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Sakakibara Yui - share the thoughts (OP size)

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regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
[M4M] p/3234635

[General]

I saw alot of watermelon form the video.

Suggest to use sample set normal like konei diff it's suit very well.

[Easy]

00:09:074 add note ?

00:11:438 (1) - maybe start at white beat instead of red line ( make a little few time for newbie to spin this )
00:23:256 (2,3) - change to this instead.

[xinely]

00:00:711 (1) - normal hit is a bit loud here consider soft instead and add whistle at end of slider

[Hard]

00:44:893 add note here fit with vocal
01:10:438 I felt add note here 'll suit song more even it's overmap.
00:59:438 - 00:59:620 you could made a triple here

[Insane]

00:46:802 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt whistle every note suit more than whistle and blank
00:54:438 add note here for complete stream?
00:58:711 (1) - move to 36 312 if you want more gameplay swap position with preview circle is ok.

[Konei]

00:09:438 (4) - change this to 1 beat slider end at 00:09:802
00:51:802 add note here ??
01:03:438 same as above ( i think it should be a note there. )
01:10:893 (2,3) - you can made a stream here (5 circles )
01:11:347 (1) - consider to change this to circle you can map here and use spiner afterward ( spinner end at 01:14:529 start 01:12:711)

sorry can't find much. :(

goodluck
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Thanks for the lot of mods! I can't reply to everything since it's too much, but if anyone here wants reasoning for anything, feel free to poke me.

Also for those parts that you want me to add notes at, I don't that as I want to follow the vocal and emphasize it by using breaks.

Thanks again!

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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: share the thoughts.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 46893
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:share the thoughts (OP size)
TitleUnicode:share the thoughts (OP size)
Artist:Sakakibara Yui
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Konei's Insane
Source:きみと僕との騎士の日々 -楽園のシュバリエ-
Tags:Kimi to Boku to no Kishi no Hibi -Rakuen no Chevalier- piriri! visual novel eroge theme song Project Knights Le chevalier no paradis KimiKishi きみきし Xinely Konei
BeatmapID:388441
BeatmapSetID:156688

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"kimikishi.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Kimikishi OP.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
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Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Number5 wrote:

From your Queue~
[Easy]
01:09:620 (2) - Out of screen Fixed.

[Hard]
01:03:074 (2,3) - Not good blanket?? ^

[Insane]
AR -1 Nope; I feel that it's okay as is.
Sorry... I can't pass it...

regenz wrote:

[M4M] p/3234635

[General]

I saw alot of watermelon form the video. huehuehue

Suggest to use sample set normal like konei diff it's suit very well. I feel that it'll conflict with how I hitsound my diffs, so uh. y

[Easy]

00:09:074 add note ? The instrument sound here is pretty faint, so...

00:11:438 (1) - maybe start at white beat instead of red line ( make a little few time for newbie to spin this ) Done.
00:23:256 (2,3) - change to this instead. I'd like to keep the rhythm here simple.

[Hard]

00:44:893 add note here fit with vocal j I... uh, just don't feel like it. The vocal is still pretty weak here, anyway.
01:10:438 I felt add note here 'll suit song more even it's overmap. It does, but I'm going to refrain from using too much 1/4s in a Hard diff.
00:59:438 - 00:59:620 you could made a triple here Done.

[Insane]

00:46:802 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt whistle every note suit more than whistle and blank It'll be way too loud.
00:54:438 add note here for complete stream? It feels overmapped and plays kinda weird here, so.
00:58:711 (1) - move to 36 312 if you want more gameplay swap position with preview circle is ok. But the instrument here is quite strong, IMO.

sorry can't find much. :(

goodluck
Thanks!
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya


From my Queues.

Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions.
Purple : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. You must change avi's name. plz change moe!! please!! >w< This is unrankable!! Sorry.
  2. umm...just only my problem? http://puu.sh/am9SO/6e44c79175.png = =
  3. Cheak out Widescreen GD diffs (normal , Insane)
  4. Tittle really OP size? I can't found it. If OP size to get into the title tag, please put it on. or change OP size ver.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:074 (4) - whistle on head , remove tail.
  2. 00:05:438 (5) - add whistle and 00:05:620 (1) - remove head W , add repect W
  3. 00:17:438 (1,2) - How about Start NC (2) Slider?
  4. 00:21:438 (4,1) - try Switch rhythm.
    SPOILER
  5. Would not it be nice to create a shape so?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:49:256 (4,1,2,3) - how about this rhythm?
    SPOILER
  7. 01:02:165 (4) - Does not overlap the reason for this? DS difference is not large. Nice if you can overlap. ( this 01:00:893 (4) - )

[Konei's Insane]
  1. 00:07:074 (5) - add circle. awkward. ' ㅅ'
  2. 00:32:529 (2) - cheak sanp. lol
  3. 00:57:984 (1,2) - start NC (2) , same here. 00:56:529 (4,1) -

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:620 (2) - move here. 00:03:802 (2) -
  2. 00:05:256 (2) - remove.
  3. 00:44:893 - add circle.

[Xinely's Normal]
  1. WHERE IS VIDEO !! I WANT TO SEE MOE VIDEO. >w<

[Easy]
  1. Fine. =w=b


GL~
Irreversible
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Irreversible
[General]

00:13:802 - Try to find a custom hitsound for this part, it would be really fitting. Maybe you can find it in Andrea's map.

[Easy]

00:01:438 (2) - I don't feel like this belongs to the old combo. Even if it's easy, I'd consider adding one.
00:34:711 (2) - Might not be a really good rhythm for beginner players, from what I can rememeber I tended to be really confused by red tick rhythm. Even though you wanted to support this strong beat here, would it be possible to stick to white tick rhythm? You could keep this stuff for normals.
01:03:620 (2) - Don't let the slider end on a big white one, since it's the strong beat here; sounds quite awkward to me too. Ctrl + G it with the next circle?

Well done.

[Xinely's Normal]

Are you sure you want to use NOISY whistles in the begin? Isn't it supposed to be calm?

00:02:711 (3) - You can improve the second curve for sure.
00:05:256 (2) - The fact that you land this slider on a strong beat is odd to me (again). I know you tried to suit the piano, but i don't think it's as outstanding to justify this slider - how about a simpler rhythm here? It's the begin after all.
00:39:984 (2,3,4) - i like that one!
01:05:438 (1) - That slider doesn't really suit the current mapping style, imo. How about something like http://puu.sh/anYgI.png ?

Not my favourite type of normal (sometimes a bit messy, because of the overlaps), but still neat rhythm.

[Hard]

00:23:256 (1,2,3,4) - Improve the transition of this, please. Follow the slider clearer. Example : http://puu.sh/anYsg.png
00:36:711 (3,4) - Same as above i assume, it doesn't really follow the curve you've created and so creates a bad flow.
00:46:347 (4) - Just to come up with another idea ; http://puu.sh/anYyW.png I think this suits a hard more, in order not to have a too big jump here. It might interrupt the flow. It's up to you.
01:08:347 (1) - #curve #2009, well you can improve it for sure.
01:10:165 (2,1,2) - I honestly dislike the flow here o.o Could you manage it to have 2 ctrl + g'd? (also moved 1 to the top then), and rearrange the last notes a bit?

It's okay. What I don't really approve of is things like 00:29:620 (2,3) - , because it doesn't play so good, for me at least. I prefer even spacing in a hard, normally :D but no need to change, obviously.

[Konei's Thoughts]

OLDTIMES YO

00:04:893 (2,3) - Would you mind to move them slightly? Like this: http://puu.sh/anYXA.png
00:28:165 (2,3,4) - Even though the spacing looks fine here, I would see an improvement in open the pattern a bit up, it looks quite clustered at the moment.
00:41:074 (2) - O_O I thought you're a background mapper? xD haha :3 How about mapping the background in this moment tho? The 1/2 notes sound pretty cool.
00:54:165 - I disapprove white tick triplets ><
01:10:529 (1,2) - How about a flowchange here? http://puu.sh/anZiZ.png instead of this, you could do something like this: http://puu.sh/anZlT.png (3 has increased spacing on purpose, to emphasize the end)

I like the flow a lot here!

[Insane]

00:08:347 (1) - hinsvarcurvepls
00:51:984 (4,5) - ..Hm.. I don't like how these notes are arranged, 5 seems very hidden at first, and I think the flow is really broken as well ... I can't come up with a suggestion because it would need some rearranging probably, could you rethink about it?
00:54:256 (2,3) - Why the triplet, doesn't really make sense, imo it's not clearly enough in the music.

the kiai seems a bit forced with its high SV, but it's ok after all.

