Printemps - Love marginal [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Jikson[m9]

Joined March 2012

Jikson[m9] 2014-06-01T18:52:54+00:00

TKS wrote:
[ Jik's Oni]
00:20:102 (61) - del. i didnt feel triplet sound there. also, 1/4 + slider is unnecessary pattern.done
00:31:380 (40) - del? it would work for the vocal. done
00:33:185 (50) - ^ done
00:43:448 - add notes here in the same way as 00:39:839 (82) - (← or del?) done
00:54:500 (160) - the flow has changed. so this notes should be finisher? done
01:32:057 (376) - del. sounds/plays weird to me. changed to K and K dd respectively
01:33:861 (386) - ^. instead, 01:33:974 - add a d? as shown
03:31:606 (1) - maybe endpoint of spinner is 03:32:169 - ? short spinner is meaningless imo. done
04:25:177 (290,291,292,293) - 1/6 is a bit over. maybe, change to kkk(1/4)
04:24:500 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292) - changed to dddkkdkdk K to fit the main

overall fine!
i have omitted the same suggestion. so please recheck them by yourself.

Thanks TKS!

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Title:Love marginal
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Artist:Printemps
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Version:Jik's Oni
Source:Love Live! School idol project
Tags:ITer happy623 Kawaiwkyik Jikson[m9] Nardoxyribonucleic ラブライブ！ LL Kousaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Minami Kotori 南ことり Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Emi Nitta 新田恵海 Aya Uchida 内田彩 Yurika Kubo 久保ユリカ u's μ's muse
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512,168,230891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,192,231117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,231230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,236982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,144,239688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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496,176,239914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,156,240591,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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424,196,241606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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496,176,245666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,245779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,164,246004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,184,246455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,246568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,164,246681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,184,246794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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496,176,247132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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496,176,247357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,247433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,176,247508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,184,248711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,184,250741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,164,251192,2,0,L|360:168,1,140
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512,252,255252,2,0,L|376:216,1,140
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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-06-01T19:05:16+00:00

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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-06-01T19:11:23+00:00

TKS wrote:
[ Nardo's Muzukashii]
OD+1? Oni has OD6. so you can change the OD for the spread but its up to you. Okay.

00:41:079 (62) - del. this pattern is a bit hard for the Muzukashii.(except the KIAI TIME) Umm... OK
00:53:936 (104) - del. overmapped. you should follow the vocal sound purely. fixed all three parts.
01:05:327 (144) - change to d. if you want to use "ddk" "kkd" or something, you must make a break in front and behind that pattern. i will omit such a suggestion. I further reduced the number of ddk/kkd used throughout the difficulty.
overall fine!
i have omitted the same suggestion. so please recheck them by yourself.

Thanks for the mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/9aLUn

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-06-02T02:37:49+00:00

Updated, thank you guys

happy623

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happy623 2014-06-02T02:54:15+00:00

♪友達なのにあなたが好きだと

KanaRin

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KanaRin 2014-06-02T11:36:16+00:00

Let's go!

Oni

00:49:425 (131) - How about kk here? That means you may try add a kat on 00:49:538 - .
01:22:245 (315) - kat sounds better.
01:40:064 - 這段空掉有點突兀, 我覺得必須要加Notes.
例如;
01:43:222 (426) - Finish
01:46:831 (442) - Delete 休止符下note 會很奇怪
03:30:139 (444) - 這段開始有點奇怪,
第一, 03:31:606 (1) - 這裡有三擊明顯的finishers, 不建議以spin處理.
第二, 03:33:297 - 這堆 d d d dd 的support太少, 純 don 不是好的處理好法, 分其二, 你可以在這裡跟鼓點下notes 或以vocal為主要的support.
03:40:290 (21,22) - 建議下 ddd (1/4) 比較好聽.

