DJ TOTTO - Valanga [Osu|Taiko] · forum

RikiH_

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-03-04T20:40:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 10 aprile 2016 at 12:00:42

Artist: DJ TOTTO
Title: Valanga
Source: REFLEC BEAT
Tags: xim Xim_O Asagi ART CORE BEMANI colette -Winter-
BPM: 186
Filesize: 3124kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

Asagi's Hyper (3,41 stars, 326 notes)
Espe-Don Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 785 notes)
Extra (5,52 stars, 585 notes)
Frozen (6,33 stars, 585 notes)
lp' insane <3 (5,09 stars, 541 notes)
Standard (Needs to be remapped) (2,31 stars, 218 notes)
Xim_O's Beginner (1,52 stars, 71 notes)
Zetera's Super Hard (4,49 stars, 388 notes)

Download: DJ TOTTO - Valanga
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by RikiH_ 2016-04-10T10:01:06+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-03-11T09:39:21+00:00

oh my I've been mapping that

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-03-11T21:41:56+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
oh my I've been mapping that

Same, Another.

Edit, update, i will continue later... (maybe next week)

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 21744
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Valanga
TitleUnicode:Valanga
Artist:DJ TOTTO
ArtistUnicode:DJ TOTTO
Creator:RikiH_
Version:Cherry Blossom's Another
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:384247
BeatmapSetID:154955

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-03-12T16:49:42+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
oh my I've been mapping that

We always choose the same songs to map, wtf

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-03-14T18:41:52+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
This is actually hard

Nope, first try.

SPOILER

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-03-14T19:29:23+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
RikiH_ wrote:
This is actually hard
Nope, first try.
SPOILER

But you actually missed one xD

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-04-05T07:23:43+00:00

80% done and i'm gonna make mine a full mapset!

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-05-12T17:56:55+00:00

Don't let this graveyard ;w;

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-05-12T17:57:16+00:00

Mao wrote:
Don't let this graveyard ;w;

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-05-13T21:38:57+00:00

Nono don't worry, I'm just full with school, study and stuff, I'll probably finish it this Summer

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-05-14T05:52:43+00:00

Mao wrote:
Don't let this graveyard ;w;

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-06-21T22:27:05+00:00

Reminder, please poke me in 2 weeks if I haven't finished my eady / normal diff thanks!

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-06-21T22:38:30+00:00

uuuuuuh, hurry up !!!!

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-06-22T00:20:00+00:00

http://puu.sh/9EpwE/a64984ca00.txt

Done, you can rename my diff if you want to, ''Easy'' might not be the best possible out there o/ Hope you like it! (no hitsounds yet, will do them lata)

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-06-22T09:15:27+00:00

Wow so fast

Updated

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-06-22T15:40:01+00:00

General

Source: "REFLEC BEAT"
Tags: "Asphyxia -Asagi Cherry Blossom ART CORE BEMANI colette -Winter-"
Asphyxia's Easy should be renamed to "Asphyxia's Normal" or "Asphyxia's Beginner". In REFLECT BEAT, there exist two difficulty levels under Advanced: Normal and Beginner. I'd suggest to go with Normal though, since Beginner might be misleading for newbies (as in osu very simple Easy diffs are sometimes called Beginner).
Disable both Widescreen Support and Letterbox in Breaks, since your map doesn't have a storyboard or breaks
The kiais are placed a bit weirdly. First of all, it would be cooler if the first anti-fountain started at 00:31:905 already, because the triplet leading to the second kiai part starts there. You could also just remove the anti-fountain since it's barely noticable nevertheless. Same applies for the second kiai-complex, at 01:36:502. Then, the first kiai-complex should definitely end at 00:42:389, there is no reason why it should end 1/4 beat later o:
If you fixed the kiais, apply them for Asagi's and Cherry Blossom's diff as well, as these seem to use different kiais. Consistency might be a better idea here

