GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size ver.) · forum

Kihhou

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-13T06:12:21+00:00

Sulker wrote:
Not much but wanted to help out.

[General]
For Normal, Hard, and Easy, maybe put spinners in the break times? Just was thinking thought unless if you want to do something else. i wouldnt like how the spinner starts when the chorus ends
[Easy]

00:05:853 (1) - Maybe start a spinner at the beginning? mhm

[Normal]

00:05:853 (1) - Same as Normal. Start a spinner at the beginning? kk!

01:12:763 (6) - Just a finish. No need for the whistle okay~

[Hard]

00:05:853 (6) - Add a circle note here and push back slider a bit and retract i dont like how its less smooth
[Extra]
00:26:415 (2) - Whistle here maybe id rather keep whistles at a minimum
00:27:089 (3) - Whistle here too
00:27:763 (2) - Whistle~

00:28:606 (4) - Whistle

00:37:201 (2) - Whistle

00:38:549 (4) - Whsitle

Thanks for the help

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-13T19:19:10+00:00

LilyWhite wrote:
Giralda's Insane
00:13:943 You see, this New Combo right here feels strange since you're doing a star type pattern afterwards, and I got tricked thinking 1 was the start of the star pattern. I would suggest to remove that new combo and moving it to the following slider. This new combo is at the beginning of a new measure
00:24:729 Since 3 and 5 are linear sliders, this bit curvy slider feels weird to me... a bit of variation doesn't hurt. Besides, still plays like a linear slider.
00:29:111 Move slider to x:384, y:232. Nice wrap going. Done.
00:38:718 Avoid stack with (7)? Guess it doesn't hurt to do that
00:41:920 A 1/2 slider with reverse arrow fits better the vocal.How about this? The way it flows right now is pretty weird I must agree. I'll think about it.
00:56:920 Finish would fit better at the beginning of the slider IMO. So it goes with the vocals. The cymbal in the music is here.
01:22:370 Spacing looks inconsistent. Its a slider, inconsistent spacing doesn't impair gameplay

Sulker wrote:
[Grialda's Insane]
00:05:600 - Maybe add a circle note here and push the spinner two ticks back and retract..Sure. I originally wanted to let the spinner take over the vocals here but either way works.
I definitely like the flow in this. Nice job thank you

Thanks for the mods!

Download: http://puu.sh/87m40.zip

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2014-04-14T12:13:24+00:00

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Giralda's Insane]
00:01:976 (1) - remove NC it not a new lyric for the song
00:03:156 (1) - NC here..

00:12:257 - add note it is not fit of the song You can try 00:14:954 (6,1) - it is a same part
(i think 00:14:954 (6,1) - of the sound is nice try it)

00:29:111 (2) - blanket? move X:376 Y:236

00:43:437 (4,2) - overlap ,look bad

01:04:504 (3) - i think this slider should be delete,and add two note. Because of 01:02:145 (1,1,2,3,2) - there are 5 slider, so many to use this

[Hard]
00:05:853 (1) - i think 00:07:707 is best...same Extra

00:09:561 (1) - move to X:240 Y:272 can make this nice DS(also you can use (2) to blanket more good)
00:23:044 (3,4) - keep the DS of consistent

00:14:617 (2) - the last point should blanket with (1)

00:27:089 (2,3) - i really hope you can fix this... It is not a good rhythm that you are writing.Because you add 3hit on 00:25:909 (8,9,1) - ,so 00:27:257 (3) - should be add 3hit to fit your writing

00:38:044 (3) - 00:36:695 (7,8,1) - ^ same

01:12:763 (8) - the last two point it is very strange plz try it
3rd point: X:444 Y:128
4th point: X:500 Y:184

[Normal]
00:35:179 (6,1) - i like this blanket...

00:55:235 (1,2) - what happen for this rhythm

it is too quiet try this

end~~

i just like to mod on 3diff...Sorry

good luck

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-14T15:55:34+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Giralda's Insane]
00:01:976 (1) - remove NC it not a new lyric for the song ok
00:03:156 (1) - NC here.. sure

00:12:257 - add note it is not fit of the song You can try 00:14:954 (6,1) - it is a same part I'll consider it, since the pause is there to put more emphasis on the guitar sound, allow you to move back down with more emphasis to 00:12:426 (1). If someone else mentions it, I'll do it.
(i think 00:14:954 (6,1) - of the sound is nice try it)

00:29:111 (2) - blanket? move X:376 Y:236 not intended to be a blanket at this part

00:43:437 (4,2) - overlap ,look bad moved up a bit

01:04:504 (3) - i think this slider should be delete,and add two note. Because of 01:02:145 (1,1,2,3,2) - there are 5 slider, so many to use this I prefer maintaining the slider structure that I have already with 01:03:999 (2).

good luck

Thank you for mod!

