[EZ]

01:45:815 (105815|3) - missing hithat

[NM]

01:04:981 (64981|3) - move 3
01:05:148 (65148|2) - move 4
01:30:148 (90148|5) - missing hihat

01:48:981 (108981|0) - remove
01:49:065 (109065|2) - move 1
01:49:148 - add bassdrum note on 3

01:57:315 (117315|6,117315|4,117648|0,117648|2,117981|5,117981|1) - this LN end not suit with NM diff

[HD]

00:23:981 (23981|0) - remove hitsound and add a note for bassdrum ( let the strings with no hitsounds )
00:25:315 (25315|0) - ^
00:26:648 (26648|0) - ^
00:27:981 (27981|0) - ^
00:29:315 (29315|4) - ^
00:30:648 (30648|5) - ^

00:58:315 - suggest those all 1/2 LNs change to normal note...

01:34:648 (94648|6) - remove hitsound
01:33:315 (93315|0) - ^
01:35:981 (95981|3) - ^

01:38:648 (98648|2) - swap this hitsound to 01:38:648 (98648|5) -
01:46:648 (106648|6) - swap hitsound to 01:46:648 (106648|0) -
01:47:315 - add a note and 01:47:315 (107315|3) - swap hitsound
01:58:648 (118648|1) - remove hitsound

Ok I just spiced up the diff a bit here because I felt like it was too similar to NM diff in difficulty.

[IN]

00:13:315 - add anote and swap this hitsound 00:13:315 (13315|6) -
00:14:648 - ^
00:15:981 (15981|2) - ^
00:17:315 (17315|4) - ^
00:18:648 (18648|0) - ^
00:19:981 (19981|1) - ^
00:21:315 (21315|3) - ^
00:21:315 (21315|3) - split 1ln per measure line
00:22:648 - add kick / bassdrum
00:23:148 - try focus drumstream instruments

00:35:961 (35961|5,35981|4) - fix this note ( in bms doesnt have 1/16 here ), fix the next one related with 1/16 too. im lazy tag too much.
00:56:981 (56981|6,57065|4,57148|6,57231|4) - in bms doesn't have 1/4, it should be 1/2. but when im hearing more cleary. it's more like 1/4. actually putting 1/4 feels weird because only this measure have 1/4 before heading new measure line. ( like you did next one 00:58:315 (58315|6,58481|5) - ) also next one too...
01:12:981 (72981|1,73065|1,73148|0,73231|1) -

When heard at 100% 1/2 LNs make more sense because the sounds are more clear. When I put 1/4s it's because it's very hearable. I would prefer if we keep it as it currently is.

01:38:731 - add a note no particular sound (piano starts on red tick)
01:41:231 - ^
01:47:065 - ^
01:47:398 - ^
01:48:148 - ^
01:48:231 - ^

01:50:648 - add bassdrum
01:51:981 - ^
01:53:315 - ^
01:54:648 - ^

01:53:981 - try add 1/2 stream beardrum ( 1 2 1 2 )
01:56:648 - ^
01:55:981 - add bassdrum,

01:57:565 - add
01:57:898 - ^

PyaKura wrote:

Hit me up when you are free to proceed to a recheck through PM, so that I don't need to monitor my friendlist to see if you're on x_x

ExPew wrote:

continue back modding

[EZ]

00:55:315 (55315|0,55648|2) - merge ln ok
01:16:398 (76398|4) - move them in 1/1 snap divisor...(i feel weird on this note, even you follow the synth) yeah it felt weird for me too..
01:48:315 (108315|2) - remove hitsound done

[NM]


00:55:315 (55315|2,55648|4) - same with EZ don't think two 1/2 LNs was too much but fixed anyway
01:05:315 (65315|1,65315|0) - remap, i guess it would better if you keep continue then duplet streams done
01:11:065 (71065|1) - place this note on next red timeline same weird feeling as with EZ, fixed
01:24:815 (84815|0) - missing hi-hat
01:28:815 (88815|5) - ^ fixed both
01:30:648 to 01:33:148 - this note are not consistent with the to the next pattern or not suit with NM style ( my suggestion not count from start '2 1 2 1 2 1 2 1' ) changed to something like this. Should be better.
01:53:815 (113815|6) - move 6 done
01:57:648 (117648|1) - remove hitsound
01:57:981 (117981|6) - swap
01:58:648 (118648|0) - remove hitsound all fixed

