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KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-05-07T11:23:00+00:00

[General]

The 2nd kiai time should end at 02:26:180 - to make consistent with the 1st / 3rd one.

[Natsu’s Normal]

00:00:680 (1) - How about doing Ctrl+J this slider? This way the pattern should be flowier, fit with your style better as far as I know. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1557026
00:03:680 (1,2) - This rhythm kinda sounds strange to me since (2) is not following any stresses unlike 00:01:617 (2,4) - (+ The vocal line which starts from around 00:03:492 - ends at around 00:06:305 - .) A 3/4 repeat slider should fit better here, be more friendly for beginners.
00:24:117 (2) - Remove a whistle and then add one to 00:23:742 - to follow the vocal and the synthesizer(?) instead. Adding 2 whistles in a row like this doesn’t sound nice.
00:27:680 (2) - Remove a whistle and add one to 00:27:305 - for the same reason as above.
01:20:180 (1,2,3) - Compared to other rhythm in this 2nd kiai part, it sounds like this one kinda gets toned down without any reasons. You could have followed the drum and vocal more naturally. Same goes for 02:20:180 (1,2,3) - e.g. ↓
01:35:180 (1) - This is just my personal taste: It’d be nice if you make this soft-curved. I don’t see the reason why you made a slider with red way points like this here. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575068

01:44:930 (2,3) - Swap rhythms to follow stresses with a slider-head and note.

+ Here is my suggestion for the placement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575073 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575075

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02:10:055 (5) - It really looks bad..really… try something like this to follow the synthesizer. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575225
02:23:180 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:26:180 - and start to map from 02:26:930 - to make consistent with other kiai parts. (+ 2nd kiai time will end at 02:26:180 - if 10nya fixes.)
03:39:680 (1,2) - Maybe you followed the vocal or synthesizer? But it sounds like the current rhythm doesn’t fit with both well. Try this rhythm once. It should be much better than the current one.
03:42:680 (1) - Check the end point. + I’d recommend reducing the end to around 20% or so.

[Hard]
Overusing jump-patterns!!

