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Jin - Lost Time Memory

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luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Pereira006 wrote:

[Easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:42:074 (3) - this isn't should be NC ? the rhyhthm is change like you did other parts ok
  2. 01:11:217 (3) - ^ same fixed
[Hard]

Gameplay:

  1. 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4) - I can't approve this as Level this diff... SV change and jump is 4.00.
  2. 02:35:788 (1,2,3,4) - same happen before 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 02:44:931 (1,2,3) - ^ same
  4. 03:56:074 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Hm.. I don't know.. I say this because I played this map really a lot of time and I never had problems with these sliders. Anyway I tryed to find a way to change this but really the more I try the more I feel like these jumps fits well as they are now.. idk if you have any suggestion on how to change this I can try but like this I really don't know what to do with them :/

[Collab Insane]

  1. 00:42:645 (6) - missing add nc
  2. 00:44:931 (5) - ^ same
  3. 01:20:788 (1) - no need nc
  4. 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - no need NC a lot, I don't see SV is changing or whatever, remove NC in 01:20:788 (1) and 01:21:645 (1), I see other parts have long combo example in 02:15:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), so I dunno why you put lot NC in 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3), Put NC doesn't mean if jump or stream, is music
  5. 01:24:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ same
  6. 01:27:788 (1) - ^ same
  7. 01:56:217 (1) - ^ same
  8. 02:00:788 (1) - ^ same
  9. 04:05:217 (1) - ^ same fixed
  10. 04:06:502 (1) - ^ same fixed
I know this is collab but the your style show inconsistency, better recheck or I'm wrong
[]
My main problem is NCs not huge but recheck just make sure you style is consistency
soo I srly need talk some QATs and BNs I don't know that Hard have SV slow speed with jump 4.00x for me I can't really approve but I will talk some QATs and bns
Any question if you don't understand ask me
other diff's is good
call me back
ok, Thank you for modding :)
Updated also with irre's changes.
Anyway maybe if you can ask for the opinion of other BN or QAT for that issues it will be better.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
fix 1 slider, The repeat is touching SKin Default Score in insane
missing 1 nc in insane and add break

all look good

Qualify

Congratz
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Pereira006 wrote:

fix 1 slider, The repeat is touching SKin Default Score in insane
missing 1 nc in insane and add break

all look good

Qualify

Congratz
Thank you Pereira! :D
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Congratzu o3o
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Ohhhhhhhhh!!!

Gratz luxo!! >w<
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,526 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
I guess you don't need the extra feedback lol, grats
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
!!! you're the best for mapping this!!
congrats \:DDD
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
Thank you! ^.^
This map was pending for too long D:

Anyway gratz also to Xinchii and Irreversible xD
Thank you for making GD/collab :3
Bladesu
90 posts
Joined October 2014
Bladesu
Gratz, great map!
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Video still has audio?

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__Hatsune_Miku
598 posts
Joined July 2014
__Hatsune_Miku
Finally ranked !!!
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

xxdeathx wrote:

Video still has audio?

SPOILER
General
Complete name                            : C:\Program Files (x86)\osu!\Songs\157617 Jin - Lost Time Memory\Lost time memory.flv
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Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
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Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
well miss see this, R.I.P
Illkryn
269 posts
Joined November 2012
Illkryn
fuk da audio
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

xxdeathx wrote:

Video still has audio?

SPOILER
General
Complete name                            : C:\Program Files (x86)\osu!\Songs\157617 Jin - Lost Time Memory\Lost time memory.flv
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Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
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Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
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Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
............. so?
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,912 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
that's unrankable
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Okoratu wrote:

that's unrankable
I know. I mean.. if we really have to do the unrank because of that better do it now and remedy as fast as possible :(
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
But i see is fine not trouble~
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
I redownloaded this map and the video have audio ;w;

RIP ;______;
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

I redownloaded this map and the video have audio ;w;

RIP ;______;
yes. it's going to unrank very soon. I already talked to QAT.
I would like to make it as painless as possible :(

if someone can help me to get the video without audio it would be reeeally apreciated :?
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18

luxoDeh wrote:

yes. it's going to unrank very soon. I already talked to QAT.
I would like to make it as painless as possible :(

if someone can help me to get the video without audio it would be reeeally apreciated :?
Use Avidemux for this I guess
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Use Avidemux for this I guess
If I had it or knew how to use it I wouldn't have ask for help.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
[Disqualification Reasons]

Disqualified for an Audio Track in the Video and the Difficulty Gap between Normal and Hard.

