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Xinchii

Prayer wrote:

Hey luxoDeh~ here's my m4m

leon's Normal

  1. 00:18:074 (3) - i can't hear any sound at 00:18:360 , though i can hear at 00:18:502. make the slider ends at 00:18:502
  2. 00:20:931 (5) - NC
  3. 00:27:788 (5) - ^
  4. 00:31:788 (4) - ^
  5. 00:40:360 (3,1) - stack
  6. 00:42:645 (3,1) - ^
  7. 01:12:360 (3,4,5) - make a little rounder
  8. 01:36:360 (4) - NC
  9. 01:45:502 (4) - ^
  10. 02:17:360 (1,2) - better blanket
  11. 02:31:217 (4) - NC
  12. 02:40:360 (4) - ^
  13. 03:51:502 (4) - ^
  14. 04:00:645 (4) - ^
  15. 04:24:074 (6) - ^

All fixed ~~

Thanks your mod ~~
:)

Nice map~ i hope these would be helpful. Good luck!
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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Title:Lost Time Memory
TitleUnicode:ロスタイムメモリー
Artist:Jin
ArtistUnicode:じん
Creator:luxoDeh
Version:leon's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kagerou Project days vocaloid IA Mekaku City Records 自然の敵P Shizen no Teki Shizu しづ leon1341414
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256,328,126074,6,0,B|288:304|292:272|292:272|320:260|324:212|408:220,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,208,126931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,56,147645,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,236,148931,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,152,158931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,340,161217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,164931,12,4,167074,0:0:0:0:
256,136,167502,5,8,0:0:0:0:
212,228,167788,2,0,P|256:244|304:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,168360,2,0,L|408:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,316,168931,2,0,L|460:316,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,169788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,308,170074,6,0,L|64:280,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,170645,2,0,L|188:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,112,171217,2,0,L|100:84,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,172074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,112,172360,6,0,L|412:84,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,180,172931,2,0,L|324:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,174360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,228,174645,6,0,B|156:216|136:212|136:212|100:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,176,175217,2,0,L|116:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,175788,2,0,B|256:68|256:68|308:80,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,176645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,228,176931,6,0,B|356:216|376:212|376:212|412:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,176,177503,2,0,L|396:80,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,168,178931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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120,356,179788,2,0,L|212:300,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,304,180360,2,0,L|392:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,262,180931,2,0,L|344:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,181502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,181788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,48,182074,6,0,B|132:44|132:44|128:84|104:112,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,182645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,264,182931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183217,12,4,185502,0:0:0:0:
207,161,217502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
307,161,217788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,69,218074,2,0,P|391:105|411:149,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,237,218645,2,0,B|391:257|391:257|431:257|455:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,161,219502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,245,219788,6,0,L|255:349,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,161,220645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,237,220931,2,0,B|121:257|121:257|81:257|57:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,221788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,72,222074,6,0,B|224:80|240:24|268:32|268:32|288:80|352:84,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,222931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,160,223217,2,0,P|451:254|360:282,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,224074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,96,229217,6,0,P|208:104|172:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,76,229788,2,0,P|72:116|79:172,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,108,233788,6,0,P|304:156|324:204,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,234360,2,0,L|284:332,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,234788,2,0,B|168:332|168:332|148:304|96:296|104:232,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,236074,6,0,B|216:240|216:240|220:220|200:192|224:164,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,236931,2,0,B|375:100|375:100|372:120|392:148|368:176,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,316,237788,2,0,P|460:292|488:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,238360,6,0,L|292:216,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,238931,2,0,L|148:128,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,239360,2,0,P|44:172|64:272,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,240645,6,0,L|248:64,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,241217,2,0,L|388:156,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,132,241645,2,0,P|488:224|464:316,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,242931,6,0,B|372:208|372:208|332:240,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,243502,2,0,B|200:252|200:252|184:304,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,243931,2,0,B|108:220|108:220|132:124,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,245217,6,0,B|232:352|264:312|264:312|312:340,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,246074,2,0,B|296:156|296:156|288:108,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,247217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,337,247502,6,0,L|216:280,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,248074,2,0,L|64:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,256074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256502,12,4,258931,0:0:0:0:
256,140,259360,6,0,L|256:292,2,150,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,68,260502,2,0,P|256:40|184:72,2,150,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,261502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,88,261788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,336,263217,2,0,P|196:252|252:176,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,264074,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,108,264360,2,0,P|104:184|96:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,336,265502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,267788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
luxoDeh
updated :)
RatonBV
What can I say, i love it.
I wanna se this approved! ^^
I'll suggest, to change the hitsounds for something softer so you can keep the beat. =)
Anyways, it's amazing. :)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

RatonBV wrote:

What can I say, i love it.
I wanna se this approved! ^^
I'll suggest, to change the hitsounds for something softer so you can keep the beat. =)
Anyways, it's amazing. :)
Thank you very much! I'll try to keep working on this map... I really want to rank it >.<
-Tochi
Insane Mod:

01:59:360 (1) - Put it at the end of this 01:59:502 (2) - slider
04:10:217 (7) - New combo.
04:16:074 (4) - Press CTRL + SHIFT + R, and rotate it -60 degrees.

End Comment:

Wow! Nice map, the mapping style fits this song so much! GOOD JOB!!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Otaku-kun123 wrote:

Insane Mod:

01:59:360 (1) - Put it at the end of this 01:59:502 (2) - slider no
04:10:217 (7) - New combo. yes
04:16:074 (4) - Press CTRL + SHIFT + R, and rotate it -60 degrees. yes

End Comment:

Wow! Nice map, the mapping style fits this song so much! GOOD JOB!!
Thank you! :)
RandF
From my queue~
no kds please (because rechecking~)

[Easy]
  1. 01:09:788 (2) - start at 01:10:074
  2. 01:46:074- finish?
  3. 01:55:788 (2,1) - not good flow
  4. 02:55:217 (2) - end at 02:55:788. it is better to follow vocal
[Hard]
  1. 02:41:645- remove clap
[Insane]
  1. 02:20:217 (3,1) - check blanketting
  2. 02:38:074 (1,3) - ^
  3. 03:53:788 (2,3,4) - ^
[leon's Normal]
  1. 00:23:217 (1,3) - you can blanket more correctly
  2. 00:43:788 (1) - x:157 y:198 (ctack correctly)
good job for continuing to try :)
~☆
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
no kds please (because rechecking~)

[Easy]
  1. 01:09:788 (2) - start at 01:10:074
  2. 01:46:074- finish? no
  3. 01:55:788 (2,1) - not good flow
  4. 02:55:217 (2) - end at 02:55:788. it is better to follow vocal
[Hard]
  1. 02:41:645- remove clap
[Insane]
  1. 02:20:217 (3,1) - check blanketting
  2. 02:38:074 (1,3) - ^
  3. 03:53:788 (2,3,4) - ^
good job for continuing to try :)
~☆
~Good Luck~
hey thank you for the recheck :) all fixed exept that in red
(you sure don't want kds? D:)
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:31:788 (2,3,4,1) - perfect this arc, like completely overlap 3 with the slider and give a better curve composing
  2. 00:32:931 (2,3,4,1) - some kind of same above
  3. 01:21:788 (2) - ctrl+g
  4. 01:22:502 (1,3) - this arrow's be overlapped imo... maybe move to 202.4 or some where like that with ur organizations to avoid this
  5. 01:27:074 (1) - why not try ctrl+g this as those anti-jumps patttern's continue
  6. 02:37:788 (3) - try ctrl+g this to make anti-flow with 02:38:074 (1) - to enphasis the heavy beat here
  7. 02:44:931 (1,5) - lol, just stack, and move 6 a bit to keep ds
  8. 02:51:502 (5,1) - avoid this overlap
  9. 03:58:360 (2,3) - ^, or overlap a bit more
  10. 04:15:360 (2) - ctrl+g, that guitar's beat's just hot
  11. 03:48:931 (1) - idk why u don't set nc at the white long lines from here, normal nc settings' more fit to ur rhythm stuffs imo
  12. well, really originally map and good design, 2 stars to u

