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Jin - Lost Time Memory

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-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.
So, let's get started.

General:
  1. Uncheck “Widescreen support” in all your diffs since you don’t have a storyboard.
  2. The slider velocity gap from the Insane to the hardest diff is kind of big. Why not rather try a slider velocity of 1.70 or 1.80 in your “Memory” diff.
  3. Shouldn’t you add something into the “source” tab, like maybe Kagerou Project or something like that, since this is a song from kagerou project?
  4. I think the artist has to be: Jin ft. Kohta Matsuyama
    http://vgmdb.net/album/45727
  5. It’s also “Mekakucity” not “Mekaku City”.
  6. Use a resolution of 1366X768 for your background image. I managed to fix your current one:
    http://puu.sh/gyLEM/462c5497c2.jpg
  7. You forgot to add the custom sounds to the soft hitsounds on the red timing points.
    http://puu.sh/gyLMD/9ec697d794.png
  8. There’s a kiai time inconsistency. Rather make sure that your kiai time is the same in all your diffs for consistency.
  9. Change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Imo and according to AiBat this is important. So please go to your .osu file and type in “2000” right next to your audio lead-in.

Easy:
  1. 01:10:788 –I think it’s important to also map this beat in some way. So I suggest making this slider: 01:10:074 (2) –longer till its tail is here: 01:10:788 –
    Picture
  2. 01:21:788 (2) –This slider doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely imo. Maybe try this rhythm instead:
    Picture
  3. 01:48:931 –Why didn’t you add a note here? There’s that clear cymbal sound here that’s important to get mapped imo.
  4. 01:50:074 (3) –A finish instead of a whistle on this circle will fit so much better imo.
  5. 01:54:645 (4) –New combo here for consistency with 01:02:074 (1) – and then remove new combo here: 01:55:217 (1) –
  6. 02:28:931 (1) –Rather stack the head of this circle on the tail of 02:26:931 (1) – to fix that spacing.
  7. 02:48:074 (1) –I suggest placing this circle right in the middle of the spinner to make it easier to get to the next note once the spinner ends.
  8. 03:22:931 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 03:23:788 (2) -

Xinchii’s Normal:
  1. 00:24:931 –It feels weird to have this gap here, especially since a vocal is clearly audible there. Rather add a note or start this slider: 00:25:074 (4) –there and lengthen it.
  2. 03:46:645 – to 03:48:931 –Insert a break time here please. Luxodeh did this in his other diffs.
  3. 04:00:645 (1) –Add a finish on the head of this slider and not a whistle, for consistency.
  4. 04:29:217 (1) –End this spinner where Luxodeh had ended his Easy diff’s spinner as well, which is here: 04:37:324 –

Hard:
  1. 01:02:074 (1) –Place a small jump here like you did here: 01:11:217 (1) – For consistency and also because this stack: 01:01:931 (7) - is confusing if 01:02:074 (1) –isn’t spaced out a bit more. While testplaying, I thought I had to click that stacked circle earlier than I was supposed to.
  2. 01:50:074 (1,2) –Imo, these repetitive sliders doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely and while testplaying it’s hard to catch the rhythm. Why not change those sliders into normal, long sliders instead?
    Picture
  3. 02:06:074 (1) –Make this jump just as big as this one: 01:56:931 (1) –for consistency and to prevent confusion with this stacked note: 02:05:931 (8) –
  4. 02:08:931 (1) –Space this circle out more. Imo, it’s too close to the previous note and can be mistaken for a note that has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to.
  5. 02:27:645 (5) –Add a finish on the head of this slider?

