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Sayonara Ponytail - Shinsekai Koukyougaku [Osu|Taiko]

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GugUCorn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 6월 7일 토요일 at 오후 1:19:23

Artist: Sayonara Ponytail
Title: Shinsekai Koukyougaku
Source: Kill la Kill
Tags: TV Size Karia TKSalt Ending ed キルラキル mankanshoku mako
BPM: 144
Filesize: 8233kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.86 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 237 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 272 notes)
  4. Karia's Hard (4.91 stars, 207 notes)
  5. Normal (3.34 stars, 101 notes)
  6. TK'S Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 296 notes)
  7. TK'S Oni (4.89 stars, 424 notes)
Download: Sayonara Ponytail - Shinsekai Koukyougaku
Download: Sayonara Ponytail - Shinsekai Koukyougaku (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Mod History]
  1. 2014-03-15 Hathz STANDARD Mod
  2. 2014-03-17 [ Zzz ] STANDARD Mod
  3. 2014-03-18 Mako Sakata STANDARD Mod
  4. 2014-03-19 P o M u T a STANDARD, Taiko Mod
  5. 2014-03-21 Rakuen,Leader STANDARD Mod
  6. 2014-03-22 DakeDekaane, Neta STANDARD Mod, DakeDekaane Taiko Mod
  7. 2014-03-23 HabiHolic, Cancel, Cosmolade STANDARD Mod
  8. 2014-03-25 Mei, yurunneram STANDARD Mod
  9. 2014-03-28 CoroQuetz Taiko Mod
  10. 2014-03-29 lZenxl Taiko Mod
  11. 2014-03-30 -Neipezi, Sonnyc, 10nya STANDARD Mod
  12. 2014-04-02 Nofool Taiko Mod
  13. 2014-05-26 BeatofIke STANDARD Mod
  14. 2014-05-27 OnosakiHito Taiko Mod
  15. 2014-06-06 MMzz Taiko Mod
  16. -------------- DakeDekaane Standard mod
Total 25 Mods || 18 STANDARD Mods || 7 Taiko Mods
Hathz
Here's a mod for you from your M4M queue.

Insane

00:02:904 (1) - NC
00:06:342 (3) - Move this to the end point of the 00:06:029 (2) slider
00:08:217 (4) - Remove this object so you're left with a double, I find this to flow more naturally
00:26:550 (3) - Add circle here
00:26:759 (1) - RC
00:27:175 (1) - NC
00:30:717 (4) - NC
00:31:342 (1) - RC
00:53:217 (1) - Maybe NC? Fits the music in my opinion
00:57:800 (3) - RC
00:58:425 (1) - NC
01:23:634 (5) - NC
01:24:259 (2) - RC
01:24:884 (1) - NC

There is a gap in Kiai Time at 01:12:175 which lasts for like 100ms, might want to check that out.


Normal

00:05:509 (1) - I would move this to something like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LE0g1If.png, and add NC.
00:15:509 (3) - RC
00:38:009 (2) - This could be moved slightly away from the end of the slider, that way it's slightly more readable I think. (https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4NVzitg.png)
00:39:259 (1) - NC
00:52:175 (1) - NC

Same problem with Kiai like in Insane.

Easy

00:52:800 (1) - NC?
00:53:425 (1) - NC?
01:23:842 (1) - NC

Same problem with Kiai like in Insane.


Map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/151739
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Hathz wrote:

Here's a mod for you from your M4M queue.

Insane

00:02:904 (1) - NC
00:06:342 (3) - Move this to the end point of the 00:06:029 (2) slider ok
00:08:217 (4) - Remove this object so you're left with a double, I find this to flow more naturally
00:26:550 (3) - Add circle here
00:26:759 (1) - RC ok
00:27:175 (1) - NC ok
00:30:717 (4) - NC
00:31:342 (1) - RC
00:53:217 (1) - Maybe NC? Fits the music in my opinion
00:57:800 (3) - RC ok
00:58:425 (1) - NC
01:23:634 (5) - NC
01:24:259 (2) - RC
01:24:884 (1) - NC

There is a gap in Kiai Time at 01:12:175 which lasts for like 100ms, might want to check that out.


Normal

00:05:509 (1) - I would move this to something like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LE0g1If.png, and add NC.
00:15:509 (3) - RC
00:38:009 (2) - This could be moved slightly away from the end of the slider, that way it's slightly more readable I think. (https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4NVzitg.png)
00:39:259 (1) - NC ok
00:52:175 (1) - NC Already NC

Same problem with Kiai like in Insane.

Easy

00:52:800 (1) - NC?
00:53:425 (1) - NC?
01:23:842 (1) - NC

Same problem with Kiai like in Insane.


Map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/151739
thanks mod!
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ TaMul

[ Easy ]

00:28:842 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) -

00:28:842 (3) - 여기서부터
00:35:509 (2) - 여기까지 드래그하셔서

00:28:842 (3) - 한꺼번에 x184 y328로 하시면 더 흐름이 좋아보여요!

00:32:175 (2) - 바꾸고 이걸 조금 더 올려주시면 더 좋을듯 !!

[ Normal ]

00:15:509 (1) - x396 y236 으로 바꾸시면 보기 좋을듯!
만약 바꿀경우 .. 별모양을 하기 위한다면!
00:15:925 (2) - 496 188
00:16:342 (3) - 464 84
00:16:759 (4) - 356 76 순서대로 하시면 될듯! 모양도 좋고! 별모양도 되고! 굿굿

[ Karia's Hard ] 안녕하세요~

00:15:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 이 부분에 슬라이더 스틱인가 .. 스택인가 .. 아무튼 슬라이더 중간에 소리나는걸 없에주시는게 더 좋을 꺼 같아요.
먼가 .. 슬라이더 스틱 넣으니까 .. 박자가 조금 많이 ..이상하다고 느끼네요.....

[ Insane ]

No problem!

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/156966 모딩해주세요!!
는... 난이도가 조금 어렵지만.. 일단 뱃이 지적하지 않는이상 .. 이대로 갈꺼라서 .. 모딩 많이해주지 말아주세여 ㅠㅠ... ( 힘듬... 거절하기도 너무 미안하고 ..... )

: )
Good map !!
Star~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ TaMul

[ Easy ]

00:28:842 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) -

00:28:842 (3) - 여기서부터
00:35:509 (2) - 여기까지 드래그하셔서

00:28:842 (3) - 한꺼번에 x184 y328로 하시면 더 흐름이 좋아보여요!

00:32:175 (2) - 바꾸고 이걸 조금 더 올려주시면 더 좋을듯 !!

[ Normal ]

00:15:509 (1) - x396 y236 으로 바꾸시면 보기 좋을듯!
만약 바꿀경우 .. 별모양을 하기 위한다면!
00:15:925 (2) - 496 188
00:16:342 (3) - 464 84
00:16:759 (4) - 356 76 순서대로 하시면 될듯! 모양도 좋고! 별모양도 되고! 굿굿

[ Insane ]

No problem!

