Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (TV Size) · forum

Yuji Tokaji

776 posts

Joined March 2009

Yuji Tokaji 2014-02-23T15:43:02+00:00

Hai hai!
From modding queue.

[General]

Keep an eye on anchor point on your sliders. Just re-check it all.

[xChippy's Easy]

00:39:818(1) - Anchor point isn't fixed. Check it on every sliders.
00:41:230(2) - ^
00:56:053(3) - Spacing.
01:28:524(1) - Sound looks weird. Maybe could you reduce it by 2/4 ? And a little whistle at the end.
Or, delete it and replace by simple circle.

[Normal]

01:24:289(5) - Try to move it and make consistent with previous note(1). Just y:204.

[Hard]

Fine!

[Insane]

Fine!

Was a short mod, so don't kd me for this.
Ready for rank lol - Take my star!

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2014-02-23T16:23:43+00:00

@Kazey Idk what you mean with check the anchor points whats wrong with them?, fixed the spacing tho and did some own tweeking for the rest
Thanks for modding~ :33
Here my update~:

Diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tomadoi Recipe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV Size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ！
Creator:Fycho
Version:xChippy's Easy
Source:未確認で進行形
Tags:opening mikakunin de shinkoukei Junky Terui Haruka Matsui Eriko Yoshida Yuuri xchippy
BeatmapID:375522
BeatmapSetID:152249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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74406,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
85700,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
89230,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 15,255,159
Combo3 : 254,135,198
Combo4 : 29,163,197

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@Kazey
Ah I see what you mean now, but that isnt a problem tho, as it probably affect nothing tho :O

Last edited by xChippy 2014-02-23T17:11:21+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Yuji Tokaji

776 posts

Joined March 2009

Yuji Tokaji 2014-02-23T17:02:11+00:00

It's not correctly placed: http://puu.sh/77Dnn.jpg
I mean this.

Edit : Right =3

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-24T05:51:43+00:00

[Twinkle] wrote:
hi Fycho as your req in game! >.<

[Hard]
00:17:053 (2) - change it like this? 原来两个是复制粘贴的，感觉你的形状有点扭不好看
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:36:994 (4,5) - two claps here may not fit 音乐里鼓点这样
01:13:524 (3,4,5,6,7) - a bit noisy here with all claps?可能会减少点音量吧，但是我觉得是全clap的

Sorry only found these, good luck!

kamisamaaa wrote:
from your request
先别给KD额感觉这mod有点水。。我明天在仔细看看先去睡觉0.0
[insane]
之前写一半点错了然后mod美丽。。所以是回想版。。只有一半
00:12:994 (4) - 这个ctrl+G感觉更合适因为和23方向一致一样比较好不好，整体flow乱了，局部没什么变化
00:33:465这里感觉空空的。。虽然没鼓点但是人声很明显额。比如吧6和之前一样做成滑条loop？没音就不放了，insane这点读图能力还是有的
00:36:994 (4,5,6) - 这三个音不一样额感觉56换滑条更合适虽然没换成滑条，但是突然发现音效加错了，改了音效
00:44:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 飞球应用版0.0
01:07:877 (3) - 虽然拖到蓝线也可以但是感觉其实没啥太大必要0.0 有点勉强不勉强啊，而且红线又没音
[hard]
00:59:936 (3,1) - 从1开始就很重了是不是1开始就大间距比较好有点懒改
01:03:112 (1) - 这里音这么重不放个跳么刚break进KIAI有点缓不过来的，不跳了

低难度没啥说的。。打爆飞球啥时候带我飞啊。。让我做个TV size的hard GD啊

Kazey wrote:
Hai hai!
From modding queue.

[General]
Keep an eye on anchor point on your sliders. Just re-check it all.

[Normal]
01:24:289(5) - Try to move it and make consistent with previous note(1). Just y:204.fixed lol

Was a short mod, so don't kd me for this.
Ready for rank lol - Take my star!

thanks modding！

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-02-24T06:34:47+00:00

star~

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-02-24T06:38:17+00:00

KantoKun wrote:
star~

thanks star~

Delis

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Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-02-24T09:34:30+00:00

:4

[General]

Audio Lead-In +500~1000.. ;w;
normal claps on kiai time, they doesn't fit to the song imo okay don't care it though! it's just my opinion :3

[Insane]
00:17:583 (8) - I suggest this circle move to about x220y188 for sharp flow, it will be nice to play
00:20:053 (4,5) - hmm, is not additions:normal on the end of 4 slider and add:soft on the head of 5 slider? I think ==..
00:28:171 (2) - feels kinda close the between 1 and 2, some players will misread at 1st time
00:36:994 (4,5,6) - I don't agree triple on white tick, try to change to a reverse slider for better flow!

