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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 พฤษภาคม 2557 at 19:11:17

Artist: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai
Title: Madoromi no Yakusoku
Source: Hyouka
Tags: kyoto animation ending Oreki Hotaro Chitanda Eru Fukube Satoshi Ibara Mayaka
BPM: 89
Filesize: 8024kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.67 stars, 182 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 596 notes)
  3. Normal (4.02 stars, 357 notes)
Download: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hyouka ED1 Full Ver.
With Lyrics XD

Waiting for Mod/BATs...

Easy : 100% By me.
Normal : 100% By me.
Hard : 100% By me.
Hope you enjoy. :D

_Lolicon
Offset : -1070 :)
Topic Starter
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_Lolicon wrote:

Offset : -1070 :)

Thx a lot :D
Evening
o/ Mod from Newcomer Pit-Stop ( Volunteering to help in that )

This is probably my first Standard mod so I'll try my best :3

[SB]

I think you need to disable widescreen support on "Normal" since I can see the background at the sides of the SB o.o


[Hard]

00:30:451 (4,5) - I think you shouldn't have (5) so close to (4), make slider (5) concave the other way so that it looks neater
00:41:743 (6) - ^
01:41:069 (5) - ^ and so on...

01:26:575 (10,11) - Change both into 1 single slider | It was initially unexpected that the notes are on 1/3s when I played it, I suggest to create a 1/3 slider so that the player knows that the next notes are on 1/3s

02:10:395 (7,8,9,1) - The DS between the sliders and the notes here are inconsistent, I had no idea what timing they were on when I played it, I suggest a constant DS at this section since they are all on 1/6s

02:14:608 (4) - Ctrl+Shift+R by 11 degrees | I don't think a flow drop ( 3 and 4 ) here is necessary, I suggest to make the flow smoother

03:13:766 (3,4) - Same here I don't think a flow drop here is needed, the music seems to flow very smoothly

04:05:002 (2,3,4) - The DS here is inconsistent, making it hard to read, I suggest to fix this

[Normal]

00:51:856 (3,4,1) - The DS here is inconsistent, it is very hard for "normal" players to read that they are all in a 1/2 stream.
02:01:968 (3,4,1) - ^

01:01:463 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure but this rhythm seems a bit too complicated for "Normal" Difficulty?
02:11:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

01:42:754 (2) - Did you mean to put a clap here? According to your rhythm, the clap shouldn't fall here, unless you are going for a varying rhythm

02:56:912 to 03:04:833 - I suggest to lower the volume here since this is the "calming" part of the music.'

No other problems, good SB and nice hitsounding

Good luck!
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lZenxl wrote:

o/ Mod from Newcomer Pit-Stop ( Volunteering to help in that )

This is probably my first Standard mod so I'll try my best :3

[SB]

I think you need to disable widescreen support on "Normal" since I can see the background at the sides of the SB o.o


[Hard]

00:30:451 (4,5) - I think you shouldn't have (5) so close to (4), make slider (5) concave the other way so that it looks neater
00:41:743 (6) - ^
01:41:069 (5) - ^ and so on...

01:26:575 (10,11) - Change both into 1 single slider | It was initially unexpected that the notes are on 1/3s when I played it, I suggest to create a 1/3 slider so that the player knows that the next notes are on 1/3s

02:10:395 (7,8,9,1) - The DS between the sliders and the notes here are inconsistent, I had no idea what timing they were on when I played it, I suggest a constant DS at this section since they are all on 1/6s

02:14:608 (4) - Ctrl+Shift+R by 11 degrees | I don't think a flow drop ( 3 and 4 ) here is necessary, I suggest to make the flow smoother

03:13:766 (3,4) - Same here I don't think a flow drop here is needed, the music seems to flow very smoothly

04:05:002 (2,3,4) - The DS here is inconsistent, making it hard to read, I suggest to fix this

[Normal]

00:51:856 (3,4,1) - The DS here is inconsistent, it is very hard for "normal" players to read that they are all in a 1/2 stream.
02:01:968 (3,4,1) - ^

01:01:463 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure but this rhythm seems a bit too complicated for "Normal" Difficulty?
02:11:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

01:42:754 (2) - Did you mean to put a clap here? According to your rhythm, the clap shouldn't fall here, unless you are going for a varying rhythm

02:56:912 to 03:04:833 - I suggest to lower the volume here since this is the "calming" part of the music.'

No other problems, good SB and nice hitsounding

Good luck!



Fix it all.

