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Lia - Saya's Song Remix

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Andrea
Gonna move it to Pending for you, best of luck with getting this Qualified.
Suimya
Yay, it's finally happening ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
Topic Starter
pkhg
omg thank you guys >.<
samplefish
Its happening
BeatofIke
indeed 8-)
Lanturn
Oh this is bubbled? yay <3

Go go pkhg! Beautiful map. Call me if you need any SB fixes or anything before rank.
Delis
The exclamation mark in source probably must be 2 byte one () you don't have to change it though : http://key.visualarts.gr.jp/product/little_ex/
Also I have no idea if it needs to do, but the sb at 01:21:811 is intense for my eyes ><, or no need to enable the warning if sb doesn't use any flash?
DakeDekaane
My only complain is the yellow colour being too bright and makes the reverse arrow a bit hard to see with default skin ;w;
That and NCing like in 01:24:420 (1,1,1), I really find it not needed, as the three notes are the pattern together in the music, not each one.
Topic Starter
pkhg
Fixed what Delis and Dake said, except of this 01:24:420 (1,1,1) - i wanna keep them if that's possible >.<
Delis
so #2, the nc usage is fine to me as well :D
DakeDekaane
04:39:420 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note, it'd sound better if you only follow the piano here, this extra note doesn't fit nicely imo.
05:37:789 - Are you sure this is green-white-red and not red-green-yellow?

Also touched a bit your combo colours, pure yellow didn't fit with the rest of the colors, and green was too bright compared with the other colors, also tweaked a bit the mid gray.
[Colours]
Combo1 : 229,229,229
Combo2 : 238,53,57
Combo3 : 94,236,104
Combo4 : 255,255,21
Combo5 : 83,83,83
Combo6 : 164,164,164
SliderBorder : 136,136,255
Topic Starter
pkhg
Thanks Delis :3

Also Dake, i'm sure that this 04:39:420 (1) - isn't just a extra note and feels strange and empty without it :/ look at the begining of the map
Oh i've changed the combo colours to yours but i changed a bit the green and yellow >w<
Aaaand thanks for pointing out this 05:37:789 - the entire combo pattern was broken x3

I cant update right now :/
Aka
just leave a flame on me please, dont steal it ;___;
Topic Starter
pkhg
Allright, updated
@Aka: lol
samplefish
its happening
Topic Starter
pkhg
Made a few fixes with Aka through pm
Updated and ready 3:)
Aka
im so fukin happy to finally do it man

approved ~
Lanturn
and the flames burn brighter~

Congrats pkhg!
samplefish
Topic Starter
pkhg
Finallyyyyyy

Really thank you guysss <33
Frobe
thank you for approved :D
Julie
Beautifull *^*!!!
ErunamoJAZZ
Felicidades! :D
Veemon
congratzz !!
Gamu
finally!

Congratz~ :D
Garven
This map is so much <3

The blending combo color with the BG is problematic though. :(
-Nanaka-
gratz :)
Momochikun
gratz pkhg yo yo :3

~ new page ftw
Aka

Garven wrote:

This map is so much <3

The blending combo color with the BG is problematic though. :(
i played and watched the whole diff with auto, using several dim settings and it was really fine from my side :?
Topic Starter
pkhg
thankss guyss >///<

sorry Gamu :/
Garven
Hi pkhg,

We have to disqualify your map for the following reasons:

Your Combo #6 blends far too much into the background - especially during the washed out sections of the storyboard.
05:32:898 (1) - This is problematic due to it being the same size as the previous sliders, and it's so short that slider ticks aren't very visible. Please address this as it's a readability issue.

Please contact BATs to get this map rolling again for ranking.
Frobe
:(
samplefish
Topic Starter
pkhg
I'll fix combo colour but i suck at placement so idk where i can place this 05:32:898 (1) -
I need suggestions plz :c
aand yeah i was waiting this :c
Garven

That or make it longer so you can see the slider ticks.
Leiwa
Just a suggestion

05:32:898 - Now You use 0.25x but I suggest 0.3~0.5x as Garven said.

So I suggest put like this.
05:32:898 (1,2,3) - use 0.3x in this image.

This is really nice map.
I hope this helps you.
Topic Starter
pkhg
Fixed what garven said.
btw thanks urushi but i've just made it longer :/
Also, I dont have problems with combo 6 so i dont really know how to fix it :3
- Milhofo -
It was so close :( GL I'm waiting on this map to get ranked since forever :D
Natsu
[Colours]
Combo1 : 166,166,166
Combo2 : 238,53,57
Combo3 : 104,253,138
Combo4 : 255,255,70
Combo5 : 83,83,83
Combo6 : 136,136,136
SliderBorder : 136,136,255
Topic Starter
pkhg
Ready :D
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