SPOILER

00:42:200 - don't you want to add a circle here? since here has a beat on music, I recommend to add a circle here! (and make a triangle jump pattern..lol)
00:48:553 - same reason as above, especially here will be fun to play if you accept this suggest
01:18:465 (7,8,1) - uhh, I don't know but they hard to aim to me, try to stack on same place

[Hard]
01:05:053 (3) - it's okay but i suggest unstack this, I thought good flow than now LOL
01:08:759 (1) - I think kinda bad the sliderend on blue tick for hard diff , the sliderend should be 01:08:936 !!
01:26:936 (1) - I'm not sure you forgot a clap on the tail...?

[Normal]
00:23:583 (1) - this slider looks quite bad, change to simple curve slider or something..
00:55:700 (3,4) - not 1/2 here, so I don't recommend to stack, they makes confuse to newbies

[xChippy's Easy]
01:05:936 (1) - add a whistle on the tail, 01:17:230 (1) - this slider had a whistle owo
01:28:524 - Fycho didn't make 01:28:524 ~, add a circle here instead of a slider!

Fycho

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Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-24T12:18:53+00:00

Delis wrote:
:4

[General]
Audio Lead-In +500~1000.. ;w;
normal claps on kiai time, they doesn't fit to the song imo okay don't care it though! it's just my opinion :3
[Insane]
00:17:583 (8) - I suggest this circle move to about x220y188 for sharp flow, it will be nice to play ok
00:20:053 (4,5) - hmm, is not additions:normal on the end of 4 slider and add:soft on the head of 5 slider? I think ==.changed the hitsounds in 4' tail.
00:28:171 (2) - feels kinda close the between 1 and 2, some players will misread at 1st time fixed
00:36:994 (4,5,6) - I don't agree triple on white tick, try to change to a reverse slider for better flow! This triplet plays fine imo
SPOILER
00:42:200 - don't you want to add a circle here? since here has a beat on music, I recommend to add a circle here! (and make a triangle jump pattern..lol) no, this is on purpose , too many triplet plays not good here
00:48:553 - same reason as above, especially here will be fun to play if you accept this suggest
01:18:465 (7,8,1) - uhh, I don't know but they hard to aim to me, try to stack on same place I played this and think it's fine to hit

[Hard]
01:05:053 (3) - it's okay but i suggest unstack this, I thought good flow than now LOLok
01:08:759 (1) - I think kinda bad the sliderend on blue tick for hard diff , the sliderend should be 01:08:936 !! This followed vocal, no problem imo
01:26:936 (1) - I'm not sure you forgot a clap on the tail...? yep ,added

[Normal]
00:23:583 (1) - this slider looks quite bad, change to simple curve slider or something..changed
00:55:700 (3,4) - not 1/2 here, so I don't recommend to stack, they makes confuse to newbiesNormal diff is fine to stack 1/1

thanks for modding

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-02-24T21:58:02+00:00

Fixed both~
Thanks for modding ;3

Diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tomadoi Recipe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV Size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ！
Creator:Fycho
Version:xChippy's Easy
Source:未確認で進行形
Tags:opening mikakunin de shinkoukei Junky Terui Haruka Matsui Eriko Yoshida Yuuri xchippy 照井春佳 松井恵理子 吉田有里
BeatmapID:375522
BeatmapSetID:152249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-02-26T17:12:45+00:00

Yay I'm modding Fycho's map

[Easy]
01:02:759 - add a circle here maybe? sounds much better.
01:04:524 (3,4,1) - this looks a bit confusing imo. This maybe?

SPOILER

01:15:818 (3,4,1) - ^

[Normal]
00:50:406 (3) - more curvy looks better imo

SPOILER

00:50:406 (3,4,5) - may be this?

SPOILER

[Hard]
Too good

[Insane]
00:33:465 - Add a circle here? it felt empty and awkward when i played it
01:15:818 (1,2) - I think 01:16:171 (2) is a bit hard to hit..

well.. your map is too good for me to mod :p
but I tried!

