1. 00:02:361 (2) - 100:48 for better blanket?
2. 00:03:067 (3) - Maybe try this? Flows better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1363305
3. 00:45:244 (1) - Try putting this on 00:45:067 and extend it by 1/2
4. 00:57:067 (4,5) - *NAZI.. Can you try making this sliders a bit prettier? o3o
5. 00:59:891 (1,2) - Try making this blanket a bit neater

1. 00:04:655 (3) - 2 grids down to make better flow
2. 00:43:655 (2) - 240:276 - Maybe better?
3. 00:50:008 (4) - This slider is ugly shaped in my opinion, try making it a bit prettier
4. 00:59:008 (4) - 304:216 - Better flow maybe?
5. Nice diff!

1. I feel like 1.70 SV is a bit high for hard diff. Just because you made such a hard diff, I recommend you to lower OD by 1
2. 00:12:508 (3) - Remove this? my opinion
3. 00:17:185 (7,1) - Maybe try making a nice blanket here?
4. 00:19:302 (3) - Slider after this one is a bit hard to read, but not so much of a problem
5. 00:29:891 (5) - CTRL+g?
6. Cool diff! Definitely best in mapset! o3o

1. I found no mistakes here >.< Perfect!

Flappy Bird wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:02:361 (2) - 100:48 for better blanket? no, my placement is better
2. 00:03:067 (3) - Maybe try this? Flows better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1363305 ^
3. 00:45:244 (1) - Try putting this on 00:45:067 and extend it by 1/2 no,pass!
4. 00:57:067 (4,5) - *NAZI.. Can you try making this sliders a bit prettier? o3o eh?! it's not pretty?! it's not bad i see. little fixed!
5. 00:59:891 (1,2) - Try making this blanket a bit neater it's already good blanket..

[Hard]

1. I feel like 1.70 SV is a bit high for hard diff. Just because you made such a hard diff, I recommend you to lower OD by 1 I forgot decreasing SV when i making Hard Diff.. but i don't want to change SV and OD. OD 5 is enough low.
2. 00:12:508 (3) - Remove this? my opinion no, i want to add 3 notes!
3. 00:17:185 (7,1) - Maybe try making a nice blanket here? no
4. 00:19:302 (3) - Slider after this one is a bit hard to read, but not so much of a problem yup, no problem!
5. 00:29:891 (5) - CTRL+g? no, i want to make jump.
6. Cool diff! Definitely best in mapset! o3o

I will star this right away!
Also feel free to ignore kudosu, I think my mod was not useful at all but ok! <.<

1. 00:16:302 (21, 22) - kd （こちらの方がギターと合っている気がしますね）
2. 00:33:244 (91, 92, 93) - ddd （ただの意見ですが音が上がりますのでこういうパターンはどうでしょうか？）
3. 01:00:420 (204, 205) - kd （ドラムはこうじゃないかと。）
4. 01:14:008 ~ 01:18:244 - ここは 01:02:714 ~ 01:06:949と大体同じリズムなので譜面でもそうするのも悪くないかもしれませんね

1. 00:19:832 - ドラムと合わせるため、こういうのはどうですか？ 多分ノートの数は変わらないと思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:832 - ボーカルありますのでdまたはk追加してください　（流れ的にkの方がよさそうですね）
3. 00:50:185 - d?
4. 00:50:449 - ^?
5. 01:00:508 - k　（ドラム）
6. 01:00:949 - こちらはddkkd　どうでしょうか… 連続にdが出るのがちょっとでしたら 01:00:596 (269, 270) をdkに変更するのも一つの案です。
7. 01:07:479 - K

kjwkjw wrote:

Hiya! Taiko mod as requested by TaMul

d: don | k: kat | D: big don | K: big kat

[TK's Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:302 (21, 22) - kd （こちらの方がギターと合っている気がしますね） - 素晴らしい!
2. 00:33:244 (91, 92, 93) - ddd （ただの意見ですが音が上がりますのでこういうパターンはどうでしょうか？） - 意図的に、simpleにしています！
3. 01:00:420 (204, 205) - kd （ドラムはこうじゃないかと。） - 01:00:596 (205) - に強いsnaredrumの音があるので、keepします！
4. 01:14:008 ~ 01:18:244 - ここは 01:02:714 ~ 01:06:949と大体同じリズムなので譜面でもそうするのも悪くないかもしれませんね - 意図的です。 退屈しないように、少しだけ変化が欲しいです！

[TK's Oni]

1. 00:19:832 - ドラムと合わせるため、こういうのはどうですか？ 多分ノートの数は変わらないと思います。 - got it!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:832 - ボーカルありますのでdまたはk追加してください　（流れ的にkの方がよさそうですね） - それが正しいです!
3. 00:50:185 - d?
4. 00:50:449 - ^? - 両方追加しました!
5. 01:00:508 - k　（ドラム） - sounds good!
6. 01:00:949 - こちらはddkkd　どうでしょうか… 連続にdが出るのがちょっとでしたら 01:00:596 (269, 270) をdkに変更するのも一つの案です。 - ddkkd に変更しました!
7. 01:07:479 - K - kept. taikoのsoundに良く合うのでこのままがいいです!

全体的に出来の良い譜面だと思いました。(･ω･)　少しでも役に立てたら嬉しいです。
ランクドまでファイトです！
PS - これ使わせていただきました。本当に便利ですね ありがとうございます！ - ありがとうございます！でも、問題が多いので、時間があれば修正します;~;

Good Taikos overall; hope this helped.
Good luck!

Flappy Bird wrote:

[Natsu's Normal]

1. 00:04:655 (3) - 2 grids down to make better flow It will broke the distance
2. 00:43:655 (2) - 240:276 - Maybe better? ^
3. 00:50:008 (4) - This slider is ugly shaped in my opinion, try making it a bit prettier It's fun to play imo
4. 00:59:008 (4) - 304:216 - Better flow maybe? sure
5. Nice diff!

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1. Would prefer it to have TV Size in the title not in the tags, but I think it's just because I'm used to that. Nothing else~

1. 00:34:479 - This beat needs to be mapped in my opinion. It's emphasized much more than 00:34:832 this beat. Secondly, 00:34:126 (1,2) these offbeat sliders are unusual for your map and don't fit here imo, because the beat or vocals is not different from other parts in the map. For consistency, the timline should be like this:
   
   Example

   
   Also, if you don't change that... Please 00:34:126 (1) no spacing error, just for the sake of symmetry. Keep the spacing consistent in the easiest diffs.
2. 01:07:655 (4) - This slider doesn't fit here timeline-wise. This beat 01:08:361 is placed on the end of the slider, which makes it less emphasized than the beginning. But in musical terms, it is the most emphasized beat around this place, especially because it's the big white tick. So I suggest to map it like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 01:16:126 (4,1,2) - There is no rhytmical difference between this and the phrase before. The slider ends on the big white tick again, though that tick is emphasized very much. And the offbeat circle don't fit very much either, especially because you didn't use them at the phrase before. What I mean is, 01:16:126 (4,1,2) this is more important than the circle before, for example. I suggest a timeline like this maybe:
   
   Example

   
   The big white tick is more emphasized then, because it's a repeat. And the more important beats would be mapped :3
4. Nazi - There are a lot of wrong blankets in this diff. Probably they exist because of grid snap. I always suggest turning grid snap off for easy and normal diffs, because the blankets and the spacing needs to be correct (or it can be correct for a better look). I'll list the most obvious blankets here:
   00:00:597 (1,2) - 00:07:655 (3,4) - 00:10:126 (2,3) - 00:33:420 (1,1) (if you didn't fix my timeline suggestion) - 00:41:538 (2,3) - 00:41:538 (2,3) - 01:02:361 (3,1) - 01:15:067 (2,3) - 01:17:891 (2,3)
   Secondly, grid snap causes some spacing "errors". I think spacing differences bigger than + or - 0.03x don't look good in easy and normal difficultys. Sorry, this is really nazi, but it would make your diff better if you consider to fix those:
   01:12:596 (3) - 01:22:126 (4,1) (you could change the sliders here a little bit to have symmetry but the right spacing)
5. Very nice diff, just fix the timeline issues and maybe some nazi stuff~ Hitsounding is so damn good, I love it <3

