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Crystal King - Ai Wo Torimodose

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kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 21, 2014 at 7:58:55 PM

Artist: Crystal King
Title: Ai Wo Torimodose
Source: Fist of the North Star
Tags: Hokuto no Ken You wa Shock opening
BPM: 157.5
Filesize: 23088kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.21 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 317 notes)
  3. Normal (3.28 stars, 198 notes)
Download: Crystal King - Ai Wo Torimodose
Download: Crystal King - Ai Wo Torimodose (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello osu! It's been a while. :)
This is a remake of one of the last maps I made that never got ranked. It's the intro/theme of Fist of the North Star (Hokuto no Ken), this time using the full version of the song. Enjoy!
Last edited by kingcobra52 , edited 20 times in total.
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
hi kingcobra52 :) i like your map! so, bit suggest!

try add tag: 'opening' please. this is opening song.
02:40:681 (11,12) - try move y:52 both. seems more better.
02:40:874 (12) - i want NC.
01:52:397 - unsnapped kiai green line. move green line 01:52:369 - this time better.
02:08:136 (5) - add clap slider reverse?
01:03:800 (1) ~ 01:24:345 (6) - slip rhythm. all select and move 1/2 back rhythm. so, i mean↓
SPOILER
SPOILER

thanks make map!
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
Fixed the slipped rhythm. Everything else I'll get to later. (I had changed the mp3 and forgot to resnap everything)

Thanks! :)
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
All fixed now!
IceBeam
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IceBeam
wow is this really happening?

love your maps, buddy, hope you can rank this beast
welcome back!
Kodora
Kodora
Hey, as promiced, sorry for delay x.x

[General]

  1. Sadly didn't noticed before but this mp3 is 320 kbps, which is unrankable :< Here is recompressed one (192 kbps)
  2. Timing still feels off and this is not single section :< I guess you need someone who good at this to check it since i can't
  3. According to new Ranking Criteria, you need at least 1 diff below 3 stars, thought i'd highly recommend to map Normal & Easy for better difficulty spread
  4. Pure black and pure white combo colours are highly not recommended to use (they can break lots of skins, and pure black makes notes almost invisible with dimmed background), try to replace them please.
[Hard]

*Would be good idea to reduse HP Drain by 1 tick here since it is Hard diff - it will fit your kinda challenging settings
*CS6 <333

  1. 00:00:651 - 00:00:841 - How about add here short 1/4 reverse-slider follow drums? Will works quite nicely here :)
  2. 00:06:358 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - How about change snape of these triplets for more smooth play? Something like this:

    SPOILER
  3. 00:13:397 (1) - Snap this to red line please
  4. 00:26:850 (5) - NC follow lyrics?
  5. 00:28:551 (1) - I think snape of this slider can be better with new slider calculation ;)

    SPOILER
  6. 00:31:576 (1,2) - This overlap doesn't looks pretty here... How about make little slider jump here for more smoother flow? Example:

    SPOILER
  7. 00:33:844 (9) - Remove finish from repeat point & slidertail? Imo it works better if you will leave finish only on slider head.
  8. 00:57:332 (5,6) - I'd move them a bit down to avoid overlapping with previous slider, example:

    SPOILER
  9. 00:58:093 (9) - Same about finishes.. I think would be better to leave it only on slider head
  10. 00:59:805 (2) - If you're following lyrics here i think would be better to add repeat here and start spinner at 01:00:376 - to follow music closely

    SPOILER
  11. 01:06:653 (1,2) - Make them like this to avoid overlapping? Also you will have nice jumpy pattern:

    SPOILER
  12. 01:18:828 (1,2) - Make them as blanket for smoother flow?
  13. 01:40:610 (1) - Snap this to red line please ;)
  14. 01:52:274 (6,8) - make a bit more space between them to avoid overlapping? o.o
  15. 01:53:611 (3) - Hmm, how about move it to x417y13 to make perfect overlap with 01:53:229 (2) - ?
  16. 01:56:095 (2) - I think this slider can be fixed with new calculation too :p
  17. 02:03:356 - It is very not recommended to begin new part of lyrics with spinner since it is passive hitobject and doesn't require hitting - try to add note at 02:03:356 - and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 late for better playability :p
  18. 02:09:861 (1,2) - Same about overlapping, maybe change a bit for more variety? Example:

    SPOILER
Nice map, hope you'll have chance to get it ranked.

Good luck!
kingcobra52
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Topic Starter
kingcobra52

Kodora wrote:

Hey, as promiced, sorry for delay x.x

[General]

  1. Sadly didn't noticed before but this mp3 is 320 kbps, which is unrankable :< Here is recompressed one (192 kbps) changed, but I'm curious as to why.
  2. Timing still feels off and this is not single section :< I guess you need someone who good at this to check it since i can't
  3. According to new Ranking Criteria, you need at least 1 diff below 3 stars, thought i'd highly recommend to map Normal & Easy for better difficulty spread yeah. I'm going to wait until I can get it properly timed before adding more difficulties.
  4. Pure black and pure white combo colours are highly not recommended to use (they can break lots of skins, and pure black makes notes almost invisible with dimmed background), try to replace them please. changed to light and dark gray. will that work?
[Hard]

