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Lust


Here is your mod as requested!

Beginner


Very clean beginner!
  1. 00:18:695 (1,2,1) - Here, you can use the two slider bodies to blanket (2)!
  2. 00:24:029 (1) - Move the second to last slider point to 336:232 so that it blankets 00:26:029 (2) - better
  3. 00:37:362 (1) - This slider goes up pretty high, in fact its touching my life meter! It will be best to move this down
  4. 00:41:362 (2,1,2) - Kind of awkward flow. That curve from the starting slider goes downwards in to (1), and then straight linear flow up to (2)! I would try and put a bit of a curve between (1) and (2) so that it will play better.
  5. 00:51:195 (1,1) - Two spinners in a row in a beginner difficulty is definitely a no no. Especially since the second spinner is a bit faster than the first. Newer players need to take time to realize what is going on, then to start spinning. Afterwards they will be exhausted. I suggest removing the first spinner and mapping it out. There is a clear rhythm that you can follow in order to map it!
  6. 00:59:193 (1,2) - You can move these down so that (2)'s slider end can stack with 00:58:527 (3) - 's hitburst
    01:01:860 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
  7. 01:04:526 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
  8. 01:05:860 (2) - Wouldn't it be best if this was stacked with 01:03:193 (2) - 's hitburst? You can move the slider before it over so that it can fit
  9. 01:23:860 (1) - You had a nice triangle fan shape pattern with the previous objects, so why have this random slider like this? Try and arrange it so it doesn't appear so awkwardly.

Easy


Just needs some cleaning up, the blankets need some work though, so be sure to check through all of them with the approach circles of the objects that are being blanketed!
  1. 00:13:362 (1,2) - (2)'s slider body can better blanket (1)'s slider end
  2. 00:14:695 (2) - The slider end here doesn't really land on anything and in turn, it sounds really loud! I would use a green line to lower the volume of the hitsound or have the slider end here 00:15:029 -
  3. 00:21:362 (1,2) - (Nazi) Blanket is only slightly off
  4. 00:22:695 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved
  5. 00:23:695 (4,1) - ^
  6. 00:26:695 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:32:695 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:39:695 (3,1) - ^
  9. 00:44:029 (3,1) - Ah, it would be best for (3) to perfectly blanket (1). The way it is now does not look so good.
  10. 00:46:695 (4) - Curve this slider more so that its slider body better blankets 00:46:029 (3) - 's slider body
  11. 01:07:193 (1) - 387:69 so that it is being pefectly stacked underneath 01:05:860 (4) - 's hitburst
  12. 01:21:026 (3,3) - This is very confusing. The entirety of the second slider is being covered by the first! That is very hard to read, especially for an easy difficulty with a lower AR
  13. 01:23:860 (1,3) - Avoid the overlap with the hitburst. Try having (3)'s slider end stack with (1)'s hitburst

Normal


Play wise, there is nothing too wrong here, but overall it seems very messy and cluttered
  • 00:25:529 (4,5) - Check the spacing between these two, they are kind of far :x
  1. 00:25:029 (3,4) - Having (4) jammed up at this corner makes things hard to read and cluttered
  2. 00:42:195 (5) - 395:234 so that it is stacked perfectly underneath 00:40:862 (3) - 's hitburst
  3. 00:46:529 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved
  4. 01:02:360 (2,4) - Try to avoid this overlap
  5. 01:03:026 (3,4,5,6) - Linear flow like this is boring and unintuitive, and is actually harder to play and read! Try curving the objects in to the direction you want the players to go
  6. 01:13:026 (2) - Have this blanket 01:13:693 (3) - for a crisper and prettier pattern
  7. 01:19:026 (3,1) - I would avoid the small overlap

captin's Hard


Looks and plays good for me, although in some cases some passive sliders do not fit well with the rhythm like these two 01:00:360 (5,7) -

Complex


Pretty sure /Complex/ is an unrankable diff name, rename to Insane. The main issue here is 3/4 sliders when they should instead be 1/2. If you listen closely, they aren't needed to be 3/4 and turns the play awkward. Lots of 100 sliders will happen. Last issue I have a gripe about is the 1/4 spacing in areas. Its best to keep most 1/4 spacing as consistent as possible, or else it will be hard to read. Make sure to check through the difficulty for such things!
  1. 00:09:862 (7,1) - The forced blanket here can be improved
  2. 00:11:195 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
  3. 00:20:029 (1,2) - The 1/4 distance here is quite far, and to be honest, shouldn't be 1/4 at all! 00:20:029 (1) - should end at 00:20:195 -
  4. 00:20:695 (3,4) - Same thing here, (3) should not be a 3/4 slider
  5. 00:21:362 (1,2) - and here as well
  6. 00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cool pattern, but again the 3/4 sliders should actually be 1/2s
  7. 00:27:195 (3,4) - 1/4 distance is again huge, but if you turn (3) to 1/2 slider it will be fine
  8. 00:27:695 (5,6) - Same 3/4 issue. (5) should become 1/2 slider
  9. 00:29:362 (1,2) - (1) should be a 1/2 slider
  10. 00:30:529 (5,6) - 1/4 distance is huge, but then again (5) should be 1/2 slider
  11. 00:30:862 (6,9) - This is very hard to read and flow is kind of awkward.
  12. 00:39:029 (2) - 96:239 so that its slider end is stacked underneath 00:38:362 (3) - 's hitburst
captin1
hmmm I think those kinds of sliders are alright since they fit well with the vocal, there are a lot of accents on the upbeats. thanks for checking tho!

also the 3/4 flow in complex is what makes it so cool, it's a different style of mapping, doesn't mean it's an issue
Faust
Thought I'd add something.

Ought to be " sasakure.UK - SeventH-HeaveN feat. Hatsune Miku "
Original song title: " SeventH‐HeaveN feat. 初音ミク "

If you make the changes, remove Hatsune Miku from tags.
You could add in Genjitsu Aesop or since that's one of the album this is featured on.
captin1

Faust wrote:

Thought I'd add something.

Ought to be " sasakure.UK - SeventH-HeaveN feat. Hatsune Miku "
Original song title: " SeventH‐HeaveN feat. 初音ミク "

If you make the changes, remove Hatsune Miku from tags.
You could add in Genjitsu Aesop or since that's one of the album this is featured on.
aren't we not allowed to have vocaloid names in the title for copyright reasons with crypton? :/ imo this is the weird gray area that hasn't been addressed
Faust
They aren't allowed to be used under Artist, she is listed under the song title however.

That's the actual title of the track, in any case. Nothing is going to happen, and there is no gray area.
captin1
ah alright, because maps like this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72812 are in the same boat where the original title had feat. Hatsune Miku but was ranked without it, guess that's why it was confusing
Topic Starter
_koinuri
The soundtrack I got for the game Seventh Dragon 2020 actually had feat. Hatsune Miku on the artist, so I'm not really sure which one is right..

I will add Genjitsu Aesop to tag though.
captin1
http://puu.sh/7y9By.png this is true, shows up on the mp3 details

oh the eternal drama of map titles
Lust

Faust wrote:

Thought I'd add something.

Ought to be " sasakure.UK - SeventH-HeaveN feat. Hatsune Miku "
Original song title: " SeventH‐HeaveN feat. 初音ミク "

If you make the changes, remove Hatsune Miku from tags.
You could add in Genjitsu Aesop or since that's one of the album this is featured on.
just to add, do not add feat. Hatsune Miku to the artist. there has been numerous discussions about it, and the consensus has been to not put vocaloids in the artist
Winek

I warned everyone about my homo banner

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

Just needs some cleaning up, the blankets need some work though, so be sure to check through all of them with the approach circles of the objects that are being blanketed! I should start making a map without any blankets :(
I know that feel bro


General

omg beziers again
You should use any program you want to cut Mp3 at 01:29:859 .

Begginer

00:13:362 (1) - Even if this shape looks creative, it fits more Easy then Begginer, as newbies might get confused in the shape, really. Look at how the slidertick are. Maybe he'll get confused looking at them and going straight instead? Make your choice abou this shape.
00:24:029 (1,1) - Like other parts, you should make them both similar, even if it's really nazied.
00:34:695 (1) - The shape of this sliders feels completely out. While all other are somehow simple curves, this one is like bezier different.
00:48:029 (1) - I know you can improve the shape. It look a bit tiltedt right now, wheter on purpose or not, doesn't fit the best. "Nazi"!
01:15:193 (1,2) - I think the shape is currently confusing. Try this and copypaste if you want. It's just the shape, a bit confusing, x.x . 01:17:860 (1,1,1,1) - Since there are not even SV change, I'd suggest you make 2 combos instead of 4 for this part. The begginer can catch this easily, the part isn't really hard, trust me, and thus do not really need new combo.

Easy

Maybe Hp 3 a bit too much? With high BPM and notes on most 1/1, it can be hard for players to catch up.. So i'd suggest 2.

00:22:695 (3) - I'd rather do something like circle + 1/1 slider instead. ; It catch more the vocals. Also the little cranky sound is like limited in comparison to 00:21:362 (1) and others.
00:25:362 (2) - This shape ; I won't say it's beier, but really, really, it doesn't look pretty, yknooooowwww.. Plus, you have a good blanket opportunity. If you want to actually apply this change, you should also change others similar shapes.
00:38:362 (2) - You might want to change the notes to a larger 2/1 + reverse to fits more the vocals that actually end at 00:39:695 . Also the finish on the tail, it seems like out and yes would fits much better as a 00:39:695 . Tho I know it might create spacing problems, so yeah. Make your decision!
00:51:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even if there is an easier difficulty, this still stay a bit.. Hard to read for newbs. But i guess it's okay with a Begginer difficulty, you was thoughtful about newbies, and that's good.
01:11:193 (3) - I'd rather start it at 01:11:026 instead, where there is some vocals, and also the blank space doesn't fit. I know it would cause some distance snap problems ; So here is my solution: Of course you'll have to move the other.. so.. Normally doing something around here should follow distance snap.

