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emilia
どうして...Neonat senpai's maps are so good I'm in no position to mod ><

Ok 5 min map GO!

00:14:270 (5) - This note looks a bit weird here, can shift up + right more
00:15:413 (5) - A little too blunt for a ~ slider
00:24:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Star formation here looks a bit lopsided
00:31:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can make this a 5-point star formation
00:42:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you make note 5 two hitcircles and make them jump a bit more
00:48:984 (2,3,4,5) - You can make this a square, it looks better
00:52:556 (3,4,5,6) - Triangle here maybe?
01:20:127 (4) - Curve here looks a bit unnatural
01:20:698 (1,2,3) - Triangle maybe?
01:27:841 (2) - You can move this further away
01:47:270 (1,2,3,4) - It looks lopsided, fix it
02:07:841 (2,3,4,5) - Same^
02:47:556 (1,1) - These shapes look forced, don't have to make it like this
03:10:413 (1,2,3,4) - Make this more 'parallelogram' like
03:23:841 (4) - This looks kinda obstructive. You can shift this up and make it curve a little to blanket the previous slider
03:24:698 (3,4,5) - It looks weird, but its ok if you keep it there
03:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5-point star maybe?
03:37:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same^ (It looks a little lopsided)
03:41:984 (2,3,4,5) - Make these 4 notes more diamond shaped?
04:06:413 (1,2,3) - You can angle them each at 30deg away from each other, because as of now it looks weird.
04:44:127 (1,2,3,4) - A little awkward, but its ok
04:47:698 (5,6) - Move these 2 notes further from the notes before, it has a dramatic factor.
05:16:127 (1,1) - Oh well~

Another grand masterpiece made by Neonat senpaiiii~ I love your style and beat placement! The patterns might seem a bit wonky at times, but its all good~
apl-
Modding because neonat is being a big meanie and forcing me to :(

[Daisuki]

Generally tried not to comment a slider shapes I particularly disliked.

00:36:841 (4) - NC please neo-senpai. DS pretty confusing with your constant inconsistent (heh) DS throughout map.
00:36:984 (1) - Remove NC because ^
00:55:556 (1) - Tilt slider slightly, perfectly straight downwards with a slant is pretty weird here.
00:58:556 (4) - Move up slightly and Ctrl + G. My feeling is that this has a more speedy feel, nicer to play~
01:20:984 (1,2,3) - Bend 1 slightly backwards to form more of a windmill sorts with 2 and 3.
01:52:698 (5) - NC becuz i lov da bounce
02:19:698 (4) - Make further from 3 or NC please ;-; Neo-senpai are you trying to kill my reading.
03:20:127 (3) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems.
03:21:351 (3) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems.
03:28:413 (5,6) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems.
03:35;841 (5,6) - NC 5 ;-;
04:06:698 (2,3) - Ctrl + G either 2 or 3. Feels weird in this form.
04:28:127 (4) - CTRL + G PLS NEONAT SENPAI. THIS ONE. THIS ONEEE.
04:47:698 (5,6) - NC 5. You know why. (・◡・)

Oh god DS neonat. DS. Eyes too. That or I'm bad at reading and I think that might be the case.
apl-

TestApple wrote:

Modding because neonat is being a big meanie and forcing me to :(
Neonat is actually a big good guy (・◡・)
Topic Starter
neonat

Estellia- wrote:

どうして...Neonat senpai's maps are so good I'm in no position to mod ><

Ok 5 min map GO!

00:14:270 (5) - This note looks a bit weird here, can shift up + right more don't think I'm moving this one
00:15:413 (5) - A little too blunt for a ~ slider made it curvier
00:24:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Star formation here looks a bit lopsided it's 2 separate triangles, that's why it looks weirder
00:31:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can make this a 5-point star formation going for certain directional flow
00:42:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you make note 5 two hitcircles and make them jump a bit more adjusted in a way
00:48:984 (2,3,4,5) - You can make this a square, it looks better ok
00:52:556 (3,4,5,6) - Triangle here maybe? reason being last time (5) was closer to make a triangle, but the flow was bad
01:20:127 (4) - Curve here looks a bit unnatural
01:20:698 (1,2,3) - Triangle maybe?
01:27:841 (2) - You can move this further away ok
01:47:270 (1,2,3,4) - It looks lopsided, fix it shifted (3)
02:07:841 (2,3,4,5) - Same^ shifted 4 to make it resemble some pattern at least
02:47:556 (1,1) - These shapes look forced, don't have to make it like this I think I will keep them
03:10:413 (1,2,3,4) - Make this more 'parallelogram' like ok
03:23:841 (4) - This looks kinda obstructive. You can shift this up and make it curve a little to blanket the previous slider didn't really change this one lol
03:24:698 (3,4,5) - It looks weird, but its ok if you keep it there shifted down
03:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5-point star maybe? not the intended flow
03:37:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same^ (It looks a little lopsided) ok
03:41:984 (2,3,4,5) - Make these 4 notes more diamond shaped? tried
04:06:413 (1,2,3) - You can angle them each at 30deg away from each other, because as of now it looks weird. changed somewhat
04:44:127 (1,2,3,4) - A little awkward, but its ok
04:47:698 (5,6) - Move these 2 notes further from the notes before, it has a dramatic factor. moved further then
05:16:127 (1,1) - Oh well~ yeah.

Another grand masterpiece made by Neonat senpaiiii~ I love your style and beat placement! The patterns might seem a bit wonky at times, but its all good~
Thanks for mod!

TestApple wrote:

Modding because neonat is being a big meanie and forcing me to :(

[Daisuki]

Generally tried not to comment a slider shapes I particularly disliked.