Download: http://puu.sh/88sJF.zip

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-15T02:21:42+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Hard]
00:05:853 (1) - i think 00:07:707 is best...same Extra why not~

00:09:561 (1) - move to X:240 Y:272 can make this nice DS(also you can use (2) to blanket more good) fixed~
00:23:044 (3,4) - keep the DS of consistent fixed

00:14:617 (2) - the last point should blanket with (1) fixed

00:27:089 (2,3) - i really hope you can fix this... It is not a good rhythm that you are writing.Because you add 3hit on 00:25:909 (8,9,1) - ,so 00:27:257 (3) - should be add 3hit to fit your writing it was used to match 00:36:695 (7,8,1). i think it fits the music fine the way it is now
00:38:044 (3) - 00:36:695 (7,8,1) - ^ same ^

01:12:763 (8) - the last two point it is very strange plz try it
3rd point: X:444 Y:128
4th point: X:500 Y:184 i like it~!

[Normal]
00:35:179 (6,1) - i like this blanket... thank you

00:55:235 (1,2) - what happen for this rhythm it is too quiet try this i like it~!

end~~

i just like to mod on 3diff...Sorry

good luck

Thank you for the mod ~!

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

desudesud 2014-04-16T22:26:45+00:00

Mod queue NM

[Easy]

00:27:763 (2) - I would make the slider end be at x:168 y:125 for a nicer looking diagonal line between 2, 3, and 4.

00:38:212 (2,3) - Blanket 3 with 2?

00:39:898 (4,5) - Stacks are a bad thing to do on an easy diff. New players play easy maps and so do noob players, and they will have no idea why the heck 2 approach circles or there or realize that there are two circles there. Separate pls

01:22:875 (4,5,6) - I would probably change this to a repeat slider to make it easier for newer players.

[Normal]

00:13:606 (5) - I would move this to x:272 y:228 in order to even out spacing and make the blanket with 1 a bit better.

00:56:920 (2,4) - I would add whistles to these circles to keep hitsound similarity and consistency with the Easy diff.

[Hard]

AR-1, HP+1, to keep difficulty consistent with most Hard diffs. AR8 is way too fast for a song with a BPM that isn't very low.

00:11:415 (3,4,5,1,2) - Most hard players wont detect 1 and 2 in time, so I would move those away from the current stacks or just stack them on 5.

00:56:246 (1,2,3) - To make the map more fun and less pure straight linear, I would tilt each of these a bit (1 a bit so it goes southwest (down and left), 2 so it goes southeast (down and right), and 3 so it goes southwest), so that each slider is slanted. It's a common Hard diff pattern practice and keeps aesthetics and flow going.

00:57:594 (1,2,3) - ^^, only 1 southeast, 2 southwest, 3 southeast

[Insane]

00:57:594 (3,4,5,6,7) - I would prefer a nice, evenly spaced, pretty star formation rather than the current ugly "blob" formation that I'm seeing.

Nice diff

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-16T23:29:14+00:00

xVirtualNinjax wrote:
Mod queue NM

[Easy]

00:27:763 (2) - I would make the slider end be at x:168 y:125 for a nicer looking diagonal line between 2, 3, and 4. done~

00:38:212 (2,3) - Blanket 3 with 2? why?

00:39:898 (4,5) - Stacks are a bad thing to do on an easy diff. New players play easy maps and so do noob players, and they will have no idea why the heck 2 approach circles or there or realize that there are two circles there. Separate pls changed to a slider

01:22:875 (4,5,6) - I would probably change this to a repeat slider to make it easier for newer players. doesnt seem necessaryi also dont like the position its in after a reverse given whats being played in the music

[Normal]

00:13:606 (5) - I would move this to x:272 y:228 in order to even out spacing and make the blanket with 1 a bit better. ok~

00:56:920 (2,4) - I would add whistles to these circles to keep hitsound similarity and consistency with the Easy diff. done~

[Hard]

AR-1, HP+1, to keep difficulty consistent with most Hard diffs. AR8 is way too fast for a song with a BPM that isn't very low. the AR feels fine to me as is and hp+1 done!