Good luck~~

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-26T19:13:25+00:00

mod来了
[Easy]
00:39:465 - You can try setting a inherited points to diminish the volumn here to fit the music
00:55:347 (2,3) - DS drops to 1.0, you should keep consistency on DS
01:08:230 (1) - a little bit far from the previous one ...not so pretty
[Normal]
00:17:230 (4) - 这里sliderslide上的whistle好吵啊也不是很合曲是不是误加了
如果是故意的就同步每个diff都加吧虽然我感觉不像故意的
00:38:406 (2) - 滑条尾normal clap
顺便还可以试试插个绿线从00:38:583 - 开始加sliderslide 估计能合音乐里的那嗡的一下
最后以滑条尾结束是不是不太爽啊(slap
没了不愧飞球
[Hard]
00:16:524 (1,2) - 吐槽一下好难看>.>...
00:45:465 - 感觉这里缺东西音乐里也是有个较重的金属音...这里啥都美丽打起来不爽
我的话会摆一个过渡的flow到减速段比如这样

click

00:56:053 (3) - 加个NC如何
01:12:112 (2,1) - stack 或者和01:12:289 (3,2) - 留出一样的间距，现在的情况好难看
01:22:700 (4) - 到前后的距离差的有点多了建议调一下
[Insane]
01:10:171 (1) - 有点碰到按键计数器了...大丈夫？
01:28:171 (6,1) - 这个flow总感觉不爽尤其是最后的重音结尾最后的circle是顺着flow走的没起到重击的感觉
刚才想了想感觉要是01:28:171 (6) - Ctrl+G的话会更爽一些啊尤其是两个逆flow的组合简直赞
不过还是看飞球觉得怎么好了了...

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-27T05:21:35+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Yay I'm modding Fycho's map

[Normal]
00:50:406 (3) - more curvy looks better imo
SPOILER
curve to another direction
00:50:406 (3,4,5) - may be this?
SPOILER
yep, but this maybe hard to play, I know you mean kiai, wrongly timing

[Insane]
00:33:465 - Add a circle here? it felt empty and awkward when i played itno beat here so I think it's fine
01:15:818 (1,2) - I think 01:16:171 (2) is a bit hard to hit..changed a bit of the circle
well.. your map is too good for me to mod :p
but I tried!

sammy711 wrote:
mod来了

[Normal]
00:17:230 (4) - 这里sliderslide上的whistle好吵啊也不是很合曲是不是误加了 ok, 去掉了，NM确实有点吵
如果是故意的就同步每个diff都加吧虽然我感觉不像故意的
00:38:406 (2) - 滑条尾normal clapadded
顺便还可以试试插个绿线从00:38:583 - 开始加sliderslide 估计能合音乐里的那嗡的一下不想再增加音效了。
最后以滑条尾结束是不是不太爽啊(slap
没了不愧飞球
[Hard]
00:16:524 (1,2) - 吐槽一下好难看>.>...我觉得还好看啊
00:45:465 - 感觉这里缺东西音乐里也是有个较重的金属音...这里啥都美丽打起来不爽 changed a rhythm
我的话会摆一个过渡的flow到减速段比如这样
click
00:56:053 (3) - 加个NC如何nice
01:12:112 (2,1) - stack 或者和01:12:289 (3,2) - 留出一样的间距，现在的情况好难看加大间距了，本来这里就打算修改呢
01:22:700 (4) - 到前后的距离差的有点多了建议调一下 ok
[Insane]
01:10:171 (1) - 有点碰到按键计数器了...大丈夫？这没关系吧
01:28:171 (6,1) - 这个flow总感觉不爽尤其是最后的重音结尾最后的circle是顺着flow走的没起到重击的感觉
刚才想了想感觉要是01:28:171 (6) - Ctrl+G的话会更爽一些啊尤其是两个逆flow的组合简直赞你书的很对，把1放到左下角去了
不过还是看飞球觉得怎么好了了...

Good luck~~[/quote]

thank you for modding guys~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2014-02-27T07:54:05+00:00

Fixed all tho I did the rythm suggestion a bit different~

Diff owo

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Mode: 0
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GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV Size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ！
Creator:Fycho
Version:xChippy's Easy
Source:未確認で進行形
Tags:opening mikakunin de shinkoukei Junky Terui Haruka Matsui Eriko Yoshida Yuuri xchippy 照井春佳 松井恵理子 吉田有里
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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-27T10:36:21+00:00

updated.

Trust

1,238 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-02-27T10:58:25+00:00

hi fycho and xchippy!

These are all suggestions,
feel free to use any~

[General]

Perhaps edit the .osu to give 1000 audio lead-in so the difficulties begin less abruptly?