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/156966 모딩해주세요!!
는... 난이도가 조금 어렵지만.. 일단 뱃이 지적하지 않는이상 .. 이대로 갈꺼라서 .. 모딩 많이해주지 말아주세여 ㅠㅠ... ( 힘듬... 거절하기도 너무 미안하고 ..... )

: )
Good map !!
Star~
감사합니다 다 고쳤어요 :)
lolia

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ Karia's Hard ]
안녕하세요~

00:15:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 이 부분에 슬라이더 스틱인가 .. 스택인가 .. 아무튼 슬라이더 중간에 소리나는걸 없에주시는게 더 좋을 꺼 같아요.
먼가 .. 슬라이더 스틱 넣으니까 .. 박자가 조금 많이 ..이상하다고 느끼네요..... 여기 틱 소리는 하나빼곤 전부 기본사운드라 거의 안들리는데,,어떤걸 말씀하시는질 잘 모르겠네요,,ㅜ

Good map !!
Star~
Thanks for modding~

EDIT : 어라,,오스 업뎃시키니까 틱소리가 다시 커졌네요; 업로드 부탁드려요,,

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TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Pony Tail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill La Kill
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Karia wrote:

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ Karia's Hard ]
안녕하세요~

00:15:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 이 부분에 슬라이더 스틱인가 .. 스택인가 .. 아무튼 슬라이더 중간에 소리나는걸 없에주시는게 더 좋을 꺼 같아요.
먼가 .. 슬라이더 스틱 넣으니까 .. 박자가 조금 많이 ..이상하다고 느끼네요..... 여기 틱 소리는 하나빼곤 전부 기본사운드라 거의 안들리는데,,어떤걸 말씀하시는질 잘 모르겠네요,,ㅜ

Good map !!
Star~
Thanks for modding~

EDIT : 어라,,오스 업뎃시키니까 틱소리가 다시 커졌네요; 업로드 부탁드려요,,

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292,216,26342,2,0,P|308:164|296:88,1,104.550001994133,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,114,26759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,114,27175,6,0,L|408:108,1,82,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,27592,2,0,L|382:219,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,28009,2,0,P|212:304|228:392,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,325,28634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,28842,6,0,L|160:240,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,29259,2,0,L|284:104,2,164,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,216,30300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,332,30509,6,0,L|185:328,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,316,30925,2,0,L|364:320,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,284,31342,2,0,P|448:204|432:116,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,31967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,32175,6,0,L|204:76,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,33009,2,0,L|200:168,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,33425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,296,33634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,33842,6,0,L|124:244,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,164,34259,2,0,L|252:160,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,320,34675,2,0,L|16:324,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,35509,6,0,L|360:300,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,380,35925,2,0,L|254:376,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,36342,2,0,L|468:220,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,300,36967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,260,37175,6,0,P|368:216|372:176,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,44,37592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,36,37800,1,4,0:3:0:0:
248,40,37904,1,4,0:3:0:0:
228,45,38009,2,0,L|57:42,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,204,38842,6,0,L|216:196,1,123.000004692078,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
308,268,39675,2,0,L|304:340,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,272,40092,2,0,L|395:333,1,61.5000023460389,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,40509,6,0,L|356:108,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,28,40925,2,0,P|207:30|147:54,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,41342,2,0,P|188:176|220:100,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,92,41967,6,0,L|84:280,1,164
148,308,42592,2,0,P|188:312|240:300,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,280,43009,2,0,P|348:283|387:297,1,82,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,220,43425,2,0,L|248:128,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,43842,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,80,44050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,44259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,80,44467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,44675,2,0,L|228:76,1,82,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,152,45092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,220,45300,6,0,B|296:248|296:248|336:204|400:208,1,164,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,316,45925,2,0,P|409:315|372:296,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,188,46342,2,0,P|320:145|340:108,1,82,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,46759,2,0,L|500:68,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,20,47175,6,0,L|172:28,1,164,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,48009,2,0,L|320:184,1,164,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,108,48842,6,0,P|132:112|84:136,1,82,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,208,49259,2,0,L|80:304,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,273,49675,2,0,L|156:192,1,82,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,176,50092,2,0,L|239:257,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,324,50509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
364,352,50717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,336,50925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,268,51134,2,0,L|484:100,1,164,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,52,51759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,112,51967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,121,52071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,132,52175,6,0,L|141:126,2,82,2|8|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
315,218,52800,2,0,L|422:212,2,82,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53425,12,8,55092,0:0:0:0:
388,112,55509,6,0,L|392:200,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,104,55925,2,0,L|280:185,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,92,56342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,92,56550,2,0,L|168:188,1,82,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,68,56967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,208,57175,6,0,P|160:256|236:228,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,104,57800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,232,58009,2,0,L|240:340,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,120,58634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,24,58842,6,0,P|328:28|368:120,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,59467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,248,59675,2,0,L|329:356,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,60300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,220,60509,6,0,L|496:216,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,136,60925,2,0,L|304:144,1,164,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,61550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,61759,2,0,L|64:216,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,62175,6,0,L|324:184,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,62592,2,0,L|206:297,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,63009,2,0,P|140:148|148:108,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,137,63425,2,0,P|266:181|258:221,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,63842,6,0,L|380:100,2,164,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,340,64884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,65092,2,0,P|116:288|68:308,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,368,65509,6,0,P|240:311|220:230,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,66134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,234,66342,2,0,L|320:228,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,148,66759,2,0,L|214:153,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,120,67175,6,0,B|96:88|36:100|36:100|-4:144,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,67800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,68009,2,0,B|36:332|36:332|96:344|140:312,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,276,68634,2,0,L|272:280,1,41,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,258,68842,6,0,L|196:164,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,84,69259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,64,69467,2,0,P|440:68|479:86,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,68,70092,2,0,L|180:72,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,92,70509,6,0,L|28:88,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,70925,2,0,L|12:216,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,166,71342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,168,71446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,171,71550,2,0,L|271:165,1,41,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,166,71759,2,0,L|324:171,3,41,10|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,171,72175,6,0,L|426:166,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,248,72592,2,0,L|333:252,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,281,73009,2,0,L|90:273,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73842,6,0,P|170:279|105:357,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,343,74467,2,0,P|16:269|81:191,1,164,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,183,75092,2,0,L|228:186,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,75509,6,0,P|366:135|379:79,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,185,76134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,76342,2,0,L|435:175,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,294,76759,2,0,L|311:288,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,264,77175,6,0,B|141:252|141:252|90:291|15:265,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,152,77800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,33,78009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,152,78217,2,0,L|234:196,1,164
303,227,78842,6,0,P|345:232|400:218,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,79259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,227,79467,2,0,L|307:319,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,80092,2,0,L|335:53,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,16,80509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,8,80717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,35,80925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,109,81134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,189,81342,2,0,L|87:242,2,41,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,138,81759,2,0,P|197:133|246:144,1,82,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,171,82175,6,4,L|385:165,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,185,82592,2,0,P|461:215|465:250,1,61.5000023460389
464,244,83217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,297,83425,1,8,0:3:0:0:
337,348,83634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,307,83842,6,0,L|261:239,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,198,84259,2,0,P|134:191|57:221,2,123.000004692078,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,198,85196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
194,198,85300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85509,12,2,88634,0:0:0:0:
카리아님께서 그부분 힛사 쓰실 때 소프트 5로 쓰셨던데 거기 슬라이더틱을 제가 쓰고있어서 그부분 지적한거에요
소프트 3으로 고쳤으니까 재 다운하시고 확인해주세요 ^^
+하드 난이도 하나 더 추가 ;)
Shiranai
Hii tamuuuul, M4M from my queue~

[General]
Add ending to tags? and move TV Size from tags to the song title instead?
I think the source is Kill la Kill and why not to romanised the title to Shinsekai Koukyougaku instead?
The romanised artist is should be Sayonara Ponytail, based on their PV http://puu.sh/7zxhM.jpg so I think It's their official name
Correct me if I was wrong, I don't really into Anime things :P

