This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 24, 2017 at 9:27:09 PM

Artist: NeLiME vs PRESti
Title: Gatorix
Source: Cytus
Tags: Videogame Cytus Electronic Nardo luxoDeh Fanzhen0019 mliencheng chapter 10 x the new world
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3222kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.59 stars, 166 notes)
2. fanzhen's Insane (4.95 stars, 568 notes)
3. Insane (4.77 stars, 509 notes)
4. Luxo's Hard (3.39 stars, 282 notes)
5. Normal (1.97 stars, 75 notes)

Download: NeLiME vs PRESti - Gatorix
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy, Normal, and Insane by Me
Luxo's Hard by luxoDeh
Fanzhen's Insane by fanzhen0019

Discontinued taiko set:
Nardo's Muzukashii by Nardo
mlien's Oni by mliencheng
Nardo's Inner Oni by Nardo

nice \:D/

Here comes the two taiko guest difficulties as requested \:D/

Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/7nlEx
Inner Oni: http://puu.sh/7nlEN

If you still need an Oni and cannot find other taiko mappers to map it, you can ask me again

aaaaand here comes my mod requested from the Night Hotel~
I'm a beginner at modding, so don't expect too much >.<

General

I enjoyed playing this map and I really like this song ^.^
but I didn't really like that spacing in your map. Also, there are some boring parts, just as the beginning, which has too high spacing in my opinion.


Insane

For general I recommend to turn down the spacing in the beginning.

-Add a note here 00:01:945 (1) - and let the spinner begin here 00:02:320 (1) - u can try to mute the spinner hitsound at the end if you want, it doesn't fit there.

-00:07:945 (1) - here, try to start with a lower distance spacing and increase it here 00:15:257 (1) - a distance snap of 1.2x seems to be fine for the beginning

-^ Try to not only use sliders, here's a little example (only a example) http://puu.sh/7ppQk.jpg

-00:19:757 (4,5,6) - instead of this triplet, try something like this http://puu.sh/7pqsU.jpg

-Add a triplet here 00:21:257 (9) -

-Remove all of this notes 00:25:288 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - as you can hear in the song, the stream stops there. Leave a note here 00:24:632 - and add one here 00:25:945 (5) -. Example of how would I do this: http://puu.sh/7pr0a.jpg (something like this)

-00:28:570 (7,8) - Circle 8 is too far from circle 7 (you don't have to change much, only a bit). same here 00:31:007 (6,7) - and here 00:31:195 (7,1) -

-00:39:070 (5,6) - too far

-here 01:06:445 (1) - to 01:13:945 (6) - I think there is too much space in general

-01:21:252 (9,10,11) - here is a good example why you should use distance spacing. 01:22:752 (7,8,1) - lol this one made me miss, too much spacing

-01:27:252 (1,2,3) - weird

-01:28:846 (2) - remove that circle and that 01:29:221 (4) -increase the lenght of the slider to that removed circle 4. Do that for the next sliders that are coming. Should look like this http://puu.sh/7prSM.jpg

-01:44:877 (4,5,6) - totally too much space lol

-01:53:690 (4) - from here to 02:03:440 (1) - too much space

end~

I hope this helps a bit!
This is such a great song, good luck! :3

The Night Hotel~

I'm a noob at mapping, so anything you say is pretty much helpful
Thanks for teh mod and enjoy your kudosu

Piku201 wrote:

aaaaand here comes my mod requested from the Night Hotel~
I'm a beginner at modding, so don't expect too much >.<

General

I enjoyed playing this map and I really like this song ^.^
but I didn't really like that spacing in your map. Also, there are some boring parts, just as the beginning, which has too high spacing in my opinion.


Insane

For general I recommend to turn down the spacing in the beginning.

