This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7 апреля 2014 г. at 20:51:18

Artist: Pico
Title: Koi o Shiyou yo (TV Size)
Tags: anime ending ed hentai yaoi aka
BPM: 90
Filesize: 1869kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

1. Aka's Easy (1,8 stars, 83 notes)
2. Hard (4,8 stars, 267 notes)
3. Normal (4,14 stars, 143 notes)

Download: Pico - Koi o Shiyou yo (TV Size)
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Happiness!

Boku no hentai Kyubey

boku no happiness ♥

Порнушник о/
Особо придираться не буду, пробегусь просто

Генерал
Проверь таги везде, аимод ругается
И на счет соуса, думаю разумнее бы было поставить название в ромадзи с сурс, а кандзи в таги, да (вроденичегонеперепутала)

Aka's Easy
00:01:394 (1) - не надо нк, может так музыка выделилась, но нет, лучше без него
00:10:394 (4) - можно софтвистл на начало, например
00:33:151 (2) - конец слайдера очень по ушам бьет, можно его засофтить и вистл накинуть сверху
00:44:970 (3,4) - где финиши :о
01:14:982 (2) - сейм с хвостом слайдера
01:15:740 (3) - в изи то? еще и не снаплено? не надо так. лучше с белого тика начать под музыку и норм
01:18:618 (2,3) - ага
01:22:255 (2,3) - парампампам

Нормаль
00:38:151 - можно парой кругов заполнить это пространство, а то как-то грустно
01:26:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - нунезнаю, многовато слишком для нормала, тут или пробелы в виде 1/1 слайдеров, либо я не знат
01:30:437 - может серкл сюда, а потом спиннер сразу? не?

Хард
00:05:172 (5) - вот это ставь сюда 00:05:061- (1/4)
00:10:505 (3) - и вот это, соответственно, 00:10:394- сюда, иначе будут бить 100ки, тебе ставить однерки, и тогда ты сопьешься у карты будет плохой рейтинг
00:14:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - разбавил бы вистлами
01:06:800 (1) - высоковато расположено, придираться будут

Ктрлджишинесс!

Ктрджи за мод!
Упдатед.

hmm

[Тяжелые Геи]
Из-за того что у тебя нет пустого звука слидерслиде твои слайдеры звучат слишком мужественно, я рекомендую поставить этот пустой звук, на тела твоих слайдеров чтобы эта карта звучала еще более гейски!
00:08:728 (1) - на головку этого длинного и твердого слайдера так и просится мягенький финиш
00:14:515 (4,8,1) - эти слайдеры выглядят так грубо и неотесанно... фе. А еще мне кажется что их можно заменить на те няшные кругляшки!
00:17:242 (7,1,2) - эти слайдеры выглядят как пьяные и бородатые мужланы, поправь их пожалуйста, сделай одеяло и курве лучше.
00:21:333 (2,3) - вид этих слайдеров затрагивает меня до глубины души и мне хочется плакаться своему мишке
00:33:606 (2) - плак-плак
00:36:333 (2,3) - сделай их симметрично, а то так как-то грубо
На самом деле кроме длинных и твердых слайдеров тут особо и нечего моддить, просто будь аккуратнее и нежнее с ними!
Шесть геев из десяти тебе!

Спасибо, сладкий, все пофиксил. ♂
Redownload if you downloaded it before 05/03/2014

EvilElvis wrote:

гейский мод

даже сохраню на память ♥

Hi hi hi ~

[General]

1. add at least 1000 AudioLeadIn manually, diffs are starting really fast D:

[Hard]