Hard

  1. 00:37:788 (3,1) - stack? (nazi
  2. 02:24:217 (1,3) - i have to say this arrow's be overlapped as well, try considering the same suggesion in insane's mod above
  3. 02:26:074 (6,1) - why not blanket here?
  4. 02:27:502 (4,5) - here as well
  5. 04:15:360 (5,6) - ^
  6. i care about that mapset spread a bit hhh

leon's Normal

  1. 00:18:074 (3,1) - blanket?
  2. 02:17:360 (1,2) - perfect this blanket
  3. that break time's too long imo, just give some objs to beat lol
  4. overall fine

Easy

  1. 00:32:931 (2,1) - lol, actually u can exactly do blanket here with both ds snapped and symm composing kept, try that
  2. others r fine
tbh ur insane map should be called as "extra" indeed, and some of patterns can be given a lot better stuffs with feelings and emotions from this song, like ds changing or tracks' shifting in rhythms. i can say ur insane diff is good, but not good enough

thou, it can be ranked now imo, but still remember, u can do better, really

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods, bats may come and mod this later

good luck
Pereira006
hello~~~~

IMO = my opinion
! = Very important

[Insane]

Hitsound:


  • 01:39:645 (1) - Missing add finish in start slider !
    01:44:217 (4) - ^ same !
    02:39:074 (1) - ^ same !
    02:41:931 (3) - ^ same !
    02:41:360 (1) - ^ same !
    02:43:645 (1) - ^ same !
    02:55:645 (5) - end slider, the finish not look good for this music, could remove and add whistle !
    03:48:931 (1) - the clap in end slider noot look good for this music IMO
    03:52:502 (2) - missing add finish in start slider !

Gameplay:


  • 02:36:645 (3,1,2,3) - inconsistency combo color, this http://puu.sh/b7tE6/f52a08c66f.jpg like you did before in 01:41:788 (1,2,1,2) !
    03:58:074 (1,2) - remove new combo in (1) and put new combo in (2) !
    04:20:931 (1,1) - I don't get it this new combo... is not sense, do better re-combo colo in 04:20:931 (1,1,2,3) !

[Hard]

Hitsound:


  • 02:29:217 (2) - remove finish and add clap in end slider !
    02:29:217 (2,3,4) - this part hitsound is inconsistency hitsound, not same other pattern !
    02:39:074 (4) - missing add finish in start slider !

Gameplay:


  • 00:03:645 (3,5) - u sure this is fine? too hard read for me IMO
    02:13:931 (4,7) - too hard read IMO
    02:28:074 (6) - can you put new combo color? because the drum is change is make me sense a lot !
    03:14:360 (1) - there no sense new combo color... remove new combo, is better !


[leon's Normal]

leon is Xinchii?
this could change name diff, if you change, maybe leon could add in tag IMO

Hitsound:


  • 01:01:645 (4) - missing add clap and remove whistle like you did pattern example here 01:06:217 (5) !
    01:56:502 (4) - ^ same !
    02:05:645 (4) - ^ same !

Gameplay:

perfect for me

[Easy]

Hitsound:


  • 01:38:645 (1) - in body slider, I can hear song like ZZZZ, this part made me ruin, try more timing like you did in 01:34:074 (1) !
    02:38:074 (1) - missing add finish in end slider !
    03:54:645 (2) - ^ same !

Gameplay:


  • look good

[]
I like you mapping, lot funny, but you missing lot hisound pattern and inconsistency
Any question, ask me
Best good luck
Xinchii

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

leon's Normal

  1. 00:18:074 (3,1) - blanket?
  2. 02:17:360 (1,2) - perfect this blanket
  3. that break time's too long imo, just give some objs to beat lol
  4. overall fine

Fixed all ~
Thanks your mod ~
:)

good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~~~

IMO = my opinion
! = Very important
New change name , so yes diff name will be change too xD

[leon's Normal]

leon is Xinchii?
this could change name diff, if you change, maybe leon could add in tag IMO

Hitsound:


  • 01:01:645 (4) - missing add clap and remove whistle like you did pattern example here 01:06:217 (5) !
    01:56:502 (4) - ^ same !
    02:05:645 (4) - ^ same !

All fixed ~~
Thanks your mod ~


Gameplay:

perfect for me
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: IA - Lost Time Memory.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93931
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 75645,130502,185502,277288
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Lost Time Memory
TitleUnicode:ロスタイムメモリー
Artist:Jin
ArtistUnicode:じん
Creator:luxoDeh
Version:Xinchii's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kagerou Project days vocaloid IA Mekaku City Records 自然の敵P Shizen no Teki Shizu しづ leon1341414
BeatmapID:393496
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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2,208560,216302
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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@luxoDeh:
Because I have change my username in these days
so I change my diff name into "Xinchii's Normal" xD

and plz add my new user name in tag when update ~
Thanks ~ :D
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:31:788 (2,3,4,1) - perfect this arc, like completely overlap 3 with the slider and give a better curve composing ok, tryed
  2. 00:32:931 (2,3,4,1) - some kind of same above ok
  3. 01:21:788 (2) - ctrl+g ok
  4. 01:22:502 (1,3) - this arrow's be overlapped imo... maybe move to 202.4 or some where like that with ur organizations to avoid this tryed something
  5. 01:27:074 (1) - why not try ctrl+g this as those anti-jumps patttern's continue ok
  6. 02:37:788 (3) - try ctrl+g this to make anti-flow with 02:38:074 (1) - to enphasis the heavy beat here ok
  7. 02:44:931 (1,5) - lol, just stack, and move 6 a bit to keep ds ok
  8. 02:51:502 (5,1) - avoid this overlap fixed
  9. 03:58:360 (2,3) - ^, or overlap a bit more can't because I can't breack these blanckets
  10. 04:15:360 (2) - ctrl+g, that guitar's beat's just hot ok
  11. 03:48:931 (1) - idk why u don't set nc at the white long lines from here, normal nc settings' more fit to ur rhythm stuffs imo hm... nc is always on big white line, what's the problem? O.o
  12. well, really originally map and good design, 2 stars to u :3

Hard

  1. 00:37:788 (3,1) - stack? (nazi nah, no need of it xD
  2. 02:24:217 (1,3) - i have to say this arrow's be overlapped as well, try considering the same suggesion in insane's mod above tryed, but I hope the jump is not too much
  3. 02:26:074 (6,1) - why not blanket here? ok
  4. 02:27:502 (4,5) - here as well ok
  5. 04:15:360 (5,6) - ^ ok
  6. i care about that mapset spread a bit hhh

Easy

  1. 00:32:931 (2,1) - lol, actually u can exactly do blanket here with both ds snapped and symm composing kept, try that tryed something..
  2. others r fine
tbh ur insane map should be called as "extra" indeed, and some of patterns can be given a lot better stuffs with feelings and emotions from this song, like ds changing or tracks' shifting in rhythms. i can say ur insane diff is good, but not good enough hm.. I'll think about calling it as an extra diff, anyway I'll wait for a BAT opinion also >.< hope to make it better :3

thou, it can be ranked now imo, but still remember, u can do better, really

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods, bats may come and mod this later

good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~~~

IMO = my opinion
! = Very important

[Insane]

Hitsound:


  • 01:39:645 (1) - Missing add finish in start slider !
    01:44:217 (4) - ^ same !
    02:39:074 (1) - ^ same !
    02:41:931 (3) - ^ same !
    02:41:360 (1) - ^ same !
    02:43:645 (1) - ^ same !
    02:55:645 (5) - end slider, the finish not look good for this music, could remove and add whistle !
    03:48:931 (1) - the clap in end slider noot look good for this music IMO
    03:52:502 (2) - missing add finish in start slider ! all fixed


Gameplay:


  • 02:36:645 (3,1,2,3) - inconsistency combo color, this http://puu.sh/b7tE6/f52a08c66f.jpg like you did before in 01:41:788 (1,2,1,2) ! ok
    03:58:074 (1,2) - remove new combo in (1) and put new combo in (2) ! ok
    04:20:931 (1,1) - I don't get it this new combo... is not sense, do better re-combo colo in 04:20:931 (1,1,2,3) ! tryed something

