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ts8zs

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-04-06T02:54:59+00:00

From queue
[Laurier's Insane]
00:01:055 (3) - 104,120
00:04:617 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:14:555 (2) - ^
01:38:180 (1) - Ctrl+G
>01:38:742 (3) - ^
01:42:867 (2) - 72,328
02:01:242 (4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486132
>02:02:180 (1) - Ctrl+G
>>02:02:742 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:38:555 (2) - Ctrl+G
>02:38:930 (3) - ^
>>02:39:305 (4) - ^
02:40:805 (5) - 376,120
03:48:492 - End at here?
[Hard]
01:46:242 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:58:617 (5) - NC
02:23:180 (1) - 460.272
03:48:492 - End at here?
[Normal]
00:37:055 - sounds strange?
01:46:242 - use ^ here?
01:46:617 - ^
03:48:492 - End at here?

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-06T04:46:56+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[Laurier's Insane]
Looks good.

[Hard]
AR -1, Objects aren't too crowded together. Plus the speed of the approach circles don't really correspond well with the tempo of the music.
00:10:805 (4,1) - I don't think the big spacing here is really necessary, it looks rather weird instead. I think you're trying to make the spacing here consistent with the spacing between 00:08:742 (2,1) - but it isn't necessary. Notice that 00:08:742 (2) - ends at 00:09:492 (on a red tick mark) and
00:09:680 (1) - starts on the white tick mark. So the spacing is happening between red - big white tick mark.

But now here, 00:10:805 (4) - isn't on a red tick mark, 00:10:992 (1) - is. 00:10:992 (1) - has pretty much covered this spot (which the spacing should be, but can't now). Does this makes sense?

01:35:180 (2) - NC since it starts on a new rhythm (it's on the big white tick mark).

02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - Awkward flow, no I don't mean the zig-zag flow. I mean where you've placed 02:37:805 (9) - . Please consider remapping this part.

SPOILER

Okay, I haven't quite touched on finding a better brand new flow for this part, but a square formation of some sort might work well here. Something like this:

03:03:680 (3) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

[Natsu's Normal]
02:00:680 (3,4) - Switch timing spots so that 02:01:055 (4) - starts at 02:00:680 and vice versa. Now add a clap on the hit circle which should appear on 02:01:805 now.
This rhythm sounds better imo, because both the note at 02:00:305 (2) - and on 02:01:805 will help highlight the custom hitsound clap better.
With that, you can also form symmetry with the objects in this rhythm too!

Good luck!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-06T21:05:08+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
From queue

[Normal]
00:37:055 - sounds strange? is fine
01:46:242 - use ^ here? nop, just 2 and 4 downbeats
01:46:617 - ^ ^
03:48:492 - End at here? o.o, nop, unless 10nya change this on her diff

thanks for mod, I apply the one that 10crystalmask01 suggested

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06 with you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:with you
TitleUnicode:with you
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:10nya
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:EXSTETRA
Tags:エクステトラ ex-tetra opening clara alice second story -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- Laurier Natsu
BeatmapID:385065
BeatmapSetID:153793

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-04-13T09:34:33+00:00

all diff end at 03:48:492 ^-^

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-04-26T17:09:50+00:00

Hi :3 Sorry for waiting delay

[General]

Consider disabling Letterbox during breaks all diffs.

[Natsu's Normal]

Umm... it's great idea you use clap hitsound in "soft-sliderslide2.wav". Sure. it's no problem, but to it get better sound, you move the green line section that next to the rhythm to the red line all. Example: the rhythm in slider 00:21:867 (4). Please make like this picture.
SPOILER
00:00:680 (1) - The flow is weird for me, so I think you use regular slider curve like this picture would be better, thought.
SPOILER
00:04:617 (2) - It doesn't good idea for adding a circle in here, because it seems no fit with any imo. I think you should move this at 00:04:805 - or use 3/2 slider like 00:05:180 (3) - . It would be better with listening.
00:21:180 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end of (1), and remove it on (2). I think it would move fit than imo if you have compared with the vocal.
00:26:180 (1,2) - ^
00:29:555 (2) - Add whistle? It seems better than with listening, thought.
00:30:680 (4) - ^
01:20:180 (1,2) - Whistle on both slider begin rarely fit to use in this rhythm, so please change these are finish instead like 02:20:180 (1,2) -
01:41:555 (2,4) - Please try to avoid overlaping both, because this can cause the newbie player miss here.
02:23:180 (1) - This spinner can end at 02:25:430 - although it would reduce during to start next note, but I think it's no problem for the normal diff.
03:17:742 (4,1,2) - You can move the slider begin of (2) stack with the slider end of (4), and move slider (1) to down 3 grids. which it would look better.
03:24:680 (1) Same with 01:20:180 (1,2) - so please change it is finish.
03:30:117 (3) - It looks weird when I play it. I suggest that move it to x:220 y:44 would be better imo.
03:35:555 (3) - Please add finish on slider end because I heard the melody on that.
03:38:367 (3) - This slider doesn't fit with the melody, but however, you can fix by remove repeating of slider. Then add a circle at 03:39:305 instead.

Note: For Hard and Insane, I will post yours again, or edit mine later if I already have freetime T.T

[Hard]

Umm... this diff has so much overjumped, which it would difficult for who use mouse to playing standard map. However, this is just my suggestion.
00:10:992 (1) - Did you forget to add finish in slider end? Because I heard the rhythm in the song explicitly. So please add it.
00:28:992 (6) - The flow was weird here. So I suggest that move this to x:428 y:316 would be better.
00:33:680 (1) - Just move slider end of (1) to left 2 grids, to cause this stack with 00:34:805 (2,3) -
00:38:180 (1) - Why you use whistle here? Seem it doesn't fit for this
00:46:242 (3,4,5,1) - This flowing may cause me and other player confused. So please fix these easier that this (Sorry that I don't have idea)
01:17:555 (3) - I want this move this to x:300 y:232, which I think it cause flow better, although it just move a bit.
01:21:492 (1,2) - Please move these like this picture, by move (2) to stack with 01:19:992 (1) - , because spacing was so far and flow was weird for me.
SPOILER
01:40:992 (7,1) - Add whistle these, because I heard something in the rhythm.
01:56:180 (1) - I heard the rhythm in the middle of slider. So you can use 1/2 slider to fit with the rhythm.
01:56:930 (3) - ^ , and if you don't fix it, please don't forget to add clap.
02:03:305 (4) - Move this to x:396 y:228, which I think it would flow better to playing imo.
02:18:680 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin, because I think it doesn't fit enough yet to use finish.
02:59:180 (1) - You can end spinner at 03:02:180 - because it would more fit with the melody than ending a spinner in the vocal.
03:03:305 (1) - Clap hitsound was too loud. Please remove it.
03:04:805 (4,1) - If you want flow better, please move circle (4) to down about x:484 y;136, which I think it's better to playing, and make slider (1) is curve slider.
03:07:055 (2,3) - It's flow so weird. So please move these notes like this picture would be better to playing.
SPOILER
03:25:055 (2) - Putting this note in that, I think it causes confused about playing. Perhaps moving this to downward than slider would be reduce this problem.
03:30:773 (1) - Why you use clap here? I think it's too loud for this. So please remove it.
03:42:586 (1) - Please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody.

