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V.K - Reverse - Parallel Universe [OsuMania]

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Chamelo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 เมษายน 2558 at 5:48:34 PM

Artist: V.K
Title: Reverse - Parallel Universe
Source: Deemo
Tags: Rayark The 3rd Movement Vanros Kloud
BPM: 115
Filesize: 28807kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 7Key (1.47 stars, 467 notes)
  2. Hard - 7Key (3.21 stars, 1080 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (2.14 stars, 745 notes)
Download: V.K - Reverse - Parallel Universe
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Free your mind. Play piano...

REVERSE - PARALLEL UNIVERSE
115-120 BPM


This beatmap contains keysound. Please enable custom hitsounds for maximum experience.

Thanks to
Thanks to LordRaika's piano keysounds I can make my (little) dream come true. x3
Thanks to ExUsagi for digging this up from graveyard and help me at every aspect.
Thanks to Gexigamma for a very neat BG that I myself couldn't find any better than this.
Thanks to every BN/modder coming in an modding it. And thank you so much for playing. Every play make my time spent on this beatmap worth. <3
#osumanianeedsmoredeemo !
#osumanianeedsmorekeysoundedmaps !

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- Yuuto -
Hi there Chamelo_Th
I see you at #modreqs , well, yeah..

Alrighty then

Here is my modd
Coloumn 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[General]
Breaktime is not suggested for mania maps.
The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize.

[Hard]
00:10:345 (10345|1) - delete, unnecessary..
00:12:432 (12432|3) - extends to hold end at 00:13:214
00:13:214 ~ 00:14:519 - how about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393227
00:14:519 - theres one note should be holds end at
00:19:867 ~ 00:20:780 - i suggest like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393230
00:33:910 (33910|5) - move to 3
00:41:910 (41910|3) - change this to holds end at 00:42:660
01:53:035 (113035|3) - unnecessary, delete
01:05:160 - add note at 3
00:59:910 (59910|5) - move to 5
01:01:410 ~ 01:01:910 - how about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393246
01:09:847 (69847|0,69847|4,69878|1,69878|5,69910|6,69910|2) - use 1/8 and rearrenge them it will make more comfortable to play.
01:09:847 (69847|0,69847|4,69878|1,69878|5,69910|6,69910|2) - same reason as ^
01:11:847 (71847|0,71847|4,71878|1,71878|5,71910|6,71910|2) - these one too ^

Thats it.

good luck then :D
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi, Yuutosan. :)
Thanks for the great mod! (real quick!)

Yuutosan wrote:

[General]
Breaktime is not suggested for mania maps. Um... It's the part of the song. Maybe I should add it. Can't decide now.
The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize. It's not finish yet.

[Hard]
00:10:345 (10345|1) - delete, unnecessary.. Done.
00:12:432 (12432|3) - extends to hold end at 00:13:214 Done.
00:13:214 ~ 00:14:519 - how about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393227 Nice idea!
00:14:519 - theres one note should be holds end at The note from ^ suggest already does its job. > <
00:19:867 ~ 00:20:780 - i suggest like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393230 Yeah.
00:33:910 (33910|5) - move to 3 Done.
00:41:910 (41910|3) - change this to holds end at 00:42:660 Done.
01:53:035 (113035|3) - unnecessary, delete Okay.
01:05:160 - add note at 3 It doesn't follow a piano track, but it's great anyway. :D
00:59:910 (59910|5) - move to 5 Yup.
01:01:410 ~ 01:01:910 - how about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393246 Wow.
01:09:847 (69847|0,69847|4,69878|1,69878|5,69910|6,69910|2) - use 1/8 and rearrenge them it will make more comfortable to play. It's better!
01:09:847 (69847|0,69847|4,69878|1,69878|5,69910|6,69910|2) - same reason as ^ Duplicate?
01:11:847 (71847|0,71847|4,71878|1,71878|5,71910|6,71910|2) - these one too ^ All done.
REDYUMiKA
Hi everyone, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
---> Has been promoted to GM


[General]
I suggest you fix each OD/HP as the below.
Easy(HP:7, OD:6-7) Normal(HP:7, OD:7) Hard(HP:7, OD:7-8)

Yuutosan wrote:

Breaktime is not suggested for mania maps.
Basically specific maps aren't allowed to use it. I mean, that's not suggestion.

[Patterns of 7K Easy]
00:15:693 (15693|4,16084|2) - Ctrl+H
00:17:649 (17649|1) - move to 3
00:17:780 - add a note to 6
00:23:388 (23388|3,23649|4) - Ctrl+H
00:24:954 (24954|5) - move to 5
00:35:410 (35410|5,35910|4) - Ctrl+J
01:03:160 (63160|1) - move to 3
01:08:160 (68160|1) - move to 5
01:10:910 (70910|6) - ^
01:12:910 (72910|0) - move to 3
01:13:910 (73910|2) - move to 4
01:14:285 (74285|4) - move to 7
01:22:660 (82660|6) - move to 3
01:23:285 (83285|4) - move to 4
01:23:660 (83660|3) - move to 2
01:26:660 (86660|2) - move to 4
01:26:910 (86910|3) - move to 5
01:27:660 (87660|2) - move to 2
01:28:285 (88285|1) - move to 3
01:28:660 (88660|2) - move to 5
01:28:910 (88910|4) - move to 2
01:30:285 (90285|4) - move to 3

[Patterns of 7K Normal]
00:11:127 (11127|2) - move to 2
00:11:519 (11519|4) - move to 4
00:12:432 (12432|0) - move to 2
00:13:997 (13997|1) - move to 1
00:13:214 (13214|2) - move to 2
00:16:736 (16736|4) - move to 4
00:17:649 (17649|4) - move to 7
00:18:171 (18171|3) - move to 6
00:18:954 (18954|0) - move to 2
00:19:084 (19084|1) - move to 5
00:22:345 (22345|3) - move to 5
00:22:867 (22867|4) - move to 4
00:45:410 (45410|3) - move to 2
00:45:910 (45910|1) - move to 1
00:45:910 (45910|4,46160|4,46160|2,46410|2) - move these notes not to overlap vertically
00:48:160 (48160|1,48410|5) - remove, then 00:48:285 - add a note to optional column (*2) --->nearly same reason:(*1)
00:52:160 (52160|1,52410|5) - remove, then 00:52:285 - add a note to optional column (*2) --->nearly same reason:(*1)
01:04:910 (64910|0) - remove, the reason is (*1), moreover here is drum-line, not suitable
01:09:660 (69660|5) - move to 3
01:18:285 (78285|3,78535|3,78785|3,79410|4,79785|5) - remove, here is overmapped
01:51:910 (111910|1,112035|1,112160|1) - this mini-jack pattern isn't preferable as a normal diff, remove or set it like stairs

*Note,1 :
00:29:910 - to 00:41:910 - The combination patterns of LN&several notes are a bit difficult as a normal diff,
and should be considered the length of specific pattern. I suggest you remove/(add) several LNs/(notes), then add LNs to...
00:41:910 - end at 00:42:660 - / 00:42:660 - end at 00:43:160 - for optional column
--

