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Lyrical Crimson - Under the Red Moon

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Aakiha
162 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Aakiha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月31日 星期四 at 4:43:09

Artist: Lyrical Crimson
Title: Under the Red Moon
Source: Touhou
Tags: Frandle
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6442kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.85 stars, 404 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.98 stars, 783 notes)
Download: Lyrical Crimson - Under the Red Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished.
Beatmap by Aakiha (my first map).SB by haruhiteamsos
Thanks for Azure_Kyte and osu_CN_yaya,and all the friends help me to fix this map.
Last edited by Aakiha , edited 28 times in total.
arsrun
84 posts
Joined March 2009
arsrun
Spinners are a little hard.AUTO mode can just got 300 points.
Notes are almost accurate. :idea:
Real_Imouto
45 posts
Joined August 2009
Real_Imouto
star :)
haruhiteamsos
81 posts
Joined August 2008
haruhiteamsos
感覺背景跟點的的顏色有點像
然後感覺扣血高了些，要不要調低一個?
arsrun
84 posts
Joined March 2009
arsrun
STAR FOR LUNATIC COMPLETE!!
背景颜色还是与圈圈颜色太接近了点-_,
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Overall]
-Song name should be correctly capitalized.

Lyrical Crimson - Under the Red Moon

- Does this have a source?
- Tags would be good here. Touhou is one possible tag, also mention the character this music is for (I'm guessing Frandle/Flandelle Scarlet


[Hard]
01:08:001 (1) - Unrankable. Spinners must get at least 2000 bonus points in auto to be rankable
01:27:021 (8) - Reverse again?
01:49:011 (8) - Remove the two reverses here, and add a slider at 01:49:61, ending at 01:50:01. Maybe like this?
01:52:081 (5) - move back 1/4 beat, also snap this under (4)?
01:58:091 (1) - Move this forward 1/4. End at 02:00:01?
02:56:081 (1) - Unrankable. Spinners must get at least 2000 bonus points in auto to be rankable

A little bit of work could be done to make this cleaner, but a good map :)

[Lunatic]
01:04:091 (11,13,15) - Remove the finishes here
01:07:031 (7,9,11) - Remove the finishes here
01:08:001 (1) - Unrankable. Spinners must get at least 2000 bonus points in auto to be rankable
01:15:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - <3 this
01:48:001 (5) - Make 1/4 longer
01:52:071 (6) - Move back 1/4?
01:58:081 (1) - Move forward 1/4. End at 02:00:01?
02:19:021 (1,3,5,7) - I don't think these fit very well. Maybe something else can be used here?
02:56:081 (1) - Unrankable. Spinners must get at least 2000 bonus points in auto to be rankable
03:35:081 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Please combo this properly. Single hit combo's in a place like this don't fit at all. (they rarely do fit)
03:40:071 (1) - Shorten 1/4 beat
04:24:001 (1,2,3,4) - Space these out a bit more like you did with 04:22:081 (3,4,5,6)?
04:25:041 - Note here?
04:25:051 (1) - Move forward to the white tick
04:31:071 (1) - Move forward 1/4 beat?
04:32:001 - Note here?

Again, a pretty good map, needs a little cleaning up, but good :)

Starred. I'll try and make a Normal soon :D
cdkanon
3 posts
Joined March 2009
cdkanon
恭喜秋叶完成了第一幅触图！鼓掌~彩花~~~O(∩_∩)O~
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
OFFSET : 1634
记得resnap all notes.

[Hard]
overall最高用7.
01:56:061 (1) - 离前一个note远一点
01:58:021 - 这个位置加一个note .
01:58:041 (1) - spinner从这里开始。
中间的break time有点长

为什么刚开始会有一根绿线跟红线在一起？把那根绿线删掉。


[lunatic]
先说一下new combo。在你用jump的时候，因为distance改变，所以要用New combo。

然后是offset : 1634

00:40:021 (2,4,6,8) - 去掉finish音效
00:41:734 (1) - 这个spinner从00:41:063 开始。
00:45:001 (9) - new combo
00:56:001 (1) - 出轨了。
00:56:083 (5) - 你这如果是个Jump的话就new combo。如果是摆错了地方的话就改回去。
01:04:093 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串的finish去掉。
01:48:063 (6) - new combo
01:49:013 (9) - 全部往后一个tick。删掉那个10.很别扭啊。。
01:50:043 (1) - 出轨
01:52:063 (5,6) - ^
02:47:083 (16,1) - 放远一点。
02:52:023 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - hard to read 。因为你都是一样的半拍Note，在同一色的combo之内，间距不一样。你可以换一种排法。
02:56:063 - 在这加个Note
02:56:083 (1) - 然后spinner从这开始。如图 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/383 spinner在02:57:634结束。
03:05:003 (4) - 这里要加一个new combo
从4分06开始到4分19的这一段，我不建议用这么串的办法。可以放的简单点，因为没有什么背景音乐可跟，比较难打。
04:21:063 (9) - 要加new combo

音效方面：
音效的3种，都是往重音部位加好听，重音部位就是上面的白线上，因为白线是重音，音效可以每隔几拍加一个，让音乐听起来有节奏感，加太多会很吵很难听，加少了也不好。先试着加一下。

5分23结束比较不错。
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
示范。

Download: Lyrical Crimson - Under the Red Moon (Aakiha) [yaya].osu
Renne_old
14 posts
Joined November 2009
Renne_old
:P STAR
xipan_old
54 posts
Joined March 2009
xipan_old
虽然我不懂那些技术活，不过凭感觉做得还是不错的 :oops:
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Awesome
rainbowSteel
1 post
Joined January 2009
rainbowSteel
It really is :) here is another star, that work deserves it :P

P.S. i mean, come on, man, is it rly-rly-rly your very first map? :o
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
请问这张图是要 Ranked 还是 Approval?

如果是ranked:

Lunatic 太长，需要缩短至4分半钟以内，+ score maximum 10m.
没有设定 Preview Point.
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
nomadop
36 posts
Joined February 2009
nomadop
这图必须star
lp1177
3 posts
Joined October 2008
lp1177
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
hyt103
21 posts
Joined March 2009
hyt103
顶一下
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
Sigh.

Rebubbled because of user's mistake -.-|||

Be advised this is a map for APPROVAL. Entire mapset!
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
Nice map
star.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
You're going for Approval, correct?

Hard
The first few seconds of this difficulty is so boring. At least change up the pattern a bit. -__- It also lacks hitsounds.
01:57:434 (5) needs a new combo. OwO

Lunatic
00:51:234 (8,9) has inconsistent spacing.
01:28:034 ~ unpredictable x2 sliders? Put an SB.
01:58:234 ^ orz
03:35:234 ^ >__>
04:21:634 (9,10,11,12,13) should be a tad closer to (5,6,7,8) .

Too many inconsistencies and confusing speed ups/slow downs imo.
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
绯色月下

如果是APP的话 BREAK TIME太多了 RANK的话分数又过头了

后面的2倍速时间可以长一点
Last edited by tsuka , edited 1 time in total.
haruhiteamsos
81 posts
Joined August 2008
haruhiteamsos
sb

Download: 9979 Lyrical Crimson - under the red moon.rar


Download: 9979 Lyrical Crimson - under the red moon.rar
daigurren
48 posts
Joined January 2010
daigurren
nice map star
[Koromo]
10 posts
Joined April 2010
[Koromo]
The artist is actually "eastnewsound" not Lyrical crimson, thats the album this song comes from >.>
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