Thanks a lot :)
BoatKrab
:D D คับพี่ ยังไงๆก็คนไทยด้วยกันเนอะวันนี้ผมมาม็อดให้พี่ละกันนะ(ฝึกม็อด อิอิ) ^^

ขอเรื่อง SB ก่อนเลยละกันนะครับ ไฟล์ SB1 ผมว่าควรให้มัน Fade in ตรง 00:17:811 - หรือให้มัน Fade out ตรง 00:17:811 - นี้ก็ได้นะครับ


Easy


00:01:631 (1,2) - ตรงนี้ผมว่าไม่เท่ากัน ให้ลบลบตัวที่ 2 แล้วให้ก๊อป ตัวที่ 1 กด Ctrl+H กับ Ctrl+G นะครับ

00:17:811 - Break ตรงนี้ให้ทำตามรูปนะครับ ผมว่าน่าจะดีกว่า

01:27:923 - Break ตรงนี้ด้วยนะครับ

00:48:148 (2) - ตามรูปเลยน้าคับ

01:58:091 (2) - ตรงนี้เหมือนกันครับ ทำแบบรูป

00:52:867 (1) - Add Clap Sound

01:01:294 (5) - เปลี่ยนสีหน่อยน้าคับ

01:03:654 (1) - เอาเปลี่ยนสีตัวนี้ออกจะดีกว่านะคับ

01:07:530 (3) - ผมว่ามือใหม่กดยากไปนะครับ ทำตามรูปได้เลยนะครับ

02:17:642 (3) - นี่ด้วยนะครับ

03:43:935 (3) - เหมือนกัน

01:10:058 (2) - ลด Reverse Arrow 1 ตัวนะครับ

02:20:170 (2) - นี่ด้วยนะครับ

03:46:463 (2) - เหมือนกัน

01:19:833 (1,2,3) - ท่าจะให้ดี

02:31:125 (2) - วางในสีขาวนะครับสีฟ้ามันไว้ใช้ใน Hard นะครับ และ

03:16:968 (3) - ตรงนี้ด้วยนะครับ

03:30:283 (2) - ย้ายมาตรงเส้นแดงดีกว่านะครับ

03:30:283 (2) - วาง Hit Circle แล้วจะเป๊ะเลย

Easy ตอนนี้หมดแล้วครับจุดบกพร่องที่ผมเห็น งั้นวันหลังมีอะไรทักมาให้ช่วยก็ได้นะครับ
ขอให้ได้แรงค์เร็วๆนะครับ
Good Luck :)
Sellenite
Hello!From Modding Queues M4M
Sorry for delay><
so love this song

[General]
kiai time can't use 2 in less than 15 seconds
like many place copy and paste,watch out that

[Easy]
Slidertick Rate change to 1,so many in 4...o.o
Distance spacing change to 1.1,all diff DS. 0.8 is so little

00:09:047 (2) - blanket,any like this should put beautifully,use shrink ring to check if it is blanket
00:15:283 (1) - add finish,remove clap
00:52:867 (1) - the slider end clap
01:06:687 (1) - remove
01:11:575 kiai time can't use 2 in less than 15seconds
01:21:519 (3) - this put in red line,is not good,listen like overmap
01:50:170 (6) - the slider end clap
02:02:979 (1) - ^
02:16:125 (3,4,1,2) - don't put such that,so difficult
02:58:598 (3,4,1) - 3,4 overmap and the big white line in 1,please must fix this
03:00:283 (2) - overmap
03:15:451 (3,4,1,2) - don't put such that,so difficult
03:37:361 also the kiai problem.and this should add a note to beat!

[Normal]
Distance spacing change to 1.3,all diff DS

00:03:991 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is not good,use this ?o.o
00:15:283 (1) - add finish,remove clap
00:21:519 (2) - also not good ,use this?
00:30:451 (3) - this rhythm so light.Not better to beat
00:52:530 (1,2) - overmap
01:19:159 (4) - blanket
02:02:642 (1,2) - overmap
02:59:272 (1,2) - ^
03:53:541 (1,2,3,4) - can put more beautiful

[Hard]
many place should care of the blanket

00:16:238 (5) - NC
00:24:552 (4,5,6) - put this will be better?
00:27:418 (1) - add finish,remove whistle
00:37:867 (2,3) - don't put the distance like this
00:42:081 and 00:42:755 use a slider stack is better
03:07:530 (7,1) - don't put the distance like this
03:30:957 (4,5,6,7,8,9) 、03:36:182 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) and many like this is so difficult for hard and is not beautiful

hard should work harder,cuz it too many copy and paste

good luck!
Topic Starter
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Sellenite wrote:

Hello!From Modding Queues M4M
Sorry for delay><
so love this song

[General]
kiai time can't use 2 in less than 15 seconds
like many place copy and paste,watch out that

[Easy]
Slidertick Rate change to 1,so many in 4...o.o
Distance spacing change to 1.1,all diff DS. 0.8 is so little

00:09:047 (2) - blanket,any like this should put beautifully,use shrink ring to check if it is blanket
00:15:283 (1) - add finish,remove clap
00:52:867 (1) - the slider end clap
01:06:687 (1) - remove
01:11:575 kiai time can't use 2 in less than 15seconds
01:21:519 (3) - this put in red line,is not good,listen like overmap
01:50:170 (6) - the slider end clap
02:02:979 (1) - ^
02:16:125 (3,4,1,2) - don't put such that,so difficult
02:58:598 (3,4,1) - 3,4 overmap and the big white line in 1,please must fix this
03:00:283 (2) - overmap
03:15:451 (3,4,1,2) - don't put such that,so difficult
03:37:361 also the kiai problem.and this should add a note to beat!