[Laurier's Insane]

00:16:805 (5) - I feel this can add finish to cause this is more fit with the rhythm than.
00:20:742 (3) - ^
00:32:742 (2) - Move this to x:292 y:72. It may reduce awkwardness.
00:48:867 (2) - Remove whistle here. It's unnecessary to use in this.
01:42:680 (1,2) - Please stack them by moving (1).
02:20:180 (1) - Add finish in slider begin to follow the melody.
03:10:617 (4) - You forget to add clap in slider end, I guess. So please add it.
03:16:055 (3) - Umm... why you use whistle here? Please change it is clap to follow the rhythm.
03:42:586 (1) - This seems 10nya had moved spinner end at 03:48:492 - when latest, but however please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody.

Beautiful mapped =w= all diff is good for me, but I felt Hard diff was too difficult for the hard diff, may be because it's overjump between each notes so much imo, which although it may no problem for some player, but please consider about this would be better. So I will give a star because it's nice map

Good luck~

Edit: Modded Hard and Laurier's Insane

Last edited by Nichiyouki 2014-05-02T20:35:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-27T23:14:16+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:
[Natsu's Normal]
Umm... it's great idea you use clap hitsound in "soft-sliderslide2.wav". Sure. it's no problem, but to it get better sound, you move the green line section that next to the rhythm to the red line all. Example: the rhythm in slider 00:21:867 (4). Please make like this picture. It doesn't affect anything
00:00:680 (1) - The flow is weird for me, so I think you use regular slider curve like this picture would be better, thought.mmm I like my current slider shape, also the flow is linear there, no body will have problems with it
00:04:617 (2) - It doesn't good idea for adding a circle in here, because it seems no fit with any imo. I think you should move this at 00:04:805 - or use 3/2 slider like 00:05:180 (3) - . It would be better with listening. It's following the vocals, just like I did with 00:00:680 (1,2) - and 00:02:180 (3,4) -
00:21:180 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end of (1), and remove it on (2). I think it would move fit than imo if you have compared with the vocal. no, first it will broke my pattern plus the sound in 00:20:742 - is loud than the tail of the previous one, also there is not vocal
00:26:180 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:29:555 (2) - Add whistle? It seems better than with listening, thought. mm no, I prefer to keep it in 00:29:930 - the music is more prominent
00:30:680 (4) - ^ ^
01:20:180 (1,2) - Whistle on both slider begin rarely fit to use in this rhythm, so please change these are finish instead like 02:20:180 (1,2) - added finish in 01:21:492
01:41:555 (2,4) - Please try to avoid overlaping both, because this can cause the newbie player miss here. that's not an overlap is a stack with other circle, due to the new skin the hitburst are not even a problem with this kind of patterns, I guess is fine
02:23:180 (1) - This spinner can end at 02:25:430 - although it would reduce during to start next note, but I think it's no problem for the normal diff. first to all 10nya ended the kiai there, plus this is a normal but an easy at the same time, I prefer to leave a big gap between the spinner end and the next object
03:17:742 (4,1,2) - You can move the slider begin of (2) stack with the slider end of (4), and move slider (1) to down 3 grids. which it would look better. did something here
03:24:680 (1) Same with 01:20:180 (1,2) - so please change it is finish. yup
03:30:117 (3) - It looks weird when I play it. I suggest that move it to x:220 y:44 would be better imo. It looks fine to me, I don't see an issue with this
03:35:555 (3) - Please add finish on slider end because I heard the melody on that. I guess the current clap work better than a finish there
03:38:367 (3) - This slider doesn't fit with the melody, but however, you can fix by remove repeating of slider. Then add a circle at 03:39:305 instead. yeah

thanks for mod

SPOILER

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Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-05-01T14:11:40+00:00

hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

[Natsu's Normal]

imo, in the beginning it's incredible hard to read red/white tick changes
and since this is the easiest difficulty you should try to make it as easy as possible (while still having a Normal diff), imo
so you might want to consider to change the pattern up to something like this -
screen

or
the same applies for any other red/white tick change!
00:24:305 (3,4,1) - the movement/flow here doesn't work nicely with the calm, relaxing nature of the song
(plus, it looks really crowded to me. ><) maybe change the shapes up a bit?
weird example
I'm sure you can think of something better here!
00:32:180 (1,2,3,4) - movement could be improved here a lot, if you move 2 further to the left and adjust 3 -
screen
00:51:680 (3,1) - why don't you blanket 1 here perfectly? that'd look better, I think
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - I don't get why there is a break here. o.o the part is totally mapable.. kinda feels off. >:
(I didn't look at the other diffs yet, so maybe you just kept it consistent, so ignore this if it's like that. xD or take a look at what I said about it in the other diffs, up to you.)
02:14:180 (1,2) - if you increase the curve here they could blanket each other better (which looks better I think)
02:20:180 (1) - consider matching this better with 02:21:492 (2) - so they create a nice circle, maybe
screen
03:28:617 - maybe add a cirlce here? you'd get rid of the red/white tick change and if you slow down you can clearly here that it still matches the vocals
(might match them even better if you just extend the slider to that red tick.)
03:34:055 - I'm missing a circle here as well. >:
03:39:680 (1) - this spinner is like.. endlessly long, maybe split this up at around 03:42:680 -?

sorry for using so mayn screens, I'm just bad at explaining using words. orz

[Hard]

hmh, that whistle you use in the beginning sounds a bit overused to me. ><
it's so high pitched.. really hurts in the ears. :\ consider using it a bit less, eg at 00:04:242 (2) - it works perfectly fine without a whistle
00:08:180 (1) - might look better with 00:07:242 (2) - if you mirror one of them
00:51:680 (1,2,3) - maybe it's just me, but this could look better if triangle patterns are equilateral (> move 3 to 124|28)
01:18:492 (1,2,3,4) - movement from 2 to 3 to 4 feels 'forced', you could improve this if you move them around a bit
example
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - so the break is in every diff. hmh. '^' I don't like it. It's in the middle of the song, coming out of nowhere. D:
consider mapping this part? it doesn't make the difficulty much harder while giving it a nicer feeling.
if you want to have a 3rd break, I think you could fit one somewhere else, eg 02:25:055 - 02:29:180
03:48:680 - move timing point to red tick before? I guess the spinner should be silenced there, but it's off.. o.o

nice difficulty!
if you're bored you might want to check through it and fix some blankets. I didn't mention them, cause ppl never fix them anyway, but it improves the looks of a map by a lot, I think, so it's worth it!

skipping Insane, sorry. x:
(it did look really nice while playing tho)

good luck to you!
*squee* o/

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-02T05:38:06+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