00:12:305 (4,5) - It feels like this jump is way too big considering Hard dif. It’d be better to make it more friendly by reducing the spacing. I’d rearrange the rhythm and pattern like this if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581850
```
328,176,12305,1,10,0:0:0:0:
328,176,12492,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,296,12867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
00:18:305 (4,1) - This isn’t as big as 00:12:305 (4,5) - , but it looks a bit too sudden because of the flow and the pattern. It’d be nice if you can rearrange to fix it. ↓ My suggestions.
1: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581867
2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581869 *Removed 00:18:680 (1) - and Ctrl+H-ed (4). Don’t forget to add a new combo to 00:18:867 (1) - in this way.
00:37:617 (3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern should get toned down since the melody is kinda calm. I’d rearrange like screenshots if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582252 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582253
```
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```
00:40:805 (3,1) - Same as 00:12:305 -
00:44:742 (2) - I personally think it’d be better to remove this note to make the pattern more friendly.
00:46:805 (4,5,1) - It feels like this jump is a bit too big, the stack at 00:47:180 (1,2) - mislead players. You should do something to fix them here. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582330 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582334
```
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```
00:53:930 (3,4) - Same as 00:12:305 -

00:56:180 (1,2) - ^, + 00:56:930 (3,2) - this kind of overlap should be avoided in Hard dif since it’s kinda hard to read. My suggestion. -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582351 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582354

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00:59:555 (2) - I understand the reason why you made a jump here, but it’s a bit too big. Reduce the spacing to make the pattern more friendly.
01:09:305 (4,5) - I’m concerned this misleads players with the spacing which looks similar to 01:08:180 (1,2) - . It’d be better to reduce the spacing at 01:08:180 (1,2) - to make the pattern easier to read.
01:14:555 (2,3) - Same as 00:12:305 - .
01:22:055 (2,3) - 01:22:992 (5,1) - The same problem as 01:09:305 (4,5) - here.

To be continued..

Gimme little break! + Check 01:34:992 - ~ by yourself once until I complete my mod!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-07T21:51:37+00:00

KSHR wrote:
[Natsu’s Normal]
00:00:680 (1) - How about doing Ctrl+J this slider? This way the pattern should be flowier, fit with your style better as far as I know. for some reason I wanna start the map in the left corner xD, I'll keep this
00:27:680 (2) - Remove a whistle and add one to 00:27:305 - for the same reason as above.this one sound nice IMO, since the other was a 1/2 , also I prefer to keep my hitsounds in the slider heads or circles than in tails <:
01:35:180 (1) - This is just my personal taste: It’d be nice if you make this soft-curved. I don’t see the reason why you made a slider with red way points like this here. e.g. ah honestly I don't have a reason, but the cursor move in a fun way idk shouldbe fine, DOKI DOKI POWER!
02:10:055 (5) - It really looks bad..really… try something like this to follow the synthesizer. You killed my mapping spirit D: </3, joke xD I changed my table already orz, #neverforget
02:23:180 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:26:180 - and start to map from 02:26:930 - to make consistent with other kiai parts. (+ 2nd kiai time will end at 02:26:180 - if 10nya fixes.) 10nya Fix this if you agree with Mr. Doki Doki

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252,292,72305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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184,120,185180,2,0,P|132:108|72:128,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,276,186680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-05-14T12:22:15+00:00

forget to add reply but all fixed D:

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-06-09T13:31:19+00:00

Sorry to be late.

[Hard]

00:12:305 (4,5) - Still way too hard. You can fix this easily by stacking (4) with (5). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645445
00:37:805 (1,2) - ^, Make a note at 00:38:555 - instead of a 1/2 slider and move it to somewhere like 52|68. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645451
00:46:992 (5) - It looks like this overlapping doesn’t make any sense. Or probably you forgot to remove? Check my previous mod once :p
00:52:992 (4,1) - ^, 3.00x spacing is a bit too huge since this is not in the climax part. Reduce it to make more friendly. Same goes for 00:53:930 (3,4) - .
01:01:992 (1) - Ctrl+G to make the flow better.
01:19:055 (2) - It looks like this note is breaking the flow because of the position. You can stack the slider head at 01:19:242 - with it to fix.
01:44:930 (2,3) - I’d rearrange these objects for the better flow like this if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645477
```
328,268,104930,2,0,P|356:280|388:284,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,228,105305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:57:680 (1,2,3,4) - Considering how the song is sung, this jump which are placed in inconsistent spacing doesn’t fit well.
02:03:305 (5) - A bit too jumpy.. Stacking 02:03:492 - with it is the easiest way to fix imo.
02:05:742 (3,1,2) - The flow kinda looks bad to me because of this slider’s angle, position etc. How about this one? It’d be much better than the current idea. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645489
```
364,104,120680,6,0,P|331:92|296:94,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:40:805 (8,1) - In order to prevent misleading, it’d be better to make this spacing smaller than (1,2).
02:45:305 (3,1) - This one is also a bit too jumpy considering a Hard difficulty. My suggestion for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1695953

Get some mods on Hard difficulty, and I can push this map forward without hesitation. A star icon for now.

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-06-12T07:13:37+00:00

Hello baka-10nya :3/
ingame mod req (Hard diff only as you request lol)

IRC Mod-nya

2014-06-12 13:21 10nya: asagi-saaannn ;;;w;;;;;
2014-06-12 13:22 -Asagi: 10nyanyanynaya ;;;w;;;;
2014-06-12 13:25 -Asagi: why why? ;;w;;
2014-06-12 13:25 10nya:  ca--can you mod my map? only 1 diff ;w; (KSHR told to get mode mods...) 
2014-06-12 13:26 -Asagi: wat mep?
2014-06-12 13:26 -Asagi: maybe i can
2014-06-12 13:28 10nya: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153793
2014-06-12 13:28 10nya: hard diff ;w;
2014-06-12 13:28 -Asagi: IRC or forum?
2014-06-12 13:28 -Asagi: <---shitmodder
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: up to you :3
