Touyama Nao - Heart Pattern (TV Size) · forum

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-03-09T02:54:55+00:00

Just one small thing before I can bubble this.

~Collab Insane~

00:43:232 - Is it just me or you forgot to add a green line with 60% volume here? Okay that you changed the slider volume like I suggested, but then you need to use the same volume again after them.

Let me know!

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-09T02:58:26+00:00

completely my fault lol
should be fine now

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-03-09T03:01:02+00:00

Don't worry, the important is that it's fixed now. :3

Bubbled~

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-09T03:12:01+00:00

thx a lot Andrea~

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-03-10T07:21:29+00:00

hi~

General
- I think the Artist should be "Nao Toyama", since i don't really see the alias "Nao" being used anywhere

- 00:57:454 (1) - Here would make a better preview time imo? xD starts on the kiai and stuff

Easy
00:28:566 (4,1) - seemed a bit too linear, something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404358
00:40:566 (2) - maybe drag this pattern down a bit so it's not too close to (4) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404361

Normal
00:30:566 (4,5) - perhaps try this rhythm instead, fits the vocals more imo, which is more interesting to follow in this quieter section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404361 (you can ignore note placement ofc)
00:37:677 (4,5) - similarly here if you like ^

Hard
01:07:788 (7) - Delete note, if you slow the music down, i don't think there's a beat there =v=

Insane
01:17:899 (5,6) - Try flipping these 2 notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404391 not exactly sure where the lead-in to the 1/4 came from

nice mappu
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Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-10T07:39:14+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi~

General
- I think the Artist should be "Nao Toyama", since i don't really see the alias "Nao" being used anywhere discussed and the Artist is just fine

- 00:57:454 (1) - Here would make a better preview time imo? xD starts on the kiai and stuff not a deal, I always set it 1/4 before the kiai lol

Easy
00:28:566 (4,1) - seemed a bit too linear, something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404358 cureved, in different way
00:40:566 (2) - maybe drag this pattern down a bit so it's not too close to (4) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404361 good

Normal
00:30:566 (4,5) - perhaps try this rhythm instead, fits the vocals more imo, which is more interesting to follow in this quieter section https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404361 (you can ignore note placement ofc) kept as current, afraid to make it harder
00:37:677 (4,5) - similarly here if you like ^

Hard
01:07:788 (7) - Delete note, if you slow the music down, i don't think there's a beat there =v= yes, fixed

Insane
01:17:899 (5,6) - Try flipping these 2 notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1404391 not exactly sure where the lead-in to the 1/4 came from eh sorry I think this rhythm is just fine

nice mappu
call me back