[Hard]

Hitsound:


  • 02:29:217 (2) - remove finish and add clap in end slider !
    02:29:217 (2,3,4) - this part hitsound is inconsistency hitsound, not same other pattern !
    02:39:074 (4) - missing add finish in start slider ! all fixed

Gameplay:


  • 00:03:645 (3,5) - u sure this is fine? too hard read for me IMO no, this is ok
    02:13:931 (4,7) - too hard read IMO this can be hard but I don't know where else to place it :/
    02:28:074 (6) - can you put new combo color? because the drum is change is make me sense a lot ! ok
    03:14:360 (1) - there no sense new combo color... remove new combo, is better ! ok


[Easy]

Hitsound:


  • 01:38:645 (1) - in body slider, I can hear song like ZZZZ, this part made me ruin, try more timing like you did in 01:34:074 (1) ! hm... I don't really understand it seem ok to me O.o
    02:38:074 (1) - missing add finish in end slider ! ok
    03:54:645 (2) - ^ same ! ok

Gameplay:


  • look good

[]
I like you mapping, lot funny, but you missing lot hisound pattern and inconsistency
Any question, ask me
Best good luck
Thanks for mod! Updated :)
oh, I left leon1341414 in the tags.. don't know if is ok, maybe a BAT will tell O.o
namuni1212
카게프로!!
Depth Low
Hey i love this beatmap, Xinchii's Normal has the quick switch sometimes that is really enjoyable. But when is this beatmap going Ranked??
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Depth Low wrote:

Hey i love this beatmap, Xinchii's Normal has the quick switch sometimes that is really enjoyable. But when is this beatmap going Ranked??
I'm waiting for a couple of GDffs to arrive. without them the diff spread will be too high and the map not ready for rank >.<
I know.. I would like it to be fast too..
Depth Low

luxoDeh wrote:

Depth Low wrote:

Hey i love this beatmap, Xinchii's Normal has the quick switch sometimes that is really enjoyable. But when is this beatmap going Ranked??
I'm waiting for a couple of GDffs to arrive. without them the diff spread will be too high and the map not ready for rank >.<
I know.. I would like it to be fast too..
As you can see, this i my second post ever on the forum so i'm no familiar with the words like: GDFF. could you explain it to me please?
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
oh xD it's just guest difficoult :)
Josefumi
Here is my mod:

Hard:

Change the name to 'Insane Overlapping'









Don't take serious this post pls
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Ferna52 wrote:

Here is my mod:

Hard:

Change the name to 'Insane Overlapping'









Don't take serious this post pls
..lol I like overlaps u.u
Hoo
How is this not ranked? ;~; -Facedesk-
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Hooriya wrote:

How is this not ranked? ;~; -Facedesk-
I'm working on it >.<
AmuletSpade
GREAT !!
Nathan
Hi from modding queue~

[Insane Collab]
  1. 01:16:645 (4) - Should be moved up, 01:16:645 (4,5) the spacing between these is weird compared to 01:16:074 (2,3) since the line of the vocals you're mapping to (shine yo, shine yo or w/e it sounds like) is repeated twice with no difference in between them
  2. 01:41:360 (2,3,4) - Add NC's here since they were added here 02:35:788 (1,1,1,1,1)
  3. 01:50:502 (2) - The slider end feels empty, try extending it to the blue tick and adding a finish at the tail to match the vocals like in 01:50:074 (1,2)
  4. 02:07:074 (5) - This 1/4 slider feels kind of forced and plays a bit awkwardly, just change to 2 circles?
  5. 02:57:074 (4,5) - Don't see the point of this jump, make 02:56:931 (3,4,5,6) a square?
  6. 03:41:645 (3,4) - Distance between these really shouldn't be that long, ctrl+g on 03:41:788 (4)
  7. 04:31:288 (1) - Is this spinner really needed? ._. HR players will hate this since the increased HP drain with a long spinner forces them to spin like 410~ to survive. PLEEEASE consider this on your Memory difficulty since the drain is even higher. Change the hp drain to what it would be with HR and test it.
Other than that pretty good map owo
Xinchii
Gogo \:D/
Tsumetaku
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Stacks of waiting ;u;
[Dominic]
Hello! this is the the M4M request i sent on you mod queue!

Please note that all of the mods i make are suggestions and nothing more than that. please do not feel the need to change anything or everything that i mention.
Please respond to my mods. the feedback helps me get better at modding.


Collab
  1. 00:46:074 (1,1,1,1) - i don't think the new combos are necessary here. they worked better in instances like this one. 02:35:788 (1,1,1,1,1,1) where the vocals could match better to the map.
  2. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  3. 00:03:788 (4,5,6) - overlap looked unappealing in comparison to the first 30 seconds of the map.
  4. 00:25:360 (1,2) - ^
  5. other than that, i thought your map was tasteful and well made. :)
Memory
  1. I played through this difficulty 4 full times, and it felt like any other ranked map i've played of this difficulty. don't get me wrong, i enjoyed it and thought of it to be unique. the patterns were mostly different from each other and at no time did i feel like it was boring or feel like i've played a map similar to this.
    Great job! :)
Hard
  1. 02:56:074 (7,1) - unnecessary overlap.
  2. i looked really hard for about 30 minutes and played the map through many times, but couldn't find any issues. looks great to me. i asked myself at some point, "why isnt this ranked?"
    anyway, looks great. :)
Xinxhii's Normal
  1. looks good to me. i only questioned why this one slider is almost straight, but its not. 02:21:931 (1) all the other sliders have fun curves and this one is just sad and droopy looking in comparison. not a problem, just though i would mention that.
    great map :)
Easy
  1. 03:46:645 - i thought it would be beneficial to add a break here for the easy.
    otherwise, blankets look good, hit sounds sounded great, patters looked nice. not much else to say. it's well done. :)
Thats it for my mods. all the maps looked great. hope this gets ranked soon! best of luck!
Milan-
hi m4m! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262403 plz why do u need more mods anyways?lol it looks good:3

[General]
  1. I really think you missed a timming reset at 03:49:217 - . Because, you can clearly hear the snares on the 1st and 3rd tick, which is wrong, they should be on the 2nd and 4th tick. In addition, the cymbals are on the 2nd tick.. Yea, you missed it. (Recheck your NCs cuz of it too.)
  2. Also, you may need to recheck the timming on this section 03:14:360 - . Im not good at timming, but i hear the guitar quite off.. dunno
  3. Im not very used to hitsounds yet, but soft-hitnormal is quite distracting. I'd suggest to lower the volumen of it a bit. You can't really hear the claps cuz of it for instance.
  4. It's a bit weird that all the map is at 70% volumen all the time.. Kiai has much more hype that the rest of map for example. (Xinchii did this xD)
  5. 04:31:288 (1) - I think this spinner should end on 1/8 (04:37:324 - ). Noone actually did it ;w;
  6. Also, change the spinner sample to "S" instead of "S:C1". because of your soft hit normal. (you did it on collab)
  7. Rename collab to "collab insane"? Cuz, rulesssss.