[xChippy's Easy]

00:38:053 (2) - The whistle on the tail doesn't seem to accentuate any unique sounds, I would remove it. Since the beat here is quite heavy you could add a clap in its place if you'd like but I think just removing the whistle is fine.
00:39:465 - The volume decrease here I find really peculiar and a bit too much because the sounds in the background music aren't noticeably softer, but I get what you're trying to do. Maybe just a 15-20% decrease will suffice?
00:39:818 (1) - This can curve more nicely around the tail of the previous slider:
Example
00:46:171 - Unneeded green line, either delete or make use of it.

[Normal]

00:16:524 (3) - For the reason as mentioned in Insane, use a finish on the head with 60% volume.
00:17:230 (4) - Finish on the head for the powerful cymbal crash.
01:14:053 - The 100% volume here is making the hitsounds incredibly loud. How about just having it at 80% from here on as you have it for Insane?

[Hard]

00:24:818 (3) - Using a NC here would be consistent with the combo patterning.
00:36:994 (3) - The clap here feels out of place. I would remove it or change to a soft-clap so it blends with the clap pattern more.
00:39:818 (3) - Finish on the tail to be consistent with how its previously used and you have one here for Insane.
01:14:053 - Same as mentioned for Normal here, I would keep the volume around 80%.
01:21:994 (2) - Maybe you would like to adjust this slider for a clean blanket with the tail?
Example

[Insane]
Aww yeah! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371030

00:16:524 (1) - Consider adding a finish to go along with the soft-clap here, it fits very well with the music and accentuates the vocal. Since the cymbal sound here is weaker than the one that follows it, try using it with 60% volume.
00:17:230 (6) - Same as above especially since the cymbal crash is quite powerful for this one.
00:20:406 (5) - Perhaps remove the normal addition on this clap? The beat heard in the music for the previous clap on 00:20:318 is much stronger than it is on this one so hearing two consecutive normal-claps sounds a bit peculiar. Essentially it's what you did for 01:27:553 (3,4) but the other way around :3
00:26:406 (1) - There's a nice sound on the tail of this slider that would fit really well with a S:C3 finish. This can apply to other diffs too if you like.
00:36:994 (4) - Was the normal sample-set on this intentional? It's sounds really noisy and unfitting because the beat is pretty soft. I would change it to a soft sample-set with a normal addition for the clap or just reduce the volume so the hit-normal isn't so loud.
00:54:465 (5,1) - The flow here feels strange. Coming out of a jump pattern I would've expected the movement of this slider to be at a much sharper angle like you did for 00:48:818 (5,1) which is a similar sounding part.
00:57:112 (6) - I would add a finish here to emphasize the cymbal sound in the background music, makes sense too because the exact same sound is heard with finish on the head of 00:56:406 (3).
01:12:994 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:20:406 (5) really. Using a soft-clap on the tail to distinguish this as the softer beat, would reflect the music nicely.
01:14:230 (9,10,1) - I would prefer you keep these stacked for two reasons. The greater jump distance will create a nice tension and puts good emphasis on the finish. Another thing is that it would be consistent with your patterning as this part appears to be the only time you aren't stacking for this rhythm.

Wonderful mapset, professionally made, cute song, everything was just awesome. I hope some of these suggestions were useful to you.
Best of luck!

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-02-27T11:24:14+00:00

Hello! :3 M4M

Trust stole my mods jk hi Trust.

[Insane]

00:10:524 - Want to add a note here for guitar?
00:33:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - For me it seems more natural to have downward flow after 00:33:112 (5,6) jump. Maybe this placement is better:
Example
01:01:347 (5) - Seems a bit undermapped. How about two 1/4 sliders instead?
Example
01:14:406 - Did you want 90% volume?
01:18:994 (3,4,5) - Rhythm seems really unfit here. I think you should make a 1/2 slider at 01:19:171 with a jump to it since that would fit vocals and percussion.
Example
01:21:994 (4,5,6) - This triplet is really loud, maybe reduce volume for it to 60%.
01:27:289 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit awkward with the music imo, I think you can try converting 2 into a five note stream:
Example

[Hard]

00:31:700 - Want 60% volume on this finish?
01:02:759 (2) - Extend this by 1/4?
01:14:053 - 01:14:406 - Use 90% volume? I think 100% is too loud.
01:25:700 - Imo 80% volume will be better.

[Normal]

01:14:053 - 01:14:406 - Use 90% volume? I think 100% is too loud.
01:25:700 - Imo 80% volume will be better.

Quality mapping. Feel free to call me back, but I can't bubble until the map is at least 14 days old.