1. 00:07:479 (4) - Nazi ~ These are y-flipped sliders, so it would look better if you place it exactly over the previous one, at x:66 y:120
2. 00:20:361 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part is weird timline-wise. Your 3 sliders end on the offbeat, though the offbeat and the red ticks after it are the most emphasized, because of the special drum. I think it would be better to emphasize that with slider-stars + slider-ticks. Also, you are mapping 00:22:655 this, but not emphasizing it with circle. What I want to say is, this would be better timeline imo:
   
   Example

   
   I'm not really sure about my version either, but I think with yours, the sliders are not fitting really well, especially because of the loud slider-ticks. If you keep your timeline, consider to use softer slider-ticks here ;w;
3. 00:33:596 (4) - Naziii ~ Spacing "error" -0.04x, consider to fix... Well, maybe it's unnecessary to mention it here, because one really doesn't notice while playing, but I just write it down like I always do
4. 01:10:302 (5) - And again, small spacing difference..
5. 01:14:008 (1) - You could make a better-looking s-slider by moving the end-point to x:228 y:305
6. I love this normal, only problem I have is the one phrase I mentioned ;w;

1. 00:06:244 (1) - This might be really cruel for hard players. In my opinion, after the big triangle 00:05:891 (4,5,1), the natural flow leads to the lower right, like you did with your slider, but the sharp curve caused by the slider doesn't feel intuitive. I suggest you to ctrl+g these circles 00:05:891 (4,5), to make the flow better. Probably this whole thing 00:05:185 (2,3,4,5) won't look as good as before, but the flow is more important in my opinion.
2. 00:14:008 (5) - Maybe you could add a clap at the beginning of the slider because of the vocals "ooh ooh"? You did that here 00:19:655 (1,2,3) aswell.
3. 00:23:185 - Consider to reduce volume to 40%, you also did this in the insane diff. The hitsounds appear to loud to me here o: Also, it's strange that you use different volumes for the diffs... But that's no problem I think.
4. 00:25:655 (8) - Ok, but here you should definitely lower the volume to 30%, like you did in the insane diff, because this slider with drum samples is just too loud and you really notice this when playing.
5. Well, I didn't find much, though I don't really like the diff as much as your other difficultys... In my opinion, hards are good with some jumps, but you often use really hard-to-do jumps in my opinion, wich aren't appropriate for a hard diff... But that's just personal opinion, and I won't try to change your mapping, just mentioned it here. Your style fits more for insane difficultys

1. You should really think about using OD8 in this diff, because it doesn't have fast streams or things like that... I mean, I do SS everytime I play this, so it might be more of a challenge if you increase the OD ^^
2. 00:02:714 (1) - Consider to use the drum-sampleset and the end of the slider instead, like you did in your Hard diff. Sounds much better in my opinion.
3. 00:05:538 (1) - ^
4. 00:08:361 (1) - ^
5. 00:11:185 (1,2) - Use drum-sampleset at the ends? Like in hard diff~ Sounds good
6. 00:14:008 (6) - Same as in Hard, maybe add clap at the beginning?
7. Well, this map is really fun ^^ And I didn't found stuff except minor hitsounding ;w; Flow is nice! Good job

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M :3


[Natsu's Normal]