[Memory]
  1. It'd feel a lot better if you had used a lower SV for the intro. As ur mapping focus a lot on vocals, x0.75 or similar can be better imo.
  2. 00:34:360 (3) - ctrl+g? It's bit weird that the distance between 1/1 is shorter than 1/2 distance, if you get what i mean.
  3. 00:48:360 (8) - add NC?
  4. 01:13:931 - this space feels really weird imo cuz the guitar never stop, u can hear a really soft vocal until this point and u dont follow percussions at all, so... i'd make (2) a 1/2 slider for instance
  5. 01:32:788 (1) - uhm what about finish this 1/2 earlier to cover the drums, something like this > http://puu.sh/fumxH/3230ccf93d.jpg
  6. 01:48:074 (2,1) - This flow is pretty.. meh. It also kinda destroy your roundness. I dunno what to suggest xD ctrl J on 01:48:788 (1) - maybe?
  7. 01:50:788 (10,11) - better use a higher spacing between these notes. Otherwise, it looks like a full stream and stuff.
  8. uhm 01:51:288 (1,2,3) - 01:50:145 (2) - 01:50:574 (7) - these sound like overmap to me ;w; the drums sound more like http://puu.sh/fuqth/414e6cfa02.jpg , but i cant really hear clearly. vocals too strongasdf
  9. 03:05:502 (9) - add NC? keep in mind that a long spinner after a long stream makes the HP something to be worry about ;w;. So, a nc can help i guess.
  10. 03:15:788 (1) - end it 1/2 early? vocal actually ends at 03:16:074 - imo (and piano too)
  11. 03:18:645 (2) - this and 03:22:074 (2) - are the only two notes that dont really follow vocals on this section.. any reason behind this? (also i think the timming on this section changes xd the most noticiable spot is 03:18:645 (2) - where guitar is off, but im not good with that, so i dunno)
  12. 03:37:217 (1) - maybe here u can use the same rhythm as 03:48:931 (1) - . Start from the guitar. Feels much better
  13. 03:43:502 (2,5,6) - it plays bad imo cuz, you keep these on the same line which is weird>< try moving this around

    Hitsounds
  14. 00:12:360 (3) - cancel whistle. otherwise, add on similar spots like 00:19:217 - etc
  15. 00:27:645 (1) - the whistle should be on tail instead, to keep ur constancy.
  16. I think that in this secton you could add more whitles, right now it's quite bland. In addition, the sound you try to hisound isnt actually mapped at several parts.
  17. 00:38:217 (1) - drum clap on tail. it's the same sound as 00:38:645 (4) - head.
  18. 00:39:217 (1) - maybe normal finish instead? It's a stronger cymbal than others imo.
  19. 00:47:217 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part get faster and stronger. So clap on every white tick fits nicely, i mean add claps to 00:47:217 (6,4) - . (you can hear the snares too >.>)
  20. 00:48:074 (7) - there's actually a cymbal here, better add finish too on head
  21. 01:01:074 (2,3,4) - the actual snare is on (2) so there should be a clap instead of (4).
  22. 01:01:360 (5) - uhm here should be a finish on repeat and clap on tail..
  23. 01:02:360 (2) - a finish on head also feels cool too, as u can hear a clear cymbal
  24. 01:05:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part is badly hitsounded imo >< 01:05:502 (1) - clap and finish on tail; 01:05:788 (3) - cancel this clap; 01:05:931 (5) - finish on head and tail(or clap, im not sure tbh xd); 01:06:360 (7,9) - swap these claps
  25. 01:10:502 (6) - finish on tail too(?
  26. 01:10:931 (7) - clap should be on tail instead of head
  27. 01:14:645 (5) - add clap here and 01:15:217 (3) - head. The music gets intense here. (Some finishes may also work at some spots)
  28. 01:33:788 - add finish here too
  29. 01:41:360 (2) - 01:41:788 (1) - clap on tail
  30. 01:44:217 (4) - tail; 01:50:074 (1) - ;01:50:502 (6) - ; 01:50:931 (11) - head: add finishes(?
  31. 01:55:931 (1) - finish+clap here instead of 01:56:074 (3) -
  32. 01:56:217 (5,6) - finish on heads and clap on (6)'s tail.
  33. well, this section's rhythms are the same as before.. so yea check the hitsounds again here too
  34. 02:55:217 (3) - finish?
  35. 02:55:645 (7) - finish on tail (why whistle anyways?)
  36. 03:03:074 (1) - the actual finish is at 03:03:217 - uhm maybe change the rhythm to cover it?
  37. 03:04:931 (1,5) - these should be drum clap as 00:38:217 (1,4) -
  38. 03:05:574 (1) - i think that a whistle fits better than a finish, cuz it's just piano and not percussion playing><
  39. 03:19:217 (1) - ^
  40. 03:44:360 (1) - clap on tail and head(finish may work too)
  41. 03:44:788 (1,2) - 03:45:360 (2) - 03:45:645 (1) - 03:46:074 (1,2) - more claps
  42. 03:44:645 (2) - cancel clap, as there's no snare here.
  43. 03:48:931 (1) - finish on tail, not on head.
  44. 04:05:217 (2) - add finish><
  45. 04:10:645 (1) - add finish on head? sound cool too. 04:19:788 (1) - here too. 04:19:931 (2) - tail
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:502 (7,1) - reconsider this huge jump pls. This is still a slow part and also it's a bit hard to read cuz the space between 00:02:645 (1,2) - (00:04:645 (6,1) - but this one plays fine tho i guess)
  2. 00:07:074 (1,2) - this rhythm doesnt really follow anything. Better ctrl+g the rhythm, or use other to cover piano and vocals correctly.
  3. 00:31:074 (1) - cancel NC cuz constancy
  4. 00:33:360 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:35:217 (1) - ^
  6. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  7. 00:46:360 (1,1,1) -
  8. Uh, better recheck the whole diff's NCs and make it more constant. xd
  9. 00:47:788 (6) - maybe change this to 2 circles instead. to fit better the guitar.
  10. 01:06:645 (1,2) - It's weird that you use 1/1 slider for a 1/2 rhythm and a 1/2 slider for a 1/1 rhythm... Unless, you intended it to be 3/4 like 01:11:217 (1,2) - , i guess.
  11. 01:16:645 (4) - move it to x313 y221? cuz copy paste is cool
  12. 01:17:645 (9,1) - use triple instead? missing the clap is very disorienting in this case ><
  13. 01:29:360 (1) - stack on 01:28:217 (4) - tail to make a square(?
  14. 01:40:645 (4,1) - better use a shorter distance? cuz the slider is quite slow and it's a bit hard to know after a big jump, i think.
  15. 01:50:074 (1,2) - shoulnt these use a lower SV? cuz it's basically the same rhythm as 01:40:931 (1,1) -
  16. 02:03:788 (1,2) - any reason to use that low DS? Better use 0.7(? to keep constant
  17. 02:16:217 (5,6,7) - silence the sliders ends? those ends on nothing... so, the soft hit normal makes hitsounds sound terrible. (well it happens on almost every extended slider you use i guess, but here it sounds very bad ><)
  18. 02:33:217 (5) - it'd be cool if the slider end isn't actually cover by 02:32:788 (3) - . Otherwise.. it's bad..
  19. 02:44:574 (2,3) - tbh, using default skin, it's very hard to know that there's a stack here. better unstack these, atleast.
  20. 03:05:502 - I forgot to say on the hitsound mod, that it'd be cool if you change the sample to default soft here. So it just sounds the finish and not your custom hitnormal.
  21. 03:15:217 (2,3) - these should be stack (or moved more apart). Because, how you mapped this song. Refer to 00:31:074 (1,2) - 00:42:645 (6,7) - 00:45:360 (8,9) - etc
  22. such SVs changes xD
[Hard]
  • You may want to use slidertick for this diff, you miss a lots of claps and makes the hitsounds... bad.
  1. AR 8 - OD 5.. lol You could increase most of the setting by 1 on almost most of the diffs to make it more challenging. See what you can do. Extra OD 7 is pretty lame tbh
  2. 00:23:788 (2,3) - this rhythm is pretty poor imo. If you want a pause that badly, what about this maybe? http://puu.sh/fxde3/f7eae7f063.jpg
  3. 02:28:074 (1) - cancel nc? constancy
  4. 03:17:788 (4) - extend it by 1/2? to fit the background noise and vocals doesnt sound that bad either
  5. 03:46:645 - add a break here?xd the previous part is quite hard, so the hp may be problematic for some players ;w;
  6. I hope you dont have "spreed issues" later on orz.
[Normal]
  1. Such waves xD. There are some that worry me a bit cuz they are hard to read, like 00:00:360 (1) - 00:23:217 (1) - 01:11:217 (1) - 02:31:217 (1) - 03:02:074 (1) -
  2. 00:36:931 (1,1) - i believe this is unrankable orz. These should be around 3 white ticks apart cuz the bpm is quite high. Better map this part out or leave it on blank
  3. 01:50:074 (1,1) - ^
  4. 02:44:931 (1,1) - ^
  5. 04:16:502 (1,1) - ^
  6. 01:30:503 (1) - cancel NC? constancy. also on 01:32:788 (1) - . same goes for 02:24:217 (1,1,1,1) - .
  7. 02:34:074 (2,3) - better not overlap these on that way><. It's hard for newbiessss to read the repeat
  8. 03:01:502 (5,1) - switch NC cuz constancy on how u nc'd this section.
  9. 03:46:502 - finish instead of whistle fits better imo
  10. 04:29:074 - add a note here? to map the cymbal out.
[Ez]
  1. 00:42:645 (4) - ctrl+g ... cuz you messed up xd
  2. Maybe NC every 4 stanza? right now your combos are too short imo
  3. add some whitles to the intro plz ;w,
  4. 00:36:931 (1,1) - avoid this to keep the map clean(?
  5. Your use of the slider tick isnt really constant imo. You miss a lot of claps. Is it on purpuse?:o
  6. 01:50:217 (1,1) - this is now unrankable i think ;w; these should be like 4 white ticks apart or something.
  7. 02:27:788 (1,1) - ^
Some stuffs may repeat twice or so (specially kaia stuff). 2lzy 2write twice

