warfu2000 wrote:

Woow I love this song!! I hope this will get ranked :3 buena suerte!!

Kodora wrote:

aww still almost :<

calmel05 wrote:

Hi there,

You might wanna consider adding some audio lead-in so that the first object comes a bit later.

Nice map overall

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]

00:03:459 (3) - This slider doesn't feel good clicking (u know why), sugest slider end in 00:03:693 - and add a circle (with NC) on 00:03:928 -
02:33:459 (4,1,2,3,4) - You're right, Fixed.
uhh if you can fix this to do more shorter de distance within 02:34:396 (2,3) - would be great I prefer to keep it as is.

No more to say, nice diff~

Nothing to say~

Hope it helps
Good luck~

1. ezek 00:28:068 (6) - I think unstack is better. Next beat is strong, maybe put about http://puu.sh/beTsk/d7b8f0011f.jpg
2. gabe 00:34:162 (2) - I think current rhythm is not follow the music well so I suggest http://puu.sh/beTQl/c88a62f5d6.jpg
3. gabe 00:36:506 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - this part is weird to play but I can't tell the reason, maybe the spacing decrease at the end or the pattern.
4. gabe & dake 00:44:709 (1,2,1,2,1) - too many NC imo.
5. dake 00:52:678 (4,4) - hmm if both be a jump, I think it will fit with music well. their spacing less than 00:52:209 (2,3) is a bit weird because they're stronger..? I think
6. sekai 01:14:240 (4) - If I not mention this I think someone will, perfect blanket will be nice.
7. Mystyk 01:32:053 (6,1) - swap NC? to let NC on white tick and it more fit imo.
8. Mystyk 01:36:506 (1,2) - swap NC to fit with vocal.
9. Mystyk 01:38:615 (1) / 01:40:490 (1) - remove NC, it's too often imo. NC every 2 stanza will be fine.
10. Irre 02:34:631 (4,5) - these spacing is too big imo because the music isn't stronger here either.
11. Irre 02:39:904 (2) - unstack it to make less spacing from previous note? like you did on next note. it will improve the flow.
12. Irre 02:43:303 (1) - don't move it to parallel with previous 1?

1. 01:14:240 (1) - no need to NC imo, remove it.
2. 02:04:865 (1,2,1,2) - I'm afraid it too hard if compare to the whole pattern of this diff.
3. 02:32:638 (1) - remove NC, it hide on tail so it maybe make player confuse XD

1. Irre 00:38:615 (3) - use 1/1 slider instead? it's not different with skip anyway imo and more fit with music. skip feel weird.
2. Gero 00:47:053 (1,4) - swap NC and remove NC on 00:49:865 (1).
3. Irre use 1/2 slider on 02:02:521 and 02:03:224 ? current rhythm a bit hard to catch since the music is not clearly strong on red line.
4. Irre If compare to the whole diff I think this combo are large so I suggest to add NC on 02:39:553 (4)
5. Irre 02:43:771 - 1/2 slider? there had a strong beat and yes maybe this rhythm can be hard to catch too.
6. Irre 03:09:553 (4) - add NC. as I said, combo is too large compare to the whole diff.

1. 00:39:553 (4) - add NC, combo is too large.
2. 01:15:178 (4) - no need to less the spacing imo, easy diff better keep the spacing consistency.
3. 01:43:303 (1) - start the spinner on 01:43:303 (1) is more fit imo.
4. 02:30:881 - why... decrease the SV here, easy diff is better keep whole diff the same SV well nvm, that won't be a problem.
5. 03:06:974 (2,3) - move these a bit to make four of their spacing balance.

1. It's unrankable to have both slidertick and slidertrack silenced, the S:C1 sampleset (soft custom 1) has both of them silenced, I'd suggest to remove the silent tick as it doesn't have ticks on strange beats

1. 00:43:309 (1,1) - The object is too close after the spinner, with the new ''rules'' there should be at least a whole measure in between for the easy diffs, i suggest simply mapping this instead of placing a spinner
2. 00:48:232 (3) - This slider is simply too long, it ends on a rather weird place, I suggest ending it at either 00:48:701 - for the vocals, or at 00:48:935 - for the stanza
3. 01:03:234 (4) - This repeat just feels terrible off, I suggest removing it and replacing it by a circle
4. 01:28:316 (1,1) - Object too close after spinner
5. 01:43:787 (1,1) - Object too close after spinner
6. 02:28:326 (1,1) - Object too close after spinner
7. 02:39:577 (2,3) - Spacing error
8. 02:45:438 (1,1) - Object too close after spinner
9. 03:16:146 (3) - Personal opinion, but i'd like to have the last note to be clickable :c aka a note at 03:17:083 -