The Audio Track needs to be removed from the Video, you can basically use any Video Editing Program for that.

The Difficulty Gap between Normal and Hard is too big, as Normal has a relatively low density (many long sliders, too few 1/2) compared to Hard which is full of 1/2 with some decent jumps.
Normal should use more 1/2 and 1/1 replacing some of the longer sliders. Easy could use some more density too, to balance the spread better.

[Additional]

I would recommend you to get some more mods, mainly on Easy / Normal when they will be adjusted as mentioned in the Disqualification Reasons, but Memory also needs work:
  1. Almost all sections in the map are equally dense and use equally big jumps etc, although the music calls for completely different densities and jumps in different sections.
  2. 00:00:360 - For example, this section is so calm but uses a very fast slider velocity and some really big jumps. It feels very overdone if you ask me.
  3. 00:34:645 - Same about this section.. Only the guitar is playing here, but you are mapping it the same way as later sections with a lot more density and emphasis in the music.
  4. You often have slider tails on very important beats, mainly big white ticks, which messes up the emphasis. You know that beats you want to stress should be clickable, as pressing a key is stronger than releasing a key. The most extreme example is 01:51:217 where players need to start streaming at the blue tick, which doesn't feel intuitive, but many other big white ticks get mapped with sliderstails where it shouldn't be done, for example 02:59:788 and other similar cases.
  5. The spacings often don't seem to follow a logic. A jump always stresses the note you jump to, so it should be used before important or emphasized beats. In this map, you very often have low spacing before the most important beats in a measure, for example 01:39:645 - , 01:45:502 - , 01:50:074 and many more, while the big jumps are used between other notes that don't seem as emphasized as the ones I mentioned. Please try to use your jumps more reasonable.
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
I try to do this for video

http://puu.sh/gUeT6.flv

you can try it if you feel this one is ok :)

Desperate-kun wrote:

The Difficulty Gap between Normal and Hard is too big, as Normal has a relatively low density (many long sliders, too few 1/2) compared to Hard which is full of 1/2 with some decent jumps.
Normal should use more 1/2 and 1/1 replacing some of the longer sliders.
...... so , ok .......
I will do some adjustment in these day
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
So I guess we were going through the map at the same time.. well, here is something you need to fix, in addition to Desperate-kun's modding; I personally would like to see all of them fixed:

[Insane]
  1. 02:28:931 (1,1,1) - not really readable; consider reducing the jump. Whoever mapped this also mixed the combo colours; they should be swapped for 02:28:931 (1,1)
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:645 (5,1) - please unstack these sliders, it's not suitable for Hard
  2. 02:13:931 (4,7) - ^
  3. 03:01:502 (3,6) - ^

    If you are wondering why, your goal is not to map it the least readable way to confuse the player and set the map against him.

  4. 01:20:645 (2,3) - please reduce the jump, it's really big for Hard
  5. 01:22:074 (6,1) - ^
  6. 02:32:788 (6,1) - ^
  7. 02:40:931 (3,4) - ^
  8. 04:21:074 (1,2) - ^

  9. 01:51:645 (6,7) - the jump is kinda random, make the spacing normal?
[Normal]
  1. 01:24:788 (1,2,1) - spacing error
[Easy]
  1. 01:55:788 (3,1) - tiny spacing error
  2. 02:26:931 (1,1) - may want to change the pattern, so that there won't be an antijump people may accidentally hit too early
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Disqualification Reasons]

Disqualified for an Audio Track in the Video and the Difficulty Gap between Normal and Hard.

The Audio Track needs to be removed from the Video, you can basically use any Video Editing Program for that. and that's done.