1. 00:07:479 (4) - Nazi ~ These are y-flipped sliders, so it would look better if you place it exactly over the previous one, at x:66 y:120 It's on purpose I'm afraid of simetry lol
2. 00:20:361 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part is weird timline-wise. Your 3 sliders end on the offbeat, though the offbeat and the red ticks after it are the most emphasized, because of the special drum. I think it would be better to emphasize that with slider-stars + slider-ticks. Also, you are mapping 00:22:655 this, but not emphasizing it with circle. What I want to say is, this would be better timeline imo:
   I'm not really sure about my version either, but I think with yours, the sliders are not fitting really well, especially because of the loud slider-ticks. If you keep your timeline, consider to use softer slider-ticks here ;w; I know but I still prefer my rhythm, since is more easy to do for a normal than 1/2 spam IMO
3. 00:33:596 (4) - Naziii ~ Spacing "error" -0.04x, consider to fix... Well, maybe it's unnecessary to mention it here, because one really doesn't notice while playing, but I just write it down like I always do K
4. 01:10:302 (5) - And again, small spacing difference.. K
5. 01:14:008 (1) - You could make a better-looking s-slider by moving the end-point to x:228 y:305 K
6. I love this normal, only problem I have is the one phrase I mentioned ;w;

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300,356,55302,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,296,55655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,56008,2,0,P|128:136|160:72,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,24,56714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,81,57067,6,0,P|384:136|384:196,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,294,57773,2,0,P|254:307|196:296,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,58479,2,0,P|190:180|248:193,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,59008,2,0,P|364:220|408:180,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,59538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59891,12,6,61302,0:0:0:0:
96,148,62714,6,0,P|156:148|196:108,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,63420,2,0,P|357:149|416:148,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,36,64126,2,0,P|312:16|248:44,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,64655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,120,65008,2,0,B|56:156|56:156|64:216,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,260,65538,6,0,B|160:267|160:267|196:215,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,66244,2,0,P|300:96|332:148,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,66773,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,264,66949,2,0,P|343:311|400:303,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,264,67479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,144,67832,2,0,P|464:144|496:156,2,60,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,156,68361,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,192,68714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,292,69067,2,0,P|136:312|80:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,191,69773,2,0,P|204:171|260:192,1,120
280,248,70302,2,0,P|300:304|356:340,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,192,71185,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,88,71538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,88,71891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,192,72244,2,0,P|196:210|131:189,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,88,73302,2,0,P|360:128|380:192,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,74008,6,0,B|312:316|268:288|228:304,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,74714,2,0,P|64:276|56:220,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,75420,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,140,75773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,140,75949,2,0,P|184:197|139:235,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,76832,6,0,P|228:32|284:20,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,68,77538,2,0,P|412:124|388:177,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,78244,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,228,78596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,228,78773,2,0,B|104:240|104:240|84:256|84:256|32:264,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,79655,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,172,80008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,88,80361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,88,80538,2,0,P|436:144|432:224,1,120
424,260,81067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,308,81420,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,308,81597,2,0,P|256:288|202:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,197,82126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,96,82479,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,122,82832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
371,242,83185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,289,83538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,197,83891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,96,84244,2,0,P|184:80|116:100,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,84949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,300,85302,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,348,85655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,360,86008,2,0,P|408:340|440:284,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,228,86538,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,128,86891,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,144,87244,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,144,87420,2,0,P|256:80|300:32,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,128,88126,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M :3

[General]

1. Would prefer it to have TV Size in the title not in the tags, but I think it's just because I'm used to that. Nothing else~
   As rule, i can't add "TV Size" in the title.
   

[Easy]
I followed not vocal but background rhythm.

1. 00:34:479 - This beat needs to be mapped in my opinion. It's emphasized much more than 00:34:832 this beat. Secondly, 00:34:126 (1,2) these offbeat sliders are unusual for your map and don't fit here imo, because the beat or vocals is not different from other parts in the map. For consistency, the timline should be like this:
   
   Example

   
   Also, if you don't change that... Please 00:34:126 (1) no spacing error, just for the sake of symmetry. Keep the spacing consistent in the easiest diffs.
2. 01:07:655 (4) - This slider doesn't fit here timeline-wise. This beat 01:08:361 is placed on the end of the slider, which makes it less emphasized than the beginning. But in musical terms, it is the most emphasized beat around this place, especially because it's the big white tick. So I suggest to map it like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 01:16:126 (4,1,2) - There is no rhytmical difference between this and the phrase before. The slider ends on the big white tick again, though that tick is emphasized very much. And the offbeat circle don't fit very much either, especially because you didn't use them at the phrase before. What I mean is, 01:16:126 (4,1,2) this is more important than the circle before, for example. I suggest a timeline like this maybe:
   
