arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
A 7K map cool /o/ *please keep in mind that I'm only focusing on note patterns. Not the hitsounds.


[General]
Audio: Please convert your mp3 to 192kbps It's okay. 128kbps~192kbps
BG: Resize BG at size 800x600 or 1024x768 too.
BPM/Offset: OK! No problem here.
AiMod:
• The first Kiai time is less than 15 seconds. Fix this. End the Kiai time to 00:28:603 it's same to other rank maps.

7K - 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[EZ]
Suggesting to rename NM I'll hold off this.

SPOILER

00:02:353 (2353|3,2353|5) - Suggesting these LNs to extend until 00:03:636 at 1/4 snap divisor.
00:08:669 (8669|3,8669|5) - ^ I think this is not good.
00:06:300 - add note to 5 and 7 for piano like 00:06:892 (6892|0,6892|2) add 4, 6.
00:17:353 - add note to 6 for piano and to complete the melody of piano after this part. fixed.
00:19:129 - add note to 4 since this feels empty and there's a beat sound to note for.fixed.
00:22:682 - add note to 7 since this has strong sound with piano.fixed.
00:40:840 - add note to 2 for snarefixed.
00:41:234 - add note to 6 ^fixed.
00:42:813 (42813|2,42813|5) - reduce LN to 00:44:195. The long sound ended in that time. Then add note to 2 and 5 at 00:44:195 I think it's a better. because EZ need easier rhythm than harder diff.
00:47:186 - add note to 4. There's a sound to note for. I won't fix this.
01:03:734 - add note to 6 for piano. fixed.
01:28:603 - add note to 5. There's a single piano sound to note. follow the previous pattern.
01:30:379 (90379|2,90379|4) - move to 2 and 6 for more comfortable placement. nope.

[NM]
This is too hard for NM imo. Suggesting to rename it to HD. I think enough to NM. if same mod here, I'll change diff's name.
Suggesting to reduce the Vocal noting especially on some Long notes.

SPOILER

00:07:484 - add note to 3 for the piano like 00:08:076 (8076|6,8076|0) already 00:07:484 (7484|1) - is for the piano.
00:08:866 (8866|5,9261|6,9655|5,9853|4) - I suggest to remove these notes. I assume you're noting for the vocals here. But its inconsistent at the current difficulty. The consistent vocals are like this: 00:17:748 (17748|6,18142|5,18537|4) since it has piano sound with. but in this case these notes are not.
00:10:248 (10248|1,10445|0,10840|0,11037|1,11234|2) - ^ this pattern seems like inconsistent? but simillar pattern appears in 01:21:498 - and 01:27:813 -. I'll hold off this mod.
00:10:642 - add note to 5 for the piano. already 00:10:642 (10642|5) - is for piano.
00:29:195 (29195|6) - move to 5 Fixed
00:33:734 - add note to 3 for the beat sound. Fixed
00:36:892 (36892|2,37090|1,37287|0,37287|3,37484|1) - ctrl h Fixed
00:57:419 (57419|2,57813|2) - remove no need to make this 3-noted and not different from 00:54:261 (54261|2,54261|0,54655|4,54655|6) Fixed
01:06:695 (66695|1,66892|5,66892|0,67090|1,67287|6,67287|2,67484|1,67682|4,67682|2,67879|1,68076|5) - ctrl h and if applied, move 01:06:695 (66695|5) - to 6 Fixed and move to 5.
01:13:011 (73011|5) - move to 5 Fixed
01:17:945 - add note to 2 for the beat sound. Fixed
01:30:182 (90182|0) - remove. not that strong to be 3-noted. Fixed

[HD]
Looks neat :3 Suggesting to rename to MX

SPOILER

00:27:369 - 1/8th snap. add long note to 4 and ends at 00:27:813 for the synth-like sound.I think this is not good for pattern and flow... hold off this mod.
00:28:603 (28603|1,28701|5,28800|1,28899|5) - I recomend to rearrange these to stairs. Its more comfortable since its a chime with pitch. okay. Fixed.
00:35:313 - add note to 2 and 5 for cymbals and the strong/impact sound. Fixed.
01:05:313 - add note to 5. There's a beat to note for. Fixed.
01:05:511 - add note to 3. ^ Fixed.
01:18:833 (78833|1,79030|1) - remove. The chime effect do not have sound in these notes if you'll listen carefully. Fixed.
01:26:826 (86826|1) - move to 6 Fixed.
01:27:419 - add note to 4. There's a sound to note for. Fixed.
01:28:800 (88800|0) - move to 6 Fixed.
01:30:182 (90182|0) - remove. Fixed.