2014-06-12 13:29 -Asagi: ill testpaly it 1st lol
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: take your time >w<///
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: also thank you owo/ feel free to poke me for mods tho~
2014-06-12 13:29 -Asagi: i dont have any maps to be modded XD
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: lol xD
2014-06-12 13:30 -Asagi: or i dont wanna work on them lol
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: same as mine =w=
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: im just mapping for fun lol
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: i'm planning with you going to be my last map
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: "with you" map i meant lol
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: well i dont wanna have last map
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: but maybe its a good idea XD
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: since im gonna be inactive
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: school + im playing another game right now
2014-06-12 13:32 -Asagi: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you [Hard]] +DoubleTime
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: what game? owo
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: phantasy star online 2
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: no map? wat
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: i forgot to updateeeeeeeeee
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: aaa
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: looooool
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: update it hahaha
2014-06-12 13:35 -Asagi: tell me if updated
2014-06-12 13:36 10nya: sure lololol sorry im so baka =w=
2014-06-12 13:36 -Asagi: y no baka ;w;
2014-06-12 13:36 -Asagi: u no baka
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: ;w;
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: its stuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: laksdjlaskdjsakldjaklsjd
2014-06-12 13:39 -Asagi: RIP BSS
2014-06-12 13:39 -Asagi: BullShitSystem
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: badshitsystem
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: lolololol
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: nice one
2014-06-12 13:43 10nya: god i'll try to update this later =-=
2014-06-12 13:45 -Asagi: ;w;
2014-06-12 13:46 10nya: stillll trying to updateeeeeeeeeee;;;;
2014-06-12 13:46 -Asagi: dat spacings
2014-06-12 13:47 -Asagi: ar8 fits better
2014-06-12 13:48 10nya: yeah i agree
2014-06-12 13:48 10nya: but some modders keep telling ar7... =w=
2014-06-12 13:48 -Asagi: stick with ar8 i guess
2014-06-12 13:48 -Asagi: dafaq
2014-06-12 13:49 -Asagi: this is harder than my hard diffs
2014-06-12 13:55 10nya: yey updated
2014-06-12 13:55 -Asagi: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you]
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you [Hard]] +DoubleTime
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: this is harder than my hard diffs lol
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: usually my hard diffs are ended up as hard+
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: but this is so much harder haha
2014-06-12 13:57 10nya: tthose jumps are fun thoooooooooooooooooo
2014-06-12 13:58 10nya: since i didn't add any stream lol
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: ar8 really fits with this style
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: but
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: maybe some pattern need to be nerf
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: too much jump i guess
2014-06-12 13:59 10nya: yeah, i bet kshr is worried about some patterns lol
2014-06-12 14:00 -Asagi: slider jumps are fine
2014-06-12 14:00 -Asagi: but circle jumps are not
2014-06-12 14:01 -Asagi: wanna IRC mod?
2014-06-12 14:02 10nya: sure owo
2014-06-12 14:02 -Asagi:  the SV doesnt fit the jumps imo
2014-06-12 14:02 -Asagi: too slow, i guess
2014-06-12 14:03 10nya: yeah ;w;
2014-06-12 14:03 -Asagi: okay, ill just point out what to nerf
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: 00:10:805 (4,1) - why dont you make the spacing here consistent?
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: since the rhythm change here 00:11:367 (2) - 
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: or most likely , the tail of 00:10:992 (1) - 
2014-06-12 14:04 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pVmR/e8f2ac1d42.png
2014-06-12 14:04 10nya: like that?
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: so i think there is no point adding some spacing here 00:10:805 (4,1) - 
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: yea yea
2014-06-12 14:05 10nya: since there's change of sv so i added them 
2014-06-12 14:05 10nya: ok fixd
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: yeah
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: not sure about distance of this two 00:14:555 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:06 -Asagi: not sure if this pattern make the spacing reduce enough http://puu.sh/9pVrg/ffdce74b14.jpg
2014-06-12 14:07 10nya: okai
2014-06-12 14:07 -Asagi: but i really love you style
2014-06-12 14:07 -Asagi: just some spacing makes me WTF XD
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: wahaha thanks xD
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: yeah since i thought "wtf this song only 160 bpm with no fit stream what should i do"
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: heuaheuaheuaheuahe
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: ACTION runs*
2014-06-12 14:08 -Asagi: you just added extra jump spacing since there is no stream LOL
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: wwww
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: then i got slap by kshr (?)
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: lololol
2014-06-12 14:09 -Asagi: rip
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: rip 10nya
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: quote="KSHR" : Overusing jump-patterns!!
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: RIP
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: same reaction
2014-06-12 14:11 10nya: huehuehuehuhe
2014-06-12 14:11 -Asagi: 00:15:867 (2) - try ctrl+G this? the jump between 00:15:680 (1,2) -  doesnt fit imo
2014-06-12 14:11 -Asagi: if you ctrl+g that, well it fits here 00:15:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: since you dont move too much of your cursor on this slider anyway 00:15:867 (2) - 
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: 00:19:430 (3,4) - dat spacing, cant suggest a pattern, just reduce the spacing
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: ACTION runs
2014-06-12 14:13 -Asagi: same as 00:20:180 (1,2) - 
2014-06-12 14:13 10nya: ok
2014-06-12 14:13 -Asagi: make it consistent
