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Saule feat. Charlie Winston - Dusty Men

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Topic Starter
T_Terry_T
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 20 maggio 2014 at 16:45:01

Artist: Saule feat. Charlie Winston
Title: Dusty Men
Tags: cowboys multilanguage english french western soft pop rock
BPM: 108,99
Filesize: 5354kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,36 stars, 145 notes)
  2. Hard (4,67 stars, 438 notes)
  3. Normal (3,62 stars, 261 notes)
Download: Saule feat. Charlie Winston - Dusty Men
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All diffs by me!
Original video HERE
Please enjoy.
Any advice, suggestion and correction to make this map even better is well accepted! ;)
Thanks to:
  1. Sellenite, P o M u T a, TaMul, [Twinkle] for modding the map.
  2. Sala-, Zare and the people on #modhelp for the instant checks.
Sellenite
HI,From Modding Queues M4M
How a Light song XD

[General]
Offset change into 2153
beginning on 00:02:153
Val. change into 40%-80%,100% is too loudly

[Easy]
Silder Velocity is too fast.Please change into 1.0-1.1
Distance spacing change into 1.0

Many objects overlap..overlap in easy is not to be allowed.please put them away like:
00:02:147 (1,2,3) - ^
00:06:000 (5,1,2,3) - ^
00:13:706 (4,1) - ^
00:32:422 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:825 (2,3,4,1) - ^
01:40:128 (2,1,1) - ^
00:28:569 (5,6) - ^
01:12:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - continue 1/1 is difficult for novices
01:32:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
01:37:376 (1,2,3,4,1) - these turn around..try to put them away
02:31:045 (3) - will use a slider on 02:30:770 to 02:31:046 is better?
03:15:908 - do not put the kiai on there..it should put in the beginnin of the accent in the climax part which you think

[Normal]
Silder Velocity can use 1.3
Distance spacing can change into 1.2

00:19:761 (1,2,3,4) - put them away
00:24:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:29:669 (3,4,5) - ^
00:33:523 (4,1) - this not beautiful..move them
00:39:578 (1,2,3,4,1) - put them away
00:53:339 - The lack of rhythm
01:13:156 (2,3,4,5,6,7) 、01:18:660 (3,4,5) - overmap
01:32:422 - The lack of rhythm
01:50:587 ^
01:59:394 ^
02:08:202 ^
02:31:183 ^ and delete the next note
02:41:505 (2) - overmap
……
so may pa-pa-pa...the rhythm is a bit monotonous,try to do some note which have various rhythm

[Hard]
Silder Velocity can use 1.3-1.6
Distance spacing can change into 1.4

First there are so many overlap like 00:02:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) etc.
Please Distance spacing change into 1.4 and move them away,this is so difficult to play and is unrankable.

00:02:972 (3) - overmap,put the notes in 00:02:835 instead of that
00:03:798 (5) - ^00:03:935
00:04:899 (8) - ^00:05:036
00:05:174 (9) - ^
00:06:000 (11) - ^00:05:724
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - the same rhythm like ^ re these part:00:02:147 - 00:10:403
00:28:293 (5) - put in 00:28:156 is better ?
……
so many the same 1/2,you should post the object with rhythm , turn on the 25% to do the map
maybe you should remap this diff

good luck!
also thanks for your mods><
Topic Starter
T_Terry_T
Hi Sellenite. Thank you so much for your help. :oops:
It will take time to remap all the levels (so many objects to move! :| ) so now I reply and I'll edit this post in the future.
You're are totally right on everything, by the way.

Good luck with your map too! Hope to see it ranked soon. ;)

Sellenite wrote:

HI,From Modding Queues M4M
How a Light song XD So it wasn't noisy! :D Maybe I'll I added "soft" in the tags.

[General]
SPOILER
Offset change into 2153 I'll change all the level with this.
beganning on 00:02:153 ^
Val. change into 40%-80%,100% is too loudly Yeah, I tought myself it was too loud. I'm going to change it into 45%.

[Easy]
SPOILER
Silder Velocity is too fast.Please change into 1.0-1.1 Changed from 1.4 to 1.1.
Distance spacing change into 1.0 Done!

Many objects overlap..overlap in easy is not to be allowed.please put them away like:
00:02:147 (1,2,3) - ^ Done!
00:06:000 (5,1,2,3) - ^ Done!
00:13:706 (4,1) - ^ Done!
00:32:422 (2,3,4) - ^ Done!
00:36:825 (2,3,4,1) - ^ Done!
01:40:128 (2,1,1) - ^ Done!
00:28:569 (5,6) - ^ Done!
01:12:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - continue 1/1 is difficult for novices Changed in sliders
01:32:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ Total remap. No more continuous 1/1! :D
01:37:376 (1,2,3,4,1) - these turn around..try to put them away Total remap as well.
02:31:045 (3) - will use a slider on 02:30:770 to 02:31:046 is better? Done!
03:15:908 - do not put the kiai on there..it should put in the beginnin of the gaccent in the climax part which you think Removed from there and put when the chorus start. Now there are 3 Kiai Time... too much? :?