[Overall]
Its a 7K great map go go for rank. Goodluck~!

Thank you for requesting~ please come back again later o/

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi~! From modding queue!

[General]

- I think its safe for you to write the full name i.e Easy Normal and Hard.
cause the mapset doesnt have a different keys and the diff isnt that much. just a suggestion though.
I got many suggestions of diff's name. but now, I think my diff names are better suitable for mania maps.

[EZ]

-00:35:313 you could barely add a note here even if its easy cause the sound is loud and deep so its worth mapping. Fixed.

-00:42:221 (42221|4,42221|1) - i think its much more suitable if you moved this on the previous white tick. same sound though. same as 00:45:379 (45379|5,45379|2) - I don't think that. so, if who same mods here, I'll change this part.

-00:47:945 (47945|2) - add one more note? to balance the sound i think. cause the sound is loud imo. Fixed.

-00:51:103 (51103|2) - ^ Fixed.

-00:58:998 (58998|1) - suddenly broke the pattern why D:? move to 1 its much more neat to see. Fixed.

[NM]

-00:00:577 add a note here to emphasize a great beginning of a diff. Fixed.

-00:29:195 (29195|6) - move this note to 5th instead so it can be much neater like 00:29:787 (29787|5,29984|4) - cause the stack is kinda a bit ugly. Fixed.

-00:53:866 add a note here cause reference from 00:53:471 (53471|0,53471|2,53471|6) - you used a triple which means its safe to use doubles in here. Fixed.

[HD]

-00:14:590 (14590|1) - move to 7? cause 00:14:392 (14392|0) - so it can make perfect sense for the pattern. Fixed.

-00:19:919 (19919|1,19919|3,19919|4,19919|6) - a bit loud for the finishes here. Fixed.

-00:20:905 (20905|5) - as what my first suggestion says. it can make perfect sense for pattern. move to 1.Fixed.

-00:22:682 (22682|3) - add one more note here. to make it a triple as what you do on previous patterns. i think this is loud enough. Fixed.

-00:53:866 (53866|3) - add a note here make 2 more notes as this is a same sound as 00:53:471 (53471|6,53471|0,53471|3,53471|5) - and it makes sense for the background sound. Fixed.

Took only those who needs attention most. ^^ Take my star loved this mapset Reat!
Goodluck!

Lieselotte wrote:

HD

00:12:419 - add a note at 6 column
00:12:616 - add a note at 1 column
00:12:813 - add a note at 6 column
00:13:011 - add a note at 2 column
00:15:971 (15971|2) - move to 7 column
00:26:234 (26234|3) - delete
00:26:826 (26826|3) - ^
00:27:024 (27024|6,27024|0) - delete
00:27:221 - add 2 notes at 3 and 5 column
00:34:129 - delete 1 note
00:35:313 - ^
00:37:484 - add a note
00:38:274 (38274|5) - move to 3 column
00:38:471 - delete 1 note
00:41:037 - ^
00:41:432 - ^
00:42:221 - delete 2 notes
00:43:405 - delete 1 note
00:43:603 (43603|4) - ^
00:43:800 - add 1 note
00:43:998 - ^
00:45:379 - delete 1 note
00:47:155 - add 1 note
00:47:945 - ^
00:53:866 (53866|1,53866|5) - delete
01:30:379 (90379|0,90379|2) - vocal should end to 01:31:958 -
01:30:379 (90379|6,90379|4) - end to 01:32:550 -
one question:Why did you ignored piano sound?
I suggest you delete some vocal sound,add piano sound to your map plz

Raging Bull wrote:

this is really nice mapped. HD is very fun and structured! :3 star!