[Natsu's Normal]
imo, in the beginning it's incredible hard to read red/white tick changes and since this is the easiest difficulty you should try to make it as easy as possible (while still having a Normal diff), imo the transitions are mostly slider to slider, is really easy IMO
so you might want to consider to change the pattern up to something like this -
screen

or
the same applies for any other red/white tick change! is a normal diff not an easy <:
00:24:305 (3,4,1) - the movement/flow here doesn't work nicely with the calm, relaxing nature of the song
(plus, it looks really crowded to me. ><) maybe change the shapes up a bit?
weird example
I'm sure you can think of something better here! I don't see a valid reason to change my moe shape <;, since I like it
00:32:180 (1,2,3,4) - movement could be improved here a lot, if you move 2 further to the left and adjust 3 -
screen
is almost the same, just my (2) is placed a bit to the right, is on purpose <:
00:51:680 (3,1) - why don't you blanket 1 here perfectly? that'd look better, I think was not a blanket, but I did some here
01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - I don't get why there is a break here. o.o the part is totally mapable.. kinda feels off. >: (I didn't look at the other diffs yet, so maybe you just kept it consistent, so ignore this if it's like that. xD or take a look at what I said about it in the other diffs, up to you.)almost every part in a song is, but for consistency with 10nya diff and also you can listen a bit slowdown in the music, the break is fine
02:14:180 (1,2) - if you increase the curve here they could blanket each other better (which looks better I think) I move them a bit
02:20:180 (1) - consider matching this better with 02:21:492 (2) - so they create a nice circle, maybe
screen
03:28:617 - maybe add a cirlce here? you'd get rid of the red/white tick change and if you slow down you can clearly here that it still matches the vocals
(might match them even better if you just extend the slider to that red tick.) Is fine, since I can't notice the difference between your and mine
03:34:055 - I'm missing a circle here as well. >: too soon after a spinner
03:39:680 (1) - this spinner is like.. endlessly long, maybe split this up at around 03:42:680 -? you right, done

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10nya

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Topic Starter

10nya 2014-05-04T11:14:01+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3 Sorry for waiting delay

[General]
Consider disabling Letterbox during breaks all diffs. since i don't use sb so i'll keep this
[Hard]
Umm... this diff has so much overjumped, which it would difficult for who use mouse to playing standard map. However, this is just my suggestion. i do agree but since there's no stream (only triplet with slider) so i guess the diff will be boring so i added jumps orz.)
00:10:992 (1) - Did you forget to add finish in slider end? Because I heard the rhythm in the song explicitly. So please add it.
00:28:992 (6) - The flow was weird here. So I suggest that move this to x:428 y:316 would be better.
00:33:680 (1) - Just move slider end of (1) to left 2 grids, to cause this stack with 00:34:805 (2,3) -
00:38:180 (1) - Why you use whistle here? Seem it doesn't fit for this it follow music if you hear this carefully w
00:46:242 (3,4,5,1) - This flowing may cause me and other player confused. So please fix these easier that this (Sorry that I don't have idea)
01:17:555 (3) - I want this move this to x:300 y:232, which I think it cause flow better, although it just move a bit.
01:21:492 (1,2) - Please move these like this picture, by move (2) to stack with 01:19:992 (1) - , because spacing was so far and flow was weird for me.
SPOILER
01:40:992 (7,1) - Add whistle these, because I heard something in the rhythm.
01:56:180 (1) - I heard the rhythm in the middle of slider. So you can use 1/2 slider to fit with the rhythm. i'm following vocal here
01:56:930 (3) - ^ , and if you don't fix it, please don't forget to add clap.
02:03:305 (4) - Move this to x:396 y:228, which I think it would flow better to playing imo.
02:18:680 (1) - Remove finish on slider begin, because I think it doesn't fit enough yet to use finish.
02:59:180 (1) - You can end spinner at 03:02:180 - because it would more fit with the melody than ending a spinner in the vocal.
03:03:305 (1) - Clap hitsound was too loud. Please remove it.
03:04:805 (4,1) - If you want flow better, please move circle (4) to down about x:484 y;136, which I think it's better to playing, and make slider (1) is curve slider.
03:07:055 (2,3) - It's flow so weird. So please move these notes like this picture would be better to playing.
SPOILER
03:25:055 (2) - Putting this note in that, I think it causes confused about playing. Perhaps moving this to downward than slider would be reduce this problem.
03:30:773 (1) - Why you use clap here? I think it's too loud for this. So please remove it.
03:42:586 (1) - Please end spinner at 03:48:640 - to follow the melody. i'll keep to make the map a bit long
Beautiful mapped =w= all diff is good for me, but I felt Hard diff was too difficult for the hard diff, may be because it's overjump between each notes so much imo, which although it may no problem for some player, but please consider about this would be better. So I will give a star because it's nice map
thank you so much nich-san! :3

Good luck~

Edit: Modded Hard and Laurier's Insane

Squirrel wrote:
hi there! :3
mod from my queue, even though it's been a while.. orz
please keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me! :3

hi and thanks for the time~

[Hard]
hmh, that whistle you use in the beginning sounds a bit overused to me. ><
it's so high pitched.. really hurts in the ears. :\ consider using it a bit less, eg at 00:04:242 (2) - it works perfectly fine without a whistle i want to make this part a but loud
00:08:180 (1) - might look better with 00:07:242 (2) - if you mirror one of them nah keep this one
00:51:680 (1,2,3) - maybe it's just me, but this could look better if triangle patterns are equilateral (> move 3 to 124|28) i think it's not a big deal :3
01:18:492 (1,2,3,4) - movement from 2 to 3 to 4 feels 'forced', you could improve this if you move them around a bit
example

01:47:555 - 01:53:180 - so the break is in every diff. hmh. '^' I don't like it. It's in the middle of the song, coming out of nowhere. D:
consider mapping this part? it doesn't make the difficulty much harder while giving it a nicer feeling. this part is a bit calming (since the map is full of jumps) so let the player rest
if you want to have a 3rd break, I think you could fit one somewhere else, eg 02:25:055 - 02:29:180
03:48:680 - move timing point to red tick before? I guess the spinner should be silenced there, but it's off.. o.o it's a bookmark :3 doesnt affect any timing
nice difficulty!
if you're bored you might want to check through it and fix some blankets. I didn't mention them, cause ppl never fix them anyway, but it improves the looks of a map by a lot, I think, so it's worth it! well i do aware about this but i prefer to let them like this orz.

skipping Insane, sorry. x:
(it did look really nice while playing tho)

good luck to you!
*squee* o/

didn't reply means fixed and Natsu's diff updated!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-05T05:26:10+00:00

10nya take care of my diff

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-05-05T07:12:03+00:00

http://puu.sh/8zVZ8.osu

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-05-05T08:24:22+00:00

wth natso those stars.... o__o

also updated~

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-05-07T11:23:00+00:00

[General]

The 2nd kiai time should end at 02:26:180 - to make consistent with the 1st / 3rd one.

[Natsu’s Normal]

00:00:680 (1) - How about doing Ctrl+J this slider? This way the pattern should be flowier, fit with your style better as far as I know. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1557026
00:03:680 (1,2) - This rhythm kinda sounds strange to me since (2) is not following any stresses unlike 00:01:617 (2,4) - (+ The vocal line which starts from around 00:03:492 - ends at around 00:06:305 - .) A 3/4 repeat slider should fit better here, be more friendly for beginners.
00:24:117 (2) - Remove a whistle and then add one to 00:23:742 - to follow the vocal and the synthesizer(?) instead. Adding 2 whistles in a row like this doesn’t sound nice.
00:27:680 (2) - Remove a whistle and add one to 00:27:305 - for the same reason as above.
01:20:180 (1,2,3) - Compared to other rhythm in this 2nd kiai part, it sounds like this one kinda gets toned down without any reasons. You could have followed the drum and vocal more naturally. Same goes for 02:20:180 (1,2,3) - e.g. ↓
01:35:180 (1) - This is just my personal taste: It’d be nice if you make this soft-curved. I don’t see the reason why you made a slider with red way points like this here. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575068

01:44:930 (2,3) - Swap rhythms to follow stresses with a slider-head and note.