00:11:415 (3,4,5,1,2) - Most hard players wont detect 1 and 2 in time, so I would move those away from the current stacks or just stack them on 5. moved 1

00:56:246 (1,2,3) - To make the map more fun and less pure straight linear, I would tilt each of these a bit (1 a bit so it goes southwest (down and left), 2 so it goes southeast (down and right), and 3 so it goes southwest), so that each slider is slanted. It's a common Hard diff pattern practice and keeps aesthetics and flow going. done! thank you

00:57:594 (1,2,3) - ^^, only 1 southeast, 2 southwest, 3 southeast ^

Thank you for the mod ^_^

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-04-17T09:18:27+00:00

Hi!~ from my modding queue

[General]

Uncheck LetterBox DuringBreaks there's break time on Easy, Normal, Hard diff but not on Insane and Extra Diff

[Normal]

00:38:886 (2) - distance is different with 00:38:212 (1,3) - move 00:38:886 (2) - to 276, 112 and move 00:39:224 (3) - to 172, 80
SPOILER
00:39:224 (3) - I think this one is more clear
SPOILER
01:00:965 (4) - same reason with firs 240, 312
01:03:662 (3) - This beat is right maybe like 00:52:875 (3,4) -
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:20:010 (3) - this slider shape looks little weird better reshape this to screenshot
SPOILER
00:29:785 (5) - you used 0.6x distance with previous note. but beat is empty here(00:29:617) so better use more longer distance this can be confused to users.
00:43:437 (2) - how about use 1.7x? it looks more natural with 00:43:774 (3,4) - if you move to 288,244
00:52:875 (5,6,7) - better little unbend this all it looks better
SPOILER

GOOD LUCK~

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-17T21:22:22+00:00

Neta wrote:
Hi!~ from my modding queue

[General]
Uncheck LetterBox DuringBreaks there's break time on Easy, Normal, Hard diff but not on Insane and Extra Diff
im confused o-o are you asking me to uncheck it for the difficulties with breaks?

[Normal]
00:38:886 (2) - distance is different with 00:38:212 (1,3) - move 00:38:886 (2) - to 276, 112 and move 00:39:224 (3) - to 172, 80fixed!
SPOILER
00:39:224 (3) - I think this one is more clear youre right! fixed~
SPOILER
01:00:965 (4) - same reason with firs 240, 312 fixed~
01:03:662 (3) - This beat is right maybe like 00:52:875 (3,4) - yeah idk how i missed that ><
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:20:010 (3) - this slider shape looks little weird better reshape this to screenshot done
SPOILER
00:29:785 (5) - you used 0.6x distance with previous note. but beat is empty here(00:29:617) so better use more longer distance this can be confused to users. fixed!
00:43:437 (2) - how about use 1.7x? it looks more natural with 00:43:774 (3,4) - if you move to 288,244
00:52:875 (5,6,7) - better little unbend this all it looks better thank you!
SPOILER

GOOD LUCK~

Really awesome mod ^_^ thank you!~

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-18T17:40:26+00:00

xVirtualNinjax wrote:
Mod queue NM
[Insane]

00:57:594 (3,4,5,6,7) - I would prefer a nice, evenly spaced, pretty star formation rather than the current ugly "blob" formation that I'm seeing. sure

Nice diff ty

Thanks for the mod~

~

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51358
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:ambiguous (TV Size)
Artist:GARNiDELiA
ArtistUnicode:GARNiDELiA
Creator:Kihhou
Version:Giralda's Insane
Source:キルラキル
Tags:kill la kill giralda opening Katou Yuu Trigger meg rock toku Matoi Ryuko Senketsu
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OverallDifficulty:7
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panther4801

1 post

Joined April 2013

panther4801 2014-04-19T16:10:21+00:00

This is my first time giving feedback on a beatmap, and I've never made my own before. I really enjoy this song, and I liked a lot of this beatmap so I wanted to contribute my thoughts. At the moment the hardest difficulty I play on is Normal, so that's all I'm going to talk about.

Normal

00:19:336 (1) - , For both this section and the next Timing Section the Hit sounds seemed off.

After hunting around for it I figured out what the problem was, as far as I'm concerned. During those timing sections of the song the audio sample set is set to Soft and the Volume is set to 30% and 55% respectively. On this setting the normal hit sound is so quiet that you can't really hear it over the music. I tried increasing the Volume for the hit sounds to 100%, in the Timing Setup Panel, for those two sections, and then removed all of the clapping from that section (the claps were too loud after I bumped up the volume). I really liked the effect, although you would probably want to add some claps for emphasis.

In my opinion those are the only problematic sections of the Normal beatmap. I really like the beatmap otherwise so I wanted to try and help improve it!

Thanks for your effort!

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-20T03:02:18+00:00

panther4801 wrote:
This is my first time giving feedback on a beatmap, and I've never made my own before. I really enjoy this song, and I liked a lot of this beatmap so I wanted to contribute my thoughts. At the moment the hardest difficulty I play on is Normal, so that's all I'm going to talk about.

Normal

00:19:336 (1) - , For both this section and the next Timing Section the Hit sounds seemed off.