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello,Reat. Here is Mod.Notice Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[EZ]
00:18:537 (18537|5) - If you follow Vocal here. I suggest you Change to Hold.End at 00:19:524 -
00:19:129 (19129|3) - Then remove this
00:19:524 (19524|6) - And Then Move to 1 or 3
00:28:603 - I Suggest you Add a Hold here.End at 00:28:998 - For sequence
00:47:945 (47945|2,48340|1,48734|0,49129|1) - I Suggest you set these Notes likes 1-2-3-4.More Comfortable and more Fun
01:23:866 (83866|5,84063|5) - I Suggest you to Move to 4.Because Other Columns All have continuation press

[NM]
00:00:577 (577|2,577|0) - Remove 1 of these.Because you use 1 Note in other part
00:32:155 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 1/2/3/4
00:35:313 - ^ Add a Note at 5
00:41:037 (41037|3) - Move to 5.More fun to press
01:10:840 - Add a Note at Right Hand.Because you use 2 Notes in the 01:10:050 -

[HD]
00:06:300 - Remove 1 Note.I think 2 Notes are enough
00:14:787 - Miss Beat.Add a Note
00:16:761 (16761|4,16761|6,16761|0,16761|2) - I Suggest you Set likes:1346. The mirror part likes before
00:19:524 (19524|6,19524|4) - ^ 4 and 6 Likes before
00:24:261 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 4
00:26:234 - Heavy Beat. Add 3 Notes at 1 4 7
00:26:826 - Light Beat.Add 2 Notes at 2 6
00:53:866 - ~ 00:54:261 - 1/4
01:02:945 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 1
01:05:511 (65511|2) - Move to 1
01:06:103 (66103|0) - Move to 4 ^These 2 Changes are making Stairs Part
01:09:655 (69655|6,69655|5) - Uncomfortable.Move to Left hand

Good Luck~

- R u m i a - wrote:

mod via pm req

[Generals]
-

[EZ]
00:04:919 (4919|4,4919|2) - move to left by 2 . its better a hand balance for ez dif
00:25:445 - add a note
00:28:998 (28998|3) - move to 2 and add a note at 6 ,strong beat.
00:29:787 (29787|4) - better follow piano. move to 00:29:984
00:30:182 (30182|2) - delete
00:32:155 - add a note
00:35:708 (35708|5) - move to 00:35:905
00:36:103 (36103|3) - move to 00:36:498 , stronger beat.
00:47:353 (47353|0) - delete. follow the white line only i think. it might be hard for beginner to read this.
00:47:748 (47748|6) - move to 3
00:54:655 (54655|6) - delete finish sound.
00:54:655 - 1 note is enough
00:57:813 - ^ , dont have finish here too
01:00:971 - ^
01:06:498 - add a note
01:07:682 (67682|2) - delete finish sound.
01:08:274 (68274|4) - unnecessary
01:30:182 (90182|4,90379|4) - why double o.o

[NM]
00:06:892 (6892|2) - 2 note us enough.
00:11:826 (11826|3) - it should be here 00:11:629
00:17:550 - add a note
00:22:287 - add a note at 7
00:23:669 - add a note
00:36:498 (36498|4) - move to 6 , add a note at 3
00:41:234 - add a note , consistency
00:43:998 - add a note or 2 notes.
00:47:155 - add a note at 4
00:47:945 - add a note, and finish sound
00:53:669 - add a note at 5
00:54:063 - add a note at 6
00:57:024 - ^
00:58:603 - add a note at 4
00:58:998 - add a note
01:03:340 - add a note at 5
01:08:076 - add a note at 4
01:22:090 - add a note
01:23:669 - add a note
01:24:261 - ^
01:25:445 (85445|3) - delete. no reason to put 3 notes here. no consistency , or move it here 01:25:642
01:25:840 (85840|3,86234|3) - move to 1st collumn
01:28:405 - add a note