btw change your bg resolution to 1366x7something if possible
I fear a diff gap between Normal and Hard.. orz
Gl <3
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

[Dominic] wrote:

Hello! this is the the M4M request i sent on you mod queue!

Please note that all of the mods i make are suggestions and nothing more than that. please do not feel the need to change anything or everything that i mention.
Please respond to my mods. the feedback helps me get better at modding.


Collab
  1. 00:46:074 (1,1,1,1) - i don't think the new combos are necessary here. they worked better in instances like this one. 02:35:788 (1,1,1,1,1,1) where the vocals could match better to the map.
  2. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  3. 00:03:788 (4,5,6) - overlap looked unappealing in comparison to the first 30 seconds of the map. no, it's ok
  4. 00:25:360 (1,2) - ^ ^
  5. other than that, i thought your map was tasteful and well made. :)
Memory
  1. I played through this difficulty 4 full times, and it felt like any other ranked map i've played of this difficulty. don't get me wrong, i enjoyed it and thought of it to be unique. the patterns were mostly different from each other and at no time did i feel like it was boring or feel like i've played a map similar to this.
    Great job! :)
Thank you I needed a testplay for this diff ^.^

Hard
  1. 02:56:074 (7,1) - unnecessary overlap. not fixed
  2. i looked really hard for about 30 minutes and played the map through many times, but couldn't find any issues. looks great to me. i asked myself at some point, "why isnt this ranked?" hopefully soon >.<
    anyway, looks great. :)
Easy
  1. 03:46:645 - i thought it would be beneficial to add a break here for the easy. ok
    otherwise, blankets look good, hit sounds sounded great, patters looked nice. not much else to say. it's well done. :)
Thats it for my mods. all the maps looked great. hope this gets ranked soon! best of luck!

Milan- wrote:

hi m4m! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262403 plz why do u need more mods anyways?lol it looks good:3 lol need mods because added collab diff lol :3

[General]
  1. I really think you missed a timming reset at 03:49:217 - . Because, you can clearly hear the snares on the 1st and 3rd tick, which is wrong, they should be on the 2nd and 4th tick. In addition, the cymbals are on the 2nd tick.. Yea, you missed it. (Recheck your NCs cuz of it too.) yes, added in all diffs
  2. Also, you may need to recheck the timming on this section 03:14:360 - . Im not good at timming, but i hear the guitar quite off.. dunno hm... I feel ok, but.. who knows O.o
  3. Im not very used to hitsounds yet, but soft-hitnormal is quite distracting. I'd suggest to lower the volumen of it a bit. You can't really hear the claps cuz of it for instance. I still need to find some better hitnormal maybe.. this issue will be fixed soon
  4. It's a bit weird that all the map is at 70% volumen all the time.. Kiai has much more hype that the rest of map for example. (Xinchii did this xD) (no he didn't lol) anyway when I find a better hitnormal I'll fix this
  5. 04:31:288 (1) - I think this spinner should end on 1/8 (04:37:324 - ). Noone actually did it ;w; yes, fixed
  6. Also, change the spinner sample to "S" instead of "S:C1". because of your soft hit normal. (you did it on collab) fixed in all diffs
  7. Rename collab to "collab insane"? Cuz, rulesssss. lel yes ahah

[Memory]
  1. It'd feel a lot better if you had used a lower SV for the intro. As ur mapping focus a lot on vocals, x0.75 or similar can be better imo. I'll think of it
  2. 00:34:360 (3) - ctrl+g? It's bit weird that the distance between 1/1 is shorter than 1/2 distance, if you get what i mean. yes, fixed
  3. 00:48:360 (8) - add NC? ok
  4. 01:13:931 - this space feels really weird imo cuz the guitar never stop, u can hear a really soft vocal until this point and u dont follow percussions at all, so... i'd make (2) a 1/2 slider for instance yes, but no change because of pattern
  5. 01:32:788 (1) - uhm what about finish this 1/2 earlier to cover the drums, something like this > http://puu.sh/fumxH/3230ccf93d.jpg ok
  6. 01:48:074 (2,1) - This flow is pretty.. meh. It also kinda destroy your roundness. I dunno what to suggest xD ctrl J on 01:48:788 (1) - maybe? changed in another way :3
  7. 01:50:788 (10,11) - better use a higher spacing between these notes. Otherwise, it looks like a full stream and stuff. tryed >.<
  8. uhm 01:51:288 (1,2,3) - 01:50:145 (2) - 01:50:574 (7) - these sound like overmap to me ;w; the drums sound more like http://puu.sh/fuqth/414e6cfa02.jpg , but i cant really hear clearly. vocals too strongasdf it feels ok to me
  9. 03:05:502 (9) - add NC? keep in mind that a long spinner after a long stream makes the HP something to be worry about ;w;. So, a nc can help i guess. hm ok
  10. 03:15:788 (1) - end it 1/2 early? vocal actually ends at 03:16:074 - imo (and piano too) okk
  11. 03:18:645 (2) - this and 03:22:074 (2) - are the only two notes that dont really follow vocals on this section.. any reason behind this? (also i think the timming on this section changes xd the most noticiable spot is 03:18:645 (2) - where guitar is off, but im not good with that, so i dunno) no change for now
  12. 03:37:217 (1) - maybe here u can use the same rhythm as 03:48:931 (1) - . Start from the guitar. Feels much better ok
  13. 03:43:502 (2,5,6) - it plays bad imo cuz, you keep these on the same line which is weird>< try moving this around ok