Collab Insane:
  1. 00:25:360 (1) –Whistle on the head of this slider.
  2. 00:40:645 (1,1,1) –I don’t see a reason to use new combos here. Please remove them.
  3. 00:46:360 (1,1,1) –Same thing here. Remove the new combos.
  4. 01:33:788 (1) –Rather not make the slider velocity so fast here suddenly. It’s quite confusing and catches the player off-guard. Rather just keep it x1.00.
  5. 01:56:217 (1) –This stack is a bit confusing and players might think this slider also has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to. So rather unstack.
  6. 02:04:645 (4,5) –This jump feels quite big and here: 01:08:360 (3,4) –you didn’t use such a big jump. I suggest making that spacing similar to this spacing: 02:04:788 (5,1) –
  7. 02:08:217 (4) –Don’t implement a slider velocity change here. Imo, it doesn’t really fit since I don’t really detect a place here where the music gets slower. So rather remove that SV change.
  8. 02:10:074 (1,2,3) –Make sure the spacing between these three notes are similar.
  9. 02:29:217 (1) –Like my previous suggestion; rather don’t make the SV so fast suddenly. It’s rather surprising. Remove that SV change.
  10. 02:38:645 (1) –Space this slider like you spaced this one: 02:38:074 (1,2) –since it has the same fast rhythm.
  11. 02:40:360 (7) –Add new combo here.
  12. 03:37:074 (2) –I really don’t like these very fast SV changes. Rather remove them since it’s quite unexpected.
  13. 03:48:717 (1) –Rather remove this fast SV change. I think there’s other places as well further in this diff. Go through the kiai time and please remove these fast SV changes since they’re not necessary in my opinion and they’re bit irritating to play imo.
  14. 03:58:645 (1,1) –Remove these two new combos to stay consistent with: 01:43:217 (1,2,3) –
  15. 04:06:788 (4) –This jump feels really big especially for such a difficult part in the map. Please reduce the spacing.
  16. 04:17:645 (6) –I think you forgot a finish on the head of this slider.

Memory:

The only thing I can say about this diff is that I really think you have to lower that slider velocity since it’s extremely fast imo and kind of ruins the SV spread.

Overall, all the diffs look really nice, except that Memory diff that just requires a SV change to make this mapset perfect.

If you change the slider velocity on the last diff then you can call me back for a recheck.
Good Luck~! :D
Last edited by -Nya- , edited 1 time in total.
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Luxoversible, Plz >w<
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.
So, let's get started.

Xinchii’s Normal:
  1. 00:24:931 –It feels weird to have this gap here, especially since a vocal is clearly audible there. Rather add a note or start this slider: 00:25:074 (4) –there and lengthen it. fixed
  2. 03:46:645 – to 03:48:931 –Insert a break time here please. Luxodeh did this in his other diffs. ahh... although I like no break time here , but ok ~ fixed
  3. 04:00:645 (1) –Add a finish on the head of this slider and not a whistle, for consistency. ok~
  4. 04:29:217 (1) –End this spinner where Luxodeh had ended his Easy diff’s spinner as well, which is here: 04:37:324 – ok~

Thx for mod ~~ :D

I’ll continue with this mod tomorrow~
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: IA - Lost Time Memory.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93931
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Lost Time Memory
TitleUnicode:ロスタイムメモリー
Artist:Jin
ArtistUnicode:じん
Creator:luxoDeh
Version:Xinchii's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kagerou Project days vocaloid IA Mekaku City Records Actors 自然の敵P Shizen no Teki Shizu しづ leon1341414 Xinchii Irreversible
BeatmapID:393496
BeatmapSetID:157617

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
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60,244,248502,2,0,B|44:212|56:180|56:180|32:136|64:80|116:84,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,249788,6,0,B|188:240|188:240|216:220|220:184,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,68,250645,2,0,P|320:208|232:336,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,251931,12,4,254217,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256502,12,4,258931,0:0:0:0:
256,290,259788,6,0,L|256:140,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,68,260502,2,0,P|256:40|184:72,2,150,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,261502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,88,261788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,188,262074,2,0,L|440:288,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,262645,2,0,L|332:312,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,263217,2,0,P|196:252|252:176,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,264074,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,108,264360,2,0,P|104:184|96:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,364,265217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,336,265502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,352,265788,6,0,L|440:300,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,266360,2,0,L|340:252,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,266931,2,0,P|360:104|344:56,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,267788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,152,268074,2,0,P|156:80|204:20,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,188,269074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,269217,12,2,277324,0:0:0:0:
-Nya-
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-Nya-
Edited my post above~
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Hi there,
as most suggestions were about the NC and SV changes, I'll quickly state my opinion towards those.

NC: fixed all
SV changes: Almost no changes, because I think it's fitting like this. Also, comments like "i don't understand", well, gj.. what to change? I didn't change anything there.