*Note,2 :
1/4s that combined 3 notes or more aren't preferable pattern as a normal diff, (*1)
however, most people will be able to hear the piano sounds clearly in the below sections.
Please consider it carefully whether you maintain these notes, or not.
✔・・・This index indicated the point that I suggest you remove the note.
00:15:171 (15171|3) - ✔ / 00:23:519 (23519|1) - / 00:25:606 (25606|5) - / 00:39:785 (39785|4) -
00:55:785 (55785|5) - / 01:01:785 (61785|1) - / 01:02:785 (62785|3) - / 01:02:910 (62910|5) - ✔
01:04:910 (64910|0) - ✔ / 01:05:785 (65785|4) - / 01:06:910 (66910|4) - ✔ / 01:08:910 (68910|3) - ✔
01:11:785 (71785|5) - / 01:21:785 (81785|1) - / (01:29:785 - *missed) / 01:59:785 (119785|2) -
02:03:785 (123785|4) - / 02:05:785 (125785|2) - / 02:07:785 (127785|2) - / 02:11:785 (131785|5) -
02:17:785 (137785|5,137785|1) - / 02:25:785 (145785|1) -
--

*Note,3 :
The below patterns are so fun, but it's near "hard" difficulty rather than "normal",
especially (*3) would impress general players..,"That's difficult"
01:42:910 - to 01:43:660 -
01:46:910 - to 01:47:660 -
01:50:910 - to 01:51:660 -
02:21:410 - to 02:21:910 - (*3)
02:27:160 - to 02:27:660 - (02:27:785 - *missed) - (*3)
02:29:410 - to 02:29:910 - (*3)
--

[Patterns of 7K Hard]
00:16:475 (16475|2,16606|1) - remove, there is no emphasized sounds, and then..
00:16:345 - add a LN to optional column, end at 00:16:736 -
00:17:910 (17910|1,18041|0) - remove,^
00:17:780 - add a LN to optional column, end at 00:18:171 -
00:18:432 (18432|1,18562|0) - remove,^
00:18:432 - add a LN to optional column, end at 00:18:693 -
00:33:910 (33910|0) - What do these LNs have followed?
00:37:910 (37910|2) - ^
00:48:160 (48160|2) - move to 6
02:03:410 (123410|6) - remove, here is preferable not to put any notes
02:19:910 (139910|4) - move to 6

[Comment]
Normal has many points that you should consider to improve the patterns.
I think the others have no critical problems.
This is awesome mapset, especially 7K Hard is really good for me.
Please don't forget to solve the general problems.
Please call me anytime whenever you wanna get the hitsoundings review.
Good Luck :oops:
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi lil_yumika_lil! :)
Wow, so many mod! All of it are very useful and reasonable!

All mod applied

below here will be some additional comment/information from me. (in blue color.)

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

---> Has been promoted to GM Thank you!

Yuutosan wrote:

Breaktime is not suggested for mania maps.
Basically specific maps aren't allowed to use it. I mean, that's not suggestion.
Yeah, that's why I said it's WIP.

All Easy pattern fixed.

All Normal pattern fixed.

*Note,1 :
00:29:910 - to 00:41:910 - The combination patterns of LN&several notes are a bit difficult as a normal diff,
and should be considered the length of specific pattern. I suggest you remove/(add) several LNs/(notes), then add LNs to...
00:41:910 - end at 00:42:660 - / 00:42:660 - end at 00:43:160 - for optional column
--

I personally think that it's fine. Because it's somewhere between Easy and Hard. (Hard is 2 LNs and Easy is zero.)
So, I only remove the last 2 LNs. (From 6 room to 4 room.)


*Note,2 :
1/4s that combined 3 notes or more aren't preferable pattern as a normal diff, (*1)
however, most people will be able to hear the piano sounds clearly in the below sections.
Please consider it carefully whether you maintain these notes, or not.
✔・・・This index indicated the point that I suggest you remove the note.
Those I removed:
00:15:171 (15171|3) - ✔ /
00:39:785 (39785|4) -
01:02:785 (62785|3) - /
01:02:910 (62910|5) - ✔
01:06:910 (66910|4) - ✔ /
01:08:910 (68910|3) - ✔
Those I didn't:
00:23:519 (23519|1) - /
00:25:606 (25606|5) - /
00:55:785 (55785|5) - /
01:01:785 (61785|1) - /
01:04:910 (64910|0) - ✔ /
01:05:785 (65785|4) - /
01:11:785 (71785|5) - /
01:21:785 (81785|1) - /
(01:29:785 - *missed) / <--- I added it.
01:59:785 (119785|2) -
02:03:785 (123785|4) - /
02:05:785 (125785|2) - /
02:07:785 (127785|2) - /
02:11:785 (131785|5) -
02:17:785 (137785|5,137785|1) - /
02:25:785 (145785|1) -
--

[Patterns of 7K Hard]
00:33:910 (33910|0) - What do these LNs have followed?
00:37:910 (37910|2) - ^

These LNs follow a left-hand piano, just like it's couple. But I wanted to repeat the same column for the next chord, so I have to end the previous one 1/2 beat before the new one.

02:03:410 (123410|6) - remove, here is preferable not to put any notes

It's a bell sound, but never mind, I removed it.

[Comment]
Normal has many points that you should consider to improve the patterns. See below. v
This is awesome mapset, especially 7K Hard is really good for me. Thaks a lot! :D
Please call me anytime whenever you wanna get the hitsoundings review. See below. v
I actually made a lot of mistake during mapping.
Since a mania mapping is new for me, I can't do the pattern properly, sorry for that. :?
I'll consider them later, when I've got a chance.
No hitsound is needed for the beatmap, but if you really want to add some additional hitsound for the map, (like clap/whistle) feel free to do it!
Anyway, thank you for modding! :)
Kurisu Makise
From Shana's queue

Hi, Chamelo_Th!
Here is my mod (column 1-7)

Easy

Inside :3
00:29:910 (29910|1) - Move somewhere not so close to 1st column (maybe, 4th)
00:49:660 (49660|4) - There's no need in this note since that beat isn't stronger, than surrounding. I advise you not to use 1/4 stream in Easy, so just delete
00:49:160 (49160|4,49410|6,49910|5,49910|2) - Maybe move left to make it more comfortable for players, that use 4 fingers on right hand?
00:55:410 - Strong beat, add note
00:57:910 (57910|5,57910|1,58285|5,58660|5,58910|1) - (and further) - I think, one note isn't enough to stress that. Try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460093
01:09:410 - You should place note here, if follow piano (to 4 column, I think)
01:17:910 (77910|2,78035|4,78285|1,78535|3,78785|5) - Doesn't match to next pattern. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460161
01:25:660 (85660|5) - Suggest to move up to one line with next note
01:33:660 (93660|5) - ^ (if accept, then delete note in 4th column)
01:35:910 (95910|5,96035|5) - Too hard for Easy, I think. Use pattern from here: 01:17:910 (but choose other columns)
01:39:910 (99910|6) - Maybe use associated LN's instead of notes form here? It's complicated to map this part without streams...
01:55:910 (115910|0) - This LN should be continued to 01:57:910
01:58:410 (118410|5,118910|6,119410|0) - Too weak beats, remove
02:26:660 (146660|6) - Remove
02:26:910 (146910|3) - Move to 5 (more comfortable)
02:27:285 (147285|4) - Remove
02:28:285 (148285|2) - ^
02:28:660 (148660|1) - ^
02:31:910 (151910|2) - Add note to 1
02:33:410 (153410|4) - Add note to 7
02:33:910 (153910|3,154035|0,154285|5,154285|2,154535|2,154535|5,154785|5,154785|2) - Make this pattern match to previous. For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460226
Nice diff, it can become rankable after 1-2 more mods.