2014-06-12 14:13 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: 00:26:555 - how bout try to add note here? but i know your reason that you follow the instru
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: but 3/4 jumps is just awkward to click
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: but im not sure, just my opinion
2014-06-12 14:15 10nya: i'll keep it, since it fit the instrument and add some relaxing part to player 
2014-06-12 14:15 10nya: _:'3
2014-06-12 14:15 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
2014-06-12 14:15 -Asagi: thats why im not sure XD
2014-06-12 14:16 10nya: hahah xD
2014-06-12 14:16 -Asagi: 00:45:492 (3,1) - reduce spacing
2014-06-12 14:17 -Asagi: 00:47:930 (3,4) - same here, reduce spacing, since the voice pitch is getting lower and lower
2014-06-12 14:17 10nya: how about i remove 3 ?
2014-06-12 14:17 -Asagi: 00:47:555 (2,3) - but the jump here is fine
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: not sure if removing 3 is a good idea
2014-06-12 14:18 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: most likely, you followed the vocals on that part
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: and (3) is following the vocals, but its your choice
2014-06-12 14:19 -Asagi: 00:57:680 (1,2) - try adding a little spacing here
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: oh i was guessing for removing 3
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: but reduced
2014-06-12 14:20 -Asagi: i think it fits the vocal, and adding more tense before entering the kiai
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: moved 3 grid up
2014-06-12 14:21 -Asagi: 00:59:555 (2,3) - dat jump XD
2014-06-12 14:22 -Asagi: thats too much XD
2014-06-12 14:22 -Asagi: 00:59:742 (3,4) - this is fine, just reduce a bit
2014-06-12 14:23 -Asagi: 01:02:367 (2) - ctrl+G for better circular flow
2014-06-12 14:23 -Asagi: and move a bit up
2014-06-12 14:32 10nya: aa did i dc-ed
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: DCDCDC
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: aaaah
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: asdasdasd
2014-06-12 14:33 10nya: loooooool
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: so what is the last msg you received? lol
2014-06-12 14:34 10nya: 00:59:555 (2,3) 
2014-06-12 14:34 10nya: that one lol
2014-06-12 14:34 -Asagi: oh
2014-06-12 14:34 -Asagi: okay lets go again lol
2014-06-12 14:35 10nya: lol sorry for the trouble
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: 01:02:367 (2) - ctrl+G this and do it likje this http://puu.sh/9pWO2/428bf81192.jpg
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: for better circular flow
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: lol its fine
2014-06-12 14:36 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:36 -Asagi: 01:06:305 (4,1,2,3) - maybe you can rearrange the pattern here
2014-06-12 14:37 -Asagi: i dont really like the flow
2014-06-12 14:37 -Asagi: specially this 01:06:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:38 -Asagi: 01:06:305 (4,1,2) - 3 consecutive note and slider jump
2014-06-12 14:38 -Asagi: reduce them
2014-06-12 14:40 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:40 -Asagi: 01:14:180 (1,2) - try to blanket this, reduce spacing + better blanket
2014-06-12 14:41 10nya: changed 1 into reverse slider
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: 01:21:305 (4,1,2,3) - reduce it
2014-06-12 14:42 10nya: done btw
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: lololol
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: i think its better if you started the spinner here 01:23:555 -
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: 01:22:992 (5,6) - change this into slider instead
2014-06-12 14:43 -Asagi: and add circle here 01:23:367 -
2014-06-12 14:44 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:45 -Asagi: 01:36:867 - try to add circle here?
2014-06-12 14:46 10nya: noo that part is relaxing ;w;
2014-06-12 14:46 -Asagi: ;w;
2014-06-12 14:46 -Asagi: 01:59:555 (2,3) - dat you know
2014-06-12 14:47 -Asagi: 02:04:805 (5,6) - maybe its better to unstack them
2014-06-12 14:47 10nya: dat iz kawaii
2014-06-12 14:47 10nya: no jk 
2014-06-12 14:47 -Asagi: LOOOL
2014-06-12 14:48 -Asagi: 02:08:367 (2,1) - DAT jump, biggest jump i saw right now lol
2014-06-12 14:48 -Asagi: well putting a jump fits, but that is too much
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: 02:11:555 (3,4) - reduce
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: i dont like the flow here 02:14:742 (3,4) - 
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: amybe you can make a better pattern there
2014-06-12 14:51 10nya: doneee
2014-06-12 14:51 10nya: 3 ctrl+g-ed
2014-06-12 14:51 -Asagi: 02:19:242 (3,1,2) - good pattern, but the jump is too much
2014-06-12 14:52 10nya: replaced slider 2
2014-06-12 14:53 10nya: i still want to keep jumo from 3 to 1
2014-06-12 14:53 10nya: 02:19:242 (3,1) but slider 2 jump removed
2014-06-12 14:53 -Asagi: 02:23:273 (1) - the spinner here doesnt fit i guess
2014-06-12 14:54 -Asagi: more like, misplaced
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: should i make the spinner long?
2014-06-12 14:54 -Asagi: hmmm
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: or drag it to red line
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: lol
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: 02:25:055 (1) - try to remove this
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: and
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: put spinner here 02:23:555 -
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: and extend it to 02:25:805 -
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: try to change the rhythm here too 02:22:617 (5,6,7,1) - 
2014-06-12 14:56 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pXML/eb08b3e1b5.png
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: like that
2014-06-12 14:57 -Asagi: yessss
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: lolol
2014-06-12 15:00 -Asagi: 03:07:805 (5,1) - dat jamp
2014-06-12 15:01 -Asagi: maybe some of the jump on the 3rd kiai is fine
2014-06-12 15:01 -Asagi: hmmmm....
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: stacked 5 to 2's head
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: 03:10:805 (4,1)
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: i guess its too far?
2014-06-12 15:02 10nya: lolololol
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: ah yeah lol haha
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: same as 03:10:992 (1,2) - 
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: 03:12:305 (4) - maybe move this lower on the tail
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: oh and dis 03:12:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: circle jumps on hard is SOO hard
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: compare to note slider or slider slider
2014-06-12 15:03 10nya: yeah lol
2014-06-12 15:04 -Asagi: same as 03:15:305 (3,4,1) - 
