Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora · forum

mintong89

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-01T17:19:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月18日 at 15:22:09

Artist: Galileo Galilei
Title: Natsuzora
Source: Ookiku Furikabutte
Tags: Big Windup! おおきく振りかぶっておお振り Oofuri mintong89 KevinKang ffstar0716
BPM: 135
Filesize: 15230kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.03 stars, 84 notes)
ffstar's Insane (5 stars, 270 notes)
Hard (4.67 stars, 175 notes)
Insane (4.96 stars, 233 notes)
KK's Hard (4.77 stars, 201 notes)
Normal (3.94 stars, 127 notes)

Download: Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora
Download: Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora」
14th Ranked Beatmaps

KK's Hard by KevinKang
ffstar's Insane by ffstar0716

Last edited by mintong89 2014-05-18T07:33:46+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-03-02T05:03:53+00:00

Offset: current +5 (705ms)

log

12:55 Mintong: FF可以看下offset吗
12:56 Mintong: 好像不对又好像对的
12:56 Mintong: 怀疑我的耳朵有问题了
12:56 Mintong: sad
12:56 Flask: 好啊都行
12:57 Mintong: thanks!
12:57 *Mintong is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/378758 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [Insane]]
12:59 Flask: 這AR8就夠了
12:59 Flask: (.
12:59 Mintong: 是吗！！ :OOOO
12:59 Mintong: okkkk
13:00 Mintong: offset 没问题吗
13:00 Flask: 我這邊聽了offset有點快了
13:00 Flask: 大概+5
13:01 Mintong: 我是觉得kiai有点慢
13:02 Flask: 我也這麼覺得
13:02 Flask: +5左右吧 705
13:02 Mintong: 嗯好

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-03-02T05:45:13+00:00

啊啊啊啊啊我爱这首

kaito_tatsuya

19 posts

Joined August 2012

kaito_tatsuya 2014-03-02T10:16:51+00:00

すばらしい

Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2014-03-02T13:21:21+00:00

okaeri mintong

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-02T13:42:59+00:00

nogu: aaaaaaawoyeai!
tatsuyapuck: arigatou! edit: wow, thanks for star!
Quilt: 本当にありがとう m(_ _)m
kantokun: yeah lol
ffstar0716: omg thanks for the star \o/
mingmichael: terima kasih |:D|
TKSalt: (*ﾟ▽ﾟ*) ありがとおおおおおおう
SUBSTAC9: サンキュー！
Leminine: Haha thanks, star isn't the must ww.
cdhsausageboy: 谢谢！ \:D/

Last edited by mintong89 2014-03-09T04:09:05+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-03-02T15:53:00+00:00

mintong come back!! lol

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-03T11:57:49+00:00

/me gives a star \o/

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-03-03T12:21:39+00:00

mintong kembali \w/
goodluck mint

kaito_tatsuya

19 posts

Joined August 2012

kaito_tatsuya 2014-03-04T10:58:14+00:00

giving this beatmap a star ,cause u work so hard

TKS

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

1,380 posts

Joined July 2011

TKS 2014-03-05T00:37:21+00:00

おかえりなさい

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2014-03-05T18:05:13+00:00

おかえり〜

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-03-07T08:54:04+00:00

米桶再等等>///< skin还要一些素材...

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-08T00:34:52+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
米桶再等等>///< skin还要一些素材...

好

Leminine

242 posts

Joined August 2012

Leminine 2014-03-09T03:05:37+00:00

I don't have star for you but good luck xD

Asagi Mutsuki

osu!trivium Champion

1,469 posts

Joined February 2013

Asagi Mutsuki 2014-03-09T03:27:09+00:00

star~

hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2014-03-09T06:20:19+00:00

from 15175731
E，N，H，H，H的难度设置好评

replays：
kk's insane-->http://puu.sh/7or66.osr
insane-->http://puu.sh/7or8f.osr
hard+hd-->http://puu.sh/7or8N.osr
notmal+dthd-->http://puu.sh/7or9r.osr
easy+dthrhd-->http://puu.sh/7or9V.osr

难度：Easy
00:13:144 (1) - 这里有一段连续的鼓声，换成spinner会不会好一点
00:19:366 (2,3) - 好像不太合拍，2可以推迟到 00:20:033 结束，然后3推迟到00:20:699开始，结束位置不变
01:04:255 (5,1) - 不太建议easy难度放半拍，将5加一个折返，然后在原来1的结束为止改成单点

