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Houkago Tea Time - Tenshi ni Furetayo! (TV Size)
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Topic Starter
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If you're not going to tell them what you fixed and what you didn't fix, don't even quote them.
I like this song; reminds me to actually watch the anime, since I've only read the manga ;_;
General
- I believe TV Size usually refers to songs aprox. 1:30 in length; usually associated with openings or closings to animes. I would remove this from the title to avoid confusion.
Normal
00:40:672 (1) - Feels like this slider breaks the flow; maybe curve the slider?
01:14:775 (2,3) - ^ Feels awkward with the sudden turn right then straightening out.
02:03:749 (3,4) - If you were trying to make these parallel, they don't look exactly parallel move end point of 4 to x236,y324
02:16:826 (2,3) - Just another thing about the flow of the sliders. I would prefer these to be curved
Hard
00:27:339 (5) - This note feels over-mapped, since it's after an accented chord on the piano
00:38:621 (1,2) - I would start the combo on 2 instead of 1
01:04:262 (1,2,3) - This should be apart of the previous combo to match the piano line
01:15:544 (1) - I feel this should be reversed (Ctrl + G'd) and moved up to snap with the time.
01:15:287 (6) - Moved to where 01:15:544 (1) - is reversed to
01:17:339 (5,6,1) - Start the new combo at 5, instead of 1 to continue the vocal line
01:23:493 (6,7,1) - Start a new combo at 6, instead of 1 as it is the drum line intro into a new vocal line
01:33:749 (5,6,1) - Start the new combo at 5, instead of 1 to continue the vocal line
01:43:877 (7) - Too far to the right to match the flow of the notes,
01:51:441 (4) - Sounds kind of awkward. Two ticks too long in my opinion
02:15:544 (2) - Feels out of flow, and sounds awkward
02:24:262 (1) - Placed a bit too high, move to x256, y112 (Down one snap)
02:28:364 (3) - Placed too low and slightly breaks flow, move to x208 y104
02:43:621 (1) - Starts a tick too early; start it at the downbeat @ 02:43:749
02:45:544 (1) - Consequently, this spinner is a bit early too; start it at the downbeat @ 02:45:800, and end it at the next downbeat @ 02:47:852
General
- I believe TV Size usually refers to songs aprox. 1:30 in length; usually associated with openings or closings to animes. I would remove this from the title to avoid confusion.
Normal
00:40:672 (1) - Feels like this slider breaks the flow; maybe curve the slider?
01:14:775 (2,3) - ^ Feels awkward with the sudden turn right then straightening out.
02:03:749 (3,4) - If you were trying to make these parallel, they don't look exactly parallel move end point of 4 to x236,y324
02:16:826 (2,3) - Just another thing about the flow of the sliders. I would prefer these to be curved
Hard
00:27:339 (5) - This note feels over-mapped, since it's after an accented chord on the piano
00:38:621 (1,2) - I would start the combo on 2 instead of 1
01:04:262 (1,2,3) - This should be apart of the previous combo to match the piano line
01:15:544 (1) - I feel this should be reversed (Ctrl + G'd) and moved up to snap with the time.
01:15:287 (6) - Moved to where 01:15:544 (1) - is reversed to
01:17:339 (5,6,1) - Start the new combo at 5, instead of 1 to continue the vocal line
01:23:493 (6,7,1) - Start a new combo at 6, instead of 1 as it is the drum line intro into a new vocal line
01:33:749 (5,6,1) - Start the new combo at 5, instead of 1 to continue the vocal line
01:43:877 (7) - Too far to the right to match the flow of the notes,
01:51:441 (4) - Sounds kind of awkward. Two ticks too long in my opinion
02:15:544 (2) - Feels out of flow, and sounds awkward
02:24:262 (1) - Placed a bit too high, move to x256, y112 (Down one snap)
02:28:364 (3) - Placed too low and slightly breaks flow, move to x208 y104
02:43:621 (1) - Starts a tick too early; start it at the downbeat @ 02:43:749
02:45:544 (1) - Consequently, this spinner is a bit early too; start it at the downbeat @ 02:45:800, and end it at the next downbeat @ 02:47:852
Topic Starter
thanks for the modding <3
the end of the song is really really really weird Oo, i mean after the end of the map when the scores appear 
Topic Starter
its just an extra where azusa says "you're not that good"(sorry i suck at translating)Jethh wrote:
the end of the song is really really really weird Oo, i mean after the end of the map when the scores appear
you will understand when you watch the anime
from #modreqs
hard
00:22:210 (1,2) blanket these better. you'll have to do something about 00:22:980 (3) also since it's symmetrical though
00:23:749 (5) and 00:24:775 (2) should be equal distances between 00:24:005 (1) and 00:25:031 (3) -- just move the two circles to x272 y196 and it'll be fine
00:32:980 (2,3) blanket here too... then the symmetry with 00:32:210 (5) also :/
00:37:339 (2) make sure both ends are on the same line (since that seems to be the goal) 00:43:749 (3,4) just a personal issue here -- the flow seems to be kind of bad at this spot and i think it could be better by doing ctrl+G on 3 and 4. the same thing happens a few other times throughout the song and could be better
00:54:262 (4) seems out of place. the rest of the sliders in that combo have curves, while this one is the same shape but has sharp-ish angles
01:19:646 (1,4) some more flow-defying sliders. could be better with some flipping like this, although this still isn't all that great (curves on these could be visually better too) 01:37:082 (3,4,5) these notes are pretty inconsistent with the rest of the song (since 4 lands on a blue tick), so it should be mapped a bit differently to indicate that. right now it's easily confusable with the rest of the song. a 3/4 reverse slider or something that would give the same effect would be good
as for the rest of the difficulty, there's a lot of things that ruin the flow (mostly poorly directioned sliders). i won't list all of them, but there's a lot like the types at 00:43:749 and 01:19:646 throughout the entire map
normal
don't have too much to say about this one.
01:11:441 (3) at a really weird angle coming from where the slider before it was headed. i'm not really sure how you should make that better though :/
01:38:621 (4) seems awkward having this circle transition into a spinner when it's not in the exact center. i know you're following the distance spacing, but it looks really weird when that happens.
02:04:775 (1) and 02:06:826 (1) would flow a bit better if you had them flipped like this the two reverse sliders after this would probably need the same thing.
02:33:493 (1) could also use that flipping
hard
00:22:210 (1,2) blanket these better. you'll have to do something about 00:22:980 (3) also since it's symmetrical though
00:23:749 (5) and 00:24:775 (2) should be equal distances between 00:24:005 (1) and 00:25:031 (3) -- just move the two circles to x272 y196 and it'll be fine
00:32:980 (2,3) blanket here too... then the symmetry with 00:32:210 (5) also :/
00:37:339 (2) make sure both ends are on the same line (since that seems to be the goal) 00:43:749 (3,4) just a personal issue here -- the flow seems to be kind of bad at this spot and i think it could be better by doing ctrl+G on 3 and 4. the same thing happens a few other times throughout the song and could be better
00:54:262 (4) seems out of place. the rest of the sliders in that combo have curves, while this one is the same shape but has sharp-ish angles
01:19:646 (1,4) some more flow-defying sliders. could be better with some flipping like this, although this still isn't all that great (curves on these could be visually better too) 01:37:082 (3,4,5) these notes are pretty inconsistent with the rest of the song (since 4 lands on a blue tick), so it should be mapped a bit differently to indicate that. right now it's easily confusable with the rest of the song. a 3/4 reverse slider or something that would give the same effect would be good
as for the rest of the difficulty, there's a lot of things that ruin the flow (mostly poorly directioned sliders). i won't list all of them, but there's a lot like the types at 00:43:749 and 01:19:646 throughout the entire map
normal
don't have too much to say about this one.
01:11:441 (3) at a really weird angle coming from where the slider before it was headed. i'm not really sure how you should make that better though :/
01:38:621 (4) seems awkward having this circle transition into a spinner when it's not in the exact center. i know you're following the distance spacing, but it looks really weird when that happens.
02:04:775 (1) and 02:06:826 (1) would flow a bit better if you had them flipped like this the two reverse sliders after this would probably need the same thing.