[Easy]
00:25:925 (1) - Add clap on tail? I hear drum sound there
00:56:342 (1,2) - You can blanket It neater, move (1) to x:96 y:120 and the tail node is x:68 y:200 http://puu.sh/7zvwE.jpg
01:03:842 (2) - Change into 1/1 slider instead with reverse? somehow It does not sound right for me
01:05:509 (1) - Move down a bit to prevent touching the previous slider 01:03:842 (2) -

[Normal]
00:17:175 (1) - I think the space between the previous circle is too far, and I think you can make them 00:15:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - a better star shape, like this http://puu.sh/7zyYn.jpg or you can copy paste this code below instead
396,236,15509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
496,188,15925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,84,16342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,76,16759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,176,17175,6,0,B|232:224|152:132|84:180,2,220,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:19:259 (2) - Ctrl+J then Ctrl+< and make something like this http://puu.sh/7zzox.jpg for better flow and then move this 00:20:092 (3) - to somewhere to make the DS back to 1.00
00:22:800 (4,1) - You can blanket them better imo
00:26:342 (2,3) - Unstack them? is hard to read since It was Normal diff
00:35:509 (3,4) - Same as above, player can confuse since the previous stack is notes on blue and white tick now is on red and white tick, so I sugest to prevent any stack between notes, so players can read the rhythm better
00:52:800 (2,3) - Unstack?
00:57:592 (4,5) - Bad flow and the space between (4) to (5) is too far, so I sugest to Ctrl+G (5) for reduce space between them and make the flow better
01:01:134 (3,4) - Unstack?

[Karia's Hard]
00:09:884 - Add circle there? for better rhythm
00:12:488 - Add circle there? for better rhythm
00:12:592 (3) - Delete finish on head? It's too loud and not fit imo
00:13:842 (7) - NC?
00:37:800 (3,4) - Delete finish on both of them?
00:41:967 (1) - Add whistle on head?
00:56:550 (4) - Add whistle on head?
00:58:009 (3) - 00:59:675 (3) - Add whistle on repeat?
01:01:550 (3) - Add whistle?
01:04:884 (2) - Add whistle?
01:06:342 (3) - 01:09:467 (3) - Add whistle on tail?
01:14:467 (2) - Add whistle on tail?
01:18:217 (4) - Add whistle on head?
01:18:321 - Change sample sound on green line from S:C7 to S:C5?
01:19:467 (3) - Add whistle on tail?

[Insane]
00:06:550 (1) - 00:06:620 (2) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto, then add whistle
00:06:689 (3) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto
00:06:759 (4) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto on head, Delete whistle then add clap instead
00:12:592 (4) - Finish too loud
00:39:675 (6) - Delete NC?

[]
Such a funny and cute song, here star~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hii tamuuuul, M4M from my queue~

[General]
Add ending to tags? and move TV Size from tags to the song title instead?
I think the source is Kill la Kill and why not to romanised the title to Shinsekai Koukyougaku instead?
The romanised artist is should be Sayonara Ponytail, based on their PV http://puu.sh/7zxhM.jpg so I think It's their official name
Correct me if I was wrong, I don't really into Anime things :P
Added Ending to tag. and fixed capital to small letter. but i don't want to fix title. it's tv size song, but TV Size is not included in Title. and because of Rule. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria :arrow: Metadata 4th sentence.
  1. Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
[Easy]
00:25:925 (1) - Add clap on tail? I hear drum sound there fixed!
00:56:342 (1,2) - You can blanket It neater, move (1) to x:96 y:120 and the tail node is x:68 y:200 http://puu.sh/7zvwE.jpg fixed!
01:03:842 (2) - Change into 1/1 slider instead with reverse? somehow It does not sound right for me no :P
01:05:509 (1) - Move down a bit to prevent touching the previous slider 01:03:842 (2) - fixed!

[Normal]
00:17:175 (1) - I think the space between the previous circle is too far, and I think you can make them 00:15:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - a better star shape, like this http://puu.sh/7zyYn.jpg or you can copy paste this code below instead
396,236,15509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
496,188,15925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,84,16342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,76,16759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,176,17175,6,0,B|232:224|152:132|84:180,2,220,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:19:259 (2) - Ctrl+J then Ctrl+< and make something like this http://puu.sh/7zzox.jpg for better flow and then move this 00:20:092 (3) - to somewhere to make the DS back to 1.00
00:22:800 (4,1) - You can blanket them better imo
00:26:342 (2,3) - Unstack them? is hard to read since It was Normal diff
00:35:509 (3,4) - Same as above, player can confuse since the previous stack is notes on blue and white tick now is on red and white tick, so I sugest to prevent any stack between notes, so players can read the rhythm better
00:52:800 (2,3) - Unstack?
00:57:592 (4,5) - Bad flow and the space between (4) to (5) is too far, so I sugest to Ctrl+G (5) for reduce space between them and make the flow better
01:01:134 (3,4) - Unstack?

note location mod is fixed. and I don't want to change about Stacking mod.

[Insane]
00:06:550 (1) - 00:06:620 (2) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto, then add whistle no :P
00:06:689 (3) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto no :P
00:06:759 (4) - Set the sampleset from Drum to Auto on head, Delete whistle then add clap instead no :P
00:12:592 (4) - Finish too loud no,i heard sound like "Ching~"
00:39:675 (6) - Delete NC? no :P

[]
Such a funny and cute song, here star~
Thanks mod!
TKS
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

TKSalt wrote:

thank you for waiting!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ougaku.rar
ありがと!
(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ~♡
lolia

TaMul wrote:

카리아님께서 그부분 힛사 쓰실 때 소프트 5로 쓰셨던데 거기 슬라이더틱을 제가 쓰고있어서 그부분 지적한거에요
소프트 3으로 고쳤으니까 재 다운하시고 확인해주세요 ^^ 아하..ㅋㅋㅋ 재다운을 안해놔서 몰랐었네요 ㅋㅋ
+하드 난이도 하나 더 추가 ;)

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
00:09:884 - Add circle there? for better rhythm I want the blank here,,sorry
00:12:488 - Add circle there? for better rhythm Current rhythm is better to me, sorry
00:12:592 (3) - Delete finish on head? It's too loud and not fit imo Well, here is finish in music,,
00:13:842 (7) - NC? This need not NC IMO, sorry
00:37:800 (3,4) - Delete finish on both of them? I don't know why,,Sorry
00:41:967 (1) - Add whistle on head? About whistle, I followed the only music almost. Sorry
00:56:550 (4) - Add whistle on head? ^
00:58:009 (3) - 00:59:675 (3) - Add whistle on repeat? ^
01:01:550 (3) - Add whistle? ^
01:04:884 (2) - Add whistle? ^
01:06:342 (3) - 01:09:467 (3) - Add whistle on tail? ^
01:14:467 (2) - Add whistle on tail? ^
01:18:217 (4) - Add whistle on head? ^
01:18:321 - Change sample sound on green line from S:C7 to S:C5? Sure
01:19:467 (3) - Add whistle on tail? Same reason as above
Thanks for modding~

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Title:Shinsekai Koukyougaku
TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
o('-'o) Updated! (o'-')o
P o M u T a
Hi!