00:36:841 (4) - NC please neo-senpai. DS pretty confusing with your constant inconsistent (heh) DS throughout map. just gonna keep this as a single solo combo then
00:36:984 (1) - Remove NC because ^ refer^
00:55:556 (1) - Tilt slider slightly, perfectly straight downwards with a slant is pretty weird here. ok
00:58:556 (4) - Move up slightly and Ctrl + G. My feeling is that this has a more speedy feel, nicer to play~ I tried to place it like what you said I think
01:20:984 (1,2,3) - Bend 1 slightly backwards to form more of a windmill sorts with 2 and 3. rotated
01:52:698 (5) - NC becuz i lov da bounce
02:19:698 (4) - Make further from 3 or NC please ;-; Neo-senpai are you trying to kill my reading. lol, but the distance is already bigger
03:20:127 (3) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems. ok
03:21:351 (3) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems.it highlights a circle
03:28:413 (5,6) - Ctrl + G because flow seems better that way. Seems. doesn't feel right
03:35;841 (5,6) - NC 5 ;-; no thnx
04:06:698 (2,3) - Ctrl + G either 2 or 3. Feels weird in this form. changed it in a way from previous mod
04:28:127 (4) - CTRL + G PLS NEONAT SENPAI. THIS ONE. THIS ONEEE. k
04:47:698 (5,6) - NC 5. You know why. (・◡・) no thnx

Oh god DS neonat. DS. Eyes too. That or I'm bad at reading and I think that might be the case.
Thanks for this mod huehue lol
Timorisu
Modding because you got lucky in my always open queue :3

[General]

BG size must be 1366x768 for widescreen

The cropped glow on most of the SB images is very noticeable :o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765858

[Daisuki]

00:05:841 (3,4) - Blankets are off (very slightly)

00:07:127 (7) - 1 up for better triangle?

00:13:413 (1) - A straight slider would be better imho

00:16:841 (2,3) - CTRL+G maybe

00:24:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL+Shift+D with some CTRL+G wizardry would look better

00:38:841 (4) - End not perfectly under 2

00:48:556 (1) - The end looks very ugly

00:50:270 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/9OZkX/2dd2e724cb.jpg

00:57:841 (2) - Move end to x:104 y:232

01:20:413 (5) - x:96 y:116 for consistent spacing in the pattern

01:30:984 (1) - Blanket's off

01:39:556 (3,4,5,1) - Space these out a bit further http://puu.sh/9OZzU/e929d5a938.jpg

02:20:127 (1) - Make this less curved and rotate it a bit

02:23:413 (5,4) - Move these down 3 grids for a better star

02:26:413 (3) - Not symmetrical

02:30:270 (1) - Make this less curved

02:41:698 (1) - ^

02:47:556 (1) - http://puu.sh/9OZL3/a50b9f9343.jpg

02:48:556 (1) - ^

03:05:127 (3) - http://puu.sh/9OZPy/cb0236a972.jpg

03:04:556 (1) - ^

03:08:556 (4) - A normal curve would do

03:13:698 (1) - http://puu.sh/9OZPy/cb0236a972.jpg

03:23:413 (3) - Grid snap the third point and move it down by 1 grid

03:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - CTRL+Shift+D

03:37:841 (5) - NC since this isn't lyrics

03:42:413 (5) - ^

04:05:698 (3) - Rotate by -11°

04:19:413 (3) - Make this more curved

04:20:984 (5) - CTRL+G

04:21:270 (1) - CTRL+G

04:20:698 (4,5,1) - If you applied the suggestions above it should look like this http://puu.sh/9P08q/f1c13b357f.jpg

That's about it
Topic Starter
neonat

Timorisu wrote:

Modding because you got lucky in my always open queue :3

[General]

BG size must be 1366x768 for widescreen

The cropped glow on most of the SB images is very noticeable :o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765858

[Daisuki]

00:05:841 (3,4) - Blankets are off (very slightly) ok

00:07:127 (7) - 1 up for better triangle? k

00:13:413 (1) - A straight slider would be better imho keeping the shape

00:16:841 (2,3) - CTRL+G maybe don't really think I will

00:24:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL+Shift+D with some CTRL+G wizardry would look better keeping it as 2 separate patterns

00:38:841 (4) - End not perfectly under 2 done

00:48:556 (1) - The end looks very ugly I made it less sharp

00:50:270 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/9OZkX/2dd2e724cb.jpg sort of.

00:57:841 (2) - Move end to x:104 y:232 I shifted somewhat

01:20:413 (5) - x:96 y:116 for consistent spacing in the pattern k

01:30:984 (1) - Blanket's off adjusted

01:39:556 (3,4,5,1) - Space these out a bit further http://puu.sh/9OZzU/e929d5a938.jpg moved 4 and 5

02:20:127 (1) - Make this less curved and rotate it a bit made it less curved

02:23:413 (5,4) - Move these down 3 grids for a better star adjusted pattern

02:26:413 (3) - Not symmetrical not meant to be

02:30:270 (1) - Make this less curved not changing

02:41:698 (1) - ^ ^

02:47:556 (1) - http://puu.sh/9OZL3/a50b9f9343.jpg ^

02:48:556 (1) - ^ ^

03:05:127 (3) - http://puu.sh/9OZPy/cb0236a972.jpg changed shape

03:04:556 (1) - ^ no change

03:08:556 (4) - A normal curve would do k

03:13:698 (1) - http://puu.sh/9OZPy/cb0236a972.jpg no change

03:23:413 (3) - Grid snap the third point and move it down by 1 grid

03:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - CTRL+Shift+D 2 separate patterns

03:37:841 (5) - NC since this isn't lyrics

03:42:413 (5) - ^

04:05:698 (3) - Rotate by -11° did by 10

04:19:413 (3) - Make this more curved not changing

04:20:984 (5) - CTRL+G for the last 3 suggestions: having this 2 right and 2 left is to follow the vocals where it changes directions when they sing in a lower tone as well

04:21:270 (1) - CTRL+G

04:20:698 (4,5,1) - If you applied the suggestions above it should look like this http://puu.sh/9P08q/f1c13b357f.jpg

That's about it

Thanks for the mod :)
Mira-san
Doing another (mini) mod because this is the best song of µ's ever.

General | Storyboard | Et cetera

Fix the shadow on SB\1.png because that bugs me lol. Also for SB\2.png, but the glow though.

SB\Lyric\44h.png and 44ha.png aaaa

Won't point out small ones because (obviously) they're not noticeable.

Use this BG so it's exactly 16:9.#miracroppower™.

Daisuki

00:30:270 (1) - Make this better (in shape)
00:52:698 (4) - Stack on (4)? lel
00:57:556 (1) - Move to x:398 y:170
01:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - Could be improved imo. For cleanliness.
02:34:127 (2) - Move to x:138 y:187

OK moving on.