I adjusted the rhythm sometimes too~ And applied some jump suggestions. Hitsounds are also fixed :D
If you don't understand why I didn't changed smth, pm me please, since it was just too mcuh to answer v_v

http://puu.sh/gzSTg/16c3381af4.txt
luxoDeh
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Topic Starter
luxoDeh

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.
So, let's get started.

General:
  1. Uncheck “Widescreen support” in all your diffs since you don’t have a storyboard. fixed
  2. The slider velocity gap from the Insane to the hardest diff is kind of big. Why not rather try a slider velocity of 1.70 or 1.80 in your “Memory” diff. I don't know. I would really like to keep the actual sv. Since this is an extra diff, I think the peculiarity in this case is also that sv. I added some months ago the insane collab to fix the big gap between the hard and that memory diff, wich was really too high, but now I feel is ok..
  3. Shouldn’t you add something into the “source” tab, like maybe Kagerou Project or something like that, since this is a song from kagerou project? I don't know, because the most of the ranked song by jin don't have "kagerou project" in source. and since this was made before the anime also I think it shouldn't have "Mekakucity actors" either..
  4. I think the artist has to be: Jin ft. Kohta Matsuyama no. This is IA. Kohta Matsuyama is different
    http://vgmdb.net/album/45727
  5. It’s also “Mekakucity” not “Mekaku City”. ok
  6. Use a resolution of 1366X768 for your background image. I managed to fix your current one: fixed
    http://puu.sh/gyLEM/462c5497c2.jpg
  7. You forgot to add the custom sounds to the soft hitsounds on the red timing points. no, I didn't forgot. I did it on purpose, because the sound would have been wrong with the custom one
    http://puu.sh/gyLMD/9ec697d794.png
  8. There’s a kiai time inconsistency. Rather make sure that your kiai time is the same in all your diffs for consistency. I think this is fixed now
  9. Change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Imo and according to AiBat this is important. So please go to your .osu file and type in “2000” right next to your audio lead-in. fixed

Easy:
  1. 01:10:788 –I think it’s important to also map this beat in some way. So I suggest making this slider: 01:10:074 (2) –longer till its tail is here: 01:10:788 – ok
    Picture
  2. 01:21:788 (2) –This slider doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely imo. Maybe try this rhythm instead: fixed
    Picture
  3. 01:48:931 –Why didn’t you add a note here? There’s that clear cymbal sound here that’s important to get mapped imo. fixed in another way
  4. 01:50:074 (3) –A finish instead of a whistle on this circle will fit so much better imo. yes
  5. 01:54:645 (4) –New combo here for consistency with 01:02:074 (1) – and then remove new combo here: 01:55:217 (1) – ok
  6. 02:28:931 (1) –Rather stack the head of this circle on the tail of 02:26:931 (1) – to fix that spacing. hm.. I don't know, I have some problems to fix the rest of the map if I change this. I just moved a bit just to avoid a small overlap, but I think I can't fix that.. anyway it won't be too confusing imo
  7. 02:48:074 (1) –I suggest placing this circle right in the middle of the spinner to make it easier to get to the next note once the spinner ends. ok
  8. 03:22:931 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 03:23:788 (2) - ok

Hard:
  1. 01:02:074 (1) –Place a small jump here like you did here: 01:11:217 (1) – For consistency and also because this stack: 01:01:931 (7) - is confusing if 01:02:074 (1) –isn’t spaced out a bit more. While testplaying, I thought I had to click that stacked circle earlier than I was supposed to. ok
  2. 01:50:074 (1,2) –Imo, these repetitive sliders doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely and while testplaying it’s hard to catch the rhythm. Why not change those sliders into normal, long sliders instead? ok, tryed as you say
    Picture
  3. 02:06:074 (1) –Make this jump just as big as this one: 01:56:931 (1) –for consistency and to prevent confusion with this stacked note: 02:05:931 (8) – ok
  4. 02:08:931 (1) –Space this circle out more. Imo, it’s too close to the previous note and can be mistaken for a note that has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to. I would like to keep this
  5. 02:27:645 (5) –Add a finish on the head of this slider? ok

