00:47:205 (366,367) - reverse these notes? i think it can make a good reflect with 00:46:862 (363,364) - this doublet.
00:48:062 (373) - how about move this note to 00:48:234 - and change to d i know you make a consistent with former part, but i think the vocal on this paragraph is different with former part, so it would be better if you use another pattern.
01:00:919 (485) - how about change it to d? i feel the drum sound is heavy on 01:00:834 (484) - ,only put kat here may emphasis the drum more clearly
01:27:920 (693) - move to 01:28:091 - and change to k , it may make the rhythm more clear
01:28:605 (697) - ^
04:19:005 (200) - ^
04:19:690 (204) - ^
01:37:177 (763,764,765) - change to ddk ? , to make consistent with 01:39:748 (786,789) -
01:48:320 (860) - ^
04:28:433 (275) - ^
04:39:405 (374) - ^
03:56:290 (18) - move to 03:55:604 - and change to d? it would be better if make the break on 03:56:290 -
that's all from me, i will give bubble #2 later
00:48:062 (373) - how about move this note to 00:48:234 - and change to d i know you make a consistent with former part, but i think the vocal on this paragraph is different with former part, so it would be better if you use another pattern.
01:00:919 (485) - how about change it to d? i feel the drum sound is heavy on 01:00:834 (484) - ,only put kat here may emphasis the drum more clearly
01:27:920 (693) - move to 01:28:091 - and change to k , it may make the rhythm more clear
01:28:605 (697) - ^
04:19:005 (200) - ^
04:19:690 (204) - ^
01:37:177 (763,764,765) - change to ddk ? , to make consistent with 01:39:748 (786,789) -
01:48:320 (860) - ^
04:28:433 (275) - ^
04:39:405 (374) - ^
03:56:290 (18) - move to 03:55:604 - and change to d? it would be better if make the break on 03:56:290 -
that's all from me, i will give bubble #2 later