Turn off kiai on these parts (purpose: awesomeness)
01:33:698 - 01:34:413
03:18:841 - 03:19:556
04:29:698 - 04:30:413
Gaia
Heya! From my queue

It's a 5 mins song yet you pretty much gave players no rest LOL rip to people who try to fc this
1.8x SV qq

00:13:984 (3,4,5) - spread out more?
00:39:556 (3) - Ctrl + G
00:52:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - same time interval different distances so i think spread them all out?
01:00:984 (4) - ctrl + G?
01:03:841 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - spread
01:09:698 (3) - Right a lil more
01:22:413 (4) - Ctrl +G
01:22:698 (5) - ^
01:23:984 (1) - overlapped a little bit
01:26:270 (1) - curve more?
01:32:556 (3,4) - isn't perfect mirror of 01:32:127 (1,2) -
01:57:270 (9) - unnecessary
02:21:984 (5) - not stacked properly
02:48:984 (2) - Ctrl + G
02:49:270 (3) - ^
02:51:270 (5) - (224, 68)
02:53:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Keep distances constant
03:20:127 (3) - ctrl + G?
03:24:698 (3,4,5) - oddly shaped triangle
03:26:127 (4) - ctrl + G
03:37:841 (5) - unnecessary
03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird shape
03:42:413 (5) - don't need
04:04:984 (3) - more to the right
04:34:270 (3) - blanket better
05:02:270 (6) - move up just a lil more
05:11:127 (4,5) - Ctrl +G

I tried playing this but after entire day of modding + no warmup my graph was hilarious lol T^T
anyways good luck~~
Topic Starter
neonat

Mira-san wrote:

Doing another (mini) mod because this is the best song of µ's ever.

General | Storyboard | Et cetera

Fix the shadow on SB\1.png because that bugs me lol. Also for SB\2.png, but the glow though.

SB\Lyric\44h.png and 44ha.png aaaa

Won't point out small ones because (obviously) they're not noticeable.

Use this BG so it's exactly 16:9.#miracroppower™.

Daisuki

00:30:270 (1) - Make this better (in shape) not changing this shape
00:52:698 (4) - Stack on (4)? lel not gonna stack because that's too far but I shifted to objects to make it easier to hit (though now further apart)
00:57:556 (1) - Move to x:398 y:170 wow 1 grid unit difference um ok
01:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - Could be improved imo. For cleanliness. made it more evenly spaced then
02:34:127 (2) - Move to x:138 y:187 err for stack? ok then

OK moving on.

Turn off kiai on these parts (purpose: awesomeness)
01:33:698 - 01:34:413
03:18:841 - 03:19:556
04:29:698 - 04:30:413

Gaia wrote:

Heya! From my queue

It's a 5 mins song yet you pretty much gave players no rest LOL rip to people who try to fc this
1.8x SV qq

00:13:984 (3,4,5) - spread out more? k
00:39:556 (3) - Ctrl + G I think this is better though
00:52:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - same time interval different distances so i think spread them all out? made changes in previous mod
01:00:984 (4) - ctrl + G? reconstructed that part
01:03:841 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - spread made even in previous mod
01:09:698 (3) - Right a lil more shifted up
01:22:413 (4) - Ctrl +G keeping the distance
01:22:698 (5) - ^ ^
01:23:984 (1) - overlapped a little bit yeh I know but keeping
01:26:270 (1) - curve more? k
01:32:556 (3,4) - isn't perfect mirror of 01:32:127 (1,2) - I think I didn't use mirror
01:57:270 (9) - unnecessary I find it weirder to end on the vocals at the 1/2 beat
02:21:984 (5) - not stacked properly not stacking
02:48:984 (2) - Ctrl + G
02:49:270 (3) - ^ makes it more difficult to go to 02:49:841 (1) so I don't think I will change them
02:51:270 (5) - (224, 68) k
02:53:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Keep distances constant keeping this
03:20:127 (3) - ctrl + G? was initially that direction, till I felt it was weirder
03:24:698 (3,4,5) - oddly shaped triangle I reduced the angle for the bottom circle because of ease of movement
03:26:127 (4) - ctrl + G
03:37:841 (5) - unnecessary
03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird shape
03:42:413 (5) - don't need
04:04:984 (3) - more to the right up instead and making next circle lower also
04:34:270 (3) - blanket better nothing to blanket well with
05:02:270 (6) - move up just a lil more k
05:11:127 (4,5) - Ctrl +G shifted them

I tried playing this but after entire day of modding + no warmup my graph was hilarious lol T^T
anyways good luck~~
Thanks for mods :)
IamKwaN
Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. The BG size now isn't standard, resize it to 1366*768.
  2. Decapitalize "I" and "P" in the source, you would get something like this: Love Live! School idol project
  3. Also, add some tags, for example, names of each member of μ's or "ラブライブ!".
  4. Regarding to the storyboard, are these files being used? If not, you need to delete them.
    SPOILER
    38a.png
    38b.png
    39a.png
    39b.png
    41a.png
    41b.png
    42a.png
    42b.png
    43a.png
    43b.png

Daisuki

  1. 00:25:127 (2,3) - You may want to stack these two.
  2. 00:17:698 (6,1,2,3,4) - I feel uncomfortable when clicking these coz the stresses all lie on slider tails, try something like this:
  3. 00:23:556 (1) - Finish on head. Same applies on 00:23:984 (3).
  4. 00:30:270 (1) - Make this slider slightly more aesthetic and smooth even you are blanketing everything.
  5. 00:35:270 (2) - Move upwards a bit to improve the flow.
  6. 00:36:698 - I am kinda doubtful about this sudden halt whereas the ambient keeps going and the only one combo makes the look of these really odd.
  7. 00:41:841 (1) - Why is the node in the middle kinked? It would be nice if you copy shape of 00:42:270 (2,3).
  8. 00:57:127 (7) - Move it apart from 00:56:556 (5) to avoid the slight overlap.
  9. 01:00:127 - I suggest placing a SV decrease here till 01:01:127 which fits the atmosphere more.
  10. 01:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - These jumps don't match with the decreasing tense of music. Place something like 01:02:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) without jumps.
  11. 01:45:841 (1,3) - Finish on head, it's difficult to hear the whistles when playing.
  12. 01:50:413 (1) - Suggestion on the shape of slider:
  13. 02:24:198 (6) - Delete this, the drums start at red tick. In fact, 02:24:484 (10) doesn't have drum too.
  14. 02:41:127 (3,4) - Finishes on heads.
  15. 02:54:841 (2,3,4) - it feels hollow since you miss the drum at 02:54:984. How about this?
  16. 03:04:556 (1) - This shape really bothers me :3 What exactly is the first half of the slider blanketing?
  17. 03:31:556 (3) - Finish on head.
  18. 03:32:413 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these slightly overlaps between circles by CTRL+ALT+S please, it really looks nicer imo.
  19. 03:37:270 (1,3) - Remove these finishes like what u did on 01:52:127 (1,2,3,4,5).
  20. 03:50:413 (1,2,3,4) - You need some finishes here for emphasis.
  21. 04:15:841 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G these on timeline basis such that stresses lie on slider heads instead of tails.
  22. 04:18:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The rhythm is not that tense imo, maybe you should try rhythm like:
  23. 04:41:841 (1) - Finish on head.
  24. Difficulty seems decreasing through the diff, especially the last kiai while most jumps can be found in non-kiai.