Normal

Inside :3
First of all, LN's in the beginning seems random to me...
00:25:736 (25736|6) - Strong beat, add note to 1st
The following void is unwanted. I suggest you to fill it with LN's
00:37:160 (37160|1,37410|3,37660|5,37910|2,37910|6) - There should be 1/4 stream (I think, it's legit in Normal diff)
00:43:160 (43160|6,43410|3,43660|0,43910|4,43910|1) - ^
00:46:160 (46160|3) - Move to 3rd
00:46:160 (46160|5) - Delete, there's no sound for that note
00:47:160 (47160|5) - ^
00:47:660 (47660|5) - ^
00:48:285 (48285|1) - Move to 00:48:410 (I also recommend 7th column)
00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|6,49660|5,49910|1,49910|4) - 1/4 stream
00:50:160 (50160|2,50410|2) - Move to 1st
00:50:785 (50785|5) - Move to 4th
00:52:285 (52285|4) - Move to 00:52:410
00:53:910 (53910|5) - 1/4 stream
00:57:910 (57910|2,58285|2,58660|2) - Maybe move to 2nd?
00:58:910 (58910|1) - ... and move to 3rd
00:59:410 (59410|6,59410|3,59660|0,59660|3,59910|4,59910|1,60285|4,60285|1,60660|4,60660|1,60910|0,60910|3) - I'm not sure, but try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467932
01:01:410 (61410|5,61410|1) - Change one of them to LN. 5th and 7th column, if accept previous
01:02:910 - Place note to 1st
01:04:910 - ^
01:05:410 - ^
01:05:910 - From here do the same thing with 2nd column (feel free to replace notes, that will disturb)
01:13:160 (73160|6,73660|5) - Move down for 1/2 or change to stream (I'd prefer 1st)
01:22:285 (82285|5,82410|1) - I suggest you to use triplets instead of doubles, like you do in Hard diff. They are more comfortable to play
02:21:535 - There should be LN's end and note (listen on 50% or 25% speed to hear it)
02:29:535 - ^
02:21:660 (141660|0) - Delete
02:37:910 (157910|3) - There should be one more note (2nd and 6th column match)
Ask someone more competent about speed changes. I don't know, are they allowed in Normal or not...
Still needs mods.

Hard

Inside :3
Maybe HP 8?
Same void...
01:13:410 (73410|1) - Add note to 4th (piano sound)
01:25:847 (85847|4) - I can't hear sound there, try 25% speed to check
01:55:910 (115910|0,115910|2,115910|4) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468065
01:57:910 (117910|3,118035|3,118160|2,118285|4,118410|2,118535|4,118660|1,118785|5,118910|1) - 1/8 stream (stairs or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468069, maybe something else. Feel free)
02:14:035 (134035|6,134035|4,134035|2) - Do something with speed changes just before this. They seems unreadable even after several replays because of rhythm change
02:21:535 - Same with Normal, LN ends here
02:23:722 - Add note (like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468087)
02:27:785 - Add note to 6th
02:27:910 - Add note to 5th
I missed some mistakes, those similar with ones in Normal diff
Wonderful diff, but I have one common remark. The stronger sound, the more notes. Rely on this rule and fix some mistakes on your own. If you manage, this diff will be close to perfect :D

I hope to see this map ranked soon. Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi, Kiviman!
Thanks for modding! :)

Below here's what I've done:

Kiviman wrote:

Easy

Inside :3
00:29:910 (29910|1) - Move somewhere not so close to 1st column (maybe, 4th) Done.
00:49:660 (49660|4) - There's no need in this note since that beat isn't stronger, than surrounding. I advise you not to use 1/4 stream in Easy, so just delete But there's a piano part there, which I can't remove them. Piano part is the most essential part here. (Plus, that's 1/2)
00:49:160 (49160|4,49410|6,49910|5,49910|2) - Maybe move left to make it more comfortable for players, that use 4 fingers on right hand?
00:55:410 - Strong beat, add note I use 4 fingers on right hand. Done.
00:57:910 (57910|5,57910|1,58285|5,58660|5,58910|1) - (and further) - I think, one note isn't enough to stress that. Try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460093 Done all.
01:09:410 - You should place note here, if follow piano (to 4 column, I think) Hm... done.
01:17:910 (77910|2,78035|4,78285|1,78535|3,78785|5) - Doesn't match to next pattern. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460161 Okay.
01:25:660 (85660|5) - Suggest to move up to one line with next note Pretty confused here, I'm not sure if this one was done or not.
01:33:660 (93660|5) - ^ (if accept, then delete note in 4th column) ^
01:35:910 (95910|5,96035|5) - Too hard for Easy, I think. Use pattern from here: 01:17:910 (but choose other columns) Done.
01:39:910 (99910|6) - Maybe use associated LN's instead of notes form here? It's complicated to map this part without streams... I applied to the 3rd group. I think too many LNs cause problem.
01:55:910 (115910|0) - This LN should be continued to 01:57:910 Done.
01:58:410 (118410|5,118910|6,119410|0) - Too weak beats, remove Leave it there is better, imo.
02:26:660 (146660|6) - Remove
02:26:910 (146910|3) - Move to 5 (more comfortable)
02:27:285 (147285|4) - Remove
02:28:285 (148285|2) - ^
02:28:660 (148660|1) - ^
02:31:910 (151910|2) - Add note to 1
02:33:410 (153410|4) - Add note to 7
02:33:910 (153910|3,154035|0,154285|5,154285|2,154535|2,154535|5,154785|5,154785|2) - Make this pattern match to previous. For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1460226
All above is fixed, it should be okay.
Nice diff, it can become rankable after 1-2 more mods.