Map的完成度不算很高, 主要問題是節奏的下法(特別是沒有主vocal, 純樂器的時候)
Kiai還算可以. 另外, 末段結他以spin處理不太妥當. 觀乎全圖, 仍要改善比較奇怪的節奏, 可以問問不同的mapper和modder,
歸納出有問題的位置, 大約多找點modder看看

Muzukashii 不錯

大致如此.

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-06-02T16:53:16+00:00

KanaRin wrote:
Let's go!

Oni

00:49:425 (131) - How about kk here? That means you may try add a kat on 00:49:538 - . done
01:22:245 (315) - kat sounds better. done
01:40:064 - 這段空掉有點突兀, 我覺得必須要加Notes. done
例如;
01:43:222 (426) - Finish done
01:46:831 (442) - Delete 休止符下note 會很奇怪 done
03:30:139 (444) - 這段開始有點奇怪,
第一, 03:31:606 (1) - 這裡有三擊明顯的finishers, 不建議以spin處理. 這裏開始歌詞重視真的不可以？想儘量保留
第二, 03:33:297 - 這堆 d d d dd 的support太少, 純 don 不是好的處理好法, 分其二, 你可以在這裡跟鼓點下notes 或以vocal為主要的support. done
03:40:290 (21,22) - 建議下 ddd (1/4) 比較好聽.
done

Map的完成度不算很高, 主要問題是節奏的下法(特別是沒有主vocal, 純樂器的時候)
Kiai還算可以. 另外, 末段結他以spin處理不太妥當. 觀乎全圖, 仍要改善比較奇怪的節奏, 可以問問不同的mapper和modder,
歸納出有問題的位置, 大約多找點modder看看

Muzukashii 不錯

大致如此.

http://puu.sh/9c1vb/b556a612e2.osu

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-06-02T17:23:31+00:00

Updated. :>

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-06-07T14:30:03+00:00

Hey, as you request at pm so here we go:

[Jik's Oni]

00:02:057 - => 00:02:170 - add 1/12 notes at here? well the sound is really clear so I'm not suggest you to ignore it even it's beginning.
00:09:388 (24) - , 00:10:290 (28) - , 00:11:192 (31) - , 00:12:997 (36) - and 00:14:801 (46) - consider put big note? The music self-explain, cymbal sound. Make sure to delete 1/4 as 1/2 if you put big note at 1/4 pattern.
00:31:493 (40) - You should put k here because the clap sound and the metronome (d k d k law at white line.) even you follow the vocal imo...
00:33:297 (50) - ^
00:35:327 - => 00:35:779 - You can hear the drum sound at here so I'm suggest you to put 5 1/4 notes at here.
00:36:906 - I hear a sound at here but I can't explain what the sound is...but I wish you can add it.
00:45:929 (112) - Same as above that k metronome.
00:47:733 (122) - ^
01:03:297 (209,210,211) - Put a variant kdk pattern here to make little different to previous part?
01:41:418 - => 01:44:237 - umm...it's kinda sad because the drum sound is very good to give you to put the pattern but you didn't put anything...try to fit drum sound.
02:56:530 (332) - Actually the sound pitch at here is higher than 02:56:756 (333) - so try k here?

Overall: Well...You can try some variant pattern but not blindly fit vocal...as you can see, some place is really feel "empty" or even "boring because just rigid with vocal and didn't really creative." But it's fine for me so sorry if I say something too over.

Muzukashii is fine for me.
Good Luck!

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-06-08T12:53:05+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
Hey, as you request at pm so here we go:

[Jik's Oni]