[HD]

00:24:065 (24065|0) - fix it lol woooow how did it end up like this LOL
00:59:481 (59481|1,59648|2,59815|3,60648|4,60815|3) - suggest to change normal note....feels more better okay
01:04:981 (64981|6,65148|4,65315|2) - change to normal note and there got streams done
01:09:981 (69981|5,70231|5) - this LN too weird they are the LNs in higher diffs, I merged them
01:10:981 - add a note added
01:13:981 (73981|3,74065|2,74148|1,74315|2,74398|1,74481|0) - remove, this part feel 1/1 LN synth
01:49:648 to 01:54:481 - remove all bassdrum hitsounds removed on LNs

[IN]

01:00:731 - add added on 5 and moved the note on 4 to 3
01:04:981 (64981|1,65148|3,65315|5) - same with HD not on this one (not even the LN changing to NN )
01:09:981 (69981|4,70231|4) - weirld as always nah I'm not changing it for this diff
01:12:731 - add 2 note uuuuh yes good catch oO
01:12:981 (72981|1,73065|1,73148|0,73231|1) - 1/2 synth+01:13:981 nah
(73981|0,73981|2,74065|1,74065|3,74148|4,74148|2,74315|2,74315|0,74398|1,74398|3,74481|2,74481|4) - 1/1 synth good idea
01:16:648 (76648|1,76731|1,76815|1,76898|1,76981|1) - you're such cruel I know I am. I had to do this xD

[SHD]

01:31:981 - LN piano missing Aaaaah yes, that's because I lacked space so I actually used the start of 01:31:981 (91981|6) - so the movement of the fingers flow like in a stairs pattern. This LN kind of play two sounds.
01:47:981 (107981|3,108315|4) - it's half measure LN aaaa changed, not sure if it was what you wanted ?

-Kamikaze- wrote:

PYA! FINALLY!!!! o3o

Charles445 wrote:

[HD]
00:55:315 - You put a gradual SV change here, which in theory looks really cool, but in gameplay it's almost impossible to tell when you're supposed to hit the objects. The streams need to be hit at a consistent speed, so it's important that the player sees them as consistent distances apart from each other. Removed progressive SV, added 1x SV at 00:54:648 - .
01:00:065 (60065|0) - Extra object not in music? I think deleting this would be a good idea. I know about this, but when heard at 100% speed, having following notes make more sense to the player and is easier to play. (there are 2 or 3 other similar cases)
01:11:065 (71065|4) - Extra object? Delete this one then move the previous note at the center to the 5th lane -> http://puu.sh/aBWD6.png funny because that was part of pew's mod. Fixed anyway.
01:17:315 - So this part is the main streaming of the map. Since this is the HD difficulty it means the players aren't as experienced at the game, so hopefully the streams will be somewhat easy. For the first part, 01:17:315 - You do something really cool where the streams are changing direction on white and red ticks. This feels really natural to play and is very intuitive. At around 01:18:981 - though is where the direction changes start happening on the blue ticks. That starts to get really confusing, especially at 01:21:648 - where the player is changing direction every 7 notes (7/6) instead of 6 (6/6, every beat). I think for this lower difficulty, more straightforward streams would help, like this -> http://puu.sh/aBXhW.jpg notice how they change direction on the red only. 'k I'm changing these streams a bit.

[IN]
I feel like the jackhammers and double note streams are way harder than the rest of the map. 01:06:648 - Streams like this are simple enough when they go in one direction, but when they are alternating back and forth on the same hand they are very difficult, like at 01:08:481 - . not going to change the patterns, but I'm adding extra space between the double notes (2 empty spaces instead of one). Should make them easier.
00:55:315 - Same concern with SV change as HD, it's not very readable here. Fixed the same way as HD diff, moved first 4 notes of the stairs to the left.
01:10:981 - Missing objects here? Also 01:11:065 - should be at 01:11:148 - instead. -> http://puu.sh/aBXPr.jpg SHD does this too. ah nice catch rofl, also nerf the chord jacks by making the 3rd sound of each one one different, kinda like the single notes ones https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1885135
01:26:648 - To go back to what I said on the HD difficulty with streams, This is the only part of the stream where it changes direction on weird beats. I think groups of 3 or 6 notes would work better here instead of groups of 4. not sure about this... it's true that the HD diff's streams were a bit weird, but this one feels right to me because the previous part is much more high-pitched, so I use groups of 3 notes to make the thing more uuuh... fitting the music I guess, and then this part which despite using the same beat snapping, feels calmer so I use groups of 4. Groups of 6 notes are too easy. Fixed last note of the stream.
01:39:315 (99315|2) - Move this to column 6, it would fit the music more and would play intuitively.
01:42:981 (102981|4) - Move this to column 7? Same reason both of the above fixed