   Example

   
   The big white tick is more emphasized then, because it's a repeat. And the more important beats would be mapped :3
4. Nazi - There are a lot of wrong blankets in this diff. Probably they exist because of grid snap. I always suggest turning grid snap off for easy and normal diffs, because the blankets and the spacing needs to be correct (or it can be correct for a better look). I'll list the most obvious blankets here:
   00:00:597 (1,2) - 00:07:655 (3,4) - 00:10:126 (2,3) - 00:33:420 (1,1) (if you didn't fix my timeline suggestion) - 00:41:538 (2,3) - 00:41:538 (2,3) - 01:02:361 (3,1) - 01:15:067 (2,3) - 01:17:891 (2,3)
   Secondly, grid snap causes some spacing "errors". I think spacing differences bigger than + or - 0.03x don't look good in easy and normal difficultys. Sorry, this is really nazi, but it would make your diff better if you consider to fix those:
   01:12:596 (3) - 01:22:126 (4,1) (you could change the sliders here a little bit to have symmetry but the right spacing)
5. Very nice diff, just fix the timeline issues and maybe some nazi stuff~ Hitsounding is so damn good, I love it <3

[Hard]
decreasing volume is accpeted. i don't want to change!

1. 00:06:244 (1) - This might be really cruel for hard players. In my opinion, after the big triangle 00:05:891 (4,5,1), the natural flow leads to the lower right, like you did with your slider, but the sharp curve caused by the slider doesn't feel intuitive. I suggest you to ctrl+g these circles 00:05:891 (4,5), to make the flow better. Probably this whole thing 00:05:185 (2,3,4,5) won't look as good as before, but the flow is more important in my opinion.
2. 00:14:008 (5) - Maybe you could add a clap at the beginning of the slider because of the vocals "ooh ooh"? You did that here 00:19:655 (1,2,3) aswell.
3. 00:23:185 - Consider to reduce volume to 40%, you also did this in the insane diff. The hitsounds appear to loud to me here o: Also, it's strange that you use different volumes for the diffs... But that's no problem I think.
4. 00:25:655 (8) - Ok, but here you should definitely lower the volume to 30%, like you did in the insane diff, because this slider with drum samples is just too loud and you really notice this when playing.
5. Well, I didn't find much, though I don't really like the diff as much as your other difficultys... In my opinion, hards are good with some jumps, but you often use really hard-to-do jumps in my opinion, wich aren't appropriate for a hard diff... But that's just personal opinion, and I won't try to change your mapping, just mentioned it here. Your style fits more for insane difficultys

[Insane]

1. You should really think about using OD8 in this diff, because it doesn't have fast streams or things like that... I mean, I do SS everytime I play this, so it might be more of a challenge if you increase the OD ^^ lol..SS...ok! fixed!
   
2. 00:02:714 (1) - Consider to use the drum-sampleset and the end of the slider instead, like you did in your Hard diff. Sounds much better in my opinion.
3. 00:05:538 (1) - ^
4. 00:08:361 (1) - ^
5. 00:11:185 (1,2) - Use drum-sampleset at the ends? Like in hard diff~ Sounds good
6. 00:14:008 (6) - Same as in Hard, maybe add clap at the beginning?

fixed! Well, this map is really fun ^^ And I didn't found stuff except minor hitsounding ;w; Flow is nice! Good job

Nice mapset <3 Insane is great fun! Angel is still your masterpiece *-* but this is good aswell. Keep up the good work :3 And I hope you will fix something, so I get kudos and mod from you. Please reply to my mod and tell me what you didn't change and why ^^ Thank youuuu~

(Btw, sorry that I'm talking so much, and sorry for my poor English sometimes, but expressing musical stuff is difficult for me in English, because I don't find the right words)

smallboat wrote:

Hi,TaMul, M4M.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Fine.