-Add a note here 00:01:945 (1) - and let the spinner begin here 00:02:320 (1) - u can try to mute the spinner hitsound at the end if you want, it doesn't fit there. done

-00:07:945 (1) - here, try to start with a lower distance spacing and increase it here 00:15:257 (1) - a distance snap of 1.2x seems to be fine for the beginning done; 1.1 ds for the first part with sorta some overlap, and 1.2 ds with harder spacing after >.<

-^ Try to not only use sliders, here's a little example (only a example) http://puu.sh/7ppQk.jpg

-00:19:757 (4,5,6) - instead of this triplet, try something like this http://puu.sh/7pqsU.jpg] IDK.. sorta messes up the rhythm after xD (and I'm too lazy to redo it D:)

-Add a triplet here 00:21:257 (9) - didn't even notice it xD thanks!

-Remove all of this notes 00:25:288 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - as you can hear in the song, the stream stops there. Leave a note here 00:24:632 - and add one here 00:25:945 (5) -. Example of how would I do this: http://puu.sh/7pr0a.jpg (something like this) done

-00:28:570 (7,8) - Circle 8 is too far from circle 7 (you don't have to change much, only a bit). same here 00:31:007 (6,7) - and here 00:31:195 (7,1) - done- a bit

-00:39:070 (5,6) - too far fixed

-here 01:06:445 (1) - to 01:13:945 (6) - I think there is too much space in general fixed- scaled it to around .9

-01:21:252 (9,10,11) - here is a good example why you should use distance spacing. not really sure what you mean?

-01:22:752 (7,8,1) - lol this one made me miss, too much spacing xD idk about the spacing... its not too bad.... meanwhile some other insanes are all over the place -_-

-01:27:252 (1,2,3) - weird fixed to look better (i hope)

-01:28:846 (2) - remove that circle and that 01:29:221 (4) -increase the lenght of the slider to that removed circle 4. Do that for the next sliders that are coming. Should look like this http://puu.sh/7prSM.jpg removed circle 4 and increased the slider length. Circle 2 fits the rhythm so didnt change that

-01:44:877 (4,5,6) - totally too much space lol xD changed lol it was too much space xD fixed naow

-01:53:690 (4) - from here to 02:03:440 (1) - too much space I increased the slider velocity to increase hype, and I figured that ds should be wild just the same, since the song is ending owo

end~

I hope this helps a bit!
This is such a great song, good luck! :3

The Night Hotel~

Pretty solid mod after all now to try to get it ranked...

EDIT: nvm... i like the slider at the beginning xD

Yo.
From my modding queue. (Thread title is a lie.)
Mods are just suggestions. Feel free to ignore if you feel like it.

*Since I can only test play this map this weekend (I'm using a laptop without mouse, and I can only use my PC with mouse during weekends), I'll (most likely) do two mods. For this mod, I'll rely purely on eyesight and hearing. This is the reason why I most likely cannot mod insanes, not because I cannot play them.

**I'll try to do second mod next week, assuming I can finish your insane.

[General]

1. Ranking criteria says maps with less than 6:00 drain time must have an Easy and/or Normal. For this map, I recommend you make a Hard and a Normal.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:757 (1) - Change to two circles instead. A slider ending in a big downbeat feels out of place imo.
2. 00:24:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Personally, I don't like the corner turn at the fifth note. Maybe a more horizontal curve for this stream? (Here's what I did http://puu.sh/7s0tM.jpg )
3. 00:25:195 (1) - Change to slider ending at red tick? (OK, previous mod didn't say add a note on the red tick. Changing note 1 to a slider preferably parallel to slider 2 will maintain map speed and fill the red tick which I feel too silent without a note or something.)
4. 00:31:101 - I can hear a synth sound (what are they called?) on this blue tick. Either you can move 00:30:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream near slider 7 to allow for a circle at the aforementioned time point or you can change the stream to three kick sliders or you can disregard the drums and do a 4-2 (OOOO_OO) stream to follow the synth sounds instead.)
5. 00:35:695 (4) - Personally, I want this slider be like slider 5 rotated 180 degrees.
6. 00:37:945 (9) - NC here instead of 00:38:132 (1) -
7. 00:45:445 (5) - Move to or somewhere near x:124, y:288 (Trying to make a subtle distance snap for notes 1, 3, and 5, i.e. have them equally spaced or something. Also, this makes the jumps sequence 4-5-slider1 nearly equal in spacing.)
8. 00:46:195 (3) - Adjust tail to make this and slider 1 head look like it's distance snapped. (Something like this http://puu.sh/7s1GO.jpg )
9. 01:07:757 (1,2,3) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/7s0VW.jpg (Make the flow of the triple smooth with the slider. The original angular stream looks awkward to me.)
10. 01:14:132 - Spinner instead of a break? (If applied, end at 01:16:757 - )
11. 01:43:752 (4) - Move right one grid to overlap slider 3 head
12. 02:02:221 (2) - Curve instead of straight? (Here's what I did http://puu.sh/7s1nD.jpg )
13. 02:02:971 (5) - ^