PyaKura wrote:

nvm this it's gonna be remapped

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello PyaKura
mod ready

[The Prologue [EZ]]

01:04:919 (64919|3) - delete, this EZ diff kay
01:17:336 - 01:36:002 - this part will be hard to play for beginners nerfed it with LN and 1/1 notes

[The Beginning [NM]]

00:00:003 - this SV is not needed, especially for NM diff, delete Ok, deleted next slowjam as well
01:08:669 - add note to 4 I don't see why D:
01:15:669 (75669|0) - move to 6
01:15:752 (75752|1) - move to 5
01:15:836 (75836|2) - move to 4 Done all of the above
01:20:002 - 01:46:669 - I see you like to make easy\normal diffs too complex This song isn't really fit for EZ diffs though
01:57:336 - 02:00:002 - ^ ^ I thik symmetrical patterns are easier to play than non-symmetrical ones
02:00:002 - delete this SV D: Nay

[The Middle [HD]]

00:04:002 - add note to 2 if I add a note there I'll have to add a note on every similar sound which I don't want to for this diff
00:25:169 - add note
00:26:502 - ^
00:27:836 - ^
00:29:169 - ^ All of the above, no reason really D:


[The End [IN]]

00:14:669 - add note
00:16:002 - ^
00:17:336 - ^
00:18:002 - ^
00:18:669 - ^
00:20:002 - ^
00:21:336 - ^
00:34:669 - ^ All of the above nay there is a note for each sound already
00:36:003 (36003|4) - move to 3 Done
00:37:337 (37337|2) - move to 2 Done
00:48:003 (48003|1) - move to 3 x
01:38:669 - add note Done

Good luck.

Mwalls Ho wrote:

[The End [IN]]
00:01:337 (1337|3) - the 0.2x speed is a bit slow to me,consider it to be more fast? Increased to 0.6x, same for HD diff, same for slowjams in the middle and at the end
00:02:670 (2670|5) - move to 7?(since these 2 notes have different sounds and the 7th line has no note for a long time since beginning)
00:05:337 (5337|5) - the same above done both
00:11:836 - add a LN?(i prefer the 4th line) There used to be a LN but I removed it when I picked up the map again.
00:30:503 (30503|0) - move to 5?(since this note is not the same sound with those afterwards drum beat) rearranged patterns to make it more clear
00:39:337 (39337|0) - move to 7 okay
01:49:669 (109669|1,109670|6) - 01:57:169 (117169|3) - every piano sound in this zone correspond with 2 notes to emphasize them? no one of the two notes is the drum beat on white lines
01:57:169 (117169|3) - change this zone to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319560 (I only hear 8-bit sound here,i know you mean to put a spam here,but i think the spam later is strong enough to kill some people) I totally agree, I wanted to change these patterns. Your pattern looks good, let me think about it.
02:01:003 (121003|6) - move to 3or5or6
02:03:670 (123670|4) - move to 6 both notes are repeating sounds

The Epilogue [EX]
0.2 still slow fixed
Hp 8.5 a little hard? Reduced to 8
00:11:836 - add a LN same reason as previously
00:22:669 (22669|6) - change to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319623 Okay but I moved the first three notes on the left by one column to the left
00:26:502 (26502|6) - move to 5 drumbass are either on column 1 or 7 only for this part
00:28:169 (28169|2) - move to 6 changed otherwise
00:30:502 (30502|0) - move to 5 rearranged pattern
01:12:252 (72252|4,72252|2,72752|2,72752|0) - these jackhamer is difficult for me changed to chord trills
01:13:086 (73086|0,73086|2) - remove them(no sound here) removed