[Normal]
Distance spacing change to 1.3,all diff DS

00:03:991 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is not good,use this ?o.o
00:15:283 (1) - add finish,remove clap
00:21:519 (2) - also not good ,use this?
00:30:451 (3) - this rhythm so light.Not better to beat
00:52:530 (1,2) - overmap
01:19:159 (4) - blanket
02:02:642 (1,2) - overmap
02:59:272 (1,2) - ^
03:53:541 (1,2,3,4) - can put more beautiful

[Hard]
many place should care of the blanket

00:16:238 (5) - NC
00:24:552 (4,5,6) - put this will be better?
00:27:418 (1) - add finish,remove whistle
00:37:867 (2,3) - don't put the distance like this
00:42:081 and 00:42:755 use a slider stack is better
03:07:530 (7,1) - don't put the distance like this
03:30:957 (4,5,6,7,8,9) 、03:36:182 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) and many like this is so difficult for hard and is not beautiful

hard should work harder,cuz it too many copy and paste

good luck!

Thanks for mod~

I'll fix it soon because now I'm very busy. XD
Topic Starter
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Boathappy555 wrote:

:D D คับพี่ ยังไงๆก็คนไทยด้วยกันเนอะวันนี้ผมมาม็อดให้พี่ละกันนะ(ฝึกม็อด อิอิ) ^^

ขอเรื่อง SB ก่อนเลยละกันนะครับ ไฟล์ SB1 ผมว่าควรให้มัน Fade in ตรง 00:17:811 - หรือให้มัน Fade out ตรง 00:17:811 - นี้ก็ได้นะครับ


Easy


00:01:631 (1,2) - ตรงนี้ผมว่าไม่เท่ากัน ให้ลบลบตัวที่ 2 แล้วให้ก๊อป ตัวที่ 1 กด Ctrl+H กับ Ctrl+G นะครับ

00:17:811 - Break ตรงนี้ให้ทำตามรูปนะครับ ผมว่าน่าจะดีกว่า

01:27:923 - Break ตรงนี้ด้วยนะครับ

00:48:148 (2) - ตามรูปเลยน้าคับ

01:58:091 (2) - ตรงนี้เหมือนกันครับ ทำแบบรูป

00:52:867 (1) - Add Clap Sound

01:01:294 (5) - เปลี่ยนสีหน่อยน้าคับ

01:03:654 (1) - เอาเปลี่ยนสีตัวนี้ออกจะดีกว่านะคับ

01:07:530 (3) - ผมว่ามือใหม่กดยากไปนะครับ ทำตามรูปได้เลยนะครับ

02:17:642 (3) - นี่ด้วยนะครับ

03:43:935 (3) - เหมือนกัน

01:10:058 (2) - ลด Reverse Arrow 1 ตัวนะครับ

02:20:170 (2) - นี่ด้วยนะครับ

03:46:463 (2) - เหมือนกัน

01:19:833 (1,2,3) - ท่าจะให้ดี

02:31:125 (2) - วางในสีขาวนะครับสีฟ้ามันไว้ใช้ใน Hard นะครับ และ

03:16:968 (3) - ตรงนี้ด้วยนะครับ

03:30:283 (2) - ย้ายมาตรงเส้นแดงดีกว่านะครับ

03:30:283 (2) - วาง Hit Circle แล้วจะเป๊ะเลย

Easy ตอนนี้หมดแล้วครับจุดบกพร่องที่ผมเห็น งั้นวันหลังมีอะไรทักมาให้ช่วยก็ได้นะครับ
ขอให้ได้แรงค์เร็วๆนะครับ
Good Luck :)


ขอบคุณมากครับ :D
seovince
Hello.. do you still need a modding? if yes, then here's my mod \o/ (my second mod :3)

Easy
SPOILER
1. 00:33:317 (1) - Why NC?
2. 00:40:058 (6) - Since the rhythm is change, i think it's better to put NC here then disable NC in 00:42:755 (1) -
3. 01:43:429 (1) - Why NC?
4. 01:43:429 (1) - hmm.. change it like point 2 ^
5. 01:54:889 (1) - disable the NC
6. 02:16:126 (5,6) - why dont put these note like 01:06:013 (5,6) - do? or the otherwise (up to you)
7. 02:58:261 (2) - i think it's better to place it in 02:57:923 - and 02:58:598 (3) - to 02:58:260 - and 02:58:935 (4) - to 02:58:597 - (they match the rhythm)
8. 03:15:451 (3,4) - same as point 6

Normal
SPOILER
1. 00:33:317 (1) - why NC?
2. 00:40:058 (2) - uuum... i think this slider-shape will do http://puu.sh/7GgDi.png
3. 01:23:204 (6) - NC here maybe?
4. 01:40:395 - Add note?
5. 01:42:418 - Add slider then delete the 01:42:754 (2) - , put circle in 01:43:092 - (just my recommendation)
6. 01:43:429 (1) - why NC?
7. 01:50:170 (2) - like point 2 ^
8. 02:33:316 (6) - NC here? and disable NC in 02:35:002 (1)
9. 03:07:699 (6) - NC here?
10. 03:32:642 (6) - NC here too? and disable NC in 03:34:328 (1) -
11. 03:34:328 (2,3,4) - i think it's better to not place them under 1
12. 03:59:608 (6) - aaaaaaand NC here too maybe?