I suck at modding o.o
Sorry if my mod isn't of any help to your map.
Also, I want to say something. Just because some maps are ranked doesn't mean they are good. Insanes which are all over the place runs the risk of having shit flow imo. A good expert diff mapper can make the map look all over the place and at the same time organized and aesthetically pleasing.
Good luck~

Not even a bad mod
My mod was probably worse o.O

Yo.
From my modding queue. (Thread title is a lie.)
Mods are just suggestions. Feel free to ignore if you feel like it.

*Since I can only test play this map this weekend (I'm using a laptop without mouse, and I can only use my PC with mouse during weekends), I'll (most likely) do two mods. For this mod, I'll rely purely on eyesight and hearing. This is the reason why I most likely cannot mod insanes, not because I cannot play them.

**I'll try to do second mod next week, assuming I can finish your insane.

[General]
Ranking criteria says maps with less than 6:00 drain time must have an Easy and/or Normal. For this map, I recommend you make a Hard and a Normal.

[Insane]
00:13:757 (1) - Change to two circles instead. A slider ending in a big downbeat feels out of place imo. too lazy to remap if i changed it... the pattern is already made :<
00:24:445 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Personally, I don't like the corner turn at the fifth note. Maybe a more horizontal curve for this stream? (Here's what I did http://puu.sh/7s0tM.jpg )fixed
00:25:195 (1) - Change to slider ending at red tick? (OK, previous mod didn't say add a note on the red tick. Changing note 1 to a slider preferably parallel to slider 2 will maintain map speed and fill the red tick which I feel too silent without a note or something.)fixed
00:31:101 - I can hear a synth sound (what are they called?) on this blue tick. Either you can move 00:30:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream near slider 7 to allow for a circle at the aforementioned time point or you can change the stream to three kick sliders or you can disregard the drums and do a 4-2 (OOOO_OO) stream to follow the synth sounds instead.)nice catch! fixed
00:35:695 (4) - Personally, I want this slider be like slider 5 rotated 180 degrees.sort of disrupts flow facing the other way unless ds is tiny, but that would screw up where 00:36:070 (5) goes
00:37:945 (9) - NC here instead of 00:38:132 (1) having a NC there is correct musically, but it looks awk xD
00:45:445 (5) - Move to or somewhere near x:124, y:288 (Trying to make a subtle distance snap for notes 1, 3, and 5, i.e. have them equally spaced or something. Also, this makes the jumps sequence 4-5-slider1 nearly equal in spacing.)increased ds for 1 and decreased ds for 5; fixed
00:46:195 (3) - Adjust tail to make this and slider 1 head look like it's distance snapped. (Something like this http://puu.sh/7s1GO.jpg ) fixed
01:07:757 (1,2,3) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/7s0VW.jpg (Make the flow of the triple smooth with the slider. The original angular stream looks awkward to me.) fixed
01:14:132 - Spinner instead of a break? (If applied, end at 01:16:757 - ) up to personal preference i guess, but it seems good there to me too
01:43:752 (4) - Move right one grid to overlap slider 3 head fixed
02:02:221 (2) - Curve instead of straight? (Here's what I did http://puu.sh/7s1nD.jpg ) i wanted it strait to make groovy shapes xD
02:02:971 (5) - ^ ^

I suck at modding o.o
Sorry if my mod isn't of any help to your map.
Also, I want to say something. Just because some maps are ranked doesn't mean they are good. Insanes which are all over the place runs the risk of having shit flow imo. A good expert diff mapper can make the map look all over the place and at the same time organized and aesthetically pleasing.
Good luck~

M4M from my modding queue.