    Hitsounds
  14. 00:12:360 (3) - cancel whistle. otherwise, add on similar spots like 00:19:217 - etc
  15. 00:27:645 (1) - the whistle should be on tail instead, to keep ur constancy.
  16. I think that in this secton you could add more whitles, right now it's quite bland. In addition, the sound you try to hisound isnt actually mapped at several parts.
  17. 00:38:217 (1) - drum clap on tail. it's the same sound as 00:38:645 (4) - head.
  18. 00:39:217 (1) - maybe normal finish instead? It's a stronger cymbal than others imo.
  19. 00:47:217 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part get faster and stronger. So clap on every white tick fits nicely, i mean add claps to 00:47:217 (6,4) - . (you can hear the snares too >.>)
  20. 00:48:074 (7) - there's actually a cymbal here, better add finish too on head
  21. 01:01:074 (2,3,4) - the actual snare is on (2) so there should be a clap instead of (4).
  22. 01:01:360 (5) - uhm here should be a finish on repeat and clap on tail..
  23. 01:02:360 (2) - a finish on head also feels cool too, as u can hear a clear cymbal
  24. 01:05:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part is badly hitsounded imo >< 01:05:502 (1) - clap and finish on tail; 01:05:788 (3) - cancel this clap; 01:05:931 (5) - finish on head and tail(or clap, im not sure tbh xd); 01:06:360 (7,9) - swap these claps
  25. 01:10:502 (6) - finish on tail too(?
  26. 01:10:931 (7) - clap should be on tail instead of head
  27. 01:14:645 (5) - add clap here and 01:15:217 (3) - head. The music gets intense here. (Some finishes may also work at some spots)
  28. 01:33:788 - add finish here too
  29. 01:41:360 (2) - 01:41:788 (1) - clap on tail
  30. 01:44:217 (4) - tail; 01:50:074 (1) - ;01:50:502 (6) - ; 01:50:931 (11) - head: add finishes(?
  31. 01:55:931 (1) - finish+clap here instead of 01:56:074 (3) -
  32. 01:56:217 (5,6) - finish on heads and clap on (6)'s tail.
  33. well, this section's rhythms are the same as before.. so yea check the hitsounds again here too
  34. 02:55:217 (3) - finish?
  35. 02:55:645 (7) - finish on tail (why whistle anyways?)
  36. 03:03:074 (1) - the actual finish is at 03:03:217 - uhm maybe change the rhythm to cover it?
  37. 03:04:931 (1,5) - these should be drum clap as 00:38:217 (1,4) -
  38. 03:05:574 (1) - i think that a whistle fits better than a finish, cuz it's just piano and not percussion playing><
  39. 03:19:217 (1) - ^
  40. 03:44:360 (1) - clap on tail and head(finish may work too)
  41. 03:44:788 (1,2) - 03:45:360 (2) - 03:45:645 (1) - 03:46:074 (1,2) - more claps
  42. 03:44:645 (2) - cancel clap, as there's no snare here.
  43. 03:48:931 (1) - finish on tail, not on head.
  44. 04:05:217 (2) - add finish><
  45. 04:10:645 (1) - add finish on head? sound cool too. 04:19:788 (1) - here too. 04:19:931 (2) - tail
hitsounds mostly fixed (don't remember all to replay >.<)


Some stuffs may repeat twice or so (specially kaia stuff). 2lzy 2write twice

I'll mod the others diff around this week! (most likely tomorrow). I'll edit this.
waiting for the rest :3
Don't know why I can't quote sukiNathan D: anywya fixed what was in my parts.
Thank you all for mods :3
Arlecchino

Collab Insane

  1. 00:04:645 (6) - i'd like change this into 2 circle instead, a jump is work well since this is insane :3
  2. 00:08:931 (6) - this sounds nice for me
  3. 00:20:360 (6) - i think it's could be like this
  4. 00:22:931 (6,2) - k this often happens, it isn't stack properly maybe cuz the tail isn't stack in the true grid or sth else, try to repaire it also i'd like to ctrl+g it
  5. 00:28:074 - maybe add note here, so that's not feels too empty, after all it's fits the song i guess
  6. 00:30:645 (3) - i'd like to ctrl+g this one, since it's feels fits with a jump >,<
  7. 01:26:645 (3) - not stacked properly
  8. 01:54:645 (1) - ^
  9. 02:18:931 (6) - make slider curve for blanketing also stacking the tail's
  10. 02:55:217 (8) - NC please
  11. 03:00:788 (1) - out from screen
  12. 03:02:074 (6) - NC, the combo seem too long
  13. 03:05:574 - repair this greeline, maybe you want reduce volume in the spinner end, so resnap to white tick
  14. 03:50:788 (7) - fix the curve, it's seem weird also you can repair the blanket
  15. 03:51:788 (2) - stack properly ?
  16. 03:52:074 (3) - ^

thats all, im still bad at modding insane
but hope this helped~
Good luck~
Xinchii

Milan- wrote:

hi m4m! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262403 plz why do u need more mods anyways?lol it looks good:3

[Normal]
  1. Such waves xD. There are some that worry me a bit cuz they are hard to read, like 00:00:360 (1) - 00:23:217 (1) - 01:11:217 (1) - 02:31:217 (1) - 03:02:074 (1) -
  2. 00:36:931 (1,1) - i believe this is unrankable orz. These should be around 3 white ticks apart cuz the bpm is quite high. Better map this part out or leave it on blank
  3. 01:50:074 (1,1) - ^
  4. 02:44:931 (1,1) - ^
  5. 04:16:502 (1,1) - ^ Yes I think you're right , I always forget this omg.
  6. 01:30:503 (1) - cancel NC? constancy. also on 01:32:788 (1) - . same goes for 02:24:217 (1,1,1,1) - . I keep here
  7. 02:34:074 (2,3) - better not overlap these on that way><. It's hard for newbiessss to read the repeat Yay , ok , I fixed this
  8. 03:01:502 (5,1) - switch NC cuz constancy on how u nc'd this section. Fixed
  9. 03:46:502 - finish instead of whistle fits better imo Fixed
  10. 04:29:074 - add a note here? to map the cymbal out. OK~
Thanks a lot ><

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Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Milan- wrote:

hi m4m! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262403 plz why do u need more mods anyways?lol it looks good:3

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:502 (7,1) - reconsider this huge jump pls. This is still a slow part and also it's a bit hard to read cuz the space between 00:02:645 (1,2) - (00:04:645 (6,1) - but this one plays fine tho i guess)
  2. 00:07:074 (1,2) - this rhythm doesnt really follow anything. Better ctrl+g the rhythm, or use other to cover piano and vocals correctly.
  3. 00:31:074 (1) - cancel NC cuz constancy
  4. 00:33:360 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:35:217 (1) - ^
  6. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  7. 00:46:360 (1,1,1) -
  8. Uh, better recheck the whole diff's NCs and make it more constant. xd
  9. 00:47:788 (6) - maybe change this to 2 circles instead. to fit better the guitar.
  10. 01:06:645 (1,2) - It's weird that you use 1/1 slider for a 1/2 rhythm and a 1/2 slider for a 1/1 rhythm... Unless, you intended it to be 3/4 like 01:11:217 (1,2) - , i guess.
  11. 01:16:645 (4) - move it to x313 y221? cuz copy paste is cool
  12. 01:17:645 (9,1) - use triple instead? missing the clap is very disorienting in this case ><
  13. 01:29:360 (1) - stack on 01:28:217 (4) - tail to make a square(?
  14. 01:40:645 (4,1) - better use a shorter distance? cuz the slider is quite slow and it's a bit hard to know after a big jump, i think.
  15. 01:50:074 (1,2) - shoulnt these use a lower SV? cuz it's basically the same rhythm as 01:40:931 (1,1) -
  16. 02:03:788 (1,2) - any reason to use that low DS? Better use 0.7(? to keep constant
  17. 02:16:217 (5,6,7) - silence the sliders ends? those ends on nothing... so, the soft hit normal makes hitsounds sound terrible. (well it happens on almost every extended slider you use i guess, but here it sounds very bad ><)
  18. 02:33:217 (5) - it'd be cool if the slider end isn't actually cover by 02:32:788 (3) - . Otherwise.. it's bad..
  19. 02:44:574 (2,3) - tbh, using default skin, it's very hard to know that there's a stack here. better unstack these, atleast.
  20. 03:05:502 - I forgot to say on the hitsound mod, that it'd be cool if you change the sample to default soft here. So it just sounds the finish and not your custom hitnormal.
  21. 03:15:217 (2,3) - these should be stack (or moved more apart). Because, how you mapped this song. Refer to 00:31:074 (1,2) - 00:42:645 (6,7) - 00:45:360 (8,9) - etc
  22. such SVs changes xD
[Hard]
  • You may want to use slidertick for this diff, you miss a lots of claps and makes the hitsounds... bad. still need to check, it sounds ok o me anyway
  1. AR 8 - OD 5.. lol You could increase most of the setting by 1 on almost most of the diffs to make it more challenging. See what you can do. Extra OD 7 is pretty lame tbh
  2. 00:23:788 (2,3) - this rhythm is pretty poor imo. If you want a pause that badly, what about this maybe? http://puu.sh/fxde3/f7eae7f063.jpg no, it's ok
  3. 02:28:074 (1) - cancel nc? constancy ok
  4. 03:17:788 (4) - extend it by 1/2? to fit the background noise and vocals doesnt sound that bad either nah
  5. 03:46:645 - add a break here?xd the previous part is quite hard, so the hp may be problematic for some players ;w; ok
  6. I hope you dont have "spreed issues" later on orz.
[Ez]
  1. 00:42:645 (4) - ctrl+g ... cuz you messed up xd lol ok
  2. Maybe NC every 4 stanza? right now your combos are too short imo hm..
  3. add some whitles to the intro plz ;w, lol yes, I forgot
  4. 00:36:931 (1,1) - avoid this to keep the map clean(? ok
  5. Your use of the slider tick isnt really constant imo. You miss a lot of claps. Is it on purpuse?:o it was on purpose because it sounded too loud at some points
  6. 01:50:217 (1,1) - this is now unrankable i think ;w; these should be like 4 white ticks apart or something. fixed
  7. 02:27:788 (1,1) - ^ ^
Some stuffs may repeat twice or so (specially kaia stuff). 2lzy 2write twice