The Difficulty Gap between Normal and Hard is too big, as Normal has a relatively low density (many long sliders, too few 1/2) compared to Hard which is full of 1/2 with some decent jumps.
Normal should use more 1/2 and 1/1 replacing some of the longer sliders. Easy could use some more density too, to balance the spread better.

[Additional]

I would recommend you to get some more mods, mainly on Easy / Normal when they will be adjusted as mentioned in the Disqualification Reasons, but Memory also needs work:
  1. Almost all sections in the map are equally dense and use equally big jumps etc, although the music calls for completely different densities and jumps in different sections.
  2. 00:00:360 - For example, this section is so calm but uses a very fast slider velocity and some really big jumps. It feels very overdone if you ask me. I made the first part with a lower SV.
  3. 00:34:645 - Same about this section.. Only the guitar is playing here, but you are mapping it the same way as later sections with a lot more density and emphasis in the music. here is ok imo
  4. You often have slider tails on very important beats, mainly big white ticks, which messes up the emphasis. You know that beats you want to stress should be clickable, as pressing a key is stronger than releasing a key. The most extreme example is 01:51:217 where players need to start streaming at the blue tick, which doesn't feel intuitive, but many other big white ticks get mapped with sliderstails where it shouldn't be done, for example 02:59:788 and other similar cases. the first stream you mentioned is ok to me, basically because there is no other way to make it, also I don't think it's a big problem. Anyway I mostly like the thythm in this diff so if is possible I would really like to keep it. anyway if you think there is some in particular that really need to be fixed I'll try to change
  5. The spacings often don't seem to follow a logic. A jump always stresses the note you jump to, so it should be used before important or emphasized beats. In this map, you very often have low spacing before the most important beats in a measure, for example 01:39:645 - , 01:45:502 - , 01:50:074 and many more, while the big jumps are used between other notes that don't seem as emphasized as the ones I mentioned. Please try to use your jumps more reasonable. and this is quite right. I tryed to improve the spacing in some parts. also here anyway if you think there is some other one that I missed that really should be fixed, it would be grate if you can mantion it

TicClick wrote:

So I guess we were going through the map at the same time.. well, here is something you need to fix, in addition to Desperate-kun's modding; I personally would like to see all of them fixed:

[Insane]
  1. 02:28:931 (1,1,1) - not really readable; consider reducing the jump. Whoever mapped this also mixed the combo colours; they should be swapped for 02:28:931 (1,1) fixed the spacing for irreversible. but not the nc
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:645 (5,1) - please unstack these sliders, it's not suitable for Hard You're not the first one to mention that. anyway I tryed several times it but I still can't find a way to do it properly without making an ugly unstack or an unfitting placement that will change the rest of the patterns. I played this map a lot of time anyway and I never found it confusing. anyway if you really think it should be fixed it would be really helpfull if you can help me to find a solution, because I tryed but I can't find a good one here.
  2. 02:13:931 (4,7) - ^ ^
  3. 03:01:502 (3,6) - ^ ^

    If you are wondering why, your goal is not to map it the least readable way to confuse the player and set the map against him. as I said before I was never confused or tricked by it. So I didn't think that way

  4. 01:20:645 (2,3) - please reduce the jump, it's really big for Hard ok
  5. 01:22:074 (6,1) - ^ ok
  6. 02:32:788 (6,1) - ^ not here, I think this fit quite well
  7. 02:40:931 (3,4) - ^ ok
  8. 04:21:074 (1,2) - ^ ok

  9. 01:51:645 (6,7) - the jump is kinda random, make the spacing normal? ok
[Easy]
  1. 01:55:788 (3,1) - tiny spacing error fixed
  2. 02:26:931 (1,1) - may want to change the pattern, so that there won't be an antijump people may accidentally hit too early ok, fixed
Ook. I will wait for xinchii and see if the normal diff will be better for the spread.
For now I fixed the video, and what I said here in the mods.
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
There is a solution: make a it look like a manual stack. Select the last slider of each two and move it 4 pixels down and right OR 4 pixels up and left. May want tro try 8 instead of 4.

Even though they are still stacked, the appearance of a new object is way more clear, as you can spot the change of contour.