It seems that some notes in the Inner Oni diff were accidentally changed.

Please update it again, thanks~
http://puu.sh/7xhWg (Inner Oni)

Edit: In your last update, there are still some notes at the end of stream changed into big notes, which is not at my wish. I don't know why it would happen, but such notes are not rankable.

Remember when I said I'll do a second mod?
No kudosu pls.


I like how Insane is easy to pass yet fun to play.

[Insane]

1. HP -1. (OD is good enough, the map still feels easy to 300. My only problem is how it can become a frustrating killer at the deathstream. HP 8 is a killer.)
2. 00:31:570 (1,2,1) - The way this sequence flows feels awkward. Were I the mapper, I'd do something like this: http://puu.sh/7zqtE.jpg
3. 00:34:945 (1) - This plays better if placed on a point where the distance from note 6 to this note, and this note to note 2, is equal. OR you can follow the music and make it closer to note 2.
4. 00:38:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - This jump sequence feels a bit too random. (Sorry I don't have any suggestions for this.)
5. 01:49:940 (1,2,3) - Something like this feels better: http://puu.sh/7zrT1.jpg (If applied, vertical flip (Ctrl+J) 01:50:877 (5) for a diamond.)

That's all. It's not much, really. (I suck at modding o.o)

Good luck!

Nice score ^_^ (I made the beatmap and I can't even do HD (╥﹏╥) )

[Insane]
HP -1. (OD is good enough, the map still feels easy to 300. My only problem is how it can become a frustrating killer at the deathstream. HP 8 is a killer.) Done; now I'll have an easier time too xD
00:31:570 (1,2,1) - The way this sequence flows feels awkward. Were I the mapper, I'd do something like this: http://puu.sh/7zqtE.jpg Changed as you suggested, except I added a bit of curves to look more appealing
00:34:945 (1) - This plays better if placed on a point where the distance from note 6 to this note, and this note to note 2, is equal. OR you can follow the music and make it closer to note 2. I ended up reworking the jumps; not exactly how you suggested, but I think its better now
00:38:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - This jump sequence feels a bit too random. (Sorry I don't have any suggestions for this.)I didn't know how to change it either so I nerfed (made easier) the jumps
01:49:940 (1,2,3) - Something like this feels better: http://puu.sh/7zrT1.jpg (If applied, vertical flip (Ctrl+J) 01:50:877 (5) for a diamond.)fixed, but I had to rework flow to accommodate that one... can you recheck it?

Thanks again for them mods!

A mod for my favorite map
(I cant beat it QAQ so I'm modding by sight )

Insane
00:11:132 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't look right; I think they are all tilted a bit

00:43:757 (1,2,3) - Adjust so it flows better from 00:43:570 (6) ?

00:56:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it's too curvy

01:28:002 (1,2) - Bend these a little?

01:29:502 (2,3,4) - Looks awkward

01:40:752 (1) - Position better (I think )

01:40:940 (2,3) - Connection could be better

01:47:502 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hitsounds?

01:48:440 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward flow I guess.

01:59:502 (3,6) - Not at the same positions

02:01:002 (3,6) - Same


Short mod, but I hope it helps!

Pretty good for your first mod xD

Anyways...

[ owo] wrote:

A mod for my favorite map
(I cant beat it QAQ so I'm modding by sight )

Insane
00:11:132 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't look right; I think they are all tilted a bit Fixed

00:43:757 (1,2,3) - Adjust so it flows better from 00:43:570 (6) ? Fixed

00:56:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it's too curvy Too lazy to fix GGGG

01:28:002 (1,2) - Bend these a little? Done

01:29:502 (2,3,4) - Looks awkward I think its better

01:40:752 (1) - Position better (I think ) Done

01:40:940 (2,3) - Connection could be better Fixed

01:47:502 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hitsounds? xD they're back now

01:48:440 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward flow I guess. i think its fixed

01:59:502 (3,6) - Not at the same positions (/ﾟДﾟ)/ OCD better now

02:01:002 (3,6) - Same fixed


Short mod, but I hope it helps!