Normal

Reveiw your diff, there are many stacks fail liek 00:29:362 (1,2) . Also I really love that hallenging normal, where it's completely different from easy, and greatly challenging.
00:37:529 (2,3) - I'd try following the long vocal hold it has, with a long slider. Tho the acutal isn't bad, and i know having a long slider will only be ugly and gets DS problems, but you can still consider it.
00:51:029 (3) - This 1/2 chain is very long even how i see normals difficulty, so I'd rather remove the note.
00:58:193 (4,5) - These two shapes are like outta the place. While 00:56:527 (1,2,3) got curves, these 2 bump in completely straight. what I mean ; Look at 01:00:360 (4,5) . I guess it's okay to have them straight, there is a little space between the notes. But for the current notes, There are no space, it just jump directly to straight. Yes, pure nazi.
00:56:527 (1,2,3) - I'd just tell you about your hitsounds, they are kinda weird with the notes placement. While you try following the BGM with the hitsounds with claps, you place notes following the vocals, completely breaking Clap chain.

captin's Hard

By the way someone else who requested another mod from me.. to another map with a GD with you. captin everywhere!
00:33:195 (6) - I know i'll be repeating myself, but are you sure about that shape? I (think) i know that 00:21:029 (7) was meant to be a body blanket with 00:21:529 (1), and it doesn't look bad either, but for 00:33:195 (6), the anchor is so stuck and overlapped by the slider, I'd prefer these shape here 00:23:195 (5) .
00:25:195 (4,5,6) - Lemme give you a sugestion, just to make prettier, so it's kinda unuseful. Very clear diff, nice to play.

Complex

I have the same opinion as Lust's. The name doesn't fit with this spread. I'd rather see a simple "Insane", but again it's only something choosen by personnal choice. If you had some Begginer / Novice and Advanced, i'll understand more, but the diff name just fits outta place.
I don,t know if the hitsounds are the same in all your diffspread, (exept GD) but whatever.
Like lust also said, Too much 3/4 that doesn't fit such as 00:20:695 (3,4) . Some does fits and shouldn't be touched, like: 00:18:695 (1,2) - Where we clearly hear the little "cranky" sound or whatever. And again looking at 00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) , who doesn't fits much well... Doing this just make the map worse, so i'd always avoid to do tiz.
Again, rechec for little stack errors like this 00:46:529 (4,5) baka :lol:
I'm not too good mapping timing stuff with Insanes, so i'll just try improving the apperence.
00:09:862 (7) - There is clearly a note here, but none at 00:12:529 . Lawgic pls
01:08:360 (1) - I thought these shapes were like to make blankets? Whhen they are spawned randomly like that, I don't see the logic..
01:00:860 (2) - The flow get broken here because of straight note with double anchor, while you could make a good body blanket with 01:00:526 (1) with a little work.

Dat is all for my crappy mod! Sorry if it's completely unuseful!
Winek
Wait what happened while i was modding
Topic Starter
_koinuri
Sorry for kind of late reply, it's like a page behind now x_x

Lust wrote:



Here is your mod as requested!

Beginner


Very clean beginner! Thanks!
  1. 00:18:695 (1,2,1) - Here, you can use the two slider bodies to blanket (2)! That's what I was trying to do, I think they're blanketed a bit better now
  2. 00:24:029 (1) - Move the second to last slider point to 336:232 so that it blankets 00:26:029 (2) - better
  3. 00:37:362 (1) - This slider goes up pretty high, in fact its touching my life meter! It will be best to move this down
  4. 00:41:362 (2,1,2) - Kind of awkward flow. That curve from the starting slider goes downwards in to (1), and then straight linear flow up to (2)! I would try and put a bit of a curve between (1) and (2) so that it will play better.
  5. 00:51:195 (1,1) - Two spinners in a row in a beginner difficulty is definitely a no no. Especially since the second spinner is a bit faster than the first. Newer players need to take time to realize what is going on, then to start spinning. Afterwards they will be exhausted. I suggest removing the first spinner and mapping it out. There is a clear rhythm that you can follow in order to map it! Yeah, that's what I thought too, but I really have no idea how to move to that part >.>. The song changes time signature at the red tick right there, so I'll need to put a note 1/2 away from that slider to map a strong beat, which is definitely not beginner friendly considering everything else is 2 white tick apart. If I ignore it, then this strong beat is ignored and feels so empty. I also tried shortening the slider before that, but that also feels empty. Couldn't think of anything else, I decided that having a spinner there is the best solution. I guess combining it to a one giant spinner would be good. I'm open for a way to map this weird beat if you have any solution x_x
  6. 00:59:193 (1,2) - You can move these down so that (2)'s slider end can stack with 00:58:527 (3) - 's hitburst
    01:01:860 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
  7. 01:04:526 (1,2) - Blanket can be improvedI think these 2 blankets look better now, can't seem to find the perfect spot for them though
  8. 01:05:860 (2) - Wouldn't it be best if this was stacked with 01:03:193 (2) - 's hitburst? You can move the slider before it over so that it can fit
  9. 01:23:860 (1) - You had a nice triangle fan shape pattern with the previous objects, so why have this random slider like this? Try and arrange it so it doesn't appear so awkwardly.

Easy


Just needs some cleaning up, the blankets need some work though, so be sure to check through all of them with the approach circles of the objects that are being blanketed! I should start making a map without any blankets :(
  1. 00:13:362 (1,2) - (2)'s slider body can better blanket (1)'s slider end
  2. 00:14:695 (2) - The slider end here doesn't really land on anything and in turn, it sounds really loud! I would use a green line to lower the volume of the hitsound or have the slider end here 00:15:029 -
  3. 00:21:362 (1,2) - (Nazi) Blanket is only slightly off
  4. 00:22:695 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved
  5. 00:23:695 (4,1) - ^
  6. 00:26:695 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:32:695 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:39:695 (3,1) - ^
  9. 00:44:029 (3,1) - Ah, it would be best for (3) to perfectly blanket (1). The way it is now does not look so good.
  10. 00:46:695 (4) - Curve this slider more so that its slider body better blankets 00:46:029 (3) - 's slider body Someone teach me how to blanket slider bodies
  11. 01:07:193 (1) - 387:69 so that it is being pefectly stacked underneath 01:05:860 (4) - 's hitburst
  12. 01:21:026 (3,3) - This is very confusing. The entirety of the second slider is being covered by the first! That is very hard to read, especially for an easy difficulty with a lower AR Hmm, the slider doesn't appear until the first one disappeared even on the editor which seems like they have lower AR, but I'll make it more noticeable to be on the safe side
  13. 01:23:860 (1,3) - Avoid the overlap with the hitburst. Try having (3)'s slider end stack with (1)'s hitburst I remapped this part because the slider wouldn't fit after I moved this whole part from moving the last stacked sliders

Normal


Play wise, there is nothing too wrong here, but overall it seems very messy and cluttered My Normal map = cluttered/high overlaps. I personally don't think it's that messy though o:
  • 00:25:529 (4,5) - Check the spacing between these two, they are kind of far :x
    but furthest to the right have plenty of room for you to be on that starting position,
    and then the end covers almost half of the next slider. I don't think the jump is that difficult. I don't really want to break that stack.
  1. 00:25:029 (3,4) - Having (4) jammed up at this corner makes things hard to read and cluttered I tried dropping it down so it's not at the corner anymore, hope that clears up a little bit
  2. 00:42:195 (5) - 395:234 so that it is stacked perfectly underneath 00:40:862 (3) - 's hitburst
  3. 00:46:529 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved
  4. 01:02:360 (2,4) - Try to avoid this overlap
  5. 01:03:026 (3,4,5,6) - Linear flow like this is boring and unintuitive, and is actually harder to play and read! Try curving the objects in to the direction you want the players to go Like this?
  6. 01:13:026 (2) - Have this blanket 01:13:693 (3) - for a crisper and prettier pattern
  7. 01:19:026 (3,1) - I would avoid the small overlap

Complex


Pretty sure /Complex/ is an unrankable diff name, rename to Insane. The main issue here is 3/4 sliders when they should instead be 1/2. If you listen closely, they aren't needed to be 3/4 and turns the play awkward. Lots of 100 sliders will happen. Last issue I have a gripe about is the 1/4 spacing in areas. Its best to keep most 1/4 spacing as consistent as possible, or else it will be hard to read. Make sure to check through the difficulty for such things!
I thought the diff name just has to be clear (like standing/walking/running mapset is okay), and not something like 0108 or Skystar. Beginner/Easy/Normal/Hard/Complex seems like a logical diff name
Yeah, I probably overused the 3/4 a little bit, but I think most of them fits pretty well with the music because the words in vocal sounds like they kind of flow into each other to me (that's what I love about sasakure.UK's Vocaloid songs). I'll go back and remove some that kind of feel stretched myself. I don't think most of the 1/4 jumps are much problem because it's not difficult hitting them because of the slider leniency, and also not hard to read because these 3/4 sliders are supposed to be 1/2 so the next note is easy to tell. I didn't have anybody misread the 1/4 jumps when I asked for testplays.
  1. 00:09:862 (7,1) - The forced blanket here can be improved So many blanket errors I would've never found by myself, how do you find them x_x
  2. 00:11:195 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
  3. 00:20:029 (1,2) - The 1/4 distance here is quite far, and to be honest, shouldn't be 1/4 at all! 00:20:029 (1) - should end at 00:20:195 -
  4. 00:20:695 (3,4) - Same thing here, (3) should not be a 3/4 slider
  5. 00:21:362 (1,2) - and here as well
  6. 00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cool pattern, but again the 3/4 sliders should actually be 1/2s
  7. 00:27:195 (3,4) - 1/4 distance is again huge, but if you turn (3) to 1/2 slider it will be fine
  8. 00:27:695 (5,6) - Same 3/4 issue. (5) should become 1/2 slider
  9. 00:29:362 (1,2) - (1) should be a 1/2 slider
  10. 00:30:529 (5,6) - 1/4 distance is huge, but then again (5) should be 1/2 slider
  11. 00:30:862 (6,9) - This is very hard to read and flow is kind of awkward. I kind of like the little pattern I did here, but I guess the flow is awkward :(. Will change
  12. 00:39:029 (2) - 96:239 so that its slider end is stacked underneath 00:38:362 (3) - 's hitburst
Going to look over the whole difficulty again and fix some things according to these mods
Thanks for modding! fixed all I didn't reply (except Complex, I kind of want to spend more time polishing this). I did my best fixing the blankets but they never seem to be perfect :(
Topic Starter
_koinuri

Winek wrote:


I warned everyone about my homo banner

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

Just needs some cleaning up, the blankets need some work though, so be sure to check through all of them with the approach circles of the objects that are being blanketed! I should start making a map without any blankets :(
I know that feel bro


General

omg beziers again
You should use any program you want to cut Mp3 at 01:29:859 . I was kind of scared that mp3 will lose some quality unless I do some magical tricks to cut the mp3. I'll go research a bit to find the best way to cut mp3s and do it that way, just in case.