+ Here is my suggestion for the placement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575073 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575075

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02:10:055 (5) - It really looks bad..really… try something like this to follow the synthesizer. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575225
02:23:180 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:26:180 - and start to map from 02:26:930 - to make consistent with other kiai parts. (+ 2nd kiai time will end at 02:26:180 - if 10nya fixes.)
03:39:680 (1,2) - Maybe you followed the vocal or synthesizer? But it sounds like the current rhythm doesn’t fit with both well. Try this rhythm once. It should be much better than the current one.
03:42:680 (1) - Check the end point. + I’d recommend reducing the end to around 20% or so.

[Hard]
Overusing jump-patterns!!

00:12:305 (4,5) - It feels like this jump is way too big considering Hard dif. It’d be better to make it more friendly by reducing the spacing. I’d rearrange the rhythm and pattern like this if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581850
```
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328,176,12492,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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```
00:18:305 (4,1) - This isn’t as big as 00:12:305 (4,5) - , but it looks a bit too sudden because of the flow and the pattern. It’d be nice if you can rearrange to fix it. ↓ My suggestions.
1: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581867
2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581869 *Removed 00:18:680 (1) - and Ctrl+H-ed (4). Don’t forget to add a new combo to 00:18:867 (1) - in this way.
00:37:617 (3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern should get toned down since the melody is kinda calm. I’d rearrange like screenshots if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582252 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582253
```
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00:40:805 (3,1) - Same as 00:12:305 -
00:44:742 (2) - I personally think it’d be better to remove this note to make the pattern more friendly.
00:46:805 (4,5,1) - It feels like this jump is a bit too big, the stack at 00:47:180 (1,2) - mislead players. You should do something to fix them here. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582330 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582334
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00:53:930 (3,4) - Same as 00:12:305 -

00:56:180 (1,2) - ^, + 00:56:930 (3,2) - this kind of overlap should be avoided in Hard dif since it’s kinda hard to read. My suggestion. -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582351 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1582354

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00:59:555 (2) - I understand the reason why you made a jump here, but it’s a bit too big. Reduce the spacing to make the pattern more friendly.
01:09:305 (4,5) - I’m concerned this misleads players with the spacing which looks similar to 01:08:180 (1,2) - . It’d be better to reduce the spacing at 01:08:180 (1,2) - to make the pattern easier to read.
01:14:555 (2,3) - Same as 00:12:305 - .
01:22:055 (2,3) - 01:22:992 (5,1) - The same problem as 01:09:305 (4,5) - here.

To be continued..

Gimme little break! + Check 01:34:992 - ~ by yourself once until I complete my mod!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-07T21:51:37+00:00

KSHR wrote:
[Natsu’s Normal]
00:00:680 (1) - How about doing Ctrl+J this slider? This way the pattern should be flowier, fit with your style better as far as I know. for some reason I wanna start the map in the left corner xD, I'll keep this
00:27:680 (2) - Remove a whistle and add one to 00:27:305 - for the same reason as above.this one sound nice IMO, since the other was a 1/2 , also I prefer to keep my hitsounds in the slider heads or circles than in tails <:
01:35:180 (1) - This is just my personal taste: It’d be nice if you make this soft-curved. I don’t see the reason why you made a slider with red way points like this here. e.g. ah honestly I don't have a reason, but the cursor move in a fun way idk shouldbe fine, DOKI DOKI POWER!
02:10:055 (5) - It really looks bad..really… try something like this to follow the synthesizer. You killed my mapping spirit D: </3, joke xD I changed my table already orz, #neverforget
02:23:180 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:26:180 - and start to map from 02:26:930 - to make consistent with other kiai parts. (+ 2nd kiai time will end at 02:26:180 - if 10nya fixes.) 10nya Fix this if you agree with Mr. Doki Doki

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

10nya 2014-05-14T12:22:15+00:00

forget to add reply but all fixed D:

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-06-09T13:31:19+00:00

Sorry to be late.

[Hard]

00:12:305 (4,5) - Still way too hard. You can fix this easily by stacking (4) with (5). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645445
00:37:805 (1,2) - ^, Make a note at 00:38:555 - instead of a 1/2 slider and move it to somewhere like 52|68. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645451
00:46:992 (5) - It looks like this overlapping doesn’t make any sense. Or probably you forgot to remove? Check my previous mod once :p
00:52:992 (4,1) - ^, 3.00x spacing is a bit too huge since this is not in the climax part. Reduce it to make more friendly. Same goes for 00:53:930 (3,4) - .
01:01:992 (1) - Ctrl+G to make the flow better.
01:19:055 (2) - It looks like this note is breaking the flow because of the position. You can stack the slider head at 01:19:242 - with it to fix.
01:44:930 (2,3) - I’d rearrange these objects for the better flow like this if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645477
```
328,268,104930,2,0,P|356:280|388:284,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,228,105305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:57:680 (1,2,3,4) - Considering how the song is sung, this jump which are placed in inconsistent spacing doesn’t fit well.
02:03:305 (5) - A bit too jumpy.. Stacking 02:03:492 - with it is the easiest way to fix imo.
02:05:742 (3,1,2) - The flow kinda looks bad to me because of this slider’s angle, position etc. How about this one? It’d be much better than the current idea. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645489
```
364,104,120680,6,0,P|331:92|296:94,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:40:805 (8,1) - In order to prevent misleading, it’d be better to make this spacing smaller than (1,2).
02:45:305 (3,1) - This one is also a bit too jumpy considering a Hard difficulty. My suggestion for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1695953

Get some mods on Hard difficulty, and I can push this map forward without hesitation. A star icon for now.