Collab Insane:
  1. 00:25:360 (1) –Whistle on the head of this slider.
  2. 00:40:645 (1,1,1) –I don’t see a reason to use new combos here. Please remove them.
  3. 00:46:360 (1,1,1) –Same thing here. Remove the new combos.
  4. 01:33:788 (1) –Rather not make the slider velocity so fast here suddenly. It’s quite confusing and catches the player off-guard. Rather just keep it x1.00.
  5. 01:56:217 (1) –This stack is a bit confusing and players might think this slider also has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to. So rather unstack.
  6. 02:04:645 (4,5) –This jump feels quite big and here: 01:08:360 (3,4) –you didn’t use such a big jump. I suggest making that spacing similar to this spacing: 02:04:788 (5,1) –
  7. 02:08:217 (4) –Don’t implement a slider velocity change here. Imo, it doesn’t really fit since I don’t really detect a place here where the music gets slower. So rather remove that SV change.
  8. 02:10:074 (1,2,3) –Make sure the spacing between these three notes are similar.
  9. 02:29:217 (1) –Like my previous suggestion; rather don’t make the SV so fast suddenly. It’s rather surprising. Remove that SV change.
  10. 02:38:645 (1) –Space this slider like you spaced this one: 02:38:074 (1,2) –since it has the same fast rhythm.
  11. 02:40:360 (7) –Add new combo here.
  12. 03:37:074 (2) –I really don’t like these very fast SV changes. Rather remove them since it’s quite unexpected.
  13. 03:48:717 (1) –Rather remove this fast SV change. I think there’s other places as well further in this diff. Go through the kiai time and please remove these fast SV changes since they’re not necessary in my opinion and they’re bit irritating to play imo.
  14. 03:58:645 (1,1) –Remove these two new combos to stay consistent with: 01:43:217 (1,2,3) –
  15. 04:06:788 (4) –This jump feels really big especially for such a difficult part in the map. Please reduce the spacing.
  16. 04:17:645 (6) –I think you forgot a finish on the head of this slider.

Memory:

The only thing I can say about this diff is that I really think you have to lower that slider velocity since it’s extremely fast imo and kind of ruins the SV spread.

Overall, all the diffs look really nice, except that Memory diff that just requires a SV change to make this mapset perfect.

If you change the slider velocity on the last diff then you can call me back for a recheck.
Good Luck~! :D
Thank you for mod. Anyway I still would like to keep the Memory diff's SV.. >.<

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Luxoversible, Plz >w<
hm.. we'll see ahahah xDD



Updated :)
-Nya-
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-Nya-
Heya~
Here for a recheck.
So, let's get started.

Memory:
  1. 01:50:502 (6) –Reduce the distance of this jump a bit please. It feels a bit intense to have such a big jump after a difficult stream.
  2. 03:41:788 (8) –Same thing here about that big jump. Since this slider is directly after a pretty difficult stream, I highly suggest you reduce that jump between the slider and the stream. Why not stack the head of the slider on: 03:41:217 (2) - ?
  3. 03:42:931 (8) -^. If you change the distance here, just make sure it’s similar to 03:41:788 (8) –
  4. 04:06:074 (1) –Make the jump here similar to this jump: 04:10:217 (1) –

Sorry about the SV complication. It’s totally fine~

Hard:
  1. 00:32:217 (1) –Add a whistle on the head of this slider? I think it will fit nicely.
  2. 00:33:360 (3) -^

Xinchii’s Normal:
  1. There’s a tiny kiai inconsistency in this diff. The first kiai time has to end here: 01:52:074

Easy:
  1. You still didn’t fix this: 01:54:645 (4) –Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 01:55:217 (1) –

Well, everything else looks fine.
Again, real sorry about that SV. I just wasn’t sure >.<
Call me back after you had made the necessary changes. :D
luxoDeh
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luxoDeh

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~
Here for a recheck.
So, let's get started.