2014-06-12 15:04 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pY7s/3562892c14.png
2014-06-12 15:04 -Asagi: maybe its fine i guess
2014-06-12 15:05 -Asagi: 03:24:305 (4,1) - lol
2014-06-12 15:05 -Asagi: im sure i ruined your style ;w;
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:36:305 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:37:805 (3,4) - 
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:38:555 (5,6) - use distance snap at least
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:39:305 (2,3) - ^
2014-06-12 15:07 10nya: eeeeeeh lazy to use distance snapping looool
2014-06-12 15:07 -Asagi: RIP hard diff
2014-06-12 15:08 -Asagi: i think thats all?
2014-06-12 15:08 -Asagi: let KSHR polish it more
2014-06-12 15:09 -Asagi: or other modders
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: time to post it this XD
2014-06-12 15:10 10nya: `thank you so muchhh ;w;////
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: shit mod ;w;
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: no problem :3

Good luck baka!! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-06-12T08:29:11+00:00

as requested to check the hard diff o.o

irc

14:14 Xinely: mau irc mod aja beb?
14:16 10nya: boleh owo/
14:16 10nya: yey banjir irc
14:16 10nya: ww
14:16 Xinely: walah
14:16 10nya: (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
14:16 Xinely: lagi irc sama orang lagi jg?
14:16 10nya: barusan selesaai lol
14:17 Xinely: oalah wkwkw
14:17 Xinely: dah update?
14:18 Xinely: bntar testplay dlu
14:19 10nya: monggo beib
14:19 10nya: udaah
14:20 Xinely: kerasa bbrapa jumpnya kyk insane sih tp krn AR7 terbantu dikit bisa di catch tp bbrapa gue mention deh
14:21 Xinely: 00:00:680 (1,2) - kalo menurut persepsi ku enakan di balik hitsoundnya.. finish yg di kepala, whistle yg di circle
14:22 Xinely: 00:04:242 (2) - somehow jumpnya kerasa forced, cuma kecilin dikit kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705564
14:23 10nya: done
14:23 10nya: mau diganti ar 8 btw
14:25 Xinely: 00:10:992 (1) - nah ini cymbal kan di tail, krn menurut teori sama natsu itu cymbal harus di emphasize sama jump, gak asik beb.. jadi coba ritme gnt kyk http://puu.sh/9pYYV/441d3d56fb.jpg ><
14:26 10nya: keep yg last deh beb
14:26 10nya: aku lebih suka kyk gitu rhythmnya ;w;
14:27 Xinely: dari 00:11:180 - 00:23:180 - ini personally whistle kalo bunyi ada yg 1/2 gtu kyk 00:11:367 (2,3) - itu kerasa bising beb
14:27 Xinely: km bisa remove whistle yg di 00:11:555 - kok biar gak bising.. clap enough imo.. kalo setuju gnt yg mirip2 kyk gtu
14:29 Xinely: 00:16:242 (3) - jump nya sakit ini buat hard (apalagi entar lagi lu pke AR 8) imo coba reduce dengan stack sama circle (1) atau sesuka hati mu deh
14:29 10nya: okei
14:30 10nya: donee
14:30 Xinely: 00:17:367 (2) - coba bikin ini curve nya lebih smooth beb, somehow kerasa aneh pas testplay tadi http://puu.sh/9pZch/1eafaa8e0b.jpg
14:31 Xinely: 00:19:805 (4) - coba bikin 3 slider 00:19:430 (3,4,2) - ini jadi pny consistency spacing dengan move 00:19:805 (4) - ke 324,168? design better for me xD
14:31 Xinely: 00:20:180 (1) - skalian biar emphasize cymbal di sini, cymbal w/o jump somehow aneh sih buat gue
14:32 Xinely: 00:20:742 (3) - sorry nazi, jump nya pke blanket dari 00:20:367 (2,3) - dong biar lebih rapi
14:33 10nya: done
14:33 Xinely: 00:27:680 (3) - ini coba di curve biar konsisten bentuknya sama slider berikutnya, kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705580
14:34 10nya: oh itu emang sengaja dari straight ke agak curve sama curve
14:34 10nya: =w=/
14:34 Xinely: 00:39:305 (4) - nazi sih, cuma move ke 40,216 00:39:867 (5) - 168,356 biar flownya lebih smoother aja
14:35 10nya: done
14:35 Xinely: 00:46:055 (2) - remove clapnya? tau sih km emphasize musicnya tp kedengarannya rada random sih imo
14:36 10nya: `donee
14:37 Xinely: 00:51:680 (1) - ini coba remove whistlenya terus 00:52:430 - pke whistle yg default (yg prit prit)... yg ini 00:49:430 - pas soalnya kan dari music mirip soundnyatp gak sama buat ini sih 00:52:430 - imo jadinya gue lebih prefer pke default
14:39 Xinely: 00:53:930 (3,4) - for me dari (3)'s tail ke (4)'s head itu flownya gak enak, msh bisa improve, krn ini calm part, imo jump segini gak masalah sih https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705584
14:39 Xinely: 00:56:742 (2) - coba di consistent spacing aja, kerasa too sudden buat circlenya pas testplay tadi. move ke 148,32
14:40 Xinely: 01:01:242 (4,1) - stack it properly dong beb
14:54 10nya: sial dc --
14:54 Xinely: kyknya kebanyakan, gue tunggu reply lu dlu aja beb 
14:54 Xinely: awkawk
14:54 Xinely: last tadi masuk sampe mana beb?
14:56 10nya: dcnya dari whistle2 itu...
14:56 10nya: ;w;
14:56 Xinely: http://puu.sh/9q0hD/48fbed629d.jpg
14:56 Xinely: ini dari last suggestion yg blm km reply beb
14:56 Xinely: males ketik gue ehe
14:59 10nya: oke beb
15:00 Xinely: kalo udah blg ya beb. gue lanjutin
15:08 10nya: done all beb
15:08 Xinely: oke lanjut
15:09 Xinely: 01:03:492 (5,1) - nazi, coba swap NC biar consitent beb? jadi per stanza gtu
15:10 Xinely: 01:04:055 (6,2) - stacknya kurang pas jg btw aha
15:11 10nya: done
15:11 Xinely: 01:10:430 (2) - tau sih musiknya cukup keras tp jumpnya susah buat Hard apalagi entar AR 8 jg
15:11 Xinely: reduce dikit aja beb
15:11 Xinely: 01:12:867 (2) - nazi 392,316 for better flow
15:11 Xinely: 01:13:805 (5,2) - stacknya kurang properly ehe
15:12 Xinely:  01:15:867 (2) - remove whistle di tail? cukup bising imo
15:12 10nya: done
15:13 Xinely: 01:19:805 (4,1) - lebih rapi kalo di move ke 260,108 beb. skalian reduce spacing yg gede
15:14 Xinely: 01:39:867 (5) - NC for consistency beb?
15:14 10nya: done
15:15 Xinely: 01:58:992 (5) - gila ini jumpnya susah amat beb, kyk gni aja beb http://puu.sh/9q12Q/06704790d4.jpg
15:16 10nya: aku stack sama 1 beb
15:16 Xinely: ok
15:17 Xinely: 02:05:742 (3) - beb ini flownya aneh soalnya beda dari sblm2nya, bisa kok tetep bikin flownya mirip kyk sblm nya, misal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705647
15:18 Xinely: 02:13:055 (2) - coba ini flownya bisa di improve dikit.. 192,240 kyknya
15:19 Xinely: 02:33:680 (3,4,5,6) - ini hitsoundnya semua kepala clap, semua tail whistle biar lebih consistent beb, yg finish itu biarin aja soalnya emang musik
15:19 10nya: okei
15:20 Xinely: 02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - flownya bisa improve jg. coba pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705653 ?
15:21 10nya: done
15:21 Xinely: 03:04:992 (1) - coba curve slidernya ke kiri dikit biar flownya lebih natural lagi? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705655
15:21 10nya: sengaja beb
15:21 10nya: kayak mapnya delis :>
15:22 Xinely: 03:11:742 (3,1) - stack nya :3
15:22 Xinely: 03:06:867 (2) - aku ragu sama circle ini soalnya jump nya gede pas musiknya biasa2 aja beb. tp gak ada ide buat fix jg.. coba tny KSHR aja soal itu
15:23 10nya: stack ke 3 aja deh
15:23 Xinely: 03:40:805 (3) - coba ke 248,116 biar lebih natural (walau buat gue msh tetep bisa improve tp gak ada ide) orz
