Kerocchi wrote:
Hi The song is cute. Anyway, since a lot of people already modded this, it should be near perfect by now, but here are my suggestions.
General
Your video should be .avi just to be safe. And can you compress it a bit more?
I recommend making combo colors a bit darker.
Easy
01:30:352 (2) - Slider shape looks out of place
01:45:352 (4) - I suggest changing the end point of this slider, as it turns visible before (2) is finished and is overlapped with (2)'s end
00:21:160 (1) - Should last one beat only and start at 00:21:644. Shape needs more curving
Normal
You should use slider repeats more on this difficulty, particularly replacing some 1.5 and 2 beats long sliders
01:33:255 (1,1,1,2) - I think you should replace this with this pattern: a one-beat slider with one repeat, then three circles on next downbeats Changed it. Not to your suggestion, I kept the slider, but the repeat slider was added.
01:24:546 (6,7) - Perhaps convert these into a slider? Fixed.
01:31:320 (3,4) - Add a repeat on 3 and remove 4, the circle looks lonely Fixed.
00:47:772 (8) - Convert into a 2-beat slider to cover the rest of the vocal Fixed.
00:19:466 and 00:20:434 - Add a circle in one, or both of these? Did something nice.
00:36:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The whole combo seems a bit fast and unbalanced with the rest of the map, as with almost every other combo there is a 1.5 to 2-beat slider or 1-beat gap between the notes. Removed some notes.
Hard
The spacing is too large, I think you should reduce it . (somehow I opened AiMod and it says this is Insane..)
00:22:612, 01:06:159 (1) - Slider velocity change is unnecessary. I like this.
In Kiai time, I think you should place a new SV for all sliders in that Kiai but it's up to you.
00:32:772 (1) - It should be moved one beat later and replace (2) to fit with vocals It was like that in the past but have it like this because sliders on red ticks are ugly.
00:47:772 (3) - Same with Normal, change it into a slider Done.
00:50:675 (4,5), 01:47:046 (2,3,4) - not very good flow, large turning angle Perhaps 00:51:643 (1) is questionable, but I feel there's no problem with the sliders.
Insane
Spacing is huge and largely inconsistent in my opinion, but if that makes the map more challenging for you then it's fine.
00:34:466 (7) - If you don't mind spacing break then make it overlap (1) for nicer look and feel True.
00:37:853 (4,5,6) - Too large jumps Fixed.
00:38:579 (7) - Make it overlap (5) Done.
00:41:724 (6,7,8,9) - Awkward jump, and the spacing is a little bit not consistent within the combo It is now consistent, the entire combo is trapezoid.
00:51:643 (6,7,8) - why not make this combo all sliders? Because I feel it's fine right now
01:28:417 (9) - Place it in the middle for symmetry ? Fixed.
01:45:352 (4,5,6) - Awkward placement, keep placing them in triangular configuration looks better Woops! Inconsistent. Fixed.
01:50:191 (12) - Place it in the middle? Fixed.
That's pretty much all Hope you find this helpful and good luckBTW I think this shall also be a M4M post *evil smile*