Normal

Inside :3
First of all, LN's in the beginning seems random to me... If you listen to the bass part carefully, it plays decending.
00:25:736 (25736|6) - Strong beat, add note to 1st Done.
The following void is unwanted. I suggest you to fill it with LN's
00:37:160 (37160|1,37410|3,37660|5,37910|2,37910|6) - There should be 1/4 stream (I think, it's legit in Normal diff)
00:43:160 (43160|6,43410|3,43660|0,43910|4,43910|1) - ^
Done both there.
00:46:160 (46160|3) - Move to 3rd Instead, I moved the next one to 4th.
00:46:160 (46160|5) - Delete, there's no sound for that note Piano, it seperated into 2 parts.
00:47:160 (47160|5) - ^ ^
00:47:660 (47660|5) - ^ ^
00:48:285 (48285|1) - Move to 00:48:410 (I also recommend 7th column)

REDYUMiKA wrote:

00:48:160 (48160|1,48410|5) - remove, then 00:48:285 - add a note to optional column (*2) --->nearly same reason:(*1)
00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|6,49660|5,49910|1,49910|4) - 1/4 stream ?
00:50:160 (50160|2,50410|2) - Move to 1st Done.
00:50:785 (50785|5) - Move to 4th twist
00:52:285 (52285|4) - Move to 00:52:410

REDYUMiKA wrote:

00:52:160 (52160|1,52410|5) - remove, then 00:52:285 - add a note to optional column (*2) --->nearly same reason:(*1)
00:53:910 (53910|5) - 1/4 stream Done.
00:57:910 (57910|2,58285|2,58660|2) - Maybe move to 2nd?
00:58:910 (58910|1) - ... and move to 3rd
Ignored both there.
00:59:410 (59410|6,59410|3,59660|0,59660|3,59910|4,59910|1,60285|4,60285|1,60660|4,60660|1,60910|0,60910|3) - I'm not sure, but try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467932 Leave it as it is, I think.
01:01:410 (61410|5,61410|1) - Change one of them to LN. 5th and 7th column, if accept previous ^
01:02:910 - Place note to 1st
01:04:910 - ^
01:05:410 - ^
01:05:910 - From here do the same thing with 2nd column (feel free to replace notes, that will disturb)
I can only done some of it.

REDYUMiKA wrote:

1/4s that combined 3 notes or more aren't preferable pattern as a normal diff, (*1)
01:13:160 (73160|6,73660|5) - Move down for 1/2 or change to stream (I'd prefer 1st) .
01:22:285 (82285|5,82410|1) - I suggest you to use triplets instead of doubles, like you do in Hard diff. They are more comfortable to play Good idea! Thanks!
But... it's a little weird. I can 300 it all even it doesn't much match with the rhythm. Not sure about that. : P
02:21:535 - There should be LN's end and note (listen on 50% or 25% speed to hear it)
02:29:535 - ^
Done, maybe.
02:21:660 (141660|0) - Delete Okay.
02:37:910 (157910|3) - There should be one more note (2nd and 6th column match) um... done.
Ask someone more competent about speed changes. I don't know, are they allowed in Normal or not...
It's not a big SV change. I don't think it's gonna be an problem there.
Still needs mods.

Hard

Inside :3
Maybe HP 8? Done.
Same void... There's no void there?
01:13:410 (73410|1) - Add note to 4th (piano sound) Done.
01:25:847 (85847|4) - I can't hear sound there, try 25% speed to check Changed to 1/3
01:55:910 (115910|0,115910|2,115910|4) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468065 Let's see...
01:57:910 (117910|3,118035|3,118160|2,118285|4,118410|2,118535|4,118660|1,118785|5,118910|1) - 1/8 stream (stairs or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468069, maybe something else. Feel free) I followed the bass sound, making it 1/8 may become overmapped.
02:14:035 (134035|6,134035|4,134035|2) - Do something with speed changes just before this. They seems unreadable even after several replays because of rhythm change removed the first 0.10x and change 1.50x to 1.25x. I think it's a little more readable.
Personally, I can read it, maybe because I listen to it too often? :P
02:21:535 - Same with Normal, LN ends here A sound is 1/4 so I used 1/4 for that.
02:23:722 - Add note (like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1468087) 1/6 might do.
02:27:785 - Add note to 6th There's no major need here?
02:27:910 - Add note to 5th done.
I missed some mistakes, those similar with ones in Normal diff
Wonderful diff, but I have one common remark. The stronger sound, the more notes. Rely on this rule and fix some mistakes on your own. If you manage, this diff will be close to perfect :D
Thank you! :)

I hope to see this map ranked soon. Good luck! :D
I'll do my best to get it ranked! :D
I tossed some quote from REDYUMiKA in there. As his/her reason is quite reasonable and useful.
That's all! :)
Pew_old_1
Hey Chamelo,

Here's my mod

General
01:39:910 -01:59:910 i feel like Kiai time is well suited in that area (Heavy layered violins and synthesizer, and louder dynamics)

Also the resolution is a bit off as it says 1365 x 768... change it to 1366x768 according to ranking criteria ( I know it's a small change but some people are picky)

Columns (0|1|2|3|4|5|6)

Easy
00:17:780 (17780|5) - Move to 1 or 2 (Pitch actually goes down rather than up)

00:25:736 (25736|6) - Change to a ln? (I think i hear a pedal point in the piano which should warrant a LN, if you do this do the same with the other difficulties)

01:08:410 (68410|3) - Move to 5 (Pitch goes up, not down)
01:08:660 (68660|5) - Move to 6 (^)

01:17:410 (77410|0) - Move to 6 (I don't think the pitch change is high enough to warrant the column back to 0)

01:22:285 (82285|3) - Move to 5 (Pitch changes again)
01:22:660 (82660|2) - Move to 6 (^)
01:22:910 (82910|5) - Move to 1 or 2 (^)

01:36:785 (96785|2,96785|4) - Change to LN (Definitely hear pedal points in the piano)

02:33:910 (153910|3,153910|5,154285|5,154535|5,154785|5) - Shift to the right by 1 (Generally should be better for comfortability and pattern wise since i see the chords play here has no pitch changes. Also you did the pattern i suggested earlier in the song as well)

02:35:910 (155910|1,156410|2,156910|4,157410|5) - Add a note 2 columns away like the chords in the next few seconds http://puu.sh/7VhX0.png (The piano plays chord throughout the last few seconds so it should be consistent i think)

This is pretty clean other than small pitch mistakes, Good job :)

Normal
00:25:736 (25736|6,25736|0) - Change to ln if you change it in the easy diff

00:47:910 (47910|2,47910|0,48285|3,48285|1,48660|4,48660|2) - Should be descending chord stairs (since you made the notes descend earlier on the song see 00:36:285 (36285|3,36660|1) -has the same pitch interval as this )

01:21:910 (81910|4,81910|2) - from here to 01:35:660 (95660|6) - there's louder hitsounds just notifying you incase you forgot about it.