00:02:057 - => 00:02:170 - add 1/12 notes at here? well the sound is really clear so I'm not suggest you to ignore it even it's beginning. I found it becaomes difficult to hit so...
00:09:388 (24) - , 00:10:290 (28) - , 00:11:192 (31) - , 00:12:997 (36) - and 00:14:801 (46) - consider put big note? The music self-explain, cymbal sound. Make sure to delete 1/4 as 1/2 if you put big note at 1/4 pattern. done
00:31:493 (40) - You should put k here because the clap sound and the metronome (d k d k law at white line.) even you follow the vocal imo... all similar parts done
00:33:297 (50) - ^
00:35:327 - => 00:35:779 - You can hear the drum sound at here so I'm suggest you to put 5 1/4 notes at here. done
00:36:906 - I hear a sound at here but I can't explain what the sound is...but I wish you can add it. threw away the vocal now
00:45:929 (112) - Same as above that k metronome.
00:47:733 (122) - ^
01:03:297 (209,210,211) - Put a variant kdk pattern here to make little different to previous part? I choose to follow the pitch
01:41:418 - => 01:44:237 - umm...it's kinda sad because the drum sound is very good to give you to put the pattern but you didn't put anything...try to fit drum sound. done
02:56:530 (332) - Actually the sound pitch at here is higher than 02:56:756 (333) - so try k here? didnt really get it

Overall: Well...You can try some variant pattern but not blindly fit vocal...as you can see, some place is really feel "empty" or even "boring because just rigid with vocal and didn't really creative." But it's fine for me so sorry if I say something too over.

Muzukashii is fine for me.
Good Luck!

thx for modding, done some changes to improve connections too.

http://puu.sh/9kdEb/bfc0612159.osu

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-06-09T17:46:01+00:00

happy623 wrote:
♪友達なのにあなたが好きだと

Updated

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2014-06-14T01:26:11+00:00

Hi~

[

Oni]

General

第一段kiai結束後面的solo部分(01:28:786 - ~ 01:39:613 - )個人覺得note下的不是很好,建議仔細聽樂器的重音在下note會比較能詮釋出這一段的感覺,其他地方也是要注意一下 ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712119(01:28:786 - ~ 01:32:395 - )
ex2:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712122(01:32:395 - ~ 01:36:004 - )

SPOILER

00:38:485 (81) - 移到00:38:034 - ?這裡突然停頓感覺怪怪的
02:06:906 (41) - ^
01:01:493 (206,207,208) - 試著跟一下vocal的音調,因為前面01:00:591 (200,201,202,203,204,205) - 主要是跟vocal,後面如果不跟vocal感覺有點違和
01:03:297 (217,218,219) - ^
01:05:102 (228,229,230) - ^
01:15:929 (287,288,289) - ^
01:17:733 (299,300,301) - ^
01:19:538 (311,312,313) - ^(後面的kiai也一樣)
01:08:260 - 這裡加個note然後把01:09:049 (246) - 移到01:08:824 - 最後把01:08:034 (242) - 的finish刪掉,我覺得這樣前後兩段比較有連貫性
01:48:185 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - 這裡感覺放太多note了,跟音樂有點不太合,建議做一些刪減
02:17:057 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - 跟第一段kiai有點類似,把02:17:169 (101) - 刪掉,然後02:17:057 (100) - 加個finish最後把02:17:621 (104) - 移到02:17:395 -
02:31:042 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^
02:53:260 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - 注意一下吉他的重音,尤其是02:54:162 (328,329,330,331) -
03:01:380 (367) - 移到03:01:267 - 這裡的鼓聲還蠻明顯的
03:01:831 (369) - 移到03:01:718 - 原因同上
03:47:057 - 這裡加個note
04:07:583 (201,208,211,217) - 這裡建議改成d,全都k打起來有點無聊
04:10:403 (222) - 移到04:09:951 - 然後改成k,仔細聽一下吉他solo,他是停在04:10:403 -
04:12:320 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - 這裡建議改成這樣?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712198比較能加強後面兩個二連的重音

大致就這些,整體來講還可以,不過還有很大的改善空間

GL~

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-06-14T19:37:06+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
Hi~

[ Oni]

General
第一段kiai結束後面的solo部分(01:28:786 - ~ 01:39:613 - )個人覺得note下的不是很好,建議仔細聽樂器的重音在下note會比較能詮釋出這一段的感覺,其他地方也是要注意一下 ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712119(01:28:786 - ~ 01:32:395 - )
ex2:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712122(01:32:395 - ~ 01:36:004 - ) 已依方向修正

