Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou · forum

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-10-21T08:30:06+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月3日 at 9:25:33

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Nijiiro Chouchou
Source: Kurousa-P
Tags: abalee WyndII
BPM: 99
Filesize: 7495kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:

abalee's Normal (4.13 stars, 282 notes)
Hard (4.58 stars, 426 notes)
WyndII's Chou (4.67 stars, 436 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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10th Beatmap.

Thu Nov 05, 2009 abalee's Normal added
Wed Nov 11, 2009 WyndII's Chou added

Last edited by gdeath 2009-12-03T01:29:08+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

abalee

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abalee 2009-11-05T06:12:56+00:00

hi.
i got 757ms offset.
and a (maybe) normal diff.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [abalee's Normal].osu

Last edited by abalee 2009-11-12T09:26:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-05T08:48:50+00:00

Great Work.abalee ↖(^ω^)↗

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-11-05T14:11:12+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[abalee's Normal]

03:18:063 (10) - New combo.

[Hard]

Cute~

00:55:030 (6) - New combo.
01:04:099 (5) - ^
01:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too loud.
01:14:009 (6) - New combo.
01:15:090 (1,2,3,4,1) - Too loud.
02:04:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
03:12:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-05T15:24:13+00:00

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Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-11-05T23:09:20+00:00

alvisto

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alvisto 2009-11-06T10:45:31+00:00

HARD
02:40:605 & 02:41:363 -I think it would be better to fix these two x0.5 timing section so that they fall exactly on the tick.
02:40:075 (1) - Also I suggest soft clap 1 here
02:42:027 (5,6,7) - ^
02:43:029 & 02:44:393 - same reason

EDIT : For a quick fix, you could highlight all the timing sections in "Timing" there, and adjust all timing sections by the difference of the initial offset that you have and abalee's suggested offset.

ABALEE's NORMAL
01:58:093 (1) - custom soft clap here ? since you do it at 02:01:036 (1) too.
Other than that, feel very smooth when playing !

As expected from both of you, good job !

Star~

And nice BG too...

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-06T10:59:10+00:00

thx.alvisto
some parts were fixed ^^

Teara

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Teara 2009-11-07T10:22:53+00:00

Regardless to say, Good job, I enjoyed both diffs and found absolutely no problems.

Get this ranked

yaya

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yaya 2009-11-07T23:33:10+00:00

i think some jumps dont fit this song.
anyway . nice work

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2009-11-08T02:10:26+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [AH'Hard].osu

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-09T09:25:47+00:00

>Teara

star thx and have look my map. =P

>osu_CN_yaya

thank you for taking a look at my map ^.^

>AngelHoney

omg.it's the second time that i meet this situation.
plz dont suddenly make a diff and require me to add yours.
i'm really confused.
if you wanna add your diff for others' map,plz inform host in advance.
however,u r lucky since i'm pretty kindhearted.
so i have checked your diff.but,your skill of mapping is....hmm...not very well.
there are some unrankable patterns and bad hitsounds in your diff.
sorry,i can not add your diff.
and dont do the same thing,plz.
thank you!

WyndII

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WyndII 2009-11-10T16:51:15+00:00

Yay~
I'm done with my diff.
I hope you'll like it =) .
please dont change the diff's name

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [WyndII's Chou].osu

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-11T03:57:41+00:00

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jericho2442

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jericho2442 2009-11-11T14:11:42+00:00

[Normal]
03:08:093 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the placing of the notes here seems. rough and wobbly, try to clean up the way it looks because right now its rather ugly how they all dont seem to connect good at all

[Hard]
00:08:033 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern feels ugly, try to make it look a bit better
00:47:072 (1,2) - dont like this jump, it dont seem to match the song at this point, other jumps are nice though