02:33:493 (1) could also use that flipping
Topic Starter
@pishifat
sorry no change :/
though i did take a look at my map again and fixed some other things
i will give you a kudosu to appreciate your effort
sorry no change :/
though i did take a look at my map again and fixed some other things
i will give you a kudosu to appreciate your effort
Best attitude #2014Yes Dap wrote:
@pishifat
sorry no change :/
though i did take a look at my map again and fixed some other things
i will give you a kudosu to appreciate your effort
[Normal]
00:12:339 - Only my preference but it would look better to continue the curve possibly like this http://puu.sh/7kHZe.jpg
00:32:210 (4) - Possibly have this note pointed to the next combo http://puu.sh/7kI5S.jpg
00:37:852 (2,3) - The notes are pointed in a weird turn try moving it down a little bit to match it straight to a line and make sure to DS the next combo http://puu.sh/7kIbB.jpg
01:14:518 - Note seems uneven in lining so try moving the 2 down a little bit
01:20:672 - Try arching this note a little bit higher instead of having to point to a flat direction http://puu.sh/7kIxN.jpg
01:24:775 (1,2,3) - This combo seems eerie because it's a normal beatmap but when the slider points upwards I would assume the notes would be going in that direction too, but instead it cuts down diagonally and throws off the geometry
01:27:339 (2) - Arc that note a little in more to point at the next combo
01:33:493 (4) - Seems out of place of the straight diagonal pattern try changing that somehow. My way is to change it to something like this http://puu.sh/7kIJo.jpg
02:01:441 (2) - Have that note back a little further to really bring out that easier path of curve on the slider http://puu.sh/7kIPP.jpg
02:02:467 (4) - Do the same thing with that note as the last one
02:32:723 (2) - Move that note perfectly on top of 02:31:185(2) if you were going like that because it was a little off like this http://puu.sh/7kJ0L.jpg pay attention to the green and blue note
02:33:493 (1) - Have this note arc down like this to make it flow better http://puu.sh/7kJ3O.png
02:36:569 - Note end to me was pointing a little bit off so I fixed it to this http://puu.sh/7kJ5Z.jpg
Other than that it was good
[Hard]
00:10:416 (2) - Move that note a little to the left to get it to perfectly line up
01:07:852 (1,2,3) - I don't think DS would be necessary hear to be effective to look like this http://puu.sh/7kJhy.jpg
01:34:262 - Wasn't symmetrical enough so I moved the slider down a little bit http://puu.sh/7kJmn.jpg
01:35:672 - Moved the next set of notes to around here to make it look better http://puu.sh/7kJot.jpg but make sure if you do, do that fix the spacing that occurred
01:39:390 (2,3,4) - Possibly move that little stream to around here without having to curve around that note to hit the slider http://puu.sh/7kJwo.jpg
01:52:852 - There wasn't enough space for slider(3) so it made it look a little sloppy try it like this http://puu.sh/7kJy7.jpg
01:55:416 - Move the slider(2) down a bit and make it look like that to match up with the last combo http://puu.sh/7kJBT.jpg
02:01:698 (3) - Wasn't placed perfectly just move it a little bit to the left
02:14:518 (4) - Possibly arc that slider end to point directly in the center of the next note to make it look neat http://puu.sh/7kJHc.jpg
02:38:621 (3) - Move that slider down a bit to match with the previous one
Other than that it was really good and I am sorry about the last mod I did was complete trash I understand now
Topic Starter
thank you for modding!
Short irc mod as requested as a straight up re-check!
Don't KD this if you don't want to as this was strictly an on the spot favour and it took 2 mins of my time.
2014-03-11 05:06 Raiku: do you want a re check
2014-03-11 05:06 Yes Dap: yes
2014-03-11 05:06 Raiku: re check incoming
2014-03-11 05:07 Yes Dap: you said you liked the flow
2014-03-11 05:07 Raiku: ah yes
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: irc mod right now
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: 00:09:903 (1,2) - mirror these 2 sliders for symmetry so use the same slider as a template for the opposite one
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: 00:12:980 (3) - stack the head of this slider on note 4 of the previous combo
2014-03-11 05:09 Raiku: 00:21:954 (6,2) - too obvious of an overlap, space them out
2014-03-11 05:09 Raiku: 00:27:339 (5,6,1) - space these 3 out so there is a slight gap
2014-03-11 05:11 Raiku: 01:02:980 (1) - this is too far up and invades the space of the hp bar
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: 02:16:826 (4,5,6) - these two need to be centred
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: they are inequal, go with something similar to this i feel (http://puu.sh/7r3eW.jpg).
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: continuity with the symmetry u got going in the map
2014-03-11 05:14 Raiku: and im done
Don't KD this if you don't want to as this was strictly an on the spot favour and it took 2 mins of my time.