SPOILER
00:38:485 (81) - 移到00:38:034 - ?這裡突然停頓感覺怪怪的就是一句歌詞的停頓？
02:06:906 (41) - ^ ^
01:01:493 (206,207,208) - 試著跟一下vocal的音調,因為前面01:00:591 (200,201,202,203,204,205) - 主要是跟vocal,後面如果不跟vocal感覺有點違和
01:03:297 (217,218,219) - ^
01:05:102 (228,229,230) - ^
01:15:929 (287,288,289) - ^
01:17:733 (299,300,301) - ^
01:19:538 (311,312,313) - ^(後面的kiai也一樣) all done
01:08:260 - 這裡加個note然後把01:09:049 (246) - 移到01:08:824 - 最後把01:08:034 (242) - 的finish刪掉,我覺得這樣前後兩段比較有連貫性我覺得現在的較好...
01:48:185 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - 這裡感覺放太多note了,跟音樂有點不太合,建議做一些刪減 done
02:17:057 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - 跟第一段kiai有點類似,把02:17:169 (101) - 刪掉,然後02:17:057 (100) - 加個finish最後把02:17:621 (104) - 移到02:17:395 - ^
02:31:042 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ ^
02:53:260 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - 注意一下吉他的重音,尤其是02:54:162 (328,329,330,331) - done
03:01:380 (367) - 移到03:01:267 - 這裡的鼓聲還蠻明顯的 done
03:01:831 (369) - 移到03:01:718 - 原因同上 ^
03:47:057 - 這裡加個note done
04:07:583 (201,208,211,217) - 這裡建議改成d,全都k打起來有點無聊 done
04:10:403 (222) - 移到04:09:951 - 然後改成k,仔細聽一下吉他solo,他是停在04:10:403 - done
04:12:320 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - 這裡建議改成這樣?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712198比較能加強後面兩個二連的重音 done

大致就這些,整體來講還可以,不過還有很大的改善空間

GL~

I like this mod. 獲益良多，謝mod

http://puu.sh/9tuFR/c0e424051f.osu

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-06-15T06:57:40+00:00

Update了!

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Evening 2014-06-19T05:10:52+00:00

Mod by Req

[Jik's Oni]

00:06:455 (14,15,16) - kdk > kkd | 14 and 15 are of the same pitch while 16 is lower in pitch than 15, I think this pattern suits it better
00:12:997 (32) - d > D | Did you miss a finish here? Since 00:14:801 (42) - is the same sound effect and it has a finish
00:38:260 (80) - d > D | Maybe a finisher here?
00:43:673 (106) - d > k | A kat here to follow the vocal here?
00:46:154 (119,120) - Swap | Follows vocal more
00:46:606 (122) - d > k | To keep consistency with 00:48:410 (132,133) -
01:22:470 (331) - d > k | To follow vocals similar to 01:21:794 (327,329) -
01:36:794 - Add a d here to follow guitar? Similar to 01:36:230 (411,412,413) -
02:07:132 (42,45,47) - dkd > kdk | The kat rhythm here sounds really off compared to the others, I suggest this pattern
02:44:576 (268) - d > k | 02:44:124 (266,267,268) - All of them are of the same pitch I suggest to make this a kat also
03:07:019 (402) - d > k | This kat rhythm sounds nicer imo
04:24:613 (309,312) - Swap |^
04:01:267 (161,162,163) - ddk > kkd | This fits the vocals better imo

[Nardo's Muzu]
01:36:004 (249) - d > k AND add a d on 01:36:230 - | This is to follow the guitar
02:18:185 (392,393,394) - Not sure about this kkd here, you haven't used a triplet with mixed colours previously
02:19:989 (399,400,401,402) - You might also want to keep the triplet constant with ^ since this triplet is 1/2 late
03:58:335 (96,97,98) - Not sure if this ddk is intended, I've only seen 2 of mixed color triplets here

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz

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IamKwaN 2014-06-19T07:03:01+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Mod by Req Thanks for mod!