难度：Normal
没有发现什么问题

难度：Hard
00:07:811 - 00:13:144 -->这里好空啊
00:20:699 (2) - 建议加一个折返，然后提前到00:20:477开始
01:10:922 (3) - 其实，我想移开一点这个

难度：KevinKang的Insane
00:07:811 - 00:12:255 -->好空+1
00:14:477 - 00:14:922 -->改成连打会不会好一点

难度：Insane
00:04:255 - 00:05:144 -->感觉白线和红线都可以摆notes
00:07:811 - 00:13:144 -->好空+2
00:20:699 (1) - 咦？跟hard所在的时间轴一样...大概就像hard这里说的那样吧
00:42:477 (3,4) - slider在4/3结束？

加油~~

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-03-11T09:20:21+00:00

hi mint

[General]
都会讲普通话我就用中文了啊

[ff Insane]
没有video。。
00:01:144 (3,4) - 总感觉没对齐
01:00:699 (7,1,2) - ^
00:27:144 (5,6) - 没叠好，差了1px
nice one

[Insane]
感觉有些别扭，有些该用stream的地方没用，一张一弛的
00:17:144 (2) - 比如从这儿开始的这一段就没用，但是前面又有一段非常紧凑的stream，感觉像是从insane跳到了hard
00:34:477 (7) - 感觉可以移动一下，因为离下一个太近又离上一个太远
00:44:477 (3) - 滑条尾开始有个3连音吧
01:10:033 (1) -

这一段试一下这样增强打击感

[kk Insane]
感觉有点简单啊，为什么不叫hard
~~00:00:477 note?~~算了突然发现是跟鼓的
00:19:366 (3) - 没包好
00:33:588 (5) - ^
00:34:033 (6) - 红线上有音啊，不如改成短slider加个note
01:01:588 (2,4) - 没叠好
01:10:033 (12) - nc
01:11:366 (15) - 延长一个reverse

[Hard]
00:15:588 (2,4) - 感觉容易误读，建议拉开点
00:06:033 (3) - 这是啥，要包又没包好
nice

[Normal]
00:07:811 (1,1,1) - ~~怎么又是这个梗~~

[Easy]
01:14:922 (4,1) - 不好看那，建议做blanket

嘛，米桶总是拿这么好的图和我m4m，好愧疚啊><

GL

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-11T12:23:44+00:00

615915887 wrote:
[ff Insane]
没有video。。mintong 帮我弄 ><
00:01:144 (3,4) - 总感觉没对齐 ._. fixed
01:00:699 (7,1,2) - ^ ^
00:27:144 (5,6) - 没叠好，差了1px 好
nice one 谢谢拉

updated

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Natsuzora.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35699
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Natsuzora
TitleUnicode:夏空
Artist:Galileo Galilei
ArtistUnicode:Galileo Galilei
Creator:Mintong
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:Big Windup!
Tags:Ookiku_Furikabutte おおきく振りかぶって おお振り Oofuri mintong89 KevinKang
BeatmapID:383111
BeatmapSetID:154196

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Meisle

158 posts

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2014-03-12T01:26:24+00:00

615915887 wrote:
[kk Insane]
感觉有点简单啊，为什么不叫hard
~~00:00:477 note?~~算了突然发现是跟鼓的
00:19:366 (3) - 没包好改了一下,大概包好了
00:33:588 (5) - ^
00:34:033 (6) - 红线上有音啊，不如改成短slider加个note好
01:01:588 (2,4) - 没叠好太细微了啊- -改不动
01:10:033 (12) - nc好
01:11:366 (15) - 延长一个reverse好

感谢mod

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
from 15175731
难度：KevinKang的Insane
00:07:811 - 00:12:255 -->好空+1加了点料
00:14:477 - 00:14:922 -->改成连打会不会好一点好的

还有replays感觉好贴心~感谢mod

召唤米桶(￣ˇ￣)

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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-12T02:55:18+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
from 15175731

难度：Easy
00:13:144 (1) - 这里有一段连续的鼓声，换成spinner会不会好一点放spinner会导致新手来不及打(2), 所以先不放了
00:19:366 (2,3) - 好像不太合拍，2可以推迟到 00:20:033 结束，然后3推迟到00:20:699开始，结束位置不变改了下
01:04:255 (5,1) - 不太建议easy难度放半拍，将5加一个折返，然后在原来1的结束为止改成单点其实我是故意的, 想给新手挑战下