2014-03-11 05:06 Raiku: do you want a re check
2014-03-11 05:06 Yes Dap: yes
2014-03-11 05:06 Raiku: re check incoming
2014-03-11 05:07 Yes Dap: you said you liked the flow
2014-03-11 05:07 Raiku: ah yes
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: irc mod right now
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: 00:09:903 (1,2) - mirror these 2 sliders for symmetry so use the same slider as a template for the opposite one
2014-03-11 05:08 Raiku: 00:12:980 (3) - stack the head of this slider on note 4 of the previous combo
2014-03-11 05:09 Raiku: 00:21:954 (6,2) - too obvious of an overlap, space them out
2014-03-11 05:09 Raiku: 00:27:339 (5,6,1) - space these 3 out so there is a slight gap
2014-03-11 05:11 Raiku: 01:02:980 (1) - this is too far up and invades the space of the hp bar
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: 02:16:826 (4,5,6) - these two need to be centred
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: they are inequal, go with something similar to this i feel (http://puu.sh/7r3eW.jpg).
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: continuity with the symmetry u got going in the map
2014-03-11 05:14 Raiku: and im done
Topic Starter
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: 02:16:826 (4,5,6) - these two need to be centred
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: they are inequal, go with something similar to this i feel (http://puu.sh/7r3eW.jpg).
might as well fix those later because i'm out of time for today
done
2014-03-11 05:13 Raiku: they are inequal, go with something similar to this i feel (http://puu.sh/7r3eW.jpg).
might as well fix those later because i'm out of time for today
done
잠 안와서 모딩이나 해드릴까 했는데 쓸게 너무 많아서 내일 irc모딩해드릴게요. 고칠거 엄청 많아보이네요. 힛사도 빼먹으신거 많고
#modreq
[General]
1.You should be set the combo color. Can not be recommended default color.
2.TitleUnicode are not consistent: http://puu.sh/7tx2S.jpg
3.Although this is no necessary ,perhaps your "special thanks" can write modder's name? Imo.
4.Check the title name (TV Size), it is true. Not TV "s"ize.
5.Please uncheck Letterbox during breaks and Widescreen support.
[Normal] I feel have some strong beat can add finish.
00:34:518 (1) - The rhyrhm is the same 00:24:262 (1,2) ,change it?
00:36:569 (1) - ^
01:51:954 (2) - Slider end add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
01:56:569 (1) - ^ add head
02:00:672 (1) - ^
02:10:928 (3) - ^
02:16:826 (3) - ^
02:19:134 (3) - NC,and add finish at head.
02:35:544 (1) - Slider end add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
02:41:698 (1,2) - Change finish.
02:42:467 (3) - End add finish.
[Hard]
00:14:005 (1) - Slider head add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
00:15:800 (1) - ^
00:27:339 (5) - Feel this finish is no necessary,no strong beat at here,feel a bit noisy.
00:34:518 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
00:35:287 (2) - Whistle?
00:39:390 (2) - ^
00:42:723 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
00:50:928 (1) - ^
01:01:185 (2) - ^
01:19:646 (1) - ^
01:36:057 (1) - ^
01:51:441 (4) - Change some notes ?
02:12:723 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
02:39:390 (1) - Feel this finish is no necessary in slider end,no strong beat at here,feel a bit noisy.
02:41:698 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
02:42:467 (2) - End add finish.
Good Luck~!
[General]
1.You should be set the combo color. Can not be recommended default color.
2.TitleUnicode are not consistent: http://puu.sh/7tx2S.jpg
3.Although this is no necessary ,perhaps your "special thanks" can write modder's name? Imo.
4.Check the title name (TV Size), it is true. Not TV "s"ize.
5.Please uncheck Letterbox during breaks and Widescreen support.
[Normal] I feel have some strong beat can add finish.
00:34:518 (1) - The rhyrhm is the same 00:24:262 (1,2) ,change it?
00:36:569 (1) - ^
01:51:954 (2) - Slider end add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
01:56:569 (1) - ^ add head
02:00:672 (1) - ^
02:10:928 (3) - ^
02:16:826 (3) - ^
02:19:134 (3) - NC,and add finish at head.
02:35:544 (1) - Slider end add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
02:41:698 (1,2) - Change finish.
02:42:467 (3) - End add finish.
[Hard]
00:14:005 (1) - Slider head add finish? Have a strong beat at this here.
00:15:800 (1) - ^
00:27:339 (5) - Feel this finish is no necessary,no strong beat at here,feel a bit noisy.
00:34:518 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
00:35:287 (2) - Whistle?
00:39:390 (2) - ^
00:42:723 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
00:50:928 (1) - ^
01:01:185 (2) - ^
01:19:646 (1) - ^
01:36:057 (1) - ^
01:51:441 (4) - Change some notes ?
02:12:723 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
02:39:390 (1) - Feel this finish is no necessary in slider end,no strong beat at here,feel a bit noisy.