01:36:785 (96785|2,96785|6) - Change to ln (if you disagree with the easy diff of the LN back up there then disregard this)

02:33:910 (153910|3,154035|3,154285|3,154535|3,154785|3) - Move this to 2 (So it's like the other difficulties)

Hard
00:25:736 (25736|6) - like last 2 diff only LN if you LN'd the others. Add note at 0

00:25:736 (25736|6) - From here to 00:25:736 (25736|6,29910|2,29910|0) - here i don't think there should be any SV changes since there's basically nothing to play (If not at least remove 0.1x at 25 seconds)

01:01:660 (61660|3,61910|5) - Swap columns for this (Descending pitch)

01:04:785 (64785|5) - Move to 4 (Big pitch change)

01:11:847 (71847|4,71847|0,71910|5,71910|1,71972|6,71972|2) - Descending stairs (make it same as normal)

01:25:743 (85743|6) - Move to 5

02:37:410 (157410|5,157410|4,157410|1) - I think the SV speed up is a bit too fast from this point (Try to make it slower)


I like this piece so have a star ;D. Also i can check the hitsounds after you added them in if you want
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hey. o/

Thanks for the mod!
Below here is what I've done/ignored.

Pew wrote:

General
01:39:910 -01:59:910 i feel like Kiai time is well suited in that area (Heavy layered violins and synthesizer, and louder dynamics)
Done

Also the resolution is a bit off as it says 1365 x 768... change it to 1366x768 according to ranking criteria ( I know it's a small change but some people are picky)
Never noticed that!

Columns (0|1|2|3|4|5|6)

Easy
00:17:780 (17780|5) - Move to 1 or 2 (Pitch actually goes down rather than up) Done.

00:25:736 (25736|6) - Change to a ln? (I think i hear a pedal point in the piano which should warrant a LN, if you do this do the same with the other difficulties) 1 Room should do it.

01:08:410 (68410|3) - Move to 5 (Pitch goes up, not down)
01:08:660 (68660|5) - Move to 6 (^)
Done both there.

01:17:410 (77410|0) - Move to 6 (I don't think the pitch change is high enough to warrant the column back to 0)
Done.

01:22:285 (82285|3) - Move to 5 (Pitch changes again)
01:22:660 (82660|2) - Move to 6 (^)
01:22:910 (82910|5) - Move to 1 or 2 (^)
Changed to 5,6 and 0

01:36:785 (96785|2,96785|4) - Change to LN (Definitely hear pedal points in the piano)
1/2 room.

02:33:910 (153910|3,153910|5,154285|5,154535|5,154785|5) - Shift to the right by 1 (Generally should be better for comfortability and pattern wise since i see the chords play here has no pitch changes. Also you did the pattern i suggested earlier in the song as well) Done.

02:35:910 (155910|1,156410|2,156910|4,157410|5) - Add a note 2 columns away like the chords in the next few seconds http://puu.sh/7VhX0.png (The piano plays chord throughout the last few seconds so it should be consistent i think)
Done.

This is pretty clean other than small pitch mistakes, Good job :)

Normal
00:25:736 (25736|6,25736|0) - Change to ln if you change it in the easy diff Done.

00:47:910 (47910|2,47910|0,48285|3,48285|1,48660|4,48660|2) - Should be descending chord stairs (since you made the notes descend earlier on the song see 00:36:285 (36285|3,36660|1) -has the same pitch interval as this ) Done.

01:21:910 (81910|4,81910|2) - from here to 01:35:660 (95660|6) - there's louder hitsounds just notifying you incase you forgot about it.
Whoosp, fixed.

01:36:785 (96785|2,96785|6) - Change to ln (if you disagree with the easy diff of the LN back up there then disregard this)
Done.

02:33:910 (153910|3,154035|3,154285|3,154535|3,154785|3) - Move this to 2 (So it's like the other difficulties)
Done.

Hard
00:25:736 (25736|6) - like last 2 diff only LN if you LN'd the others. Add note at 0 Done.

00:25:736 (25736|6) - From here to 00:25:736 (25736|6,29910|2,29910|0) - here i don't think there should be any SV changes since there's basically nothing to play (If not at least remove 0.1x at 25 seconds)
Removed.

01:01:660 (61660|3,61910|5) - Swap columns for this (Descending pitch)
It's ascending?

01:04:785 (64785|5) - Move to 4 (Big pitch change)
Done.

01:11:847 (71847|4,71847|0,71910|5,71910|1,71972|6,71972|2) - Descending stairs (make it same as normal)
Okay.

01:25:743 (85743|6) - Move to 5
Done.

02:37:410 (157410|5,157410|4,157410|1) - I think the SV speed up is a bit too fast from this point (Try to make it slower)
Fixed.

I like this piece so have a star ;D. Also i can check the hitsounds after you added them in if you want
Thanks for the star! :)
- [ S o r a ] -
แมพน่าสนจัง จากเกมที่ใช้นิ้วเยอะซะด้วยสิ 555
จะว่าไหมถ้าผมจะขอ mod/GD อีกคน :v
Topic Starter
Chamelo
555+
ผมส่งแมพนี้เข้า Mod Queue อันนึงอยู่อ่ะครับ เดี๋ยวคงมาละ :v
ส่วน GD นี่เต็มที่เลยครับ ^ ^
- [ S o r a ] -

Chamelo_Th wrote:

555+
ผมส่งแมพนี้เข้า Mod Queue อันนึงอยู่อ่ะครับ เดี๋ยวคงมาละ :v
ส่วน GD นี่เต็มที่เลยครับ ^ ^
7K ผมไม่ค่อยถนัดซะด้วยสิ แต่ 4K ก็โออยู่ :v
เดี๋ยวลอง 7K ดู 555 ไม่แน่ใจว่าจะวางโน๊ตสวยไหม ._.
Auryon
Hey Chamelo, mod ready from queue :D

[General]
Open AiMod for probs (Ctrl+Shift+A)
This map didn't hitsounded. If you want to rank this map, you must put hitsounds. But if you just make this just for fun its ok! :D

Column
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

Mods
[Easy]
00:11:519 (11519|6) - change this into LN ends 00:11:910 ?
00:25:736 - add note
00:27:823 - ^
00:55:410 - add note to 5
01:13:951 - add note loud sound
01:19:821 - add LN to 6 ends 01:21:660 ?
01:47:910 - add note to 3?
01:49:910 - ^
01:48:410 - add note to 1?
01:50:410 - ^
01:49:410 - add note to 4?
01:55:921 - add note to 6
01:57:910 (117910|4) - remove change to LN ends 01:57:910 (117910|4)
02:15:910 (135910|4) - remove, change to LN ends 02:17:406
02:17:406 - add note to 2
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7
02:41:910 (161910|4,161910|2) - move to 2 and 6

I like your mapping style, feels like I'm playing a real piano haha. Nice! :D

[Normal]
00:25:736 - add note to 2 and 6
00:27:867 - add note to 3 and 5
00:29:910 - add note to 3
01:16:285 - add note to 5
01:19:160 - add note to 4?
01:19:785 - add LN to 6 ends 01:21:436
01:21:436 - add note to 2
01:37:910 - add note to 1 and 5
01:53:035 - add note to 5 and 6?
01:55:910 - add note to 5
02:15:910 - add LN to 1 and 7 ends 02:17:431
02:17:431 - add note to 3 and 5
02:19:410 - add note to 3
02:21:410 - ^
02:23:426 - add note to 5
02:27:160 - add note to 4
02:29:410 - ^
02:31:426 - add note to 1
02:32:785 - add LN to 7 ends 02:33:410
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7