Asphyxia's Easy

Your NCing seems rather inconsistent to me. Sometimes you are placing NCs at every measure and sometimes every two measures. Since the combos are really short when you place them at every measure, I'd recommend you to place an NC at every second measure.
00:01:099 (1) - Very minor, but the last curve of this slider might look better if it was less curvy. You could move the anchor-point down a bit, for something like this:
Picture
00:13:357 (3) - It looks strange and a bit confusing that this circle is placed under the track of 00:11:744 (1). If you change (3) and (4) to this placement, this would be fixed and the transition from (2) to (3) would also be a bit better:
Picture
00:21:744 (1) - This object is placed too shortly after the spinner. The newbies don't have enough time to react here D: Even if this would be the most fitting rhythm, you should still change it for better playability. For example, you could end the spinner at 00:21:098 already.
00:32:711 (2) - The way this object touches 00:30:776 (2) looks really weird. Generally, in this section 00:29:486 (1,2,1,2,1) there are so many overlaps, it looks really cramped at some points and might confuse the newbies. I'd recommend you to remap this short section and make it a bit more straight-forward to fit the difficulty level
00:46:905 (3,4,1,2) - If you rearrange this a bit, you could make a perfect square :3
01:05:615 (1) - Same as 00:21:744
01:37:228 (2,1,2) - Once again, I don't think this is fitting for the difficulty level and might likely confuse the newbies. Please, try something without overlapping the pattern before ;w;
01:43:034 (2) - I don't see a reason for using this rhythm here. The white tick at 01:43:679 seems to be more emphasized than the red tick you are mapping, by the loud instruments and the drums. So I suggest to use a rhythm similiar to this:
Rhythm
Well, I think the diff is quite fine, if you fix the spinner issues I'm wondering why you always do an overlap when you "go back", like 00:52:066 (3,1,2) for example. I don't think it's less confusing then just reusing circles, but it rather looks a bit messy the way you do it.

Advanced

OD4 might be better, especially due to things like this 01:08:195 (1,2) and much usage of 1/2 circles.
00:03:034 (3) - Using a less curvy slider here would improve the flow here, as it would fit the oval movement from (2) to (4) more.
Picture
00:11:421 - The combo starting here seems really long to me. It would be better if place an NC somewhere in the middle of this combo!
00:13:357 (5,6) - Currently, the transition between these objects is not really good, because (6)'s head's placement doesn't fit the curve of (5). Try starting (6) at a lower position, somewhere like here:
Picture
00:19:163 (1) - The following object is placed too shortly after the spinner. The player of this difficulty level will need more time to react. Consider ending the spinner at 00:21:098 for that reason. Actually, you did that on a similiar place 01:03:115 (1) as well.
00:42:873 (1,1,1) - Please don't use NC spam like this for this difficulty level, since it might confuse the players. It looks better if these 00:43:357 (1,1) aren't NC'd. Same applies for 00:45:453 (1,1,1) + 00:48:034 (1,1,1) + 00:50:615 (1,1,1) + 01:44:324 (1,1,1)
01:03:115 (1) - For this difficulty level, it might be a better idea to start the spinner at 01:03:195, in order to make it better playable for other gamemodes and also to give the player more time to react
01:23:760 (1) - Same as 01:03:115 (1) and same as 00:19:163.
01:30:131 (1,2) - Although I can hear what you are following at this point, the instrument is not really noticable when playing, what makes this sound really out of place. Kepping it on 1/2-snap would sound more fitting here For example:
Rhythm
I really liked this diff! It fits the difficulty spread perfectly, being harder than a Normal but easier than a Hard! I especially love your sliders o: If you fix the issues with spinners as well as some of the comboing, everything will be alright.