After hunting around for it I figured out what the problem was, as far as I'm concerned. During those timing sections of the song the audio sample set is set to Soft and the Volume is set to 30% and 55% respectively. On this setting the normal hit sound is so quiet that you can't really hear it over the music. I tried increasing the Volume for the hit sounds to 100%, in the Timing Setup Panel, for those two sections, and then removed all of the clapping from that section (the claps were too loud after I bumped up the volume). I really liked the effect, although you would probably want to add some claps for emphasis.

In my opinion those are the only problematic sections of the Normal beatmap. I really like the beatmap otherwise so I wanted to try and help improve it!

Thanks for your effort!

Thank you ^_^ i changed it from soft to normal for all difficulties except extra and insane. for extra, i made it a bit louder. hope that works~!

Last edited by Kihhou 2014-04-20T06:49:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-20T05:48:35+00:00

4/19/14
Removed Extra~! The map felt substandard in the eyes of many, including myself and other more competent osu players.
I deeply apologize to any in-progress modders who modded the extra map prior to this post ><

I'll make more extra map attempts in the future for different beatmaps~!

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-20T07:02:00+00:00

Hi,from my queue
Sorry for the delay

[Insane]
00:04:168 (4) - the vocal is on the tail.I think make the vocal at the beginning of the slider is better
00:09:898 (1,2) - combine to one long slider sounds better.but it's up to you
00:12:257 at least a note here
00:16:471 (1) - also the downbeat
00:38:044 (7,1) - i'm expecting a jump here
00:43:437 (4) - nc this instead of 00:43:943 (1)
00:50:684 (2,3) - ctrl+g to be more smooth

[Hard]
00:05:853 (1) - imo,put a note here and start the slider at 00:05:937
00:09:055 (4) - just like an old form slider..
00:11:415 (3,4,5,1,2) - patterns like this fit ar9 best but it's an ar8 hard.consider make them more clear to read.

just suggestion dont use that

00:41:752 (2,5) - touched.not beautiful
00:54:392 (2) - stack
01:04:673 (8) -

how do you made it

[Normal]
00:33:493 (2,3) - not a perfect blanket

[Easy]
nothing to pick

Good luck!

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-20T07:51:10+00:00

615915887 wrote:
Hi,from my queue
Sorry for the delay no worries~!

[Hard]
00:05:853 (1) - imo,put a note here and start the slider at 00:05:937 added
00:09:055 (4) - just like an old form slider.. unbended a bit
00:11:415 (3,4,5,1,2) - patterns like this fit ar9 best but it's an ar8 hard.consider make them more clear to read.changed
just suggestion dont use that
00:41:752 (2,5) - touched.not beautiful fixed
00:54:392 (2) - stack stackin
01:04:673 (8) - how do you made it wot. what does this mean?

[Normal]
00:33:493 (2,3) - not a perfect blanket fixd

[Easy]
nothing to pick

Good luck!

Thank you for the mod ^_^

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-20T09:58:02+00:00

615915887 wrote:
[Insane]
00:04:168 (4) - the vocal is on the tail.I think make the vocal at the beginning of the slider is better fixed.
00:09:898 (1,2) - combine to one long slider sounds better.but it's up to you probably not. I'm trying to match the guitars in the music with these two sliders.
00:12:257 at least a note here sure.
00:16:471 (1) - also the downbeat fixed
00:38:044 (7,1) - i'm expecting a jump here spaced out the two notes better
00:43:437 (4) - nc this instead of 00:43:943 (1) sure
00:50:684 (2,3) - ctrl+g to be more smooth This would break the flow I have for 00:50:684 (2,3,1), and the jump from 00:50:179 (1,2) is needed to place better emphasis on the drums at that point in time.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod~

~

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256,192,85403,12,0,88100,0:0:0:0:

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-04-21T21:35:34+00:00

Hey~ From modding queue.

Normal

1- 00:05:853 (1) - Start this on the red tick
2- 00:09:392 (2) - This could easily be a blanket. Do that, move 00:09:729 (3) just a bit up and adjust the objects a bit. Then you can also try a blanket with 00:11:583 (1).
3- 00:13:943 (1,2) - I was going to say "Adjust the slider", but that'd ruin a blanket so move 00:14:785 (2,3) up. It's okay, it's actually better to do it because if you do 00:15:122 (3) will go into 00:15:965 (4) way better. If you have to do further adjustments to 3, change its slider direction.
4- 00:18:156 (4,5,1,2) - I'd say kind of a big jump for a normal.
5- 00:22:707 (2,3) - Pretty much asking for a blanket.
6- 00:43:268 (6) - Place a circle here (starting the new combo). It just feels kind of empty without it.
7- 00:46:976 (2) - Adjust slider direction
8- 00:51:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adjust curve on 00:51:695 (1) and improve blanket on 00:52:875 (3). Oh, and also rotate 00:52:875 (3) before blanketing 4 better, and make sure it flows well with 00:52:538 (2). Then if you need to move 00:54:392 (5) a bit around, and change the curve direction to make it go into 00:55:235 (6). Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534978, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534981
9- 01:02:482 (1) - This curve with 01:03:325 (2)... meh. Remake it if possible.
10- 01:06:021 (2,3,4,1) - Try to redo this part somehow. Feels kind of heavy, just things mashed up there and could be better.
11- 01:22:033 (1,2,3) - Don't like this overlap. Remap this last part, please