    Your slider shape makes your map kinda, messy, for example, 03:52:698 (1) - its just a circular slider, why use so many nodes? 02:04:841 (4) - this kind of slider appears many times, you can simply copy a sample without making various types of sliders. Also, long sliders' shapes can be improved too, as mentioned above.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
neonat

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. The BG size now isn't standard, resize it to 1366*768.
  2. Decapitalize "I" and "P" in the source, you would get something like this: Love Live! School idol project
  3. Also, add some tags, for example, names of each member of μ's or "ラブライブ!".
  4. Regarding to the storyboard, are these files being used? If not, you need to delete them.
    SPOILER
    38a.png
    38b.png
    39a.png
    39b.png
    41a.png
    41b.png
    42a.png
    42b.png
    43a.png
    43b.png

Daisuki

  1. 00:25:127 (2,3) - You may want to stack these two. don't think I will stack
  2. 00:17:698 (6,1,2,3,4) - I feel uncomfortable when clicking these coz the stresses all lie on slider tails, try something like this: changed all to sliders
  3. 00:23:556 (1) - Finish on head. Same applies on 00:23:984 (3). k
  4. 00:30:270 (1) - Make this slider slightly more aesthetic and smooth even you are blanketing everything. will try
  5. 00:35:270 (2) - Move upwards a bit to improve the flow. moved slightly
  6. 00:36:698 - I am kinda doubtful about this sudden halt whereas the ambient keeps going and the only one combo makes the look of these really odd. conflicting suggestions all the time lol @@ I'll see what I can do
  7. 00:41:841 (1) - Why is the node in the middle kinked? It would be nice if you copy shape of 00:42:270 (2,3). wanted a different shape lol, I guess no one likes it....
  8. 00:57:127 (7) - Move it apart from 00:56:556 (5) to avoid the slight overlap. rotated 00:57:270 (8) to make the pattern more usable
  9. 01:00:127 - I suggest placing a SV decrease here till 01:01:127 which fits the atmosphere more. the change isn't too obvious, don't think I will change sv
  10. 01:03:984 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - These jumps don't match with the decreasing tense of music. Place something like 01:02:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) without jumps. it's still like a lead-in though, I think jumps can be used for that as well
  11. 01:45:841 (1,3) - Finish on head, it's difficult to hear the whistles when playing. it's k, not adding
  12. 01:50:413 (1) - Suggestion on the shape of slider: but that shape only goes downwards, which is a movement that doesn't seem to fit the vocal, which bends the tune
  13. 02:24:198 (6) - Delete this, the drums start at red tick. In fact, 02:24:484 (10) doesn't have drum too. don't think I will change this
  14. 02:41:127 (3,4) - Finishes on heads. not adding
  15. 02:54:841 (2,3,4) - it feels hollow since you miss the drum at 02:54:984. How about this? will still stick to the vocal melody line for rhythm here
  16. 03:04:556 (1) - This shape really bothers me :3 What exactly is the first half of the slider blanketing? just for shape
  17. 03:31:556 (3) - Finish on head. not adding
  18. 03:32:413 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these slightly overlaps between circles by CTRL+ALT+S please, it really looks nicer imo. um okay, I guess I can make that happen
  19. 03:37:270 (1,3) - Remove these finishes like what u did on 01:52:127 (1,2,3,4,5). removed all except the last one
  20. 03:50:413 (1,2,3,4) - You need some finishes here for emphasis. just added some claps
  21. 04:15:841 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G these on timeline basis such that stresses lie on slider heads instead of tails. emphasis is actually on the heads now
  22. 04:18:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The rhythm is not that tense imo, maybe you should try rhythm like: I'll consider
  23. 04:41:841 (1) - Finish on head. k
  24. Difficulty seems decreasing through the diff, especially the last kiai while most jumps can be found in non-kiai.

    Your slider shape makes your map kinda, messy, for example, 03:52:698 (1) - its just a circular slider, why use so many nodes? 02:04:841 (4) - this kind of slider appears many times, you can simply copy a sample without making various types of sliders. Also, long sliders' shapes can be improved too, as mentioned above. will look through

Good luck!

Thanks :)
SkinnyJommy
Hello, here's the mod from my queue!

I LOVE LOVE LIVE! PLEASE GET THIS RANKED

[Daisuki]

00:12:698 (3,4) - I don't see a reason for this big gap, and 3 and 2 are so close

00:27:841 (5,1) - I think these are to close to eachother, while being far apart on the timeline

00:29:841 (3,4) - I see a lot of stacks in this map, try to avoid stacks in jumpy maps, they really kill the flow, but maybe stacks are your style

00:47:841 (3,4) - I also see a lot of circles really close to eachother, and the next one is far away, I'm not sure if thats good or not, maybe you should try to keep consistant DS

01:32:413 (2) - This note behind the previous slider doesn't really fit in with the flow of the rest of the map

01:32:841 (4) - Same problem here

02:09:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a good example of what 00:27:841 (5,1) - should look like, it should be spaced out because of the time gaps between them, you have to make the previous notes suggest that there is a gap, and not just rely on reading skills, if that makes sense

02:34:841 (5) - Consider moving this to 40, 220

03:17:556 (2,4) - Doesn't really fit the rest of the map

03:42:413 (5) - Delete this circle, I don't think its needed to emphasize the vocals at this part

I absolutely LOVE THIS SONG! ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD

Hopefully my mod helped you a little bit!

GL :D
Topic Starter
neonat

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue!