[HD]
sv = 41629 change to 0.80x
47945 change to 0.90x
00:06:300 (6300|6,6300|2) - move left by 1
00:07:484 (7484|1,7682|3) - ctrl + j ( check hitsound)
00:08:471 - add a note
00:11:629 - add a note
00:15:774 (15774|4,15774|3) - switch this 2 collumns does a better pattern
00:22:682 - add a note , strong beat
00:25:642 - add a note at 4
00:30:774 - add a note
00:39:063 - add a note at 4
00:35:905 - add a note at 6
00:37:090 - ^
00:38:471 - ^
00:40:248 - ^
00:42:221 - add at 4
00:43:603 - add at 2
00:46:761 - add at 6
00:51:103 - strong beat . add a note
00:53:669 - add a note at 2
00:53:767 - add a note at 3
00:57:024 - add at 3 for consistency
01:00:576 - add a note , strong beat
01:01:169 - add a note at 4
01:03:340 to 01:03:734 - its better to follow the violin. main beat here.
01:06:892 (66892|6) - move to 3
01:09:261 to 01:10:050 - follow violin. its more enjoyable than following voices.
01:15:576 - add a note
01:16:366 - ^ strong beat
01:17:945 (77945|2,78340|2) - add a note
01:21:892 - add a note
01:22:090 - ^
01:28:208 - ^
01:28:405 - ^

ah if you want my advice. try minimize to follow the voice.
instrument is the best beat to follow. act like you mute the vocals.
as if the instrument is not outstanding like the voice. than map the voice.
this is a pretty good chart. w

ah use this clap and whistle w. http://puu.sh/7yq8N.rar

lZenxl wrote:

From from Queueueueu

[HD]

Everything is pretty smooth when I testplayed it, I liked the patterns especially these chords to emphasize the piano 01:22:682 (82682|6,82682|4,82879|6,82879|4) -

I don't like to list stuff down since it is better to understand than to just fix all the mods without thinking

00:03:932 - I see that the intro's pitch relevancy is a bit messed up, 00:03:932 (3932|2) - Should be in Column 1 AND 00:04:129 (4129|0) - Shoudl be in Column 3
If you didn't know about pitch relevancy, here's the error I pointed out

PITCH RELEVANCY: - Words used : Lower Pitch / Higher Pitch

00:24:655 (24655|0,24655|6,24655|4,24853|5,24853|1,25050|4,25050|6,25050|2,25248|3,25248|5,25445|4,25445|6,25642|5,25642|3) - This pattern is biased to the right hand, I suggest to change it so that it is balanced? I don't see a need to have a heavy density of notes on the right hand

01:03:340 (63340|4,63438|3,63537|2,63636|1,63734|0) - The pitch is going up, your stair should be starting from the left and ending on the right

01:09:951 (69951|1,70050|0) - These notes are really really really awkward to execute if you were to try playing them. I suggest to move them somewhere else?

Good chart, very fitting patterns in my opinion.

[NM]

00:00:577 (577|2,1169|1,1761|0) - Why is the hitsound for the lower pitched piano so soft? They should be louder than 00:00:774 (774|4,971|6,1366|4,1563|6,1958|3,2155|6) - since the lower pitched piano are chords while the higher pitched ones are single notes

00:03:340 (3340|4) - Wrong pitch relevancy | Move Right by 2 columns

00:03:932 - Same error as HD, the pitch relevancy is wrong

00:11:037 (11037|1,11234|0,11234|2) - Are you sure about using brackets in NM? They are really really hard to execute when I first started playing mania, I suggest to change them to something else o_o

00:28:603 (28603|5,28701|4,28800|3,28899|2,28998|5,28998|1) - Wrong Pitch relevancy | Stair from left to right

00:38:669 (38669|0,39063|1,39261|2,39655|1,39853|0,40248|1) - This LN pattern may be too hard for NM players, I suggest to move 00:39:261 (39261|2,39655|1) - to the right hand

00:40:840 (40840|4,41037|4) - Why is this a hammer? I don't see a reason for this to be a hammer o.o

