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Akon - Beautiful

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Topic Starter
sebastiangl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 01 de agosto de 2011 at 23:40:59

Artist: Akon ft. Colby O'Donis and Kardinal Offishall
Title: Beautiful
Tags: Pimpi88
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7591kb
Play Time: 04:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,27 stars, 402 notes)
  2. Insane (4,81 stars, 492 notes)
  3. Pimpi88's Normal (2,6 stars, 312 notes)
Download: Akon ft. Colby O'Donis and Kardinal Offishall - Beautiful
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This is my second map

Thanks to Pimpi88 for his Diff
iDarkTraceX
I love this song, the map is very fun :D

You got a few problems however.
You must have atleast two different difficulties. (One of which has to be below 4 stars.)
You need to fix your combos here. Especially from around 00:41:310 - 01:11:541
00:22:387 <--- Make beat#12 a new combo.
00:24:464 <--- Remove new combo
00:29:887 <--- Make beat#14 a new combo.
00:44:541 <--- Make beat#12 a new combo.
00:47:772 <--- Make beat#22 a new combo.
00:52:156 <--- Make beat#31 a new combo.
00:55:156 <--- Make beat#40 a new combo.
00:58:426 <--- Make beat#44 a new combo.
So on and so forth.
I noticed you gave up on adding clap sounds. Keep adding them =)
Mix it with some whistles =)
Try your best to keep your combos BELOW 18.
02:01:156 <--- Make that slider small and make it bounce 4 times. And move that spinner (Starts at 02:02:425, ends at 02:03:695)

Okay and that's it I suppose. I'm tired and I need to go to sleep...I guess I will give this a star. =) Just because besides the combos and whatnot, the song is awesome and the beatmap is well done :)
Breeze
Akon o.o
hey guy, cheer you up
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
:D
Pimpi
oye deja la pereza y termina el mapa! xD
cuando lo revivas y tengas todo listo te doy una estrella y posteo mi diff :3
James2250
Revived~
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Thanks James :D
Pimpi
Just in time. Let's try to do our best :3
Pimpi
I'm waiting for this to be ranked.. you should update this more frequently.
I will spam push and annoy Sir Minelli to finish his guess diff in one of my maps in the graveyard XD
PotsBreaker
8-) 8-) star
gustjr1997
star
Screenagers
starrrrr
Pimpi
Useless file ahead!
I will start putting the hitsounds now ;)
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
:O didn't notice that. Thanks, fixing it right away
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o

[General]
• Make the offset of all diffs: 16086
Seeing as that is the first note.
• Not going to use custom combo colors?
• Set a preview point on the map.
• Add Pimpi88 to the tags on all difficulties.

[Pimpi88's Normal]
HP -1
AR -1
OD -2
00:20:701 (8) - New Combo
00:21:163 (1) - Remove Combo
00:23:470 (5) - New Combo
00:26:701 (1) - End this at 00:29:932
00:32:701 (1) - New Combo
00:35:932 (5) - ^
00:36:393 (1) - Remove Combo
00:37:778 (5) - New Combo
00:40:086 (4) - Spacing
00:54:393 (4) - A Jump on Normal? And it is the easiest difficulty, so remove? Up to you.
00:56:239 (1) - End at 00:59:470
01:06:393 (4) - Spacing Maybe? Might be confusing for new players.
01:58:547 (1) - End at 02:00:855
02:05:470 (1) - End at 02:08:239

[Normal]
Rename this difficulty to Hard?
00:17:932 (1) - New Combo
00:24:855 (1) - ^
00:43:548 (6) - ^
02:05:240 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Rename this difficulty to Insane?
00:25:317 (6) - New Combo
00:29:471 (11) - ^


Star!
Nice mapping, both of you.
I like kudosu :3
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Thanks for the mod RobotoRaccoon, i corrected my part, just gotta wait until Pimpi88 finishes his part :P
Hyguys
Timing's Off. Offset : 837
Resize bg

Pimpi88's Normal
Damn hitsounds. Where are they
00:26:677 (1) - Random Spinner
00:40:061 (7) - Spacing
00:54:369 (4) - ^
01:06:369 (4) - ^
01:23:215 (5,6) - ^
01:42:369 (8) - Rotate it -7º
01:45:600 (4) - No copypast shit
02:12:830 (1) - Delete , then map this part
02:38:677 (3,4,5,6) - Damnit ;_;
End this diff.

Hard
00:28:086 (7) - Delete third control point , and then 3 grids left the second.
01:11:470 (3) - Shitty ;-;
End

Insane
Bad sliders.
+1AR?
Raging Bull
General:
Fix BG. Make it 4:3 ratio (800x600 1024x768 etc)

Normal:
Resnap all notes.
Most of your notes are just in the middle area. Try moving around to the other part of the areas.
I'll try not to highlight what above said since you probably didn't update your map with his mod yet.
00:26:701 (1) - But yes. Random spinner. Remove it.
01:06:393 (4) - New combo?
01:32:701 (4) - ^
01:38:452 (2) - Seems like a random half note. I don't know what it follows.
02:12:855 (1) - Very long spinner. Try shortening it and map a bit.
02:38:701 (3,4,5,6) - See if you can remake those sliders so they stack properly. (Nazi)
It's nice if you map the whole thing though up to 04:28:529 like insane.