[General]
  1. add tag 'ed'
  2. Sourse is 'キルラキル' move tag'KILL la KILL' better imo. But, if you not accept, try add tag 'キルラキル'
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:842 (3) - add whistle slider head?
  2. 01:14:467 (3) - this is vocal rythm sure? i think take drum sound more easily and fit this diff imo.
  3. 01:23:842 (2) - add finish . i can hear symbals.
[Normal]
  1. Normal AR6... i don't recommend. i suggest 5.
  2. 00:17:175 (1) - move (x:304 y:107). 1.06x → 1.00 more good DS imo.
  3. 00:26:342 (2,3) - use 1/4 rhythm here... remove (3) and (2) is 1/1 slider better imo.
  4. 00:34:675 (2) - add whistle slider head?
  5. 00:37:175 (1,2) - 1/4 rhythm again here..
  6. 00:46:342 (4) - add finish.
  7. 00:55:509 (1) - add finish slider head.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:175 (1) - symbal part. add finish slider head.
  2. 00:12:592 (2) - try more beautiful blanket. end point move (x:279 y:54)
  3. 00:25:509 (2) - add finish slider reverse.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:175 (1) - symbal part. add finish slider head.
  2. 00:12:592 (2) - try more beautiful blanket. end point move (x:279 y:54)
  3. 00:25:509 (2) - add finish slider reverse.
[Karia's Hard]

  • Nothing.

[Insane]
  1. 00:45:925 (2) - i don't like touch HP bar.
[TKSalt's Oni]
  1. 00:45:509 (225) - このスライダーエンドは1/16を使用してるみたいだけど、00:46:342 - ここを普通にエンドにしてみてはどうかな?曖昧なので何とも言えませんorz
good luck!!!
TKS

P o M u T a wrote:

Hi!
[TKSalt's Oni]
  1. 00:45:509 (225) - このスライダーエンドは1/16を使用してるみたいだけど、00:46:342 - ここを普通にエンドにしてみてはどうかな?曖昧なので何とも言えませんorz
good luck!!!
意図的なものです。
00:46:342 - を終点にした場合、通常9打となるスライダーがバグ(仕様)で8打になるので1/16で伸ばしてます(;_;)

00:46:342 - end : http://puu.sh/7Bele.jpg
00:46:368 - end : http://puu.sh/7BemT.jpg

ご指摘ありがとうございます!!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

P o M u T a wrote:

Hi!

[General]
  1. add tag 'ed' added!
  2. Sourse is 'キルラキル' move tag'KILL la KILL' better imo. But, if you not accept, try add tag 'キルラキル' I added it on tag
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:842 (3) - add whistle slider head? oh forgot xD
  2. 01:14:467 (3) - this is vocal rythm sure? i think take drum sound more easily and fit this diff imo. think about that.. :P
  3. 01:23:842 (2) - add finish . i can hear symbals.added!
[Normal]
  1. Normal AR6... i don't recommend. i suggest 5. ok, got it!
  2. 00:17:175 (1) - move (x:304 y:107). 1.06x → 1.00 more good DS imo. .....ok!
  3. 00:26:342 (2,3) - use 1/4 rhythm here... remove (3) and (2) is 1/1 slider better imo. think about that.. :P
  4. 00:34:675 (2) - add whistle slider head? oh, added!
  5. 00:37:175 (1,2) - 1/4 rhythm again here..i thought it's not bad, too. consider it!
  6. 00:46:342 (4) - add finish.oh, added!
  7. 00:55:509 (1) - add finish slider head.oh, added!
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:175 (1) - symbal part. add finish slider head. oh, added!
  2. 00:12:592 (2) - try more beautiful blanket. end point move (x:279 y:54) ok, fixed!
  3. 00:25:509 (2) - add finish slider reverse. ok, fixed!
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:925 (2) - i don't like touch HP bar.
[/list]

good luck!!!
Thanks mod! ;)
Rakuen
Hi~

M4M request~
My map: Rurutia - Shinai

[General]
Tag are different with Karia's Hard

[Easy]
00:03:842 (1) - Scale to 0.994 for perfect symmetry
00:05:925 (2,1) - Move to X:115 Y:178 for blanket (include (1) together)
00:20:509 (1) - The point of the tail move to X:330 Y:296
00:22:175 (2) - ^ Apply mirror for that
00:29:675 (4) - X:154 Y:245 (blanket)
00:30:509 (1) - ^ X:209 Y:175
00:42:175 (3) - Point of the slider move to X:176 Y:139 (better blanket)
00:52:800 (2,3) - Try slider cuz this is Easy diff :3
01:10:092 (2) - Scale to 0.995
01:12:592 (1,2) - Try perfect blanket here

[Normal]
00:03:842 (1) - Scale to 0.997
00:23:425 - Missing clap
^ 00:22:800 - Try this pattern
00:26:759 (3) - This is a little hard, try this?
00:37:175 (1,2,3) - If want to keep the pattern, try to unstack it like:
00:58:217 (5) - Missed DS here tho, I prefer full DS for normal if possible
00:58:217 (5,1) - Try this blanket:

[Hard]
00:05:613 - Add a note, feels better for leading from 00:04:988 (4,5) - and the previous music
00:36:134 (2,3,4,5) - Move to X:229 Y:115 (blanket)
00:37:384 (1,2,3,4,1) - X:167 Y:232
00:39:675 (3) - Try same shape as 00:39:259 (2) - ? Makes it feel more balanced
00:41:342 (3) - Move the tail 1 tiny grid to the left coz not straight with 00:40:509 (1,2) -
00:44:675 (3) - X:48 Y:218
00:44:884 (4) - X:38 Y:292
00:56:967 (1) - Try Ctrl+G, looks fun!
00:56:342 (3) - Move tail to X:288 Y:40
01:02:175 (1) - Try perfect blanket with 01:01:550 (4) -
01:15:092 (3) - X:39 Y:262
01:17:592 (6) - X:490 Y:140
01:18:425 (2) - X:133 Y:93
01:18:842 (1) - X:207 Y:224

[Karia's Hard]
00:09:884 - Add a circle, maybe try to place at right side of 00:10:092 (5) -
00:29:259 (2) - Move the tail by 1 tiny grid up to match straight line with 00:28:842 (1) -
00:32:800 - Add a note here and place at here:
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - Can try this pattern to make the number visible
01:12:592 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:22:592 (2,3,4,5) - Try something like this (rotate 15* clockwise):
Image
[img]http://puu.sh/7DMOc.jpg/img]

[Insane]
AR9 is too fast, try AR8 since note density isn't very close and less big jumps
00:03:842 (1) - X:36 Y:355
00:05:613 - Add circle, fits the rhythm too!
00:06:446 - ^ Insane!
00:48:425 (4) - X:236 Y:228 to stack on 00:46:967 (6) - and adjust the blanket like this:
01:12:175 (1) - Try this blanket:
01:23:634 (2,1) - Blanket:

Omg...can't find anymore...
I'll throw a star!