Begginer

00:13:362 (1) - Even if this shape looks creative, it fits more Easy then Begginer, as newbies might get confused in the shape, really. Look at how the slidertick are. Maybe he'll get confused looking at them and going straight instead? Make your choice abou this shape.
00:24:029 (1,1) - Like other parts, you should make them both similar, even if it's really nazied. I guess I should keep that symmetry kind of thing since that part sounds similar
00:34:695 (1) - The shape of this sliders feels completely out. While all other are somehow simple curves, this one is like bezier different. It was actually part of of a long slider but I decided to separate them into a slider and circle to fit the song better. It does look weird by itself, fixed
00:48:029 (1) - I know you can improve the shape. It look a bit tiltedt right now, wheter on purpose or not, doesn't fit the best. "Nazi"!
01:15:193 (1,2) - I think the shape is currently confusing. Try this and copypaste if you want. It's just the shape, a bit confusing, x.x . I like mine better, feels like it can turn around with the diagonal flow better
01:17:860 (1,1,1,1) - Since there are not even SV change, I'd suggest you make 2 combos instead of 4 for this part. The begginer can catch this easily, the part isn't really hard, trust me, and thus do not really need new combo.

Easy

Maybe Hp 3 a bit too much? With high BPM and notes on most 1/1, it can be hard for players to catch up.. So i'd suggest 2. That would be the same setting as Beginner :(

00:22:695 (3) - I'd rather do something like circle + 1/1 slider instead. ; It catch more the vocals. Also the little cranky sound is like limited in comparison to 00:21:362 (1) and others. That does sound better
00:25:362 (2) - This shape ; I won't say it's beier, but really, really, it doesn't look pretty, yknooooowwww.. Plus, you have a good blanket opportunity. If you want to actually apply this change, you should also change others similar shapes. I like this shape. It matches that 8bit sound imo. I tried making a little contrast between this shape of slider and the repeat slider right before it. The repeat sliders are mapped to the pretty high pitched sound so they're perfect curves and blankets, while the long sliders maps low pitch sounds and other "left overs" so they curve around with sharp turns.
00:38:362 (2) - You might want to change the notes to a larger 2/1 + reverse to fits more the vocals that actually end at 00:39:695 . Also the finish on the tail, it seems like out and yes would fits much better as a 00:39:695 . Tho I know it might create spacing problems, so yeah. Make your decision! This part is mapped to the little beep sound to separate the sections a bit and break the feel of repetitiveness
00:51:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even if there is an easier difficulty, this still stay a bit.. Hard to read for newbs. But i guess it's okay with a Begginer difficulty, you was thoughtful about newbies, and that's good. Yeah, I thought it might be a bit hard to read, but I mapped this Easy to be harder to balance out Beginner diff
01:11:193 (3) - I'd rather start it at 01:11:026 instead, where there is some vocals, and also the blank space doesn't fit. I know it would cause some distance snap problems ; So here is my solution: Of course you'll have to move the other.. so.. Normally doing something around here should follow distance snap.Hmm, I'm actually not really sure about this. I wanted this little part to be mapped to some other background sounds like how I did in Complex so it feels different. I also wanted a way to increase the difficulty of Easy a bit by syncopating the sound so it won't be just a "1/1 Beginner". Going to see what other modders might say about this part.

Normal

Reveiw your diff, there are many stacks fail liek 00:29:362 (1,2) . Also I really love that hallenging normal, where it's completely different from easy, and greatly challenging. Stacks are my 2nd worst enemy. Will check them all
00:37:529 (2,3) - I'd try following the long vocal hold it has, with a long slider. Tho the acutal isn't bad, and i know having a long slider will only be ugly and gets DS problems, but you can still consider it.
00:51:029 (3) - This 1/2 chain is very long even how i see normals difficulty, so I'd rather remove the note. Though I agree that this chain is pretty long, I don't want to remove this note because it maps the vocal. Feels empty without it
00:58:193 (4,5) - These two shapes are like outta the place. While 00:56:527 (1,2,3) got curves, these 2 bump in completely straight. what I mean ; Look at 01:00:360 (4,5) . I guess it's okay to have them straight, there is a little space between the notes. But for the current notes, There are no space, it just jump directly to straight. Yes, pure nazi. The curved slider looks pretty cool
00:56:527 (1,2,3) - I'd just tell you about your hitsounds, they are kinda weird with the notes placement. While you try following the BGM with the hitsounds with claps, you place notes following the vocals, completely breaking Clap chain.It's actually the exact same hitsound patterns as Complex as far as I know, and I really like this hitsound pattern. I put a lot of thought in this when I mapped Complex and tried to reflect it in all difficulties. It might be bad but it was the best I could do to hitsound this cool kiai part. The missing clap is on purpose because I find it sound better without it.

Complex

I have the same opinion as Lust's. The name doesn't fit with this spread. I'd rather see a simple "Insane", but again it's only something choosen by personnal choice. If you had some Begginer / Novice and Advanced, i'll understand more, but the diff name just fits outta place. I actually have a good reason for naming my difficulties "Complex", but it's a bit long (well not really) and I don't really feel like explaining the whole story on how I started using it here, so I'm just going to say that I like this difficulty name because it's unique, pretty much only applies to me (like one of those 0108/Skystar names), and prefer it here because it makes sense and is rankable. One of the mod even suggested AR10, that's how complex and hard to read my maps are :D (probably not a good thing but oh well)
I don,t know if the hitsounds are the same in all your diffspread, (exept GD) but whatever. Well beginner and Easy have slightly different hitsounds because I don't have enough red ticks on those diff to map out these hitsounds, but it generally have similar hitsound structures on all diff. At least I tried making them the same
Like lust also said, Too much 3/4 that doesn't fit such as 00:20:695 (3,4) . Some does fits and shouldn't be touched, like: 00:18:695 (1,2) - Where we clearly hear the little "cranky" sound or whatever. And again looking at 00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) , who doesn't fits much well... Doing this just make the map worse, so i'd always avoid to do tiz. Yeah, I'm slowly deleting some uncomfortable ones. I don't really want to remove that one though, I like that pattern and I wanted that part to be different from the repeating part before, to be a bit more speedy ish. And am I the only one who kind of hear faint note at the end of that high pitched note part which is what I tried to map? It kind of sounds like x----x-x----x-x----x to me, where x is the sound and - is the no sound, 1/4 beat. Maybe I'm just imagining things, Idk
Again, rechec for little stack errors like this 00:46:529 (4,5) baka :lol: I'll try
I'm not too good mapping timing stuff with Insanes, so i'll just try improving the apperence.
00:09:862 (7) - There is clearly a note here, but none at 00:12:529 . Lawgic pls Aw someone actually noticed. I figured out after a while that it should have a note there, but I couldn't really come up with a place to put the note. I guess I'll try forcing a triangle here.
01:08:360 (1) - I thought these shapes were like to make blankets? Whhen they are spawned randomly like that, I don't see the logic.. I like using this slider shape when I want to give more straight flow to the map, but want a curve to go with the vocal or some other instrument a bit more.
01:00:860 (2) - The flow get broken here because of straight note with double anchor, while you could make a good body blanket with 01:00:526 (1) with a little work.I tried curving it but it doesn't feel as good to me D:

Dat is all for my crappy mod! Sorry if it's completely unuseful! It was very useful :)
Thanks for modding! All blank ones are applied.
captin1

Winek wrote:


I warned everyone about my homo banner

captin's Hard

By the way someone else who requested another mod from me.. to another map with a GD with you. captin everywhere! ;p
00:33:195 (6) - I know i'll be repeating myself, but are you sure about that shape? I (think) i know that 00:21:029 (7) was meant to be a body blanket with 00:21:529 (1), and it doesn't look bad either, but for 00:33:195 (6), the anchor is so stuck and overlapped by the slider, I'd prefer these shape here 00:23:195 (5) . sure
00:25:195 (4,5,6) - Lemme give you a sugestion, just to make prettier, so it's kinda unuseful. i think it's fine as is Very clear diff, nice to play.