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-06-12T07:13:37+00:00

Hello baka-10nya :3/
ingame mod req (Hard diff only as you request lol)

IRC Mod-nya

2014-06-12 13:21 10nya: asagi-saaannn ;;;w;;;;;
2014-06-12 13:22 -Asagi: 10nyanyanynaya ;;;w;;;;
2014-06-12 13:25 -Asagi: why why? ;;w;;
2014-06-12 13:25 10nya:  ca--can you mod my map? only 1 diff ;w; (KSHR told to get mode mods...) 
2014-06-12 13:26 -Asagi: wat mep?
2014-06-12 13:26 -Asagi: maybe i can
2014-06-12 13:28 10nya: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153793
2014-06-12 13:28 10nya: hard diff ;w;
2014-06-12 13:28 -Asagi: IRC or forum?
2014-06-12 13:28 -Asagi: <---shitmodder
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: up to you :3
2014-06-12 13:29 -Asagi: ill testpaly it 1st lol
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: take your time >w<///
2014-06-12 13:29 10nya: also thank you owo/ feel free to poke me for mods tho~
2014-06-12 13:29 -Asagi: i dont have any maps to be modded XD
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: lol xD
2014-06-12 13:30 -Asagi: or i dont wanna work on them lol
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: same as mine =w=
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: im just mapping for fun lol
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: i'm planning with you going to be my last map
2014-06-12 13:30 10nya: "with you" map i meant lol
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: well i dont wanna have last map
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: but maybe its a good idea XD
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: since im gonna be inactive
2014-06-12 13:31 -Asagi: school + im playing another game right now
2014-06-12 13:32 -Asagi: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you [Hard]] +DoubleTime
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: what game? owo
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: phantasy star online 2
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: no map? wat
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: i forgot to updateeeeeeeeee
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: aaa
2014-06-12 13:33 10nya: looooool
2014-06-12 13:33 -Asagi: update it hahaha
2014-06-12 13:35 -Asagi: tell me if updated
2014-06-12 13:36 10nya: sure lololol sorry im so baka =w=
2014-06-12 13:36 -Asagi: y no baka ;w;
2014-06-12 13:36 -Asagi: u no baka
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: ;w;
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: its stuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
2014-06-12 13:39 10nya: laksdjlaskdjsakldjaklsjd
2014-06-12 13:39 -Asagi: RIP BSS
2014-06-12 13:39 -Asagi: BullShitSystem
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: badshitsystem
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: lolololol
2014-06-12 13:41 10nya: nice one
2014-06-12 13:43 10nya: god i'll try to update this later =-=
2014-06-12 13:45 -Asagi: ;w;
2014-06-12 13:46 10nya: stillll trying to updateeeeeeeeeee;;;;
2014-06-12 13:46 -Asagi: dat spacings
2014-06-12 13:47 -Asagi: ar8 fits better
2014-06-12 13:48 10nya: yeah i agree
2014-06-12 13:48 10nya: but some modders keep telling ar7... =w=
2014-06-12 13:48 -Asagi: stick with ar8 i guess
2014-06-12 13:48 -Asagi: dafaq
2014-06-12 13:49 -Asagi: this is harder than my hard diffs
2014-06-12 13:55 10nya: yey updated
2014-06-12 13:55 -Asagi: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you]
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 ClariS - with you [Hard]] +DoubleTime
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: this is harder than my hard diffs lol
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: usually my hard diffs are ended up as hard+
2014-06-12 13:56 -Asagi: but this is so much harder haha
2014-06-12 13:57 10nya: tthose jumps are fun thoooooooooooooooooo
2014-06-12 13:58 10nya: since i didn't add any stream lol
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: ar8 really fits with this style
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: but
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: maybe some pattern need to be nerf
2014-06-12 13:59 -Asagi: too much jump i guess
2014-06-12 13:59 10nya: yeah, i bet kshr is worried about some patterns lol
2014-06-12 14:00 -Asagi: slider jumps are fine
2014-06-12 14:00 -Asagi: but circle jumps are not
2014-06-12 14:01 -Asagi: wanna IRC mod?
2014-06-12 14:02 10nya: sure owo
2014-06-12 14:02 -Asagi:  the SV doesnt fit the jumps imo
2014-06-12 14:02 -Asagi: too slow, i guess
2014-06-12 14:03 10nya: yeah ;w;
2014-06-12 14:03 -Asagi: okay, ill just point out what to nerf
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: 00:10:805 (4,1) - why dont you make the spacing here consistent?
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: since the rhythm change here 00:11:367 (2) - 
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: or most likely , the tail of 00:10:992 (1) - 
2014-06-12 14:04 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pVmR/e8f2ac1d42.png
2014-06-12 14:04 10nya: like that?
2014-06-12 14:04 -Asagi: so i think there is no point adding some spacing here 00:10:805 (4,1) - 
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: yea yea
2014-06-12 14:05 10nya: since there's change of sv so i added them 
2014-06-12 14:05 10nya: ok fixd
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: yeah
2014-06-12 14:05 -Asagi: not sure about distance of this two 00:14:555 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:06 -Asagi: not sure if this pattern make the spacing reduce enough http://puu.sh/9pVrg/ffdce74b14.jpg
2014-06-12 14:07 10nya: okai
2014-06-12 14:07 -Asagi: but i really love you style
2014-06-12 14:07 -Asagi: just some spacing makes me WTF XD
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: wahaha thanks xD
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: yeah since i thought "wtf this song only 160 bpm with no fit stream what should i do"
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: heuaheuaheuaheuahe
2014-06-12 14:08 10nya: ACTION runs*
2014-06-12 14:08 -Asagi: you just added extra jump spacing since there is no stream LOL
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: wwww
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: then i got slap by kshr (?)
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: lololol
2014-06-12 14:09 -Asagi: rip
2014-06-12 14:09 10nya: rip 10nya
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: quote="KSHR" : Overusing jump-patterns!!
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: RIP
2014-06-12 14:10 -Asagi: same reaction
2014-06-12 14:11 10nya: huehuehuehuhe
2014-06-12 14:11 -Asagi: 00:15:867 (2) - try ctrl+G this? the jump between 00:15:680 (1,2) -  doesnt fit imo
2014-06-12 14:11 -Asagi: if you ctrl+g that, well it fits here 00:15:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: since you dont move too much of your cursor on this slider anyway 00:15:867 (2) - 
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: 00:19:430 (3,4) - dat spacing, cant suggest a pattern, just reduce the spacing
2014-06-12 14:12 -Asagi: ACTION runs
2014-06-12 14:13 -Asagi: same as 00:20:180 (1,2) - 
2014-06-12 14:13 10nya: ok
2014-06-12 14:13 -Asagi: make it consistent
2014-06-12 14:13 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: 00:26:555 - how bout try to add note here? but i know your reason that you follow the instru