Regarding the mistake I found on Insane, you have fast sliders painted red everywhere else throughout the difficulty, and regular/slow painted violet.
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

TicClick wrote:

There is a solution: make a it look like a manual stack. Select the last slider of each two and move it 4 pixels down and right OR 4 pixels up and left. May want tro try 8 instead of 4.

Even though they are still stacked, the appearance of a new object is way more clear, as you can spot the change of contour.

Regarding the mistake I found on Insane, you have fast sliders painted red everywhere else throughout the difficulty, and regular/slow painted violet.
ook, fixed both things :3
Maruku
9 posts
Joined December 2014
Maruku
I've waited for this song to get ranked for almost as long as I've played osu!... and this mapset came soooo close! I'm checking this map every day. :)
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
I add many 1/2 and 1/1 rhythm at where I think it will be fit

orz hope it can work now....

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82,312,144217,6,0,B|119:313|134:343|167:347|167:347|195:340|195:340|220:353,2,150,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,248,145360,2,0,B|191:229|219:249|249:235|249:235|270:216|270:216|298:215,2,150,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,152,146502,2,0,B|209:119|243:122|263:95|263:95|271:68|271:68|295:53,2,150,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,64,147645,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,236,148931,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,148,149217,6,0,B|256:136|256:136|308:148,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,149788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,76,149931,2,0,B|256:48|256:48|156:76,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,136,150788,2,0,P|48:172|48:232,1,100
64,268,151217,6,0,B|83:309|123:309|149:288|149:251|149:251|188:227|217:250,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,308,152074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,324,152217,2,0,P|444:304|476:216,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,153074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,128,153360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,108,153502,6,0,L|500:108,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,28,154074,2,0,L|328:28,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,40,154502,2,0,P|242:121|286:206,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,28,155788,6,0,B|442:26|442:26|482:70,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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238,243,157502,2,0,L|305:331,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,348,158074,6,0,B|128:248|128:248|125:203|155:172,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,116,158931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,140,159074,2,0,B|304:179|304:179|396:198|431:111,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,80,159931,2,2,L|273:1,1,100
229,26,160360,6,0,P|141:68|149:160,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,238,161217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,263,161360,2,0,B|298:278|333:263|333:263|338:329|403:357,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,260,162217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
401,164,162502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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66,266,163645,2,0,P|18:177|67:98,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,164931,12,4,167074,0:0:0:0:
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356,144,168360,2,0,L|408:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,332,169788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,308,170074,6,0,L|64:280,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,170645,2,0,L|188:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,196,172074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,112,172360,6,0,L|412:84,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,180,172931,2,0,L|324:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,174360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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52,176,175217,2,0,L|116:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,168,176645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,228,176931,6,0,B|356:216|376:212|376:212|412:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,176,177503,2,0,L|396:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,178074,2,0,B|256:68|256:68|204:80,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,178931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,212,179217,6,0,L|80:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,356,179788,2,0,L|212:300,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,304,180360,2,0,L|392:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,262,180931,2,0,L|344:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,181502,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,181788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,48,182074,2,0,B|132:44|132:44|128:84|104:112,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,182645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,264,182931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183217,12,4,185502,0:0:0:0:
240,276,194645,5,2,0:0:0:0:
60,184,195217,2,0,P|100:96|200:68,1,200
384,132,196360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,276,196931,2,0,P|304:348|401:349,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,197788,2,0,L|488:188,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,198931,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,199217,2,0,P|156:104|220:19,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,56,200360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,252,200931,2,0,L|288:312,1,100
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472,148,202360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,340,202931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,200,203502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,203788,2,0,P|376:188|320:292,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,204931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,104,205502,2,0,L|164:28,1,100
