00:05:426 (5426|5,5509|4,5593|5,5676|4,5759|5) - 1/4 doesn't stop until 00:06:093 -
00:07:426 (7426|6,7593|5) - one hold is enough
00:08:093 - just suggestion:
http://puu.sh/7WNc1.jpg00:09:593 - start from here I suggest you to add at least one note to emphasize strong beats like this
00:12:176 (12176|2,12259|1,12343|2) - delete. too weak compare to 00:12:426 (12426|1,12509|2,12593|3,12676|2,12759|3) - so the following beats would be clearer if you just delete 00:12:093 (12093|1,12176|2,12259|1,12343|2) -
00:14:093 - I am a little bit confused why now the song is stepping into climax while the chart is getting easier? T.T
00:24:426 (24426|5) - move left, 00:24:759 (24759|0) - move right and add one note at 00:24:593 (24593|5) -
00:40:759 (40759|3) - add a normal note to highlight the beat
00:47:259 (47259|1,47343|2,47426|3) - move one column right
00:48:259 (48259|2) - delete no sound
from 00:50:093 - to 00:58:093 - I suggest to make this part easier and cut unnecessary double or triple and only map sounds that are clearly audible to players. this is a section of transition and doesn't feel like a part that need to be hard. making this part easier not only suit the music but also highlight the following climax
01:00:759 (60759|2,60759|4,60759|3,61009|4,61009|3,61009|2) - cut notes on triple like this. 3 notes obviously too many ;w;
01:10:093 - just suggestion: puu.sh/7WNYu.jpg
01:12:759 (72759|6) - move to 2
01:15:093 (75093|4,75259|6) - exchange their column
01:16:093 (76093|6,76176|5,76259|6,76343|5) - stairs
01:17:759 (77759|0) - move to 3
01:20:759 - strongly recommend you to reorganize this part ;w; really hard to do this part. try to balance the notes to both hands and avoid things like this 01:21:259 (81259|6,81593|5,81593|2,81593|4,81676|6,81676|3,81759|2,81759|4) - QAQ
01:28:759 - ^ killing left hard ;w;
01:32:426 - puu.sh/7WOeY.jpg or
http://puu.sh/7WOgo.jpg just suggestion though