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz
Please post this into the technical support forum ww

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-06-19T11:42:45+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Mod by Req

[Nardo's Muzu]
01:36:004 (249) - d > k AND add a d on 01:36:230 - | This is to follow the guitar In terms of guitar pitch, 01:36:455 (250,252) - is higher than 01:36:004 (249) - , so keeping 249 as d would be better. Concerning 01:36:230 - , leaving it blank is better imo.
02:18:185 (392,393,394) - Not sure about this kkd here, you haven't used a triplet with mixed colours previously kkd could fit the rhythm. I just want to make something different from the first kiai.
02:19:989 (399,400,401,402) - You might also want to keep the triplet constant with ^ since this triplet is 1/2 late I'd prefer the current placement, as it could fit the music better.
03:58:335 (96,97,98) - Not sure if this ddk is intended, I've only seen 2 of mixed color triplets here Yup, this is intended.

Nothing else, good luck
I crash everytime I see a slider in taiko map idk why though orz

Thanks for the mod~

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-06-20T14:24:36+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Mod by Req

[Jik's Oni]

00:06:455 (14,15,16) - kdk > kkd | 14 and 15 are of the same pitch while 16 is lower in pitch than 15, I think this pattern suits it better
00:12:997 (32) - d > D | Did you miss a finish here? Since 00:14:801 (42) - is the same sound effect and it has a finish
00:38:260 (80) - d > D | Maybe a finisher here?
00:43:673 (106) - d > k | A kat here to follow the vocal here? I think I better keep the sentencing
00:46:154 (119,120) - Swap | Follows vocal more "bi-de"is "high-low" isn't it？
00:46:606 (122) - d > k | To keep consistency with 00:48:410 (132,133) -
01:22:470 (331) - d > k | To follow vocals similar to 01:21:794 (327,329) - listen to the four dons here
01:36:794 - Add a d here to follow guitar? Similar to 01:36:230 (411,412,413) -
02:07:132 (42,45,47) - dkd > kdk | The kat rhythm here sounds really off compared to the others, I suggest this pattern
02:44:576 (268) - d > k | 02:44:124 (266,267,268) - All of them are of the same pitch I suggest to make this a kat also the next sentence would be odd if it is kat(？)
03:07:019 (402) - d > k | This kat rhythm sounds nicer imo
04:24:613 (309,312) - Swap |^
04:01:267 (161,162,163) - ddk > kkd | This fits the vocals better imo also, listen to the dons

all fixed unless specified
Thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/9C8U7/0dab352030.osu

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Updated!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-07-03T19:01:28+00:00

Hi, here comes a taiko mod requested by IamKwaN :3

[Jik's Oni]