Asagi's Hyper

Considering that the Another diff has plenty of 1/4-tapping, well, it even has longer streams, it would be a good idea to replace some reverse sliders with streams for this Hard diff in order to improve the spread. I will mention some places where this would fit
00:20:131 (6) - The stream is loudly hearable in the music, so I wouldn't leave it out. Why don't you map a stream starting at 00:20:131 with a nice transition to these reverse sliders at 00:20:453 ? :3
00:44:324 (1) - Here, changing it into a stream would fit quite well. Since there are 1/1-gaps before, the players have plenty of time to prepare their fingers Also, if you change it, also change 00:49:486 (1) for consistency
00:59:002 (1) - It seems really weird to have this rhythm here. Ending sliders on the big white tick is often not a good idea, because this beat is often really important and should be clickable! Here it sounds especially strange because it even has a finish on it o: Changing this into two circle might help. If this would be too many circles in a row, you could make an 1/2-slider starting at 00:59:163 as well.
01:35:292 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if I like the flow here... Moving down after the sliders seems like rather strange movement, especially for a Hyper difficulty. It will improve if you use ctrl+g on both of the sliders. But as I said, I'm not sure if I even like that more or not xD
01:46:098 (1) - Turning this into a stream (or atleast the first half or something like that) would offer a nice final challenge for the players instead of just a hold!
01:46:744 (1) - Your diff is the only one where the spinner doesn't end at 01:51:421. Also, it sounds better with a soft hitsound at the end instead of a Normal one o:
If you add some streams to fix the spread, this is simply perfect. Awesome flow! ^-^

Cherry Blossom's Another

00:37:227 (1,2,3) - This transition would play better if it had consistent spacing in my opinion. Having a jump after (2) in this direction doesn't feel intuitive. Why don't you try something like this:
Picture
00:54:486 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Hmm, again, the transition could be improved. After the jump, linear movement for streaming doesn't feel right. Since you should keep that triangle, it might be a good idea to curve the stream fitting the movement here. That's what I mean:
Picture
01:28:195 (3) - Having the head placed more downwards, the flow with the previous objects will improve really much. If you move the starting-point of the slider to (256|284), you will keep the triangle of the reverse arrow with 01:28:840 (1,2) these objects but you'll also make the movement more oval!
Picture
01:36:098 (6) - This should definitely be 1/6. You can hear it when listening to the music on 25%.
Nothing more to say, except this is your best map Cherry Blossom, it's amazing <3

Extra

00:11:098 (5,6,7,8) - After the previous sliders, the movement would be more natural if the stream was curved instead of straight o: Something like this:
Picture
00:16:905 (3,4,5,6) - This looked rather random to me, especially since some of the sliders are touching each other, but maybe I'm just not seeing your intention here o: Probably you could think of a better structurized pattern to fit your style more
00:53:679 (8) - If you curved this slider the other way around, it would create a smoother oval movement here Try this:
Picture
00:55:776 (4,5,6) - To be honest, this flowed pretty weird. Something like in my screenshot would be better ( ctrl+g on (5) and then change (6) )
Picture
01:08:195 (1,1,1,1,1) - I know this is an Extra diff and you have your freedom, but this NC spam seems unnecessary at this place and it makes it too easy for the players not to fail ;w; Only the first of these sliders needs NC. Also fix that for following patterns please.
01:30:453 - Seems like a very important beat you shouldn't leave out in my opinion.
Pro streams. Pro jumps. Pro everything. Pro diff. Pro Riki (◐◞౪◟◑’)┐

Good luck

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-06-22T16:03:33+00:00

Hello o/

Desperate-kun wrote:

Cherry Blossom's Another
00:37:227 (1,2,3) - This transition would play better if it had consistent spacing in my opinion. Having a jump after (2) in this direction doesn't feel intuitive. Why don't you try something like this:
Picture
Done.
00:54:486 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Hmm, again, the transition could be improved. After the jump, linear movement for streaming doesn't feel right. Since you should keep that triangle, it might be a good idea to curve the stream fitting the movement here. That's what I mean:
Picture
Done.
01:28:195 (3) - Having the head placed more downwards, the flow with the previous objects will improve really much. If you move the starting-point of the slider to (256|284), you will keep the triangle of the reverse arrow with 01:28:840 (1,2) these objects but you'll also make the movement more oval!
Picture
moved a bit down, you paint skills are better than mine, i'm jealous D:
01:36:098 (6) - This should definitely be 1/6. You can hear it when listening to the music on 25%. true, fixed.
Nothing more to say, except this is your best map Cherry Blossom, it's amazing <3

Really my best map ? everything looks random
/me hides
Thanks for modding Desperate ♥

Update :
Edit : fix General, on my diff please ;w;

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Last edited by Cherry Blossom 2014-06-22T20:32:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-06-22T16:55:00+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:

General
Source: "REFLEC BEAT"
Tags: "Asphyxia -Asagi Cherry Blossom ART CORE BEMANI colette -Winter-"
Asphyxia's Easy should be renamed to "Asphyxia's Normal" or "Asphyxia's Beginner". In REFLECT BEAT, there exist two difficulty levels under Advanced: Normal and Beginner. I'd suggest to go with Normal though, since Beginner might be misleading for newbies (as in osu very simple Easy diffs are sometimes called Beginner).
Disable both Widescreen Support and Letterbox in Breaks, since your map doesn't have a storyboard or breaks
The kiais are placed a bit weirdly. First of all, it would be cooler if the first anti-fountain started at 00:31:905 already, because the triplet leading to the second kiai part starts there. You could also just remove the anti-fountain since it's barely noticable nevertheless. Same applies for the second kiai-complex, at 01:36:502. Then, the first kiai-complex should definitely end at 00:42:389, there is no reason why it should end 1/4 beat later o:
If you fixed the kiais, apply them for Asagi's and Cherry Blossom's diff as well, as these seem to use different kiais. Consistency might be a better idea here
I fixed the difficulty naming, renamed to Asphyxia's Beginner, I added the tags and source myself. I disabled the support + letterboxes too

Asphyxia's Easy
Your NCing seems rather inconsistent to me. Sometimes you are placing NCs at every measure and sometimes every two measures. Since the combos are really short when you place them at every measure, I'd recommend you to place an NC at every second measure. Oh yeah I was supposed to fix this when I made the difficulty but forgot, fixed.
00:01:099 (1) - Very minor, but the last curve of this slider might look better if it was less curvy. You could move the anchor-point down a bit, for something like this: kk
Picture
00:13:357 (3) - It looks strange and a bit confusing that this circle is placed under the track of 00:11:744 (1). If you change (3) and (4) to this placement, this would be fixed and the transition from (2) to (3) would also be a bit better: well sure, even though the old ones was fine too
Picture
00:21:744 (1) - This object is placed too shortly after the spinner. The newbies don't have enough time to react here D: Even if this would be the most fitting rhythm, you should still change it for better playability. For example, you could end the spinner at 00:21:098 already. kk
00:32:711 (2) - The way this object touches 00:30:776 (2) looks really weird. Generally, in this section 00:29:486 (1,2,1,2,1) there are so many overlaps, it looks really cramped at some points and might confuse the newbies. I'd recommend you to remap this short section and make it a bit more straight-forward to fit the difficulty level I don't think any of these overlaps will confuse any newbies, or that's what I assume so I'd like to keep this.
00:46:905 (3,4,1,2) - If you rearrange this a bit, you could make a perfect square :3 kk
01:05:615 (1) - Same as 00:21:744 kk
01:37:228 (2,1,2) - Once again, I don't think this is fitting for the difficulty level and might likely confuse the newbies. Please, try something without overlapping the pattern before ;w; did some re-arrangementssss
01:43:034 (2) - I don't see a reason for using this rhythm here. The white tick at 01:43:679 seems to be more emphasized than the red tick you are mapping, by the loud instruments and the drums. So I suggest to use a rhythm similiar to this: Even though the red tick might not be as strong, I still think the rhythm here is quite fine so yeah, if more people complain then sure i can try to change it
Rhythm
Well, I think the diff is quite fine, if you fix the spinner issues I'm wondering why you always do an overlap when you "go back", like 00:52:066 (3,1,2) for example. I don't think it's less confusing then just reusing circles, but it rather looks a bit messy the way you do it.

Sankyuu~

http://puu.sh/9Fihw/f9401c2b8b.txt

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

RikiH_ 2014-06-24T09:57:28+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:

General
Source: "REFLEC BEAT" Done
Tags: "Asphyxia -Asagi Cherry Blossom ART CORE BEMANI colette -Winter-" Done
Asphyxia's Easy should be renamed to "Asphyxia's Normal" or "Asphyxia's Beginner". In REFLECT BEAT, there exist two difficulty levels under Advanced: Normal and Beginner. I'd suggest to go with Normal though, since Beginner might be misleading for newbies (as in osu very simple Easy diffs are sometimes called Beginner). Done
Disable both Widescreen Support and Letterbox in Breaks, since your map doesn't have a storyboard or breaks Done
The kiais are placed a bit weirdly. First of all, it would be cooler if the first anti-fountain started at 00:31:905 already, because the triplet leading to the second kiai part starts there. You could also just remove the anti-fountain since it's barely noticable nevertheless. Same applies for the second kiai-complex, at 01:36:502. Then, the first kiai-complex should definitely end at 00:42:389, there is no reason why it should end 1/4 beat later o: Nope sorry, I won't change the kiais because I like the fountains and I tink they are noticeable ^^
If you fixed the kiais, apply them for Asagi's and Cherry Blossom's diff as well, as these seem to use different kiais. Consistency might be a better idea here

Advanced
OD4 might be better, especially due to things like this 01:08:195 (1,2) and much usage of 1/2 circles. Okay
00:03:034 (3) - Using a less curvy slider here would improve the flow here, as it would fit the oval movement from (2) to (4) more. Alright, not a big difference btw xD
Picture
00:11:421 - The combo starting here seems really long to me. It would be better if place an NC somewhere in the middle of this combo! Done
00:13:357 (5,6) - Currently, the transition between these objects is not really good, because (6)'s head's placement doesn't fit the curve of (5). Try starting (6) at a lower position, somewhere like here: Done
Picture
00:19:163 (1) - The following object is placed too shortly after the spinner. The player of this difficulty level will need more time to react. Consider ending the spinner at 00:21:098 for that reason. Actually, you did that on a similiar place 01:03:115 (1) as well. I fixed the first. The second one was already 2/1 of distance
00:42:873 (1,1,1) - Please don't use NC spam like this for this difficulty level, since it might confuse the players. It looks better if these 00:43:357 (1,1) aren't NC'd. Same applies for 00:45:453 (1,1,1) + 00:48:034 (1,1,1) + 00:50:615 (1,1,1) + 01:44:324 (1,1,1) Done
01:03:115 (1) - For this difficulty level, it might be a better idea to start the spinner at 01:03:195, in order to make it better playable for other gamemodes and also to give the player more time to react Well, this was mapped for osu!standard... >_>
01:23:760 (1) - Same as 01:03:115 (1) and same as 00:19:163. Shortened but didn't star it later. If someone else points this out I'll fix!
01:30:131 (1,2) - Although I can hear what you are following at this point, the instrument is not really noticable when playing, what makes this sound really out of place. Kepping it on 1/2-snap would sound more fitting here For example: I disagree, I think it's noticeable!
Rhythm
I really liked this diff! It fits the difficulty spread perfectly, being harder than a Normal but easier than a Hard! I especially love your sliders o: If you fix the issues with spinners as well as some of the comboing, everything will be alright. Yeah, thanks a lot :3

Extra
00:11:098 (5,6,7,8) - After the previous sliders, the movement would be more natural if the stream was curved instead of straight o: Something like this: Done, looks good!
Picture
00:16:905 (3,4,5,6) - This looked rather random to me, especially since some of the sliders are touching each other, but maybe I'm just not seeing your intention here o: Probably you could think of a better structurized pattern to fit your style more I just wanted to create a different pattern for some variation
00:53:679 (8) - If you curved this slider the other way around, it would create a smoother oval movement here Try this: Done
Picture
00:55:776 (4,5,6) - To be honest, this flowed pretty weird. Something like in my screenshot would be better ( ctrl+g on (5) and then change (6) ) No change, I like how it flows, sorry!
Picture
01:08:195 (1,1,1,1,1) - I know this is an Extra diff and you have your freedom, but this NC spam seems unnecessary at this place and it makes it too easy for the players not to fail ;w; Only the first of these sliders needs NC. Also fix that for following patterns please. Well, I'm not really sure about that, I'll wait for further mods and maybe change it
01:30:453 - Seems like a very important beat you shouldn't leave out in my opinion. Yeah but I'm not following the drums in that part
Pro streams. Pro jumps. Pro everything. Pro diff. Pro Riki (◐◞౪◟◑’)┐Most of all, pro mod.

Good luck

Thanks a lot for really useful mod, you deserve 3473574589475 kds lol

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2014-06-29T01:23:18+00:00

Nice music, just being sad there's no taiko diff.
You though it was a mod? Fool!