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2014-02-27T11:31:01+00:00

Fixed all thanks Trust

Diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61877
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tomadoi Recipe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV Size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ！
Creator:Fycho
Version:xChippy's Easy
Source:未確認で進行形
Tags:opening mikakunin de shinkoukei Junky Terui Haruka Matsui Eriko Yoshida Yuuri xchippy 照井春佳 松井恵理子 吉田有里
BeatmapID:375522
BeatmapSetID:152249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-02-27T15:07:50+00:00

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I still think the combination of normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap is way too loud so i've reduced volume of both hitsounds for you. http://puu.sh/7cnJO.zip

[Insane]
Stack leniency 0.5 fits better with this difficulty considering that you've used a lot of back and forth patterns.

00:05:936 (4,5,6,7) - This manual stacking looks a little random in my eyes cause there's nothing special here. I'd rather stack manually 00:11:583 (2,3,4,5) - instead of them.
00:24:818 (4) - This slider needs to be more curved considering how curved the previous slider is. I'd rearrange it like this if i were you; it plays the same but looks much better imo. Please adjust the spacing to aboid the partial overlapping. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371971
00:26:583 - Add a whistle here to follow the hi-hat. It also corresponds with what you did at 00:23:053 - .
00:28:524 (1,3) - These snare-drum sounds are much louder than the rest. So probably it's better to add both normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap here.
00:39:818 - A clap sounds great here. And it's consistent 00:39:289 - so makes more sense imo.
00:42:818 - Maybe you want to add a finish here with reduced volume. 50% fits nicely i think. The heavy beat is almost the same as 00:42:465 - so I don't see any reason to not add finish here as well. leaving 00:43:171 (4) - w/o a finish is okay to me since that way it sounds better.
00:45:994 - There should be a beat here imo since i can hear something like hi-hat here, I really want you to shorten 00:45:818 (1) - by 1/4 beat so it fits better with vocal/instruments.
01:11:230 (4,5,6) - Considering how 01:10:524 (2,3) - flows, this one flows much better imo. I've expected 01:11:230 (4) - to be above (3)'s head, not below. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1372002
01:14:230 (9,10) - Use lower volume settings for these 2 notes. As you've used lower one for 01:13:524 (3,4,5,6,7) - , 01:14:230 (9,10) - is way too loud in comparison.
01:22:171 (6) - I don't think it's a good idea to add both finish and clap here.
01:24:994 (5) - Add a whistle here and remove it from 01:25:171 (6) - ? It sounds somewhat better i think.
01:27:289 - Add a clap here? Feels empty without it. Just suggestion though.

~~I'll do the rest tomorrow.~~ Ohayou Fycho

[Hard]
00:04:524 (2) - Inclining in the opposite direction? It plays the same but looks much better imo! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1372915
00:05:406 - Add a whistle here? Feels empty to me.
00:13:524 (1) - Add more whistles on this slider since you cannot add a clap at 00:14:053 - ? Currently it's quite empty to me.
00:39:112 (1,2,3,4) - Lower volume for the whole pattern? By reducing the volume you can emphasize 00:40:347 - in a better way imo. Apply it in other difficulties if you agree.
01:18:818 - It's highly recommended to remove this clap. Sounds a lot better without it imo and nothing in the song warrants it.
01:28:524 (1) - Make a jump here or please space them at 1.17 (consistent with your previous spacing). Currently it neither plays well nor looks good.

[Normal]
00:20:936 (1) - The clap doesn't really fit here imo and whistle sounds much better to me. also it's consistent with what you did in hard and insane.
00:42:818 - Add a finish here?
00:46:171 (1) - isn't stacked properly. xD
00:57:112 - There should be a finish here considering both (4) and (1) have it.
01:19:700 - Normal sampleset? The snare-drum is louder than the bassdrum at 01:19:524 - and 01:19:347 - so you should differentiate it from them by using normal sampleset.
01:25:347 - Add a whistle to follow the hi-hat?
01:28:524 - Remove the repeat from the slider and add a note here? This is the very last of the difficulty and I want the heavy beat to be clickable.

[Easy]
00:02:230 - How about adding a whistle here? Feels empty w/o it.
00:02:759 - Remove this whistle and add it at 00:03:112 - instead? 00:03:112 (3) - this guitar sound should be emphasized imo.
00:04:524 (2,3,4) - ^
00:06:642 (1,2,3) - Regardless of ^ this section is differently hitsounded. I'm not sure it's your mistake so just mentioning here.
00:50:936 - Add a whistle here for the high-pitch vocal?
00:56:053 (3) - ^
01:00:289 (1) - Sounds better just with the finish. + clap is a bit too much considering it's a spinner.
01:21:465 (4) - The current pattern is somewhat too plain in my eyes. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1373008

Excellent mapset. But the only thing that makes me hasitate to bubble this is hitsounding. I don't think it's bad but still can be improved anyways.