02:41:698 (1) - The same reason with 00:14:005.
02:42:467 (2) - End add finish.
Good Luck~!
Topic Starter
thank you for modding!
* 모딩이 필요하시다면 인게임으로 칼찌르듯이 찔러주33333
헉Gloria Guard wrote:
* 모딩이 필요하시다면 인게임으로 칼찌르듯이 찔러주33333
Hello In-game mod request.
[General]
곡 폴더에 사용되지 않는 bg가 있네요 old bg라는 이미지 파일은 곡을 살펴봐도 사용된 부분이 하나도 보이질않습니다.
사용되지 않는 이미지는 삭제해주세요 그리고 이미지 크기는 1366x768 or 1024x768 로 크기를 맞춰주시는게 좋습니다.
Widescreen Support 체크해주세요
곡 폴더에 사용되지 않는 bg가 있네요 old bg라는 이미지 파일은 곡을 살펴봐도 사용된 부분이 하나도 보이질않습니다.
사용되지 않는 이미지는 삭제해주세요 그리고 이미지 크기는 1366x768 or 1024x768 로 크기를 맞춰주시는게 좋습니다.
Widescreen Support 체크해주세요
[Normal]
00:12:980 (2,3,4,5) 이 리듬 부분은 기타소리에 맞게 바꿔보시는것은 어떨까요?
00:25:800 (3,1) 굳이 이렇게 스택패턴을 하셨어야 했는지 조금 의문이 드네요 3번 노트에서 1번
슬라이더로 넘어갈 때 약간의 시간 텀이있는데 그 부분을 저렇게 스택해버리면 초보자들이 헷갈려 할 수 있습니다
리듬이 따딱! 인지 따--딱인지 경험이 부족한 초보자를 생각해본다면 조금 어려운 게 아닌가 싶습니다.
00:38:364 (3,1) ^
01:10:416 (1,2) 이 리듬은 왜 앞에 01:08:364 (1,2) 처럼 일관성 있는 리듬으로 만들지 않으신건지..
피아노소리도 똑같은 박자 부분인데 여기만 다르게 하시는건 조금 이해가 안되네요.. 노트사이간의 간격이 넓은 것도 아닌데다가
박자를 잘못 인식해서 초보자들이 헷갈릴 수도 있습니다.
01:26:569 (1,2) 이 박자는 피아노를 따라간 것인지 보컬을 따라간 것인지 미세하게 들리는 드럼을 따라가신 것인지
알 수 없는 것같네요 게다가 01:26:569 (2) 이 슬라이더 사이사이에 존재하는 박자를 무시하는건 조금 어색하지 않나 싶네요.
박자를 이렇게 바꿔보시는것은 어떠신지?
01:27:852 (1) hp 바가 닿네요 슬라이더를 약간 내려주세요
01:29:390 (4,1) 겹치지 말아주세요 항상 말하는 것이지만 난이도가 낮고 AR OD가 낮은 이상 스택된 박자는 경험이 부족한 유저에겐
헷갈릴 수 있는 부분입니다.
01:32:467 (1,2,3,4) 이 박자는 어떤 소리를 따라서 만드셨는지 약간 읽기 헷갈리네요. 정확한 리듬이 들리는데
굳이 이렇게 변형해서 만드시는것은 비추합니다. 리듬을 이렇게 바꿔주세요.
01:41:698 (1) 이 스피너 끝부분을 01:41:954 여기까지 늘리시는게 더 좋은 것 같네요 피니쉬 소리도 딱 알맞고
굳이 드럼소리에 맞춰 박자 공백을 많이 두는것보단 노말이지만 조금 이해할 수 있는 박자를 선호 하시는게 좋습니다.
01:43:493 ~ 01:50:159 너무 1/2 리핏 슬라만으로 파트를 때우신게 아닌가 싶을 정도로 매우 박자 흐름이 딱딱하고 단조로운 것 같은데
아무리 노말이라지만 이것은 너무 성의가 없다고 생각이 드네요 저렇게 1/2 리핏을 만드시지 않으셔도 저 파트속에 존재하는 많은 소리들이 있는데 굳이 이렇게 하시는건 좋지 않다고 생각합니다. 좀더 부드러운 리듬과 슬라이더 패턴을 만드셔서 지루하지 않도록 리매핑 하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다
01:58:621 (1,2) 1번 슬라이더 끝과 2번 슬라이더 리핏부분에서 살짝 슬라이더 끼리 겹쳐있는지 2번 슬라이더 끝을 살짝 내려주시는게
더 깔끔할것 같네요
01:59:390 (2,3,1) Unrankable, 2번 슬라이더로 인해서 뒤에 1번 초록슬라이더 머릿부분과 몸통부분을 가려버려서 초보자들이
읽을 수 없습니다. 이 패턴 부분은 다시 재배치를 하시는걸 추천드립니다.