15:24 Xinely: itu doang aja beb
15:25 10nya: oke beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb
15:25 10nya: thanks yoow
15:25 10nya: post ya :>>
15:26 Xinely: okii

Since we're use indonesian language to mod so what we have fixed:

Much of placements especially hard jumps
Some hitsounds
Just it www

Good Luck beb

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2014-06-12T12:58:27+00:00

A little mod from me:

Hard:

00:25:805 - Circle
00:26:742 (2) - Move this slider half of the beat earlier
00:27:305 - Half-beat slider
00:58:617 (3) - Reverse unnecessary, only longer slider.
01:15:305 (3) - New combo here is better than 01:15:492 here
01:19:805 (4) - Same here.
01:38:742 (4) - Half-beat earlier
01:39:305 - Half-beat slider from here
01:39:680 - Circle
01:42:305 - Circle
01:52:992 (1) - Half of the beat later is better for me.
02:03:305 (5) - New combo here instead of 02:03:492
02:07:805 (4) - New combo instead of 02:07:992
02:59:180 (1) - Spinner 2 beats longer I think.
03:17:555 (3) - Circle out of the playfield
03:25:055 (2) - Like above
03:27:680 (1,2) - Half-beat slider instead of these 2 circles.
03:33:867 (1) - Too fast after spinner and I think circle 03:34:055 will be better.

Guest diffs are nice made for me.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-06-13T04:18:59+00:00

only fixed 02:59:180 (1) - Spinner 2 beats longer I think. thanks for modding

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-06-16T08:17:35+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hard

00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje
00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja
00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas
01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^)
01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
;w;
01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep
01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack
panjang amat sih ini lagu B(
03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk
03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya

yeyeye modnya gendut
kaya nyanya ( b `w` )b

`kabur

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-06-16T08:49:19+00:00

inverness wrote:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hard
00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje gasuka slider yang berkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh ;w;
00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja ^
00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas susah ngepasin (apa yang diharapkan dari notebuk busuk 4 taun dengan low graphic card yang ngestack aja butuh perjuangan) lelele but trying to fix all of them
01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^) kampret jangan buka kartu 8'(
01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
;w;
01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep ..biarkanlah /runs
01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack biar asick huehue /gak emang mau ngejump bagian sini
panjang amat sih ini lagu B( ampun mas
03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk ampuni saya
03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya
yeyeye modnya gendut
kaya nyanya ( b `w` )b kampret lwwwwwwwww:'[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[

`kabur

didn;t reply means fixed, thanks owo/

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2014-06-18T05:08:59+00:00

I will try this map hard diff mod o3o.

[Hard]

■ 00:15:305 (4,1,2) This part can be made more stack patterns clearly.

SPOILER

■ 00:16:430 (4) This slider end is not perfect stack.
■ 00:30:305 I just suggestion this point add note
■ 01:01:992 (1) You missing this slider end stack for 01:01:617 (4) slider end point.
■ 01:13:805 (5) Hmm, I suggestion this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. well, It can play a natural flow.
■ 01:21:305 (3,4,1) Umm, I think, this jump a little difficult. Can you try this pattern flow?

SPOILER

■ 01:35:180 (2) New combo?
■ 01:56:742 (2,3) I just want this pattern blanket improve

but it's my opinion, If you don't want ignore this suggestion.
■ 02:42:367 Remove timing line here.
■ 03:07:242 (4,5,1) Nya.. nya!!! Can you try this ?!

SPOILER

Good luck this map rank!

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-18T06:59:23+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
I will try this map hard diff mod o3o.
ww thanks gloria-kun ></~

[Hard]

■ 00:15:305 (4,1,2) This part can be made more stack patterns clearly.
SPOILER

■ 00:16:430 (4) This slider end is not perfect stack.
■ 00:30:305 I just suggestion this point add note i'm following vocal here ;w;
■ 01:01:992 (1) You missing this slider end stack for 01:01:617 (4) slider end point.
■ 01:13:805 (5) Hmm, I suggestion this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. well, It can play a natural flow.
■ 01:21:305 (3,4,1) Umm, I think, this jump a little difficult. Can you try this pattern flow?
SPOILER
it only slider jump so i guess it's ok ;w;
■ 01:35:180 (2) New combo? nah it's no use owo
■ 01:56:742 (2,3) I just want this pattern blanket improve but it's my opinion, If you don't want ignore this suggestion.
■ 02:42:367 Remove timing line here.
■ 03:07:242 (4,5,1) Nya.. nya!!! Can you try this ?!
SPOILER

Good luck this map rank!

didn't reply means fixed, thanks for modding ></~

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2014-06-20T06:23:59+00:00

Tenyaaaaaa (✿◕‿◕)つ～

Maaf mod queue aku gabut berbulan-bulan, ditunggu yaaaa buat ranked

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-20T11:50:07+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Tenyaaaaaa (✿◕‿◕)つ～
Maaf mod queue aku gabut berbulan-bulan, ditunggu yaaaa buat ranked

santai aja makoo star thanks yaa :3

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-06-22T01:08:33+00:00

[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:180 (2) - Why not a blanket?. blanket batter

SPOILER

00:06:680 (1) - tail x:1 60 y: 292

no kud

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-06-23T08:34:06+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:180 (2) - Why not a blanket?. blanket batter actually is a triangle XD

00:06:680 (1) - tail x:1 60 y: 292 I don't see why, is fine at it is IMO

no kud

Laurier

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Laurier 2014-06-26T10:16:04+00:00

why KSHR didnt mod my diff

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-26T14:27:44+00:00

He said he'll do rechecks soon probably he'll mod yours

orrrrrrr your diff is okay

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-07-11T23:00:37+00:00

Sorry to be late, 10nya. Ofc no kudosu please.

[Hard]

00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color.
00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
```
64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
```
268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
```
03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064