难度：Normal
没有发现什么问题

难度：Hard
00:07:811 - 00:13:144 -->这里好空啊先保留
00:20:699 (2) - 建议加一个折返，然后提前到00:20:477开始不懂耶...
01:10:922 (3) - 其实，我想移开一点这个 lol 故意的

难度：Insane
00:04:255 - 00:05:144 -->感觉白线和红线都可以摆notes 唔, 先保留着吧
00:07:811 - 00:13:144 -->好空+2 哦,故意的, 先保留
00:20:699 (1) - 咦？跟hard所在的时间轴一样...大概就像hard这里说的那样吧有点不懂为啥要放...
00:42:477 (3,4) - slider在4/3结束？ 4/3 是什么lol

加油~~

谢谢mod以及osr ><!

615915887 wrote:
hi mint

[General]
都会讲普通话我就用中文了啊

[Insane]
感觉有些别扭，有些该用stream的地方没用，一张一弛的唔, 考虑下
00:17:144 (2) - 比如从这儿开始的这一段就没用，但是前面又有一段非常紧凑的stream，感觉像是从insane跳到了hard
00:34:477 (7) - 感觉可以移动一下，因为离下一个太近又离上一个太远好
00:44:477 (3) - 滑条尾开始有个3连音吧懒得改了...
01:10:033 (1) - 我才不会告诉你我是故意的, 虽然我知道影响了打击感
这一段试一下这样增强打击感

[Hard]
00:15:588 (2,4) - 感觉容易误读，建议拉开点这个是hard没关系吧
00:06:033 (3) - 这是啥，要包又没包好我的包技术差, 现在应该比较好了
nice

[Normal]
00:07:811 (1,1,1) - ~~怎么又是这个梗~~ 233全程这梗

[Easy]
01:14:922 (4,1) - 不好看那，建议做blanket 好

嘛，米桶总是拿这么好的图和我m4m，好愧疚啊>< 骗人!

GL

谢谢mod啦lol
and updated!

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-03-13T05:28:16+00:00

Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[General]

Soft-hitnormal sounds very quiet... lol maybe ok but just I don't like it very much xD

[Easy]

AR3 would fit for this calm, low-BPM song
00:19:366 (2,3) - Obviously wrong distance-snapping. Fix that

[Normal]

Use HP3 and OD4 ? HP5/OD5 looks very large for this difficulty spread, especially when the Hard diff uses HP5/OD5. And I suggest AR4~5
00:02:477 (1) - and 00:06:033 (1) - : Remove newcombo? they just look like NC-spamming
00:50:922 (1) - place where close to center more to let beginners manage the spin at ease
01:07:366 (3) - (at end) well I just realised some places like this note uses "Auto-Auto" hitsounds (instead of "Normal-Soft" hitsounds, like 00:53:588 (4) - ). Is it intended?
01:18:033 (2,3) - put into one slider like 01:17:144 (1) - ? you can make a good flow with it

[KK's Hard]

00:14:033 (8,9) - umm this section sounds very quiet to me. how about putting clap on (8)'s head and on (9)?
00:24:255 (5) - this slider sounds very off. try moving the start to 00:24:477 - and put a circle on 00:24:255 - ? Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412445 , I just moved (7) for an example of the new flow
01:00:922 (10) - remove clap, sounds excessive
01:04:255 (1,2) - Switch New combo's on-off as the vocal begins at 01:04:699 -
01:07:811 (1,5) - same to the above... depending on your taste though. By the way, the 5 note stream looks a bit too fast for this Hard diff, maybe reduce distance some way?
01:09:588 (11) - remove clap, maybe?

[Insane]

00:19:144 (2) - (reverse arrow) replace the clap into Soft +Additional Normal whistle?