Hard
SPOILER
1. 00:26:406 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it's a bit overmapped if you use DT
2. 00:30:451 (4) - hmmm... make it like this? before: http://puu.sh/7GhDD.png - after: http://puu.sh/7GhIb.png (it sure just a few change, but it'll make the pattern looks good)
3. 00:43:092 - Add note?
4. 00:53:541 (5) - move it to x:400 y:288
5. 00:54:215 (7) - move it to x:148 y: 308
6. 01:26:463 (9) - NC here?
7. 01:41:743 - Add note?
8. 01:42:418 - ^
9. 03:34:665 (8) - NC here?

I think you should insert a break time in this diff (Hard) since it'll consume much stamina considering this is a 4 minutes song.. For example you can put the break time in 02:57:081 - 03:02:137 - (just example)

Okay i think i'm done.. sorry if it's a bad mod.. but i hope i can help you even just a little.. :D

NB: i very very very love this song!
Topic Starter
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seovince wrote:

Hello.. do you still need a modding? if yes, then here's my mod \o/ (my second mod :3)

Easy
SPOILER
1. 00:33:317 (1) - Why NC?
2. 00:40:058 (6) - Since the rhythm is change, i think it's better to put NC here then disable NC in 00:42:755 (1) -
3. 01:43:429 (1) - Why NC?
4. 01:43:429 (1) - hmm.. change it like point 2 ^
5. 01:54:889 (1) - disable the NC
6. 02:16:126 (5,6) - why dont put these note like 01:06:013 (5,6) - do? or the otherwise (up to you)
7. 02:58:261 (2) - i think it's better to place it in 02:57:923 - and 02:58:598 (3) - to 02:58:260 - and 02:58:935 (4) - to 02:58:597 - (they match the rhythm)
8. 03:15:451 (3,4) - same as point 6

Normal
SPOILER
1. 00:33:317 (1) - why NC?
2. 00:40:058 (2) - uuum... i think this slider-shape will do http://puu.sh/7GgDi.png
3. 01:23:204 (6) - NC here maybe?
4. 01:40:395 - Add note?
5. 01:42:418 - Add slider then delete the 01:42:754 (2) - , put circle in 01:43:092 - (just my recommendation)
6. 01:43:429 (1) - why NC?
7. 01:50:170 (2) - like point 2 ^
8. 02:33:316 (6) - NC here? and disable NC in 02:35:002 (1)
9. 03:07:699 (6) - NC here?
10. 03:32:642 (6) - NC here too? and disable NC in 03:34:328 (1) -
11. 03:34:328 (2,3,4) - i think it's better to not place them under 1
12. 03:59:608 (6) - aaaaaaand NC here too maybe?

Hard
SPOILER
1. 00:26:406 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it's a bit overmapped if you use DT
2. 00:30:451 (4) - hmmm... make it like this? before: http://puu.sh/7GhDD.png - after: http://puu.sh/7GhIb.png (it sure just a few change, but it'll make the pattern looks good)
3. 00:43:092 - Add note?
4. 00:53:541 (5) - move it to x:400 y:288
5. 00:54:215 (7) - move it to x:148 y: 308
6. 01:26:463 (9) - NC here?
7. 01:41:743 - Add note?
8. 01:42:418 - ^
9. 03:34:665 (8) - NC here?

I think you should insert a break time in this diff (Hard) since it'll consume much stamina considering this is a 4 minutes song.. For example you can put the break time in 02:57:081 - 03:02:137 - (just example)

Okay i think i'm done.. sorry if it's a bad mod.. but i hope i can help you even just a little.. :D

NB: i very very very love this song!

fix it almost.


Thanks for mod yery much :)
mintong89
Hey

[General]
Honestly I think Japanese lyric is better than Romaji lyric

[Hard]

00:04:328 (1,2) - Blanket? Currently little ugly imo.
00:10:058 (2) - I think this is too curve.
00:18:485 (2,3,4) - Make the distance same?
00:24:552 (4,5) - This is too close, you should make same distance as 00:23:204 (1,2,3) -
01:16:463 (6,1) - Make as same slider? It will more beautiful if you make it.
01:28:597 (2,3,4) - Make the distance same?
02:05:676 (1,2) - Make slider same?
02:58:261 (2) - Blanket with (1) head?