1. 00:10:492 (5) - You're gonna hate me, but this really bothered me, move the end of this slider like 1 or 2 pixels lower http://puu.sh/cK38s/97c4e5a6a7.jpg
2. 00:40:965 (4) - I think it'd be better to remove this note to keep a similar combo as the one before this
3. 00:58:780 (2) - The sliderhead is so silent I had to listen twice to be sure it's not silenced, maybe increase it by 10~20%?
4. 01:07:688 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - This rhythm put like this might be a bit too complicated to read in a normal
5. 01:43:319 (1,1) - Object too close after spinner
6. 02:02:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same with the rhythm again, feels too sudden
7. 03:10:285 (5) - This slider is partly out of the mapping area, which is unrankable
8. 03:11:457 (6) - I think this note is too hard to read for a normal

1. Cool

1. 00:02:756 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer some more spacing here
2. 00:23:150 (2,3,4,5,6) - This flows rather bad because the player has to make a weird movement going into the tripple, how about seeing it as a slider curve, smooth curve to the left: http://puu.sh/cK95B/56f118d05b.jpg
3. 00:31:823 (1,2) - I'm a fan of 3/4 but this just feels terrible off, you're skipping the strong beats too
4. 00:34:167 (2,3) - There's not even a beat on the blue tick here, i have no clue what this is but it should be changed
5. 00:35:574 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:44:012 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is a 1/8 tripple followed by a 1/4 tripple, it has been mapped like that in the hard diff so I don't think it should be any different in the insane, also feels rather odd to place 1/4 at 1/8 beats
7. 01:17:065 (3) - There's many places to put 3/4 sliders but this isn't one of those, the faint beat which this is mapped to isnt even noticeable due to the hitsounds
8. 02:01:603 (4) - This 1/1 slider is wrong for so many reasons, ends on a stronger beat than it starts at, doesnt follow the vocals and skips a beat at the center of it
9. 02:34:303 (2,3) - I prefer to see this slightly stacked on the end of the previous slider but thats just a personal opinion
10. 02:38:054 (2,3) - ^

Kyshiro wrote:

Tony's Easy

1. 00:48:232 (3) - This slider is simply too long, it ends on a rather weird place, I suggest ending it at either 00:48:701 - for the vocals, or at 00:48:935 - for the stanza it's long but it fits with the vocals so I wanna keep it

That's it for now, call me back after you've fixed it

1. The BPM seems to be fine, however the offset is around 4~6ms early, I suggest using 174 (Don't forget to readjust all the inherited timing lines and making sure everything is snapped properly)

1. 00:47:060 (1) - Since you're following vocals, I think it's better to start this 1/2 earlier and extending it by 1/2 (Pretty sure it's acceptable due to the low bpm to have a little less space between the spinner and the next object)
2. 01:46:835 (1) - ^
3. 02:48:954 (1) - ^
4. No idea how I missed this, but why are the hitsounds completely different than the other diffs? Might want to use grumd's hitsound copier to make them similar in this diff

1. 01:46:600 (1,2,1) - Feels really weird to start playing like this after a spinner, how about a note at 01:46:132 - ?

1. 00:24:908 (1) - A bit up and to the left for the looks would be cool http://puu.sh/cKUcq/e333fa1f72.jpg
2. 00:36:277 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This looks and feels so randomly placed, would appreciate it if it looked more like a well made pattern
3. 02:45:203 - I think this could use a circle

1. I highly suggest you to use OD1 or even 0,5 as the rhythm here gets really tricky.
2. 00:26:428 (5) - pretty sure you've missed a new combo here as the chain gets too long. Alternatively, ig you want to follow the vocals, you can place a new combo at 00:25:490 (3).
   Note: 00:39:555 (4,5) - same. Either (4) music or (5) vocals
3. 00:46:821 - 01:07:450 - the whole offbeat parts feels too complicated for the beginners. The sudden switch to the vocals and back to music which happen here, then in the 2d and in the 3rd kiai makes your rhythm too comlicated for the low skilled players. You can use more understandable 3/2 beats to stress the vocals when you feel like doing it. Example
   Note: I highly suggest you to keep following the music in all kiai-parts, which means that you'll have to do some serious changes to your rhyth. However, I am sure that it will take Easy's quality higher and increase it's playability.
4. 02:33:010 (2,3) - minor - a little spacing mistake here. Consider fixing that to improve the appearance.
5. In case if you decide to re-map kiais, you can also change the SV-multiplier to x1,00 in those parts, as the SV changes in the easier diffs are not really necessary as they give a very minor change and bug players a lot.
   
