removed <3
ctyjason wrote:
看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下
ctyjason wrote:
看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下
ctyjason wrote:
看到留言都說storyboard做的很好, 故意開出來看看, 結果,真的很棒~~~
而且map亦做得好!!!! 支持一下
21:01 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/374574 BiBi - Cutie Panther [Insane]]
21:01 Irreversible: haaapppyyyy
21:01 Irreversible: D:
21:01 happy623: DDDDDD:
21:02 Irreversible: 00:37:562 (1) -
21:02 Irreversible: is silenced, good!
21:02 Irreversible: 00:43:209 (1) - do you have a reason why this isnt'?
21:03 happy623: ;w;
21:03 Irreversible: tell me
21:03 happy623: you mean, the slider head or ?
21:03 Irreversible: no, slider end
21:04 happy623: !
21:04 happy623: that probarly missed
21:04 Irreversible: 01:58:032 (1) - same
21:05 happy623: okay
21:05 Irreversible: is it ok if i quickly unrank and we make IRC?
21:05 Irreversible: i rerank after, dw
21:05 happy623: sure
21:05 Irreversible: just to improve some parts!
21:06 happy623: okay lemme add the green linnnes first
21:06 Irreversible: okay
21:06 Irreversible: tell me when you're done, i got more things to say
21:06 happy623: okay
21:06 happy623: its done o/
21:07 Irreversible: 00:08:974 (2,1) - make it like this to follow the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/aTSXW.png
21:07 Irreversible: Beacuse now you let the slider end on a strong tick, but why not having the 1/4 slider start there? It's better to follow.
21:10 happy623: okay
21:10 Irreversible: 00:12:856 (1,2) - Don't you want a full stream here? Fits way better than what you have now, doesn't it?
21:11 happy623: hmmm
21:12 happy623: I feel starting streams in 00:13:738 (2) - is better than 00:12:856 (1) -
21:12 Irreversible: sure
21:12 Irreversible: 00:13:209 (2,1,2) - but watch the spacing please
21:12 Irreversible: it's really misleading
21:12 Irreversible: first is 1/4 , second is 1/2, but both has same distance
21:15 happy623: I guess its fine..?
21:15 Irreversible: try this: http://puu.sh/aTTzz.png
21:15 happy623: increasing spacing by 0.2x at 00:13:738 (2,1) - only
21:16 happy623: ohh u mean this DX
21:16 Irreversible: 00:13:562 (1) - move to 52 224
21:16 happy623: sry
21:16 Irreversible: 00:13:738 (2,3,4,5) - move the stream up and rotate a bit :D
21:16 Irreversible: tell me when done~
21:17 happy623: okay
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:268 (1,2,3) - i feel like this jump is really big and unconfortable to play.. i mean check the spacing 00:29:621 (3,4) - here, it's really small..
21:18 Irreversible: try this:
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:444 (2) - move to 76 324
21:18 Irreversible: 00:29:621 (3) - move to 228 204
21:18 Irreversible: 00:30:327 (6) - move to 272 128
21:21 happy623: I prefer keeping 00:30:327 (6) - and rotate 00:29:797 (4) - a bit
21:21 happy623: is it okay?
21:21 Irreversible: sure
21:21 Irreversible: but you moved the rest?
21:21 Irreversible: make sure no overlap tho please
21:21 happy623: yea
21:21 Irreversible: 00:34:738 (1) - you sure you want to leave this..? xD i mean it looks quite unclean imo..
21:23 happy623: well, I just want to show the sound effect behind orz I change into another shape then
21:23 Irreversible: nono
21:23 Irreversible: i mean you can suit the sound effect too
21:23 Irreversible: but with something cleaner
21:23 Irreversible: let's see
21:24 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTUi2.png ?
21:24 Irreversible: idk XD
21:25 Irreversible: you can decide, you can even leave the old if you like it
21:25 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930434 ?
21:25 Irreversible: great :D
21:25 happy623: okaaay
21:25 happy623: then I will change 00:36:150 (3) - too
21:25 Irreversible: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930424 00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel like this could be super fun
21:26 Irreversible: (add a 1/4 circle and stack)
21:27 happy623: ;w; a bit hard imo
21:27 Irreversible: did you testplay?