[ffstar's Insane]

00:21:811 (11) - put on y:200?
01:19:811 (4) - clap on the tail?
01:20:477 (5) - this curve can be better, try to move the end point to (x:100, y:80)?
01:22:922 (2) - clap on the head

:3 good luck

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-13T05:52:14+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[ffstar's Insane]
00:21:811 (11) - put on y:200? k, and also move down 00:21:699 (10) - one grip too
01:19:811 (4) - clap on the tail? oh yea, no wonder i feel weird in that part
01:20:477 (5) - this curve can be better, try to move the end point to (x:100, y:80)? k, also moved the middle point a bit
01:22:922 (2) - clap on the head k
:3 good luck

thanks for the mod o/

updated

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Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2014-03-14T04:16:06+00:00

こんにちはー

Insane
00:17:588 (3) - change triple notes? follow back drum sound~

00:31:144 (2) - move to x296 y276?

00:32:477 (5,1) - move move! like this? :p http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415023

00:34:922 (8) - umm i think you should put note here~~ bcz guitar sound is here

KK's Hard
00:12:033 (3,4) - you can make more good branket! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415044

01:07:366 (9) - try make branket slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415045

01:18:922~01:24:144: umm i feel these notes spacing are narrow (sorry i can't explain well. my english is poor(´；ω；｀))
so this mean you should use DS1.1 or 1.2 i think

Hard
00:16:255 (4) - move to x332 y112?

00:49:366 (2) - move to x324 y60

01:05:366 (2) - add note here? bcz here is kiai part. and u should follow drum sound i think

Easy and Normal are nothing to say!

がんばれー

Meisle

158 posts

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2014-03-14T13:50:14+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[KK's Hard]
00:14:033 (8,9) - umm this section sounds very quiet to me. how about putting clap on (8)'s head and on (9)?ok,its good for me too
00:24:255 (5) - this slider sounds very off. try moving the start to 00:24:477 - and put a circle on 00:24:255 - ? Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412445 , I just moved (7) for an example of the new flowok
01:00:922 (10) - remove clap, sounds excessive sorry,i think its good to clap here
01:04:255 (1,2) - Switch New combo's on-off as the vocal begins at 01:04:699 - ok
01:07:811 (1,5) - same to the above... depending on your taste though. By the way, the 5 note stream looks a bit too fast for this Hard diff, maybe reduce distance some way?yeah,reduce the distance,but dont change the nc:3
01:09:588 (11) - remove clap, maybe?its ok here^^

thank you

Quilt wrote:
こんにちはー hi~
KK's Hard
00:12:033 (3,4) - you can make more good branket! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415044ok

01:07:366 (9) - try make branket slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415045sorry,dont want to blanket here:3

01:18:922~01:24:144: umm i feel these notes spacing are narrow (sorry i can't explain well. my english is poor(´；ω；｀))
so this mean you should use DS1.1 or 1.2 i think yes~i have changed the SVmy english is poor too(=;ェ;=)
がんばれー

thank you,try my best(＾-＾)

召唤神奇的米桶( ´･ω･`)

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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-15T08:54:40+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[General]
Soft-hitnormal sounds very quiet... lol maybe ok but just I don't like it very much xD
[Easy]
AR3 would fit for this calm, low-BPM song
00:19:366 (2,3) - Obviously wrong distance-snapping. Fix that
[Normal]
Use HP3 and OD4 ? HP5/OD5 looks very large for this difficulty spread, especially when the Hard diff uses HP5/OD5. And I suggest AR4~5 sure
00:02:477 (1) - and 00:06:033 (1) - : Remove newcombo? they just look like NC-spamming nah, 1beat1NC
00:50:922 (1) - place where close to center more to let beginners manage the spin at ease I think it's ok for normal-player.
01:07:366 (3) - (at end) well I just realised some places like this note uses "Auto-Auto" hitsounds (instead of "Normal-Soft" hitsounds, like 00:53:588 (4) - ). Is it intended? ok
01:18:033 (2,3) - put into one slider like 01:17:144 (1) - ? you can make a good flow with it i keep it now
[Insane]
00:19:144 (2) - (reverse arrow) replace the clap into Soft +Additional Normal whistle? nah, it's fine for me.
:3 good luck

Quilt wrote:
こんにちはー

Insane
00:17:588 (3) - change triple notes? follow back drum sound~ I know but i soo lazy (:3_...

00:31:144 (2) - move to x296 y276? hmm i want stack with 1

00:32:477 (5,1) - move move! like this? :p http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415023 ??

00:34:922 (8) - umm i think you should put note here~~ bcz guitar sound is here drum num1, guitar num2 lol

Hard
00:16:255 (4) - move to x332 y112? k

00:49:366 (2) - move to x324 y60 k

01:05:366 (2) - add note here? bcz here is kiai part. and u should follow drum sound i think i follow vocal here.