I LOVE LOVE LIVE! PLEASE GET THIS RANKED

[Daisuki]

00:12:698 (3,4) - I don't see a reason for this big gap, and 3 and 2 are so close because it was the new tone after that held sound

00:27:841 (5,1) - I think these are to close to each other, while being far apart on the timeline I was trying to start slowing down the pace over there to bring in the new phrase in the song, the vocals

00:29:841 (3,4) - I see a lot of stacks in this map, try to avoid stacks in jumpy maps, they really kill the flow, but maybe stacks are your style will look through some of the stacks, I think some just do not fit what I'm trying to do

00:47:841 (3,4) - I also see a lot of circles really close to each other, and the next one is far away, I'm not sure if thats good or not, maybe you should try to keep consistent DS yeh it's intended

01:32:413 (2) - This note behind the previous slider doesn't really fit in with the flow of the rest of the map I was breaking flow to coincide with the feel of the song, but instead of stacking on the head of the previous slider, I decided to have it next to it instead

01:32:841 (4) - Same problem here

02:09:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a good example of what 00:27:841 (5,1) - should look like, it should be spaced out because of the time gaps between them, you have to make the previous notes suggest that there is a gap, and not just rely on reading skills, if that makes sense

02:34:841 (5) - Consider moving this to 40, 220 would not be consistent with the rest of the map though

03:17:556 (2,4) - Doesn't really fit the rest of the map

03:42:413 (5) - Delete this circle, I don't think its needed to emphasize the vocals at this part

I absolutely LOVE THIS SONG! ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD

Hopefully my mod helped you a little bit!

GL :D
Thanks for checking, reworking some of the double stacks
Rtyzen
(ノ・ω・)ノ

pewpewpew
sammy711
From BMT modding queue :D
Love Live !!!
[General]
How about using AR9.2, the BPM of 210 may require a higher AR here
About tags:

muse

(the pronounciation of u's)

kousaka honoka ayase eri minami kotori sonoda umi hoshizora rin nisikino maki toujou nozomi koizumi hanayo yazawa niko

these are the idol in Love Live, I copied these from the ranked version of Snow Halation (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/111587) which Guy mapped

Anyway you know, there is never wrong with more tags.


There are many tags you can also Add in
[Daisuki]
00:20:698 (2,3) - whistle on these two circles
00:25:127 (2,3) - perfect stack
00:27:841 (5) - clap here, for that voice of bass is consistent here, the same with 00:26:841 (1,2,3) -
00:32:127 (2) - add whistle, like what you did 00:29:841 (3)
01:02:270 (1) - normal finish on the slider head, like you do 02:45:127 (1)
01:13:270 (4) - whistle on the head and on the tail, like 02:56:127 (3,4) (i will stop mentioning that the same with which note from here)
01:17:984 (5) - whistle
01:45:841 (1) - finish here fits better, for there is a clear sound here. Normal one or Auto one both are OK, but I suggest using Auto one for you had use it 01:46:841 (4) - here
02:04:127 (1) - I think the place where this slider sits should be considered, not only because that the slider end is out of screen, it is because 02:04:127 (1,3) are touching each other, which made it so strange
You can try the pattern like this↓, a blanket here and the appropriate distance makes this pattern much beautiful
like this
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1982411[/img]
02:13:841 (3,4,2,3,4,5,1) - neaten this pattern plz, the distance here can be better
02:22:413 (1) - finish on the head
03:23:413 (3,4) - i think touching each other here is not such beautiful here, and the DS is weird, too. By put 03:23:841 (4) - a little bit farther, this pattern could get much improvement.↓
03:25:127 (1) - you didn't add finish at 04:32:556 (1) - 01:39:984 (1) - consider whether remove this one or add the other two one. It's up to you
04:05:127 (4) - keep the DS, and better stack 04:05:127 (4) - with the slider end of 04:05:698 (3) by rotating 04:05:698 (3) for a little
04:21:270 (1) - add whisle here
04:48:984 (1) - how about a sliderwhistle here. It fits here much and now that you used one in 04:57:841 (1) - to stress the background music, here should be a considerate place to place another one
05:02:127 (5,2) - Maybe you should stack perfectly here
05:03:841 (2,3) - You can make this distance be the same with 05:03:841 (2,4) - and 05:03:984 (3,5) - ,for example put 05:03:841 (2) - at (192,64)


I love Love Live as well as this song, thus I hope this could get ranked :oops:
Topic Starter
neonat

sammy711 wrote:

From BMT modding queue :D
Love Live !!!
[General]
How about using AR9.2, the BPM of 210 may require a higher AR here not sure about this one
About tags:

muse

(the pronounciation of u's)

kousaka honoka ayase eri minami kotori sonoda umi hoshizora rin nisikino maki toujou nozomi koizumi hanayo yazawa niko

these are the idol in Love Live, I copied these from the ranked version of Snow Halation (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/111587) which Guy mapped

Anyway you know, there is never wrong with more tags.


There are many tags you can also Add in
[Daisuki]
00:20:698 (2,3) - whistle on these two circles k
00:25:127 (2,3) - perfect stack k
00:27:841 (5) - clap here, for that voice of bass is consistent here, the same with 00:26:841 (1,2,3) - k
00:32:127 (2) - add whistle, like what you did 00:29:841 (3)
01:02:270 (1) - normal finish on the slider head, like you do 02:45:127 (1) k
01:13:270 (4) - whistle on the head and on the tail, like 02:56:127 (3,4) (i will stop mentioning that the same with which note from here) only placed on the tail
01:17:984 (5) - whistle
01:45:841 (1) - finish here fits better, for there is a clear sound here. Normal one or Auto one both are OK, but I suggest using Auto one for you had use it 1:46:841 (4) - here k
02:04:127 (1) - I think the place where this slider sits should be considered, not only because that the slider end is out of screen, it is because 02:04:127 (1,3) are touching each other, which made it so strange shifted right
You can try the pattern like this↓, a blanket here and the appropriate distance makes this pattern much beautiful
like this
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1982411[/img]
02:13:841 (3,4,2,3,4,5,1) - neaten this pattern plz, the distance here can be better I made things neater
02:22:413 (1) - finish on the head k
03:23:413 (3,4) - i think touching each other here is not such beautiful here, and the DS is weird, too. By put 03:23:841 (4) - a little bit farther, this pattern could get much improvement.↓ I gauged it my way
03:25:127 (1) - you didn't add finish at 04:32:556 (1) - 01:39:984 (1) - consider whether remove this one or add the other two one. It's up to you finish is already added
04:05:127 (4) - keep the DS, and better stack 04:05:127 (4) - with the slider end of 04:05:698 (3) by rotating 04:05:698 (3) for a little will test it out
04:21:270 (1) - add whistle here
04:48:984 (1) - how about a sliderwhistle here. It fits here much and now that you used one in 04:57:841 (1) - to stress the background music, here should be a considerate place to place another one
05:02:127 (5,2) - Maybe you should stack perfectly here I think it's fine now
05:03:841 (2,3) - You can make this distance be the same with 05:03:841 (2,4) - and 05:03:984 (3,5) - ,for example put 05:03:841 (2) - at (192,64) I don't think I want it too close