Well, Normal and Easy is fine for me...
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
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Mintong wrote:

Hey

[General]
Honestly I think Japanese lyric is better than Romaji lyric

[Hard]

00:04:328 (1,2) - Blanket? Currently little ugly imo.
00:10:058 (2) - I think this is too curve.
00:18:485 (2,3,4) - Make the distance same?
00:24:552 (4,5) - This is too close, you should make same distance as 00:23:204 (1,2,3) -
01:16:463 (6,1) - Make as same slider? It will more beautiful if you make it.
01:28:597 (2,3,4) - Make the distance same?
02:05:676 (1,2) - Make slider same?
02:58:261 (2) - Blanket with (1) head?

Well, Normal and Easy is fine for me...
Good Luck!

Updated!

I think Romaji is easier to read for other country. so i'm not change to japanese lyrics. (sorry)

Thanks for mod :)
Knotts


Hey, here from my Q, sorry for being so late.

[General]
  1. Take out "Hyouka" from tags since it's already listed in the source. Instead you could put "氷菓".
  2. Actually you should take out all of your tags because its already all listed in the song setup. Instead you could put stuff like "ending" and character names I guess.
[Easy]
  1. Can't really mod this because too inconsistent with spacing. Easy difficulties need to have consistent spacing throughout the entire map. Stacks should be fine but then again stacks aren't too beginner friendly. Call me back to mod this difficulty once you fix it up a bit.
[Normal]
  1. This difficulty has a bunch of inconsistent spacing which is really discourage (maybe not even allowed at all - I'm not too sure) but I'll go ahead and mod it anyways while ignoring them.
  2. Typically you want to avoid mapping on blue ticks on Normals. Avoid focusing on the vocals too much.
  3. 00:01:631 (1) - finish at a lower volume might sound better than a whistle here.
  4. 00:02:811 (2) - sounds really bad following the vocals here. Instead use a 1/2 slider starting at 00:02:979?
  5. 00:03:991 (1,2,3) - I think it sounds/plays a lot better by not focusing on the vocals here by doing something like this:
  6. 00:07:024 (3) - finish?
  7. 00:09:721 (1) - ^
  8. 00:11:743 (1) - ^
  9. 00:15:114 (2) - ^
  10. 00:20:508 (1) - ^
  11. 00:48:485 (3,4) - maybe just stack these since there's no way to get them not to touch each other at 0.8x DS
  12. 00:52:530 (1) - i think it sounds better to put a circle here and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:52:867
  13. 01:01:463 (2) - start this on a blue tick is a nono.
  14. 01:02:137 (3) - ^ I'm just gonna stop mentioning these. You should really avoid having these especially on a Normal
  15. 01:06:350 (5) - finish on tail
  16. 01:19:833 (1) - really weird flow from (4). I can't really recommend you where to place it because I have no idea what DS you're using.
  17. 01:44:103 (1) - end this slider on the white tick to match the music
  18. 02:02:642 (1) - sounds better if you use a circle here and start a 1/2 slider at 02:02:979
  19. 02:33:317 (6) - NC here to keep consistency. (Ex: 01:23:204 (1))
  20. 03:37:361 (1,2,3,4) - woah woah woah. This is way to hard for a normal. deleeete stuffs
[Hard]
  1. 01:07:699 (4) - finish or clap in the middle? sounds empty without something here.
  2. 01:09:047 (1,2,3) - need to clean these blankets up. Move some stuff around and blanket (3) to (2) while having (3)'s tail stack on top of 6
  3. 02:20:170 (3) - this slider looks really weird. Fix it up to blanket (2) better.
  4. 02:23:036 (3,4) - blanket?
  5. 02:24:552 (1) - finish
  6. 02:25:732 (4) - finish on tail
  7. 02:28:597 (3) - finish
  8. 02:35:339 (8) - NC here for consistency? If so remove NC from the one after it.
  9. 02:42:586 (5,6) - remove clap on (5) and put it on (6)
  10. 02:52:024 (2,3,4) - I think this matches the music more
  11. 03:18:991 (2,3) - need to fix this blanket, looks messy
  12. 03:46:463 (2,3) - ^
  13. 04:07:024 (1) - finish
  14. 04:13:766 (3) - finish on tail
Good luck!
Topic Starter
- H i N a -

Knotts wrote:



Hey, here from my Q, sorry for being so late.