Nice, a more complicated piano ;w;

[Hard]
00:14:519 (14519|1) - move to 1?
00:25:736 - add note to 2 and 6
00:27:823 - add note to 3 and 5
00:29:910 - add note to 5
00:33:910 (33910|2) - move to 7
00:49:910 - - add note to 2 and 7
00:55:660 (55660|2,55785|1,55910|3) - suggestion http://puu.sh/89MI2.jpg
01:19:801 - add LN to 2 and 6 ends 01:21:431
01:21:431 - add note to1 adn 7
01:39:410 - suggestion http://puu.sh/89MS2.jpg
02:04:910 (124910|3) - move to 5
02:05:910 (125910|1) - move to 7?
02:15:910 - add LN to 7 ends 02:17:410
02:17:410 - add note
02:23:410 (143410|0) - move to 4
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7

The real piano ;w; hehehe
This map is great! You mapped it neatly, I like how you follow the pitch relevancy. When I played, I was like playing piano hohoho.
I wish this will ranked asap :<
Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi Uchiha_Shinichi o/
Wow, such a fast mod! Thank you! :D

Below here will be what I have/have not done.

Uchiha_Shinichi wrote:

[General]
Open AiMod for probs (Ctrl+Shift+A) There's a letterbox conflict, just a bug, I guess.
This map didn't hitsounded. If you want to rank this map, you must put hitsounds. But if you just make this just for fun its ok! :D
I set it to soft 25% without any additions. Maybe I'll consider add soon.

Mods (Click open!)
[Easy]
00:11:519 (11519|6) - change this into LN ends 00:11:910 ? Um... if you consider that, 00:11:910 (11910|0) should be it. Ignored it anyway.
00:25:736 - add note OK
00:27:823 - ^ Added a LN
00:55:410 - add note to 5 Done.
01:13:951 - add note loud sound OK
01:19:821 - add LN to 6 ends 01:21:660 ? I let it end here: 01:20:910 instead
01:47:910 - add note to 3?
01:49:910 - ^
01:48:410 - add note to 1?
01:50:410 - ^
01:49:410 - add note to 4?
Sorry, but no for all above.
01:55:921 - add note to 6 Done.
01:57:910 (117910|4) - remove change to LN ends 01:57:910 (117910|4) Done
02:15:910 (135910|4) - remove, change to LN ends 02:17:406 Done
02:17:406 - add note to 2 It's just a sound effect, I consider no note there.
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7 Done-o
02:41:910 (161910|4,161910|2) - move to 2 and 6 Done.

I like your mapping style, feels like I'm playing a real piano haha. Nice! :D
I know, right? :D

[Normal]
00:25:736 - add note to 2 and 6 I only added 6 because I added more LN
00:27:867 - add note to 3 and 5 Added LN
00:29:910 - add note to 3 Done.
01:16:285 - add note to 5 Well, it only have one key here. Maybe I should fix some pattern here.
01:19:160 - add note to 4? No sound there.
01:19:785 - add LN to 6 ends 01:21:436 I used different pattern.
01:21:436 - add note to 2 Same as Easy.
01:37:910 - add note to 1 and 5 No sound there.
01:53:035 - add note to 5 and 6? ^
01:55:910 - add note to 5 Added to 2
02:15:910 - add LN to 1 and 7 ends 02:17:431 Added LN to 4
02:17:431 - add note to 3 and 5 SFx
02:19:410 - add note to 3
02:21:410 - ^
02:23:426 - add note to 5
02:27:160 - add note to 4
02:29:410 - ^
02:31:426 - add note to 1
I used LN already
02:32:785 - add LN to 7 ends 02:33:410 Done.
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7 Done.

Nice, a more complicated piano ;w;
This is not the final form. lol

[Hard]
00:14:519 (14519|1) - move to 1? Nice idea!
00:25:736 - add note to 2 and 6 I only added 6
00:27:823 - add note to 3 and 5 Different pattern
00:29:910 - add note to 5 2 LN is enough
00:33:910 (33910|2) - move to 7 It's a right hand note, descending.
00:49:910 - - add note to 2 and 7 Done.
00:55:660 (55660|2,55785|1,55910|3) - suggestion http://puu.sh/89MI2.jpg I used this: http://puu.sh/89SFG.png
01:19:801 - add LN to 2 and 6 ends 01:21:431 All LN *devilish grin*
01:21:431 - add note to1 adn 7 Again, SFx
01:39:410 - suggestion http://puu.sh/89MS2.jpg Man, I forgot this! Thank you very much! :)
02:04:910 (124910|3) - move to 5 Done-o
02:05:910 (125910|1) - move to 7? Right hand descending.
02:15:910 - add LN to 7 ends 02:17:410 Done in different pattern.
02:17:410 - add note SFx again
02:23:410 (143410|0) - move to 4 It's a bass part in deemo, I'd say let it there.
02:39:910 - add note to 1 and 7 Added in 2,4,6 *laugh*

The real piano ;w; hehehe
More than real piano! ;)
This map is great! You mapped it neatly, I like how you follow the pitch relevancy. When I played, I was like playing piano hohoho.
I wish this will ranked asap :<
Good luck! :D
Thank you! I'll do my best to get this map ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Still waiting for vocaloid1anime2's diff.

Just saying. :)
yoshilove
hi~ from queue :3
column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

7K
[Easy]
00:09:432 (9432|4) - move to 7 (pitch)
00:09:823 (9823|6) - move to 5 (pitch)
00:13:606 (13606|3) - move to 6
00:13:997 (13997|5) - move to 4
00:19:867 (19867|3) - move to 7
00:20:258 (20258|5) - move to 5
00:20:780 (20780|4) - move to 6

01:16:660 (76660|2) - move to 4

02:04:660 (124660|6) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12

[Normal]
00:45:410 (45410|2) - move to 2
00:57:410 (57410|2) - move to 1

  • 01:22:243 (82243|6,82326|5) - use 1/8?? (but difficult) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542359 or use 1/4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542377
    01:23:243 (83243|1,83326|2) - ^
    01:24:243 (84243|4,84326|2) - ^
    01:26:243 (86243|6,86326|3) - ^
    01:28:243 (88243|2,88326|3) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:30:243 (90243|0,90326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:31:243 (91243|4,91326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:32:243 (92243|0,92326|2) - ^
    01:34:243 (94243|1,94326|3) - ^
    01:35:243 (95243|3,95326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
02:04:660 (124660|5) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12

[Hard]
01:47:910 - add note to 7 (strong sound)
02:04:660 (124660|6) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12

;)
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi! o/

Thanks for modding! :)
Below here is what I've changed/applied from you mod.

yoshilove wrote:

7K
[Easy]
00:09:432 (9432|4) - move to 7 (pitch)
00:09:823 (9823|6) - move to 5 (pitch)
These two note is piano ascending, so, 5-7 is pretty okay.
00:13:606 (13606|3) - move to 6 Move to 3 instead.
00:13:997 (13997|5) - move to 4 7 Instead.
00:19:867 (19867|3) - move to 7 Hm... looks like you're following the non-piano part.
00:20:258 (20258|5) - move to 5 ^
00:20:780 (20780|4) - move to 6 Done~
01:16:660 (76660|2) - move to 4 Done.
02:04:660 (124660|6) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12 Done.