Memory:
  1. 01:50:502 (6) –Reduce the distance of this jump a bit please. It feels a bit intense to have such a big jump after a difficult stream. ok, fixed
  2. 03:41:788 (8) –Same thing here about that big jump. Since this slider is directly after a pretty difficult stream, I highly suggest you reduce that jump between the slider and the stream. Why not stack the head of the slider on: 03:41:217 (2) - ? here I would like to keep the jump
  3. 03:42:931 (8) -^. If you change the distance here, just make sure it’s similar to 03:41:788 (8) – same
  4. 04:06:074 (1) –Make the jump here similar to this jump: 04:10:217 (1) –
fixed, it should be a bit better I guess >.<

Sorry about the SV complication. It’s totally fine~ ^.^

Hard:
  1. 00:32:217 (1) –Add a whistle on the head of this slider? I think it will fit nicely. okk
  2. 00:33:360 (3) -^ okk

Xinchii’s Normal:
  1. There’s a tiny kiai inconsistency in this diff. The first kiai time has to end here: 01:52:074 I fixed the inconsistence, hope it was not a problem >.<

Easy:
  1. You still didn’t fix this: 01:54:645 (4) –Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 01:55:217 (1) –
done

Well, everything else looks fine.
Again, real sorry about that SV. I just wasn’t sure >.<
Call me back after you had made the necessary changes. :D
Thank you for the recheck! and updated :D
Nathan
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-Nya-
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-Nya-
Sorry, I forgot to add that I shouldn't receive kudos again since I already modded the mapset.
Will recheck again later today~

Ok, everything looks fine~

Bubbled~
luxoDeh
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luxoDeh

-Nya- wrote:

Ok, everything looks fine~

Bubbled~
Thank you Nya!! :D :D :D
Xierra
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Xierra
It's almost time, Lux! It's my song so...
Go Lux Go! xD
meii18
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meii18
Oh no I'm late with modding insane diff ;w; sorry
neonat
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neonat
If you want to mod it, just mod it. It's not qualified yet
meii18
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meii18

neonat wrote:

If you want to mod it, just mod it. It's not qualified yet
But I'm not BN to mod bubbled maps
-Nya-
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-Nya-

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

neonat wrote:

If you want to mod it, just mod it. It's not qualified yet
But I'm not BN to mod bubbled maps
Nah, you can still mod it.
If the bubble is popped, then I can just rebubble it again~
luxoDeh
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luxoDeh
lol I asked ByBy like 2 months ago in the queue.. long time passed xD
do whathever you wants guys, I don't think a missed mod is that big deal >.<
meii18
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meii18
ok thanks -Nya- o3o

@luxoDeh : I was very busy lol
Pereira006
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Pereira006
[Easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:42:074 (3) - this isn't should be NC ? the rhyhthm is change like you did other parts
  2. 01:11:217 (3) - ^ same
[Hard]

Gameplay:

  1. 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4) - I can't approve this as Level this diff... SV change and jump is 4.00.
  2. 02:35:788 (1,2,3,4) - same happen before 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 02:44:931 (1,2,3) - ^ same
  4. 03:56:074 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Collab Insane]

  1. 00:42:645 (6) - missing add nc
  2. 00:44:931 (5) - ^ same
  3. 01:20:788 (1) - no need nc
  4. 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - no need NC a lot, I don't see SV is changing or whatever, remove NC in 01:20:788 (1) and 01:21:645 (1), I see other parts have long combo example in 02:15:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), so I dunno why you put lot NC in 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3), Put NC doesn't mean if jump or stream, is music
  5. 01:24:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ same
  6. 01:27:788 (1) - ^ same
  7. 01:56:217 (1) - ^ same
  8. 02:00:788 (1) - ^ same
  9. 04:05:217 (1) - ^ same
  10. 04:06:502 (1) - ^ same
I know this is collab but the your style show inconsistency, better recheck or I'm wrong
[]
My main problem is NCs not huge but recheck just make sure you style is consistency
soo I srly need talk some QATs and BNs I don't know that Hard have SV slow speed with jump 4.00x for me I can't really approve but I will talk some QATs and bns
Any question if you don't understand ask me
other diff's is good
call me back
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Pereira006 wrote:

[Collab Insane]