I love Love Live as well as this song, thus I hope this could get ranked :oops:
Thanks for modding and taking a look at sounds :)
Rizia
From BMT queue

[General]
  1. Fine
[Daisuki]
  1. 00:06:984 (6,7) - I feel so fast here, because 00:06:984 (6,7) - is same ds on 00:05:270 (1,2,3) - , imo need to nc on 00:06:984 (6) -
  2. 00:30:270 (1) - feel ordinary on this slider orz
    example:
  3. 00:34:556 (4) - x468 y136
  4. 00:46:841 (2) - blanket with 00:46:270 (8) - better
  5. 00:48:984 (2,3,4,5) - should more fun if you change like this
  6. 00:52:556 (3) - x312 y164
  7. 01:10:984 (4) - stack on 01:11:127 (5) -
  8. 01:42:984 (4,5,6) - suggestion:
  9. 01:47:270 (1,2,3,4) - imo it's ugly if they overlap here
  10. 01:57:270 (9) - x146 y95 , symmetric with 01:56:556 (4) -
  11. 02:11:984 (4) - blanket with 02:10:698 (5) - better
  12. 02:24:698 - this part can add more whistle :3
  13. 02:38:413 (2) - NC here and 02:38:127 (1) - remove nc
  14. 02:53:841 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, better flow with 02:53:556 (2,3) -
  15. 02:54:127 (6,7) - Ctrl+g too
  16. 03:08:984 (5) - x240 y96
  17. 03:19:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can blanket with 03:18:556 (2) -
  18. 03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star?
  19. 05:16:127 (1,1) -

Nice map, good luck ><
Topic Starter
neonat

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

From BMT queue

[General]
  1. Fine
[Daisuki]
  1. 00:06:984 (6,7) - I feel so fast here, because 00:06:984 (6,7) - is same ds on 00:05:270 (1,2,3) - , imo need to nc on 00:06:984 (6) - maybe I will put nc on (7) to differentiate it from all the rest
  2. 00:30:270 (1) - feel ordinary on this slider orz sorry, but I want to blanket the circles
    example:
  3. 00:34:556 (4) - x468 y136 moved to x484 y104
  4. 00:46:841 (2) - blanket with 00:46:270 (8) - better k
  5. 00:48:984 (2,3,4,5) - should more fun if you change like this spaced out, swapped 4 and 5
  6. 00:52:556 (3) - x312 y164 k
  7. 01:10:984 (4) - stack on 01:11:127 (5) - will try it
  8. 01:42:984 (4,5,6) - suggestion: makes it easier to hit I guess
  9. 01:47:270 (1,2,3,4) - imo it's ugly if they overlap here keeping this pattern
  10. 01:57:270 (9) - x146 y95 , symmetric with 01:56:556 (4) - keeping 01:56:698 (5,6,7,8,9) constant
  11. 02:11:984 (4) - blanket with 02:10:698 (5) - better shifted slightly
  12. 02:24:698 - this part can add more whistle :3 added before it instead, at 02:23:413 (5,2,4)
  13. 02:38:413 (2) - NC here and 02:38:127 (1) - remove nc k
  14. 02:53:841 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, better flow with 02:53:556 (2,3) - breaks the phrasing I'm trying to make
  15. 02:54:127 (6,7) - Ctrl+g too ^
  16. 03:08:984 (5) - x240 y96 no change
  17. 03:19:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can blanket with 03:18:556 (2) - not going to adjust to fit pattern because I like the flow of this already
  18. 03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star? no change
  19. 05:16:127 (1,1) - needs more time for second spinner

Nice map, good luck ><

Thanks :)
I do hope this map is making progress to being ready
jesse1412
[Daisuki]

00:07:127 (1) - Not sure why there's a new combo here but I find that it makes 00:06:984 (6,1) - seem like a 1/1 jump, not a 1/2.
00:08:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I really dislike this stacking, maybe use back and forth patterns instead or sliders or something? I think this is really hard to read without playing the rest of the map first because the song hasn't given a consistent 1/2 beat before this point and it's hard to decipher a beat from stacked notes.
02:09:698 (1,2,3) - Increase the spacing of these, at the moment I don't think it's very readable. It might also help to decrease the spacing between 02:09:556 (4,1) .
02:58:984 (1,2,3,4) - I dislike how these 1/3 are presented, seems totally unexpected in my opinion. I would change at least the first 2 notes into a 1/3 slider and try and rework the section. If you're going to keep hitcircles make sure the spacing change is EXTREME (i.e huge anti jumps or much larger jumps) to indicate that there is a change in the rhythm.

Sorry for the short mod, the rest is pretty fine!
Topic Starter
neonat

jesus1412 wrote:

[Daisuki]

00:07:127 (1) - Not sure why there's a new combo here but I find that it makes 00:06:984 (6,1) - seem like a 1/1 jump, not a 1/2. everything confuses people with that distance, I guess I will just adjust that as well
00:08:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I really dislike this stacking, maybe use back and forth patterns instead or sliders or something? I think this is really hard to read without playing the rest of the map first because the song hasn't given a consistent 1/2 beat before this point and it's hard to decipher a beat from stacked notes. changed pattern
02:09:698 (1,2,3) - Increase the spacing of these, at the moment I don't think it's very readable. It might also help to decrease the spacing between 02:09:556 (4,1) . adjusted in a way
02:58:984 (1,2,3,4) - I dislike how these 1/3 are presented, seems totally unexpected in my opinion. I would change at least the first 2 notes into a 1/3 slider and try and rework the section. If you're going to keep hitcircles make sure the spacing change is EXTREME (i.e huge anti jumps or much larger jumps) to indicate that there is a change in the rhythm. spaced further

Sorry for the short mod, the rest is pretty fine!
Thanks for taking a look~
GENDER BLENDER
This is one of my favourite maps and songs too~ xD
Nothing too major, the map looks pretty perfect as-is. \o/

Daisuki
  1. Guess it won't hurt to increase the od a bit. Maybe 8.5? You might consider increasing the ar too if you like, but ar9 works. ^_^
  2. 01:04:413 (7) - Add Clap?
  3. 01:15:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about claps at 1 and 4 and the rest as usual? Oh well 01:33:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) sounds better with all claps.
  4. 02:24:127 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't think this stream fits the music; maybe change it to 1/2 jumps.
  5. 03:35:341 (6,7,8) - Maybe add claps on these beats?
  6. 03:17:270 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the sv here or add jumps right after the sliders... Might be interesting.
  7. 03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase the spacing a bit? I think these beats have more potential. xD
  8. 03:57:984 (8,9,10) - Might be better off as a stream, but is pretty cool as is now too!
  9. 04:41:414 (6,7,8) - Maybe make the triple at 6?
  10. 04:42:627 (4) - This beat looks like an outlier... I guess deleting it and extending the slider works better.
  11. 04:58:127 (2) - Won't hurt to increase the spacing? I just feel like the music demands a magnificent jump at this point. Maybe I'm retarded, but whatever. xD