[General]
  1. Take out "Hyouka" from tags since it's already listed in the source. Instead you could put "氷菓".
  2. Actually you should take out all of your tags because its already all listed in the song setup. Instead you could put stuff like "ending" and character names I guess.
[Easy]
  1. Can't really mod this because too inconsistent with spacing. Easy difficulties need to have consistent spacing throughout the entire map. Stacks should be fine but then again stacks aren't too beginner friendly. Call me back to mod this difficulty once you fix it up a bit.
[Normal]
  1. This difficulty has a bunch of inconsistent spacing which is really discourage (maybe not even allowed at all - I'm not too sure) but I'll go ahead and mod it anyways while ignoring them.
  2. Typically you want to avoid mapping on blue ticks on Normals. Avoid focusing on the vocals too much.
  3. 00:01:631 (1) - finish at a lower volume might sound better than a whistle here.
  4. 00:02:811 (2) - sounds really bad following the vocals here. Instead use a 1/2 slider starting at 00:02:979?
  5. 00:03:991 (1,2,3) - I think it sounds/plays a lot better by not focusing on the vocals here by doing something like this:
  6. 00:07:024 (3) - finish?
  7. 00:09:721 (1) - ^
  8. 00:11:743 (1) - ^
  9. 00:15:114 (2) - ^
  10. 00:20:508 (1) - ^
  11. 00:48:485 (3,4) - maybe just stack these since there's no way to get them not to touch each other at 0.8x DS
  12. 00:52:530 (1) - i think it sounds better to put a circle here and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:52:867
  13. 01:01:463 (2) - start this on a blue tick is a nono.
  14. 01:02:137 (3) - ^ I'm just gonna stop mentioning these. You should really avoid having these especially on a Normal
  15. 01:06:350 (5) - finish on tail
  16. 01:19:833 (1) - really weird flow from (4). I can't really recommend you where to place it because I have no idea what DS you're using.
  17. 01:44:103 (1) - end this slider on the white tick to match the music
  18. 02:02:642 (1) - sounds better if you use a circle here and start a 1/2 slider at 02:02:979
  19. 02:33:317 (6) - NC here to keep consistency. (Ex: 01:23:204 (1))
  20. 03:37:361 (1,2,3,4) - woah woah woah. This is way to hard for a normal. deleeete stuffs
[Hard]
  1. 01:07:699 (4) - finish or clap in the middle? sounds empty without something here.
  2. 01:09:047 (1,2,3) - need to clean these blankets up. Move some stuff around and blanket (3) to (2) while having (3)'s tail stack on top of 6
  3. 02:20:170 (3) - this slider looks really weird. Fix it up to blanket (2) better.
  4. 02:23:036 (3,4) - blanket?
  5. 02:24:552 (1) - finish
  6. 02:25:732 (4) - finish on tail
  7. 02:28:597 (3) - finish
  8. 02:35:339 (8) - NC here for consistency? If so remove NC from the one after it.
  9. 02:42:586 (5,6) - remove clap on (5) and put it on (6)
  10. 02:52:024 (2,3,4) - I think this matches the music more
  11. 03:18:991 (2,3) - need to fix this blanket, looks messy
  12. 03:46:463 (2,3) - ^
  13. 04:07:024 (1) - finish
  14. 04:13:766 (3) - finish on tail
Good luck!
I'm going to fix it...

Thanks for mods :D
RandF
From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]
  1. Title: まどろみの約束
  2. Airtist: 佐藤聡美、茅野愛衣
  3. Generally, for tags, you should not add the word included in title, aritist, source
  4. tags suggetion:
    ending
    chitanda eru
    mayaka ibara
    kyoto animation
  5. BG: I recommend to resize to 1024*768
  6. 03:10:400~03:21:187- kiai-time is necessary?
[SB]
  1. for SB, the maximum is 800x600 pixels. you must resize the images used for SB
    check this
  2. you use the many same images for lyrics. (For example 013.png and 039.png.) you should remove and you can reduce file size
  3. 014(a040).png: chiisana negai boshi
[Easy]
  1. for easy, normal diff, you should not change SV
  2. because of low bpm, i recommend to increase DS. DS0.8x is hard to find rhythm (especially, blue line's rhythm)
  3. 00:00:962 (1,1) - for easy, it is better not to stack like this
  4. 00:06:692 (3) - difficult for easy. I suggest to add only circle at 00:07:029
  5. 00:33:322 (3,4,1) - for beginner, very hard stack like this
  6. 00:43:434 (4) - more than 2 reverse slider is difficult for beginner
  7. 02:59:277 (1,2,3) - I prefer this
  8. 03:37:366- because of kiaitime start, it is better to add some note
[Normal]
  1. I suggest to increase DS, too
  2. 00:04:670 (2,3) - you should avoid overlap like this
  3. 00:06:018- add a note
  4. 00:14:108 (4,1) - for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
  5. 00:47:479 (1,2,3) - I suggest reverse slider. 1/4 rhythm circles are a little hard for normal
  6. 01:21:524 (5) - many times reverse is not good
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:074 (4,5,6) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:52:198 (7) - stack on the end of 00:51:187 (4) - ?
  3. 00:52:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - conform DS
  4. 01:04:333 (3,4) - flow is not good
  5. 01:09:052 (1,2) - if blanket each other, the same shape slider(created by copying) is better
  6. 01:27:254 (3,1) - stack correctly
  7. 01:51:860 (6) - upward slider is better for goot flow
  8. 03:06:692 (5) - x:270 y:352. regular triangle is better.
even if the same melody part, it is better to make defferent pattern, imo
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
- H i N a -

