i was really expecting something here, this sound shouldn't be ignored imo
02:17 Kodora: something like 1/4 slider would be nice here
02:17 Kodora: http://puu.sh/8HiDU.jpg
02:17 Kodora: 00:15:613 - and same here
02:20 ktgster: did something else since 1/4 sliders aren't something i want here
02:21 Kodora: 01:06:780 (1,2,3,4) - they feels too close while playing
02:21 Kodora: perhaps little biggesr spacing (arounf x1.70) would made this section more comfortable to play
02:22 ktgster: unfortunately, it would made no sense to increase the spacing more than what the stream spacing is
02:23 Kodora: this section just feels more powerful compare to the previous one :<
02:25 Kodora: 01:20:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - also this one works better musically as note + triplet http://puu.sh/8Hjjs.jpg
02:27 ktgster: done
02:29 Kodora: 01:20:780 (7) - Don't see a much reason for 1/4 repeat - replacing it with 4 notes would made next notes easier to catch.
02:30 ktgster: i don't see it being hard to catch really
02:30 ktgster: 01:19:446 (1,2,3,4) - you do it here
02:30 ktgster: also its a nice way to map a buildup
02:31 Kodora: 01:50:489 (1) - slidertail not on the red line
02:32 ktgster: thats a 1/6
02:32 ktgster: and it should be snapped
02:32 Kodora: oh wait i moved it accidentally x.x my bad
02:33 Kodora: 01:52:252 - add 1/6 repeat here too since you added it at 01:50:489 (1) -
02:34 Kodora: 01:56:006 (1) - This sounds better as single note
02:34 ktgster: i kinda don't want to ruin the spacing with the 1/1's
02:34 ktgster: and i want to emphisize the piano on the last slider
02:35 Kodora: problem of last slider is that it ends way before actual piano sound
02:36 Kodora: so slider sounds kinda out of place
02:37 Kodora: Well, up to you. That's all from me.
02:37 ktgster: even so, putting a really long slider both drains your hp and it can fill up the width or height of the screen if placed in the middle
02:38 ktgster: anyways thanks
02:38 Kodora: np :3/
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