*Would be good idea to reduse HP Drain by 1 tick here since it is Hard diff - it will fit your kinda challenging settings done
*CS6 <333

  1. 00:00:651 - 00:00:841 - How about add here short 1/4 reverse-slider follow drums? Will works quite nicely here :) done
  2. 00:06:358 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - How about change snape of these triplets for more smooth play? Something like this: done

    SPOILER
  3. 00:13:397 (1) - Snap this to red line please done. When I resnap all notes it does that I notice.
  4. 00:26:850 (5) - NC follow lyrics? done
  5. 00:28:551 (1) - I think snape of this slider can be better with new slider calculation ;) done...somehow

    SPOILER
  6. 00:31:576 (1,2) - This overlap doesn't looks pretty here... How about make little slider jump here for more smoother flow? Example: done

    SPOILER
  7. 00:33:844 (9) - Remove finish from repeat point & slidertail? Imo it works better if you will leave finish only on slider head. done
  8. 00:57:332 (5,6) - I'd move them a bit down to avoid overlapping with previous slider, example: done

    SPOILER
  9. 00:58:093 (9) - Same about finishes.. I think would be better to leave it only on slider head done
  10. 00:59:805 (2) - If you're following lyrics here i think would be better to add repeat here and start spinner at 01:00:376 - to follow music closely done

    SPOILER
  11. 01:06:653 (1,2) - Make them like this to avoid overlapping? Also you will have nice jumpy pattern: done

    SPOILER
  12. 01:18:828 (1,2) - Make them as blanket for smoother flow? did what i think you mean by blanket.
  13. 01:40:610 (1) - Snap this to red line please ;) done
  14. 01:52:274 (6,8) - make a bit more space between them to avoid overlapping? o.o done
  15. 01:53:611 (3) - Hmm, how about move it to x417y13 to make perfect overlap with 01:53:229 (2) - ? close enough
  16. 01:56:095 (2) - I think this slider can be fixed with new calculation too :p done
  17. 02:03:356 - It is very not recommended to begin new part of lyrics with spinner since it is passive hitobject and doesn't require hitting - try to add note at 02:03:356 - and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 late for better playability :p done
  18. 02:09:861 (1,2) - Same about overlapping, maybe change a bit for more variety? Example: done

    SPOILER
Nice map, hope you'll have chance to get it ranked.

Good luck!
Thanks again. As you can probably tell it's been a while. :D


IceBeam wrote:

wow is this really happening?

love your maps, buddy, hope you can rank this beast
welcome back!
Thanks! I'm hoping to finally give this song and Crazy in Love the rankings they deserve. They're too good just to sit and rot in the graveyard.
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Wow..! Random modding for your new map ><

Hard:

-- Imo, this dark color is still hard to read. Since the BG is kinda dark, I don't think a Black custom hit color would work nice afterall..

00:02:173 (4) - Mind also adding Finish for more emphasis? This will make more distinguished with 00:04:266 (1).
00:08:261 (4) - ^
00:33:097 (5,7) - Add claps?
00:57:332 (5,7) - ^
01:06:653 (1) - This feels a hit sound is missing. Mind adding a clap at the reverse?
01:18:828 (1) - ^?
01:51:127 (5) - The reverse being overlapped with the head doesn't seems well. Mind making more space between them?

Good luck~~ (Sorry that I'm not capable in timing..)
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52

Sonnyc wrote:

Wow..! Random modding for your new map ><

Hard:

-- Imo, this dark color is still hard to read. Since the BG is kinda dark, I don't think a Black custom hit color would work nice afterall.. Can't really find a better BG, so I made it gray.

00:02:173 (4) - Mind also adding Finish for more emphasis? This will make more distinguished with 00:04:266 (1).
00:08:261 (4) - ^
00:33:097 (5,7) - Add claps?
00:57:332 (5,7) - ^
01:06:653 (1) - This feels a hit sound is missing. Mind adding a clap at the reverse?
01:18:828 (1) - ^?
01:51:127 (5) - The reverse being overlapped with the head doesn't seems well. Mind making more space between them?

all done

Good luck~~ (Sorry that I'm not capable in timing..)
Do you happen to know anyone would could time it? I went to awp back in the day, but don't think he's really active anymore.
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Timing is in the box.

42 Timing Sections
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Welcome back!
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
Just what I needed. Thanks!
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a
wow, awesome timing :D
so, really good sound now!!
great!
Myxo
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Myxo
This is awesome! ^^
Looks like your old maps, but has very good flow! So it is very much fun!
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
Normal and Easy added. :)
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
Well, I did it! I pushed the song to its limits and made an Insane, known as "You're Already Dead". It's...pretty tough, to say the least, but I'm sure it's passable in this day and age.

Edit: After initial feedback and much thought, I decided against adding an insane difficulty, but anyone who wants to play it can download it here.
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P A N
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P A N
[Easy]

00:17:818 (3) - this slider is too out of the field (offscreen), it's unrankable so maybe remake it?
kingcobra52
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Ah, that's cause I was mapping in widescreen. Will have to make it a point to check that in the future. Thanks!
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