02:51:401 이 타이밍 라인 언스냅이네요 원래 있어야할 곳은 02:51:441 이 부분인데 재설정 해주세요.
P.S 스택된 노트들은 다시 재배치해주시고, 몇군데 파트부분도 모딩을 더받으셔서 박자를 개선하셔야 할 것 같습니다.
00:12:980 (2,3,4,5) 이 리듬 부분은 기타소리에 맞게 바꿔보시는것은 어떨까요?
00:25:800 (3,1) 굳이 이렇게 스택패턴을 하셨어야 했는지 조금 의문이 드네요 3번 노트에서 1번
슬라이더로 넘어갈 때 약간의 시간 텀이있는데 그 부분을 저렇게 스택해버리면 초보자들이 헷갈려 할 수 있습니다
리듬이 따딱! 인지 따--딱인지 경험이 부족한 초보자를 생각해본다면 조금 어려운 게 아닌가 싶습니다.
00:38:364 (3,1) ^
01:10:416 (1,2) 이 리듬은 왜 앞에 01:08:364 (1,2) 처럼 일관성 있는 리듬으로 만들지 않으신건지..
피아노소리도 똑같은 박자 부분인데 여기만 다르게 하시는건 조금 이해가 안되네요.. 노트사이간의 간격이 넓은 것도 아닌데다가
박자를 잘못 인식해서 초보자들이 헷갈릴 수도 있습니다.
01:26:569 (1,2) 이 박자는 피아노를 따라간 것인지 보컬을 따라간 것인지 미세하게 들리는 드럼을 따라가신 것인지
알 수 없는 것같네요 게다가 01:26:569 (2) 이 슬라이더 사이사이에 존재하는 박자를 무시하는건 조금 어색하지 않나 싶네요.
박자를 이렇게 바꿔보시는것은 어떠신지?
01:27:852 (1) hp 바가 닿네요 슬라이더를 약간 내려주세요
01:29:390 (4,1) 겹치지 말아주세요 항상 말하는 것이지만 난이도가 낮고 AR OD가 낮은 이상 스택된 박자는 경험이 부족한 유저에겐
헷갈릴 수 있는 부분입니다.
01:32:467 (1,2,3,4) 이 박자는 어떤 소리를 따라서 만드셨는지 약간 읽기 헷갈리네요. 정확한 리듬이 들리는데
굳이 이렇게 변형해서 만드시는것은 비추합니다. 리듬을 이렇게 바꿔주세요.
01:41:698 (1) 이 스피너 끝부분을 01:41:954 여기까지 늘리시는게 더 좋은 것 같네요 피니쉬 소리도 딱 알맞고
굳이 드럼소리에 맞춰 박자 공백을 많이 두는것보단 노말이지만 조금 이해할 수 있는 박자를 선호 하시는게 좋습니다.
01:43:493 ~ 01:50:159 너무 1/2 리핏 슬라만으로 파트를 때우신게 아닌가 싶을 정도로 매우 박자 흐름이 딱딱하고 단조로운 것 같은데
아무리 노말이라지만 이것은 너무 성의가 없다고 생각이 드네요 저렇게 1/2 리핏을 만드시지 않으셔도 저 파트속에 존재하는 많은 소리들이 있는데 굳이 이렇게 하시는건 좋지 않다고 생각합니다. 좀더 부드러운 리듬과 슬라이더 패턴을 만드셔서 지루하지 않도록 리매핑 하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다
01:58:621 (1,2) 1번 슬라이더 끝과 2번 슬라이더 리핏부분에서 살짝 슬라이더 끼리 겹쳐있는지 2번 슬라이더 끝을 살짝 내려주시는게
더 깔끔할것 같네요
01:59:390 (2,3,1) Unrankable, 2번 슬라이더로 인해서 뒤에 1번 초록슬라이더 머릿부분과 몸통부분을 가려버려서 초보자들이
읽을 수 없습니다. 이 패턴 부분은 다시 재배치를 하시는걸 추천드립니다.
02:51:401 이 타이밍 라인 언스냅이네요 원래 있어야할 곳은 02:51:441 이 부분인데 재설정 해주세요.