Hard:
Resnap all notes.
+1 OD
00:31:086 (2) - Small spacing error.
01:27:855 (4,5,6,7) - I can't follow these 4 notes. :/ Probably because they are placed at the red ticks. Try moving them at the white ticks?
02:03:162 (3) - Make it cleaner please.
02:10:085 (1) - ^
02:13:085 (2,3) - Space 2 and 3 properly.
Map the rest too please. Also up to 04:28:529.

Insane:
Resnape all notes.
Raise slider velocity. Something like 1.8 or higher maybe.
01:04:086 (5) - Make the arc cleaner.
01:07:778 (5) - This kind of overlap is kinda irritates me. I don't mind overlapping if it was something else, but the reverse arrow overlapping notes looks weird. Maybe move it to the left a bit so it's more visible?
01:33:047 (5) - Offbeat?
01:37:085 (6) - New combo?
01:55:778 (4) - Cleaner arc.
01:58:316 (9) - ^ and space it properly.
02:08:470 (5) - New combo?
02:21:624 (6) - Move slider to coordinates x336 y216. Might need to turn on grid level 4.
03:04:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't understand why did you change the volume with these. Just remove timing section and keep the hitsound 100%

Starred. Good luck!
PotsBreaker
I thinks this will look better, if you change the background. A landscape, etc is good for looking~.
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
I'm working on the suggestions up there, gonna take a while cause something happened in the spacing and gotta move all the notes at insane... Also gotta wait until Pimpi88 finishes fixing his part. Thanks for the Modding :D

Edit: Can someone suggest me any better BG for this map plz?
Raging Bull
Here this may help with arcs.http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

No need to kudos this post.
Pimpi
Just a few adjustments and my difficulty will be ready.
Waiting for sebastiangl to make a test of the last update done.
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Thanks Raging Bull that post was really helpfull
Crimmi

sebastiangl wrote:

I'm working on the suggestions up there, gonna take a while cause something happened in the spacing and gotta move all the notes at insane... Also gotta wait until Pimpi88 finishes fixing his part. Thanks for the Modding :D

Edit: Can someone suggest me any better BG for this map plz?
TADA here's a BG for you:

mancuso_JM_
Me gusta la cancion y el mapa
Buena Suerte!!!!!!!! star 8-)
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Thanks a lot for the BG Crimmi, it's great :D
Pimpi
Hey, let's make some mod~

• First, you have to put the new background in all diffs except in [Pimpi88's Normal].

[Hard]:
Resnap All Notes.
I didn't find anything more here.

[Insane]:
• 02:53:567: (8) - Change slider length to fit the music.

• 03:23:106: (3) - Change the slider length so they can fit music.

• 03:58:298: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) - Fix those sliders length same as before.

• 04:24:837: (1) (2) (3) - Fix spacing in those jumps.

That's all.
kazumikos
ohai :3

[General]
SPOILER
Ok so... max volume 100% sound too loud, set it around 70-80%?

I believe the artist should be Akon ft. Colby O'Donis, Kardinal Offishall‏, change it

Just in case u dont know how to change artist w/o submitting duplicated map, u might wanna take a look in here first =/

[Pimpi88's Normal]
SPOILER
Slider tick rate = 1
Combos r quite messy, u might wanna fix it
01:01:760 (3) - remove finish
01:05:452 (3) - ^
01:09:144 (1) - remove finish at the start and new combo
01:12:837 (5) - remove finish at the start
01:58:529 (1) - remove clap

[Hard]
SPOILER
more like normal to me lol, anyway lets move on
Timing > Resnap All Notes
00:59:913 (4) - finish at the start
02:13:760 (4) - finish
03:13:298 (10) - new combo? O_o
and more new combos after that
Hm...have u finished this?=/

[Insane]
SPOILER
U should use more whistles in this diff and [Hard] as well
00:44:452 (11) - finish at the end
01:21:144 - u seriously shouldnt put a break here, sound weird
02:22:990 (x) - add note
04:07:529 - delete this short break

star and good luck ^^
Pimpi

kazumikos wrote:



I believe the artist should be Akon ft. Colby O'Donis, Kardinal Offishall‏, change it

Just in case u dont know how to change artist w/o submitting duplicated map, u might wanna take a look in here first =/

[Pimpi88's Normal]
SPOILER
Slider tick rate = 1
Combos r quite messy, u might wanna fix it
01:01:760 (3) - remove finish
01:05:452 (3) - ^
01:09:144 (1) - remove finish at the start and new combo
01:12:837 (5) - remove finish at the start
01:58:529 (1) - remove clap
Made almost all, I will fix the combo colors later, sebastiangl is changing the artist name.
Thank you

Download: Akon - Beautiful (sebastiangl) [Pimpi88's Normal].osu
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