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Topic Starter
happy623
removed :D <3
Asagi
prprprprprprpro!!!
ctyjason
看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下 :)
Topic Starter
happy623

ctyjason wrote:

看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下 :)

thanks <3
Oracle

ctyjason wrote:

看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下 :)
Rizia

ctyjason wrote:

看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下 :)
dkun
I'd like to suggest TR2 on all difficulties. Let me know what you think!
Topic Starter
happy623
tried, but it seems a little bit noisy and I found that TR2 or 1 doesnt have any big difference at all, sorry and thanks!
dkun
CUTIE PANTHER WATASHIIIIIII
Topic Starter
happy623
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! \o/
AruOtta
Congratz \:D/
Irreversible
Quick unrank to make some fixes on the Insane diff.
Mythol
no00o00o0ooo
Topic Starter
happy623
updaaaaated
Irreversible
21:01 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/374574 BiBi - Cutie Panther [Insane]]
21:01 Irreversible: haaapppyyyy
21:01 Irreversible: D:
21:01 happy623: DDDDDD:
21:02 Irreversible: 00:37:562 (1) -
21:02 Irreversible: is silenced, good!
21:02 Irreversible: 00:43:209 (1) - do you have a reason why this isnt'?
21:03 happy623: ;w;
21:03 Irreversible: tell me
21:03 happy623: you mean, the slider head or ?
21:03 Irreversible: no, slider end
21:04 happy623: !
21:04 happy623: that probarly missed
21:04 Irreversible: 01:58:032 (1) - same
21:05 happy623: okay
21:05 Irreversible: is it ok if i quickly unrank and we make IRC?
21:05 Irreversible: i rerank after, dw
21:05 happy623: sure
21:05 Irreversible: just to improve some parts!
21:06 happy623: okay lemme add the green linnnes first
21:06 Irreversible: okay
21:06 Irreversible: tell me when you're done, i got more things to say
21:06 happy623: okay
21:06 happy623: its done o/
21:07 Irreversible: 00:08:974 (2,1) - make it like this to follow the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/aTSXW.png
21:07 Irreversible: Beacuse now you let the slider end on a strong tick, but why not having the 1/4 slider start there? It's better to follow.
21:10 happy623: okay
21:10 Irreversible: 00:12:856 (1,2) - Don't you want a full stream here? Fits way better than what you have now, doesn't it?
21:11 happy623: hmmm
21:12 happy623: I feel starting streams in 00:13:738 (2) - is better than 00:12:856 (1) -
21:12 Irreversible: sure
21:12 Irreversible: 00:13:209 (2,1,2) - but watch the spacing please
21:12 Irreversible: it's really misleading
21:12 Irreversible: first is 1/4 , second is 1/2, but both has same distance
21:15 happy623: I guess its fine..?
21:15 Irreversible: try this: http://puu.sh/aTTzz.png
21:15 happy623: increasing spacing by 0.2x at 00:13:738 (2,1) - only
21:16 happy623: ohh u mean this DX
21:16 Irreversible: 00:13:562 (1) - move to 52 224
21:16 happy623: sry
21:16 Irreversible: 00:13:738 (2,3,4,5) - move the stream up and rotate a bit :D
21:16 Irreversible: tell me when done~
21:17 happy623: okay
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:268 (1,2,3) - i feel like this jump is really big and unconfortable to play.. i mean check the spacing 00:29:621 (3,4) - here, it's really small..
21:18 Irreversible: try this:
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:444 (2) - move to 76 324
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:621 (3) - move to 228 204
21:18 Irreversible: 00:30:327 (6) - move to 272 128
21:21 happy623: I prefer keeping 00:30:327 (6) - and rotate 00:29:797 (4) - a bit
21:21 happy623: is it okay?
21:21 Irreversible: sure
21:21 Irreversible: but you moved the rest?
21:21 Irreversible: make sure no overlap tho please
21:21 happy623: yea
21:21 Irreversible: 00:34:738 (1) - you sure you want to leave this..? xD i mean it looks quite unclean imo..