Good luck on ranking it >w<
lolia

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Tag are different with Karia's Hard

[Karia's Hard]
00:09:884 - Add a circle, maybe try to place at right side of 00:10:092 (5) - I want to keep this, sorry
00:29:259 (2) - Move the tail by 1 tiny grid up to match straight line with 00:28:842 (1) - fixed
00:32:800 - Add a note here and place at here: Same, I want to keep this,,
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - Can try this pattern to make the number visible Keep current pattern for DS. And well...the visible number in this pattern is unmeaning IMO. Sorry
01:12:592 (2) - Ctrl+G Keep current one for DS and current flow is better IMO, sorry
01:22:592 (2,3,4,5) - Try something like this (rotate 15* clockwise): fixed in myself
Image
[img]http://puu.sh/7DMOc.jpg/img]

Good luck on ranking it >w<
Thanks for modding~

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

M4M request~
My map: Rurutia - Shinai

[General]
Tag are different with Karia's Hard

[Easy]
00:03:842 (1) - Scale to 0.994 for perfect symmetry
00:05:925 (2,1) - Move to X:115 Y:178 for blanket (include (1) together)
00:20:509 (1) - The point of the tail move to X:330 Y:296
00:22:175 (2) - ^ Apply mirror for that
00:29:675 (4) - X:154 Y:245 (blanket)
00:30:509 (1) - ^ X:209 Y:175
00:42:175 (3) - Point of the slider move to X:176 Y:139 (better blanket)
00:52:800 (2,3) - Try slider cuz this is Easy diff :3
01:10:092 (2) - Scale to 0.995
01:12:592 (1,2) - Try perfect blanket here

[Normal]
00:03:842 (1) - Scale to 0.997
00:23:425 - Missing clap
^ 00:22:800 - Try this pattern
00:26:759 (3) - This is a little hard, try this?
00:37:175 (1,2,3) - If want to keep the pattern, try to unstack it like:
00:58:217 (5) - Missed DS here tho, I prefer full DS for normal if possible
00:58:217 (5,1) - Try this blanket:

[Hard]
00:05:613 - Add a note, feels better for leading from 00:04:988 (4,5) - and the previous music
00:36:134 (2,3,4,5) - Move to X:229 Y:115 (blanket)
00:37:384 (1,2,3,4,1) - X:167 Y:232
00:39:675 (3) - Try same shape as 00:39:259 (2) - ? Makes it feel more balanced
00:41:342 (3) - Move the tail 1 tiny grid to the left coz not straight with 00:40:509 (1,2) -
00:44:675 (3) - X:48 Y:218
00:44:884 (4) - X:38 Y:292
00:56:967 (1) - Try Ctrl+G, looks fun!
00:56:342 (3) - Move tail to X:288 Y:40
01:02:175 (1) - Try perfect blanket with 01:01:550 (4) -
01:15:092 (3) - X:39 Y:262
01:17:592 (6) - X:490 Y:140
01:18:425 (2) - X:133 Y:93
01:18:842 (1) - X:207 Y:224

[Insane]
AR9 is too fast, try AR8 since note density isn't very close and less big jumps
00:03:842 (1) - X:36 Y:355
00:05:613 - Add circle, fits the rhythm too!
00:06:446 - ^ Insane!
00:48:425 (4) - X:236 Y:228 to stack on 00:46:967 (6) - and adjust the blanket like this:
01:12:175 (1) - Try this blanket:
01:23:634 (2,1) - Blanket:

Omg...can't find anymore...
I'll throw a star!

Good luck on ranking it >w<
almost fixed!
┗( ̄▽ ̄ㆀ)┓=33
@Karia:Updated!
Leader
M4M, sorry for being late but I had serious troubles and I had to delay

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - Well, nothing really wrong with this slider, but I just point its shape out, it looks a bit too curvy and compressed, would be better if you make the curve smoother and cleaner
  2. 00:16:342 (2) - Actually, would be better if you split this slider into two different ones, since the sound in 00:17:175 - really reminds to a new slider. The best solution would be a 1/1 + 2/1 sliders instead of a single slider (Anyway, the 00:14:675 (1,2) - pattern doesn't look so great, why these straight long sliders? You should use curved as you mostly did in the entire difficulty)
  3. 00:30:509 (1,2) - The second slider isn't really followed by music and looks added there just to fill the break between 00:30:509 (1,3) - . The best idea would be to start a 2/1 slider with repeat from 00:31:342 - (00:30:509 (1) - will be shortened to 1/1), since vocals are really strong there and would fit more in a slider's head than in a tail
  4. 00:41:342 (2,3) - The blanket here could be better ;w;
  5. 00:47:592 - / 00:48:425 - Personal opinion: I highly suggest to add notes here, new players will catch the rhtyhm immediately and will be great to play!
  6. 00:49:675 (2) - You could bend on the other side to make the flow easier to understand
  7. 01:14:467 (3) - A bit hard to understand, you should just follow the instrument and make it start and end on white ticks (Vocals will start on 01:14:259 - anyway, so you could just fix the beginning of this slider)
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:092 - You could add a beat here, nothing wrong with it.
  2. 00:22:800 (4,1) - Blanket could be made better here!
  3. 00:36:342 (4) - Well, it would be better if you stack only 1/4 circles under slider's tail and move the 1/2 circles elsewhere in order to be consistent. There are some in the whole diff, remember to check all of them Probably not, since you updated the map when I was modding this diff, but a further check doesn't hurt
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:175 (1,2) - Not so great since they're not similar, that's a pity but I'd rather change their shapes
  2. 00:51:134 (2) - Can't you avoid this overlap?
  3. 01:08:738 (4) - Personally, I'd move it downwards, just my opinion though :3
  4. 01:10:925 (2) - In order to avoid so many sliders going in this part, you can replace this kickslider into a triplet, doesn't matter if stacked or not, would play well since it's between two sliders
  5. 01:16:134 (2) - Why don't you try a straight one slider? This fake symmetry with 01:15:509 (1) - bothers me a little. Just like this:
  6. 01:19:467 (2) - x:36 y:88 should be the correct position to make a symmetric pattern, fix if it wasn't intended.
  7. 01:23:842 (1) - Since the most relevant sound you can hear in this slider currently stands on the repeat (vocals), you could emphasize it by splitting this slider into a circle + a 1/1 slider starting from 01:24:259 - (well, you have to apply the same on 00:25:509 (2) - )
  8. 01:24:988 (2,3) - Actuallly, it plays a bit weird ;w;
[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:09:675 (4,5) - Weird stack since the music keep going on the same level as before, consider adding a note between them
  2. 00:56:342 (3,4) - Why don't you swap them? Really sounds better and follows the song correctly. You can also use this pattern, if you like it:
  3. 01:11:550 (5) - You can simply replace this slider with two circles, a 4 notes stream doesn't hurt anyone, it's a [Hard] diff, afterall.
[Insane]

  • Please, consider changing current AR to 8. This is just 144bpm and AR9 doesn't even flow properly, don't get easily distracted by the fact that higher AR usually flows better (personally, anything below 180bpm and without a specific mapping style, should have AR<9, unless it's really intended and the song is full of 1/4 notes, like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/183460). I believe AR8 would improve the whole map, even if it's already on a high-level. You can surely keep OD8 for a nice challenge.
  1. 00:06:550 (1,2,3) - I would follow the 1/4 rhythm, more intuitive than the 1/6 one. However, it's your choice and this also plays fine, I am just suggesting!
  2. 00:49:467 (2) - This slider would look better if you move the white points closer to the middle of the slider, just look a bit awful now..
  3. 01:11:342 (1,2,3,4) - Honestly, there's no need to make such big jumps since the music doesn't suggest anything strong enough to fill these sliders jumps. Making something a bit harder than what you or Karia did in your respective Hards would be nicer
  4. 01:18:634 (5,6) - Uh.. they really look awkward to me, it just may be my perspective of aesthetic or something else, but I'd stack them on the next slider (I'm referring to 01:20:300 (4,5) - and 01:21:342 (3,4) - as well)
  5. 01:25:300 (6) - You should try to make the last slider flow like the previous stream. Here's my try, I think it just plays and looks better than the current one:
Great job, good luck!
lolia