btw change your bg resolution to 1366x7something if possible
I fear a diff gap between Normal and Hard.. orz
Gl <3
Thaks all for mod
and update (also normal diff)
xxunowenxx
Glad to see that this map is still in progress XD
Good work, luxoDeh. I hope this will get ranked soon >w<
Good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

xxunowenxx wrote:

Glad to see that this map is still in progress XD
Good work, luxoDeh. I hope this will get ranked soon >w<
Good luck!
Thank you :3
I hope too xD
RaiNIsantyX
i like it :v :)
Ozato Fumika
[Easy]
  1. 00:46:074 (1,2) - this could be really confusing
  2. 01:50:217 (1,1) - recovery time is a bit short considering this is a 210 bpm song
  3. 02:27:788 (1,1) - ^

[Xinchii's Normal]
  1. AR 5.5? since very high bpm
  2. 00:01:502 (3,1) - could do a better blanket imo
  3. 00:40:360 (1,1) - I wouldn't do this
  4. 00:42:645 (3,1) - same
  5. 02:24:217 (1,1,1) - is there a reason for nc spam?
  6. 01:29:360 (1,1,1) - same

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:645 (5,1) - this can be really hard
  2. 00:47:074 (4,5) - this might be a bit hard to play. you can delete 00:47:074 (4) - and make 00:46:788 (3) - repeat
  3. 01:00:360 (3,6,7,2) - this stack appears horribly in game. manual stack them or don't do this 01:00:360 (3,6) -
  4. 02:08:788 - this gap is really hard to read
  5. 02:14:360 (5,6,7) - a bit hard to play
  6. 02:55:217 (5,6) - don't really think this is fitting. also it's not consistently done through out the diff, so not needed imo
  7. 03:44:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nerf the spacing a bit? well if anything, 03:45:217 (3,4) - has to be nered
  8. 04:03:931 (3,4,5,6) - too many stacks here imo
  9. 04:06:217 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - too hard imo
  10. 04:11:502 (5,6,7,1) - flow is a bit hard for players imo
  11. 04:13:074 (4,5,1) - too many stacks
  12. 04:28:074 (1,2) - spacing is too big imo

[Collab Insane]
  1. AR8.5 is nonsense and almost unreadable.. make it AR9
  2. 00:35:217 (1) - why nc here?
  3. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - why nc
  4. 01:00:645 (4,1,2) - you can have a better spacing here. rather than having a huge jump for no reason 01:00:931 (1,2) -
  5. 01:54:645 (1) - stack better
  6. 01:55:931 (6,7,8,1) - you know this is hard to play
  7. 02:08:931 (1,2,3,4) - i don't understand
  8. 02:43:217 (3,4,1,2,3) - this is too much overlap imo
Can't mod extra cuz it's too hard :3
but you can use higher AR... it's hard to read with AR9
gl
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

No Dap wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:074 (1,2) - this could be really confusing changed
  2. 01:50:217 (1,1) - recovery time is a bit short considering this is a 210 bpm song fixed
  3. 02:27:788 (1,1) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:645 (5,1) - this can be really hard I would like to keep this
  2. 00:47:074 (4,5) - this might be a bit hard to play. you can delete 00:47:074 (4) - and make 00:46:788 (3) - repeat fixed
  3. 01:00:360 (3,6,7,2) - this stack appears horribly in game. manual stack them or don't do this 01:00:360 (3,6) - hm I tryed several solutions but.. I don't know at the end I did something
  4. 02:08:788 - this gap is really hard to read I think it's ok
  5. 02:14:360 (5,6,7) - a bit hard to play I know but I changed this part some times and this is still the best option I could find :/
  6. 02:55:217 (5,6) - don't really think this is fitting. also it's not consistently done through out the diff, so not needed imo I think it was ok anyway because that finish was different from the others imo, anyway changed
  7. 03:44:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nerf the spacing a bit? well if anything, 03:45:217 (3,4) - has to be nered fixed this part
  8. 04:03:931 (3,4,5,6) - too many stacks here imo they're fine
  9. 04:06:217 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - too hard imo tryed to change, but it was quite hard to do it
  10. 04:11:502 (5,6,7,1) - flow is a bit hard for players imo no, it's ok here imo
  11. 04:13:074 (4,5,1) - too many stacks they're fine
  12. 04:28:074 (1,2) - spacing is too big imo tryed to reduce a bit

[Collab Insane]
  1. AR8.5 is nonsense and almost unreadable.. make it AR9 since the Memory diff was AR9 and the hard was AR8 I didn't want to make 2 diffs with the same AR so I placed it to 8.5. you sure is unrankable? anyway I changed now to AR9
  2. 00:35:217 (1) - why nc here?
  3. 00:40:360 (1,1,1,1) - why nc
  4. 01:00:645 (4,1,2) - you can have a better spacing here. rather than having a huge jump for no reason 01:00:931 (1,2) -
  5. 01:54:645 (1) - stack better
  6. 01:55:931 (6,7,8,1) - you know this is hard to play
  7. 02:08:931 (1,2,3,4) - i don't understand
  8. 02:43:217 (3,4,1,2,3) - this is too much overlap imo
Can't mod extra cuz it's too hard :3
but you can use higher AR... it's hard to read with AR9 so what should I do? AR10 is too much imo. I tryed with 9.5 but.. I don't know :/
gl
Thank you :)
Xinchii

No Dap wrote:

[Xinchii's Normal]
  1. AR 5.5? since very high bpm ok~
  2. 00:01:502 (3,1) - could do a better blanket imo fixed
  3. 00:40:360 (1,1) - I wouldn't do this
  4. 00:42:645 (3,1) - same I think they are ok since it have gap some time , maybe it won't be a reading issue I guess o.o?
  5. 02:24:217 (1,1,1) - is there a reason for nc spam?
  6. 01:29:360 (1,1,1) - same fixed these ~
Thanks for mod ~ :)