Hard

1- Try to place 00:09:561 (1) a bit more between 00:09:055 (4,2)
2- 00:24:055 (3,4,5,6,7) - At first might seem good, and it is. But 00:24:561 (4) is way too down there. Put it between 00:24:055 (3) and 00:24:729 (5), like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534995
3- 00:25:235 (7) - try to adjust this curve a bit better into 00:25:909 (8)
4- 00:26:583 (3) - invert the concavity on this and it'll flow better
5- 00:41:246 (4) - curve this
6- 00:48:830 (1) - place this a bit below, and rotate it counter-clockwise until it goes directly into 00:49:167 (2)
7- I realized after modding this that you should probably turn on epilepsy warning. People who play with video and low background dim (most oftenly new players, but still) might have an issue playing this because from what I saw the video is a bit "flashy" and fast.

Good luck with your map~

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-22T01:04:43+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hey~ From modding queue.

Normal
1- 00:05:853 (1) - Start this on the red tick im starting it there so that it matches up with the intro of giralda's insane and hard. it wont make a difference anyways
2- 00:09:392 (2) - This could easily be a blanket. Do that, move 00:09:729 (3) just a bit up and adjust the objects a bit. Then you can also try a blanket with 00:11:583 (1). done
3- 00:13:943 (1,2) - I was going to say "Adjust the slider", but that'd ruin a blanket so move 00:14:785 (2,3) up. It's okay, it's actually better to do it because if you do 00:15:122 (3) will go into 00:15:965 (4) way better. If you have to do further adjustments to 3, change its slider direction. done
4- 00:18:156 (4,5,1,2) - I'd say kind of a big jump for a normal. lowered
5- 00:22:707 (2,3) - Pretty much asking for a blanket. blanketed feels off gameplay wise with the slow direction change
6- 00:43:268 (6) - Place a circle here (starting the new combo). It just feels kind of empty without it. i like it as is for consistency with 00:40:740 (1) and a pause to show a separation of sections
7- 00:46:976 (2) - Adjust slider direction why? i like it as is
8- 00:51:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adjust curve on 00:51:695 (1) and improve blanket on 00:52:875 (3). Oh, and also rotate 00:52:875 (3) before blanketing 4 better, and make sure it flows well with 00:52:538 (2). Then if you need to move 00:54:392 (5) a bit around, and change the curve direction to make it go into 00:55:235 (6). Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534978, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534981 done
9- 01:02:482 (1) - This curve with 01:03:325 (2)... meh. Remake it if possible. i like as is following the change in tone for the vocal
10- 01:06:021 (2,3,4,1) - Try to redo this part somehow. Feels kind of heavy, just things mashed up there and could be better.moved 1 a bit. it otherwise feels fine
11- 01:22:033 (1,2,3) - Don't like this overlap. Remap this last part, please its intentional

Hard
1- Try to place 00:09:561 (1) a bit more between 00:09:055 (4,2) uh,... okay.. moved it so its closer by 1 or 2 pixels l0l thats all there is
2- 00:24:055 (3,4,5,6,7) - At first might seem good, and it is. But 00:24:561 (4) is way too down there. Put it between 00:24:055 (3) and 00:24:729 (5), like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1534995 originally intended to be a jump but oh well. this feels better. thanks~
3- 00:25:235 (7) - try to adjust this curve a bit better into 00:25:909 (8) done
4- 00:26:583 (3) - invert the concavity on this and it'll flow better ok
5- 00:41:246 (4) - curve this i like it better as is
6- 00:48:830 (1) - place this a bit below, and rotate it counter-clockwise until it goes directly into 00:49:167 (2) changed it up a bit
7- I realized after modding this that you should probably turn on epilepsy warning. People who play with video and low background dim (most oftenly new players, but still) might have an issue playing this because from what I saw the video is a bit "flashy" and fast. compared to other ranked maps with super flashy videos ive played, this is nothing lol. it should be fine

Good luck with your map~

Thank you for the mod~

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-04-22T02:01:40+00:00

from my bg modding queue:

your bg had a weird aspect ratio, wider than 4:3 but not as wide as 16:9. I found a 1080p version of your bg, via some googling, and downscaled it to the max allowed osu bg resolution (1366x768). I saved it losslessly as a png then again losslessly compressed it w/ a command line tool. Here is the end result:

new bg

and I've made it a habit to include at least one other option, so here is a more softened version of the bg:

alternate version

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-22T02:45:18+00:00

Ringating wrote:
from my bg modding queue:

your bg had a weird aspect ratio, wider than 4:3 but not as wide as 16:9. I found a 1080p version of your bg, via some googling, and downscaled it to the max allowed osu bg resolution (1366x768). I saved it losslessly as a png then again losslessly compressed it w/ a command line tool. Here is the end result:
new bg

and I've made it a habit to include at least one other option, so here is a more softened version of the bg:
alternate version

Thank you ^_^ hmm video seems a bit zoomed. im not sure if that was like that before or after changing the bg o-o oh well~!