   I'd say that the diff needs some more work. Please, at least think about the changes listed here.

1. Try CS 3,5 as it might improve the balance and make things appear neater.
   
   Gero
   
   1. 02:51:763 (1) - gets overlapped with the HP Bar. Not a big deal, but still.
   Irre
   
   1. 01:37:689 (1,2) - considering that the diff is aimed for beginners/average players none of them will find this pattern entertaining. Too tricky for the beginners, as it's hard to read/tell the amount of repeats and too boring for average players as holding the cursor at the same spot for ~1500ms twice is too long.
   2. 01:41:439 (1) - unreadable for the kind of players who play this diff and feels really out of place. Please, find another way to map them. Even just one long slider will be fine.
   3. 02:33:479 (2) - this should work better as a slider. The 2/1 gap here feels confusing and sorta out of place.
   4. 02:43:793 - the 3/2 gap here feels really weird especially because of the clap being ignored. Kinda similar thing happens to 01:33:938 (4,5,6) - but hte second patterns seems to be more playable. Anyway, I strongly recommend you to fix at least the first one by replacing 02:43:324 (1) - with an 1/1 slider.
   Everything is quite alright, except for the sliders. Sorry, but I don't think we can let it go with those sliders.

1. 00:13:769 - the clap sound is here, not on the blue tick. Therefore, the 3/4 slider here gets unreasonable and off music.
   Note: 00:37:679 (1) - 00:39:555 (1) - 00:41:430 (1) - same.
2. 00:31:116 (2,3) - the jump feels a bit random/exaggerated. try to simplify the pattern to make this more playable? Example
3. 00:44:008 (3) - listen carefully, that's 1/6. However, I'd make it safe and go with a simple rhythm.
4. 01:44:252 (2) - NC for the rhythm change? I'd say that it will fit here and help players to recover. Also, I higly suggest you to remove the last repeat and leave the 1/4 gap between the sliders, as the 1/8 gap might be too hard for this diff.
5. 02:34:416 (2,3) - the jump didn't feel necessary, espically in a rather calm part. Consider doing something in order to avoid the spacing change here or at least to reduce it?
6. 02:35:823 (1) - the slider breaks the game mechanic as it sorta "glitches". Let's play it safe and replace it with a more readable pattern? something less glitchy
   
   Except those 3/4s everything is quite acceptable.

1. 00:24:904 (1) - please, remove the circle. This polartity change isn't worth mapping, the rhythm becomes unnatural and the beat at 00:24:904 - isn't even really strong.
2. 00:52:682 (4,4) - I doubt that you really wanted to use 1/16 in ordr to snap the sliders. use either 1/4 or 1/2 because that's how the music goes.
   Note: in case if it was intentional, contact me and we'll talk about this. However, I'm more than sure that it is done by mistake and you know how to fix that!
3. 00:58:776 (2,3) - the flow stop feels too unexpected here. I am sure a lot of players will misread it as 1/4 stack. Mind unstacking the pattern?
4. 01:10:966 (1) - sounds forced as the strong beat at the red tick remains unstressed. 01:13:779 (3) - Same here.
5. 01:18:936 (1,2,3) - although the rhythm is technically fitting, I don't dind it playable/fitting as stronger beats remain ignored and the whole 3/4 stuff feels forced/unnatural.
6. 01:20:577 (1,2) - using vocals for that part should be much more logicals. the vocals and music are kinda weak, mapping them with triplets is too much, in my opinion.
7. 01:29:484 (2) - a friendly reminder to fix the 1/6 stuff in this diff as well.
8. 01:49:878 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - stopping by just to say how much I love this. <3
9. 02:00:192 (1) - minor - it's ore like my ersonal preference, but I'd drag red nod exactly to the tick and make the curve softer. It fits better, if you ask me.
   