Well, this map is too much fun... Wish it gets ranked soon~ Good luck~ ^_^
Topic Starter
neonat

Potla wrote:

This is one of my favourite maps and songs too~ xD
Nothing too major, the map looks pretty perfect as-is. \o/

Daisuki
  1. Guess it won't hurt to increase the od a bit. Maybe 8.5? You might consider increasing the ar too if you like, but ar9 works. ^_^ Gonna keep it the same
  2. 01:04:413 (7) - Add Clap? ok
  3. 01:15:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about claps at 1 and 4 and the rest as usual? Oh well 01:33:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) sounds better with all claps.
  4. 02:24:127 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't think this stream fits the music; maybe change it to 1/2 jumps. I don't think that would be what I want
  5. 03:35:341 (6,7,8) - Maybe add claps on these beats? don't think it's necessary
  6. 03:17:270 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the sv here or add jumps right after the sliders... Might be interesting. it was the reason for me to put the circle behind the slider, to make it cover more distance
  7. 03:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase the spacing a bit? I think these beats have more potential. xD too crazy lol
  8. 03:57:984 (8,9,10) - Might be better off as a stream, but is pretty cool as is now too! wanted a stream, but the music was too empty to warrant one
  9. 04:41:414 (6,7,8) - Maybe make the triple at 6? doesn't fit the song
  10. 04:42:627 (4) - This beat looks like an outlier... I guess deleting it and extending the slider works better.
  11. 04:58:127 (2) - Won't hurt to increase the spacing? I just feel like the music demands a magnificent jump at this point. Maybe I'm retarded, but whatever. xD increased the spacing by placing it further down, so that movement to 04:58:413 (3,4) is smoother

Well, this map is too much fun... Wish it gets ranked soon~ Good luck~ ^_^
Haha thanks :)
Flower
Did a brief irc mod, and we both think it's fine to push forward.

Bubble #1

SPOILER
00:24 Flower: okay
00:24 *Flower is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/379071 u's - Bokura no LIVE Kimi to no LIFE [Daisuki]]
00:24 Flower: imma test it first
00:26 neonat: ok
00:30 Flower: is hp7 a bit too high?
00:31 neonat: so far I feel it has been fine
00:31 Flower: looks like several 100s and fail
00:31 neonat: when i played it, i nvr fell to the red region
00:31 neonat: and also it came from suggestions iirc
00:32 Flower: k
00:32 neonat: yeh i was told HP +2~3
00:33 neonat: lol
00:33 Flower: 00:58:556 (4) - moving to 344,180 should play better
00:34 neonat: can i shift it to 340 184
00:35 Flower: it also works imo
00:36 Flower: 01:19:770 - I feel like adding a note fits the music better
00:37 neonat: hmm which part of the song does it go with?
00:38 neonat: not sure cuz the vocals is quite loud, it would make the triplet there be quite unimpactful as it will go over the triplet
00:38 Flower: trumpet, or drum, well i can't tell but there is an obvious 1/4 sound here
00:39 Flower: depends on you. i don't think it's a must-have
00:40 neonat: i understand
00:40 neonat: for now I will keep it in mind!
00:40 Flower: :3
00:40 Flower: 01:22:698 (5) - also move to 272,368 or so? looks a bit too tight
00:41 Flower: sorry I'm too sleepy to make decent mods... but on other words your map it great so i can't find actual points to pick
00:41 neonat: does this look equal distance? http://puu.sh/ch4Pb.jpg
00:42 neonat: lol if so then I would make it like this, and it would be less tight
00:42 Flower: sure, this one looks better
00:42 neonat: its 268 372
00:45 neonat: oh though I need some advice on where i can put 03:42:413 (5) - to make it look nicer
00:45 Flower: yeah it works.
00:45 neonat: or any of those in that pattern
00:45 Flower: it looks fine for me at that pattern
00:48 Flower: you may try to creat 2 regular triangles like http://puu.sh/ch5c6/d2ff55ec94.jpg ?
00:49 Flower: anyway... let's move forward
00:49 neonat: oh
00:50 Flower: 03:46:984 - i think in this section soft clap sounds better than normal one
00:53 neonat: soft default?
00:54 Flower: yep
00:56 neonat: i can leave 03:49:270 (1,2,3,4) - as it is for more impact
00:56 neonat: with the normal clap imo
00:57 Flower: yeah
00:57 Flower: you are right
00:57 Flower: and for other claps soft should sound better
00:58 neonat: changed the rest in the section to soft
00:59 Flower: k
01:02 Flower: 02:24:698 - also thi part
01:03 Flower: 02:41:127 (3) - move to like x:300,y:344
01:04 Flower: 02:41:127 (3) - and this
01:04 Flower: sry i mean this section:02:47:556 -
01:05 neonat: that y axis is quite low
01:05 neonat: i want it higher than 02:40:984 (2) - though
01:05 neonat: i would put at x:300 y:308 but any lower im not sure
01:07 Flower: k, that also works
01:09 neonat: section changed
01:11 Flower: 03:08:984 (5) - looks too close imo. maybe increase to 1/0x ds
01:11 Flower: 1.0x
01:14 Flower: that's as far as i can help. if you are ready tell me and i'll recheck amended map