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196,192,199217,2,0,P|156:104|220:19,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,56,200360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,252,200931,2,0,L|288:312,1,100
200,260,201502,2,0,L|280:200,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,148,202360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,340,202931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,200,203502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,203788,2,0,P|376:188|320:292,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,204931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,104,205502,2,0,L|164:28,1,100
252,64,206074,2,0,L|172:144,2,100,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,84,206931,2,0,L|208:236,1,200
232,328,207788,2,0,L|336:328,1,100
352,228,208360,1,4,0:0:0:0:
207,161,217502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
307,161,217788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,69,218074,2,0,P|391:105|411:149,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,237,218645,2,0,B|391:257|391:257|431:257|455:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,161,219502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,245,219788,6,0,L|255:349,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,161,220645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,237,220931,2,0,B|121:257|121:257|81:257|57:289,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,221788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,72,222074,6,0,B|224:80|240:24|268:32|268:32|288:80|352:84,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,222931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,160,223217,2,0,P|451:254|360:282,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,224074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,212,224360,6,4,L|232:356,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,225645,2,4,L|186:78,2,150,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,229217,6,0,P|208:104|172:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,76,229788,2,0,P|72:116|79:172,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,230217,2,0,B|136:228|144:268|144:268|184:252|228:300|264:288,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,164,231502,6,0,L|232:164,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,232074,2,0,L|308:64,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,76,232502,2,0,B|400:104|392:144|392:144|416:160|420:212|472:224,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,233788,6,0,P|304:156|324:204,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,234360,2,0,L|284:332,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,234788,2,0,B|168:332|168:332|148:304|96:296|104:232,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,236074,6,0,B|216:240|216:240|220:220|200:192|224:164,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,236931,2,0,B|375:100|375:100|372:120|392:148|368:176,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,316,237788,2,0,P|460:292|488:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,238360,6,0,L|292:216,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,238931,2,0,L|148:128,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,239360,2,0,P|44:172|64:272,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,240645,6,0,L|248:64,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,241217,2,0,L|388:156,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,132,241645,2,0,P|488:224|464:316,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,242931,6,0,B|372:208|372:208|332:240,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,243502,2,0,B|200:252|200:252|184:304,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,243931,2,0,B|108:220|108:220|132:124,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,245217,6,0,B|232:352|264:312|264:312|312:340,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,246074,2,0,B|296:156|296:156|288:108,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,247217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,337,247502,6,0,L|216:280,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,248074,2,0,L|64:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,244,248502,2,0,B|44:212|56:180|56:180|32:136|64:80|116:84,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,249788,6,0,B|188:240|188:240|216:220|220:184,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,68,250645,2,0,P|320:208|232:336,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,251931,12,4,254217,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,256502,12,4,258931,0:0:0:0:
256,290,259788,6,0,L|256:140,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,68,260502,2,0,P|256:40|184:72,2,150,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,261502,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,88,261788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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264,76,264074,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,108,264360,2,0,P|104:184|96:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,336,265502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,267788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,152,268074,2,0,P|156:80|204:20,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,188,269074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
luxoDeh
Updated :)
-Nya-
Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.
So, let's get started.

General:
  1. Uncheck “Widescreen support” in all your diffs since you don’t have a storyboard.
  2. The slider velocity gap from the Insane to the hardest diff is kind of big. Why not rather try a slider velocity of 1.70 or 1.80 in your “Memory” diff.
  3. Shouldn’t you add something into the “source” tab, like maybe Kagerou Project or something like that, since this is a song from kagerou project?
  4. I think the artist has to be: Jin ft. Kohta Matsuyama
    http://vgmdb.net/album/45727
  5. It’s also “Mekakucity” not “Mekaku City”.
  6. Use a resolution of 1366X768 for your background image. I managed to fix your current one:
    http://puu.sh/gyLEM/462c5497c2.jpg
  7. You forgot to add the custom sounds to the soft hitsounds on the red timing points.
    http://puu.sh/gyLMD/9ec697d794.png
  8. There’s a kiai time inconsistency. Rather make sure that your kiai time is the same in all your diffs for consistency.
  9. Change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Imo and according to AiBat this is important. So please go to your .osu file and type in “2000” right next to your audio lead-in.

Easy:
  1. 01:10:788 –I think it’s important to also map this beat in some way. So I suggest making this slider: 01:10:074 (2) –longer till its tail is here: 01:10:788 –
  2. 01:21:788 (2) –This slider doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely imo. Maybe try this rhythm instead:
  3. 01:48:931 –Why didn’t you add a note here? There’s that clear cymbal sound here that’s important to get mapped imo.
  4. 01:50:074 (3) –A finish instead of a whistle on this circle will fit so much better imo.
  5. 01:54:645 (4) –New combo here for consistency with 01:02:074 (1) – and then remove new combo here: 01:55:217 (1) –
  6. 02:28:931 (1) –Rather stack the head of this circle on the tail of 02:26:931 (1) – to fix that spacing.
  7. 02:48:074 (1) –I suggest placing this circle right in the middle of the spinner to make it easier to get to the next note once the spinner ends.
  8. 03:22:931 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 03:23:788 (2) -

Xinchii’s Normal:
  1. 00:24:931 –It feels weird to have this gap here, especially since a vocal is clearly audible there. Rather add a note or start this slider: 00:25:074 (4) –there and lengthen it.
  2. 03:46:645 – to 03:48:931 –Insert a break time here please. Luxodeh did this in his other diffs.
  3. 04:00:645 (1) –Add a finish on the head of this slider and not a whistle, for consistency.
  4. 04:29:217 (1) –End this spinner where Luxodeh had ended his Easy diff’s spinner as well, which is here: 04:37:324 –

Hard:
  1. 01:02:074 (1) –Place a small jump here like you did here: 01:11:217 (1) – For consistency and also because this stack: 01:01:931 (7) - is confusing if 01:02:074 (1) –isn’t spaced out a bit more. While testplaying, I thought I had to click that stacked circle earlier than I was supposed to.
  2. 01:50:074 (1,2) –Imo, these repetitive sliders doesn’t really follow the rhythm that nicely and while testplaying it’s hard to catch the rhythm. Why not change those sliders into normal, long sliders instead?
  3. 02:06:074 (1) –Make this jump just as big as this one: 01:56:931 (1) –for consistency and to prevent confusion with this stacked note: 02:05:931 (8) –
  4. 02:08:931 (1) –Space this circle out more. Imo, it’s too close to the previous note and can be mistaken for a note that has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to.
  5. 02:27:645 (5) –Add a finish on the head of this slider?

Collab Insane:
  1. 00:25:360 (1) –Whistle on the head of this slider.
  2. 00:40:645 (1,1,1) –I don’t see a reason to use new combos here. Please remove them.
  3. 00:46:360 (1,1,1) –Same thing here. Remove the new combos.
  4. 01:33:788 (1) –Rather not make the slider velocity so fast here suddenly. It’s quite confusing and catches the player off-guard. Rather just keep it x1.00.
  5. 01:56:217 (1) –This stack is a bit confusing and players might think this slider also has to be clicked earlier than it’s supposed to. So rather unstack.
  6. 02:04:645 (4,5) –This jump feels quite big and here: 01:08:360 (3,4) –you didn’t use such a big jump. I suggest making that spacing similar to this spacing: 02:04:788 (5,1) –
  7. 02:08:217 (4) –Don’t implement a slider velocity change here. Imo, it doesn’t really fit since I don’t really detect a place here where the music gets slower. So rather remove that SV change.
  8. 02:10:074 (1,2,3) –Make sure the spacing between these three notes are similar.
  9. 02:29:217 (1) –Like my previous suggestion; rather don’t make the SV so fast suddenly. It’s rather surprising. Remove that SV change.
  10. 02:38:645 (1) –Space this slider like you spaced this one: 02:38:074 (1,2) –since it has the same fast rhythm.
  11. 02:40:360 (7) –Add new combo here.
  12. 03:37:074 (2) –I really don’t like these very fast SV changes. Rather remove them since it’s quite unexpected.
  13. 03:48:717 (1) –Rather remove this fast SV change. I think there’s other places as well further in this diff. Go through the kiai time and please remove these fast SV changes since they’re not necessary in my opinion and they’re bit irritating to play imo.
  14. 03:58:645 (1,1) –Remove these two new combos to stay consistent with: 01:43:217 (1,2,3) –
  15. 04:06:788 (4) –This jump feels really big especially for such a difficult part in the map. Please reduce the spacing.
  16. 04:17:645 (6) –I think you forgot a finish on the head of this slider.

Memory:

The only thing I can say about this diff is that I really think you have to lower that slider velocity since it’s extremely fast imo and kind of ruins the SV spread.

Overall, all the diffs look really nice, except that Memory diff that just requires a SV change to make this mapset perfect.

If you change the slider velocity on the last diff then you can call me back for a recheck.
Good Luck~! :D
Kyouren
Luxoversible, Plz >w<
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