00:03:748 (6,7) - k d ? The piano at 00:03:748 - has a higher pitch than 00:03:974 (7) -
00:05:327 (11) - consider deleting this note ? Previous notes are supported by the piano but this note doesn't follow anything. A bit odd imo.
00:13:899 (37) - K would fit the high-pitched piano more.
00:19:651 (55) - maybe k for the guitar strike ? The current pattern is a bit boring as there are only dons from 00:18:185 to 00:19:989 - (nearly 2 seconds). Making 00:19:651 (55) - as k still fits the pitch drop from 00:19:651 to 00:19:989 -
00:23:824 (4) - D. The sound is similar to 00:22:696 (3) - , so adding finish there could make mapping more consistent.
00:26:305 (15,16) - kd. This could follow the vocal in a way better.
00:32:846 (48) - k for the vocal. This would result in a better contrast to 00:30:816 (36,37,38) -
00:36:906 (74) - maybe k for the snare sound ? You followed the snares all the way from 00:24:275 (6) to 00:36:004 (68) -
00:38:034 - add d ? I can hear a noticeable beat there. Ignoring it would be a bit strange.
00:40:741 (92,93) - same as 00:26:305 (15,16) -
00:43:673 (106,107) - k d . The vocal at 00:43:673 (106) - has the same pitch as 00:43:222 (104) -
00:49:876 (141) - delete ? The note follows nothing.
00:56:982 (179,180) - dk would fit the vocal well imo.
01:00:929 (202) - d ? The sound is not strong as 00:59:124 (192,214) - . In addition, making this as d could match the low-pitched vocal nearby i.e. 01:00:591 (200,201) - .
01:11:418 (262,263) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
01:34:087 - add d for the guitar there ?
01:40:403 (431) - move to 01:40:628 - ? The beat at 01:40:628 - is stronger imo.
01:43:899 - lacks a note. As the beat is more prominent than 01:41:643 - , adding d here to form a ddd triplet would be better.
01:46:606 (462) - change to k (for the high-pitched piano) and add d at 01:46:831 - ?
01:53:147 (479) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched piano ?
01:53:711 (481) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
01:54:500 (484,486,490,492,495,497) - k for the snares ? A bit monotonous because of lacking kats.
01:55:515 (487) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
02:03:748 (25) - you could also change this as k for following the vocal pitch.
02:08:936 (53,64) - k for snare consistency ? Similar to 00:36:906 (74) -
02:16:944 - add d to follow the beat ?
02:19:989 (119,120) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
02:34:425 (203,204) - ^
02:54:500 (334,336) - k d for following the pitch better ?
02:57:658 (349) - k for the snare sound ?
02:59:576 (359) - move to 02:59:463 - and make 1/6 kkkk from 02:59:688 to 02:59:914 - . The current 1/4 kkkk pattern does not match the guitar well imo.
03:00:478 (365,366) - kd to follow the guitar better ?
03:04:425 (389) - adding finish here would be nice imo.
03:33:748 (6,14,18) - k for the snares.
03:50:215 (89,90) - dk as you did at 03:35:779 (15,16) - ? Same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
04:14:350 (252) - k for the snare sound ?
04:18:410 (272) - add finish here for the strong cymbal sound ?

I hope the above mods could help the mapset get closer to rank.
That's all and good luck~

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-07-05T18:33:30+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Hi, here comes a taiko mod requested by IamKwaN :3

[Jik's Oni]
00:03:748 (6,7) - k d ? The piano at 00:03:748 - has a higher pitch than 00:03:974 (7) -
00:05:327 (11) - consider deleting this note ? Previous notes are supported by the piano but this note doesn't follow anything. A bit odd imo.
00:13:899 (37) - K would fit the high-pitched piano more.
00:19:651 (55) - maybe k for the guitar strike ? The current pattern is a bit boring as there are only dons from 00:18:185 to 00:19:989 - (nearly 2 seconds). Making 00:19:651 (55) - as k still fits the pitch drop from 00:19:651 to 00:19:989 -
00:23:824 (4) - D. The sound is similar to 00:22:696 (3) - , so adding finish there could make mapping more consistent.
00:26:305 (15,16) - kd. This could follow the vocal in a way better.
00:32:846 (48) - k for the vocal. This would result in a better contrast to 00:30:816 (36,37,38) -
00:36:906 (74) - maybe k for the snare sound ? You followed the snares all the way from 00:24:275 (6) to 00:36:004 (68) -
00:38:034 - add d ? I can hear a noticeable beat there. Ignoring it would be a bit strange.
00:40:741 (92,93) - same as 00:26:305 (15,16) -
00:43:673 (106,107) - k d . The vocal at 00:43:673 (106) - has the same pitch as 00:43:222 (104) -
00:49:876 (141) - delete ? The note follows nothing.
00:56:982 (179,180) - dk would fit the vocal well imo.
01:00:929 (202) - d ? The sound is not strong as 00:59:124 (192,214) - . In addition, making this as d could match the low-pitched vocal nearby i.e. 01:00:591 (200,201) - .
01:11:418 (262,263) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
01:34:087 - add d for the guitar there ?
01:40:403 (431) - move to 01:40:628 - ? The beat at 01:40:628 - is stronger imo.
01:43:899 - lacks a note. As the beat is more prominent than 01:41:643 - , adding d here to form a ddd triplet would be better.
01:46:606 (462) - change to k (for the high-pitched piano) and add d at 01:46:831 - ?
01:53:147 (479) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched piano ?
01:53:711 (481) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
01:54:500 (484,486,490,492,495,497) - k for the snares ? A bit monotonous because of lacking kats.
01:55:515 (487) - delete ? similar reason as 00:49:876 (141) -
02:03:748 (25) - you could also change this as k for following the vocal pitch.
02:08:936 (53,64) - k for snare consistency ? Similar to 00:36:906 (74) -
02:16:944 - add d to follow the beat ?
02:19:989 (119,120) - same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
02:34:425 (203,204) - ^
02:54:500 (334,336) - k d for following the pitch better ?
02:57:658 (349) - k for the snare sound ?
02:59:576 (359) - move to 02:59:463 - and make 1/6 kkkk from 02:59:688 to 02:59:914 - . The current 1/4 kkkk pattern does not match the guitar well imo.
03:00:478 (365,366) - kd to follow the guitar better ?
03:04:425 (389) - adding finish here would be nice imo.
03:33:748 (6,14,18) - k for the snares.
03:50:215 (89,90) - dk as you did at 03:35:779 (15,16) - ? Same as 00:56:982 (179,180) -
04:14:350 (252) - k for the snare sound ?
04:18:410 (272) - add finish here for the strong cymbal sound ?
I hope the above mods could help the mapset get closer to rank.
That's all and good luck~