EDIT: Thanks for the star! *o*

m4m

[General]

1. You used normal hitsound. but In your folder, there are soft hitsound files. so you'll change hitsound normal to soft.
2. Your BG size is 1365x768. you need to fix BG Size to 1366x768.

[Insane]

1. 00:20:132 ~ 00:25:945 - recommend add drum whistle hitsound on every red time line.
2. 00:25:570 (6) - remove soft finish and add drum clap
3. 00:43:570 (6) - finish
4. 01:29:690 (4,7) - end 01:29:971
5. 01:32:033 (5,8,11) - same. check please

ALL FIXED BECAUSE I CAN'T DO HITSOUNDS orz

TaMul wrote:

m4m

[General]

1. You used normal hitsound. but In your folder, there are soft hitsound files. so you'll change hitsound normal to soft.
2. Your BG size is 1365x768. you need to fix BG Size to 1366x768.

[Insane]

1. 00:20:132 ~ 00:25:945 - recommend add drum whistle hitsound on every red time line.
2. 00:25:570 (6) - remove soft finish and add drum clap
3. 00:43:570 (6) - finish
4. 01:29:690 (4,7) - end 01:29:971
5. 01:32:033 (5,8,11) - same. check please

Thanks for the mod

From modding queue
[Normal]
00:32:320 (2) - Bring this up a little bit it too low
[Insane]
00:32:320 (2) - make this stream look better
00:52:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make this also look better
I think the map would look way better with proper aligned streams
Just suggestions over all very good map I can see this getting ranked

Thanks for the mod

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Normal]
00:32:320 (2) - Bring this up a little bit it too low fixed
[Insane]

osu

Like this

I can't see the image :< EDIT: I took a look at the stream jpg, and personally I map the streams so that it sort of changes direction every major beat. Thanks anyways
00:32:320 (2) - make this stream look better fixed
00:52:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make this also look better fixed
I think the map would look way better with proper aligned streams
Just suggestions over all very good map I can see this getting ranked one more mod closer to a rank thank you for your time!

Muzukashii
00:17:695 (48,49,50) - ddd
00:52:945 (121,122,123) - kkd
00:59:976 - d
01:19:658 - k
01:25:658 - ^
01:57:440 (163,164,165) - kkd

I dont modd onis

From my queue.
[General]
According to the ranking criteria, you need a Hard difficulty for this mapset in order to keep the difficulty spread. Right now the gap between Normal and Insane is HUGE. I wish you could name your Insane to Hard, so there's two difficulties for a song, just like in Cytus, but unfortunately it's not possible here Mapping an Easy would be great too, this song isn't too long and having all four difficulties would make this mapset enjoyable for everyone.

Also, is this the best mp3 available? I think you could find something with a better quality.

Nardoxyribonucleic: I saw a lot of Taiko Onis that were harder than your Inner Oni. Consider renaming this difficulty a little bit?

[Normal]
Hitsound the chorus up, you lack a lot of good sounds there.
­
00:01:945 (1) - Use a soft sampleset on this spinner, just like you did on Insane.
00:21:445 (1) - x:196 y:352 for perfect symmetry.
00:40:570 (1) - Use a normal sampleset on the finish?
00:46:945 (6) - New combo here.
00:49:945 (1) - This section is kinda quiet in comparison with the other parts of the map. Use a higher hitsound volume here.
00:52:195 (3,4) - I hate how you covered these two notes under the slider. You should avoid doing this, especially on easier difficulty like this. They might be hard to read for beginners. Solution: just grab them and move above (2).
01:13:945 (1) - Start it on the white tick.
01:16:940 (1) - It might be quite hard to read notes (especially stuff like 01:29:190 (3)­ ) due to the 0.8x distance snap that was used. If you want to use your sliders like that, I'd rather you used a 0.8x slider velocity here (add a green section covering the red timeline) and rearranged this part with a 1.0x distance snap so it's slighly easier to play.
02:03:815 (4,5) - This might be quite overkill for novice players to play.