21:23 happy623: well, I just want to show the sound effect behind orz I change into another shape then
21:23 Irreversible: nono
21:23 Irreversible: i mean you can suit the sound effect too
21:23 Irreversible: but with something cleaner
21:23 Irreversible: let's see
21:24 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTUi2.png ?
21:24 Irreversible: idk XD
21:25 Irreversible: you can decide, you can even leave the old if you like it
21:25 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930434 ?
21:25 Irreversible: great :D
21:25 happy623: okaaay
21:25 happy623: then I will change 00:36:150 (3) - too
21:25 Irreversible: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930424 00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel like this could be super fun
21:26 Irreversible: (add a 1/4 circle and stack)
21:27 happy623: ;w; a bit hard imo
21:27 Irreversible: did you testplay?
21:27 Irreversible: because look, movement will be like this:
21:27 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTUtw.png
21:27 Irreversible: but it's ok if not
21:27 Irreversible: haha
21:28 Irreversible: 00:43:032 (3) - move to 252 352, because this is way better to play... you don't get so stopped
21:29 Irreversible: 00:13:209 (2) - add another hitsound than clap? idk why there is a clap tbh
21:30 happy623: placed here instead, a bit larger jump seems nice >< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930450
21:30 Irreversible: good
21:31 happy623: changed to Drum with finish
21:31 Irreversible: 01:03:679 (1,2) - tbh this stack is a bit weird to play, i think movement can be better: http://puu.sh/aTUMa.png
21:31 Irreversible: you can decide what to do 01:04:385 (1) - with this tho
21:32 happy623: may I just apply ctrl+G in 01:04:032 (2) - ?
21:32 happy623: since I reaally want to keep this pattern orz
21:33 Irreversible: is cooler yea
21:33 Irreversible: 01:07:385 (2,3,4) - about this... i think you can do better, really.
21:33 Irreversible: the spacing looks weird here, and idk..
21:34 Irreversible: maybe you can see what i mean
21:34 Irreversible: xD
21:34 happy623: waitt a seec
21:35 Irreversible: 01:45:327 (1,2) - nice sliders
21:35 Irreversible: 01:58:032 (1,1,1) - green lines
21:35 Irreversible: 02:07:915 (1,2,3) - spacing should be the same, please. I don't see a reason why it gets smaller o.o
21:35 happy623: yea fixed all
21:37 happy623: ;w;
21:37 happy623: but I think its nice DX
21:37 Irreversible: but why is it different LOL
21:38 Irreversible: 02:50:268 - maybe add a circle here? seems cool to me.. but you can decide.. with finish
21:38 Irreversible: 03:02:268 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/aTVis.png
21:38 Irreversible: 03:02:621 (1,2,3) - spacing error, first 1/4, then 1/2 again, same like before
21:39 Irreversible: 03:07:915 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/aTVlb.png
21:39 happy623: 02:07:915 (1) - ..idk how to say, just like some anti-jumps but those are sliders instead of notes
21:40 Irreversible: uh.. sure lol
21:41 Irreversible: fix the errors above tho, then i'm finished
21:43 happy623: okay, should be fixed except 02:50:268-
21:43 Irreversible: sure
21:48 Irreversible: okay then
21:48 Irreversible: you can upload
21:50 happy623: wait a miin~
21:53 Irreversible: 03:02:974 (2) -
21:53 Irreversible: instead of fixing this
21:53 Irreversible: you can just extend it 1 more time?
21:53 Irreversible: o_o
21:54 happy623: turn it into 2 sliders instead or players might get missed here o/
21:54 Irreversible: sure
21:54 Irreversible: tell me when upated
21:57 happy623: updateed
21:59 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTWOW.png 00:09:327 (1,2,3) -
21:59 Irreversible: try that, looks better and also plays better, i think yours is too hard for the begin
22:00 happy623: ok
22:02 Irreversible: update and rearnak
22:02 Irreversible: :D
22:02 Irreversible: rerank

