Tomohito Nishiura - Deserted Amusement Park · forum

Ekaru

Joined July 2008

Ekaru 2009-10-25T00:21:34+00:00

Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.

Mysterious:

I didn't like those short repeating sliders at the beginning, they didn't really fit.

Good job otherwise, star.

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

3,785 posts

Joined June 2009

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NoHitter 2009-10-25T06:14:07+00:00

BagnoGamer wrote:
[Mysterious]
00:28:414 - Missing note here.
00:28:678 - Missing note here.
00:29:993 - Missing note here.
00:30:256 - Missing note here.

Followed some...

Ekaru wrote:
Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.

Lessened amount of spinners but not all.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2009-10-25T13:55:52+00:00

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NoHitter

osu! Alumni

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NoHitter 2009-10-25T14:05:50+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Questionable]

00:06:57 (1) - Too far from (6).

Changed

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Mysterious]

00:09:59 (1,2) - Too close from (5).
00:12:75 (1,2) - Too close from (4).

Looks fine to me...

statementreply

Pro Tester

307 posts

Joined June 2009

statementreply 2009-10-27T14:05:10+00:00

Nice map

My suggestions:

[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-10-27T14:16:39+00:00

statementreply wrote:
[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick. Added

The map is snapped to 1/6 in that part

Armin

osu! Alumni

2,454 posts

Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-10-27T14:46:18+00:00

[Questionable]

No problems found.

Mysterious

00:00:257 (1,2) Clap at the end
00:07:099 (3,4) ^
00:16:046 (1,1,1,1,1) ^
01:11:309 Remove the clap at the end

That's all for me. Starred!

ccbp

411 posts

Joined August 2009

ccbp 2009-10-27T15:08:55+00:00

all good to me, have a star

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-10-27T21:32:15+00:00

[Questionable/Mysterious]

I found the Kiai times a bit random, but there were no real problems here.

[Unthinkable]

Guessing that this isn't done.

Lemme know when you finish mapping Unthinkable, and I'll pass along a star.

Last edited by Kytoxid 2009-10-28T17:37:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Amodeus

123 posts

Joined February 2009

Amodeus 2009-10-28T13:52:26+00:00

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Behon

Elite Mapper

1,380 posts

Here since the beginning

Behon 2009-10-28T18:38:46+00:00

Questionable:
00:34:993 to 00:40:849 could use some sound effects.
Mysterious has a slider tick rate of 0.5 that suits this song much better. Make this difficulty the same.

Mysterious:
01:12:888 (Spinner): Get rid of the 1 circle after this and extend the spinner to end in its place.

Lizbeth

osu! Alumni

1,731 posts

Joined August 2008

Lizbeth 2009-10-29T17:02:49+00:00

Mysterious
00:25:52 - place this inhertited timing section before the note, not on top.

Questionable
fine

star

Vanmonky

986 posts

Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2009-10-29T23:01:31+00:00

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NoHitter