252,64,206074,2,0,L|172:144,2,100,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,84,206931,2,0,L|208:236,1,200
232,328,207788,2,0,L|336:328,1,100
352,228,208360,1,4,0:0:0:0:
207,161,217502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
307,161,217788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,69,218074,2,0,P|391:105|411:149,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,237,218645,2,0,B|391:257|391:257|431:257|455:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,161,219502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,245,219788,6,0,L|255:349,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,161,220645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,237,220931,2,0,B|121:257|121:257|81:257|57:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,221788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,72,222074,6,0,B|224:80|240:24|268:32|268:32|288:80|352:84,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,222931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,160,223217,2,0,P|451:254|360:282,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,224074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,212,224360,6,4,L|232:356,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,225645,2,4,L|186:78,2,150,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,229217,6,0,P|208:104|172:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,76,229788,2,0,P|72:116|79:172,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,230217,2,0,B|136:228|144:268|144:268|184:252|228:300|264:288,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,344,231074,2,2,P|404:332|436:292,1,100
452,256,231502,6,0,L|404:164,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,252,232074,2,0,L|305:163,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,232502,2,0,B|265:87|235:114|235:114|209:102|162:124|125:85,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,36,233359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,136,233645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,180,233788,6,0,P|48:228|68:276,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,340,234360,2,0,L|229:295,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,234788,2,0,B|356:308|356:308|376:280|428:272|420:208,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,236074,6,0,B|204:212|204:212|208:192|188:164|212:136,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,28,236931,2,0,B|367:76|367:76|364:96|384:124|360:152,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,138,237788,2,0,P|160:132|104:140,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,238360,6,0,P|164:248|212:240,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,192,238931,2,0,L|344:288,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,239360,2,0,P|464:244|452:140,1,200,4|2,0:2|0:2,0:3:0:0:
412,68,240217,2,0,B|364:56|364:56|308:68,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,36,240645,6,0,L|172:64,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,164,241217,2,0,L|88:192,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,160,241645,2,0,B|28:184|36:224|16:248|16:248|36:276|28:316|52:344,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,292,242502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,340,242788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,340,242931,6,0,B|311:312|311:312|327:260,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,168,243502,2,0,B|300:115|300:115|340:83,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,64,243931,2,0,B|448:136|448:136|464:252,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,245217,6,0,B|280:96|248:56|248:56|200:84,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,246074,2,0,B|138:282|138:282|93:265,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,247217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,224,247502,6,0,L|368:332,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,312,248074,2,0,L|184:364,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,372,248502,2,0,B|103:356|93:324|93:324|47:304|38:240|81:211,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,136,249359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,180,249645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,232,249788,6,0,B|316:200|316:200|344:180|348:144,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,84,250645,2,0,P|454:223|352:344,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,251931,12,4,254217,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256502,12,4,258931,0:0:0:0:
256,290,259788,6,0,L|256:140,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,68,260502,2,0,P|256:40|184:72,2,150,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,261502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,88,261788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,188,262074,2,0,L|440:288,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,262645,2,0,L|332:312,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,263217,2,0,P|196:252|252:176,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,264074,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,108,264360,2,0,P|104:184|96:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,364,265217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,336,265502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,352,265788,6,0,L|440:300,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,266360,2,0,L|340:252,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,267788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,269217,12,2,277324,0:0:0:0:
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meii18
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Call me when you want to push it forward again
luxoDeh
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updated Xinchii's diff
Myxo
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Checking the spread on luxo's request:
It is better now. Xinchii, maybe you can replace some of the 2/1-sliders in kiai with 1/1 (or 1/2 where appropriate)? For example 01:34:074 (1) - , 01:36:360 (1) - etc could be replaced with 1/1 circles to add more density and emphasis on the kiai parts and it would improve the spread more.. atm it's still a bit critical.