[ろーりえずInsane]

Time points where a finish should be added as a sound like the cymbal goes.
SPOILER
1. 01:04:805 -
2. 01:10:805 -
3. 01:20:742 -
4. 01:22:805 -
5. 02:10:805 -
6. 02:16:805 -
7. 02:20:742 -
8. 02:22:805 -
9. 03:15:305 -
10. 03:21:305 -
11. 03:27:305 -
Time points where a finish should be removed as a sound like the cymbal doesn't.
SPOILER
1. 00:44:180 -
2. 01:02:180 (1) -
3. 01:12:680 - + Apparently you forgot to add a whistle here.
4. 01:44:180 -
5. 02:02:180 -
6. 02:32:180 -
7. 03:06:680 -
8. 03:08:180 -
9. 03:17:180 -
10. 03:18:680 - + A whistle.
11. 03:33:680 -
00:30:211 (4) - Is this note really necessary? I can't hear any sound here at all. Keeping 1/2 rhythm should be better for this part.
00:58:805 (1,2) - I'd recommend turning into a 1/2 slider instead. I understand the synthesizer is followed here, but it's not basically done in your rhythm, what's worse its volume is not that loud to notice during gameplay. + By doing this, you cam make the rhythm consistent with 01:58:805 (6) - .

There are so many stack patterns in your difficulty as always! I think some of them don't fit with the song well, but should be enough acceptable as your mapping style. + It sounded like finishes are randomly added. Other than them, I don't have any complaints.