Dat is all for my crappy mod! Sorry if it's completely unuseful!
thanks~

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[Seraphin]
hi fuck you
complexxxxxx

00:10:029 (8) - no pls this just feel weird
00:12:529 (6) - smth liek x448 y96
00:15:362 (7) - why increace spacing here? this is not a kick point or anything wwwww
00:18:029 (7) - ^
00:18:362 (8) - so earlier you used 0.2x spacing on this, now you use 1.3x?
00:19:362 (3,4,5,1) - redesign this pattern, plays awkward
00:21:029 (5) - come on you know you can do something creative and fun with this
00:23:362 (4,5,6) - weird
00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're just trying to be symmetrical and shit but come on this looks weird as shit and is confusing
00:27:529 (4) - spacing
00:28:029 (6) - remove finish, way too hard for such a soft point in soft song
00:32:029 (1) - reposition this slider
00:37:362 (3) - same as earlier, or if not at least add to 00:37:862 (3) -
00:45:029 (9) - ctrl+g
00:45:029 (9) - ^
00:53:195 (1,2) - ew
01:12:526 (1) - reposition

this is 100% best mod ever
i know
i give amazing reason for suggest

no kd
Topic Starter
_koinuri

[Seraphin] wrote:

hi fuck you
complexxxxxx Hi

00:10:029 (8) - no pls this just feel weird Weird how? I don't really feel anything o:
00:12:529 (6) - smth liek x448 y96 ok
00:15:362 (7) - why increace spacing here? this is not a kick point or anything wwwww Spacing doesn't exist in my Complex difficulties. It's all about the pretty patterns.
00:18:029 (7) - ^
00:18:362 (8) - so earlier you used 0.2x spacing on this, now you use 1.3x? I changed it to .2x
00:19:362 (3,4,5,1) - redesign this pattern, plays awkward I thought it was because I removed a circle and I wasn't used to it. It's harder to read now though
00:21:029 (5) - come on you know you can do something creative and fun with this Maybe, but I don't really want to break anything here. They're all aligned all perfectly the way I want them to
00:23:362 (4,5,6) - weird My map is weird
00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're just trying to be symmetrical and shit but come on this looks weird as shit and is confusing I like making my maps confusing. I think it looks cool
00:27:529 (4) - spacing I think I "taught" the players enough for them to know that it's a 1/4 jump from all the part before that, so it's readable. The jump isn't that hard either.
00:28:029 (6) - remove finish, way too hard for such a soft point in soft song Yay finally a mod about hitsounds. I'm terrible with hitsounds so I want more people to comment about them
00:32:029 (1) - reposition this slider But my stacks
00:37:362 (3) - same as earlier, or if not at least add to 00:37:862 (3) I think Easy diff is easier to visualize what I did at this part. No finish at 00:37:862 (3). I agree it's a bit loud though. I'll lower the volume.
00:45:029 (9) - ctrl+g
00:45:029 (9) - ^ So ctrl+g back to original slider?
00:53:195 (1,2) - ew Yeah, I really hate how I mapped 00:52:695 (2,1,2). I think I'll look for a way to map them nicer.
01:12:526 (1) - reposition Not sure what you wanted me to do here but I repositioned a bit so it looks better

this is 100% best mod ever
i know
i give amazing reason for suggest

no kd Here's your kd. You have enough blues replies from me for one, I think
Thanks for modding!
[Seraphin]

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

[Seraphin] wrote:

hi fuck you
complexxxxxx Hi

00:10:029 (8) - no pls this just feel weird Weird how? I don't really feel anything o: just snap l-r is weird mane
00:12:529 (6) - smth liek x448 y96 ok
00:15:362 (7) - why increace spacing here? this is not a kick point or anything wwwww Spacing doesn't exist in my Complex difficulties. It's all about the pretty patterns. stop trying to be kirby, your artmapping sucks
00:18:029 (7) - ^
00:18:362 (8) - so earlier you used 0.2x spacing on this, now you use 1.3x? I changed it to .2x
00:19:362 (3,4,5,1) - redesign this pattern, plays awkward I thought it was because I removed a circle and I wasn't used to it. It's harder to read now though
00:21:029 (5) - come on you know you can do something creative and fun with this Maybe, but I don't really want to break anything here. They're all aligned all perfectly the way I want them to :(
00:23:362 (4,5,6) - weird My map is weird so fix it
00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're just trying to be symmetrical and shit but come on this looks weird as shit and is confusing I like making my maps confusing. I think it looks cool fuck off confusing is not good or cool
00:27:529 (4) - spacing I think I "taught" the players enough for them to know that it's a 1/4 jump from all the part before that, so it's readable. The jump isn't that hard either.
00:28:029 (6) - remove finish, way too hard for such a soft point in soft song Yay finally a mod about hitsounds. I'm terrible with hitsounds so I want more people to comment about them
00:32:029 (1) - reposition this slider But my stacks fuck your stacks, you can't even see them when playing too much
00:37:362 (3) - same as earlier, or if not at least add to 00:37:862 (3) I think Easy diff is easier to visualize what I did at this part. No finish at 00:37:862 (3). I agree it's a bit loud though. I'll lower the volume.
00:45:029 (9) - ctrl+g
00:45:029 (9) - ^ So ctrl+g back to original slider? ???
00:53:195 (1,2) - ew Yeah, I really hate how I mapped 00:52:695 (2,1,2). I think I'll look for a way to map them nicer.
01:12:526 (1) - reposition Not sure what you wanted me to do here but I repositioned a bit so it looks better

this is 100% best mod ever
i know
i give amazing reason for suggest

no kd Here's your kd. You have enough blues replies from me for one, I think NO ONE FUCKING ASKED YOU
Thanks for modding!
who told you earlier to use ar10
your map is even worse with ar10
no
Topic Starter
_koinuri

[Seraphin] wrote:

[Seraphin] wrote:

hi fuck you
complexxxxxx Hi

00:10:029 (8) - no pls this just feel weird Weird how? I don't really feel anything o: just snap l-r is weird mane Well now that the note after is at weird position, I should probably remap this part.
00:12:529 (6) - smth liek x448 y96 ok
00:15:362 (7) - why increace spacing here? this is not a kick point or anything wwwww Spacing doesn't exist in my Complex difficulties. It's all about the pretty patterns. stop trying to be kirby, your artmapping sucks How am I supposed to improve without trying to map them :/? I personally like maps that visually look cool rather than maps that flows nicely because osu standard mapping allows for so much freedom in note placement (and I also prefer playing taiko and mania for gameplay, so flow doesn't really affect me that much). I don't really know who kirby is, though. An old mapper or unranked only mapper? I should look him up if he maps artistically
00:18:029 (7) - ^
00:18:362 (8) - so earlier you used 0.2x spacing on this, now you use 1.3x? I changed it to .2x
00:19:362 (3,4,5,1) - redesign this pattern, plays awkward I thought it was because I removed a circle and I wasn't used to it. It's harder to read now though
00:21:029 (5) - come on you know you can do something creative and fun with this Maybe, but I don't really want to break anything here. They're all aligned all perfectly the way I want them to :(
00:23:362 (4,5,6) - weird My map is weird so fix it I like it weird.
00:24:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're just trying to be symmetrical and shit but come on this looks weird as shit and is confusing I like making my maps confusing. I think it looks cool fuck off confusing is not good or cool I didn't see anybody get confused here when I asked for testplay though. So it's a cool confusing.
00:27:529 (4) - spacing I think I "taught" the players enough for them to know that it's a 1/4 jump from all the part before that, so it's readable. The jump isn't that hard either.
00:28:029 (6) - remove finish, way too hard for such a soft point in soft song Yay finally a mod about hitsounds. I'm terrible with hitsounds so I want more people to comment about them
00:32:029 (1) - reposition this slider But my stacks fuck your stacks, you can't even see them when playing too much This one is somewhat obvious because they're only a note away. I also like the notes to be neatly aligned even if it's not visible while playing.
00:37:362 (3) - same as earlier, or if not at least add to 00:37:862 (3) I think Easy diff is easier to visualize what I did at this part. No finish at 00:37:862 (3). I agree it's a bit loud though. I'll lower the volume. *Easy -> Beginner*
00:45:029 (9) - ctrl+g
00:45:029 (9) - ^ So ctrl+g back to original slider? ??? You linked the same slider. I kind of guessed where you wanted me to ctrl+g though.
00:53:195 (1,2) - ew Yeah, I really hate how I mapped 00:52:695 (2,1,2). I think I'll look for a way to map them nicer.
01:12:526 (1) - reposition Not sure what you wanted me to do here but I repositioned a bit so it looks better

this is 100% best mod ever
i know
i give amazing reason for suggest

no kd Here's your kd. You have enough blues replies from me for one, I think NO ONE FUCKING ASKED YOU Thanks for star!

Thanks for modding!
who told you earlier to use ar10
your map is even worse with ar10
no It was the first mod
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue.

Ive actually played this map before and I liked it a lot! Thanks to your friend Elephant_King for showing me! :D
Ok tiem 4 mod

[Beginner]
Two easy difficulties? :D
00:34:695 (3) - new combo

[Easy]
00:32:029 (1,3,1) - These three are overlapping due to the very slow AR, how about using a different pattern

[Normal]
Theres a bunch of minor distance snap problems, they dont affect gameplay much but you should fix because normal difficulty has a consistent distance snap
00:08:029 (1,2) - just a suggestion because i kinda dont like putting notes right under on a normal
00:10:695 (1,2) - ^, of course you might need to rearrange 00:10:029 (5,6) as well
00:17:529 (4,5) - distance snap
00:18:695 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029 (1,2)
00:21:362 (1,2) - ^
00:25:529 (4,5) - distance snap
00:27:695 (3,4) - this is confusing, considering that people usually wont follow a slider like (3) all the way to the end the distance snap doesnt really help. really think you should change this. how about just trying something standard like this
SPOILER
This is just a general idea, you should test to see what looks better
00:29:362 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029 (1,2)
00:37:029 (1,2) - distance snap
00:40:029 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029
00:58:193 (4,5) - distance snap
00:59:193 (1,2) - ^

[captin's Hard]
Nice difficulty! Nothing much to point out
00:27:529 (3) - instead of a slider here try just a circle at 00:27:695, i think this would match music better

[Complex]
Why is this called complex and not insane? :P
Some of these spacing problems i pointed out technically dont need to be fixed because its an insane, but i just think its not intuitive to play! So these are mostly suggestions
00:19:862 (1,2) - the rest of the 1/4 spacing for this section 00:18:695 - 00:28:029 is very small, make these two a little closer
00:27:195 (3,4) - ^
00:37:029 (1,2) - this is a kinda random jump
00:43:195 (3,4,5,6) - hmm such small spacing for these? the 1/4 space was a lot larger in earlier parts of this section
00:46:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i kinda dont like how everything is so close together here, but idk how to fix this easily without changing the pattern.
01:05:026 (3,4) - this section the spacing difference is even more noticeable
01:27:859 (1) - this isnt on any of the other difficulties, i think it can be removed because there isnt really any music going on at 01:29:193 anyway

That's all! Nice song & map, best of luck :)
Topic Starter
_koinuri

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

Ive actually played this map before and I liked it a lot! Thanks to your friend Elephant_King for showing me! :D :D Yay
Ok tiem 4 mod

[Beginner]
Two easy difficulties? :D Yeah
00:34:695 (3) - new combo I actually had some more nc error. I think I fixed them all

[Easy]
00:32:029 (1,3,1) - These three are overlapping due to the very slow AR, how about using a different pattern I know the overlap looks somewhat bad in editor, but the first overlap isn't that bad when playing. I'll fix the 2nd one a bit.