Poke me for a recheck if you want!

Fycho

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Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-27T15:47:14+00:00

Trust wrote:
hi fycho and xchippy!

These are all suggestions,
feel free to use any~

[General]
Perhaps edit the .osu to give 1000 audio lead-in so the difficulties begin less abruptly? umm, I think it doesn't need to add lead-in for this map
[Normal]
00:16:524 (3) - For the reason as mentioned in Insane, use a finish on the head with 60% volume.
00:17:230 (4) - Finish on the head for the powerful cymbal crash.
01:14:053 - The 100% volume here is making the hitsounds incredibly loud. How about just having it at 80% from here on as you have it for Insane?
Normal diff all fixed!
[Hard]
00:24:818 (3) - Using a NC here would be consistent with the combo patterning. yes
00:36:994 (3) - The clap here feels out of place. I would remove it or change to a soft-clap so it blends with the clap pattern more. yes,fixed
00:39:818 (3) - Finish on the tail to be consistent with how its previously used and you have one here for Insane. nice
01:14:053 - Same as mentioned for Normal here, I would keep the volume around 80%.ok
01:21:994 (2) - Maybe you would like to adjust this slider for a clean blanket with the tail? fine and well-looking imo
Example
[Insane]
Aww yeah! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371030
00:16:524 (1) - Consider adding a finish to go along with the soft-clap here, it fits very well with the music and accentuates the vocal. Since the cymbal sound here is weaker than the one that follows it, try using it with 60% volume.yes, but I used 70% since this is insane
00:17:230 (6) - Same as above especially since the cymbal crash is quite powerful for this one.yes
00:20:406 (5) - Perhaps remove the normal addition on this clap? The beat heard in the music for the previous clap on 00:20:318 is much stronger than it is on this one so hearing two consecutive normal-claps sounds a bit peculiar. Essentially it's what you did for 01:27:553 (3,4) but the other way around :3 I removed 00:20:053 (4) - 's tail
00:26:406 (1) - There's a nice sound on the tail of this slider that would fit really well with a S:C3 finish. This can apply to other diffs too if you like. sound not good sorry xD
00:36:994 (4) - Was the normal sample-set on this intentional? It's sounds really noisy and unfitting because the beat is pretty soft. I would change it to a soft sample-set with a normal addition for the clap or just reduce the volume so the hit-normal isn't so loud.fixed
00:54:465 (5,1) - The flow here feels strange. Coming out of a jump pattern I would've expected the movement of this slider to be at a much sharper angle like you did for 00:48:818 (5,1) which is a similar sounding part.This is on purpose, I think flow is no problem~
00:57:112 (6) - I would add a finish here to emphasize the cymbal sound in the background music, makes sense too because the exact same sound is heard with finish on the head of 00:56:406 (3).nice catch
01:12:994 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:20:406 (5) really. Using a soft-clap on the tail to distinguish this as the softer beat, would reflect the music nicely. fixed
01:14:230 (9,10,1) - I would prefer you keep these stacked for two reasons. The greater jump distance will create a nice tension and puts good emphasis on the finish. Another thing is that it would be consistent with your patterning as this part appears to be the only time you aren't stacking for this rhythm. ok,lol
Wonderful mapset, professionally made, cute song, everything was just awesome. I hope some of these suggestions were useful to you.
Best of luck!

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello! :3 M4M

Trust stole my mods jk hi Trust.

[Insane]
00:10:524 - Want to add a note here for guitar? no, I'd like to make a blank here sorry
00:33:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - For me it seems more natural to have downward flow after 00:33:112 (5,6) jump. Maybe this placement is better:
Example
nice!!fixed
01:01:347 (5) - Seems a bit undermapped. How about two 1/4 sliders instead? nice!I like it
Example
01:14:406 - Did you want 90% volume?I changed all diff's KIAI's volume and the last part's volume to 80% 90% 70& to be consistent
01:18:994 (3,4,5) - Rhythm seems really unfit here. I think you should make a 1/2 slider at 01:19:171 with a jump to it since that would fit vocals and percussion. sorry I preferred my rhythm since I didn't follow vocals fully, but followed drums more times like01:03:112 (1,2,3) - etc.
Example

