4 ~ 5 minutes = 2 diffs[General]
*BG should be 1366x768 or 1024x768. Yours is currently
1228x768
* The lyrics are really nice. However, I think it'd be more formal and professional if you had them in kanji as well (so it's also in the original language too!)[Easy]
00:09:052 (2) - Move to 424:136 to create a smooth blanket around it's head.
00:14:445 (1) - Remove NC, it isn't necessary here.
00:50:175 (4) - Change clap on the head to a finish, so it fits with that cymbal crash heard in the music. Also, can you try to bend and re-position this slider better? Either fix it to blanket 00:48:827 (3) - 's tail better, or don't bother trying at all.
00:51:524 (5,6,7) - Replace with 00:55:569 (1) -
or unstack, since triplets can be hard to read for beginners.
01:05:007 (4,5,6) - Unstack, same reason as above.
01:23:209 (4) - NC, since it is the first object to appear after Kai time ends.
01:25:400 (1) - Extend its tail to 01:27:928 and add a finish. Personally that cymbal crash at 01:27:928 emphasizes a finish to the first playtime better then the drum hit at 01:27:254.
01:50:175 (6) - NC
02:01:636 (4,5,6) - Replace with 00:55:569 (1) -
or unstack, since triplets can be hard to read for beginners.
02:15:119 (4,5,6) - Unstack, same reason as above.
02:32:647 - Kai time ends here, like how the previous one ended at 01:22:535.
02:33:321 (4) - NC
02:56:917 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack.
03:10:737 (2) - NC instead of 03:09:726 (1) -
03:16:468 (5) - NC for slider speed change.
03:31:973 - Kai time should've ended here instead of 03:21:187. You can ignore AiMod complaining about the Kai times.
03:41:412 (2,3,4) - Unstack.
03:58:940 - Kai time ends here.
03:59:614 (4) - NC
Inconsistent Kai times in this diff.
[Normal]
00:04:670 (2,3) - Too close to each other.
00:07:704 (4,5,6) - ^
00:09:052 (6,1) - Are too far apart lol. Just move 00:09:726 (1) - to 232:280 Without having to move any objects around.
01:40:063 (2,3) - Are too close
03:33:321 (2,3) - Are obviously too far apart.
.....
Okay, you really need to use the
Distance Snap in this diff. Using DS is a huge priority in Normal/Easy diffs, and must be used
at all times when working on these diffs.
So generally, just keeping this guy on:
00:50:175 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:27:928 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, for a better ending to the playtime before the break starts.
01:33:322 - ^ To follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
02:00:287 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:03:658 (3) - Add clap no the head.
02:32:647 - End Kai time.
02:46:131 Consider adding a note here with a finish, to follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
02:59:277 (1) - Please replacing with a note here, and use this slider on 02:59:614 - to 02:59:951 instead. It sounds really off, since it overruns the emphasized 'o' on the vocals.
03:31:973 - End Kai time here instead.
03:58:940 - ^
Similar issue as Easy diff, plus the DS inconsistency. Be sure to fix them
Good luck.