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: but 3/4 jumps is just awkward to click
2014-06-12 14:14 -Asagi: but im not sure, just my opinion
2014-06-12 14:15 10nya: i'll keep it, since it fit the instrument and add some relaxing part to player 
2014-06-12 14:15 10nya: _:'3
2014-06-12 14:15 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
2014-06-12 14:15 -Asagi: thats why im not sure XD
2014-06-12 14:16 10nya: hahah xD
2014-06-12 14:16 -Asagi: 00:45:492 (3,1) - reduce spacing
2014-06-12 14:17 -Asagi: 00:47:930 (3,4) - same here, reduce spacing, since the voice pitch is getting lower and lower
2014-06-12 14:17 10nya: how about i remove 3 ?
2014-06-12 14:17 -Asagi: 00:47:555 (2,3) - but the jump here is fine
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: not sure if removing 3 is a good idea
2014-06-12 14:18 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: most likely, you followed the vocals on that part
2014-06-12 14:18 -Asagi: and (3) is following the vocals, but its your choice
2014-06-12 14:19 -Asagi: 00:57:680 (1,2) - try adding a little spacing here
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: oh i was guessing for removing 3
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: but reduced
2014-06-12 14:20 -Asagi: i think it fits the vocal, and adding more tense before entering the kiai
2014-06-12 14:20 10nya: moved 3 grid up
2014-06-12 14:21 -Asagi: 00:59:555 (2,3) - dat jump XD
2014-06-12 14:22 -Asagi: thats too much XD
2014-06-12 14:22 -Asagi: 00:59:742 (3,4) - this is fine, just reduce a bit
2014-06-12 14:23 -Asagi: 01:02:367 (2) - ctrl+G for better circular flow
2014-06-12 14:23 -Asagi: and move a bit up
2014-06-12 14:32 10nya: aa did i dc-ed
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: DCDCDC
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: aaaah
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: asdasdasd
2014-06-12 14:33 10nya: loooooool
2014-06-12 14:33 -Asagi: so what is the last msg you received? lol
2014-06-12 14:34 10nya: 00:59:555 (2,3) 
2014-06-12 14:34 10nya: that one lol
2014-06-12 14:34 -Asagi: oh
2014-06-12 14:34 -Asagi: okay lets go again lol
2014-06-12 14:35 10nya: lol sorry for the trouble
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: 01:02:367 (2) - ctrl+G this and do it likje this http://puu.sh/9pWO2/428bf81192.jpg
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: for better circular flow
2014-06-12 14:35 -Asagi: lol its fine
2014-06-12 14:36 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:36 -Asagi: 01:06:305 (4,1,2,3) - maybe you can rearrange the pattern here
2014-06-12 14:37 -Asagi: i dont really like the flow
2014-06-12 14:37 -Asagi: specially this 01:06:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 14:38 -Asagi: 01:06:305 (4,1,2) - 3 consecutive note and slider jump
2014-06-12 14:38 -Asagi: reduce them
2014-06-12 14:40 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:40 -Asagi: 01:14:180 (1,2) - try to blanket this, reduce spacing + better blanket
2014-06-12 14:41 10nya: changed 1 into reverse slider
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: 01:21:305 (4,1,2,3) - reduce it
2014-06-12 14:42 10nya: done btw
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: lololol
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: i think its better if you started the spinner here 01:23:555 -
2014-06-12 14:42 -Asagi: 01:22:992 (5,6) - change this into slider instead
2014-06-12 14:43 -Asagi: and add circle here 01:23:367 -
2014-06-12 14:44 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:45 -Asagi: 01:36:867 - try to add circle here?
2014-06-12 14:46 10nya: noo that part is relaxing ;w;
2014-06-12 14:46 -Asagi: ;w;
2014-06-12 14:46 -Asagi: 01:59:555 (2,3) - dat you know
2014-06-12 14:47 -Asagi: 02:04:805 (5,6) - maybe its better to unstack them
2014-06-12 14:47 10nya: dat iz kawaii
2014-06-12 14:47 10nya: no jk 
2014-06-12 14:47 -Asagi: LOOOL
2014-06-12 14:48 -Asagi: 02:08:367 (2,1) - DAT jump, biggest jump i saw right now lol
2014-06-12 14:48 -Asagi: well putting a jump fits, but that is too much
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: 02:11:555 (3,4) - reduce
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: i dont like the flow here 02:14:742 (3,4) - 
2014-06-12 14:50 -Asagi: amybe you can make a better pattern there
2014-06-12 14:51 10nya: doneee
2014-06-12 14:51 10nya: 3 ctrl+g-ed
2014-06-12 14:51 -Asagi: 02:19:242 (3,1,2) - good pattern, but the jump is too much
2014-06-12 14:52 10nya: replaced slider 2
2014-06-12 14:53 10nya: i still want to keep jumo from 3 to 1
2014-06-12 14:53 10nya: 02:19:242 (3,1) but slider 2 jump removed
2014-06-12 14:53 -Asagi: 02:23:273 (1) - the spinner here doesnt fit i guess
2014-06-12 14:54 -Asagi: more like, misplaced
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: should i make the spinner long?
2014-06-12 14:54 -Asagi: hmmm
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: or drag it to red line
2014-06-12 14:54 10nya: lol
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: 02:25:055 (1) - try to remove this
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: and
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: put spinner here 02:23:555 -
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: and extend it to 02:25:805 -
2014-06-12 14:55 -Asagi: try to change the rhythm here too 02:22:617 (5,6,7,1) - 
2014-06-12 14:56 10nya: done
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pXML/eb08b3e1b5.png
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: like that
2014-06-12 14:57 -Asagi: yessss
2014-06-12 14:57 10nya: lolol
2014-06-12 15:00 -Asagi: 03:07:805 (5,1) - dat jamp
2014-06-12 15:01 -Asagi: maybe some of the jump on the 3rd kiai is fine
2014-06-12 15:01 -Asagi: hmmmm....
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: stacked 5 to 2's head
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: 03:10:805 (4,1)
2014-06-12 15:01 10nya: i guess its too far?
2014-06-12 15:02 10nya: lolololol
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: ah yeah lol haha
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: same as 03:10:992 (1,2) - 
2014-06-12 15:02 -Asagi: 03:12:305 (4) - maybe move this lower on the tail
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: oh and dis 03:12:867 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: circle jumps on hard is SOO hard
2014-06-12 15:03 -Asagi: compare to note slider or slider slider
2014-06-12 15:03 10nya: yeah lol
2014-06-12 15:04 -Asagi: same as 03:15:305 (3,4,1) - 
2014-06-12 15:04 10nya: http://puu.sh/9pY7s/3562892c14.png
2014-06-12 15:04 -Asagi: maybe its fine i guess
2014-06-12 15:05 -Asagi: 03:24:305 (4,1) - lol
2014-06-12 15:05 -Asagi: im sure i ruined your style ;w;
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:36:305 (2,3) - 
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:37:805 (3,4) - 
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:38:555 (5,6) - use distance snap at least
2014-06-12 15:06 -Asagi: 03:39:305 (2,3) - ^
2014-06-12 15:07 10nya: eeeeeeh lazy to use distance snapping looool
2014-06-12 15:07 -Asagi: RIP hard diff
2014-06-12 15:08 -Asagi: i think thats all?
2014-06-12 15:08 -Asagi: let KSHR polish it more
2014-06-12 15:09 -Asagi: or other modders
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: time to post it this XD
2014-06-12 15:10 10nya: `thank you so muchhh ;w;////
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: shit mod ;w;
2014-06-12 15:10 -Asagi: no problem :3