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DeletedUser_1574070 2014-06-29T03:47:35+00:00

so its the time to take my star

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-07-05T12:03:41+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:

Asagi's Hyper
Considering that the Another diff has plenty of 1/4-tapping, well, it even has longer streams, it would be a good idea to replace some reverse sliders with streams for this Hard diff in order to improve the spread. I will mention some places where this would fit ~i dont usually put 4 to 5 note streams on hard diffs, im not sure about it so ill consider them
00:20:131 (6) - The stream is loudly hearable in the music, so I wouldn't leave it out. Why don't you map a stream starting at 00:20:131 with a nice transition to these reverse sliders at 00:20:453 ? :3 ~changed to repeat slider instead of streams
00:44:324 (1) - Here, changing it into a stream would fit quite well. Since there are 1/1-gaps before, the players have plenty of time to prepare their fingers Also, if you change it, also change 00:49:486 (1) for consistency ~ill consider this
00:59:002 (1) - It seems really weird to have this rhythm here. Ending sliders on the big white tick is often not a good idea, because this beat is often really important and should be clickable! Here it sounds especially strange because it even has a finish on it o: Changing this into two circle might help. If this would be too many circles in a row, you could make an 1/2-slider starting at 00:59:163 as well. ~fixed
01:35:292 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if I like the flow here... Moving down after the sliders seems like rather strange movement, especially for a Hyper difficulty. It will improve if you use ctrl+g on both of the sliders. But as I said, I'm not sure if I even like that more or not xD ~fixed
01:46:098 (1) - Turning this into a stream (or atleast the first half or something like that) would offer a nice final challenge for the players instead of just a hold! ~i just change it into 2 note stream
01:46:744 (1) - Your diff is the only one where the spinner doesn't end at 01:51:421. Also, it sounds better with a soft hitsound at the end instead of a Normal one o: ~fixed
If you add some streams to fix the spread, this is simply perfect. Awesome flow! ^-^