Easy and Normal are nothing to say!

がんばれー

thanks all ><!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-03-15T09:49:59+00:00

Random modding~

General:

-- I'm quite concerned about the soft-hitnormal. It's nearly inaudible to me.

Easy:

00:45:144 (1) - I think this NC is unnecessary.
01:04:255 (5) - (184,68) the last dot is better in flow to the next slider.

Hard:

00:20:033 (1,2) - Imo starting combo from (2) will fit the song..
01:02:922 (1) - Mind making the shape better at the first curve? Looks too sharp currently.
01:07:366 (3,4) - The rhythm doesn't sound nice imo. Maybe you can add clap at the end of (3) like 00:55:366 (4,1). That will lessen the awkwardness.

KK's Hard:

00:14:699 (11,1) - This jump is too far comparing to the overall pace of the difficulty. Please reduce spacing.
00:34:477 (7,8,1) - The spin feels too short. Rather start from 00:34:477?
01:07:922 (2,3,4) - Hitsounds are missing, which sounds bad. Add Normal-whistle to all objects.

Insane:

00:14:699 (10,11) - Straight normal-whistles in a row sounded less effective. Mind switching the hitsound of these objects to soft-clap?
00:24:255 (2) - Imo this slider is ignoring a beat at 00:24:477. This didn't felt nice to me..
00:35:811 (1,2) - Start NC from (2). It's quite weird to see this rhythm change of 00:35:588 (9,1) in a different combo imo.
01:15:588 (2,3) - I think copy-pasting a rotated (2) in the place of (3) would look aesthetically better.

ffstar's Insane:

00:36:033 (10,11) - Add hitsounds please. If not, this feels overmapped.
01:16:922 (6,1) - Finish should be at (1) instead (6) according to your pattern.

Good luck~

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-03-16T05:02:59+00:00

Hello~
From

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
挖米桶
怎么这么多diff= =
建议str2，中间的tick可以插线构建音效

[Easy]
General
00:22:033 - 这个part减星减得太厉害了，空了
Beats
01:07:811 - 还是加个note？

[Normal]
General
不错，没啥要说的，可能节奏密了一点，不过不是大问题

[Hard]
General
没啥问题，质量不错
Placement
00:16:477 (1,2) - 叠的不好看，不如把2拉开，反正1.3和1差别不大，hard嘛
Hitsound
01:00:922 (4) - 听上去没音效啊，估计你是故意的，要不然就soft whistle

[KK's Hard]
General
别的问题不大，good job
Placement
00:09:588 (5,6,7) - 准确来说我觉得这里不是很好看哈，因为本来是比较伸展的排版，而这局部缩成一团，可以考虑把6拉直
00:33:588 (5,6) - 总觉得不是很好看 example：

SPOILER

01:22:477 (3,4,5) - 拉开点，1.2x没问题
Hitsound
00:14:588 (10,11) - normal whistle
01:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - 把音效加上哈，好好听原音乐
NCs
高潮部分建议一根白线加一个nc，不然nc有点长

[Insane]
General
整体质量不错哈
Placement
00:04:255 (1,2,3) - 这里有一点坑1pc，放的有点近 example：

SPOILER

00:37:144 (4,5) - 分别ctrl+g可能会舒服一点，毕竟不是很适合跳的地方，何况flow又是反向
01:16:033 (3) - nazi：这里要对称的话似乎弧度得加一点
01:08:699 (2,3,4) - 似乎拉开一点会好些，毕竟是个高音 example：

SPOILER

Hitsound
00:43:033 (5) - 像是soft clap，再听听啊

[ffstar's Insane]
General
啊。。不知不觉又写了一篇音效论文，排列和节奏我就不太想看了，我还是没能找着你的音效的下法，在我看来是缺乏打击感而且不太配合原曲的。。抱歉啦~