Leader wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:09:675 (4,5) - Weird stack since the music keep going on the same level as before, consider adding a note between them Many moddings about this,,fixed ;w;
  2. 00:56:342 (3,4) - Why don't you swap them? Really sounds better and follows the song correctly. You can also use this pattern, if you like it: fixed
  3. 01:11:550 (5) - You can simply replace this slider with two circles, a 4 notes stream doesn't hurt anyone, it's a [Hard] diff, afterall. Good idea but I want to keep the current slider. Sorry
Great job, good luck!
Thanks for modding~

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Version:Karia's Hard
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Leader wrote:

M4M, sorry for being late but I had serious troubles and I had to delay

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - Well, nothing really wrong with this slider, but I just point its shape out, it looks a bit too curvy and compressed, would be better if you make the curve smoother and cleaner
  2. 00:16:342 (2) - Actually, would be better if you split this slider into two different ones, since the sound in 00:17:175 - really reminds to a new slider. The best solution would be a 1/1 + 2/1 sliders instead of a single slider (Anyway, the 00:14:675 (1,2) - pattern doesn't look so great, why these straight long sliders? You should use curved as you mostly did in the entire difficulty)
  3. 00:30:509 (1,2) - The second slider isn't really followed by music and looks added there just to fill the break between 00:30:509 (1,3) - . The best idea would be to start a 2/1 slider with repeat from 00:31:342 - (00:30:509 (1) - will be shortened to 1/1), since vocals are really strong there and would fit more in a slider's head than in a tail
  4. 00:41:342 (2,3) - The blanket here could be better ;w;
  5. 00:47:592 - / 00:48:425 - Personal opinion: I highly suggest to add notes here, new players will catch the rhtyhm immediately and will be great to play!
  6. 00:49:675 (2) - You could bend on the other side to make the flow easier to understand
  7. 01:14:467 (3) - A bit hard to understand, you should just follow the instrument and make it start and end on white ticks (Vocals will start on 01:14:259 - anyway, so you could just fix the beginning of this slider)
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:092 - You could add a beat here, nothing wrong with it.
  2. 00:22:800 (4,1) - Blanket could be made better here!
  3. 00:36:342 (4) - Well, it would be better if you stack only 1/4 circles under slider's tail and move the 1/2 circles elsewhere in order to be consistent. There are some in the whole diff, remember to check all of them Probably not, since you updated the map when I was modding this diff, but a further check doesn't hurt
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:175 (1,2) - Not so great since they're not similar, that's a pity but I'd rather change their shapes
  2. 00:51:134 (2) - Can't you avoid this overlap?
  3. 01:08:738 (4) - Personally, I'd move it downwards, just my opinion though :3
  4. 01:10:925 (2) - In order to avoid so many sliders going in this part, you can replace this kickslider into a triplet, doesn't matter if stacked or not, would play well since it's between two sliders
  5. 01:16:134 (2) - Why don't you try a straight one slider? This fake symmetry with 01:15:509 (1) - bothers me a little. Just like this:
  6. 01:19:467 (2) - x:36 y:88 should be the correct position to make a symmetric pattern, fix if it wasn't intended.
  7. 01:23:842 (1) - Since the most relevant sound you can hear in this slider currently stands on the repeat (vocals), you could emphasize it by splitting this slider into a circle + a 1/1 slider starting from 01:24:259 - (well, you have to apply the same on 00:25:509 (2) - )
  8. 01:24:988 (2,3) - Actuallly, it plays a bit weird ;w;
[Insane]

  • Please, consider changing current AR to 8. This is just 144bpm and AR9 doesn't even flow properly, don't get easily distracted by the fact that higher AR usually flows better (personally, anything below 180bpm and without a specific mapping style, should have AR<9, unless it's really intended and the song is full of 1/4 notes, like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/183460). I believe AR8 would improve the whole map, even if it's already on a high-level. You can surely keep OD8 for a nice challenge.
  1. 00:06:550 (1,2,3) - I would follow the 1/4 rhythm, more intuitive than the 1/6 one. However, it's your choice and this also plays fine, I am just suggesting!
  2. 00:49:467 (2) - This slider would look better if you move the white points closer to the middle of the slider, just look a bit awful now..
  3. 01:11:342 (1,2,3,4) - Honestly, there's no need to make such big jumps since the music doesn't suggest anything strong enough to fill these sliders jumps. Making something a bit harder than what you or Karia did in your respective Hards would be nicer
  4. 01:18:634 (5,6) - Uh.. they really look awkward to me, it just may be my perspective of aesthetic or something else, but I'd stack them on the next slider (I'm referring to 01:20:300 (4,5) - and 01:21:342 (3,4) - as well)
  5. 01:25:300 (6) - You should try to make the last slider flow like the previous stream. Here's my try, I think it just plays and looks better than the current one:
Great job, good luck!
Thanks mod!
without fixing rhythm and some stacking, almost fixed!
DakeDekaane
Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod :)

[General]
Nothing looks wrong.

[Insane]
00:03:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't play bad, but it somehow breaks your spacing consistency you used for previous patterns, maybe fix it?
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/6 isn't very intuitive, better keeping the 1/4.
00:26:134 (2,3) - Maybe use a rhythm like this instead, this 3/4 spacing could be a bit tricky.

00:43:425 (5,6,1) - The circle there kills a bit the flow given by the first slider, maybe make this a bit smooth?
01:00:092 (6,7,1) - ^
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - ^
01:23:634 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider here, the sound in 01:23:842 feels a bit weird being ignored.

[Karia's Hard]
00:18:842 (1) - I really don't get what are you following with this slider, try something like this?

01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - This is a bit harsh imo, I agree with Leader, a 5-note stream here would fit better with the build-up in the music.

[Hard]
00:00:821 (2) - This drum sample doesn't fit too much here, remove it, you don't have it in Insane. This applies for similar spots when you used the drum sample.
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - Maybe use something like this, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky here.

00:27:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe align the triple, it'd look better.
00:28:842 (1) - Ctrl+G, improves the flow :3
00:38:425 (2,1) - Why don't you use a slider-circle-slider pattern, it'd fit better, the custom tick is a bit misleading imo.
00:46:550 (4,5,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
00:55:509 (1) - Remove NC?
00:55:925 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit more here imo.
01:06:342 (1) - Remove NC.
01:08:425 (3,4,1) - Maybe align the triple.
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
01:24:988 (2,3) - I'd suggest to use the 1/4 slider for the 4 notes, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky so a circle wouldn't be hit accurately.

[Normal]
The spot where you begin the diff feels a bit weird as it's in the middle of the intro, I'd suggest you to begin the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:35:509 (3) - I'd suggest to make this a 1/1 slider, it'd fit with vocals better, or using 2 circles in 1/1, that works too.
00:37:175 (1) - whoa, I' really suggest you to end this in the red tick, this would throw off many players, also this would fit better with vocals.
00:51:550 (5) - This slider feels a bit off, maybe try a rhythm like this, it's more intuitive imo, you could add a reverse to the last slider.


[Easy]
Same suggestion about beginning the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:53:425 (3,1) - I'd suggest you to delete this circle and beginning the spinner here. This spinner would end in 00:54:675. Then add a note in 00:55:509. This way would play better as the player would hit along with the beginning of the kiai, which feels good :)
01:23:425 (6) - It looks like you forgot a NC here, also you should try a rhythm like this, fits better with vocals.