[Normal]
Theres a bunch of minor distance snap problems, they dont affect gameplay much but you should fix because normal difficulty has a consistent distance snap
This is on harder side of Normal, I don't think making it 100% 1.0x distance snap is necessary. Most of them is to avoid overlaps anyway. I fixed all the distance snap that was accidental though
00:08:029 (1,2) - just a suggestion because i kinda dont like putting notes right under on a normal Kept some
00:10:695 (1,2) - ^, of course you might need to rearrange 00:10:029 (5,6) as well
00:17:529 (4,5) - distance snap
00:18:695 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029 (1,2)
00:21:362 (1,2) - ^
00:25:529 (4,5) - distance snap
00:27:695 (3,4) - this is confusing, considering that people usually wont follow a slider like (3) all the way to the end the distance snap doesnt really help. really think you should change this. how about just trying something standard like this fixed
SPOILER
This is just a general idea, you should test to see what looks better
00:29:362 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029 (1,2)
00:37:029 (1,2) - distance snap
00:40:029 (1,2) - same as 00:08:029
00:58:193 (4,5) - distance snap
00:59:193 (1,2) - ^

[Complex]
Why is this called complex and not insane? :P Because reasons.
Some of these spacing problems i pointed out technically dont need to be fixed because its an insane, but i just think its not intuitive to play! So these are mostly suggestions
00:19:862 (1,2) - the rest of the 1/4 spacing for this section 00:18:695 - 00:28:029 is very small, make these two a little closer
00:27:195 (3,4) - ^ Nah, I know this one is sudden but it looks cooler this way
00:37:029 (1,2) - this is a kinda random jump But I like this pattern D:
00:43:195 (3,4,5,6) - hmm such small spacing for these? the 1/4 space was a lot larger in earlier parts of this section Yeah... My spacings constantly change from pattern to pattern because I focus more on the shapes of the patterns more than the emphasis on songs. I'm trying to balance these out though. I'll eventually get them perfect.
00:46:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i kinda dont like how everything is so close together here, but idk how to fix this easily without changing the pattern. I think they're fine
01:05:026 (3,4) - this section the spacing difference is even more noticeable
01:27:859 (1) - this isnt on any of the other difficulties, i think it can be removed because there isnt really any music going on at 01:29:193 anyway

That's all! Nice song & map, best of luck :) Thanks
Thanks for modding!
RatedNC17
Hello~

[Beginner]
You should incorporate the clap sound to the slider ticks to keep beat going and go with the song (not sure if you did cause my hearing is crap)
00:18:695 (1) - here is a good example that the sound could be used in the middle of the slider.
01:26:859 (2) - (i think) this is a bit rotated or unaligned. rotate by 5 degrees and move the end point by 1 grid up

[Easy]
This Diff could definitely use the slider tick sound. Also don't you think the spacing is a bit much for a Easy.
00:20:029 (3) - on the slider bounce remove the clap. it doesn't really fit here since the music doesn't have the same sound here
00:21:362 (1) - ^
00:25:362 (2) - i think this slider would look much better if you removed it's second red point
00:28:028 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Nothing much to say. a bit challenging for a normal but nothing too groundbreaking and spacing is neat.

[Captin's Hard]
00:28:695 (1,2) - reduce volume by 35%. it's pretty loud here and it disrupts this part in music
01:22:360 (2) - remove both red points and make them normal and adjust them to make a wave slider. Like this
Fun! :D

[Complex]
Spacing here is awkward and notes like 00:18:695 (1,2) appear quite frequently in places where they do not fit. I know this is a insane but those notes sound completely wrong
00:19:862 (1,2) - the way you placed 2 on the timeline doesn't sound so good
00:37:029 (1,2) - i don't think the spacing here is really necessary
00:24:529 (3,4,5,6) - this is a good example of the 1/4 notes being unnecessary
This diff is pretty messy and could use more polishing. The other diffs are fine and the map has much potential. Good luck :D
Topic Starter
_koinuri

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[Beginner]
You should incorporate the clap sound to the slider ticks to keep beat going and go with the song (not sure if you did cause my hearing is crap)
00:18:695 (1) - here is a good example that the sound could be used in the middle of the slider. ok
01:26:859 (2) - (i think) this is a bit rotated or unaligned. rotate by 5 degrees and move the end point by 1 grid up Fixed, I think

[Easy]
This Diff could definitely use the slider tick sound. Also don't you think the spacing is a bit much for a Easy. I think the spacing is fine, Easy and Normal was designed to be on harder side to balance out the Beginner diff and difficult Hard diff.
00:20:029 (3) - on the slider bounce remove the clap. it doesn't really fit here since the music doesn't have the same sound here I didn't remove the claps but I added more clap around it to match my other diff's hitsound patterns
00:21:362 (1) - ^
00:25:362 (2) - i think this slider would look much better if you removed it's second red point I like it better with the red points :(
00:28:028 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Nothing much to say. a bit challenging for a normal but nothing too groundbreaking and spacing is neat.

[Captin's Hard]
00:28:695 (1,2) - reduce volume by 35%. it's pretty loud here and it disrupts this part in music
01:22:360 (2) - remove both red points and make them normal and adjust them to make a wave slider. Like this
Fun! :D

[Complex]
Spacing here is awkward and notes like 00:18:695 (1,2) appear quite frequently in places where they do not fit. I know this is a insane but those notes sound completely wrong This song has a lot of noise in it, and 3/4 sliders are the best way to map vocals and those little details at the same time imo. For example, 00:18:695 (1,2) is mapped to the long vocal "hi" in hibiita and the string (?) that plays at the same time, and the noise I put whistle to at 00:19:029 (whistle blends in pretty well with it, you can hear it better without any hitsounds). The noise kind of interrupts the long vocal, so shortening it to 3/4 instead of whole 1/1 maps represents that part well imo.
00:19:862 (1,2) - the way you placed 2 on the timeline doesn't sound so good Repeated 00:18:695 (1,2) because it's similar (vocal and string (?). The noise come later for this part though.)
00:37:029 (1,2) - i don't think the spacing here is really necessary I put some emphasis on this part because it sounds kind of like a turning point of the music. NC spam and somewhat difficult jump.
00:24:529 (3,4,5,6) - this is a good example of the 1/4 notes being unnecessary It may not be necessary, but I don't want to repeat 1/1 slider from before. The whole repeating part is faster in general.
This diff is pretty messy and could use more polishing . The other diffs are fine and the map has much potential. Good luck :D Thanks.
It's like people don't notice all my stuff I poured into this difficulty :(. I spent a lot of time with this difficulty, I just have odd style of mapping. And I think this odd mapping fits sasakure.UK pretty well because most of his songs are very different from others (look at those time signature changes in the middle, and that's considered small amount in most of his songs. Full version of this song actually sounds even weirder, a lot of noises.). Maybe I should go try learning generic mapping instead of trying to have unique mapping style.. >.>
Sorry for a lot of reds, thanks for modding though! I fixed some hitsounds in all diff except Normal following your suggestions.
captin1

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

[captin's Hard]
Nice difficulty! Nothing much to point out
00:27:529 (3) - instead of a slider here try just a circle at 00:27:695, i think this would match music better nah, skips the sound at 00:27:529 -

That's all! Nice song & map, best of luck :)

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[Captin's Hard]
00:28:695 (1,2) - reduce volume by 35%. it's pretty loud here and it disrupts this part in music did a volume crescendo
01:22:360 (2) - remove both red points and make them normal and adjust them to make a wave slider. Like this no thanks i like the more angluar feel here
Fun! :D
thanks~