  1. 00:42:645 (6) - missing add nc k
  2. 00:44:931 (5) - ^ same k
  3. 01:20:788 (1) - no need nc needed
  4. 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - no need NC a lot, I don't see SV is changing or whatever, remove NC in 01:20:788 (1) and 01:21:645 (1), I see other parts have long combo example in 02:15:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), so I dunno why you put lot NC in 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3), Put NC doesn't mean if jump or stream, is music 01:21:360 (3) - removed that one
  5. 01:24:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ same follow vocal
  6. 01:27:788 (1) - ^ same
  7. 01:56:217 (1) - ^ same
  8. 02:00:788 (1) - ^ same
  9. 04:05:217 (1) - ^ same
  10. 04:06:502 (1) - ^ same
I know this is collab but the your style show inconsistency, better recheck or I'm wrong Well I denied most of them, since my NC follow the vocals, which i mapped patterns to. So it makes sense, it makes these pattern more outstanding.
http://puu.sh/gQede/04adbdbb75.txt
luxoDeh
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luxoDeh

Pereira006 wrote:

[Easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:42:074 (3) - this isn't should be NC ? the rhyhthm is change like you did other parts ok
  2. 01:11:217 (3) - ^ same fixed
[Hard]

Gameplay:

  1. 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4) - I can't approve this as Level this diff... SV change and jump is 4.00.
  2. 02:35:788 (1,2,3,4) - same happen before 01:40:931 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 02:44:931 (1,2,3) - ^ same
  4. 03:56:074 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Hm.. I don't know.. I say this because I played this map really a lot of time and I never had problems with these sliders. Anyway I tryed to find a way to change this but really the more I try the more I feel like these jumps fits well as they are now.. idk if you have any suggestion on how to change this I can try but like this I really don't know what to do with them :/

[Collab Insane]

  1. 00:42:645 (6) - missing add nc
  2. 00:44:931 (5) - ^ same
  3. 01:20:788 (1) - no need nc
  4. 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - no need NC a lot, I don't see SV is changing or whatever, remove NC in 01:20:788 (1) and 01:21:645 (1), I see other parts have long combo example in 02:15:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), so I dunno why you put lot NC in 01:20:788 (1,2,1,1,2,3), Put NC doesn't mean if jump or stream, is music
  5. 01:24:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ same
  6. 01:27:788 (1) - ^ same
  7. 01:56:217 (1) - ^ same
  8. 02:00:788 (1) - ^ same
  9. 04:05:217 (1) - ^ same fixed
  10. 04:06:502 (1) - ^ same fixed
I know this is collab but the your style show inconsistency, better recheck or I'm wrong
[]
My main problem is NCs not huge but recheck just make sure you style is consistency
soo I srly need talk some QATs and BNs I don't know that Hard have SV slow speed with jump 4.00x for me I can't really approve but I will talk some QATs and bns
Any question if you don't understand ask me
other diff's is good
call me back
ok, Thank you for modding :)
Updated also with irre's changes.
Anyway maybe if you can ask for the opinion of other BN or QAT for that issues it will be better.
Pereira006
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Pereira006
fix 1 slider, The repeat is touching SKin Default Score in insane
missing 1 nc in insane and add break

all look good

Qualify

Congratz
luxoDeh
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luxoDeh

Pereira006 wrote:

fix 1 slider, The repeat is touching SKin Default Score in insane
missing 1 nc in insane and add break

all look good

Qualify

Congratz
Thank you Pereira! :D
meii18
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Congratzu o3o
Xinchii
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Ohhhhhhhhh!!!

Gratz luxo!! >w<
neonat
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I guess you don't need the extra feedback lol, grats
kakifly
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!!! you're the best for mapping this!!
congrats \:DDD
luxoDeh
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Thank you! ^.^
This map was pending for too long D:

Anyway gratz also to Xinchii and Irreversible xD
Thank you for making GD/collab :3
Bladesu
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Gratz, great map!
xxdeathx
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Video still has audio?

SPOILER
General
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Audio
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__Hatsune_Miku
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Finally ranked !!!
Pereira006
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xxdeathx wrote:

Video still has audio?