01:21:994 (4,5,6) - This triplet is really loud, maybe reduce volume for it to 60%.changed to 70%, 60 is kinda low for me
01:27:289 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit awkward with the music imo, I think you can try converting 2 into a five note stream: hmm, Sorry this plays not good , make it hard to hit and bread my placement pattern, I think my rhythm is no problem too
Example
[Hard]
00:31:700 - Want 60% volume on this finish? fixed
01:02:759 (2) - Extend this by 1/4?I don't want to make hard too "hard"
01:14:053 - 01:14:406 - Use 90% volume? I think 100% is too loud. yea
01:25:700 - Imo 80% volume will be better.yea
[Normal]
01:14:053 - 01:14:406 - Use 90% volume? I think 100% is too loud.
01:25:700 - Imo 80% volume will be better.
Normal all fixed, but the last changed to 70%
Quality mapping. Feel free to call me back, but I can't bubble until the map is at least 14 days old.

thanks for cool mod!!

Fycho

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Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-02-27T16:09:13+00:00

EDIT:

Melophobia wrote:
(No kds for this post) I just gave lol, feel free to deny if you like

I still think the combination of normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap is way too loud so i've reduced volume of both hitsounds for you. http://puu.sh/7cnJO.zip
ok, used these hitsounds, thank you
[Insane]
Stack leniency 0.5 fits better with this difficulty considering that you've used a lot of back and forth patterns. ok

00:05:936 (4,5,6,7) - This manual stacking looks a little random in my eyes cause there's nothing special here. I'd rather stack manually 00:11:583 (2,3,4,5) - instead of them. get rid of manual stacks but no changed about 00:11:583 (2,3,4,5) -
00:24:818 (4) - This slider needs to be more curved considering how curved the previous slider is. I'd rearrange it like this if i were you; it plays the same but looks much better imo. Please adjust the spacing to aboid the partial overlapping. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371971 sorry I like my pattern and "too curve" slider looks not good, maybe it's my style.
00:26:583 - Add a whistle here to follow the hi-hat. It also corresponds with what you did at 00:23:053 - .ok, also fixed in hard diff
00:28:524 (1,3) - These snare-drum sounds are much louder than the rest. So probably it's better to add both normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap here.yep, fixed
00:39:818 - A clap sounds great here. And it's consistent 00:39:289 - so makes more sense imo.good, added
00:42:818 - Maybe you want to add a finish here with reduced volume. 50% fits nicely i think. The heavy beat is almost the same as 00:42:465 - so I don't see any reason to not add finish here as well. leaving 00:43:171 (4) - w/o a finish is okay to me since that way it sounds better.added a finish but volume is fine imo, so don't use 50%
00:45:994 - There should be a beat here imo since i can hear something like hi-hat here, I really want you to shorten 00:45:818 (1) - by 1/4 beat so it fits better with vocal/instruments.ok
01:11:230 (4,5,6) - Considering how 01:10:524 (2,3) - flows, this one flows much better imo. I've expected 01:11:230 (4) - to be above (3)'s head, not below. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1372002 sorry I perferred my pattern and flow, this pattern is fine to play and if I do that , thr rhythm is not good imo , I'd like a triplet at01:11:406 (5,6) -
01:14:230 (9,10) - Use lower volume settings for these 2 notes. As you've used lower one for 01:13:524 (3,4,5,6,7) - , 01:14:230 (9,10) - is way too loud in comparison.ok, changed to 70%
01:22:171 (6) - I don't think it's a good idea to add both finish and clap here.ok, removed clap
01:24:994 (5) - Add a whistle here and remove it from 01:25:171 (6) - ? It sounds somewhat better i think.added but not removed since
01:27:289 - Add a clap here? Feels empty without it. Just suggestion though.yes, forgot to add lol

~~I'll do the rest tomorrow.~~ Ohayou Fycho ohayou~

[Hard]
00:04:524 (2) - Inclining in the opposite direction? It plays the same but looks much better imo! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1372915 nice placement ,fixed
00:05:406 - Add a whistle here? Feels empty to me. ok
00:13:524 (1) - Add more whistles on this slider since you cannot add a clap at 00:14:053 - ? Currently it's quite empty to me.ok
00:39:112 (1,2,3,4) - Lower volume for the whole pattern? By reducing the volume you can emphasize 00:40:347 - in a better way imo. Apply it in other difficulties if you agree.ok
01:18:818 - It's highly recommended to remove this clap. Sounds a lot better without it imo and nothing in the song warrants it.ok
01:28:524 (1) - Make a jump here or please space them at 1.17 (consistent with your previous spacing). Currently it neither plays well nor looks good.made a jump