Good luck baka!! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-06-12T08:29:11+00:00

as requested to check the hard diff o.o

irc

14:14 Xinely: mau irc mod aja beb?
14:16 10nya: boleh owo/
14:16 10nya: yey banjir irc
14:16 10nya: ww
14:16 Xinely: walah
14:16 10nya: (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
14:16 Xinely: lagi irc sama orang lagi jg?
14:16 10nya: barusan selesaai lol
14:17 Xinely: oalah wkwkw
14:17 Xinely: dah update?
14:18 Xinely: bntar testplay dlu
14:19 10nya: monggo beib
14:19 10nya: udaah
14:20 Xinely: kerasa bbrapa jumpnya kyk insane sih tp krn AR7 terbantu dikit bisa di catch tp bbrapa gue mention deh
14:21 Xinely: 00:00:680 (1,2) - kalo menurut persepsi ku enakan di balik hitsoundnya.. finish yg di kepala, whistle yg di circle
14:22 Xinely: 00:04:242 (2) - somehow jumpnya kerasa forced, cuma kecilin dikit kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705564
14:23 10nya: done
14:23 10nya: mau diganti ar 8 btw
14:25 Xinely: 00:10:992 (1) - nah ini cymbal kan di tail, krn menurut teori sama natsu itu cymbal harus di emphasize sama jump, gak asik beb.. jadi coba ritme gnt kyk http://puu.sh/9pYYV/441d3d56fb.jpg ><
14:26 10nya: keep yg last deh beb
14:26 10nya: aku lebih suka kyk gitu rhythmnya ;w;
14:27 Xinely: dari 00:11:180 - 00:23:180 - ini personally whistle kalo bunyi ada yg 1/2 gtu kyk 00:11:367 (2,3) - itu kerasa bising beb
14:27 Xinely: km bisa remove whistle yg di 00:11:555 - kok biar gak bising.. clap enough imo.. kalo setuju gnt yg mirip2 kyk gtu
14:29 Xinely: 00:16:242 (3) - jump nya sakit ini buat hard (apalagi entar lagi lu pke AR 8) imo coba reduce dengan stack sama circle (1) atau sesuka hati mu deh
14:29 10nya: okei
14:30 10nya: donee
14:30 Xinely: 00:17:367 (2) - coba bikin ini curve nya lebih smooth beb, somehow kerasa aneh pas testplay tadi http://puu.sh/9pZch/1eafaa8e0b.jpg
14:31 Xinely: 00:19:805 (4) - coba bikin 3 slider 00:19:430 (3,4,2) - ini jadi pny consistency spacing dengan move 00:19:805 (4) - ke 324,168? design better for me xD
14:31 Xinely: 00:20:180 (1) - skalian biar emphasize cymbal di sini, cymbal w/o jump somehow aneh sih buat gue
14:32 Xinely: 00:20:742 (3) - sorry nazi, jump nya pke blanket dari 00:20:367 (2,3) - dong biar lebih rapi
14:33 10nya: done
14:33 Xinely: 00:27:680 (3) - ini coba di curve biar konsisten bentuknya sama slider berikutnya, kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705580
14:34 10nya: oh itu emang sengaja dari straight ke agak curve sama curve
14:34 10nya: =w=/
14:34 Xinely: 00:39:305 (4) - nazi sih, cuma move ke 40,216 00:39:867 (5) - 168,356 biar flownya lebih smoother aja
14:35 10nya: done
14:35 Xinely: 00:46:055 (2) - remove clapnya? tau sih km emphasize musicnya tp kedengarannya rada random sih imo
14:36 10nya: `donee
14:37 Xinely: 00:51:680 (1) - ini coba remove whistlenya terus 00:52:430 - pke whistle yg default (yg prit prit)... yg ini 00:49:430 - pas soalnya kan dari music mirip soundnyatp gak sama buat ini sih 00:52:430 - imo jadinya gue lebih prefer pke default
14:39 Xinely: 00:53:930 (3,4) - for me dari (3)'s tail ke (4)'s head itu flownya gak enak, msh bisa improve, krn ini calm part, imo jump segini gak masalah sih https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705584
14:39 Xinely: 00:56:742 (2) - coba di consistent spacing aja, kerasa too sudden buat circlenya pas testplay tadi. move ke 148,32
14:40 Xinely: 01:01:242 (4,1) - stack it properly dong beb
14:54 10nya: sial dc --
14:54 Xinely: kyknya kebanyakan, gue tunggu reply lu dlu aja beb 
14:54 Xinely: awkawk
14:54 Xinely: last tadi masuk sampe mana beb?
14:56 10nya: dcnya dari whistle2 itu...
14:56 10nya: ;w;
14:56 Xinely: http://puu.sh/9q0hD/48fbed629d.jpg
14:56 Xinely: ini dari last suggestion yg blm km reply beb
14:56 Xinely: males ketik gue ehe
14:59 10nya: oke beb
15:00 Xinely: kalo udah blg ya beb. gue lanjutin
15:08 10nya: done all beb
15:08 Xinely: oke lanjut
15:09 Xinely: 01:03:492 (5,1) - nazi, coba swap NC biar consitent beb? jadi per stanza gtu
15:10 Xinely: 01:04:055 (6,2) - stacknya kurang pas jg btw aha
15:11 10nya: done
15:11 Xinely: 01:10:430 (2) - tau sih musiknya cukup keras tp jumpnya susah buat Hard apalagi entar AR 8 jg
15:11 Xinely: reduce dikit aja beb
15:11 Xinely: 01:12:867 (2) - nazi 392,316 for better flow
15:11 Xinely: 01:13:805 (5,2) - stacknya kurang properly ehe
15:12 Xinely:  01:15:867 (2) - remove whistle di tail? cukup bising imo
15:12 10nya: done
15:13 Xinely: 01:19:805 (4,1) - lebih rapi kalo di move ke 260,108 beb. skalian reduce spacing yg gede
15:14 Xinely: 01:39:867 (5) - NC for consistency beb?
15:14 10nya: done
15:15 Xinely: 01:58:992 (5) - gila ini jumpnya susah amat beb, kyk gni aja beb http://puu.sh/9q12Q/06704790d4.jpg
15:16 10nya: aku stack sama 1 beb
15:16 Xinely: ok
15:17 Xinely: 02:05:742 (3) - beb ini flownya aneh soalnya beda dari sblm2nya, bisa kok tetep bikin flownya mirip kyk sblm nya, misal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705647
15:18 Xinely: 02:13:055 (2) - coba ini flownya bisa di improve dikit.. 192,240 kyknya
15:19 Xinely: 02:33:680 (3,4,5,6) - ini hitsoundnya semua kepala clap, semua tail whistle biar lebih consistent beb, yg finish itu biarin aja soalnya emang musik
15:19 10nya: okei
15:20 Xinely: 02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - flownya bisa improve jg. coba pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705653 ?
15:21 10nya: done
15:21 Xinely: 03:04:992 (1) - coba curve slidernya ke kiri dikit biar flownya lebih natural lagi? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1705655
15:21 10nya: sengaja beb
15:21 10nya: kayak mapnya delis :>
15:22 Xinely: 03:11:742 (3,1) - stack nya :3
15:22 Xinely: 03:06:867 (2) - aku ragu sama circle ini soalnya jump nya gede pas musiknya biasa2 aja beb. tp gak ada ide buat fix jg.. coba tny KSHR aja soal itu
15:23 10nya: stack ke 3 aja deh
15:23 Xinely: 03:40:805 (3) - coba ke 248,116 biar lebih natural (walau buat gue msh tetep bisa improve tp gak ada ide) orz
15:24 Xinely: itu doang aja beb
15:25 10nya: oke beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb
15:25 10nya: thanks yoow
15:25 10nya: post ya :>>
15:26 Xinely: okii

Since we're use indonesian language to mod so what we have fixed:

Much of placements especially hard jumps
Some hitsounds
Just it www

Good Luck beb

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2014-06-12T12:58:27+00:00

A little mod from me:

Hard:

00:25:805 - Circle
00:26:742 (2) - Move this slider half of the beat earlier
00:27:305 - Half-beat slider
00:58:617 (3) - Reverse unnecessary, only longer slider.
01:15:305 (3) - New combo here is better than 01:15:492 here
01:19:805 (4) - Same here.
01:38:742 (4) - Half-beat earlier
01:39:305 - Half-beat slider from here
01:39:680 - Circle
01:42:305 - Circle
01:52:992 (1) - Half of the beat later is better for me.
02:03:305 (5) - New combo here instead of 02:03:492
02:07:805 (4) - New combo instead of 02:07:992
02:59:180 (1) - Spinner 2 beats longer I think.
03:17:555 (3) - Circle out of the playfield
03:25:055 (2) - Like above
03:27:680 (1,2) - Half-beat slider instead of these 2 circles.
03:33:867 (1) - Too fast after spinner and I think circle 03:34:055 will be better.