[Insane]
00:13:382 (5,6,7) - Use a normal sampleset on all of these notes, gives some nice impact to this triplet like that.
00:14:132 (2) - Sampleset normal.
00:16:757 (5,6,7) - Same as before - use a normal sampleset. Apply this to 00:19:757 (4,5,6)­, 00:21:257 (4,5,6)­ and so on as well. There's a lot of triplets like this.
00:49:945 (1) - And again, kinda quiet stuff.
01:09:445 (1) - Sampleset normal.
01:19:190 (7) - This one's kinda too close to the middle in comparison with the other notes (distance snap 0.48x while the others have 0.60x~ish).


That's a nice Insane that you've got there, but you need to build the rest of the mapset around it. The current Normal is kinda harsh to play, you might want to nerf that one quite a bit.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Have a star, too. Good luck!

@edit: lol random HR play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1464145

Kurodragon wrote:

Muzukashii
00:17:695 (48,49,50) - ddd
00:52:945 (121,122,123) - kkd
00:59:976 - d
01:19:658 - k
01:25:658 - ^
01:57:440 (163,164,165) - kkd

I dont modd onis

Thank you for your mod!

rEdo wrote:

From my queue.
[General]
According to the ranking criteria, you need a Hard difficulty for this mapset in order to keep the difficulty spread. Right now the gap between Normal and Insane is HUGE. I wish you could name your Insane to Hard, so there's two difficulties for a song, just like in Cytus, but unfortunately it's not possible here Mapping an Easy would be great too, this song isn't too long and having all four difficulties would make this mapset enjoyable for everyone.

Also, is this the best mp3 available? I think you could find something with a better quality.

Nardoxyribonucleic: I saw a lot of Taiko Onis that were harder than your Inner Oni. Consider renaming this difficulty a little bit?

[Normal]
Hitsound the chorus up, you lack a lot of good sounds there. done lol i didnt even notice
­
00:01:945 (1) - Use a soft sampleset on this spinner, just like you did on Insane. fixed
00:21:445 (1) - x:196 y:352 for perfect symmetry. fixed
00:40:570 (1) - Use a normal sampleset on the finish? fixed
00:46:945 (6) - New combo here. fixed
00:49:945 (1) - This section is kinda quiet in comparison with the other parts of the map. Use a higher hitsound volume here. fixed
00:52:195 (3,4) - I hate how you covered these two notes under the slider. You should avoid doing this, especially on easier difficulty like this. They might be hard to read for beginners. Solution: just grab them and move above (2). fixed it but had to rearrange some things
01:13:945 (1) - Start it on the white tick.fixed lol
01:16:940 (1) - It might be quite hard to read notes (especially stuff like 01:29:190 (3)­ ) due to the 0.8x distance snap that was used. If you want to use your sliders like that, I'd rather you used a 0.8x slider velocity here (add a green section covering the red timeline) and rearranged this part with a 1.0x distance snap so it's slighly easier to play.fixed, but it might be harder now with a wack ds
02:03:815 (4,5) - This might be quite overkill for novice players to play.fixed xD

[Insane]
00:13:382 (5,6,7) - Use a normal sampleset on all of these notes, gives some nice impact to this triplet like that.let me think about this :/
00:14:132 (2) - Sampleset normal. it should be normal or at least auto, like the rest
00:16:757 (5,6,7) - Same as before - use a normal sampleset. Apply this to 00:19:757 (4,5,6)­, 00:21:257 (4,5,6)­ and so on as well. There's a lot of triplets like this.ill think about it :/
00:49:945 (1) - And again, kinda quiet stuff.i like the stream quiet, but i raised vol. a bit
01:09:445 (1) - Sampleset normal. its a soft finish, so should be fine
01:19:190 (7) - This one's kinda too close to the middle in comparison with the other notes (distance snap 0.48x while the others have 0.60x~ish).fixed


That's a nice Insane that you've got there, but you need to build the rest of the mapset around it. The current Normal is kinda harsh to play, you might want to nerf that one quite a bit.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Have a star, too. Good luck!