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168,256,67110,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,256,67193,6,0,P|128:200|104:192,1,88.000002685547,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,67526,1,10,0:0:0:0:
8,296,67693,2,0,B|128:336|128:336|172:384,1,176.000005371094,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,68193,2,0,P|304:340|340:376,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,316,68526,2,0,P|380:300|344:264,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,68860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,80,69026,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,168,69193,2,0,L|256:216,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,69526,2,0,L|156:216,1,88.000002685547,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,220,69860,6,0,P|28:292|56:318,2,88.000002685547,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,136,70360,1,0,1:0:0:0:
16,56,70526,2,0,P|56:32|116:32,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,70860,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,52,71026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,71193,2,0,L|244:248,1,88.000002685547,2|0,1:2|0:0,1:0:0:0:
152,292,71526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,348,71693,2,0,B|272:372|304:360|304:360|308:296|364:272,1,176.000005371094,2|8,1:2|0:0,1:0:0:0:
464,276,72193,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,172,72360,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,176,72526,6,0,P|296:140|288:88,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,72860,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,72,73026,2,0,B|156:116|156:116|92:142|92:142|60:189,1,176.000005371094,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,220,73526,2,0,P|204:256|212:308,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,380,73860,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,380,74026,2,0,L|356:360,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,263,74360,2,0,P|291:222|300:180,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,108,74693,1,10,0:0:0:0:
300,180,74860,2,0,P|248:164|223:130,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,75193,6,0,P|160:116|68:148,1,176.000005371094,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,44,75693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,44,75860,2,0,L|272:12,2,88.000002685547,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,76360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,76526,2,0,P|192:248|224:276,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,76860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,356,77026,2,0,B|316:348|316:348|432:376,1,176.000005371094,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,268,77526,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77610,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77776,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77860,6,0,P|440:224|384:148,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,164,78360,2,0,P|240:152|212:72,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,116,79193,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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20,224,79860,6,0,B|32:268|32:268|124:336,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,80360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,80526,2,0,B|228:312|248:332|248:332|296:320|304:240,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,196,81526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,272,81693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,136,84860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,56,85609,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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272,56,85776,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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108,292,87359,2,0,L|180:264,1,60.0000022888184
Cyllinus
I'm new to this.
Good luck with your map.
[Normal]
00:33:695 (5) - add a circle on the white tick after this?
00:41:195 (4) - ^
00:44:529 (5) - ^
01:25:193 (4) - move forward to the red tick and remove one repeat
Topic Starter
_koinuri

Cyllinus wrote:

I'm new to this.
Good luck with your map.
[Normal]
00:33:695 (5) - add a circle on the white tick after this? It doesn't sound that great to me :(
00:41:195 (4) - ^ Ok
00:44:529 (5) - ^ Same here
01:25:193 (4) - move forward to the red tick and remove one repeat fixed
Thanks for modding Cyllinus! :)
Kiiwa
Cool song~ 8-)
Topic Starter
_koinuri
sasakure.UK best VocaloidP

osu! needs more sasakure.UK songs ranked
Kamio Misuzu
Hi~From #modreqs NO KDS, Just have a look :D

Kiiwa wrote:

Cool song~ 8-)
[General]

I'm not sure about the diff name (complex),maybe you should change it into (Insane)?

[Complex]
00:09:862 (7) - delete

00:14:362 (3) - remove finish

00:27:695 (5,6) - consolidate this to a slider

00:29:279 - add note

00:39:945 - ^

00:58:777 - ^

01:07:110 - ^

01:02:110 - ^

01:10:110 - ^

01:00:526 (1) - end this slider at 01:00:693 -

00:59:860 (4,5) - try this?
01:11:526 (2,4) - OH! I HATE THIS!

01:24:193 (2,4,5) - ^

01:06:443 (4,6) - delete

Good luck,nice song~
Topic Starter
_koinuri

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

Hi~From #modreqs NO KDS, Just have a look :D Oops, wasn't really paying attention and gave you a kudosu

Kiiwa wrote:

Cool song~ 8-)
[General]

I'm not sure about the diff name (complex),maybe you should change it into (Insane)? I think it describes the diff level fine, peppy made a compromise to allow the highest diff to be any name as long as it's not related to username anyway.

[Complex]
00:09:862 (7) - delete

00:14:362 (3) - remove finish

00:27:695 (5,6) - consolidate this to a slider

00:29:279 - add note

00:39:945 - ^ Doesn't really sound good to me

00:58:777 - ^ ^

01:07:110 - ^

01:02:110 - ^ I would put it for more triplets in this map, but then I would need to start adding it to the other part with the similar rhythm, and it would really break my pattern :(. I also don't really want that many extra sounds in the kiai part so all the notes sound strong.

01:10:110 - ^

01:00:526 (1) - end this slider at 01:00:693 - I'm about to go fix a lot of 3/4 sliders, but I think this one sounds okay

00:59:860 (4,5) - try this? Did something similar

01:11:526 (2,4) - OH! I HATE THIS! Fixed it a bit

01:24:193 (2,4,5) - ^ I don't think this one is that much of a problem :(

01:06:443 (4,6) - delete I think the stream works fine here.

Good luck,nice song~ Thanks!
Thanks for modding!
Natsu
Hi hi hi~


[General]
  1. Clean

[Complex]
  1. 00:08:029 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this rhythm, mainly cuz I don't get what are you following here, I suggest you to follow the vocals instead, 00:08:695 (2) - this circle is not necesary and just confuse the players, removing it and extending 00:08:029 (1) - to 00:08:695 - like:
  2. 00:10:029 (7) - nothing in the music here, also that hitnormal just make it more obviously, if you really want to map that spot the better option is do a 1/1 slider with previous 00:09:695 (6) -
  3. 00:15:195 (6,7,8) - this beats doesn't have support from the music, Is better if you remove them
  4. 00:21:695 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap, doesn't look nice IMO
  5. 00:30:360 slider tail is unsnapped
  6. 00:28:362 (2) - move this one some grids up to avoid the overlap with 00:27:695 (5) -
  7. 00:30:529 (5,7) - mm you have some more overlaps like this one and them doesn't look nice IMO, probably you'll improve this diff if you take a look and clean some nazi stuff, like blankets, stacks and some overlaps ;)
  8. 00:37:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look pretty inconsistent here, at least remove the one at 00:37:529 (1) - is not necessary, since you're not doing a jump or anti jump there
  9. 00:48:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this is great
  10. 00:51:195 (1) - with this slider I feel you are breaking the flow from the triangles pattern, I'll like if you do ctrl g in 00:51:195 (1) -
  11. 00:55:860 (1) - I thing reducing the volume here will represent better the vocals and your anti jump pattern
  12. 01:07:526 (2,3) - I feel this rhythm weird and not consistent with your others rhythms, when you are clearly following the vocals, try this to follow the vocals better:
  13. 01:07:860 (3,4,1) - stack this properly #nazi
  14. 01:16:360 you're missing a NC here, following your every 1 stanza pattern in this section, also I thing a NC will help to read the stream pattern there

[captin's Hard]
  1. 00:17:862 (5) - I feel this repeat doesn't fit with the song in this point, mainly because the strong sound + vocal is in 00:18:029 -, some others options:

  2. 00:21:029 (7) - mmm ending sliders on stanzas with such an important song doesn't represent the song nicely, since I believe the beat at 00:21:362 - is the place where the NC should be and need a click action due to the highest pitch there
  3. 00:27:029 maybe just me, but I feel this section really empty, maybe add a circle there?
  4. 00:47:362 (7) - Use a 1/2 repeat slider instead? to bring more emphasis to 00:47:529
  5. 00:55:860 (1) - same suggestion as complex, I thing reducing the volume maybe to 50% will fit better the song
  6. 01:06:360 (7) - you're mapping a triplet here for consistency you should map the other one in 01:06:693 (8) - too
  7. 01:16:526 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - mmm I thing will be better if you keep consistent with 01:06:360 (7,8,9,10,1) - the rhythms are really different in both spots and they have a similar music, thought

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:862 (3) - a repeat slider will fit better the vocals in this point, also will play more intuitive due to the music
  2. 00:10:029 (5) - same as complex, nothing in the music here, I suggest you to remove this circle
  3. 00:15:362 (5,6) - same as above
  4. 00:17:529 (4) - since I don't feel a repeat slider fit the music here <:, try this instead:
  5. 00:21:862 (2) - try to don't hidden circles under sliders tails in normal diffs, since most of normal diff players are beginners and they don't use transparent skins, and is really hard to notice with the default one
  6. 00:29:362 (1,2) - same as above
  7. 00:30:529 (4,5,6) - spacing~
  8. 00:33:695 (5) - add a repeat in this slider? since the sound at 00:34:029 is really important IMO
  9. 00:51:695 (2,1,2,3) - the stack + anti jump are making a difficult spike here, since most of players will break combo here, you should make this part more simple to follow o:
  10. 00:57:693 (3,4,5) - use the same spacing between them
  11. 01:19:026 (3) - this slider doesn't play nicely, is better if you start it in 01:18:860 - It will be more intuitive to play
  12. 01:21:026 (3) - ^
  13. 01:23:026 ^
  14. 01:25:026 (3) - ^
[Easy]
  1. OD -1 (2) for better diff spread
  2. 00:32:029 (1,2,3,4) - use a properly spacing instead <:
  3. 00:38:362 (2,2) - try to stack them just for better design
  4. 01:13:860 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - try to add some slider there, actually is so much single tap for an easy diff IMO
  5. not much to point out here, but try to fix some nazi stuff by yourself :)
[Beginner]
  1. OD-1 for better diff spread
  2. 00:51:195 (2) add NC , yup it's a bug
  3. same as easy :p
GL :)
Kibbleru
late mod via queue