Hitsound
00:14:477 (4,5,6,7) - 不知为何听着比较奇怪，也不是不能理解这音效，可能是hit太轻的原因
00:17:366 (3,4,5,6,7) - 比较奇怪的击打感，我觉得hit音“实在是”太轻了，而clap相对重，所以导致这五个音打完了感觉却像是打了两个
以上两条我的建议解决方法是改MP3，把你的clap音量减小，这方面米桶是专家
00:37:144 (4) - 太轻了，我的建议是00:36:255 - 这一段开始全部白线用clap，你听一下原音乐我觉得像是都用的clap，到00:46:922 - 为止
00:42:811 (9,10,11) - 都有clap，听一下
00:44:588 (5) - 有clap
00:46:366 (11) - ^
00:49:588 (3) - normal whistle,就是用你用的那个像snare的音效
00:49:811 (5,6) - 有clap
00:51:366 - 456 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
00:53:144 (3) - 跟上边是一样的，听着中间是clap
00:54:255 - normal whistle
00:54:922 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
00:56:811 (4) - clap
00:57:811 (2) - normal whistle
00:58:699 - ^
01:00:255 (4,6) - ^
01:01:366 (2) - ^
01:02:033 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:02:699 (8) - clap
01:04:033 (4) - clap
01:05:588 (3) - 两头normal whistle
01:06:255 - clap
01:08:033 - clap
01:08:477 (2) - normal whistle
01:09:144 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:10:699 (2) - 没有音效或者soft whistle
01:10:811 (3) - clap
01:12:033 - normal whistle
01:12:699 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:13:366 (6) - 没听清楚，像是clap，不过建议减轻
01:14:477 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:15:144 (6) - normal whistle
01:15:588 - ^
01:16:255 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:17:811 (2,3,4) - 分别是无音效（或soft whistle）、soft clap 、snare
01:18:255 - clap
01:18:699 (7,8) - clap
01:21:588 - normal whistle
01:21:811 - ^
01:22:699 - ^

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-16T07:30:10+00:00

Sonnyc's mod

Sonnyc wrote:
ffstar's Insane:

00:36:033 (10,11) - Add hitsounds please. If not, this feels overmapped. deleted (11)
01:16:922 (6,1) - Finish should be at (1) instead (6) according to your pattern. k fixed

Good luck~

thanks for the mod!

Atrue's mod

Atrue wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]
General
啊。。不知不觉又写了一篇音效论文，排列和节奏我就不太想看了，我还是没能找着你的音效的下法，在我看来是缺乏打击感而且不太配合原曲的。。抱歉啦~ 唉，我的音效设计本来就不好><，谢谢你的指导！

Hitsound
00:14:477 (4,5,6,7) - 不知为何听着比较奇怪，也不是不能理解这音效，可能是hit太轻的原因 ~~其实我没想什么，也不感觉奇怪啊~~好吧，把volumn降低了
00:17:366 (3,4,5,6,7) - 比较奇怪的击打感，我觉得hit音“实在是”太轻了，而clap相对重，所以导致这五个音打完了感觉却像是打了两个
以上两条我的建议解决方法是改MP3，把你的clap音量减小，这方面米桶是专家同上，把clap的volumn降低了
00:37:144 (4) - 太轻了，我的建议是00:36:255 - 这一段开始全部白线用clap，你听一下原音乐我觉得像是都用的clap，到00:46:922 - 为止不喜欢，有点吵
00:42:811 (9,10,11) - 都有clap，听一下嗯，fixed
00:44:588 (5) - 有clap fixed
00:46:366 (11) - ^ 有吗？@@ 我听了很多次没听到，比较像00:46:477 (12,13,14) - 这三个音
00:49:588 (3) - normal whistle,就是用你用的那个像snare的音效哇！这个好！nice!!!
00:49:811 (5,6) - 有clap 有点吵，比较喜欢我原本的
00:51:366 - 456 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare 哦，比较好听哦
00:53:144 (3) - 跟上边是一样的，听着中间是clap k
00:54:255 - normal whistle k，看了这个也顺便加了 00:50:699 (2) -
00:54:922 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
00:56:811 (4) - clap k
00:57:811 (2) - normal whistle k
00:58:699 - ^ k
01:00:255 (4,6) - ^ k，不过这个没加也没差吧？clap的声音太大了 ._.
01:01:366 (2) - ^ k
01:02:033 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:02:699 (8) - clap 之前加了snare，现在多一个clap好奇怪，换成clap也挺怪的
01:04:033 (4) - clap ok
01:05:588 (3) - 两头normal whistle k
01:06:255 - clap ~~个人觉得没有必要，但还是加了~~改变了想法不加了
01:08:033 - clap k
01:08:477 (2) - normal whistle k
01:09:144 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:10:699 (2) - 没有音效或者soft whistle 没音效比较好
01:10:811 (3) - clap changed
01:12:033 - normal whistle k
01:12:699 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:13:366 (6) - 没听清楚，像是clap，不过建议减轻保留
01:14:477 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:15:144 (6) - normal whistle 保留
01:15:588 - ^ k
01:16:255 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:17:811 (2,3,4) - 分别是无音效（或soft whistle）、soft clap 、snare k
01:18:255 - clap ...好吧
01:18:699 (7,8) - clap k
01:21:588 - normal whistle k
01:21:811 - ^ k
01:22:699 - ^ k