@edit: lol random HR play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1464145

Thanks for the mod and thanks for the star! *o*
I will add an easy normal and hopefully and extra diff. and I will make comments on what I fixed. But not yet; maybe after I finish school work zzzz

EDIT: All fixed with comments; an easy, hard, and maybe a even harder extra coming (in a year guaranteed xD)

Kurodragon wrote:

Muzukashii
00:17:695 (48,49,50) - ddd Fixed. It seems to conjugate the previous k k k pattern well.
00:52:945 (121,122,123) - kkd I prefer keeping d d k here, as the music is at the trough and starts to go up.
00:59:976 - d A bit odd to use ddk triplet here imo. I wanna keep it the same as 00:53:695 (124,125,126) -
01:19:658 - k fixed
01:25:658 - ^ fixed
01:57:440 (163,164,165) - kkd I think that the sound at 01:57:440 (165) - is not strong enough for a kat...

I dont modd onis

Thanks for the mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/7QIs0
@JeZag: As usual, no need to give kd for replies of mods :3

Hi there! I'm here for the timing check you requested.

Remove the second red timing point, its not needed.
Adjust: 160BPM, 1937 Offset

Huh Cytus had some good songs afterall, didn't like most of them. Anyways, good luck!

'd

Thanks for the star *o*

LoliFlan wrote:

Hi there! I'm here for the timing check you requested.

Remove the second red timing point, its not needed. My first offset was off, so I thought that the second half had a different offset xD Fixed
Adjust: 160BPM, 1937 Offset Fixed

Huh Cytus had some good songs afterall, didn't like most of them. Anyways, good luck!

'd

I think this song is pretty good too; I wouldn't map a bad song from cytus xD

from my modding queue

[Insane]

1. Here's my test play
   TestPlay

   
2. 00:25:937 (7) - Finish here?
3. 01:07:937 (3) - distance is different with 01:07:749 (1,2) - move to 160, 248
4. 01:13:843 (9,10) - ^ 9 to 120, 260 10 to 120, 284
5. 01:22:374 (4,5,6) - i think make distance like 01:22:749 (7,8,1) - will looks nice
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:53:499 (3) - 388, 340 is better because you used 0.7x on 01:53:968 (5,6) - so make distance same will be better and seems natural when playing
7. 02:04:562 (1) - hmm.. i think this needs NC because slider's speed goes different but maybe it's on your purpose

Nice Map! i like this as a players

GOOD LUCK !

Thanks for the mod ^_^

Neta wrote:

from my modding queue

[Insane]

1. Here's my test play
   TestPlay

   
2. 00:25:937 (7) - Finish here? fixed
3. 01:07:937 (3) - distance is different with 01:07:749 (1,2) - move to 160, 248 because i dont want to change 01:07:937 (3,4,5,6), i moved 01:07:749 (1,2) instead. fixed nonetheless
4. 01:13:843 (9,10) - ^ 9 to 120, 260 10 to 120, 284 fixed
5. 01:22:374 (4,5,6) - i think make distance like 01:22:749 (7,8,1) - will looks nice ] i wanted to make it so that 01:21:999 (1,2,3) are stacked, 01:22:374 (4,5,6) has small ds, and 01:22:749 (7,8,1) has largest ds if someone else mods this error to i will fix it
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:53:499 (3) - 388, 340 is better because you used 0.7x on 01:53:968 (5,6) - so make distance same will be better and seems natural when playing fixed oops my bad xD
7. 02:04:562 (1) - hmm.. i think this needs NC because slider's speed goes different but maybe it's on your purpose there is a slower slider velocity because if it was too high, it would be unplayable (I think) on HR... do I need NC for that?

Nice Map! i like this as a players

GOOD LUCK !

