tellertheworld wrote:

No kds~

Lover's Easy

1. 00:02:242 - I think make a circle or slider start here as well.　OK
2. 00:04:299 - ^　OK
3. 00:57:784 - hitsound SC2 > SC1　OK
4. 02:30:355 (2) - overlap with 02:27:955 (2) - ?　OK
5. 03:06:698 - add note . I think it is strange because you make long space here.　OK
6. 03:12:869 (2) - try this rhythm?↓ because I feel that 03:12:184 (1,2) - is same rhythm so I make them 2/4 slider too.Also there is up and down ,use shorter slider as well.　OK
7. 03:50:241 (1,2,3,4) - This is a group in the voical.Why only 03:52:298 (4) - is not cross with 03:51:612 (3) - . No change
8. 04:03:612 - You miss vocal here....　OK
   

Momochikun wrote:

Nanaka so moe ><
ganbare ~

1. I really can't find anything to say about general.

1. 00:19:385 (1,2) - Change slider 2? As it stands, there is no connection between the two. Maybe Ctrl+H so it's something like 00:27:613 (2,3) -?
2. 00:35:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - To make this look better (and play somewhat nicer as well), stack the overlays. Move 00:37:899 (4) - to x:488 y:260 for Distance Snap then move 00:38:585 (5) - to x:296 y:144. You will need to alter the slider end of Slider 5 a bit so 00:39:613 (1) - can overlay with 00:37:899 (4) -.
3. 01:20:070 (2,3) - I strongly suggest that you modify the previous pattern so sliders 2 and 3 are properly symmetrical over the Y-axis.
4. 01:48:870 (1,2,3) - Circle 2 does not have association with anything. Either A: Stack it with the slider end of the previous Slider 4 or B: make it flow with the end of Slider 1.
5. 01:57:784 (3) - You must put a new combo here to follow your previous and next pattern(s).
6. Everything else looks ok from my perspective.

Project Railgun wrote:

hello

[General]

1. I really can't find anything to say about general.

I mod Easy/Normal.

[Lover's Normal]

1. 00:19:385 (1,2) - Change slider 2? As it stands, there is no connection between the two. Maybe Ctrl+H so it's something like 00:27:613 (2,3) -?
2. 00:35:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - To make this look better (and play somewhat nicer as well), stack the overlays. Move 00:37:899 (4) - to x:488 y:260 for Distance Snap then move 00:38:585 (5) - to x:296 y:144. You will need to alter the slider end of Slider 5 a bit so 00:39:613 (1) - can overlay with 00:37:899 (4) -.
3. 01:20:070 (2,3) - I strongly suggest that you modify the previous pattern so sliders 2 and 3 are properly symmetrical over the Y-axis.
4. 01:48:870 (1,2,3) - Circle 2 does not have association with anything. Either A: Stack it with the slider end of the previous Slider 4 or B: make it flow with the end of Slider 1.
5. 01:57:784 (3) - You must put a new combo here to follow your previous and next pattern(s).
6. Everything else looks ok from my perspective.

Nice song choice, good luck~

Kenterz wrote:

I'm late ;w;

Lover's Normal

00:24:527 (4) - Normal sampleset (clap) on this circle (like 00:27:270 (1)) ? It doesn't follow the hitsound pattern without it =/
00:38:585 (5) - Add a finish hitsound on the slider's head, it follows the song
00:39:613 (1) - This NC should start on 00:38:585 (5) because (5) is on a big white tick and it's logical with the song (You made it for 00:33:099 (1), so the NC pattern should continue :3)
00:43:042 (1) - This NC should start on 00:44:756 (3)
00:43:385 (2) - I suggest to add a normal histound on the slidertick for this one
00:47:842 (1) - NC on 00:46:813 (6) instead of 00:47:842 (1)
00:51:613 (1) - NC on 00:52:299 (2)
00:53:670 (1) - NC on 00:55:042 (3). It seems good with the NC then :3
01:25:213 (2) - The whistle on the slider's head seems strange, since it doesn't follow the song =/ Maybe use a normal hitsound ? (Then the clap)
01:55:727 (1) - Try to make a lower angle for this slider :

SPOILER

02:24:869 (2) - Try to add the whistle or finish hitsound on this slider's head
03:59:841 (2) - I suggest to decrease the volume for this circle's hitsound

Sorry, but I'm not into modding so much at the moment >.<

I'll continue my mod in another post I think

Good luck :3

All fixed

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Kenterz wrote:

I'm late ;w;