[Normal]
SPOILER
Silder Velocity can use 1.3 Done!
Distance spacing can change into 1.2 Done!

00:19:761 (1,2,3,4) - put them away I leave the 3/4 slider+circle, but I removed the overmap
00:24:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same as above
00:29:669 (3,4,5) - ^ 3&5 deleted, 4 become a 2/4 slider.
00:33:523 (4,1) - this not beautiful..move them Not sure the solution I found is beautiful, but at least there's no overmap
00:39:578 (1,2,3,4,1) - put them away Same edit as in 00:19:761
00:53:339 - The lack of rhythm We had a little chat about this. :D As said there, I made (5) longer. Also, (1) is now 3/4 long and the circle (2) was add.
01:13:156 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ?01:18:660 (3,4,5) - overmap I resolved both of them, but the second one was weird. In the beginning it was an error in the spacing, but while editing in 1.2 their distances were disugual, so I changed (3) in a 2/4 slider and deleted (4).
01:32:422 - The lack of rhythm Added rhythm
01:50:587 ^ Same edit as in 00:53:339
01:59:394 ^ Changed 01:01:596 first and then copy-pasted here
02:08:202 ^ Big changes here, but I tried to remove all the weird pauses (drumps?), overmaps and overlaps.
02:31:183 ^ and delete the next note Same as above
02:41:505 (2) - overmap Same as above
……
so may pa-pa-pa...the rhythm is a bit monotonous,try to do some note which have various rhythm I hope I did enough. :S

[Hard]
SPOILER
Silder Velocity can use 1.3-1.6 Changed to 1.6 for an harder diff
Distance spacing can change into 1.4 Done!

First there are so many overlap like 00:02:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) etc. Got it
Please Distance spacing change into 1.4 and move them away,this is so difficult to play and is unrankable. I put them in circle so they don't overlap. Hopefully it is playable now!

00:02:972 (3) - overmap,put the notes in 00:02:835 instead of that Put it from the red thick to the blue one? Seem nice. I did this change for (3) as for (6) and (9).
00:03:798 (5) - ^00:03:935 I edited (6) instead
00:04:899 (8) - ^00:05:036 I edited (9) instead
00:05:174 (9) - ^ Done!
00:06:000 (11) - ^00:05:724 Done!
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - the same rhythm like ^ re these part:00:02:147 - 00:10:403 Now it's 00:02:153-00:05:042 flipped horizzontally + a 1/4 slider repeted 3 times + a circle in the white tick
00:28:293 (5) - put in 00:28:156 is better ? Yes it is. :) Done!
……
so many the same 1/2,you should post the object with rhythm , turn on the 25% to do the map I tried my best to eliminate the most part without overmapping. Hope I didn't worse!
maybe you should remap this diff Definitely.I took so long, though. - 3 - '
good luck!Thanks! I need a lot of it. :lol:
also thanks for your mods>< No problem. :D
P o M u T a
from my queue!

[General]
  1. why tag added , ←? remove these. cowboys, multilanguage, western, soft,
[Easy]
  1. 00:39:584 (1) - remove clap and instead add finish slider head. so, symbals part.
  2. 00:46:189 (1) - add finish slider head.
  3. 01:43:437 (1) - add finish slider head.
  4. 01:03:804 (1) - add finish slider head.
  5. 01:03:804 (1) - add finish slider head.
  6. 01:25:822 (1) - remove clap and instead add finish slider head. so, symbals part.
  7. 01:43:437 (1) - add finish slider head.
  8. 01:52:244 (1) - add finish slider head.
  9. 02:01:052 (1) - add finish slider head.
  10. 02:09:859 (1) - add finish slider head.
  11. 02:18:666 (1) - add finish slider head.
  12. 02:27:474 (1) - add finish slider head.
  13. 02:36:281 (1) - add finish slider head.
  14. 02:53:896 (1) - add finish slider head.
  15. 03:02:703 (1) - add finish slider head.
  16. 03:11:510 (1) - add finish slider head.
try add all diff this stuff.
more good hear!
good luck!
Topic Starter
T_Terry_T

P o M u T a wrote:

from my queue! Hi! Thanks for accepting my request.

[General]
  1. why tag added , ←? remove these. cowboys, multilanguage, western, soft,In other web sites tags work this way, so I did it as always. It's a bad habit, I guess! :D Anyway: edited.