@JeZag: I've resnapped the 1/6 notes in Inner Oni, please update it again, thanks

http://puu.sh/8aWmt

Nice ^^

I THINK the last dif set will be perfect IF its a COLLAB and extra... ^^
half take part as NeLiME and the other creator as Presti...


sadly , this beatmap doesnt really suits for mania , so i cant do much about it hehe ^^

I'll think about it; but I'm really not sure how collab works ._.
Also, I'm afraid one half is more fun to mod then the other (for me, the first half was more fun to map, but the second was more fun to listen)
Thanks for the attention though

no no no ^^ its okay, and it doesnt really need any complicated stuff ,

its just... for collab, u should make priority of having equal role for mappers
and is the map is intend to be played multi player? or not...
if its multi player, then its a bit hard since u must set the combo correctly, each combo color will represent which player should go...

if not for multi player collab play, u can do like this...
divide the mapping from start to around 01:14:000 ,
then the rest 1 minutes is for the other mappers, since u guys are collab.... and this song is exactly create by 2 artist and divide the song part so clear.


and yes ^^ but u can still make it for fun only and skipped some hardcore notes.
on cytus, this song has LOTS of jack , in here i assume it will be a long stream of cluster tht makes it hard to play,



oh, additional information, here's JUST an EXAMPLE of....
multi player beatmap Dif : TAG4
jst look on the distance gap between each combo and their colour, its said, almost impossible to played alone, thts what i knw...


while for collab works, u can try look closely while test play this famous beatmap Dif : Collab
here's their collab info :
00:01:333 to 00:29:159 --- Krisom
00:29:159 to 00:56:985 --- Armin
00:56:985 to 01:24:811 --- Linkred2
01:24:811 to 01:52:637 --- Kecco
01:52:637 to 02:06:561 --- Break
02:06:561 to 02:34:387 --- -K
02:34:387 to 03:02:246 --- Blue Dragon
03:02:246 to 03:30:072 --- Tkiller

quite simple right? as they divide almost all part equally, ALMOST... around 30s / person
BUT please do correct me about collab if i was wrong ^^

for storyboard, its better and yes that u added the "Creator-Name.png" for each part, like it should be on bad apple beatmap...(dont worry its easy)
i can help u make those with photoshop thou, ^^

[Insane]
I think DS 0.9X might fit such low-BPM stream
00:52:937 (1) - Change the DS to catch the music could be better I find those stream and slider patterns a little bit dull
01:22:749 (7) - NC
01:29:499 (6,7,8) - make them in a flow looks much better
01:30:999 (12,13,14) - ^

Thanks for le random mod! ^_^

Reimoe wrote:

[Insane]
I think DS 0.9X might fit such low-BPM stream Redid the ENTIRE stream x.x can you retest it? (It is my first stream map after all )
00:52:937 (1) - Change the DS to catch the music could be better I find those stream and slider patterns a little bit dull done
01:22:749 (7) - NC done
01:29:499 (6,7,8) - make them in a flow looks much better done
01:30:999 (12,13,14) - ^ done

from my bg modding queue:

My mod changed a few things that will require some alteration on your end.

First for your audio:

the audio file you are currently using is taken from the youtube video I assume, since it sounds identical. The bass in the song is a bit muddy as a result of lossy compression, so I scoured the internet for a higher quality version. I found a version on soundcloud that is a good deal clearer (you may need good headphones to tell the difference, but it's definitely clearer). Unfortunately this will change the offset of your map a bit (approximately 2 ticks earlier now while in 1/4 beat snap mode, or offset = 1749 ms i suggest double checking that, though, it was just a quick estimate). Here is the new audio file (right click, save link as)


Now for the bg:

the bg was a bit fuzzy, so again I searched around for a higher quality version (what i found was lower res, but much sharper than the one you were using). The version you had was also a bit stretched upward, it turns out, as the image I found was clearer and showed more image vertically. I worked off of that image and made a clearer bg. I also made a new storyboard image for you to match the new bg. Here are those:
Sorry making so much extra work for you

Thanks for the mod! No need for an apologies; things like this need to be fixed if I want this to be ranked xD