SPOILER
General
Complete name                            : C:\Program Files (x86)\osu!\Songs\157617 Jin - Lost Time Memory\Lost time memory.flv
Format                                   : MPEG-4
Format profile                           : Base Media
Codec ID                                 : isom
File size                                : 14.7 MiB
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Overall bit rate mode                    : Variable
Overall bit rate                         : 434 Kbps
Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Copyright                                : SMILEVIDEO_MP4

Video
ID                                       : 1
Format                                   : AVC
Format/Info                              : Advanced Video Codec
Format profile                           : Baseline@L3.0
Format settings, CABAC                   : No
Format settings, ReFrames                : 3 frames
Codec ID                                 : avc1
Codec ID/Info                            : Advanced Video Coding
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Bit rate                                 : 365 Kbps
Maximum bit rate                         : 692 Kbps
Width                                    : 640 pixels
Height                                   : 360 pixels
Display aspect ratio                     : 16:9
Frame rate mode                          : Constant
Frame rate                               : 24.000 fps
Color space                              : YUV
Chroma subsampling                       : 4:2:0
Bit depth                                : 8 bits
Scan type                                : Progressive
Bits/(Pixel*Frame)                       : 0.066
Stream size                              : 12.3 MiB (84%)
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44

Audio
ID                                       : 2
Format                                   : AAC
Format/Info                              : Advanced Audio Codec
Format profile                           : LC
Codec ID                                 : 40
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Bit rate mode                            : Variable
Bit rate                                 : 66.2 Kbps
Maximum bit rate                         : 73.3 Kbps
Channel(s)                               : 2 channels
Channel positions                        : Front: L R
Sampling rate                            : 44.1 KHz
Compression mode                         : Lossy
Stream size                              : 2.24 MiB (15%)
Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
well miss see this, R.I.P
Illkryn
269 posts
Joined November 2012
Illkryn
fuk da audio
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

xxdeathx wrote:

Video still has audio?

SPOILER
General
Complete name                            : C:\Program Files (x86)\osu!\Songs\157617 Jin - Lost Time Memory\Lost time memory.flv
Format                                   : MPEG-4
Format profile                           : Base Media
Codec ID                                 : isom
File size                                : 14.7 MiB
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Overall bit rate mode                    : Variable
Overall bit rate                         : 434 Kbps
Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Copyright                                : SMILEVIDEO_MP4

Video
ID                                       : 1
Format                                   : AVC
Format/Info                              : Advanced Video Codec
Format profile                           : Baseline@L3.0
Format settings, CABAC                   : No
Format settings, ReFrames                : 3 frames
Codec ID                                 : avc1
Codec ID/Info                            : Advanced Video Coding
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Bit rate                                 : 365 Kbps
Maximum bit rate                         : 692 Kbps
Width                                    : 640 pixels
Height                                   : 360 pixels
Display aspect ratio                     : 16:9
Frame rate mode                          : Constant
Frame rate                               : 24.000 fps
Color space                              : YUV
Chroma subsampling                       : 4:2:0
Bit depth                                : 8 bits
Scan type                                : Progressive
Bits/(Pixel*Frame)                       : 0.066
Stream size                              : 12.3 MiB (84%)
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44

Audio
ID                                       : 2
Format                                   : AAC
Format/Info                              : Advanced Audio Codec
Format profile                           : LC
Codec ID                                 : 40
Duration                                 : 4mn 43s
Bit rate mode                            : Variable
Bit rate                                 : 66.2 Kbps
Maximum bit rate                         : 73.3 Kbps
Channel(s)                               : 2 channels
Channel positions                        : Front: L R
Sampling rate                            : 44.1 KHz
Compression mode                         : Lossy
Stream size                              : 2.24 MiB (15%)
Encoded date                             : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
Tagged date                              : UTC 2013-03-28 17:22:44
............. so?
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,913 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
that's unrankable
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Okoratu wrote:

that's unrankable
I know. I mean.. if we really have to do the unrank because of that better do it now and remedy as fast as possible :(
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
But i see is fine not trouble~
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
I redownloaded this map and the video have audio ;w;

RIP ;______;
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

I redownloaded this map and the video have audio ;w;

RIP ;______;
yes. it's going to unrank very soon. I already talked to QAT.
I would like to make it as painless as possible :(

if someone can help me to get the video without audio it would be reeeally apreciated :?
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18

luxoDeh wrote:

yes. it's going to unrank very soon. I already talked to QAT.
I would like to make it as painless as possible :(

if someone can help me to get the video without audio it would be reeeally apreciated :?
Use Avidemux for this I guess
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