[Normal]
00:45:410 (45410|2) - move to 2 4 Instead.
00:57:410 (57410|2) - move to 1 Done~

  • 01:22:243 (82243|6,82326|5) - use 1/8?? (but difficult) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542359 or use 1/4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542377
    01:23:243 (83243|1,83326|2) - ^
    01:24:243 (84243|4,84326|2) - ^
    01:26:243 (86243|6,86326|3) - ^
    01:28:243 (88243|2,88326|3) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:30:243 (90243|0,90326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:31:243 (91243|4,91326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
    01:32:243 (92243|0,92326|2) - ^
    01:34:243 (94243|1,94326|3) - ^
    01:35:243 (95243|3,95326|2) - ^ (*become difficult)
    These are some timing problem, I'll see what I can do...
02:04:660 (124660|5) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12

[Hard]
01:47:910 - add note to 7 (strong sound)
02:04:660 (124660|6) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12

;)
Sorry, didn't fix Hard yet, will do later.
Thank again :)
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Okay, here's more.

yoshilove wrote:

7K
[Hard]
01:47:910 - add note to 7 (strong sound)
02:04:660 (124660|6) - move to 02:04:618 use 1/12
Done both there.
So, it's all set now! :)
Reba
Hi, i came to mod :)

0,1,2,3,4,5,6

Hard
00:18:693 (18693|5) - add a note

00:19:084 (19084|0) - add a note

00:24:954 (24954|5) - add a note

00:46:660 move both notes to 3 and 5

00:46:785 (46785|2) - move note to 4

00:47:410 (47410|6) - move to 5

00:48:285 (48285|1) - delete

00:48:410 (48410|6) - delete

00:47:910 (47910|5) - add note

00:48:285 (48285|5,6) - add notes

00:51:910 (51910|6) - add note

00:52:160 (52160|4) - delete

00:52:410 (52410|6) - delete

00:52:285 (52285|4) - add note

00:52:660 (52660|4) - move to 3

02:05:410 - add a note

02:07:410 - add a note

Very nice song btw ^^
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi, -R e b a-! Thanks for modding! :)

Below here is what I have/haven't changed.

- R e b a - wrote:

00:18:693 (18693|5) - add a note The piano key is played by a LN.

00:19:084 (19084|0) - add a note ^

00:24:954 (24954|5) - add a note Done.

00:46:660 move both notes to 3 and 5 Done with a twist.

00:46:785 (46785|2) - move note to 4 ^

00:47:410 (47410|6) - move to 5 Done.

00:48:285 (48285|1) - delete Right hand note.

00:48:410 (48410|6) - delete ^

00:47:910 (47910|5) - add note The chord is played by a LN

00:48:285 (48285|5,6) - add notes ?

00:51:910 (51910|6) - add note ^ same chord style

00:52:160 (52160|4) - delete Right hand note.

00:52:410 (52410|6) - delete ^

00:52:285 (52285|4) - add note Ignored

00:52:660 (52660|4) - move to 3 Done.

02:05:410 - add a note No sound there.

02:07:410 - add a note ^

Very nice song btw ^^ Thank you! :D
HOST_old
from [Standard / mania] GD, modding Team (≥∀≤)/

hi chamelo~ i'm so sorry to delay the moddig.. ;w;

osu!edit column = 0 1 2 3 4 5 6
mod column = 1 2 3 4 5 6 7





Easy

01:09:910 - add SV x0.5
01:13:910 - add SV x1.0
01:29:410 (89410|1) - add 2
01:33:410 (93410|4) - add 5
01:59:910 - add SV x0.5
02:07:910 - add SV x1.0
---------------------------------------
if you didn't add SVs because this' easy, ignore adding SVs


Normal

00:50:410 (50410|3) - move 5
00:55:410 (55410|5) - add 6
01:09:910 - add SV x0.5
01:13:910 - add SV x1.0



Hard

00:11:519 - how about add SV this part?
00:21:954 - ^
00:55:410 (55410|4) - add 5
---------------------------------------
if this map was mine, i dont want to change anymore...
If you want to add SV, please follow these
00:11:519 - x0.1
00:11:780 - x2.0
00:11:910 - x1.0

00:21:954 - x0.1
00:22:214 - x2.0
00:22:345 - x1.0




thx for your request, again, sorry to delay.
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi HOST. o/
Thank you for modding! And no, it's not so late. You're quite fast, anyway. ;)

Below here is what I've changed/fixed.

HOST wrote:

Easy

01:09:910 - add SV x0.5 VVV
01:13:910 - add SV x1.0 VVV
01:29:410 (89410|1) - add 2 Done.
01:33:410 (93410|4) - add 5 Done.
01:59:910 - add SV x0.5 VVV
02:07:910 - add SV x1.0 VVV
---------------------------------------
if you didn't add SVs because this' easy, ignore adding SVs <<< I choose this one.

Normal

00:50:410 (50410|3) - move 5 Done.
00:55:410 (55410|5) - add 6 There's only one piano key there.
01:09:910 - add SV x0.5
01:13:910 - add SV x1.0
Done both there. But to make it same with Hard. I had to make it my way.

Hard

00:11:519 - how about add SV this part? Sorry, but no.
00:21:954 - ^ ^
00:55:410 (55410|4) - add 5 Same with the Normal diff.
---------------------------------------
if this map was mine, i dont want to change anymore... This is what I thought.
HOST_old
i like this map's pattern. this map is perfect as anyone can't find the map's faults... ( i think. ) good luck chamelo ~.~
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Thank you very much! :)

Thank you for the stars too. :D
LordRaika
Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~ :)
im here, Respond with lightning speed ^^

Column |1-7|

Full Mod Inside
[Easy]
00:09:041 - add 1 note at 5
00:19:475 - ^
00:23:649 - ^
00:13:214 - add 1 note at 6
00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|5,49660|2) - delete and 00:48:660 (48660|0) - make this LN instead
00:55:410 (55410|4) - delete? and 00:55:785 - add 1 note at 3
remember u r mapping piano key sound right now, not beat

01:00:910 (60910|2) - move to 5
01:09:660 (69660|3) - delete, this is not piano sound

01:25:410 (85410|3) - remove

02:20:910 (140910|0) - move to 2
02:35:910 - why not make the finishing like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642342 its still easy

its good overall ^^ since i play deemo too, but yes, u should reduce any notes beside piano since this difficulty note is consist of 85% piano key.