I love this song,good luck

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

[General]
BPM and offset
please do try this

It might work but it should work the same as current timing (which is stolen from the original BMS and fixed by BATs when the map went ranked for the first time. :c


[EX]
00:15:836 - Suggest you to delete two notes, 00:15:836 (15836|2,15836|3) - because 00:15:836 - is the same sound as 00:16:002 - just different pitch. You also only had one note at 00:17:336 - , I wrote this by thinking that the notes was not for piano Welle, they are (display sample names to help you recognize which notes are mapped to what sound - when a HS doesn't make sense in its placement it's most likely a filler because I didn't have another note to hitsound i.e. : hihat/bassdrum on piano)
00:21:169 - Remove two notes, same reason as above ^
00:23:002 - I think you should add a note here since it is same kind of sound like 00:22:336 - just different pitch It's actually what I did before the previous mod, just for the sake of comfortability.
00:23:502 (23502|4) - remove this note because the sound I think you are putting on already started at 00:23:336 - piano
00:23:586 - there should be three notes here because it is the same as 00:23:336 - ^ + 12 and 67 columns are drums, 345 are piano in this part.
which 00:23:669 - should be two notes because it is same as 00:23:419 - ^
00:24:836 - remove a note here, it is the exactly same sound as 00:26:169 - which you only had 3 notes here yes + changed pattern
00:26:502 - same as first point, or it should be the same as 00:26:669 - bass drum + hihat on the notes on the right
00:28:836 - remove a note, same as 00:26:169 - done
00:29:169 - if you are note mapping the piano here, like I said in the first point, you should remove a note, but if not, you should add a note because it is same as 00:26:502 -, that was 4 notes and this should also be Nice catch, added a note
00:46:669 - remove a note and add a note at 00:47:336 - mmmh no, there clearly are two sounds at 0:46 whereas there only one at 0:47
01:03:169 - 01:03:336 - 01:03:419 - Why is there 2 notes here, I think you should remove 1 from each, since they sound the same from others, or you might want to add extra 1 note to the ones before with only one note there are higher pitched sounds coming in along the first sounds, it's hearable
01:04:169 - 01:04:252 - 01:04:419 - 01:04:502 - 01:04:669 - 01:04:752 - 01:04:919 - 01:05:002 - 01:05:169 - 01:05:502 - 01:05:586 - 01:05:752 - 01:05:836 - 01:05:919 - 01:06:169 - Lol why did I even list part of that same reason as above + I think you've mixed up some notes lol
01:06:669 - Don't really get it is 5 notes here when you had 4 notes at 01:01:336 - 01:09:336 - I-I-I don't even know... Okay reduced the number of notes per chord to 4, kept the last chords to 5.
01:08:002 - ^
01:09:252 (69252|1) - remove, no sound, if you consider this as a sound, you missed a lot of those removed
01:10:252 - should remove the two notes here because there was same kind of sound at 01:09:919 - 01:09:586 - , or maybe you should add two notes on the missing ones this one is a lot more hearable at 100% speed, the previous ones are hardly noticeable
01:10:502 - Why 3 notes here when you have 1 note at 01:08:836 - 3 notes because of the high pitched sounds + hihat / 1 note because hihat only (take a look at the original BMS chart to understand, I can't really explain myself)
01:10:836 - ^
01:11:169 - ^
01:11:502 - ^
yea won't point all out ^
01:24:086 (84086|0) - remove it brings consistency throughout the whole stream + see BMS
01:25:225 - there is sound here not hearable enough, I did notice it though
01:28:002 - is same as 01:27:836 - so remove a note it's not the same - bassdrum on the thick white line
01:28:669 - 01:28:336 - 01:29:669 -and more are same as 01:27:336 - remove a note actually 01:27:336 is missing a note but I wasn't going to put an additional note in the middle of a 1/6 stream
01:33:419 - 01:34:752 - 01:36:086 - 01:39:419 - and more is same as 01:30:752 - so I think they should be the same uuuh there is only one note there (piano) else it's for the sake of consistency
01:37:419 - why suddenly all three notes to emphasize the climax of that part
01:56:002 - remove the two notes because you didn't have them before at 01:54:669 - 01:53:336 - it will be strange that it appears randomly Fixed

good luck