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]
  1. Title: まどろみの約束
  2. Airtist: 佐藤聡美、茅野愛衣
  3. Generally, for tags, you should not add the word included in title, aritist, source
  4. tags suggetion:
    ending
    chitanda eru
    mayaka ibara
    kyoto animation
  5. BG: I recommend to resize to 1024*768
  6. 03:10:400~03:21:187- kiai-time is necessary?
[SB]
  1. for SB, the maximum is 800x600 pixels. you must resize the images used for SB
    check this
  2. you use the many same images for lyrics. (For example 013.png and 039.png.) you should remove and you can reduce file size
  3. 014(a040).png: chiisana negai boshi
[Easy]
  1. for easy, normal diff, you should not change SV
  2. because of low bpm, i recommend to increase DS. DS0.8x is hard to find rhythm (especially, blue line's rhythm)
  3. 00:00:962 (1,1) - for easy, it is better not to stack like this
  4. 00:06:692 (3) - difficult for easy. I suggest to add only circle at 00:07:029
  5. 00:33:322 (3,4,1) - for beginner, very hard stack like this
  6. 00:43:434 (4) - more than 2 reverse slider is difficult for beginner
  7. 02:59:277 (1,2,3) - I prefer this
  8. 03:37:366- because of kiaitime start, it is better to add some note
[Normal]
  1. I suggest to increase DS, too
  2. 00:04:670 (2,3) - you should avoid overlap like this
  3. 00:06:018- add a note
  4. 00:14:108 (4,1) - for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
  5. 00:47:479 (1,2,3) - I suggest reverse slider. 1/4 rhythm circles are a little hard for normal
  6. 01:21:524 (5) - many times reverse is not good
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:074 (4,5,6) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:52:198 (7) - stack on the end of 00:51:187 (4) - ?
  3. 00:52:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - conform DS
  4. 01:04:333 (3,4) - flow is not good
  5. 01:09:052 (1,2) - if blanket each other, the same shape slider(created by copying) is better
  6. 01:27:254 (3,1) - stack correctly
  7. 01:51:860 (6) - upward slider is better for goot flow
  8. 03:06:692 (5) - x:270 y:352. regular triangle is better.
even if the same melody part, it is better to make defferent pattern, imo
~Good Luck~


I'm going to fix it...

Thanks for mod :D
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
4 ~ 5 minutes = 2 diffs
[General]
*BG should be 1366x768 or 1024x768. Yours is currently 1228x768

* The lyrics are really nice. However, I think it'd be more formal and professional if you had them in kanji as well (so it's also in the original language too!)

[Easy]
00:09:052 (2) - Move to 424:136 to create a smooth blanket around it's head.
00:14:445 (1) - Remove NC, it isn't necessary here.
00:50:175 (4) - Change clap on the head to a finish, so it fits with that cymbal crash heard in the music. Also, can you try to bend and re-position this slider better? Either fix it to blanket 00:48:827 (3) - 's tail better, or don't bother trying at all.
00:51:524 (5,6,7) - Replace with 00:55:569 (1) - or unstack, since triplets can be hard to read for beginners.
01:05:007 (4,5,6) - Unstack, same reason as above.
01:23:209 (4) - NC, since it is the first object to appear after Kai time ends.
01:25:400 (1) - Extend its tail to 01:27:928 and add a finish. Personally that cymbal crash at 01:27:928 emphasizes a finish to the first playtime better then the drum hit at 01:27:254.
01:50:175 (6) - NC
02:01:636 (4,5,6) - Replace with 00:55:569 (1) - or unstack, since triplets can be hard to read for beginners.
02:15:119 (4,5,6) - Unstack, same reason as above.
02:32:647 - Kai time ends here, like how the previous one ended at 01:22:535.
02:33:321 (4) - NC
02:56:917 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack.
03:10:737 (2) - NC instead of 03:09:726 (1) -
03:16:468 (5) - NC for slider speed change.
03:31:973 - Kai time should've ended here instead of 03:21:187. You can ignore AiMod complaining about the Kai times.
03:41:412 (2,3,4) - Unstack.
03:58:940 - Kai time ends here.
03:59:614 (4) - NC

Inconsistent Kai times in this diff.

[Normal]
00:04:670 (2,3) - Too close to each other.
00:07:704 (4,5,6) - ^
00:09:052 (6,1) - Are too far apart lol. Just move 00:09:726 (1) - to 232:280 Without having to move any objects around.
01:40:063 (2,3) - Are too close
03:33:321 (2,3) - Are obviously too far apart.
.....