[Easy]

00:02:361 (2) - I found cancel this hitsound,it has no hitsound at this here,
and if you want add this drum,I think about this drum hitsound volume a bit big voice and strange,because this is a quiet part,and I suggest turn down 25~30% is good set in this part.
00:05:538 (3) - ^
00:08:361 (4) - ^ no, i want to add drum-hitsound. and 25~30% volume is so low.
00:35:538 (2) - This DS seems error. good, fixed!
00:57:067 (4) - This vocal(and strong beat) is turn up,I think you set finish here. i can't heard sound like finish hitsound. so i add finish on (3).
00:59:891 (1) - ^ (And beacuse this vocal is turn up,maybe you can make the slider flow turn up to fit the music, not down) yes. but i think about that. i don't want to change it.
01:12:596 (3) - Maybe you can add whistle this here. fixed!
01:22:479 (1) - Forget add finish here? This is a strong beat.
01:23:891 (2) - ^ it's not place as finish i though.
01:26:538 (3) - This slider head have a bit finish hitsound,try to add finish? no

[Hard] Maybe you can add a sliderslide mute the slide sound ? A bit noise.
good! i'll add it.

SPOILER

00:02:714 (3,4) - As the same easy diff (00:02:361 (2))
00:05:538 (3,5) - ^
00:08:361 (1,2) - ^ same of reason!
00:07:479 (2,3,4,5,1) - Feel you have make a pentagon at this here,but this 00:08:185 (5,1) a bit crooked off? fixed!
00:11:538 (2) - Seems a bit close 00:11:891 (1) ? it's just 0.99x. same as 1.00x
00:33:067 (1) - Seems can stack 00:31:655 (1) slider end make a good flow. good, fixed!
00:42:949 (1) - This is a strong beat,forget add finish? good, fixed!
00:44:185 (6,1) - DS is not consistent (1/4 here, a bit far),a bit hard to read,look the 00:43:655 (4,5), is good placement,try to replace this 2 part. hmm..few people can read this part. first of all, i don't want to change it. i think about that!
01:05:538 (1) - Maybe you can add finish at this here.(strong beat) fixed!
01:06:949 (4) - ^ fixed!
01:18:244 (1,2) - ^ no
01:22:479 (1,1) - ^ no

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:02:714 (1,2) - As the same easy diff (00:02:361 (2))
00:05:538 (1,2) - ^
00:08:361 (1,2) - ^
00:09:067 (1,2) - ^ no!
00:34:126 (6) - Maybe you can make this slider do a speed up effect,because the music is fit in this part,imo. not bad, fixed!
00:42:420 (2) - Seems stack crooked off? no!
00:56:008 (8) - Excellent blanket~! lol (As the same 00:34:126 (6))
00:57:067 (1) - This is a strong beat,forget add finish? no
01:05:538 (1) - ^ no
01:22:479 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can add finish in slider head will have a good effect.(The vocal is turn up and have strong beat) no, sorry~
01:26:538 (7) - Seems the head crooked off? fixed!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153614
OK! look your turn at my m4m queue. thanks!

Nwolf wrote:

woof, taiko mod

[TK'S Muzukashii]

01:14:891 (266) - Maybe move to 01:15:067 - kinda plays against the vocals here
01:17:714 (280) - ^

[0gre's Oni]

Reduce volume from 100% --> 80%
01:05:802 (105) - Delete, then trade 01:05:891 (106) - with 107
01:12:508 - Maybe add a kat to follow drums


uhm that's it I guess

Nwolf wrote:

woof, taiko mod
[TK'S Muzukashii]
01:14:891 (266) - Maybe move to 01:15:067 - kinda plays against the vocals here
01:17:714 (280) - ^ - its a deliberate pattern.

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Oh hey there~ (M4M)
-Add ''(TV Size)'' in the title since its an OP
That's it~ The mappu is fine~ >.<''