1. 00:00:728 you should consider adding finish here, since the music have a little crash there
2. 00:06:061 (1) - similar as above, add finish and low the volume sound pretty nice.
3. 00:08:728 (1,2) - you should add more distance between them, due to the big gap in timeline
4. 00:12:061 - 5% volume fit better here, since there is no sound from the music at this point
5. 00:14:061 missing finish in the head, due to cymbal in the music
6. 00:15:424 (4,4) - really nazy but probably you can avoid the overlap? just move 00:16:333 (4) - 1 grid down
7. 00:16:485 maybe reduce the volume? and raise it up again in 00:17:091 (1) - this cause a similar effect with the music
8. 00:19:515 (2,3) - nazi, stack this properly
9. 00:22:545 (5) - two circles fit better the music, since this is not like 00:20:727 (5) - when you follow the vocals nicely, this one is similar to 00:18:909 (4,5) -
10. 00:25:727 (3) - same as above
11. 00:37:697 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - you don't need to combo spam here, this part is readable without them, when you spam combos, you mess up the overall HP Drain of the whole diff, is better to keep them consistent
12. 00:40:424 (2,3) - this doesn't sound good imo, since 00:40:727 (3) - is starting with a really weak beat, maybe try this instead (like you did in 00:47:697 (3,4) - ):
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:57:697 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - same as 00:37:697
14. 00:59:364 (1,2) - swap NC? fit better the music
15. 01:02:103 (3,4) - CTRL G? for better flow
16. 01:09:528 (4,1) - you need to add more distance here, actually is too close and can cause early clicks
17. 01:17:255 (4) - maybe, make this slider curved and do a blanket with 01:17:103 (3) - like:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 01:29:982 (8) - ah, I don't like this slider, since the beat at 01:30:437 (1) - require a clickable action due to the highest pitch in the music, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. 00:00:728 you should add a circle with finish here, since also the easy diff is starting here
2. 00:04:061 (3) - I really don't agree with this rhythm, since there is not sound at 00:05:394 but yes in 00:05:061 -, what about to try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:06:061 add a circle and maybe follow the suggestion on hard diff here too.
4. 00:12:061 same as hard
5. 00:15:727 (3) - remove this beat? probably too hard for a normal diff, also if you map this one you should map the one at 00:15:576 due to the same emphasis in the music, probably the best option is remove that circle.
6. 00:29:970 (5) - ending sliders in strong beats doesn't represent the song, try this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:31:182 (2,3) - use a slider instead? is more new player friendly, also is consistent with the one at 00:23:454 (4) -
8. 00:53:000 (2,3) - same as above
9. 00:57:545 (1,2) - I'm feeling this too hard for a normal, try a kick slider instead?
10. 01:19:982 (3,6) - try to avoid the overlap? doesn't look nic, and I'm being really nazi lol
11. 01:24:376 (4,5) - use a slider instead similar reason to the others.
12. 01:26:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - probably you can try a simple rhythm here? this is too much for a normal IMO

[Aka's Easy]

1. AR3 fit this diff better
2. 00:00:728 (1) - add finish it fit a lot with the music.
3. 00:30:424 (3) - make this slider curved for better flow with 00:31:333 (4) -
4. 00:33:909 (1) - make more sense starting the spinner in 00:34:061 -, according to the music
5. 00:55:879 (2,1) - try to avoid the overlap, it doesn't look nice
6. 00:59:982 (2,3) - same as above

GL nice mapset and song

okai http://puu.sh/7kS9S.osu

Привет, боку но Кю-тян

Aka's Easy

1. 00:05:061 (4) - может добавить финиш на конец?
2. 00:52:242 (2) - попробуй вистл софтовый как аддишнс поставить
3. 00:55:879 (2) - и тут
4. 00:57:697 (1) - и тут на конец
5. 01:28:618 (3) - финиш

Нормалъ

1. 00:06:061 - ноту сюда ты чо
2. 00:35:424 (4) - клап забыл
3. 01:13:618 - тут бы ритм драмовый, как до этого
4. 01:15:740 (2) - попробуй такой ритм:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:19:376 (2) - ну и тут, и дальше

OH THIS DICKFF IS SO HARD

1. 00:15:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - какой-то разный спейсинг тут
2. 00:37:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - можно нарастание в громкости сделать О: (ну и дальше тогда уж)

Хаппинесс!

Thank you for mods, Natsu and Reiji!

Кьюби гей О3О

Haai~~

[General]

1. I asked before title unicode.

[Aka's Easy]

1. Nothing to say.

[Normal]

1. 01:26:800 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Umm.. really hard I guess loll

[Hard]

1. 00:16:485 - volume 25% really small please volume up.
2. 00:18:606 (3) - Move x248 y316 ?
3. 00:34:364 (5,1) - more better flow.
   
   img

   
4. 00:37:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - <333
5. 00:45:424 (1,2) - really difficult rhythm. slider follow better?
   

good luck star~

Thank you for mod, Satellite! :з

as requested
мод

General:
можно отключить вайдскрин суппорт т.к. у тебя нет сториборды, это нихуя не влияет ни на что если у тебя ее нет, но сейчас модно это советовать
а ну и каунтдаун

