[General]
Why is Luxera in the tags? This user only mapped the Standard set but didn't do anything in yours so please remove it.
[Kantan]
Like in most Kantan Difficulties these days this Difficulty lacks on good break times. That however should not stop me to check if your map is ready or not. Let me try to give you some examples how to add them useful, everything I explain is related to the screenshots I link here (not to be confused
):
00:15:663 - 00:29:377 -
http://puu.sh/dLNkn/7be9226b66.jpg The focus I've set here is to emphasize the "special" sounds on every note before the break appears (00:15:663 (15) because of the Finisher, 00:19:092 (18) because the vocals are quite strong here, 00:22:520 (22) works similar like (15)), about 00:26:806 (26), this should be removed. As said, "should" so it probably could stay. But you should think about twice after you're done with clearing out this mod. (25) could have a Finisher afterwards.
00:31:092 - 00:44:806 -
http://puu.sh/dLLER/3733ad1572.jpgTo give 00:34:520 (41) more emphasis I consider a bigger break here, 00:41:377 (49) works similar + there could be a Finisher be added since the music allows it. By this way 00:43:092 (50) can have a Finisher too. I removed the note on 00:36:663 because I find it doesn't provide anything good since it's very very calm here (vocal and music wise) and a high hitsound like k is wrong.
00:58:520 - 01:12:235 -
http://puu.sh/dLMo2/28e6c1ac00.jpgSince it's pretty much the same Kiai but with difference lyrics there isn't much need to change a lot here. Maybe you could remove 01:05:806 (87) but I leave this to you, I however recommend to remove. Unlike the first Kiai the last notes goes o o o o o and not o o ooo o. I find it makes some variety and feels better to play because the music is still having this "untz untz" beat.
01:55:092 - 02:08:806 -
http://puu.sh/dLNAv/0a0a33c1e7.jpg01:55:092 (159) should a more intense feeling here, therefore to have this standing alone works better. On 01:59:377 I find that suits well for a 1/1 break to have then the kkk notes.
02:08:806 - 02:22:520 - This part should be done similar like 00:01:949 - 00:15:663. There is no problem to add
some more notes or to change the intensity of the note usage but do not exaggerate.
Every other part can be handled like above explained, by this way you can add many more breaks which are good for beginner and makes the Difficulty more as Kantan. Of course these are just examples but personally I find them all quite good how they are atm. Otherwise, feel free to change them in your own thought.
[Futsuu]
00:06:235 (6) - Maybe this note could be removed. The break wouldn't hurt at all.
00:12:663 (20) - Quite the same like above.
00:15:663 - 00:22:520 -
http://puu.sh/dLPxm/60d1334aca.jpgSome more breaks are still required else you would have a too big gap between both Difficulties - which you have already. I've changed the rhythm a bit on 00:19:949 (38,39,40,41,42,43) but if you dislike it then feel free to ignore this completely.
00:22:520 - 00:29:377 -
http://puu.sh/dLPFI/0be2cb803c.jpgPlease consider doing breaks here like suggested on the screenshot to increase better transistion and a smoother gameplay. 00:25:949 (54,55,56) makes a good flow at all.
00:31:092 - 00:37:949 -
http://puu.sh/dLRcy/7c1a0f4c5b.jpgThe transistion on 00:32:806 (70,71,72) is really nice because (71,72) emphasize the vocals while (70) sounds good with the intensive beat from the background. The note on 00:34:949 should be removed to avoid making this too long, as well 00:34:520 (74) has a better effect with the vocals.
00:37:949 - 00:44:806 -
http://puu.sh/dLRie/3c1f93a796.jpgSimilar thing with 00:39:663 (87,88,89) like the previous section, 00:41:377 (91,92,93,94,95,96) works good as calm part since this part of the song is calm too.
02:02:377 (300) - I find you've mapped this fairly good but I find this sounds like a filler. The break which occurs after removing this note is fine.
[Muzukashii]
00:09:020 (12) - It's always nice to start with o o ooo ooooo. I would remove this note here.
00:21:020 (53) - Look if you could remove this to split this up a bit.
00:23:592 (61) - ^
00:29:377 (83,84,85,86) - I find this has a very weird transistion. I rather perfer to have a full slider and not 50% slider and the rest are notes. Remove 00:30:235 (84,85,86) and extend the slider until (86)'s current position.
00:32:592 (92) - That also could be easily removed since it seems a bit long and exhausting to play, wouldn't hurt on the flow/rhythm/structure at all.
00:37:520 (112) - This note should be removed to have a longer break than 1/1.
00:39:449 (119) - Same like 00:32:592 (92).
00:42:877 (132) - ^
The things above can also be used for the upcoming Kiai parts and the section on 01:13:949 - 01:27:663. I however have some specific things to mention.
00:53:593 (170) - I understand to fully map the vocals but it should be removed to split up a bit and since 00:53:375 (169) makes a good position to "stop" tapping due the strong beat it fits well to have a 1/1 break here.
01:07:307 (219) - ^
01:55:092 - 02:08:806 - Mind if you could explain the usage of the Doubles? I find they're quite unauthentic and not feeling great to play. But as said, just leave me a explaination.
02:01:306 (413,414) - I consider removing this triplet, I don't find it fits well here and it's already a long combo pattern.
02:08:806 - 02:14:806 - This part definitely should be calmer, try this:
http://puu.sh/dLXOQ/4be3d3d8ec.jpg02:15:663 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - Also here. Such parts in songs should be used to prepare them for the "final part" of the beatmap, not to be in already:
http://puu.sh/dLXVM/3026221787.jpg[Oni]
The Oni Difficulty looks quite clean, didn't found anything wrong but to make sure I will go later through it again - also because it's 3.01 am already. derp
Conclusion: Okay, from realistic view I can't bubble this set
for now. Had to point out way too much BUT... you're on a good way at all, try to get some more Modders (1-3 modders) and call me back. I will care for this set anyways.