非常感谢！！！

edit:

1PSA's mod

1PSA wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]
00:05:588 (5) - 这里这样我觉得更好看？应该没什么大碍
00:22:033 (1,2,3) - 弄成正三角怎么样？不了
00:54:033 (1) - ^,如果改的话后面一串也要改。这是改好的代码你的code是我原本的code o.o 不过你给了我一点灵感，改了一下
code
00:35:144 (8) - 这个slider有点奇怪？稍微改了一下，应该也没什么大碍
00:44:699 (6) - 下移一格更好吧，毕竟左边的slider结束点y为67？这个应该没必要
01:01:366 (2,4,5) - 2,5和4,5有点不等距等距？^
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？暂时保留

谢谢mod！

ids's mod

ids wrote:
嗯，我学着说一点吧
ffstar's Insane

00:01:922 - 这个地方需不需要压下蓝线？什么意思？slider在蓝线？应该不对吧

MINTONG!!!!

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1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2014-03-16T07:46:16+00:00

喜欢伽利略的歌~~~

[ffstar's Insane]

00:05:588 (5) - 这里这样我觉得更好看？
0.0
00:22:033 (1,2,3) - 弄成正三角怎么样？

00:54:033 (1) - ^,如果改的话后面一串也要改。这是改好的代码

0.0

296,212,54033,6,0,L|204:212,2,90,4|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,288,54699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,320,54922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,320,55033,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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72,320,55588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,56,56477,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:35:144 (8) - 这个slider有点奇怪？
00:44:699 (6) - 下移一格更好吧，毕竟左边的slider结束点y为67？
01:01:366 (2,4,5) - 2,5和4,5有点不等距等距？
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？

[Insane]

00:13:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星歪了？
00:21:144 (2,3,4,5,6) - 没包好1？
00:22:922 (4) - 没包好3？
00:27:366 (1,2,3) - 间距不等？还是故意的？
00:34:477 (7) - ^
00:36:255 (2) - 要不要考虑包住9？
01:16:033 (3) - 用2旋转180°做3怎么样？
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？

[kk's Hard]

00:49:588 (10) - 可不可以考虑换成两个slider？且它和下一个note离得太远会让玩家判断不出这个slider何时结束？
01:02:922 (5) - 感觉不太美观？
01:17:144 (1) - ^

还有同上面的音效
[Hard]

00:06:033 (3) - 没包好？
01:02:922 (1) - 这里不弄成正方形吗？
音效同上

[Normal]

没......

[Easy]

没。。

所以我觉得音效可以在丰富一点啥的...比如hitfinish可以不用原始的，开始那块也可以再加一些音效。

以上~~~~~
渣mod请随意忽略....

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-03-16T13:43:29+00:00

嗯，我学着说一点吧
ffstar's Insane

00:01:922 - 这个地方需不需要压下蓝线？

Insane

00:44:033 (2,3,4) - 两个音分开了，不是太和谐
01:01:144 (1,2,3) - 和上面一样

KK's Hard

00:25:144 (7) - 这里有压，但是前面类似的00:00:477 - 00:04:033 - 00:07:588 - 是空的，需要修吗？
00:49:588 (10) - 断成两个感觉好点？
01:05:033 - 滑条拉到这里？

Hard

00:36:255 (1,2,3) - 感觉需要重新分下音
01:11:366 (4,5,6,7) - 其他类似的地方用的是短折00:14:255 (5) - 00:49:811 (4) - 不知道是不是多余的话

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-03-16T14:48:48+00:00

Mostly are fixed, thanks!
Sorry i didn't reply anything, because My network is really slow + little lazy *.*
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