Hard:
00:06:728 (2,1) - может сделать их одинаковыми по форме?
00:23:151 (2) - а если так - http://puu.sh/7AXlg.jpg
а вообще модить тут нечего :3

Normal:
01:26:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - вот к этому могут придраться, хотя нормал и так сложноват, но надо же что-то написать

Aka's Easy:
вроде чисто все

ГЛ

<3

[General]

You should work on the spread Settings a bit, they seem weird for me. 2/3/2 4/6/4 6/8/6, like, the AR increase is quite high between easy / normal, isn't it?
I would make normal ar 5, it seems really high how it is now.

[Easy]

00:17:242 (3) - Hm. The big White tick here is a quite strong one, my Suggestion is to remove this slider and add 2 circles instead. The finish off of this part would be way better.
00:24:061 (4) - Move this one a bit down to get a better made Overall-pattern. http://puu.sh/7COG7/0177c75f46.jpg Looks cleaner, and the DS is better used too.
01:04:982 (3,4) - Same as above, you could improve this blanket a bit, so the Overall pattern Looks neater. Just move them around a bit.
01:26:800 (1,2,3,4) - This is a very weird pattern to be honest. It doesn't have a good movement Feeling at all, and imo the end should be a bit .. more spectacular. http://puu.sh/7COUs/6e39cfa781.jpg What about this? Looks cute and Plays really good.

[Normal]

The flow gets better over time, at the begin it's Kind of sloppy sometimes. Maybe we can clean it up a bit.

00:08:728 (1) - It already starts here - the flow is Kind of not existant (even if there is a big gap, but oh well). What about moving it to the right side of the map?
00:14:061 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/7CPeH/14cdd94e72.jpg Flow is very important in 1/3 rhythm, that's why I'd like to suggest one or two Patterns, maybe you like them more as well. Maybe it brings you even new ideas, which are even better But yeah, this one is definitely for flow reasons.
00:17:697 (1,2,3) - If you want to Keep this pattern, shift those 3 a bit to the left, then make sure that the Transition works better, like this: http://puu.sh/7CPlU/5b5db72e03.jpg
00:35:424 (4) - Why not having a blanket here?
00:45:727 (6) - Move this one a bit to the right again, due to Transition Problems. Make sure your new stuff is there, where the slider end goes to.
00:46:333 (7,1) - Quite hard rhythm for a normal. What about making those a slider? The flow would be awesome too! For some Variation, you could add a straight slider. http://puu.sh/7CPuM/53cf9e1a59.jpg
00:52:242 (1) - blanket
00:57:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - yeah.. XDD the stack at the begin is really too hard, please get rid of it. The rest of the rhythm might be fine tho.
01:17:103 (4) - Do you think a normal Player can catch this beat without Problems? It's quite out of the current beat, because the vocal is later as expected. You might wanna find another solution for this one.

brb back

[Hard]

00:26:333 (2,3) - First of all, try to blanket them a tiny bit better (not much!) 00:27:242 (4) - then move this a bit to the left so it Looks better. http://puu.sh/7CQAA/ee39e08d9f.jpg something like this (not a really good made example xD)
01:07:558 (3,4) - Not sure if you like, but imo the flow is more interesting like this. http://puu.sh/7CQLS/0e166109e2.jpg
01:10:437 (3) - Just a small adjustment; 80 40?
01:19:982 (3) - ^
01:23:618 (4) - bad Transition again. You should rotate it a bit, so it works better. Let me explain (in case you don't understand) 1-2-3 goes a curve, 4 goes a curve. The whole thing should be one - it's not at the Moment, you understand?
01:29:982 (8) - Why did you silence this one, would Sound pretty cool without the silence.


Overall, this map is way better than the normal. Some parts look a bit .. nooot soo goooood. Let me Point them up.
00:48:606 (2,3) -
01:00:437 (4,5) -
01:06:346 (4,5,6,1) - (pretty obvious you've run out of space - still, try to fix it, it's worth it)


Good luck!

seems like applied everything, i liked the last suggestion veri mach though i didnt consider my pattern so weird :<<<<<<< sankyuu

http://puu.sh/7CZcr.osu derji, moi sladkiy ♥

Thank you for mods! Updated.