[Complex]
  1. 00:08:695 (2) - overmap a bit here imo. you can just leave it out and put an antijump
  2. 00:09:695 (6,7) - again, these are a bit overmapped. i really cant hear anything, and, antijumps are great
  3. 00:18:695 (1,2) - i think you should find a way to overlap this more or don't overlap (increase or decrease ds). the way it just barely touches right now doesn't look so pretty
  4. 00:19:862 (1,2,4,5) - this part is just messy... they overlap badly and yah.. i can see that you're trying to stack things, which is good, but before considering stacking, be sure it looks neat.
  5. 00:27:695 (5,2) - yah space this out too
  6. 00:51:029 (4) - this here just seems like it'd catch ppl off lol. you have this offsetting triangle thing going then just putting a random circle in the middle. i think you can leave it in the pattern
  7. 00:56:527 (1,2) - bad overlap
  8. 01:03:026 (1,3) - ^
  9. 01:12:026 (4) - move this over a bit like this, looks better
  10. 01:21:026 (6) - i think this looks better if you ctrl j
[Captain's Hard]
  1. 00:41:695 (5,6) - ctrl g this, try using that rhythm
  2. 00:55:860 (1) - kinda sudden after spinner
  3. 01:15:193 (1) - space out a bit, they almost touch
    Nice difficulty, good job!
[Normal]
  1. SV a bit high imo
  2. 00:21:862 (2) - don't hide this under the slider, they're too hard to see
  3. 00:29:862 (2) - ^
  4. 00:21:362 (1,4) - this overlap not the best
  5. 00:27:195 (2,4,5) - ^don't overlap these either
  6. 00:38:029 (3,4) - ^
  7. 00:48:029 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the pattern just doesn't really look nice. sry no suggestions, just look at some other ranked maps and get some ideas
  8. 00:52:195 (1) - u know why
  9. 01:23:026 (3,2) - eh idunno overlap all the way or don't
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:362 (2,2) - try to stack?
  2. 01:13:860 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - a bit too many consecutive circles
    This diff is pretty good
[Beginner]
  1. 00:16:029 (1) - try to center?
  2. 00:26:695 (1,1) - might be confusing for beginners, cuz they're overlapped
  3. 00:48:029 (1) - only repeat max once
Insane & Normal needs some work but overall good job!
Topic Starter
_koinuri
Natsu

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi~
Hi


[General]
  1. Clean

[Complex]
  1. 00:08:029 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this rhythm, mainly cuz I don't get what are you following here, I suggest you to follow the vocals instead, 00:08:695 (2) - this circle is not necesary and just confuse the players, removing it and extending 00:08:029 (1) - to 00:08:695 - like:
  2. 00:10:029 (7) - nothing in the music here, also that hitnormal just make it more obviously, if you really want to map that spot the better option is do a 1/1 slider with previous 00:09:695 (6) -
  3. 00:15:195 (6,7,8) - this beats doesn't have support from the music, Is better if you remove them
  4. 00:21:695 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap, doesn't look nice IMO
  5. 00:30:360 slider tail is unsnapped
  6. 00:28:362 (2) - move this one some grids up to avoid the overlap with 00:27:695 (5) -
  7. 00:30:529 (5,7) - mm you have some more overlaps like this one and them doesn't look nice IMO, probably you'll improve this diff if you take a look and clean some nazi stuff, like blankets, stacks and some overlaps ;) So many overlapss
  8. 00:37:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look pretty inconsistent here, at least remove the one at 00:37:529 (1) - is not necessary, since you're not doing a jump or anti jump there I want to keep this combo pattern for lyrics and kind of mark the halfway point. Plus, it's kind of consistent if you look at the whole part together, like 3 normal combo pattern then combo every 3 note pattern, then back to normal patterns, or something like that *adds jump for more emphasis*
  9. 00:48:029 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this is great | Woo
  10. 00:51:195 (1) - with this slider I feel you are breaking the flow from the triangles pattern, I'll like if you do ctrl g in 00:51:195 (1) - It feels a lot smoother :D
  11. 00:55:860 (1) - I thing reducing the volume here will represent better the vocals and your anti jump pattern
  12. 01:07:526 (2,3) - I feel this rhythm weird and not consistent with your others rhythms, when you are clearly following the vocals, try this to follow the vocals better:
  13. 01:07:860 (3,4,1) - stack this properly #nazi This part completely changed when I applied the rhythm one ^, no more stacks
  14. 01:16:360 you're missing a NC here, following your every 1 stanza pattern in this section, also I thing a NC will help to read the stream pattern there Oops forgot
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:862 (3) - a repeat slider will fit better the vocals in this point, also will play more intuitive due to the music
  2. 00:10:029 (5) - same as complex, nothing in the music here, I suggest you to remove this circle
  3. 00:15:362 (5,6) - same as above
  4. 00:17:529 (4) - since I don't feel a repeat slider fit the music here <:, try this instead:
  5. 00:21:862 (2) - try to don't hidden circles under sliders tails in normal diffs, since most of normal diff players are beginners and they don't use transparent skins, and is really hard to notice with the default one
  6. 00:29:362 (1,2) - same as above
  7. 00:30:529 (4,5,6) - spacing~ It should've been same spacing :( I guess I accidentally moved it somehow
  8. 00:33:695 (5) - add a repeat in this slider? since the sound at 00:34:029 is really important IMO I actually don't really hear any important sound here x_x. The repeat slider feels better flow wise so I'll change this to repeat slider though
  9. 00:51:695 (2,1,2,3) - the stack + anti jump are making a difficult spike here, since most of players will break combo here, you should make this part more simple to follow o:
  10. 00:57:693 (3,4,5) - use the same spacing between them Meh ok
  11. 01:19:026 (3) - this slider doesn't play nicely, is better if you start it in 01:18:860 - It will be more intuitive to play I want to follow the vocal here
  12. 01:21:026 (3) - ^
  13. 01:23:026 ^
  14. 01:25:026 (3) - ^
[Easy]
  1. OD -1 (2) for better diff spread It's already 2 though. (assuming the (2) means drop it to 2)
  2. 00:32:029 (1,2,3,4) - use a properly spacing instead <: 00:33:362 (3) moved itself :(
  3. 00:38:362 (2,2) - try to stack them just for better design
  4. 01:13:860 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - try to add some slider there, actually is so much single tap for an easy diff IMO
  5. not much to point out here, but try to fix some nazi stuff by yourself :) I'll try, I'm terrible at finding nazi stuff though x_x
[Beginner]
  1. OD-1 for better diff spread OD0? o_O
  2. 00:51:195 (2) add NC , yup it's a bug
  3. same as easy :p
GL :) Thanks!

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

late mod via queue

[Complex]
  1. 00:08:695 (2) - overmap a bit here imo. you can just leave it out and put an antijump Fixed from previous mod
  2. 00:09:695 (6,7) - again, these are a bit overmapped. i really cant hear anything, and, antijumps are great ^
  3. 00:18:695 (1,2) - i think you should find a way to overlap this more or don't overlap (increase or decrease ds). the way it just barely touches right now doesn't look so pretty Increased ds
  4. 00:19:862 (1,2,4,5) - this part is just messy... they overlap badly and yah.. i can see that you're trying to stack things, which is good, but before considering stacking, be sure it looks neat. I'll try :(.
  5. 00:27:695 (5,2) - yah space this out too I should look for more overlapping notes, fixed from previous mod too
  6. 00:51:029 (4) - this here just seems like it'd catch ppl off lol. you have this offsetting triangle thing going then just putting a random circle in the middle. i think you can leave it in the pattern I had different pattern here before and 00:51:195 (1) was blanketing the last pattern. I didn't know where to put the left over 4 so I kind of just put it there for the blanket. I don't think it should be part of the pattern because it's not part of the "Nani wo inoru, nani wo kaesu, nani wo utau" repeating lyric. I'll find a better place for it
  7. 00:56:527 (1,2) - bad overlap Intentional, it looks fine imo. I do it all the time o:, kind of like broken up arc stuff
  8. 01:03:026 (1,3) - ^ -waits for people to mod about the spacing-
  9. 01:12:026 (4) - move this over a bit like this, looks better
  10. 01:21:026 (6) - i think this looks better if you ctrl j

[Normal]
  1. SV a bit high imo captin told me to bring up the Normal diff so the spread will be more even. .65 -> .9 -> 1.2 -> 1.6 seems like a good spread imo.
  2. 00:21:862 (2) - don't hide this under the slider, they're too hard to see Fixed from prev (ry
  3. 00:29:862 (2) - ^ ^ Two mods at the same time yay
  4. 00:21:362 (1,4) - this overlap not the best
  5. 00:27:195 (2,4,5) - ^don't overlap these either
  6. 00:38:029 (3,4) - ^
  7. 00:48:029 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the pattern just doesn't really look nice. sry no suggestions, just look at some other ranked maps and get some ideas Why not? I think they looks very nice :(
  8. 00:52:195 (1) - u know why Yes
  9. 01:23:026 (3,2) - eh idunno overlap all the way or don't
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:362 (2,2) - try to stack? Fixed (from previous mod)
  2. 01:13:860 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - a bit too many consecutive circles ^
    This diff is pretty good
[Beginner]
  1. 00:16:029 (1) - try to center? I should've done that from the beginning, now I don't think it's worth fixing it for moving everything else after for constant ds
  2. 00:26:695 (1,1) - might be confusing for beginners, cuz they're overlapped
  3. 00:48:029 (1) - only repeat max once I think they're fine. I want this part to be repetitive.
Insane & Normal needs some work but overall good job! :D

Thanks for modding!
Fixed every non-red mods
captin1

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi~

[captin's Hard]
  1. 00:17:862 (5) - I feel this repeat doesn't fit with the song in this point, mainly because the strong sound + vocal is in 00:18:029 -, some others options:
    did this one
  2. 00:21:029 (7) - mmm ending sliders on stanzas with such an important song doesn't represent the song nicely, since I believe the beat at 00:21:362 - is the place where the NC should be and need a click action due to the highest pitch there i like this pattern :<
  3. 00:27:029 maybe just me, but I feel this section really empty, maybe add a circle there?
  4. 00:47:362 (7) - Use a 1/2 repeat slider instead? to bring more emphasis to 00:47:529
  5. 00:55:860 (1) - same suggestion as complex, I thing reducing the volume maybe to 50% will fit better the song
  6. 01:06:360 (7) - you're mapping a triplet here for consistency you should map the other one in 01:06:693 (8) - too i like the short rhythmic break before the full triple
  7. 01:16:526 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - mmm I thing will be better if you keep consistent with 01:06:360 (7,8,9,10,1) - the rhythms are really different in both spots and they have a similar music, thought the vocal and music is clearly different, so keeping them different
GL :)

