Revo - Land of Light and Shadow

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Shizuka-Nee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 20, 2014 at 5:29:16 PM

Artist: Revo
Title: Land of Light and Shadow
Source: Bravely Default: Flying Fairy
Tags: game Bravely Default Flying Fairy Revo
BPM: 114
Filesize: 1232kb
Play Time: 00:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.46 stars, 46 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 187 notes)
  3. Normal (4.05 stars, 110 notes)


Download: Revo - Land of Light and Shadow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmap here. I'm planning to do more Bravely Default maps since I love the game. :D
Easy: WIP
Normal:Needs Mods
Hard: Needs Mods
Insane:( I want a guest for this one so please tell me if you're interested.)
(sorry about slow progress. I'm getting lazy.)
Your Good Self
[Whole Mapset]
01:12:120 - You really really really should map this

Tags
You can remove pretty much all the tags from all difficulties, they are automatically included and "game" is pretty general.

Slider Shapes
Your slider waves don't look very nice, the simple method is to keep rotational symmetry in the nodes.
I recommend reading this recent slider shape guide: t/208596

Hitsounds
Way too many finishes at some parts, which make the map very noisy. You should remove unneeded ones.

Placing a finish (or any hitsound addition for that matter) on a slider will make it play on the start AND end of the slider, and every repeat in between. Most of the cases here only require a finish on the start of the slider and not the end. This makes it sound a bit unpleasant and jarring if finishes are everywhere.

Hitsound Volume
A hitsound volume of 100% is a bit loud, and overrides the music. Try something lower.

2647.28947368421,526.315789473684,4,1,0,50,1,0
19489,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
36331,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
46857,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
48963,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
72120,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0

[Normal]
00:40:805 (2) - Ctrl+H this
00:42:647 (1,2,3) - Overlap looks a bit ugly
00:49:752 (3,5,6) - ^
00:53:173 (2,3) - The gap between them could be a bit more uniform
01:00:542 (4) - A bit awkwardly shaped, and doesn't flow well with (3)
01:05:805 (4) - Put the kink on the red tick

Before


After


[Hard]
00:17:121 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too many finishes, just add on 00:17:384 (3,3,3,3) if you want to.
00:26:857 (6,7,1) - Try something like this:

Before


After

00:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - The flow and jumps are't very good, try this:
Each slider is identical other than being rotated 45 degrees clockwise relative to the previous one.

00:48:963 to end - A bit too many claps around, same issue as with the finishes before. Try using the soft whistle sound instead, it fits better.
Example: 00:59:489 (1,2,3) - Remove all the claps, place whistles on the slider heads only

[Overall Impression]
Needs a bit of polishing on the hitsounds and slider shapes, after which you should have a pretty neat map.
Good luck! :)
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