   Well-done. A few 3/4s were questionable but overall, that's a nice diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[Tony's Easy]

1. I highly suggest you to use OD1 or even 0,5 as the rhythm here gets really tricky. Fixed
2. 00:26:428 (5) - pretty sure you've missed a new combo here as the chain gets too long. Alternatively, ig you want to follow the vocals, you can place a new combo at 00:25:490 (3). Fixed
   Note: 00:39:555 (4,5) - same. Either (4) music or (5) vocals Fixed
3. 00:46:821 - 01:07:450 - the whole offbeat parts feels too complicated for the beginners. The sudden switch to the vocals and back to music which happen here, then in the 2d and in the 3rd kiai makes your rhythm too comlicated for the low skilled players. You can use more understandable 3/2 beats to stress the vocals when you feel like doing it. Example
   Note: I highly suggest you to keep following the music in all kiai-parts, which means that you'll have to do some serious changes to your rhyth. However, I am sure that it will take Easy's quality higher and increase it's playability. Fixed
4. 02:33:010 (2,3) - minor - a little spacing mistake here. Consider fixing that to improve the appearance. Fixed
5. In case if you decide to re-map kiais, you can also change the SV-multiplier to x1,00 in those parts, as the SV changes in the easier diffs are not really necessary as they give a very minor change and bug players a lot. about the SV I prefer to keep it as it is cause isn't hard to play imo
   
   I'd say that the diff needs some more work. Please, at least think about the changes listed here.

[Geroversible's Normal]

1. Try CS 3,5 as it might improve the balance and make things appear neater. Fixed
   
   Gero
   
   1. 02:51:763 (1) - gets overlapped with the HP Bar. Not a big deal, but still. Fixed
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:13:769 - the clap sound is here, not on the blue tick. Therefore, the 3/4 slider here gets unreasonable and off music. Fixed
      Note: 00:37:679 (1) - 00:39:555 (1) - 00:41:430 (1) - same. Fixed
   2. 00:31:116 (2,3) - the jump feels a bit random/exaggerated. try to simplify the pattern to make this more playable? Example Fixed
   3. 00:44:008 (3) - listen carefully, that's 1/6. However, I'd make it safe and go with a simple rhythm. Fixed
   4. 01:44:252 (2) - NC for the rhythm change? I'd say that it will fit here and help players to recover. Also, I higly suggest you to remove the last repeat and leave the 1/4 gap between the sliders, as the 1/8 gap might be too hard for this diff. Fixed
   5. 02:34:416 (2,3) - the jump didn't feel necessary, espically in a rather calm part. Consider doing something in order to avoid the spacing change here or at least to reduce it? Fixed
   6. 02:35:823 (1) - the slider breaks the game mechanic as it sorta "glitches". Let's play it safe and replace it with a more readable pattern? something less glitchy Fixed
      
      Except those 3/4s everything is quite acceptable.
   [Collab Jagger]
   
   1. 00:24:904 (1) - please, remove the circle. This polartity change isn't worth mapping, the rhythm becomes unnatural and the beat at 00:24:904 - isn't even really strong. Fixed
   2. 00:52:682 (4,4) - I doubt that you really wanted to use 1/16 in ordr to snap the sliders. use either 1/4 or 1/2 because that's how the music goes. Fixed
      Note: in case if it was intentional, contact me and we'll talk about this. However, I'm more than sure that it is done by mistake and you know how to fix that!
   3. 00:58:776 (2,3) - the flow stop feels too unexpected here. I am sure a lot of players will misread it as 1/4 stack. Mind unstacking the pattern? Fixed
   4. 01:10:966 (1) - sounds forced as the strong beat at the red tick remains unstressed. 01:13:779 (3) - Same here. Fixed
   5. 01:18:936 (1,2,3) - although the rhythm is technically fitting, I don't dind it playable/fitting as stronger beats remain ignored and the whole 3/4 stuff feels forced/unnatural. Fixed
   6. 01:20:577 (1,2) - using vocals for that part should be much more logicals. the vocals and music are kinda weak, mapping them with triplets is too much, in my opinion. Fixed
   7. 01:29:484 (2) - a friendly reminder to fix the 1/6 stuff in this diff as well. Fixed
   8. 01:49:878 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - stopping by just to say how much I love this. <3 :)
   9. 02:00:192 (1) - minor - it's ore like my ersonal preference, but I'd drag red nod exactly to the tick and make the curve softer. It fits better, if you ask me. Fixed
      
      Well-done. A few 3/4s were questionable but overall, that's a nice diff.

Honestly, I feel like you could do it better with a few more mods and some more work. Pay a bit more attention get some more mods. Don't you feel like this is a bit below your mapping standard? Anyways, let me know what do you think and we'll see how it should go!

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Best of luck!

1. 00:29:475 (5) - how about adding a note here? it feels a bit weird, since there is a lyrics on this beat, so i highly suggest you to add a note here ></
2. 01:37:689 (1,2,1) - isn't this a bit too much for a normal diff? i really don't suggest doing something like this since beginners will totally confused by the many repeats on these sliders, i highly suggest you to change it to something a bit easier for them to read.