John Zeroness - Meteor

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Hathz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7. april 2014 at 15:24:03

Artist: John Zeroness
Title: Meteor
Tags: hatsune miku append vocaloid vocaloid2 2 marathon insane jon
BPM: 140
Filesize: 14301kb
Play Time: 08:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extinction (4,85 stars, 1119 notes)


Download: John Zeroness - Meteor
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A lovely song, sung by Hatsune Miku.

[Extinction] - Marathon difficulty


Please redownload after 7. April 2014!
All mods/opinions are welcome!
briggstan
I love it! I'm not sure if my playing is not very good yet but sometimes the pattern switches throw me off.

Other than that, I really enjoyed this map. It's really well made and has a lot of fun jumps and was perfect for a marathon. I hope you continue working on it! :)
Topic Starter
Hathz
I'm glad you like it. Please be sure to redownload it, I added some storyboard content to make things slightly more interesting!
GugUCorn
Wait! It's so long... :o

[General]

  1. Offset: 28,504ms BPM: 140.00
  2. Check out "Widescreen Support", "Letterbox In Breaks". these are not need. In your .osu, you can check out these.
    like this ↓
[General]
AudioFilename: VOCALOID2 Hatsune Miku Append - Meteor.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 279250
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Extinction]

  1. 01:27:678 (1) - remove finish
  2. 02:56:393 (10) - NC
  3. 03:18:250 (5) - ^
  4. 03:54:250 (4,1) - swap NC
Topic Starter
Hathz

TaMul wrote:

Wait! It's so long... :o

[General]

  1. Offset: 28,504ms BPM: 140.00
  2. Check out "Widescreen Support", "Letterbox In Breaks". these are not need. In your .osu, you can check out these.
    like this ↓
[General]
AudioFilename: VOCALOID2 Hatsune Miku Append - Meteor.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 279250
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Extinction]

  1. 01:27:678 (1) - remove finish
  2. 02:56:393 (10) - NC
  3. 03:18:250 (5) - ^
  4. 03:54:250 (4,1) - swap NC
Thank you :)
(╯°ω°)╯︵ *kudosu*
-Faded-
Hi o/ From #modreqs

General

Vocaloid names should never be in artist or source. Instead, put the composer of the song as the artist and the vocaloid that was used in tags.

Extinction

00:34:932 (3) - Move this to x:384 y:200 for better triangle.

00:36:218 (1,2) - Why isn't this a blanket? Move 00:36:861 (2) - to x:192 y:232

00:38:575 (7) - Move this note to x:352 y:48 so it perfectly stacks with 00:37:932 (4) -

00:48:218 (2) - This is spaced like it is 1/2 away from 00:46:504 (1) - so you should move it further.

01:03:218 (4) - This slider speed change really isn't necessary, just make it longer rather than slowing it down.

01:08:146 (4) - Move this up to x:256 y:160 so it perfectly stacks with the start of 01:07:075 (1) -

01:12:218 (1,2) - Blanket these?

02:26:789 (1) - Would flow much better if you ctrl+g'd this slider.

03:19:718 (4) - I really would suggest adding a note here because it would sound a lot better than just leaving an awkward gap.

03:34:718 (4,5) - Surely you can make a blanket with these two a bit better. Move 03:34:932 (5) - to x:424 y:80

03:36:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I don't like how it goes from sliders to a spinner without the music changing much. Make the whole part a spinner or get rid of the spinner and add more sliders.

03:57:218 (2) - Better flow if you ctrl+G this

04:13:932 (5,6) - You really need to improve this blanket. Try moving 04:14:361 (6) - to x:44 y:140

04:41:789 (6) - Better flow if you ctrl+g this as well

04:42:646 (8) - Move this down to x:344 y:180 so it's a nicer blanket with 04:43:075 (1) -

05:49:504 (7) - I really don't like the shape of this slider imo, especially how the two ends overlap each other.

06:01:718 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 06:03:218 (1) - and add a note to 06:03:646 (1) - because the spinner feels quite out of place towards the end of it.

06:11:361 (5) - Move this to x:342 y:62 so it perfectly overlaps the slider end of 06:11:789 (1) -

06:36:004 (2) - This is spaced quite badly, it's easy to think this is 1/4 away from 06:34:932 (1) -

06:59:361 (3) - move this to x:160 y:344 so it blankets 06:59:146 (2) - better.


Very nice map. Well that's it from me, good luck!
Topic Starter
Hathz
Thanks for your mod. I'll see about changing the artist name :)
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