[Normal]
00:20:936 (1) - The clap doesn't really fit here imo and whistle sounds much better to me. also it's consistent with what you did in hard and insane.yes, chanegd
00:42:818 - Add a finish here?not want to add a finish since this is normal diff, to many finished will be kinda noisy imo
00:46:171 (1) - isn't stacked properly. xD
00:57:112 - There should be a finish here considering both (4) and (1) have it.forgot to add, fixed
01:19:700 - Normal sampleset? The snare-drum is louder than the bassdrum at 01:19:524 - and 01:19:347 - so you should differentiate it from them by using normal sampleset.fixed
01:25:347 - Add a whistle to follow the hi-hat?fixed
01:28:524 - Remove the repeat from the slider and add a note here? This is the very last of the difficulty and I want the heavy beat to be clickable.I'd like to make repeat at the end of the map, and this is normal diff so I think clickable is not that important, so ..

Excellent mapset. But the only thing that makes me hasitate to bubble this is hitsounding. I don't think it's bad but still can be improved anyways. Poke me for a recheck if you want!

thanks for 神mod!!

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

xChippy 2014-02-28T07:13:33+00:00

@Melophobia All fixed ;33
Thanks for modding ~(*w*)~

difff

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Fycho

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Fycho 2014-02-28T10:08:39+00:00

updated :3

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-03-02T06:18:42+00:00

Rechecked via irc;

Log

14:34 Melophobia: link please?

14:34 *Fycho is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/374841 Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (TV Size)]
14:35 Fycho: need a redownload since updated your hitsound
14:35 Melophobia: oke
14:35 Melophobia: do you have time now
14:35 Fycho: yes
14:35 Melophobia: kk
14:35 Melophobia: dling
14:38 Melophobia: insane
14:38 Melophobia: 01:19:700 (7) - normal sampleset?
14:40 Fycho: ok,
14:40 Fycho: 01:18:994 (3) - this also changed
14:40 Melophobia: what did you change?
14:40 Melophobia: it's fine as it is imo
14:41 Fycho: 01:18:994 (3) - sliderhead changed to addition-normal
14:41 Melophobia: hm fine
14:41 Fycho: 01:19:700 (7) - this changed to addition-normal
14:42 Fycho: oh, nit
14:42 Fycho: not*
14:42 Fycho: I changed to sampleset not addition
14:42 Fycho: wrongly
14:42 Melophobia: kk
14:45 Melophobia: Hard
14:45 Melophobia: 01:24:994 (3) - whistle?
14:46 Fycho: ok
14:46 Melophobia: Normal
14:46 Melophobia: 00:09:465 (1) - end this spinner at 00:11:583 - to provide a longer recovery time?
14:46 Melophobia: either way is fine, but considering it's a normal it'd be better imo
14:47 Fycho: ok,
14:47 Fycho: fixed
14:48 Melophobia: 00:28:524 (5) - normal sampleset like you did in other diffs
14:49 Fycho: added
14:49 Melophobia: 00:39:818 (4) - you might as well add a clap at the beginning
14:49 Melophobia: 00:42:818 - Finish
14:49 Fycho: ok,
14:50 Fycho: sounds better
14:50 Fycho: but normal diff I don't want to add more finish, sounds a little noisy
14:50 Melophobia: alright
14:51 Melophobia: 01:19:700 - normal sampleset
14:52 Fycho: ok
14:54 Melophobia: Easy
14:54 Melophobia: 01:17:583 - This is probably meant to have normal sampleset
14:54 Melophobia: it's most likely chippy's mistake so i think you can fix it
14:55 Fycho: ok
15:01 Melophobia: i think you can add 1500ms lead-in?
15:01 Fycho: by changing in code?
15:01 Melophobia: yep
15:02 Fycho: ok
15:02 Melophobia: you can update it now :3
15:04 Fycho: ok, updated, but I still don't know why removed the function in editor lol
15:04 Melophobia: automated one is a good idea but the problem is that the function is sometimes fucked up :v
15:05 Fycho: so automated one is still not good now?
15:06 Melophobia: yeah
15:06 Melophobia: needs to be tweaked a little more
15:06 Fycho: I know
15:14 Melophobia: k hitsounding is much better now

Everything is in order now. Bubbled!

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-03-02T06:23:25+00:00

thanks :33

Selisi

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Selisi 2014-03-05T11:52:36+00:00