Good luck

Thanks :3

Fixed some mods and change some minor pattern and flow on my own

Update

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320,208,72711,2,0,B|344:240|344:240|416:264,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,132,73195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,84,73357,6,0,B|324:96|324:96|218:76,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,48,73840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,132,74002,2,0,L|56:256,2,112.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,164,74647,6,0,B|160:184|160:184|284:164,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,120,75131,2,0,L|372:72,2,37.5
356,208,75453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,75615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,324,75776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,75937,6,0,L|192:260,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,76179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,76260,2,0,L|160:336,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,348,76582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,260,76744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,180,76905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,96,77066,6,0,B|172:76|172:76|300:100,2,150
128,116,77792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,116,77873,2,0,L|132:196,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,316,78195,2,0,L|212:236,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,78518,6,0,P|308:136|380:148,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,268,79002,2,0,B|460:324|460:324|500:332,2,112.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,224,79647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,79808,6,0,B|225:287|225:287|104:252,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,80292,2,0,L|36:208,2,37.5
132,120,80615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,104,80776,2,0,L|260:100,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,100,81098,6,0,B|296:132|296:132|288:224,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,232,81421,2,0,L|380:239,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,160,81744,2,0,L|364:152,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,64,82066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,100,82228,6,0,P|216:116|144:88,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,82550,2,0,B|140:136|140:136|148:184,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,264,82873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,312,83034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,296,83195,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,248,83357,2,0,B|412:224|412:224|400:135,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,112,83679,6,0,B|274:92|274:92|244:104,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,164,84163,2,0,B|251:190|251:190|300:180,1,150
235,30,84647,2,0,L|244:104,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,164,84969,6,0,L|127:89,1,75,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,85292,2,0,L|224:272,1,75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,85615,2,0,L|344:296,3,37.5
368,324,85937,2,0,L|412:292,3,37.5,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,272,86260,6,0,P|456:244|464:188,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,56,86582,2,0,B|372:164|372:164|380:202,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,240,87066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,87228,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,276,87389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,87550,6,0,P|68:160|104:68,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,276,88357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,88518,2,0,L|232:152,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,88840,6,0,L|324:64,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,48,89163,2,0,L|400:48,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,89486,2,0,L|416:208,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,322,89808,2,0,L|333:254,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,240,90050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,240,90131,6,0,B|280:232|280:232|236:240,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,90453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,304,90776,2,0,B|108:312|108:312|44:300,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,228,91098,2,0,L|24:172,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,91421,6,0,P|38:132|80:104,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,180,91744,2,0,B|148:196|148:196|100:180,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,108,92228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,96,92389,2,0,B|291:92|291:92|352:48,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,40,92711,6,0,L|364:114,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,93034,2,0,P|408:244|496:240,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,164,93518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,93679,2,0,L|324:228,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,94002,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,208,94163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,268,94324,2,0,B|112:248|112:248|80:128,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,60,94808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,94969,2,0,L|260:124,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,95292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
404,32,95453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,76,95615,2,0,P|493:113|489:149,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,95937,5,2,0:0:0:0:
408,120,96098,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,148,96260,2,0,P|496:184|489:221,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,284,96582,6,0,P|368:280|412:284,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,96905,2,0,P|244:303|288:212,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,97389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,92,97550,2,0,L|248:100,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,112,97873,6,0,P|132:176|160:248,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,100,98679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,180,98840,2,0,L|252:228,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,99163,6,0,B|240:284|240:284|256:352,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,344,99486,2,0,B|448:308|448:308|472:268,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,99969,2,0,L|392:268,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,100292,6,0,L|520:220,2,37.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,100615,2,0,L|376:80,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,24,100937,2,0,L|291:135,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,101260,2,0,B|252:172|252:172|212:172,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,101582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,52,101744,5,4,1:0:0:0:
64,136,101905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,102066,2,0,L|80:316,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,182,102389,2,0,L|152:248,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,102711,2,0,L|254:241,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,276,103034,6,0,L|337:302,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,160,103357,2,0,L|324:212,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,57,103679,2,0,L|280:132,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,104002,2,0,L|172:60,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,52,104324,6,0,B|132:44|132:44|88:52,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,220,104808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,288,104969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,152,105292,6,0,B|272:140|272:140|220:144,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,105776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,105937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,228,106098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,228,106179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,228,106260,6,0,L|452:192,6,37.5,0|0|0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106824,12,0,111421,2:0:0:0:

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2014-07-19T19:12:33+00:00

random update \o/

Kritikally

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Kritikally 2014-07-19T19:58:14+00:00

M4M from #modreqs.

[General]
The two blue combos are too close in color to differentiate -- especially since they come after each other. Make one of the blues either significantly darker or significantly lighter -- or change the combo order from light -> dark -> light -> dark -> et cetera.

[Asphyxia's Beginner]
00:26:260 (4)- Slider overlaps with fading circle (1). Rotate (2) and (3) so (4)'s start point stacks with previous circle (1)?
00:32:711 (2)- The overlap here with slider (3) looks bleh. Bend (3), perhaps?
00:36:582 (4)- Ugly overlap with NC slider (1).
00:38:518 (3)- Ugly overlap with slider (4).
00:42:389 (1)- Rotate end point to meet with slider (3)'s end point?
01:21:744 (2)- The overlap here with slider (3) looks bleh. Bend (3), perhaps?
01:40:453 (3)- Can blanket better around (2). Rotate counter-clockwise from selection center.

[Standard]

00:01:099 (1)- This type of bend feels weird and may be unrankable, may want to consider something that doesn't manipulate the speed too much in the middle. Feels more like a failed loop than what you did in NC (3) despite it being a simple rotation of the same slider.

[Extra]
01:43:518 (4)- Not liking the position of this. You had a good idea of the pattern in the previous combo, but this one seems to be chaotic. It just feels... off, even ignoring the fact it's a 3x jump. The whole combo just feels random -- filler.