[Normal]
00:20:780 (20780|2) - move to 2
00:35:910 (35910|4) - make it ends at 00:37:160 after tht connect these notes 00:37:660 (37660|5,37785|6,37910|5) - into stairs

00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|6,49660|5) - Delete and then
00:48:285 (48285|3,48660|2) - move them 1 column to the right
00:48:660 (48660|3,48660|0) - convert this 2 into a LN
it seems better this way

01:01:410 (61410|5,61410|1,61660|0,61785|1,61910|2,61910|4) - this, u r making this halfdone which is a bit weird
if u wnt to make it to the fullest, here is the example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642284

01:55:910 (115910|1) - move to 3

[Hard]
00:14:519 - add 1 LN at 2
01:46:785 (106785|0) - move to 3
01:52:411 - 5 chord from here IS TOO much for HARD, use this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642296 and this pattern seems better.

02:21:660 (141660|2,141785|1) - remove this chord
02:25:160 (145160|2) - remove, also this pattern ahead, are u sure u wnt this? its not consistent imo, since we are most likely mapping piano notes here.
02:25:660 (145660|2) - remove, unnecessary chord

THE timing point, from here 02:13:910
u use 1.25x then 0.10x , never use 0.10x for this kind of effect, in fact... it looks ugly
change 0.10x into 0.80x , why? it fits better for ur current timing point... test it... it looks much smoother

thts all ^^

nice dif set but u might wnt to reduce some unnecessary chord, really... XD

Good Luck~
Nice beatmap, ive mastered this song on deemo ^^ so i like this song.
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Hi, lordraika!

Thank you for modding!

Below here is what I've changed/fixed.

lordraika wrote:

im here, Respond with lightning speed ^^ You lose arcwinolivirus, I guess. :P nvm

[Easy]
00:09:041 - add 1 note at 5 Done.
00:19:475 - ^ Done.
00:23:649 - ^ Done.
00:13:214 - add 1 note at 6 Done.
00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|5,49660|2) - delete and 00:48:660 (48660|0) - make this LN instead LN added, but didn't remove notes.
00:55:410 (55410|4) - delete? and 00:55:785 - add 1 note at 3 Deleted, but didn't add note.
remember u r mapping piano key sound right now, not beat That's because someone told me to add it. ;w;
01:00:910 (60910|2) - move to 5 Didn't , but changed the pattern.
01:09:660 (69660|3) - delete, this is not piano sound It is.
01:25:410 (85410|3) - remove Done.
02:20:910 (140910|0) - move to 2 didn't
02:35:910 - why not make the finishing like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642342 its still easy It's a nice idea for Normal/Hard

its good overall ^^ since i play deemo too, but yes, u should reduce any notes beside piano since this difficulty note is consist of 85% piano key.

[Normal]
00:20:780 (20780|2) - move to 2 Done~
00:35:910 (35910|4) - make it ends at 00:37:160 after tht connect these notes 00:37:660 (37660|5,37785|6,37910|5) - into stairs I love making some complex stairs.
00:49:160 (49160|3,49410|6,49660|5) - Delete and then Right hand piano.
00:48:285 (48285|3,48660|2) - move them 1 column to the right Moved
00:48:660 (48660|3,48660|0) - convert this 2 into a LN Converted only 1
it seems better this way

01:01:410 (61410|5,61410|1,61660|0,61785|1,61910|2,61910|4) - this, u r making this halfdone which is a bit weird
if u wnt to make it to the fullest, here is the example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642284 The first two is for those descending SFX. And the next 3 is for piano.

01:55:910 (115910|1) - move to 3 I think 2 looks better.

And oh, I've changed the ending. (But why I feel like the previous version looks better? ;w;)

[Hard]
00:14:519 - add 1 LN at 2 Moved 5 to 6, and changed into a LN
01:46:785 (106785|0) - move to 3 It looks weird but okay.
01:52:411 - 5 chord from here IS TOO much for HARD, use this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642296 and this pattern seems better. I think it looks cool here. Bang! Bang! Bang the keyboard!
Also, a heavy chord + heavy string chorus.


02:21:660 (141660|2,141785|1) - remove this chord It's a piano + synth sound
02:25:160 (145160|2) - remove, also this pattern ahead, are u sure u wnt this? its not consistent imo, since we are most likely mapping piano notes here. Removed.
02:25:660 (145660|2) - remove, unnecessary chord I can't remember, did I placed that? lol removed.

THE timing point, from here 02:13:910
u use 1.25x then 0.10x , never use 0.10x for this kind of effect, in fact... it looks ugly
change 0.10x into 0.80x , why? it fits better for ur current timing point... test it... it looks much smoother
I didn't mean to make it smooth, anyway. :P
Changed to 0.45x


thts all ^^[/box]

nice dif set but u might wnt to reduce some unnecessary chord, really... XD
Maybe, some chords are just for pattern's sake.

Good Luck~
Nice beatmap, ive mastered this song on deemo ^^ so i like this song. I FC'd every songs there but Magnolia. :D (And those new songs) Very enjoyable, don't you think?
LordRaika
u must be means Ice - Entrance at Deemo ^^
ahaha, i cnt FC these two , entrance and magnolia, got around 85%++ only


yup no problem, its ur beatmap anyway ^^
Topic Starter
Chamelo
I FC'd Entrance. There are a bunch of new songs in Deemo just came in the previous weekend, I guess. (In case you don't know.)
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สู้ๆ แรงค์มัน แรงค์มันๆๆๆ
:v
Topic Starter
Chamelo
โอ้ นึกว่ามา mod 555+

ขอบคุณครับ อีกนิดนึงก็น่าจะได้ละมั้ง :v
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue





Nyan~MOD
Important : The way I'll be modding is to NOT change your mapping style so sorry if I only modded few :(


Column |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Easy]
HP Drain -0.5
OD +0.5
00:20:258 Move to 6
00:20:780 Move to 7
Outcome :


00:22:345 & 00:22:867 to be followed


( I'm referring to the pitch of the song )
00:25:475 Move to 2
00:34:785 Move to 5
00:35:410 Move to 6
00:37:660 ^

00:37:910 From 5 to 7
Outcome:
http://puu.sh/9SdhF/02a3ccbb7d.png

00:40:910 Move to 2
00:45:910 to be followed below ( the picture )
00:46:785 Move to 5


00:47:410 Move to 6
00:58:285 to be followed


01:00:660 & 01:00:910 to be followed


01:09:910 Move to 5
01:18:035 Remove 1 note ( your choice )
01:19:410 & 01:19:785 to be followed


01:36:785 Move to 1 and 7?


01:52:035 Remove ( not recommended for easy )
02:33:410 EZ right? I don't recommend you to use 4 chords maybe 2 or 3?

02:34:285 until 02:34:785 to be followed


02:41:910 like this. .


[Normal]

01:19:410 follow .


01:19:785 Don't use 4 chords on NM, Remove 1 ( Your Choice )
02:15:910 follow .


02:22:410 Remove ( Your switching from right to left then right again, better if you use it on HD ) --> I'm talking about piano chords on this . .
02:28:410 ^
02:30:410 ^
02:32:285 & 02:32:535 follow


[Hard]
Nothing

That's All . . V.K. :)
Good Luck~
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