After a few changes on that you should be able to push it forward! Good luck!
Xinchii
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Desperate-kun wrote:

Checking the spread on luxo's request:
It is better now. Xinchii, maybe you can replace some of the 2/1-sliders in kiai with 1/1 (or 1/2 where appropriate)? For example 01:34:074 (1) - , 01:36:360 (1) - etc could be replaced with 1/1 circles to add more density and emphasis on the kiai parts and it would improve the spread more.. atm it's still a bit critical.

After a few changes on that you should be able to push it forward! Good luck!
Ok , got it >.o

Give me some more time to fixed here again ~
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ok, updated xinchii's diff
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Let's bring this back o3o
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ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Let's bring this back o3o
oh, thank you :)
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Sorry, but I need to pop the bubble for snapping issues. Look at them in the General section.

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. 02:28:074 (6,7,8,9) - I need confirmation for this, to me all beats sound really off-sync here and would have to be snapped on 1/12 (yeah...wtf). Here the rhythm provided that all percussion beats are followed properly, with NC starting at 02:28:098 - (BSD 1/12):
    SPOILER
    The easiest solution for this would be to replace the streams/triples in the respective diffs with a spinner instead (like in Normal and Insane).
    Otherwise, consult some BNs/QATs concerning this issue if you want to keep it, can't leave it at its current state in the Hard and Memory diff.
  2. 03:04:360 - to 03:05:502 - The beats provided by the percussion are not 1/4 snapped, but you need 1/3 BS here, thus making the snappings in Hard and Memory difficulty wrong.
    Here the beats that can be actually heard in the track, circled:
    SPOILER
    What I recommend for Hard:
    SPOILER
    What I recommend for Insane:
    SPOILER