21:27 Irreversible: because look, movement will be like this:
21:27 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTUtw.png
21:27 Irreversible: but it's ok if not
21:27 Irreversible: haha
21:28 Irreversible: 00:43:032 (3) - move to 252 352, because this is way better to play... you don't get so stopped
21:29 Irreversible: 00:13:209 (2) - add another hitsound than clap? idk why there is a clap tbh
21:30 happy623: placed here instead, a bit larger jump seems nice >< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1930450
21:30 Irreversible: good
21:31 happy623: changed to Drum with finish
21:31 Irreversible: 01:03:679 (1,2) - tbh this stack is a bit weird to play, i think movement can be better: http://puu.sh/aTUMa.png
21:31 Irreversible: you can decide what to do 01:04:385 (1) - with this tho
21:32 happy623: may I just apply ctrl+G in 01:04:032 (2) - ?
21:32 happy623: since I reaally want to keep this pattern orz
21:33 Irreversible: is cooler yea
21:33 Irreversible: 01:07:385 (2,3,4) - about this... i think you can do better, really.
21:33 Irreversible: the spacing looks weird here, and idk..
21:34 Irreversible: maybe you can see what i mean
21:34 Irreversible: xD
21:34 happy623: waitt a seec
21:35 Irreversible: 01:45:327 (1,2) - nice sliders
21:35 Irreversible: 01:58:032 (1,1,1) - green lines
21:35 Irreversible: 02:07:915 (1,2,3) - spacing should be the same, please. I don't see a reason why it gets smaller o.o
21:35 happy623: yea fixed all
21:37 happy623: ;w;
21:37 happy623: but I think its nice DX
21:37 Irreversible: but why is it different LOL
21:38 Irreversible: 02:50:268 - maybe add a circle here? seems cool to me.. but you can decide.. with finish
21:38 Irreversible: 03:02:268 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/aTVis.png
21:38 Irreversible: 03:02:621 (1,2,3) - spacing error, first 1/4, then 1/2 again, same like before
21:39 Irreversible: 03:07:915 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/aTVlb.png
21:39 happy623: 02:07:915 (1) - ..idk how to say, just like some anti-jumps but those are sliders instead of notes
21:40 Irreversible: uh.. sure lol
21:41 Irreversible: fix the errors above tho, then i'm finished
21:43 happy623: okay, should be fixed except 02:50:268-
21:43 Irreversible: sure
21:48 Irreversible: okay then
21:48 Irreversible: you can upload
21:50 happy623: wait a miin~
21:53 Irreversible: 03:02:974 (2) -
21:53 Irreversible: instead of fixing this
21:53 Irreversible: you can just extend it 1 more time?
21:53 Irreversible: o_o
21:54 happy623: turn it into 2 sliders instead or players might get missed here o/
21:54 Irreversible: sure
21:54 Irreversible: tell me when upated
21:57 happy623: updateed
21:59 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/aTWOW.png 00:09:327 (1,2,3) -
21:59 Irreversible: try that, looks better and also plays better, i think yours is too hard for the begin
22:00 happy623: ok
22:02 Irreversible: update and rearnak
22:02 Irreversible: :D
22:02 Irreversible: rerank
Garven wrote:
02:48:856 - might make more sense musically, and since you have the storyboard cue at 02:50:268 - it can work as kind of a dual layered break intro.
RIP my boy Gokuri's SS rank. Thanks again Quality Assurance Team, Love you guys!captin1 wrote:
Gonna pull this out of Qualified
Concerns raised mainly by me and Garven
To begin with, normal-hitclap2 and normal-hitclap3 are not used anywhere in the set, and should be removed
Other general things that could be improved:[Normal]
- Overall OD is very low compared to the AR, every diff could use a boost of +1 OD
[Xinely's Hard]
- 02:49:562 - Delayed break isn't snapped correctly, should be moved to 02:50:268 -
- 03:57:327 - Considering the rest of the post-spinner notes, you could add a circle here
Great SB and maps, but the claps need to be removed, and a few other things to clean it up.
- 02:23:268 (1,2,3) - Seems like there was a mistake in hitsounding here, probably from a ctrl+g mod. Should be whistles on the start of the sliders, not the ends.
Good luck!
Garven wrote:
Sorry this wasn't noticed before, but we'd like to give you the chance to fix this if you'd like:
From aleks:
Collab Normal: name of 1st collaborator is hidden under black letterboxes (they made by sb in kiai time) and is not hidden for another mapper in next kiai. i think it's little mistake with layers. Also i find borders of lights ugly (http://puu.sh/b8WSq/c80f1fdb51.jpg).They are pretty visiable for me ingame. Also, is "flashlight" supposed to be like this? http://puu.sh/b8XbQ/dde5cfb4b6.jpg
Just post your decision here and we'll move accordingly.