Good luck!
Gaia
00:42:556 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this part is evil ;w;

i wonder if i can pass this when its ranked heh
Shohei Ohtani
so i approved Hinsvar's version already (It was a random bubble mod, so I did it before you PMed me :(), soooo uhh, just a reminder for other BATs looking at this
Tari
Bubble #2


irc
21:54 Tari: u can disable SB warning
21:54 Tari: not needed here.
21:54 neonat: epilepsy warning?
21:54 Tari: yeah
21:55 neonat: even if 03:56:984 - the yeah comes flying to you?
21:55 Tari: thats not strobing
21:55 neonat: ok then
21:55 Tari: and
21:55 Tari: u know its coming
21:55 Tari: with the spin
21:56 Tari: just lyrics don't need eclipsey warning
21:56 Tari: but if background images change then yes
21:56 neonat: i see
21:57 Tari: orz who checked title for you?
21:58 neonat: um no one
21:58 neonat: so far
21:58 neonat: i think?
21:58 Tari: orz
21:58 Tari: u have any two green lines at same spots?
21:58 Tari: x-x
21:58 Tari: saves me time to check those too
21:59 Tari: the inherited timing points
21:59 Tari: u have any in the same spots?
21:59 neonat: none at the same spot
21:59 neonat: just checked
21:59 Tari: ok good
21:59 Tari: where does it show this?
21:59 Tari: btw
21:59 neonat: my title is the same as hinsvar's
21:59 Tari: aibat or aimod?
22:00 neonat: aimod
22:00 neonat: i went to look at my timing points to check though
22:00 Tari: oh
22:00 Tari: ok good
22:01 Tari: 05:16:127 (1,1) - Lol
22:01 Tari: I feel these are too short
22:01 Tari: but they reach the minimum standards
22:01 Tari: but I think its better to combine them.
22:02 neonat: but the beats at 05:16:984 - and 05:17:127 - are pretty important
22:03 Tari: oh I guess its fine
22:04 neonat: i want to edit 2 parts slightly
22:04 neonat: want to go over with me to ensure stuff?
22:05 Tari: sure
22:06 neonat: 00:42:984 (1,2) - im thinking of changing this into 1 slider
22:06 neonat: what do you think?
22:06 neonat: it's too ease this part better
22:06 neonat: to*
22:07 Tari: oh yes
22:07 Tari: i recommend change to slider too
22:08 neonat: something like this
22:08 neonat: http://i.imgur.com/SoZhAm1.png
22:09 neonat: also i see that some are ranked under Love Live! School Idol Project as Source but some are Love Live! School idol project so which one is correct?
22:11 Tari: 1 sec
22:11 Tari: lowercased
22:12 Tari: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/
22:12 neonat: ok
22:12 Tari: here's your source
22:12 Tari: http://puu.sh/clIZZ.png
22:12 neonat: the slider is fine?
22:12 Tari: :)
22:12 Tari: yes
22:13 neonat: ok
22:13 neonat: the 2nd part i want to shift it
22:13 neonat: 02:24:127 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - i want to bring this stream closer to 02:23:984 (4) -
22:13 neonat: so i will shift some of the objects there to fit that
22:13 neonat: namely adjust 02:24:984 (2) - position
22:14 Tari: oh that stream
22:14 Tari: needs a new combo...
22:14 neonat: ok
22:14 Tari: u don't have to move stream
22:14 Tari: if u put new combo to it
22:15 Tari: 02:35:698 (3) - also can u move this more up?
22:15 Tari: the sliderpath is partially blocked by
22:15 neonat: added new combo
22:15 Tari: 02:34:984 (1) -
22:15 Tari: AR is fast enough for us to see the note
22:16 Tari: but it will help with readability.
22:16 neonat: shifted to x: 300 y: 144
22:17 Tari: 00:09:841 (1) - the spacing needs to be increased.
22:19 neonat: errr like this? http://i.imgur.com/mXqZ8O2.png
22:21 Tari: I still feel
22:21 Tari: like jump would fit there
22:22 Tari: 01:41:698 (3) - fix the stacking.
22:23 neonat: this then lol http://i.imgur.com/2c9xZ6b.png
22:23 Tari: ok
22:23 Tari: that works
22:24 Tari: done with all that?
22:24 Tari: :x
22:24 neonat: yep
22:25 neonat: want me to update?
22:25 Tari: 01:42:984 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
22:26 neonat: that changes the progressive downward movement of the pattern there
22:27 Tari: ok
22:27 Tari: update now then
22:28 neonat: done
22:28 Tari: what two parts did u want to change?
22:29 neonat: we added the new combo here 02:24:127 (1) -
22:29 Tari: and that slider change
22:29 Tari: where was it :x
22:29 neonat: we added the jump at 00:09:841 (1,2) -
22:29 neonat: and this is now a slider 00:42:984 (1) -
22:30 neonat: and this now stacks 01:40:698 (3) -
22:30 neonat: on 01:39:270 (2) -
22:31 Tari: 03:48:984 (4,5,1) - Stack them?
22:32 neonat: want some slight movement there so its an imperfect stack
22:32 Tari: 03:59:556 (1) - Why not a jump to this note?
22:32 Tari: :x
22:32 neonat: also a build up to the bigger jumps afterwards
22:32 Tari: doesn't make sense
22:33 neonat: hmm that note
22:33 neonat: i think it was because the held guitar tone is at 03:59:698 (2) - so that was the major highlight jump there?
22:33 Tari: err
22:33 Tari: can u add new combo at 2 then?
22:33 Tari: instead of 1
22:34 neonat: ok
22:34 Tari: and finally
22:34 Tari: 04:20:984 (5) - Ctrl+g flows better to me.
22:35 neonat: yeh it does flow better but my purpose there is this 04:20:698 (4,5) - is one vocal
22:35 neonat: 04:21:270 (1,2) - is another
22:35 neonat: then lastly 04:21:841 (3) - is the next one
22:35 neonat: so i made them move int he same direction for each vocal
22:35 Tari: 04:24:556 (1) - place this higher? its so close to following notes
22:36 neonat: but it's really too bad i will make them all opposite direction i guess
22:37 Tari: u agree with 04:24:556 (1) - ?
22:37 neonat: shifted 04:24:556 (1) - up then yeh
22:37 Tari: 04:23:270 (5) - http://puu.sh/clK8k.jpg
22:39 neonat: ok
22:39 Tari: 04:59:556 (4,5) - Ctrl+G BOTH?

To Next BAT: Don't approve till https://osu.ppy.sh/s/189216 gets out of qualified, and move this map to pending beatmaps
Mira-san
here it goes here it goes
Shohei Ohtani
I see no striking reason why this should not be approved.

Checked folders and stuff, and metadata is identical to Hinsvar's, which is ranked, so woohoo

NICE
Crystal
congratz neonat~
Coro
gratz nat~
Gaia
ayyyyyyyy
/me fails first try

grats !!
-Nano-_old
grats!!!!
AruOtta
Congratz neonat \:D/
pkk
CONGRATS DADneonat!!!
Julie
Congratz :D!! free 1k combo for those that don't have it with HT *runs*
Aka
messy :(
Shohei Ohtani
i became messy after seeing how awesome this map is
Topic Starter
neonat
Thank you all >.<
But the icon is wrong right now :/
Mira-san
d00d don't leave me ;w;
jyu
congratz for first approval!! :)
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