P.S 스택된 노트들은 다시 재배치해주시고, 몇군데 파트부분도 모딩을 더받으셔서 박자를 개선하셔야 할 것 같습니다.
[Hard]
00:14:518 (1,2,3) 박자가 조금 이상하네요.. 00:14:775 이구간에서 기타가 길게 끄는 부분이 있는데 그부분을 1/2로 슬라이더 리듬을 만드시는것은..
박자 읽는게 조금 헷갈릴 것 같네요.. 이렇게 바꿔주시는게 박자 읽기에 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:27:339 (5,6) 6번 슬라이더 화살표 부분에 (4)번 노트가 약간 겹치는데요 그닥 보기 좋다고 할 수 없네요..
00:33:749 (4,5) 여기서 왜 디스턴스가 늘어났는지 의문이네요.. 너무 갑작스럽게 늘어났달까.. 디스턴스는 일정하게 맞춰주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:47:595 (2,3,4) 2번과 4번사이에 노트 양쪽 간격 밸런스가 똑같지 않네요.. 디스턴스 제대로 맞춰주세요
P.S 거의 패턴들이 대칭이라 잡을게 그렇게 없구요 동선 흐름 개선좀 하셔야 할 것 같아요.
00:14:518 (1,2,3) 박자가 조금 이상하네요.. 00:14:775 이구간에서 기타가 길게 끄는 부분이 있는데 그부분을 1/2로 슬라이더 리듬을 만드시는것은..
박자 읽는게 조금 헷갈릴 것 같네요.. 이렇게 바꿔주시는게 박자 읽기에 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:27:339 (5,6) 6번 슬라이더 화살표 부분에 (4)번 노트가 약간 겹치는데요 그닥 보기 좋다고 할 수 없네요..
00:33:749 (4,5) 여기서 왜 디스턴스가 늘어났는지 의문이네요.. 너무 갑작스럽게 늘어났달까.. 디스턴스는 일정하게 맞춰주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:47:595 (2,3,4) 2번과 4번사이에 노트 양쪽 간격 밸런스가 똑같지 않네요.. 디스턴스 제대로 맞춰주세요
P.S 거의 패턴들이 대칭이라 잡을게 그렇게 없구요 동선 흐름 개선좀 하셔야 할 것 같아요.
심심해서 모딩 해드립니다 ㅋㅋ
[Hard]
00:09:903 (1,2) - 이런식으로 배치 하지말고 좀더 자연스럽게 배치해보세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7CkyV.jpg
00:10:928 (3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 딱딱해요 좀더 부드럽게! http://puu.sh/7CkAN.jpg
00:12:467 (2) - 좀더 아래로 꺾어야 할꺼같아요 한 30도정도?
00:17:595 (3) - 2 에다가 겹쳐도 나쁘진 않네요.. 반대편에 놓으면 그 다음 노트랑 거리가 너무 가깝다보니까 개인적으로 안좋게 보이네요
00:18:108 (1) - 리피터 없애시고 1/1박 슬라이더로 만드세요
00:25:031 (3) - 1 이랑 겹치게 만들지 마세요 노트들 겹치면 이상해보여요
00:29:390 (3,4,5) - 이런 패턴은 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/7CkJE.jpg 삼각형 패턴이 저한텐 이쁘게 안보이네요
00:37:339 (2) - blanket!
00:39:390 (2,3,4,5) - 구식 패턴...
00:43:749 (3) - 컨트롤 + G! 무빙하기 힘들어요 이런 식이면 그리고 어색하구요
00:56:057 (3,4) - 슬라이더 왜 마지막에 조금 꺾으셨나요?... 제거하세요
00:59:005 - 노트 추가
01:02:980 (1) - 아래로 내리세요 HP바에 닿네요
01:05:800 (2,5) - 한칸씩 양 옆으로 더 벌리세요
01:07:339 (1,3) - 이것도 마찬가지
01:10:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - 너무 어려운 패턴이에요
01:11:441 (1,3) - 더 동그랗게 만드시고 그 사이에 01:13:236 (4) - 를 놓으세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7CkVe.jpg
01:26:826 (3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 이상해요 겹치게 만들지 마세요 노트가 겹쳐보이면 맵 퀄리티가 떨어져 보이니까
01:29:134 (4,5) - 마찬가지
01:31:441 (5,6,7,1) - 이런 패턴 사용하지 마세요.. 재미도 없고 이상해보이고 퀄리티만 떨어지고 ㅠㅠ
01:34:005 (3,4,5) - 이것도 다른 패턴 사용하시면 좋을꺼같은데...