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-12T05:54:54+00:00

KSHR wrote:
Sorry to be late, 10nya. Ofc no kudosu please.

[Hard]
00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color. eeh i think it's readable since there's slider 4 (and it'll create follow-path so player wont be soo hard to read this)
00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064
I'm gonna check Insane tomorrow.

didnt reply means fixed hue thanks for the mod master _:3

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-07-12T07:38:53+00:00

rank rank

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-12T10:12:56+00:00

wwwwwwwwwwwwww \o\

69th post is mine yeah!

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-07-15T08:42:40+00:00

10nya, check the Tags on Laurier's Insane before you submit.

Laurier

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Laurier 2014-07-15T11:09:07+00:00

http://puu.sh/acf7F/9e3f6d0345.osu

hoi

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-15T12:04:52+00:00

my body is ready come here KSHR <3

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-07-20T22:37:25+00:00

don

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-21T04:05:05+00:00

yeeeeeeeeeey thanks kusohara

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-07-21T12:56:31+00:00

10nya wrote:
yeeeeeeeeeey thanks kusohara

good job "kusohara" ... ?

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-21T13:49:36+00:00

@Sate-san: yes! KSHR stands for KuSoHaRa ^_^)/

/me runs*

edit: yay new page

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-07-22T02:19:59+00:00

nice :3

happy623

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happy623 2014-07-23T14:32:46+00:00

pu pu pu

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-07-25T06:28:53+00:00

happy623 wrote:
pu pu pu

prprprprpr

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-25T09:09:24+00:00

!req talk english pls thank

wwww

alacat

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alacat 2014-08-04T18:39:19+00:00

yo

[General]

Disable letterbox during breaks ?

[Normal]

OD -1. Because you used many 1/2 rhythms in this difficulty.
00:03:680 (1) - add a whistle to the repeat of the slider since you used this sound next slider's repeat 00:05:742 -
01:15:680 (2) - Please move this slider down a bit. Because It touches score and acc number
SPOILER
02:01:805 (4,1) - Please check your pattern of the stack at here 00:24:117 (2,3) - ,00:25:992 (4,1) - ,02:08:555 (2,3) - . you made a different pattern of the stack. so i would remove this stack for beginners. If you follow my suggestions, it prevents the player from misreading.

[Hard]

00:15:867 (2) - As you can see here, since you already have the up and down motion from your previous patterns, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural jump. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G to this slider.
00:33:680 (1) - Design suggestion : How about making more curve point here ? It would fit with this vocal.
SPOILER
00:39:305 (4,5,1) - I recommend you to use same spacing about x1.70 like your other parts.
01:37:055 (1,2,3) - Please check spacing here
02:08:742 (1) - I think you don't need to add a new combo here. Please check other kiai times
02:38:930 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is too hard for this difficulty to me. Consider reducing spacings here.

That's all for now, Check these and let me know c:

captin1

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captin1 2014-08-05T03:39:31+00:00

alacat ranks both with you mapsets lol :3

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-08-05T11:37:05+00:00

I'll check this today when i wake up

Laurier

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Laurier 2014-08-05T11:55:08+00:00

all fixed

10nya

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10nya 2014-08-06T10:52:01+00:00

all fixed OwO

@Normal: Unstacked 02:01:805 (4,1) - cause it can make player miss read (and keep stacked at next patterns because 1/2 stacked slider is easy to catch for player :3).

updated!

alacat

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alacat 2014-08-06T16:59:43+00:00

lol captin