[TK's Muzukashii]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a bit confusing ;~; Maybe try something like this? This goes for the patterns after this too.

00:39:884 (142) - Remove this, the drums are only 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (150) - It's better to start the spinner along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the spinner here.
00:45:300 (9) - As above. Aditionally, you could move 00:44:884 (7) 1/2 beat forward to fit vocals more in this part.

[TK's Oni]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This doesn't follow the song nicely ;~; Try this. This goes for the next similart parts too.

00:17:800 (91) - Maybe put a don here, it plays better imo.
00:26:550 (132) - Maybe remove, it'd be better to strictly follow drums in this part, 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (211) - It's better to start the slider along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the slider here.
00:45:300 (224) - ^

Nice job TK-sama, but please fix at least the start and the spinners/sliders ;~;

That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
lolia

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
00:18:842 (1) - I really don't get what are you following with this slider, try something like this? Well, current rhythm is better IMO,,I followed the just music..Sorry

01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - This is a bit harsh imo, I agree with Leader, a 5-note stream here would fit better with the build-up in the music. I prefer the current slider, sorry

That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
Thanks for modding~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod :) lol Thank you so Much!!

[General]
Nothing looks wrong.

[Insane]
00:03:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't play bad, but it somehow breaks your spacing consistency you used for previous patterns, maybe fix it? it's intention. :P
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/6 isn't very intuitive, better keeping the 1/4. consider it. but i want to keep to 1/6
00:26:134 (2,3) - Maybe use a rhythm like this instead, this 3/4 spacing could be a bit tricky. good, fixed

00:43:425 (5,6,1) - The circle there kills a bit the flow given by the first slider, maybe make this a bit smooth?
01:00:092 (6,7,1) - ^
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - ^ no, sorry :P
01:23:634 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider here, the sound in 01:23:842 feels a bit weird being ignored. ok,fixed!

[Hard]
00:00:821 (2) - This drum sample doesn't fit too much here, remove it, you don't have it in Insane. This applies for similar spots when you used the drum sample. no,i want to add drum sound like staccato. and added drum sound in Insane,too.
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - Maybe use something like this, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky here. Not bad sound. but i want to keep.i consider it.

00:27:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe align the triple, it'd look better. no,sorry. :P
00:28:842 (1) - Ctrl+G, improves the flow :3 fixed!
00:38:425 (2,1) - Why don't you use a slider-circle-slider pattern, it'd fit better, the custom tick is a bit misleading imo. consider it. not bad!
00:46:550 (4,5,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth? no, sorry :P
00:55:509 (1) - Remove NC? no
00:55:925 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit more here imo. no vocal here xD
01:06:342 (1) - Remove NC. ok
01:08:425 (3,4,1) - Maybe align the triple. hmm..no!
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth? little fixed!
01:24:988 (2,3) - I'd suggest to use the 1/4 slider for the 4 notes, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky so a circle wouldn't be hit accurately. using only 1/4 slider is little constant. so i swaped it

[Normal]
The spot where you begin the diff feels a bit weird as it's in the middle of the intro, I'd suggest you to begin the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175. fixed!
00:35:509 (3) - I'd suggest to make this a 1/1 slider, it'd fit with vocals better, or using 2 circles in 1/1, that works too. ok,fixed to 2 circles!
00:37:175 (1) - whoa, I' really suggest you to end this in the red tick, this would throw off many players, also this would fit better with vocals. no,i want to follow drum sound. :p
00:51:550 (5) - This slider feels a bit off, maybe try a rhythm like this, it's more intuitive imo, you could add a reverse to the last slider. i thought it is not bad. my rhythm is good! suggestion thanks!


[Easy]
Same suggestion about beginning the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175. ok. add spin starting 00:00:509
00:53:425 (3,1) - I'd suggest you to delete this circle and beginning the spinner here. This spinner would end in 00:54:675. Then add a note in 00:55:509. This way would play better as the player would hit along with the beginning of the kiai, which feels good :) not bad sound. but i followed guiter sound. and after spinner,hit circle is so close.
01:23:425 (6) - It looks like you forgot a NC here, also you should try a rhythm like this, fits better with vocals. good, fixed!


That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
Thanks mod! (づ'0')づ
TKS

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod :)
[TK's Muzukashii]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a bit confusing ;~; Maybe try something like this? This goes for the patterns after this too. - i following the hi-hat drum sound. but that is a bit confusing pattern indeed. i deleted some notes.

00:39:884 (142) - Remove this, the drums are only 2 hits in 1/4. - youre right. but i have used the simple triplet intentionally for Muzukashii.
00:41:967 (150) - It's better to start the spinner along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the spinner here. - ummnnnn, i dont think so. i prefer that the spinner and slider is start from the 1/1 line.
00:45:300 (9) - As above. Aditionally, you could move 00:44:884 (7) 1/2 beat forward to fit vocals more in this part.

[TK's Oni]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This doesn't follow the song nicely ;~; Try this. This goes for the next similart parts too. - i have improved it thanks to your great idea!

00:17:800 (91) - Maybe put a don here, it plays better imo. - fixed.
00:26:550 (132) - Maybe remove, it'd be better to strictly follow drums in this part, 2 hits in 1/4. - kept. i want to use a triplet here.
00:41:967 (211) - It's better to start the slider along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the slider here. - same reason as the Muzu. i prefer the slider of simple rhythm.
00:45:300 (224) - ^

Nice job TK-sama, but please fix at least the start and the spinners/sliders ;~; - gomen nasai ;~;

That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
thanks for mod! (灬ºωº灬)
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ougaku.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated! (づ'0')づ
Neta
안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[General]
  1. 하드만 와이드 스크린 서폿 체크 되있습니다!
[Easy]
  1. 01:13:009 (2) - 480, 276 으로 옮겨주세요 ( 블랭킷 )
  2. 으.. 딱히 잡을게 없네요

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:634 (1) - 이거도 184, 16 으로 하시면 00:22:800 (4) 하고 배치가 잘 맞을꺼같네요
  2. 01:07:592 (2) - 376 320 으로 옮겨보세요. 지금 prev 랑 next랑 0.02 차이나는데 옮기시면 거리가 같아질듯 하네요
  3. 01:20:509 (3) - 모양새가 1번하고 약간 안맞는 느낌인데 슬라이더 중앙 포인트를 280, 268 으로 옮겨보세요!

[Hard]
  1. 01:17:071 (4) - 모양 약간 이상한 느낌인데 424 , 160 추천드려요~ 만약 고치셧다면 뒤쪽2개 노트 디스턴스 약간 고치시면됨
  2. 01:24:988 (2,3) - 플레이 할때 약간 이상한 느낌인데 차라리 3번을 지우고 2번 슬라를 한번더 반복하게 하는게 어떨까 싶네요
[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC?