01:43:749 (6,7,8) - 꺽지마시고 부드럽게 만드세요 너무 어색하잖아요
01:44:262 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:53:493 (3) - 너무 꺾으셨어요 그리고 양 옆 슬라이더랑 너무 가까워요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7Cl2d.jpg
01:54:775 (1) - 이것도 마찬가지
02:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 이부분도 문제가 있는데 말로 표현하기가 너무 힘드네요... 이건 보류
02:37:595 (1,3) - 순서 바꾸시고 반대방향으로 꺾으세요 http://puu.sh/7Cl7s.jpg 이런식으로
02:40:159 (2) - 이 노트를 02:38:236 (1) - 이거 시작지점에 겹치게 만드세요
노멀은 모딩 안할께요...
한마디만 하자면
다시 만들면 좋겠네요...
개인적으로 하드도 다시 만들면 좋겠네요.. 맵 디자인을 너무 신경안쓰시고 대충 만드신거같아요.. 대칭만 너무 사용해가시면서
도움 필요하시면 게임에서 저 부르시구요 자세하게 알려드릴테니까
[Hard]
00:09:903 (1,2) - 이런식으로 배치 하지말고 좀더 자연스럽게 배치해보세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7CkyV.jpg
00:10:928 (3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 딱딱해요 좀더 부드럽게! http://puu.sh/7CkAN.jpg
00:12:467 (2) - 좀더 아래로 꺾어야 할꺼같아요 한 30도정도?
00:17:595 (3) - 2 에다가 겹쳐도 나쁘진 않네요.. 반대편에 놓으면 그 다음 노트랑 거리가 너무 가깝다보니까 개인적으로 안좋게 보이네요
00:18:108 (1) - 리피터 없애시고 1/1박 슬라이더로 만드세요
00:25:031 (3) - 1 이랑 겹치게 만들지 마세요 노트들 겹치면 이상해보여요
00:29:390 (3,4,5) - 이런 패턴은 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/7CkJE.jpg 삼각형 패턴이 저한텐 이쁘게 안보이네요
00:37:339 (2) - blanket!
00:39:390 (2,3,4,5) - 구식 패턴...
00:43:749 (3) - 컨트롤 + G! 무빙하기 힘들어요 이런 식이면 그리고 어색하구요
00:56:057 (3,4) - 슬라이더 왜 마지막에 조금 꺾으셨나요?... 제거하세요
00:59:005 - 노트 추가
01:02:980 (1) - 아래로 내리세요 HP바에 닿네요
01:05:800 (2,5) - 한칸씩 양 옆으로 더 벌리세요
01:07:339 (1,3) - 이것도 마찬가지
01:10:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - 너무 어려운 패턴이에요
01:11:441 (1,3) - 더 동그랗게 만드시고 그 사이에 01:13:236 (4) - 를 놓으세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7CkVe.jpg
01:26:826 (3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 이상해요 겹치게 만들지 마세요 노트가 겹쳐보이면 맵 퀄리티가 떨어져 보이니까
01:29:134 (4,5) - 마찬가지
01:31:441 (5,6,7,1) - 이런 패턴 사용하지 마세요.. 재미도 없고 이상해보이고 퀄리티만 떨어지고 ㅠㅠ
01:34:005 (3,4,5) - 이것도 다른 패턴 사용하시면 좋을꺼같은데...
01:43:749 (6,7,8) - 꺽지마시고 부드럽게 만드세요 너무 어색하잖아요
01:44:262 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:53:493 (3) - 너무 꺾으셨어요 그리고 양 옆 슬라이더랑 너무 가까워요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/7Cl2d.jpg
01:54:775 (1) - 이것도 마찬가지
02:00:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 이부분도 문제가 있는데 말로 표현하기가 너무 힘드네요... 이건 보류
02:37:595 (1,3) - 순서 바꾸시고 반대방향으로 꺾으세요 http://puu.sh/7Cl7s.jpg 이런식으로
02:40:159 (2) - 이 노트를 02:38:236 (1) - 이거 시작지점에 겹치게 만드세요
노멀은 모딩 안할께요...
한마디만 하자면
다시 만들면 좋겠네요...
개인적으로 하드도 다시 만들면 좋겠네요.. 맵 디자인을 너무 신경안쓰시고 대충 만드신거같아요.. 대칭만 너무 사용해가시면서
도움 필요하시면 게임에서 저 부르시구요 자세하게 알려드릴테니까
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