[Asagi's Hyper]
00:24:969 (3)- For a non-stacking event, should be able to see the numbering of the HC. Maybe stack with (2)'s end point?
00:26:905 (1)- Blanket with (3)?
00:28:195 (1)- For a non-stacking event, should be able to see the numbering of the HC. Maybe stack with previous slider (4)'s end point?
00:33:357 (1)- For a non-stacking event, should be able to see the numbering of the HC. Maybe stack with previous slider (4)'s end point?
Gonna stop pointing those out -- just a suggestion to consider for the rest of the difficulty.
01:16:260 (3)- Blanket with (5)?
01:17:873 (2)- Blanket with previous circle (6)?
01:34:969 (5)- Blanket with previous circle (2)?
01:39:969 (3)- Blanket with future slider start point (1).
01:40:615 (2)- Blanket with previous slider start point (1)?

[Cherry Blossom's Another]
00:22:389 (3,4)- Blanket each other?
00:24:324 (1)- Can blanket with (4) easily.
00:24:969 (5)- Can blanket with previous circle (1) easily.
00:30:131 (3)- Blanket with (4)'s end point.
01:01:905 (2)- Either rotate to align with previous blue combo's stream or blanket with (1).
01:14:969 (2)- Blanket with (5)?
01:34:647 (3)- Blanket with (4)?
01:40:131 (6)- Blanket with (4)?

[Summary]
Overall, a great mapset. Nit-picking a bit, but the blanketing could have been done better (ignored less) in most difficulties, and some of the sliders seemed unnecessarily bendy (almost to the point where it's manipulating the slider speed). Either way, you guys are almost there! Good luck!

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2014-07-19T21:14:42+00:00

Didnt change anything.
Because your suggestions force me to change the flow too, and i don't want to modify this, because it will not be nicer imo.
Second reason, i don't really change my slider's placement without real reasons, just tell me why i should make this or that etc. My style is mainly based on structure, if someone says "make blanket here" without any reasons, it will be natural to deny his suggestion.

Sorry ;w; thanks anyway for spending your time on my diff.

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2014-08-18T21:37:34+00:00

Revive ! ~

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2014-09-05T09:45:31+00:00

Officially revived.
Sorry but I have some serius shit running in my real life and blabh blah blah

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-09-23T10:57:41+00:00

RIP forever </3

grumd

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Joined October 2010

grumd 2015-07-17T18:50:31+00:00

It's not unrankable?
http://ask.fm/Loctav_/answer/129000192422

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2016-01-05T16:35:48+00:00

~~post, sry... too sleepy now, will mod this later.~~

m4m, sry for the huge delay...

the map's already made in mature style so... i really can't find too much things after my 1st scanning to the map...

[Extra]
muh... can't find much things... just notice some nazi...
00:34:324 (7,8,1) - seems like you've arranged various patterns for the 1/4 sliders which emphasis those downbeats, thou they are in different style with various ds settings as well. 00:24:002 (5,6,7,8,1) - is more fit to me than 00:36:905 (6,7,8,9,1) - ... (well sounds like
nonsense... whatever...
01:43:195 (2,3,4,5) - these jumps are too large imo...
... star.

[Cherry Blossom's Another]
... star... symm style lol can't find much things as well orzzz

[Asagi's Hyper]
00:16:260 (3) - unsnapped.
to those really differnt 3/4 beats like 01:08:195 (1,2) - , i may recommend you do some "special patterns" in structure level like different style of composing, to distinguish them from other common rhythm style's objs. thou that's not that really necessary thing, consider a bit to give various pattern and it at least helps people reading the map a bit better :3

[Standard]
00:01:099 (1) - muh... why not use common slider lol... in normal level diff orz
00:03:679 (1,2) - idk if the rhythm style like this is ok to be ranked in a normal as well orz, but maybe stuff like 00:08:840 (1,2,3,4) - is not acceptable... and they are filled full of the whole diff orz... (gaps before and after tapping ticks should be same, otherwise some staff may regard those rhythms as a "too hard for noobs" rhythm in lower diff and block it in the ranking progress, at least i met that situation once... ;w;)

[Asphyxia's Beginner]
00:08:840 (1,2,3) - well, if the gap setting like this in bottom diff is ok, then i think other stuffs in normal diff is fine as well.
00:19:163 (1,1) - i was told that easy diff require an at-least-4/4 gap after spinner... 0.0
00:29:486 (1,2) - hmm is that ok to overlap things like that in bottom diff? orz... same to 00:55:292 (1,2) - .

really sorry for didn't help much... ;w;

good luck!

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