[Insane]
  1. 딱히 찾을수가 없네요

맵 너무 잘만드셧음 ㅠㅠ

별 하나 드리고 갈게요 도움은 별로 못됬네요
HabiHolic
[Easy]

00:08:425 - 노트를 추가하시는게 어떠신가요 없으니까 허전하기도 하네요
00:19:259 - 휘슬 추가

[Normal]

서클크기 왜 작나요 이지랑 똑같은크기가 좋을것같아요

00:26:654 (3) - 리듬 다르게 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아요
00:30:509 (1) - 잘 감싸지지 않않네요

00:32:175 (3) - 위에꺼 수정시 대칭되게 똑같은 모양으로.. 복붙해주세요
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이런 리듬이 왜 있는지 모르겠네요 리듬 쉽게 바꾸세여
00:42:800 (4) - 제안입니다

[Hard]

00:55:509 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
00:58:425 (4) - ctri + g?
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 그냥 반복슬라로 부탁드립니다.
01:13:425 (5) - ctri + g

[Karia's Hard]

Fine~

good luck
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[General]
  1. 하드만 와이드 스크린 서폿 체크 되있습니다!
[Easy]
  1. 01:13:009 (2) - 480, 276 으로 옮겨주세요 ( 블랭킷 )
  2. 으.. 딱히 잡을게 없네요

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:634 (1) - 이거도 184, 16 으로 하시면 00:22:800 (4) 하고 배치가 잘 맞을꺼같네요
  2. 01:07:592 (2) - 376 320 으로 옮겨보세요. 지금 prev 랑 next랑 0.02 차이나는데 옮기시면 거리가 같아질듯 하네요
  3. 01:20:509 (3) - 모양새가 1번하고 약간 안맞는 느낌인데 슬라이더 중앙 포인트를 280, 268 으로 옮겨보세요!

[Hard]
  1. 01:17:071 (4) - 모양 약간 이상한 느낌인데 424 , 160 추천드려요~ 만약 고치셧다면 뒤쪽2개 노트 디스턴스 약간 고치시면됨
  2. 01:24:988 (2,3) - 플레이 할때 약간 이상한 느낌인데 차라리 3번을 지우고 2번 슬라를 한번더 반복하게 하는게 어떨까 싶네요
[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC?

[Insane]
  1. 딱히 찾을수가 없네요

맵 너무 잘만드셧음 ㅠㅠ

별 하나 드리고 갈게요 도움은 별로 못됬네요
하드 배치 모딩 빼고 수정!
Thanks!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

[Easy]

00:08:425 - 노트를 추가하시는게 어떠신가요 없으니까 허전하기도 하네요 NO
00:19:259 - 휘슬 추가 2번 노트에 휘슬 들어가있는데요? :?

[Normal]

서클크기 왜 작나요 이지랑 똑같은크기가 좋을것같아요 제 마음!

00:26:654 (3) - 리듬 다르게 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아요 제 마음!
00:30:509 (1) - 잘 감싸지지 않않네요 수정!

00:32:175 (3) - 위에꺼 수정시 대칭되게 똑같은 모양으로.. 복붙해주세요 수정!
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이런 리듬이 왜 있는지 모르겠네요 리듬 쉽게 바꾸세여 제 마음이고요, 드럼 사운드있잖아요
00:42:800 (4) - 제안입니다 패스

[Hard]

00:55:509 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제 전 모딩에서도 제안받은 사항인데, 일단 패스함
00:58:425 (4) - ctri + g? 패스
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 그냥 반복슬라로 부탁드립니다. 패스
01:13:425 (5) - ctri + g 패스

[Karia's Hard]

Fine~

good luck
Cancel
M4M~

[General]
  1. Maybe usethisas your background?
[Easy]

  1. 00:10:509 (1) - Make it a good blanket
Thats it really. Nice diff

[Normal]

  1. 00:23:634 (1) - The whistle sounds off. Maybe place a custom slidertick on the first slidertick?
  2. 00:26:654 (3) - Move ending point to x=348 y=132
  3. 00:28:009 (2,4) - Maybe curve these two sliders, so that 00:29:675 (4) - fits with 00:30:509 (1) - ?
  4. 00:31:759 (2) - Move to x=256 y=232
  5. 00:33:842 (1) - Move to x=156 y=272
  6. 00:38:009 (2) - Doesn't really fit in a normal diff. Maybe extend 00:37:175 (1) - to this beat?
Nice diff, and I like the flow. But for a normal diff its kinda Hard...

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:592 (5) - Make a better blanket with the slider end of 00:16:759 (3) - .
  2. 00:39:675 (3) - Replace slider with a slightly adjusted 00:39:259 (2) - ?
Nice diff~!

[Karia's Hard]

  1. 00:10:925 (2) - Copy and paste this slider 00:10:509 (1) - in order to make it look better, and then Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G it.
  2. 00:20:509 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. Maybe clean it up a little?
  3. 00:40:925 (2) - Make this slider a good blanket with the slider end of 00:41:342 (3) - .
  4. 00:45:300 (1) - Make it a better blanket by bending the last two points a little.
  5. 00:48:842 (1) - ^
  6. 00:53:425 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 00:53:529 - and place a beat at 00:53:425 - ? The spinner just doesn't feel right where it currently is.
Nice diff, but needs work on the sliders and blankets.

[Insane]

Well, I couldn't play it, so its hard to make a mod about it. But it looks really nice ^^

Thats it! Good luck~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Cancel wrote:

M4M~

[General]
  1. Maybe usethisas your background?
[Easy]

  1. 00:10:509 (1) - Make it a good blanket checked!
Thats it really. Nice diff

[Normal]

  1. 00:23:634 (1) - The whistle sounds off. Maybe place a custom slidertick on the first slidertick? checked!
  2. 00:26:654 (3) - Move ending point to x=348 y=132 checked!
  3. 00:28:009 (2,4) - Maybe curve these two sliders, so that 00:29:675 (4) - fits with 00:30:509 (1) - ? checked!
  4. 00:31:759 (2) - Move to x=256 y=232 checked!
  5. 00:33:842 (1) - Move to x=156 y=272 checked!
  6. 00:38:009 (2) - Doesn't really fit in a normal diff. Maybe extend 00:37:175 (1) - to this beat? sorry, i followed drum sound.
Nice diff, and I like the flow. But for a normal diff its kinda Hard...

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:592 (5) - Make a better blanket with the slider end of 00:16:759 (3) - .checked!
  2. 00:39:675 (3) - Replace slider with a slightly adjusted 00:39:259 (2) - ?checked!
Nice diff~!

Thats it! Good luck~
Thanks! i'll check yours later :D
Cosmolade
Random Mod o3o)/

[General]

  1. So cute song! :)
  2. Add Mankanshoku Mako to the tags?
[Easy]

Good.

  1. 01:23:217 (1,2,3) - How about this?
[Normal]

Nice.
CS -1

  1. 00:37:175 (1) - End the slider in > 00:37:592
  2. 01:23:009 (1) - Move to > 01:23:217 - and end the slider in white tick.
  3. 01:24:259 (2) - Move to > 01:24:675 - end the slider in white tick, and add a circle in > 01:24:259
[Hard]

Wow, perfect for me :)


[Karia's Hard]

Nice! :)

  1. 01:23:217 (3) - Move further away? (only a suggestion, the diff is so beatiful, btw)
[Insane]
Cool (っ´▽`)っ

  1. 00:20:509 (1) - Very straight, maybe curving slightly the shape of the slider?
  2. 00:33:425 (1) - How about this?
  3. 00:49:467 (2) - Move to > 00:49:675 -end the slider in the white tick, and add a note in > 00:49:467
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that's all ( ouo)/
Good luck with the map! ٩( ᐛ )و
Ringating
from my bg modding queue:

Well, you have since found a new bg from the one you asked me to mod (which was probably a good idea, the bg you had at the time wasn't nearly as good as the one you now have), but i still went ahead and changed the old one.
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