Guest diffs are nice made for me.

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-13T04:18:59+00:00

only fixed 02:59:180 (1) - Spinner 2 beats longer I think. thanks for modding

69653863

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69653863 2014-06-16T08:17:35+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hard

00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje
00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja
00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas
01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^)
01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
;w;
01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep
01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack
panjang amat sih ini lagu B(
03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk
03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya

yeyeye modnya gendut
kaya nyanya ( b `w` )b

`kabur

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-16T08:49:19+00:00

inverness wrote:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hard
00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje gasuka slider yang berkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh ;w;
00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja ^
00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas susah ngepasin (apa yang diharapkan dari notebuk busuk 4 taun dengan low graphic card yang ngestack aja butuh perjuangan) lelele but trying to fix all of them
01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^) kampret jangan buka kartu 8'(
01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
;w;
01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep ..biarkanlah /runs
01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack biar asick huehue /gak emang mau ngejump bagian sini
panjang amat sih ini lagu B( ampun mas
03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk ampuni saya
03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya
yeyeye modnya gendut
kaya nyanya ( b `w` )b kampret lwwwwwwwww:'[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[

`kabur

didn;t reply means fixed, thanks owo/

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2014-06-18T05:08:59+00:00

I will try this map hard diff mod o3o.

[Hard]

■ 00:15:305 (4,1,2) This part can be made more stack patterns clearly.

SPOILER

■ 00:16:430 (4) This slider end is not perfect stack.
■ 00:30:305 I just suggestion this point add note
■ 01:01:992 (1) You missing this slider end stack for 01:01:617 (4) slider end point.
■ 01:13:805 (5) Hmm, I suggestion this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. well, It can play a natural flow.
■ 01:21:305 (3,4,1) Umm, I think, this jump a little difficult. Can you try this pattern flow?

SPOILER

■ 01:35:180 (2) New combo?
■ 01:56:742 (2,3) I just want this pattern blanket improve

but it's my opinion, If you don't want ignore this suggestion.
■ 02:42:367 Remove timing line here.
■ 03:07:242 (4,5,1) Nya.. nya!!! Can you try this ?!

SPOILER

Good luck this map rank!

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-18T06:59:23+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
I will try this map hard diff mod o3o.
ww thanks gloria-kun ></~

[Hard]

■ 00:15:305 (4,1,2) This part can be made more stack patterns clearly.
SPOILER

■ 00:16:430 (4) This slider end is not perfect stack.
■ 00:30:305 I just suggestion this point add note i'm following vocal here ;w;
■ 01:01:992 (1) You missing this slider end stack for 01:01:617 (4) slider end point.
■ 01:13:805 (5) Hmm, I suggestion this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. well, It can play a natural flow.
■ 01:21:305 (3,4,1) Umm, I think, this jump a little difficult. Can you try this pattern flow?
SPOILER
it only slider jump so i guess it's ok ;w;
■ 01:35:180 (2) New combo? nah it's no use owo
■ 01:56:742 (2,3) I just want this pattern blanket improve but it's my opinion, If you don't want ignore this suggestion.
■ 02:42:367 Remove timing line here.
■ 03:07:242 (4,5,1) Nya.. nya!!! Can you try this ?!
SPOILER

Good luck this map rank!

didn't reply means fixed, thanks for modding ></~

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2014-06-20T06:23:59+00:00

Tenyaaaaaa (✿◕‿◕)つ～

Maaf mod queue aku gabut berbulan-bulan, ditunggu yaaaa buat ranked

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-20T11:50:07+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Tenyaaaaaa (✿◕‿◕)つ～
Maaf mod queue aku gabut berbulan-bulan, ditunggu yaaaa buat ranked

santai aja makoo star thanks yaa :3

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-06-22T01:08:33+00:00

[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:180 (2) - Why not a blanket?. blanket batter

SPOILER

00:06:680 (1) - tail x:1 60 y: 292

no kud

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-06-23T08:34:06+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:180 (2) - Why not a blanket?. blanket batter actually is a triangle XD

00:06:680 (1) - tail x:1 60 y: 292 I don't see why, is fine at it is IMO

no kud

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-06-26T10:16:04+00:00

why KSHR didnt mod my diff

10nya

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10nya 2014-06-26T14:27:44+00:00

He said he'll do rechecks soon probably he'll mod yours

orrrrrrr your diff is okay

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-07-11T23:00:37+00:00

Sorry to be late, 10nya. Ofc no kudosu please.

[Hard]

00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color.
00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
```
64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
```
268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
```
03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064

[ろーりえずInsane]

Time points where a finish should be added as a sound like the cymbal goes.
SPOILER
1. 01:04:805 -
2. 01:10:805 -
3. 01:20:742 -
4. 01:22:805 -
5. 02:10:805 -
6. 02:16:805 -
7. 02:20:742 -
8. 02:22:805 -
9. 03:15:305 -
10. 03:21:305 -
11. 03:27:305 -
Time points where a finish should be removed as a sound like the cymbal doesn't.
SPOILER
1. 00:44:180 -
2. 01:02:180 (1) -
3. 01:12:680 - + Apparently you forgot to add a whistle here.
4. 01:44:180 -
5. 02:02:180 -
6. 02:32:180 -
7. 03:06:680 -
8. 03:08:180 -
9. 03:17:180 -
10. 03:18:680 - + A whistle.
11. 03:33:680 -
00:30:211 (4) - Is this note really necessary? I can't hear any sound here at all. Keeping 1/2 rhythm should be better for this part.
00:58:805 (1,2) - I'd recommend turning into a 1/2 slider instead. I understand the synthesizer is followed here, but it's not basically done in your rhythm, what's worse its volume is not that loud to notice during gameplay. + By doing this, you cam make the rhythm consistent with 01:58:805 (6) - .

There are so many stack patterns in your difficulty as always! I think some of them don't fit with the song well, but should be enough acceptable as your mapping style. + It sounded like finishes are randomly added. Other than them, I don't have any complaints.

10nya

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10nya 2014-07-12T05:54:54+00:00

KSHR wrote:
Sorry to be late, 10nya. Ofc no kudosu please.

[Hard]
00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color. eeh i think it's readable since there's slider 4 (and it'll create follow-path so player wont be soo hard to read this)
00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064
I'm gonna check Insane tomorrow.

didnt reply means fixed hue thanks for the mod master _:3