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-04-22T06:56:19+00:00

~~modding~~~
hi kihhou M4M from my queue
[General]

none

[Insane]

testplay

00:01:471 (3,1) - recommend not to stack here, stack spacing 0X but you sudden put a jump 3X, that makes your map inconsistent, so move 00:01:471 (3) - to (140,332) ?
you always put whistle on slider tail, i recommend to put whistle on objects that hard to hear the hitsounds EX: 00:01:471 (3) - 00:02:819 (4) - 00:03:493 (2) - 00:04:168 (4) - 00:05:179 (3) - it is up to u
00:09:055 (3) - u have added soft whistle on head then, why add clap at 00:10:403 (3) - head? and 00:12:426 (1) - no hitsound...I can not catch your mind indeed... (I recommend 00:09:055 (3) - remove whistle 00:10:403 (3) - remove clap ,00:10:066 (2) - clap on tail 00:12:426 (1) - finish on head
00:08:549 (1) - finish
01:00:628 (3) - finish
00:58:268 (1) - finish on head
01:17:145 (5) - why use NC1 finish? NC2 sounds good
01:18:662 (1) - ^
01:19:842 (1) - ^
01:21:358 (1) - ^
01:22:370 (5) - move finish to tail and NC2
01:22:707 (1) - ^
01:22:707 (1,2) - these spacing only 1X but 01:23:381 (4,1) - put a jump 2.55X then sv changed, it is really inconsistent imo
try to 01:23:044 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+H then move them to (452,272)
00:35:263 (4) - no need to add finish, remove plz
01:17:482 (6) - remove finish on head

[Hard]

testplay

combo color is different from Insane...recommend to be unified
00:00:965 (2,3,4,5) - i really can't understand this flow, 00:01:302 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing (it's not a big problem imo, i just want to point it out
00:08:044 (1,2,3) - move to (256,76)
00:09:729 (2) - remake this slider, bad shape isn't it?
00:11:077 (2) - move to 00:11:246 -
00:13:774 (8) - move to 00:13:943 -
00:16:471 (5) - move to 00:16:639 -
00:30:459 (7,1) - wrong spacing (00:30:459 (7,1,2) - it is kinda confusing 0.5X and 1X
01:13:437 - unreasonable breaktime in hard diff

[Normal]

00:09:392 (2) - remove slider and fix its spacing
00:10:572 (4) - end at 00:11:077 -

[Easy]

none

That's all, Good luck~

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-23T07:19:35+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
~~modding~~~
hi kihhou M4M from my queue

[Hard]
testplay
combo color is different from Insane...recommend to be unified maybe.. its not very important though
00:00:965 (2,3,4,5) - i really can't understand this flow, 00:01:302 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing (it's not a big problem imo, i just want to point it out feels fine gameplay wise imo
00:08:044 (1,2,3) - move to (256,76)no thanks i like the rhythm right now better
00:09:729 (2) - remake this slider, bad shape isn't it? yes!~
00:11:077 (2) - move to 00:11:246 - ^
00:13:774 (8) - move to 00:13:943 - ^
00:16:471 (5) - move to 00:16:639 - ^
00:30:459 (7,1) - wrong spacing (00:30:459 (7,1,2) - it is kinda confusing 0.5X and 1Xfixed!
01:13:437 - unreasonable breaktime in hard diffmmm ill fill it in 2mro!
[Normal]
00:09:392 (2) - remove slider and fix its spacing changed rhythm
00:10:572 (4) - end at 00:11:077 - oops~ missed that
[Easy]
none
That's all, Good luck~

Thank you for the mod c:

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-23T17:07:10+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[Insane]
testplay
00:01:471 (3,1) - recommend not to stack here, stack spacing 0X but you sudden put a jump 3X, that makes your map inconsistent, so move 00:01:471 (3) - to (140,332) ? sure
you always put whistle on slider tail, i recommend to put whistle on objects that hard to hear the hitsounds EX: 00:01:471 (3) - 00:02:819 (4) - 00:03:493 (2) - 00:04:168 (4) - 00:05:179 (3) - it is up to u I think what I have right now allows the whistles to match vocals better.
00:09:055 (3) - u have added soft whistle on head then, why add clap at 00:10:403 (3) - head? and 00:12:426 (1) - no hitsound...I can not catch your mind indeed... (I recommend 00:09:055 (3) - remove whistle 00:10:403 (3) - remove clap ,00:10:066 (2) - clap on tail 00:12:426 (1) - finish on head done
00:08:549 (1) - finish
01:00:628 (3) - finish
00:58:268 (1) - finish on head
01:17:145 (5) - why use NC1 finish? NC2 sounds good
01:18:662 (1) - ^
01:19:842 (1) - ^
01:21:358 (1) - ^
01:22:370 (5) - move finish to tail and NC2
01:22:707 (1) - ^
01:22:707 (1,2) - these spacing only 1X but 01:23:381 (4,1) - put a jump 2.55X then sv changed, it is really inconsistent imo
try to 01:23:044 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+H then move them to (452,272)
00:35:263 (4) - no need to add finish, remove plz
01:17:482 (6) - remove finish on head

Took everything else. Thanks for modding!

Code

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Tags:kill la kill giralda opening Katou Yuu Trigger meg rock toku Matoi Ryuko Senketsu
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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-04-24T02:51:54+00:00

Easy:

-- OD 2?

00:43:774 (1) - The current rhythm souns little awkward imo. Mind removing the reverse and increase 1/2?
00:56:246 (4) - Mind adding NC to emphasize the whistle sound better?
01:07:707 (5,2) - This overlap in an Easy feels too hard.

Normal:

00:54:392 (5) - NC for new stanza?
01:22:033 (1,3) - Imo this overlap is better being avoided.

Hard:

-- Imo, this diff was quite messy because of lots of random distances.

00:16:808 (1,2,3) - Hope you can make more distance with the previous object.
00:50:516 (1,2,3,4) - This looks messy. Try (216,208) for a manual stack.
01:09:055 (2) - I think sticking to the distance would be better here.

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-24T03:33:54+00:00

GIRRAAAAA~!

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Kihhou

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-24T03:43:08+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Easy:

-- OD 2? ok!

00:43:774 (1) - The current rhythm souns little awkward imo. Mind removing the reverse and increase 1/2? done~
00:56:246 (4) - Mind adding NC to emphasize the whistle sound better?yes~
01:07:707 (5,2) - This overlap in an Easy feels too hard. mmm maybe. ill hold it out for a bit first

Normal:

00:54:392 (5) - NC for new stanza? ooo missed that!
01:22:033 (1,3) - Imo this overlap is better being avoided. fixed~

Hard:

-- Imo, this diff was quite messy because of lots of random distances.

00:16:808 (1,2,3) - Hope you can make more distance with the previous object. done
00:50:516 (1,2,3,4) - This looks messy. Try (216,208) for a manual stack. ok!
01:09:055 (2) - I think sticking to the distance would be better here.nah i had it like that before. it didnt feel right gameplay wise

thank you for the mod c:

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-04-25T03:38:51+00:00

Project mod live!
http://www.twitch.tv/osucommunity/b/522801838
http://www.twitch.tv/osucommunity/b/522819894 (part 2)

Complimentary addon mod for things that would have been too boring to talk about on-stream.
[Insane]
01:06:358 (6) - NC should be here
01:14:448 (7) - Nc should go here.

[Hard]
00:09:729 (2) - NC should be here instead
00:17:819 (6) - ^
00:27:257 (3) - ^
00:37:707 (1) - remove nc
00:42:089 (7) - nc should be here
00:56:246 (1) - remove nc
00:56:920 (3) - nc
00:57:763 (1) - remove
00:58:268 (3) - NC
00:58:943 (1) - remove
00:59:785 (4) - nc
01:03:662 (5) - nc
01:07:707 (1) - remove nc
01:07:875 (2) - nc
01:17:145 (6) - nc
01:22:033 (1) - remove nc

edit>> ~~bubbled!~~rebubbled because of silly accidental update.

Kihhou

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Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-25T06:10:37+00:00

Nyquill wrote:
edit>> ~~bubbled!~~rebubbled because of silly accidental update.

<3

Giralda

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Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-04-25T06:26:19+00:00

THE REALEST AMOUNT OF JEALOUSY IS HAPPENING

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-04-25T20:52:33+00:00

oh this got bubbled. grats!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-04-25T21:01:04+00:00

This BG is so awesome.

Quick metadata check:
Title: ambiguous (TV Size) -> ambiguous (TV Size ver.)
Source http://vgmdb.net/album/43324

If you added toku and meg rock into tags, you may add as well MARiA, who is the vocalist

Also a small thing I'd want to suggest in Hard, maybe remove the NC in 00:05:853 (1) and 01:25:235 (1)? This goes for Normal and Easy too.