Okay, you really need to use the Distance Snap in this diff. Using DS is a huge priority in Normal/Easy diffs, and must be used at all times when working on these diffs.
So generally, just keeping this guy on:



00:50:175 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:27:928 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, for a better ending to the playtime before the break starts.
01:33:322 - ^ To follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
02:00:287 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:03:658 (3) - Add clap no the head.
02:32:647 - End Kai time.
02:46:131 Consider adding a note here with a finish, to follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
02:59:277 (1) - Please replacing with a note here, and use this slider on 02:59:614 - to 02:59:951 instead. It sounds really off, since it overruns the emphasized 'o' on the vocals.

03:31:973 - End Kai time here instead.
03:58:940 - ^

Similar issue as Easy diff, plus the DS inconsistency. Be sure to fix them :?

Good luck.
Neta
Hi~ from my modding queue


[Easy]
  1. first check AI mod (Ctrl + Shift + A)
  2. 00:14:445 (1) - remove NC doesn't need NC here
  3. 00:15:288 (1) - hmm.. maybe finish is more fit here
  4. 00:33:322 (3,4,1) - change to this beat 1/2 is really not good for easy diff
  5. 00:40:063 (1) - why is this 1.76 distance? better fix this use 0.8x you should use same distance all notes and sliders on Easy diff
  6. 00:47:142 (3) - Remove this note same reason with 4th one
  7. 01:07:029 (7,1) - swap NC
  8. 01:23:209 (4) - add NC
  9. 01:43:771 (4) - Remove this note same reason with 4th one
  10. 01:50:175 (6,1) - swap NC
  11. 01:54:894 (4) - add NC
  12. 01:57:254 (6) - Remove this note same reason with 4th one
  13. 02:01:636 (4,1) - swap NC
  14. 02:09:726 (1,3) - ^
  15. 02:17:142 (7) - add NC this Slider's speed goes different
  16. 02:24:220 (1,2) - swap NC
  17. 02:33:321 (4) - add NC
  18. 02:56:917 (1,2,3,4) - ah.. this beat can be hard for easy diff . better change like this
  19. 03:00:625 (3) - move this note to 03:01:589 will be right beat
  20. 03:08:378 (4) - move to 296, 324 distance is wrong with 03:07:030 (3) -
  21. 03:15:456 (3) - Remove this note same reason with 4th one
  22. 03:16:468 (5) - add NC this Slider's speed goes different
  23. 03:23:546 (1,2) - swap NC
  24. 03:32:647 (1) - add NC
  25. 03:42:423 (3) - Remove this note same reason with 4th one
  26. 03:50:513 (1,2) - swap NC
  27. 03:59:614 (4) - add NC

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:647 (2,3) - remove 00:03:659 (3) - and move 00:02:647 (2) - to 00:02:984 is right beat
  2. 00:04:670 (2,3) - better don't make this overlapping
  3. 00:14:108 (4) - move to 96, 68 distance is wrong now
  4. 00:19:838 (4,5) - this jump is not good for Normal diff..
  5. 00:33:322 (3) - ^
  6. 01:06:018 (5,1) - ^
  7. 00:23:715 (1) - move this note to 00:23:546
  8. 01:09:052 (1,2) - why is distance is 1.2? better make same distance with 01:10:063 (2,3) -
  9. 01:20:513 (3,4) - you used 1.3x on this but used 1.0x on 01:21:018 (4,1) - better make this to 1.0x
  10. 01:23:209 (1,2,3,4) - better make these distance all same
  11. 01:42:085 (1,2,3) - ^
  12. 02:01:636 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  13. 02:16:130 (5,1) - distance is too long for Normal diff
  14. 02:31:130 (4) - same reason. with 01:20:513 (3,4)
  15. 02:33:322 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:23:209 (1,2,3,4)
  16. 02:58:940 (4,1) - better don't make like this jump on Normal diff
  17. 03:06:692 (4,5) - ^
  18. 03:15:456 (5,1) - ^
  19. 03:30:456 (4) - same reason. with 01:20:513 (3,4)
  20. 03:32:647 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:23:209 (1,2,3,4)
  21. 03:42:422 (5,1) - better don't make like this jump on Normal diff
  22. 03:50:175 (4,1) - ^
  23. 03:57:422 (4) - same reason. with 01:20:513 (3,4)
  24. 03:59:613 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:23:209 (1,2,3,4)

ah.. you need to use more distance snap when you make Easy and Normal diff

anyway Good Luck~
Sonico Makaron
Hi! Sorry for late

[General]
Since you use storyboard you must add Display epilepsy warning on all diffs

[Easy]
00:50:175 (4) - NC
01:23:209 (4) - Put NC
02:33:321 (4) - ^

[Normal]
wow so much Silder Velocity for normal, i recommend use 1.40
00:20:175 (5) - Jump in normal? I recommend use same spacing
00:50:175 (1) - Add finish
01:22:535 (4,1) - Swap NC

[Hard]
00:16:468 (3) - Add whistle at the head slider
02:53:209 (4) - Wrong note here, remove it

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
- H i N a -
Thanks for all :)

Sorry for very very late i got slience for 25 days. Orz.. but now, I'm free! :)

I'm going to fix it soon :D
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