    [Easy]
    1. 00:07:788 (1,2) - This plays kinda awkward since the slider starts on a relatively weak beat, the stronger one being at 00:08:217 - .
      Using the following would set the emphasis better:
      http://puu.sh/hq7x8/73ae13699b.jpg
    2. 00:12:931 (2,1) - It hurts so much to not see this being aligned lol
    3. 00:24:931 (2) - Whistle on reversearrow for the guitar string.
    4. 00:28:931 (2) - Shift to the the next white tick to the right for a more stable rhythm.
    5. 01:53:502 (1,2,3) - Little unnecessary diff peak, you just came back from the kiai and start this section off with 210bpm singletap... it's better you 01:53:502 (1,2) - unify these into one slider.
    6. 02:32:074 - According to your clapping pattern, shouldn't there be one here as well?
    7. 02:41:645 (2,1) - Align better?
    8. 03:14:645 (2,3) - Symmetry looks a bit broken here.
    9. 03:58:074 (1,2) - 04:07:217 (1,2) - Switch NC, the stronger finish beats lie on the 2nd ones.
    10. 04:14:645 (1,2,3) - Really would prefer if you change the rhythm here. I guess you can't avoid polarity issues in this song without ruining the rhythm choices, but avoid tapping circles after 3/2 gaps would be really helpful for beginners.Try the following out:
      SPOILER
    11. 04:18:931 (1,2,1) - Same as above. Suggestion:
      SPOILER
    12. Would be cool if you could set NCs after every two stanzas first, not after each one since your combos are really small in here.
    [Normal]
    1. #swagsliders.
      On a serious note though, overusing them in an inconsistent way(e.g. Your first kiai has way more 'exotic' sliders than the second one which is generally much cleaner or using them for no apparent reason like at 01:56:931 (1) - where the music is actually straightforward) makes this map look pretty chaotic and unclean at parts, so take care of how to use them in the future.
    2. 00:24:360 (3,4,1) - 01:22:502 (1,2,3) - 01:53:502 (1,2,1) - 02:19:217 (4,1,2) - Spacing issue.
    3. 01:04:360 (1,2) - Clap should be on 2 first. Also add a clap on 01:05:502 (3) - 's tail.
    4. 01:14:645 (2,3) - Set beats on these sliderheads (and mb on 2's tail) for the percussions.
    5. 01:23:645 (3) - Finish on tail and head please.
    6. 01:37:360 (3) - Compared to previous and next sliders, this looks pretty edgy and doesn't fit in well at this part IMO. Make it a bit 'wonkier' like 01:36:360 (1) - .
    7. 01:40:931 (1) - 01:41:788 (2) - Finish on tail. Same at: 02:35:788 (1,2) - 03:56:074 (1,2) - (you made it consistent at least, but finish would work better than whistles here imo).
      Same at: 02:15:931 (3) -
    8. 01:48:788 (3) - Set the red anchor on the slidertick instead to make it look more balanced.
      SPOILER
    9. 02:28:931 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? Delete it.
    10. 02:32:217 (3,4) - Blanket fix pls
    11. 02:47:788 - I really don't like the monotonous rhythm here at all, since it doesn't reflect the music well. This is supported by the fact that actually all cymbals important for this part are ignored just because no red ticks are played or at least followed.
      It would be really good if you could arrange the rhythm here for variation.
    12. 03:26:931 (6) - NC here maybe,
    13. 04:06:074 (2) - Same shape like 04:05:217 (1) - for neat consistency?
    14. 04:21:502 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I really can't accept the way you set your claps in this part. Claps are meant to be set to the emphasized beats/strong percussions in the track, in this case the ones where you set softwhistles instead.
      Your current usage of claps does not work since the beats being emphasized by them are not emphasized in the music actually, providing wrong feedback to the player. Please rework the claps and set them where you set the whistles.
    15. Ugh, looks a bit messy to me.
    [Hard]
    1. 01:01:360 (6) - Whistles on head and tail maybe since there are weak cymbals in the track here. Same for 01:05:931 (5) -
    2. 01:06:931 (1) - Finish on head. Same at 01:16:074 (2) - 01:23:645 (4,5) - 01:25:217 (2) - 02:18:502 (4) - 02:19:360 (6) - 02:27:217 (3) - 02:56:217 (1) - 04:19:360 (2) -
      (Would be cool if you could set combo clap+finish at mentioned beats, but i guess it's your style. Pls don't mind some of the suggestions since i noticed that later first)
    3. 01:14:360 (4,6) - Finishes on head? Would feel good for the tempo at this part.
    4. 02:00:788 (5) - Finish on head and tail.
    5. 03:22:074 (1,2) - Switch NCs.
    6. 03:41:788 (8,1) - Shouldn't this be 1.4xDS'd? The spacing is a bit irritating.
    7. 04:07:074 (8) - NC here for better readability.
    [Luxoversible's Insane]
    1. 00:07:074 (1,2) - Switch NC. Same at: 04:06:360 (7,1) -
    2. 00:43:788 (1) - Finish on tail would be neat here.
    3. 02:09:217 (2,3,4) - NCing here would make the SV changes more comfortable to play. Also clearly missing finishes on 3 and 4's head, compare to the previous part (i guess Irre's section?).
    4. Missing finishes: 02:18:502 (5) - 02:19:217 (7) - tail 04:20:645 (6) - 04:21:074 (1) -
    5. 02:21:217 (6,7) - this jump is random, i can't see a reason for this to happen. Please equalize the spacing.
    6. 02:56:931 (3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit messy, i know you put a small jump to 5, but it'd look way much better if everything had the same distance from each other.
    7. 03:16:931 (6) - 03:21:502 (5) - Would be cool if you could set NC's here, these are somewhat long.
    8. 03:28:217 (4) - Can't really hear a clear beat at this point, delete?
    9. 03:37:074 (2) - This comes really sudden. You just jumped from a 0.60xSV section to 1.50xSV, please nerf this a bit (~1.2)
    10. Also, some extended sliders on this section i can't agree with since they clearly go over notable beats that shouldn't be missed. Namely:
      03:38:931 (3) - 03:40:074 (2) - 03:41:217 (1) - 03:44:074 (4) - . The other one's are fine I guess.
    11. 03:56:502 (1,1,1) - Are these really necessary? You didn't even changed SV here.
    [Memory]
    1. 00:40:217 (6,1) - At least these offbeat sliders sound really bad since they don't follow the instruments properly. Try:
      SPOILER
    2. 00:44:788 (6,1,2) - ^. Try the following out instead:
      SPOILER
    3. 02:52:074 (2,3) - Weird spacing, why is 3 more emphasized than 2? Same for: 02:57:217 (4,5) -
    4. 03:14:360 - Could really set the NC's after every two stanzas first, they are pretty small here.
    5. 03:48:931 (1) - No fancy slider? Aww...
    6. 04:20:645 (3) - Finish pls.
    7. 04:21:502 (2) - Definitely should have one instead of clap.
    That's all I guess, some cleanup on the Normal would be cool too.
    Call me back when everything is applied!

    EDIT: Forget icon orz.
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Pho:
Fixed NC and finishes,
Fixed the fast SV change
However, I disagree with you on the last adressed point, I honestly prefer having this rhythm throughout the whole part. I hope I find your understanding in that.
http://puu.sh/hqLnx/93110b4012.txt
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