Poke Nyquill to repair the bubble after you do this.

Pretty nice for a first mapset, good luck for rank o/

Kihhou

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Kihhou 2014-04-26T05:12:24+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
This BG is so awesome.

Quick metadata check:
Title: ambiguous (TV Size) -> ambiguous (TV Size ver.)
Source http://vgmdb.net/album/43324

If you added toku and meg rock into tags, you may add as well MARiA, who is the vocalist

Also a small thing I'd want to suggest in Hard, maybe remove the NC in 00:05:853 (1) and 01:25:235 (1)? This goes for Normal and Easy too.

Poke Nyquill to repair the bubble after you do this.

Pretty nice for a first mapset, good luck for rank o/

sorry >.< i do greatly appreciate the metadata check but adding "ver." and "MARiA" feels too trivial and unnecessary to bother scary nyquill ~ the title would also be parallel the current ranked mapset, which i find more satisfying ~
As for the NC, id rather keep it to indicate a new measure & long spacing for the ending so people dont mistaken it for a jump or something~. nyquill also checked over all NCs and i trust his decision to leave them as is. sorry for the trouble~ ><

EDIT: ill change the metadata if its necessary ~

done~ sorry for doubting !

Last edited by Kihhou 2014-05-07T04:49:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-04-26T15:23:49+00:00

Was fun to watch. Nice map :3 Good luck with Rank!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2014-05-07T03:37:46+00:00

[General]
please change the title to what Dake said in p/3033223 and add the tags if you would like
the video is also way too large for its quality, i got you a better quality one thats smaller in file size: http://puu.sh/8CmgA.avi

[Easy]
00:19:336 - this volume section is too quiet imo, use 40 or 45% instead. applies to all diffs
01:07:707 (5) - start this slider at 01:07:875 instead, thats the more dominant beat compared to 01:07:707
01:08:886 (1,2) - watch for the overlap and spacing

[Normal]
00:33:493 (2,3) - hmm try to fix the spacing here
01:10:572 (3) - NC should be here instead of 01:09:898 (1)

[Hard]
00:05:010 (5,1) - is this overlap intentional? would look better if you didnt overlap them
00:32:651 (1) - this slider...should use a 3-point one for better blanket
01:12:763 (6) - try shortening this to 01:13:100 and add a note at 01:13:268, fits the music better imo

[Giraffalda]
00:19:161 - snap this green line to 00:19:167
00:38:044 (7) - i think if you stack this under where 00:36:358 (5) was it would flow better
01:23:971 (1) - dont think this NC is really needed, if you want it then it should be on 01:24:055 (2) to follow the music better

thats all, let me know after you changed the title and we can get this rolling!

Giralda

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Joined August 2012

Giralda 2014-05-07T04:04:11+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Giraffalda]
wowowowowowowowow
00:19:161 - snap this green line to 00:19:167
00:38:044 (7) - i think if you stack this under where 00:36:358 (5) was it would flow better
01:23:971 (1) - dont think this NC is really needed, if you want it then it should be on 01:24:055 (2) to follow the music better

Did everything ~

Thanks Jonny!

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239,158,79504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,216,81358,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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captin1

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captin1 2014-05-07T04:07:15+00:00

GIRRRRRRRRRAFFALDAAAAAA

pre emptive congrats!

Kihhou

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Kihhou 2014-05-07T05:31:36+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
please change the title to what Dake said in p/3033223 and add the tags if you would like
the video is also way too large for its quality, i got you a better quality one thats smaller in file size: http://puu.sh/8CmgA.avi

[Easy]
00:19:336 - this volume section is too quiet imo, use 40 or 45% instead. applies to all diffs
01:07:707 (5) - start this slider at 01:07:875 instead, thats the more dominant beat compared to 01:07:707
01:08:886 (1,2) - watch for the overlap and spacing

[Normal]
00:33:493 (2,3) - hmm try to fix the spacing here
01:10:572 (3) - NC should be here instead of 01:09:898 (1)

[Hard]
00:05:010 (5,1) - is this overlap intentional? would look better if you didnt overlap them
00:32:651 (1) - this slider...should use a 3-point one for better blanket
01:12:763 (6) - try shortening this to 01:13:100 and add a note at 01:13:268, fits the music better imo

thats all, let me know after you changed the title and we can get this rolling!

fixed all~! thank you! ^_^

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-05-07T05:47:05+00:00

looks good now

Ranked~

Giralda

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Giralda 2014-05-07T06:03:00+00:00

Congrats ~

Trust

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Trust 2014-05-07T06:10:15+00:00

yeaaaaaah grats Kihhou and Girafflda!

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