00:43:405 (43405|4,43603|6) - Wrong Pitch relevancy

01:21:300 (81300|0,81498|3,81498|6,81498|0) - This pattern is pretty hard to execute especially when you are hammering with your ring finger, I suggest to move 01:21:300 (81300|1,81498|1,82090|3,82287|2) - Right by 1 column

I suggest to watch out for hard patterns in NM, you might catch some awkward patterns outside of this mod

[EZ]

00:16:366 (16366|4,16366|6,16761|5,16761|3) - This pattern is putting a lot of pressure on the players who press the centre key with their right hand, balance the pattern here

01:08:274 - You should add a note here, this break feels pretty awkward

00:17:748 (17748|1,18142|3) - These should be LNs, the vocals here drag on

No other problems, not much to say about EZ

Good Luck!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod by request (IRC)
Qrispy Joybox feat.mao - Colorful Minutes [Osu!Mania mod]

[Generals]
BPM + Offset: Okay
Kiai time: No problem
AiMod: No problem found!
Nice song!

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[EZ]
00:02:353 (2353|5,2353|3) - I think this long sound in reach to 00:03:636 - I think that's not match for EZ diff.
00:04:919 (4919|0) - move to 3
00:04:919 (4919|2) - move to 5
00:06:695 - Miss this beat, add 1 - 2 notes previous patterns followed piano.
00:08:669 (8669|5,8669|3) - I think edd at 00:09:951 - it same first comment.
00:17:353 (17353|5) - move to 7, for patterns I'm move this 00:17:155 (17155|1) - by right 1
00:27:221 (27221|4,27221|2) - Those notes not has same beat like 00:27:024 (27024|2,27024|4) - , move it to 1 and 7 and end at 00:28:603 -
00:59:787 (59787|5,60182|4) - I think has strong beat in here, try to add a note in those time
01:22:287 - add a note
01:30:379 (90379|2) - end at 01:33:340 -

[NM]
00:02:353 - add a note in 6, strong beat
00:01:169 (1169|0) - move to 4?
00:04:326 (4326|6) - move to 5 for patterns
00:11:629 (11629|4) - move to 6 for patterns
00:27:024 (27024|0,27024|6) - same problem at EZ, move to 2 and 6
00:29:984 (29984|4) - move to 4, for patterns
00:34:524 (34524|1) - move to 4, for patterns
00:38:274 (38274|5) - ^
00:45:971 (45971|1,45971|5) - why has a same sound in 00:42:813 - but just has 1 LN and this and 2 LNs? Try to change 1 LN to normal note I'm follow piano and vocal. So I think that parts are differnt.
00:52:287 (52287|4) - move to 6, for patterns
01:26:234 (86234|0) - move to 7?
01:30:379 (90379|0,90379|3,90379|6) - end at 01:33:340 -

[HD]
00:01:761 (1761|2) - move to 2?
00:02:353 (2353|1) - move to 4?
00:03:932 (3932|0) - move to 2 if allow this mod ^
00:07:484 - Try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1432372
00:16:366 (16366|4,16761|2) - Ctrl + J
00:29:195 (29195|6) - move to 2
00:52:484 - add a note
00:58:208 (58208|2) - move to 1
01:06:300 (66300|1) - move to 5
01:09:063 (69063|6) - move to 4
01:09:853 (69853|2) - this LN, I think it end at 01:10:050 - , not has Long sound after here
01:10:445 (70445|6) - move to 4, for patterns
01:15:182 (75182|3) - move to 6, for patterns
01:27:024 (87024|3) - move to 5
01:29:195 (89195|6) - ^
01:29:787 - try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1432389
01:30:379 (90379|0,90379|2) - end at 01:32:155 -
01:30:379 (90379|6,90379|4) - end at 01:33:340 -
That all! Nice map and nice song!
Good luck :3

PROGUY wrote:

Hi Reat.
Here's my check as requested.

[EZ]
01:19:326 (79326|1) Move to 4th or 5th column.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi Reat.
Here's my check as requested.

[EZ]
01:19:326 (79326|1) Move to 4th or 5th column.

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Patterns are checked, no problems here, all HSed well and Bubbled~

PROGUY wrote:

Ranked!

Congrats!