02:05:060 (5) - this would look better if it was placed a bit fether away from (3) as it is its a bit wierd
02:20:015 (6) - make it curve the same as the rest of the combo, it will look alot better this way

the jumps make this feel more like a insane than i hard

[Wydll's Chou]
(suggestion) 01:26:081 (4) - i understand why you have put it there but to me it just seems a bit off in looks :/
01:57:012 (1,2,3,4) - is that what you meant to do? because it looks like a square pattern but you have (3) & (4) to high up
03:22:027 (7) - nazi

line this up with (8) & (9)
____________________________________
nice maps, will star once the probs have been fixed

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-11-11T14:13:47+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

03:04:999 - add kiai

[Chou]

Nice

Starred~

WyndII

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WyndII 2009-11-11T14:40:08+00:00

I fixed some. Thanks~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Nijiiro Chouchou (gdeath) [WyndII's Chou].osu

Last edited by WyndII 2009-11-12T04:24:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Yes_old 2009-11-11T18:18:53+00:00

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Krisom

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Krisom 2009-11-11T19:05:33+00:00

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abalee

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abalee 2009-11-12T09:40:44+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
[Normal]
03:08:093 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the placing of the notes here seems. rough and wobbly, try to clean up the way it looks because right now its rather ugly how they all dont seem to connect good at all

hmm..anyway fixed. and IMO if map are mainly fine ,star it directly. Thanks.

Krisom wrote:
abalee's normal.
-Soemthing may be wrong with me, but I don't like these silent notes on, by example, 01:06:036 (or 01:25:045). Even though the volume bar is on 50%, the notes can't be heard. I suppose that, as there are lots of timing sections, the volume should be increasing slowly...

it is slowly increasing,but very slow coz the hitsound are light. and i place notes following vocals, IMO we could not miss that notes. right? BTW, if i don't use the increasing hitsound , why i add timing setions.

at last , thanks for your modding.

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-12T10:05:56+00:00

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La Valse

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La Valse 2009-11-12T11:11:42+00:00

star ~

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-12T14:11:44+00:00

>hutka

thx for your star.=P

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DeadAlready 2009-11-14T06:53:38+00:00

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-14T13:07:31+00:00

>quintitem

star thx,item. >w</

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-11-14T16:06:25+00:00

cool hitsounds

i like your jump parts

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-16T08:41:43+00:00

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Alace 2009-11-16T17:13:58+00:00

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gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-17T05:39:47+00:00

>Alace

Done.i only changed my diff xD

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mrtn 2009-11-17T10:43:59+00:00

bubbled

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-17T13:54:22+00:00

>mrtn

thank you.
sweet bubble

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-11-20T21:27:34+00:00

Try submitting once more - all difficulties still require an update. Also, consider adding a silent sliderslide.

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-21T05:41:18+00:00

>Takuma

All Done.
Thank you.

kino77

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kino77 2009-11-21T09:43:44+00:00

没看出啥不妥的~
星星~=^w^=~

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JokerMIAO 2009-11-21T13:47:00+00:00

=w=

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-11-22T02:20:54+00:00

>kino77 & JokerMIAO

thx for your star

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gdeath

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gdeath 2009-12-02T05:12:43+00:00

Derekku Chan wrote:
[General]
Source - Kurousa-P please add to all diffs and resubmit :3 Done

[Normal]
*Add kiai like in Wynd? Refused

[Hard]
*Add kiai like in Wynd? Refused.i dont use kiai in my diff.that's all
Spinners: 0 - I recommend adding at least 1 xp No
01:26:081 (5) - Perhaps silence this? Done

[Wynd]
00:27:120 - An (8) here would probably fit better. Not necessary.however i'll ask Wynd if it should be fixed.

Thank you for your modding.

Derekku

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Derekku 2009-12-02T05:41:16+00:00

gdeath wrote:
Thank you for your modding.

You're welcome, but...

Source: -Kurousa-P

No hyphen before the K, sorry XD. The first - in my post was just to list the source afterwards. I can see why it's confusing though, because - and bold - look about the same.