Tried my best to follow the mods except places that I wanted to put there
http://puu.sh/9Y4DU/db0fb6d28e.osu

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Updated!

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Konpaku Sariel 2014-07-09T04:39:37+00:00

jik's oni

00:10:966 (24) - k

00:12:997 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - D__d__k_K__d__k

00:14:801 (36) - K

00:15:929 (39) - delete

00:16:606 (40) - K
00:17:508 (41) - ^
00:18:410 (45) - ^

00:18:861 (46) - delete

00:25:403 (12) - add d

00:26:305 (15,16,17,18) - dk_kd

00:27:207 (20) - add d
00:27:320 (21) - add k

00:29:012 (31) - add d

00:31:042 (42,43,44) - kdd

00:31:718 (45,46,47,48) - dk_kd or dk__d

00:34:876 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ddd_kkddddk
or ddd_k_ddkdk

00:36:230 (71) - d

00:36:568 (73) - delete

00:38:034 (81) - add d

00:44:688 (113,114) - kd

01:07:132 (244) - K

01:11:418 (263,264) - dk

02:22:921 (138,139) - kd

02:34:425 (204,205,206,207) - dk_dk

03:09:388 (422,428) - k

03:38:598 (28) - delete

Jikson[m9]

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Jikson[m9] 2014-07-10T15:21:25+00:00

Konpaku Sariel wrote:
jik's oni
00:10:966 (24) - k

00:12:997 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - D__d__k_K__d__k

00:14:801 (36) - K

00:15:929 (39) - delete

00:16:606 (40) - K
00:17:508 (41) - ^
00:18:410 (45) - ^

00:18:861 (46) - delete

00:25:403 (12) - add d

00:26:305 (15,16,17,18) - dk_kd

00:27:207 (20) - add d
00:27:320 (21) - add k

00:29:012 (31) - add d

00:31:042 (42,43,44) - kdd

00:31:718 (45,46,47,48) - dk_kd or dk__d

00:34:876 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - ddd_kkddddk
or ddd_k_ddkdk

00:36:230 (71) - d

00:36:568 (73) - delete

00:38:034 (81) - add d

00:44:688 (113,114) - kd

01:07:132 (244) - K

01:11:418 (263,264) - dk

02:22:921 (138,139) - kd

02:34:425 (204,205,206,207) - dk_dk

03:09:388 (422,428) - k

03:38:598 (28) - delete

http://puu.sh/a5dkn/729c6fa11f.osu

Fixed most, inspiring mod

Edit: http://puu.sh/a5eaj/6e4a916210.osu
The correct one

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-07-10T15:46:08+00:00

Updated!