rerankeeeed
Topic Starter
happy623
<3~~~
Kairi

Mythol wrote:

no00o00o0ooo
Rizia
MV般的SB
Sylith
yay!
HabiHolic
Gratz 623!!
Andrea
About time :3

More Love Live! <3
Rumia-
happr623
gratz !! <3 ~
Starfy
Congratz \:D/
btw sorry i forgot to mod this /_\
623 you're god mapper \:D/
Oracle
yeahhhhhhhhhhhh
gratz!!!!!
Topic Starter
happy623
thanks everypro!
Foreverends
hehe
gratz\:D/
ctyjason
congras :)
captin1
Gonna pull this out of Qualified
Concerns raised mainly by me and Garven

To begin with, normal-hitclap2 and normal-hitclap3 are not used anywhere in the set, and should be removed

Other general things that could be improved:

  1. Overall OD is very low compared to the AR, every diff could use a boost of +1 OD
[Normal]
  1. 02:49:562 - Delayed break isn't snapped correctly, should be moved to 02:50:268 -
  2. 03:57:327 - Considering the rest of the post-spinner notes, you could add a circle here
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 02:23:268 (1,2,3) - Seems like there was a mistake in hitsounding here, probably from a ctrl+g mod. Should be whistles on the start of the sliders, not the ends.
Great SB and maps, but the claps need to be removed, and a few other things to clean it up.
Good luck!
hehe
AWW :( good song rerank soon :3
Topic Starter
happy623
@captin1 : everything is fixed, but the 1st one in normal, I tried to move to 02:49:562 - instead, since the delayed break is limited, I cant move it until 02:50:268 -, thanks !!
Breiz
od8~ bye free SS
Garven
02:48:856 - might make more sense musically, and since you have the storyboard cue at 02:50:268 - it can work as kind of a dual layered break intro.
Topic Starter
happy623

Garven wrote:

02:48:856 - might make more sense musically, and since you have the storyboard cue at 02:50:268 - it can work as kind of a dual layered break intro.

maybe earlier, wt about at 02:47:444 - ? Since the previous elements are faded away at there
ZZHBOY
蛤蛤qat刚出623就美丽
Garven
Whichever one you feel fits your vision of the map and song should work fine. I like my suggestion better, but yours is adequate too.
captin1
alright, looks good now
Topic Starter
happy623
thanks captin and Garven!!
Rizia
regratz~~~~~~~~
10nya
lololo happu regratz
Xiaolin
gratz again ~ o3o
primrose
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ctyjason
恭喜喔^^等好久了
pw384
LL!
kirigherkins
I've had this song stuck in my head for days and it's all your fault.
Topic Starter
happy623
thanks prprprprprprpr
Garven
Sorry this wasn't noticed before, but we'd like to give you the chance to fix this if you'd like:

From aleks:

Collab Normal: name of 1st collaborator is hidden under black letterboxes (they made by sb in kiai time) and is not hidden for another mapper in next kiai. i think it's little mistake with layers. Also i find borders of lights ugly (http://puu.sh/b8WSq/c80f1fdb51.jpg).They are pretty visiable for me ingame. Also, is "flashlight" supposed to be like this? http://puu.sh/b8XbQ/dde5cfb4b6.jpg

Just post your decision here and we'll move accordingly.
[ BJ ]

captin1 wrote:

Gonna pull this out of Qualified
Concerns raised mainly by me and Garven

To begin with, normal-hitclap2 and normal-hitclap3 are not used anywhere in the set, and should be removed

Other general things that could be improved:

  1. Overall OD is very low compared to the AR, every diff could use a boost of +1 OD
[Normal]
  1. 02:49:562 - Delayed break isn't snapped correctly, should be moved to 02:50:268 -
  2. 03:57:327 - Considering the rest of the post-spinner notes, you could add a circle here
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 02:23:268 (1,2,3) - Seems like there was a mistake in hitsounding here, probably from a ctrl+g mod. Should be whistles on the start of the sliders, not the ends.
Great SB and maps, but the claps need to be removed, and a few other things to clean it up.
Good luck!
RIP my boy Gokuri's SS rank. Thanks again Quality Assurance Team, Love you guys!
Topic Starter
happy623

Garven wrote:

Sorry this wasn't noticed before, but we'd like to give you the chance to fix this if you'd like:

From aleks:

Collab Normal: name of 1st collaborator is hidden under black letterboxes (they made by sb in kiai time) and is not hidden for another mapper in next kiai. i think it's little mistake with layers. Also i find borders of lights ugly (http://puu.sh/b8WSq/c80f1fdb51.jpg).They are pretty visiable for me ingame. Also, is "flashlight" supposed to be like this? http://puu.sh/b8XbQ/dde5cfb4b6.jpg

Just post your decision here and we'll move accordingly.

After some consideration, I decided to keep it as it is. Since it wont hurt in playing, I hope the scores wont be reset again.

BUT I will be careful of my next mappu!, thanks again and again!
nicopuri9332
NICO-NICO-NII I LIKED IT
nicopuri9332
NICO-NICO-NIIII I LIKE IT:LOL:
lLinutionHD

nicopuri9332 wrote:

NICO-NICO-NIIII I LIKE IT:LOL:
I like the redhead
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