Hello! For M4M (if my post didn't get accepted, a normal mod then).
00:51:235 (1,2,3,4) - Make this pattern perfect and move 00:50:835 (4) - to the center of the pattern.
00:52:835 (1) - |suggestion| Make this slider blanket (3) |suggestion|
01:23:235 (2) - Fix the shape of this slider so it would look better. Looks kinda weird imo.
01:26:435 (2) - Same goes for here. ^
02:24:835 (3) - Move to x:24 y:168
02:43:235 (1) - Move to x:87
02:52:835 (1,2,1) - imo would be better if there was a straight flow here.
03:15:235 (4,5,6) - I believe this can be better.
00:55:835 (4) - Move to x:436 y:127
00:56:035 - 00:57:635: Putting triples starting on a white tick doesn't sound good as triples starting on a red tick. I suggest making it like this:
If possible, do this on 02:15:635 - 02:16:035.
On cases like the rhythm on kiai, it's ok if they start on the white tick.
02:39:435 (5,6,1) - Weird distance spacing here. Please fix.
02:53:435 (2) - Stack with 02:52:435 (5) properly.
Good luck!
Normal
00:44:835 (1) - Fix this blanket over (2).00:51:235 (1,2,3,4) - Make this pattern perfect and move 00:50:835 (4) - to the center of the pattern.
00:52:835 (1) - |suggestion| Make this slider blanket (3) |suggestion|
01:23:235 (2) - Fix the shape of this slider so it would look better. Looks kinda weird imo.
01:26:435 (2) - Same goes for here. ^
02:24:835 (3) - Move to x:24 y:168
02:43:235 (1) - Move to x:87
02:52:835 (1,2,1) - imo would be better if there was a straight flow here.
Hard
00:49:235 (3) - Fix the end part pls. The end joints are kinda weird for me tho hahaha.03:15:235 (4,5,6) - I believe this can be better.
All blankets that need fixes/improvement.
01:51:035 (2)
02:12:435 (3)
02:44:435 (4)
02:51:835 (2)
02:54:435 (1)
02:12:435 (3)
02:44:435 (4)
02:51:835 (2)
02:54:435 (1)
Lunatic
00:41:035 (7,8,9) - wot00:55:835 (4) - Move to x:436 y:127
00:56:035 - 00:57:635: Putting triples starting on a white tick doesn't sound good as triples starting on a red tick. I suggest making it like this:
If possible, do this on 02:15:635 - 02:16:035.
On cases like the rhythm on kiai, it's ok if they start on the white tick.
02:39:435 (5,6,1) - Weird distance spacing here. Please fix.
02:53:435 (2) - Stack with 02:52:435 (5) properly.
All blankets that need fixes/improvement.
01:41:435 (3)
01:47:235 (1)
02:37:435 (3,4)
03:16:835 (1)
03:21:235 (3)
03:23:235 (1)
01:47:235 (1)
02:37:435 (3,4)
03:16:835 (1)
03:21:235 (3)
03:23:235 (1)
Good luck!