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kanpakyin 2014-07-31T17:18:36+00:00

As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

Offset -5?

[Jik's Oni]

The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume.
01:08:936 (249,250,251) - This triplet doesn't fit the music that well. I think a 1/2 is enough here, just like what you did at 00:54:500 (167,168) -
01:15:591 (289) - It sounds better after removing this note.
01:21:794 (327,328,329,330) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch.
01:30:816 (381,382,383,384) - I don't think 2-plet - 2-plet pattern fits the music here. Simple 1/2 would fit the music. Suggestion: 01:30:365 (379,380,381,382,383) - k d d k k
01:40:403 - Add a note here? d is recommended.
02:44:801 (270,271,272,273) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch.
03:31:493 - Add a big don here to fit the drum and vocal.
03:31:606 (1) - Still not recommend to use a spinner here. Placing a big don at 03:31:831 - and 03:32:169 - would be much better.
04:25:290 (315) - kat?
04:25:403 (316) - don?

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume.
01:09:726 (159) - Change this to kat in order to fit the pitch and for consistency?
02:10:966 (367,368,369,370) - The rhythm was a bit weird imo. I suggest adding a note at 02:11:079 - and then removing the note at 02:11:305 (369) -
03:08:034 (578) - How about changing this note to kat to fit the pitch?

wtf....點解個sb素材同d梗取材我張map唔同我講聲.......

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Jikson[m9] 2014-08-01T04:28:14+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

Offset -5?

[Jik's Oni]
The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume. done
01:08:936 (249,250,251) - This triplet doesn't fit the music that well. I think a 1/2 is enough here, just like what you did at 00:54:500 (167,168) - done
01:15:591 (289) - It sounds better after removing this note. done
01:21:794 (327,328,329,330) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch. vocal: d_ _d_ _d=> d_kd_kd
01:30:816 (381,382,383,384) - I don't think 2-plet - 2-plet pattern fits the music here. Simple 1/2 would fit the music. Suggestion: 01:30:365 (379,380,381,382,383) - k d d k k music: d_ _k_ _k=> d_dk_dk
01:40:403 - Add a note here? d is recommended. done
02:44:801 (270,271,272,273) - How about changing this to dk dk? In order to fit the pitch. like the previous one
03:31:493 - Add a big don here to fit the drum and vocal.
03:31:606 (1) - Still not recommend to use a spinner here. Placing a big don at 03:31:831 - and 03:32:169 - would be much better. Really couldn't I emphasize the lyrics here？
04:25:290 (315) - kat? done
04:25:403 (316) - don?done

http://puu.sh/azMoN/7b90aa337c.osu

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-08-01T04:32:41+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
As per your request. Sorry for long delay. where is aabc?

Offset -5? okie

wtf....點解個sb素材同d梗取材我張map唔同我講聲....... my bro said梗無抄只拎左你clannad幾張素材,sorry o.o

~~@Nardo and Jik, please -5 offset urself coz I don't know where do u guys snap 1/6 :c~~Ok, updated. I try to -5 myself, please check once for me >.<

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-08-01T08:08:00+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
As per your request. Sorry for long delay.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
The volume was a bit low overall. I would suggest increasing the volume. Increased the volume of all timing points by 10% except the last spinner.
01:09:726 (159) - Change this to kat in order to fit the pitch and for consistency? Umm... I think dd is fine, as 01:09:721 (159) - has the same vocal pitch as 01:09:608 (158) -
02:10:966 (367,368,369,370) - The rhythm was a bit weird imo. I suggest adding a note at 02:11:079 - and then removing the note at 02:11:305 (369) - Changed from d kkk to ddk d.
03:08:034 (578) - How about changing this note to kat to fit the pitch? fixed

Thanks for the mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/azXlR.rar

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IamKwaN 2014-08-01T11:39:56+00:00

Updated. :3

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