Sinku's Hard

00:05:670 (3) - I suggest to move it around 212|244 to make a blanket with 00:05:156 (2)
00:25:727 (3) - Add a clap at the slider's tail to continue the histound pattern
00:26:070 (4) - The finish isn't needed here, it seems strange =/
00:31:727 (1,2,3) - The (2) isn't needed. First, if you listen the song carefully, there's not a 1/4 beat here. Also, it's just a hard, I think a 1/4 pattern is too hard
00:36:185 (2) - Same as above, there's no 1/4 beat here, so I suggest to add 2 circles like this (don't forget the clap on (2)) :

SPOILER

00:37:727 (2,3,4) - Same, no 1/4 beat here
00:39:956 (1,2,3) - ^
00:53:327 (1,2) - Try to stack them ? The overlap is quite annoying here =/
00:57:784 (1) - The slider should be x0,75, to follow how the song change
01:21:270 (1,2,3) - Here there's no 1/4 beat (instead of 01:18:527 (8,9,10))
01:22:641 (7,8,9) - Same as above
01:27:098 (1,2,3) - ^
01:34:813 (7) - Why is this slider x0,75 ? I suggest to keep the x1.00 here
01:41:156 (1) - Keep the x0,75 here
01:44:756 (1,2,3) - No 1/4 here (also I suggest a clap on (1))
01:50:756 (6,7,8) - Same as above
02:04:470 (2,3,4) - ^
02:35:498 (3,4,5) - ^
02:40:469 (3,4,5) - ^
02:44:498 (2) - Same as above, and also this slider is weird : it starts on a blue tick and he's at a strange place. I suggest to add a circle at 02:44:584
02:46:812 (1,2,3) - No 1/4 beat here ;w;
02:49:384 (9,10) - ^
03:18:526 (2,3,4) - Hum... I think it's fine here because of the piano sound
03:41:669 (1,2,3,4) - No 1/4 here
03:45:441 (3,4) - ^

Sorry, but I'm not into modding so much at the moment >.<

I'll continue my mod in another post I think

Good luck :3

Mayzel wrote:

I LOVE THIS MAP
GOOD LUCK

silviasilviafun wrote:

<3
i love it

Nymph wrote:

Hi.

[Lover's Normal]
00:33:099 (4) - New combo for start of the kiai? OK

02:11:155 (1) - the slider ticks are very annoying with the silence music here imo, I suggest to change this slider to a note instead OK

Sorry but I am really busy these days and I have to sleep now for early work tomorrow T T I will try to finish this mod as soon as possible.

Nymph wrote:

Hi.hi Nymph( ,,Ծ ‸ Ծ,,)


[Sinku's Hard ]

00:38:070 (1) - seesms need a clap on the arrow on the slider, or maybe you did it on purpose 0 0?

01:00:698 (5) - I think the music here is 1/8 beats, so 1/4 kinda feel weird, why not try a 1/8 slider which starts at 01:00:784 ?


[sF3min's Insane]
00:00:185 (1) - I think hitsound volumn 70 is way too loud for the beginning part of the song, especially you got volumn 40 at 00:10:299, which should be louder than

the part before it.

00:56:585 (1) - this slow down kinda awkard because all these sliders have new combo so it is really hard to realize this one is the only slow one, maybe remove the

new combos on 00:55:556 (1) - 00:56:070 (1) - ? (and 00:54:870 (1) - this combo seems unnecessary too, maybe remove it)

01:00:698 (1,2) - same as hard diff, I think it is better to use 1/8 instead of 1/4

02:10:984 (1) - and it should be 1/6 here

04:04:126 (1,2) - and this feel like 1/8 which start at 04:04:169


Sorry but I am really busy these days and I have to sleep now for early work tomorrow T T I will try to finish this mod as soon as possible.

Nymph wrote:

Hi and this is all of my mod Thank you

[Serenade]
00:22:470 (2) - the spacing with 1 here is a little different with others, which feel kinda weird, change it to make them same with distance between 3 and 4?

00:25:899 (3,4) - actually this feel a little uncomfortable during playing, because this seems like a sudden pattern which kinda unexpected,well just my personal feeling ^^

01:00:698 (1,2,3) - this feel like 1/6 beats are better,just like I said before

02:24:869 - not an issue but I kinda like to drag the break time to here, it feels better imo, just suggestion

03:13:384 (1) - the clap hitsound is very strange here, a mistake or on purpose?

03:23:155 (4) - and there is a normal whistle here which is strange too

04:04:126 (1) - and this feel like 1/8 which start at 04:04:169


[Insane]
00:58:127 (1) - maybe make the volumn of the sliderticks silence a little bit? it feels like a little too loud imo

03:13:384 (3) - the clap hitsound is very strange here, a mistake or on purpose?