Kibbleru wrote:

late mod via queue

[Captain's Hard] that's not my name aldksfjsdlfjsdf
  1. 00:41:695 (5,6) - ctrl g this, try using that rhythm no thanks, i like the click being on 00:42:029 (6) -
  2. 00:55:860 (1) - kinda sudden after spinner imo it feels worse without that note there D:
  3. 01:15:193 (1) - space out a bit, they almost touch
    Nice difficulty, good job!
Insane & Normal needs some work but overall good job!
thanks~
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344,168,68860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,80,69026,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,168,69193,2,0,L|256:216,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,69526,2,0,L|156:216,1,88.000002685547,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,220,69860,6,0,P|28:292|56:318,2,88.000002685547,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,136,70360,1,0,1:0:0:0:
16,56,70526,2,0,P|56:32|116:32,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,70860,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,52,71026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,71193,2,0,L|244:248,1,88.000002685547,2|0,1:2|0:0,1:0:0:0:
152,292,71526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,348,71693,2,0,B|272:372|304:360|304:360|308:296|364:272,1,176.000005371094,2|8,1:2|0:0,1:0:0:0:
464,276,72193,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,172,72360,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,176,72526,6,0,P|296:140|288:88,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,4,72860,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,72,73026,2,0,B|156:116|156:116|92:142|92:142|60:189,1,176.000005371094,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,220,73526,2,0,P|204:256|212:308,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,380,73860,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,380,74026,2,0,L|356:360,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,74360,2,0,P|293:223|302:181,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,108,74693,1,10,0:0:0:0:
302,181,74860,2,0,P|250:165|225:131,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,75193,6,0,P|160:116|68:148,1,176.000005371094,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,44,75693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,44,75860,2,0,L|272:12,2,88.000002685547,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,76360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,76526,2,0,P|192:248|224:276,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,76860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,356,77026,2,0,B|316:348|316:348|432:376,1,176.000005371094,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,268,77526,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77610,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77776,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,268,77860,6,0,P|440:224|384:148,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,164,78360,2,0,P|240:152|212:72,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,28,78860,2,0,L|120:108,1,71.9999978027344
40,116,79193,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,180,79360,2,0,L|160:228,2,71.9999978027344,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,224,79860,6,0,B|32:268|32:268|124:336,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,80360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,80526,2,0,B|228:312|248:332|248:332|296:320|304:240,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,192,81026,2,0,L|252:116,2,71.9999978027344,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,81526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,272,81693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,81860,6,0,P|420:356|468:292,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,216,82360,2,0,B|450:172|450:172|428:124|428:124|416:69,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,82860,2,0,P|312:112|284:136,1,71.9999978027344
208,116,83193,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,200,83360,2,0,L|312:224,2,71.9999978027344,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,224,83860,6,0,P|92:216|56:128,1,143.999995605469,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,76,84360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,76,84526,2,0,L|140:144,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,84860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,85026,2,0,P|348:152|356:72,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,85526,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,56,85609,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,56,85693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,56,85776,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,52,86193,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,86526,2,0,P|148:176|60:212,1,180.000006866455,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,300,87359,2,0,L|160:286,1,60.0000022888184
P A N
from my m4m queue,

[Complex]

  • when I test play I found two tissue here:
  1. some spacing of 3/4 slider to 1/2 slider with 1/4 space are confusing since their spacing is looks same as 1/2 spacing. example,
    00:29:862 (3,4) -
    00:30:529 (5,6) -
  2. 01:16:693 (1,2) - why use slider :(( I want to stream, that slider made me combo break as well, and I think 01:17:109 (4) is no necessary. maybe remove it?
    -----------------------------------------------------
  3. 01:17:693 (11) - remove one reverse?
  4. 00:46:862 (5) - perfect stack.
  5. 00:47:862 (8) - ^
  6. 00:52:195 (1) - this slider need more jump too, since other sliders are jump.
    ok 2nd time testplay
  7. and yes, most of 100 are come from 01:25:276 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - the spacing you use are change suddenly, you didn't do like before, 01:06:360 (3).
    so It's surprise me. maybe I'm just a noob one.
  8. 01:08:026 (4) - move to 48|160 is better flow.
    that's all I guess, just check some perfect stack on slider's tail. they have some.
[Captin1]
  1. 00:17:862 (5,6,7,8) - I think these note still need to use 1.2x since the song still calm.
  2. 01:12:860 (2) - meh touch hp bar, move a bit down.
    I'm not sure about some note that touch a color bar but this diff looks fine. no problem.
[Normal]

  • look like a light hard.
    hmm looks fine but just some overlapped like 00:18:029 (5) / 00:34:362 (6) and more. I think overlapped on Normal diff is really hard.

    [Easy]
  1. since you already have beginner, 00:22:695 (3) - change to note and add 1/2 slider on 00:23:029 is more fit imo.
  2. 00:52:695 (4) - make it 1.2x spacing.
[Beginner]

  • oh god too slow
  1. 00:29:362 (1) - perfect stack.
  2. 00:34:695 (1) - really touch hp bar here
  3. 00:42:695 (1) - perfect stack.
  4. 01:11:193 (2) - hmmm this overlapped and force flow, I hope it's fine.
  5. 01:21:860 (1) - a bit touch hp bar, a bit down.
  6. 01:26:193 - this part is not fit with vocal well but I understand that it's beginner, so leave it like that
good luck
captin1

P A N wrote:

from my m4m queue,

[Captin1]
  1. 00:17:862 (5,6,7,8) - I think these note still need to use 1.2x since the song still calm. i like the spacing for the buildup
  2. 01:12:860 (2) - meh touch hp bar, move a bit down. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1501068
    I'm not sure about some note that touch a color bar but this diff looks fine. no problem.
good luck
thanks pan con queso
Topic Starter
_koinuri

P A N wrote:

from my m4m queue,

[Complex]

  • when I test play I found two tissue here: That tissue
  1. some spacing of 3/4 slider to 1/2 slider with 1/4 space are confusing since their spacing is looks same as 1/2 spacing. example,
    00:29:862 (3,4) -
    00:30:529 (5,6) -
  2. 01:16:693 (1,2) - why use slider :(( I want to stream, that slider made me combo break as well, and I think 01:17:109 (4) is no necessary. maybe remove it? I thought it would be better to kind of build up for stream but I guess it is uncomfortable, I sometimes miss here too. And lol, didn't know the sound had a small pause there.
    -----------------------------------------------------
  3. 01:17:693 (11) - remove one reverse?
  4. 00:46:862 (5) - perfect stack.
  5. 00:47:862 (8) - ^
  6. 00:52:195 (1) - this slider need more jump too, since other sliders are jump.
    ok 2nd time testplay
  7. and yes, most of 100 are come from 01:25:276 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - the spacing you use are change suddenly, you didn't do like before, 01:06:360 (3).
    so It's surprise me. maybe I'm just a noob one. It takes me bunch of tries to fc this map. I'm terrible at playing my own map x_x
  8. 01:08:026 (4) - move to 48|160 is better flow. So cool
    that's all I guess, just check some perfect stack on slider's tail. they have some. Ok
[Normal]

  • look like a light hard. I tried making it harder to balance out Beginner and difficult Hard
    hmm looks fine but just some overlapped like 00:18:029 (5) / 00:34:362 (6) and more. I think overlapped on Normal diff is really hard.

    [Easy]
  1. since you already have beginner, 00:22:695 (3) - change to note and add 1/2 slider on 00:23:029 is more fit imo.
  2. 00:52:695 (4) - make it 1.2x spacing. x_x More overlap
[Beginner]

  • oh god too slow lol
  1. 00:29:362 (1) - perfect stack.
  2. 00:34:695 (1) - really touch hp bar here
  3. 00:42:695 (1) - perfect stack.
  4. 01:11:193 (2) - hmmm this overlapped and force flow, I hope it's fine. I'll change if more people complain
  5. 01:21:860 (1) - a bit touch hp bar, a bit down.
  6. 01:26:193 - this part is not fit with vocal well but I understand that it's beginner, so leave it like that
good luck Thanks!
Thanks for modding! Pretty much everything fixed
P A N
lol issue! that typo, meaning change so much
Gexigamma
Wow i love this song <3

Just a little suggestion, so no kds.
In the beginner diff, I think that this 01:26:193 (1,2) doesnt follow the music well. Why dont you replace it with a long slider instead?
Topic Starter
_koinuri

Gexigamma wrote:

Wow i love this song <3

Just a little suggestion, so no kds.
In the beginner diff, I think that this 01:26:193 (1,2) doesnt follow the music well. Why dont you replace it with a long slider instead?
That's a great idea! Why didn't I come up with that earlier x_x
I was trying to come up with a better way to map this part because Beginner didn't allow me to put notes on all the vocal parts.

I guess I was too focused on mapping all the notes there individually and not as a whole.
Thanks for the suggestion :D
[Seraphin]

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

RatedNC17 wrote:

This diff is pretty messy and could use more polishing . The other diffs are fine and the map has much potential. Good luck :D Thanks.
It's like people don't notice all my stuff I poured into this difficulty :(. I spent a lot of time with this difficulty, I just have odd style of mapping. And I think this odd mapping fits sasakure.UK pretty well because most of his songs are very different from others (look at those time signature changes in the middle, and that's considered small amount in most of his songs. Full version of this song actually sounds even weirder, a lot of noises.). Maybe I should go try learning generic mapping instead of trying to have unique mapping style.. >.>
I'm sorry if this sounds rude (it probably is)

He does NOT mean that he does not like your mapping style or some shit like that. It's not your mapping style, or anything. He's saying you need to improve mapping skill some before it's ready for rank, and really, I agree.

sasakure.UK's songs timing is still easy anyway to compared to songs like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/203906

I know you spent a lot of time, and it shows, but you still need to work on mapping skill some, I think. 01:20:860 (5,6,7) -

You need to realize people are not talking about your mapping style, but mapping itself.

"You should clean up map" does not mean "your mapping style is bad", it means you should do some self-modding, is how I feel.

But maybe this is just me.
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