[Easy]
  1. 00:39:584 (1) - remove clap and instead add finish slider head. so, symbals part.
  2. 00:46:189 (1) - add finish slider head.
  3. 01:43:437 (1) - add finish slider head.
  4. 01:03:804 (1) - add finish slider head.
  5. 01:03:804 (1) - add finish slider head.
  6. 01:25:822 (1) - remove clap and instead add finish slider head. so, symbals part.
  7. 01:43:437 (1) - add finish slider head.
  8. 01:52:244 (1) - add finish slider head.
  9. 02:01:052 (1) - add finish slider head.
  10. 02:09:859 (1) - add finish slider head.
  11. 02:18:666 (1) - add finish slider head.
  12. 02:27:474 (1) - add finish slider head.
  13. 02:36:281 (1) - add finish slider head.
  14. 02:53:896 (1) - add finish slider head.
  15. 03:02:703 (1) - add finish slider head.
  16. 03:11:510 (1) - add finish slider head.
try add all diff this stuff. Done with every diffs.
more good hear! You're totally right. Thanks for these suggestions!
good luck!Thanks again! :D By the way, if you need a mod in the future don't hesitate to contact me. I'm a beginner, but I'll be happy to help!
GugUCorn
From my M4M Queue.

[General]

  1. Your offset is little not fit. change it to 2119.
  2. Check out "WideScreen Support" because of not using SB.
[Easy]

  1. 01:17:015 (1) - finish on head of slider
  2. 01:36:281 (2) - clap on head of slider
  3. 01:40:685 (2) - clap
  4. 02:18:115 (5) - how about adding drum-clap?
  5. 02:25:272 (2,1) - blanket
  6. 02:34:079 (2,1) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:19:767 (1,2) - using Blue line is hard to Normal Player. don't use it.
  2. 01:17:015 (1) - finish
  3. 01:35:731 (2) - clap on end of slider
  4. 01:36:281 (3) - clap on head of slider
[Hard]
Add Clap on white tick. like 00:46:740, 00:47:841.

  1. 00:05:455 (10) - NC
  2. 00:09:859 (10,11) - ^
ok, it's all. Good Luck!
Topic Starter
T_Terry_T

TaMul wrote:

From my M4M Queue. Hi! Thanks for accepting my request. :D

[General]

  1. Your offset is little not fit. change it to 2119. You're right about the offset, but 2119 it's too early. I tried several times, I also asked to others (thanks to Sala-, Zare and the people on #modreq for helping) and in the end I think 2135 is the good (and hopefully last) one.
  2. Check out "WideScreen Support" because of not using SB. Done!


[Easy]

  1. 01:17:015 (1) - finish on head of slider Done!
  2. 01:36:281 (2) - clap on head of slider Done!
  3. 01:40:685 (2) - clap Done!
  4. 02:18:115 (5) - how about adding drum-clap? I like it! Done!
  5. 02:25:272 (2,1) - blanket The idea is good, but the snap divisor doesn't allow me to make changes (actually, the objects become even more distant from each other if I move one of them), so I had to leave them be.
  6. 02:34:079 (2,1) - ^ ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:19:767 (1,2) - using Blue line is hard to Normal Player. don't use it. I think I eliminated all of them.
  2. 01:17:015 (1) - finish Done!
  3. 01:35:731 (2) - clap on end of slider Done!
  4. 01:36:281 (3) - clap on head of slider Done!
[Hard]
Add Clap on white tick. like 00:46:740, 00:47:841. I added some claps, but not on all the white tick. I tought it would be too much.

  1. 00:05:455 (10) - NC ...well, this is embarassing. NC = New Combo, right? If so, done! xD
  2. 00:09:859 (10,11) - ^ ^
ok, it's all. Good Luck! Thank you for your time. Good luck with your map too! ;)
Beatmap submission is currently disabled. The map will be uploaded as soon as it'll be abled again.
Upload done!
[Twinkle]
have a look at hard
[hard]
too based on XY-axis this is old styled mapping which is not welcome now
00:02:685 (2,3) - pull thse two afterward for 1/4 beat
00:03:235 (4) - change it to a note at 00:03:511 (4) -
00:06:263 put one note here
00:07:364 (4) - 00:08:465 (7) - aslo here, and many more later.
00:29:657 (4,1) - these sliders contains some strong music points which are used to put notes
00:35:162 (1) - same as above
00:36:951 (6) - place note here
00:42:456 (4) - ^

@.@ so many errors, i think i should finish my mod here, maybe you should find some materials to learn before mapping and improve you map!

good luck!
Topic Starter
T_Terry_T
Wow, it took a lot more than expected! °_°

So yeah: remap.

I tried to make all the diffs less XY-axis based, as suggested by [Twinkle], but in particular the Hard one.
I also changed the BPM because with 199 sounded off sometimes. It should be better now.

Hope I made the good choices and corrected all the noob errors, like the one below. :oops:

[Twinkle] wrote:

00:02:685 (2,3) - pull thse two afterward for 1/4 beat That really change the sound A LOT. And for the best. Thanks!
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