04:04:126 (1) - and this feel like 1/8 which start at 04:04:169



No kudosu for this post.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

As mapper's request to mod the [Serenade] diff~

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.

[Serenade]

1. 00:07:556 (2) - well, I prefer to make players click at 00:07:727 - due to the obvious paino sound. Fix
2. 00:11:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this pattern? just choose 3,4,5,6 and ctrl+g, imo this flows better~ http://puu.sh/avXCW/46c06c6a48.jpg Fix
3. 00:15:099 (1,2,3) - I dont know why you follow vocal here -.- Fix
4. 00:18:013 (1,2) - this rhythm sounds better to me. http://puu.sh/avXMB/46667a1e37.jpg Fix
5. 00:19:213 (1) - hmm, why ignore the beat at 00:19:385 - ? Fix
6. 00:22:127 (1,4) - maybe you can make the sliders look more beautiful~ http://puu.sh/avXUa/08060638fb.jpg Fix?
7. 00:24:527 (4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/avXWH/ef97117f3b.jpg Fix
8. 00:31:042 (1,3) - ctrl+g? Nice
9. 00:31:042 (1) - add clap Fix
10. 00:40:470 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/avY5k/2ea0ceb342.jpg Fix
11. 00:43:385 (1,2,3) - make the head of 00:43:213 (1) - and 00:43:556 (2) - and 3 in the same distance Fix?
12. 00:42:870 (3) - x:221, y:250 Fix
13. 00:47:499 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/avYgU/ae491209a1.jpg, also make a little change on 00:48:527 (2) - to make the flow better Fix
14. 01:20:413 (3,5) - remove the finish on the head, sounds weird... Fix
15. 01:22:470 (5) - 01:22:984 (7) - 01:23:841 (5) - also remove finish Fix
16. 01:28:127 (1,2,3,4) - these 1/4 sliders are overmapped imo, I recommend to change to 2 1/2 sliders or some circles. Want to keeping
17. 01:35:841 (3,4) - add normal sampleset, it fits the songFix
18. 01:38:070 (5) - ^Fix
19. 01:39:098 (1,3,5) - ^Fix
20. 01:45:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ds 1.0 is better and fits the paino imo.　　Fix
21. 02:00:356 (3,4,5) - x:271, y:370　Fix
22. 02:08:413 (1,1,1,1,1) - here sounds a little weird to me. Here is one of recommondation by me: http://puu.sh/avZ0Z/49074c2a0f.jpg. In fact I heard that the beat is on the 02:08:327 - to 02:08:584 - ,02:08:841 - and 02:08:927 - , maybe you have another better way to deal with the problem >.<Very Nice
23. 02:13:898 - from here I think lower ds is better to fit the music　You think you're keeping the distance that it is easy duster
24. 02:22:641 (3,4,5) - I recommend to stack the triplet here, also 02:21:269 (2,3,4) - and 02:23:326 (2,3,4) - 　Nope
25. 02:37:298 (2) - remove this note, here is not a triplet and a triplet start at the white line sounds weird　Fix
26. 02:44:755 (6,7,8) - ^　Fix
27. 03:10:126 (1) - I prefer making 4 jumping circles instead... In fact the slider looks like shit....　I want to keep it so that the image of a fireworks　lol
28. 03:10:898 (1,1) - remove nc?
29. 03:20:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/avZLD/01012b7807.jpg Very very nice
30. 03:24:869 - add 4 notes from 03:24:869 - to 03:25:126 - Fix
31. 03:29:498 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/avZXB/42673b44e3.jpg Fix
32. 03:40:641 (1) - change to 1/2 slider and add 2 notes at 03:40:898 - and 03:40:984 - umm....Keep
33. 03:53:326 (2,3) - the distance is too big imo...Fix

Well, although the map itself has a few problems, I think it's fine for your first map.
Good luck~

Mazingerlaaa wrote:

really nice map,hope that it gets ranked & approved

(noticed i wasn't supposed to post this here after i did,sorry.Don't kill me,I know i'm out of place >.<)

Enon wrote:

go to rank

Enon wrote:

01:43:041 - I think it part is good preview point

Nymph wrote:

good luck with your 1st map

KSHR wrote:

Just my 2 cents, but I disagree with AR9.5 in Serenade difficulty. Even if you wanted to make difference from Insane, 9.5 doesn't fit with BPM175 and this rhythm/mapping style. I'd recommend consider reducing AR at least to 9.0 before this gets ranked, or get opinions about this more and more.

By the way, I'm not planning to rank this for now.

Enon wrote:

when rank ;;;
i can't wait more