Will see what happens after you've applied some stuff.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Irreversible wrote:

[Xinely's Normal]

Are you sure you want to use NOISY whistles in the begin? Isn't it supposed to be calm? changed to S:C8

00:02:711 (3) - You can improve the second curve for sure. well i can't find way to make it better
00:05:256 (2) - The fact that you land this slider on a strong beat is odd to me (again). I know you tried to suit the piano, but i don't think it's as outstanding to justify this slider - how about a simpler rhythm here? It's the begin after all. hmm the strong beat i mapped with slider's head here and use slider's tail for vocal sound only so i don't find a mistake here ;3;
00:39:984 (2,3,4) - i like that one! thanks xD
01:05:438 (1) - That slider doesn't really suit the current mapping style, imo. How about something like http://puu.sh/anYgI.png ? changed the rhythm too for avoid the overlap too

Not my favourite type of normal (sometimes a bit messy, because of the overlaps), but still neat rhythm.
thanks 4 mod

~
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Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
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Konei
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Konei

Irreversible wrote:

[Konei's Thoughts]

OLDTIMES YO trueee o/

00:04:893 (2,3) - Would you mind to move them slightly? Like this: http://puu.sh/anYXA.png Sure.
00:28:165 (2,3,4) - Even though the spacing looks fine here, I would see an improvement in open the pattern a bit up, it looks quite clustered at the moment. Sure.
00:41:074 (2) - O_O I thought you're a background mapper? xD haha :3 How about mapping the background in this moment tho? The 1/2 notes sound pretty cool. Haha, either slow SV + Instruments or high SV + Vocal, but here it is the vocal therfore no.
00:54:165 - I disapprove white tick triplets >< Huuuh, but there really is something in the song, changed to a 1/4 Slider, hopefully this is better to you.
01:10:529 (1,2) - How about a flowchange here? http://puu.sh/anZiZ.png instead of this, you could do something like this: http://puu.sh/anZlT.png (3 has increased spacing on purpose, to emphasize the end) Sure to the spacing increase but no to the arrangement, I dislike how the cursor runs there.

I like the flow a lot here!
Thaaanks!

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Title:share the thoughts (OP size)
TitleUnicode:share the thoughts (OP size)
Artist:Sakakibara Yui
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Konei's Insane
Source:きみと僕との騎士の日々 -楽園のシュバリエ-
Tags:Kimi to Boku to no Kishi no Hibi -Rakuen no Chevalier- piriri! visual novel eroge theme song Project Knights Le chevalier no paradis KimiKishi きみきし Xinely Konei
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

eINess wrote:



From my Queues.

Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions.
Purple : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. You must change avi's name. plz change moe!! please!! >w< This is unrankable!! Sorry. | I'd change them to "watermelon fest.avi" /slapped
  2. umm...just only my problem? http://puu.sh/am9SO/6e44c79175.png = = The video's resolution is 720p, which is the maximum allowed resolution for a 16:9 video according to the ranking criteria.
  3. Cheak out Widescreen GD diffs (normal , Insane) | Fixed.
  4. Tittle really OP size? I can't found it. If OP size to get into the title tag, please put it on. or change OP size ver. Yes, it is. There are credible sources that show this.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:074 (4) - whistle on head , remove tail. Why? The piano is stronger on the tail?
  2. 00:05:438 (5) - add whistle and 00:05:620 (1) - remove head W , add repect W The piano here is weaker compared to the subsequent notes, so yeah...
  3. 00:17:438 (1,2) - How about Start NC (2) Slider? | Why? The current combo placement is more fitting to the song's rhythm.
  4. 00:21:438 (4,1) - try Switch rhythm. Remapped this part.
    SPOILER
  5. Would not it be nice to create a shape so?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:49:256 (4,1,2,3) - how about this rhythm? Uh, idk how to explain it, but I just feel that it's better this way.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:02:165 (4) - Does not overlap the reason for this? DS difference is not large. Nice if you can overlap. ( this 01:00:893 (4) - ) It won't do anything here...

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:620 (2) - move here. 00:03:802 (2) - The instrument is far stronger than the vocal, so...
  2. 00:05:256 (2) - remove. Why would I?
  3. 00:44:893 - add circle. I'm emphasizing the instrument here.

