From from Queueueueu
[HD]
Everything is pretty smooth when I testplayed it, I liked the patterns especially these chords to emphasize the piano 01:22:682 (82682|6,82682|4,82879|6,82879|4) -
I don't like to list stuff down since it is better to understand than to just fix all the mods without thinking
00:03:932 - I see that the intro's pitch relevancy is a bit messed up, 00:03:932 (3932|2) - Should be in Column 1 AND 00:04:129 (4129|0) - Shoudl be in Column 3
If you didn't know about pitch relevancy, here's the error I pointed out
PITCH RELEVANCY: - Words used : Lower Pitch / Higher Pitch00:24:655 (24655|0,24655|6,24655|4,24853|5,24853|1,25050|4,25050|6,25050|2,25248|3,25248|5,25445|4,25445|6,25642|5,25642|3) - This pattern is biased to the right hand, I suggest to change it so that it is balanced? I don't see a need to have a heavy density of notes on the right hand
01:03:340 (63340|4,63438|3,63537|2,63636|1,63734|0) - The pitch is going up, your stair should be starting from the left and ending on the right
01:09:951 (69951|1,70050|0) - These notes are really really really awkward to execute if you were to try playing them. I suggest to move them somewhere else?
Good chart, very fitting patterns in my opinion.
[NM]
00:00:577 (577|2,1169|1,1761|0) - Why is the hitsound for the lower pitched piano so soft? They should be louder than 00:00:774 (774|4,971|6,1366|4,1563|6,1958|3,2155|6) - since the lower pitched piano are chords while the higher pitched ones are single notes
00:03:340 (3340|4) - Wrong pitch relevancy | Move Right by 2 columns
00:03:932 - Same error as HD, the pitch relevancy is wrong
00:11:037 (11037|1,11234|0,11234|2) - Are you sure about using brackets in NM? They are really really hard to execute when I first started playing mania, I suggest to change them to something else o_o
00:28:603 (28603|5,28701|4,28800|3,28899|2,28998|5,28998|1) - Wrong Pitch relevancy | Stair from left to right
00:38:669 (38669|0,39063|1,39261|2,39655|1,39853|0,40248|1) - This LN pattern may be too hard for NM players, I suggest to move 00:39:261 (39261|2,39655|1) - to the right hand
00:40:840 (40840|4,41037|4) - Why is this a hammer? I don't see a reason for this to be a hammer o.o
00:43:405 (43405|4,43603|6) - Wrong Pitch relevancy
01:21:300 (81300|0,81498|3,81498|6,81498|0) - This pattern is pretty hard to execute especially when you are hammering with your
ring finger, I suggest to move 01:21:300 (81300|1,81498|1,82090|3,82287|2) - Right by 1 column
I suggest to watch out for hard patterns in NM, you might catch some awkward patterns outside of this mod
[EZ]
00:16:366 (16366|4,16366|6,16761|5,16761|3) - This pattern is putting a lot of pressure on the players who press the centre key with their
right hand, balance the pattern here
01:08:274 - You should add a note here, this break feels pretty awkward
00:17:748 (17748|1,18142|3) - These should be LNs, the vocals here drag on
No other problems, not much to say about EZ
Good Luck!