[Easy]
  1. Fine. =w=b =w=b


GL~

Irreversible wrote:

[General]

00:13:802 - Try to find a custom hitsound for this part, it would be really fitting. Maybe you can find it in Andrea's map.

[Easy]

00:01:438 (2) - I don't feel like this belongs to the old combo. Even if it's easy, I'd consider adding one. Okay then; I was kinda confused about this, too.
00:34:711 (2) - Might not be a really good rhythm for beginner players, from what I can rememeber I tended to be really confused by red tick rhythm. Even though you wanted to support this strong beat here, would it be possible to stick to white tick rhythm? You could keep this stuff for normals. No matter how much I want to stick to white ticks, it's just impossible. The strong beats are way too strong to be ignored. The 3/2 beats gap is pretty consistent here anyway. I'd gladly change the rhythm to something else if there were a good suggestion on it, though. For now, I just can't think of anything that fits.
01:03:620 (2) - Don't let the slider end on a big white one, since it's the strong beat here; sounds quite awkward to me too. Ctrl + G it with the next circle? Done.

Well done.

[Hard]

00:23:256 (1,2,3,4) - Improve the transition of this, please. Follow the slider clearer. Example : http://puu.sh/anYsg.png I hope it's okay now.
00:36:711 (3,4) - Same as above i assume, it doesn't really follow the curve you've created and so creates a bad flow. ^
00:46:347 (4) - Just to come up with another idea ; http://puu.sh/anYyW.png I think this suits a hard more, in order not to have a too big jump here. It might interrupt the flow. It's up to you. Simply stacked (4) below 00:46:165 (3).
01:08:347 (1) - #curve #2009, well you can improve it for sure. Let's get the red node up.
01:10:165 (2,1,2) - I honestly dislike the flow here o.o Could you manage it to have 2 ctrl + g'd? (also moved 1 to the top then), and rearrange the last notes a bit? Remapped this part.

It's okay. What I don't really approve of is things like 00:29:620 (2,3) - , because it doesn't play so good, for me at least. I prefer even spacing in a hard, normally :D but no need to change, obviously. Haha, changed that one because I feel that it's bad too, I suppose.

[Konei's Thoughts]

OLDTIMES YO

00:04:893 (2,3) - Would you mind to move them slightly? Like this: http://puu.sh/anYXA.png
00:28:165 (2,3,4) - Even though the spacing looks fine here, I would see an improvement in open the pattern a bit up, it looks quite clustered at the moment.
00:41:074 (2) - O_O I thought you're a background mapper? xD haha :3 How about mapping the background in this moment tho? The 1/2 notes sound pretty cool.
00:54:165 - I disapprove white tick triplets ><
01:10:529 (1,2) - How about a flowchange here? http://puu.sh/anZiZ.png instead of this, you could do something like this: http://puu.sh/anZlT.png (3 has increased spacing on purpose, to emphasize the end)

I like the flow a lot here!

[Insane]

00:08:347 (1) - hinsvarcurvepls Made it look smoother.
00:51:984 (4,5) - ..Hm.. I don't like how these notes are arranged, 5 seems very hidden at first, and I think the flow is really broken as well ... I can't come up with a suggestion because it would need some rearranging probably, could you rethink about it? Fixed... Hopefully.
00:54:256 (2,3) - Why the triplet, doesn't really make sense, imo it's not clearly enough in the music. Removed (2).

the kiai seems a bit forced with its high SV, but it's ok after all. Intended this to follow the intensity of the kiai time.

Will see what happens after you've applied some stuff.
Thank you for the mod!
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Sorry for the delay.

Bubbled!
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Thanks Irre! o/

I feel so late.
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don't worry, i do understand your situation.

everything looks fine, ranked
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Gratz~ :3
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gratz! hincpar 8-)
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yay grats rhino

di rank pas orangnya ospek mantap
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Gratz! HIns :)
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captin1 wrote:

don't worry, i do understand your situation.

everything looks fine, ranked
Actually, I was somehow able to get a super fast connection at an extremely low cost a few days after my request so...

lol

Thanks a lot, though!

And thanks to everyone else!
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YA.
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Oh my god, didn't even notice...

Congratz!!
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too late...you got lucky
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