Some blanks of tags have two words spacing, you should set 1 spacing between words.Add "未確認で進行形" to Tags better.
Well I don't agree with tick2 since it tends to miss notes for newbie. but i want to use slidertick sound perfectly..i'll use 2 tick
00:45:224(1) It's ok but if you put 1/2 rhythm on Easy, you can put this note more easy to read, current looks a bit difficult imo. hmm..think about that!
01:12:596(3) Not reasonable placement, the flow from (2) looks odd I suppose. So put this note like this? good placement! thanks!Rhythm
00:34:126(1) Not good rhythm since you don't cantch the downbeat, so pick the sound at 00:34:479 in beginning of note better. And 00:35:185, you can put a note here since here is a vocal and drum sound, so it's not reasonable to make a blank.
00:41:538(2,3) Again, you should pick the sound at 00:42:067 and 00:42:332, I know it's red line but heard strongly. e.g.)fixed!
01:24:596(3) Add finish at end. fixed!
SV×1.7 looks a bit faster for Hard, and there are a lot of jumps, so I just suppose AR8 would be nice. ha...i forgot to change SV when i make Hard diff.. AR 8 maybe make more harder. so i think about that.
00:09:067(3) NC here to follow the downbeat. fixed!
00:15:773(2) Just reverse of the direction would be nice flow for playing. fixed!
00:26:714(1,1) These NC is really needed? I don't suppose it works well. oh, fixed!
00:42:767(7) I suppose you can begin the 1/2 slider from here to follow the vocal, vocal sounds bigger than drums & music, so it would be better. e.g.) sorry, i like my rhythm than this rhythm.Hit Sound
00:45:420(1) Delete whistle and add finish at reverse same as Insane. fixed!
01:06:773(3) Add finish? no
00:07:126(2,3,4) This flow of movement looks a bit forced and not good I suppose, for now I don't have any idea of placement but you can replace better by your own. It's not have problem..? i think about fixing
00:15:067(2) The spacing from (1) looks a bit confused for playing since it looks same distance compared with normal spacing.So you can place this part like 00:17:185(4,1), it looks much better. think about that! pass!
00:21:067(4) Stack not (1) but (2) (164:88) better to follow the end of slider at (3). good, fixed!
00:21:773(1) Maybe you can reverse the direction of slider better, just suggestion. fixed!00:24:949(5) I don't like this overlap with (4), so move a bit away and bent this slider like this? fixed!00:56:008(8,1) This jumping looks suddenly and really hard to read, maybe you can decrease spacing or replace placement better. hmm..pass!
00:12:773(6,7) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal since 00:13:126 has a beginning of vocal "ta", it would fit to play much more. no
00:45:244(6) I don't agree this 1/1 slider, it sounds really odd. You should pick the drum sound at 00:45:220. no
00:33:420(3,5) Add whistle at end to follow the instrumental. i don't want to use whistle sequentially.
00:38:808(5) Perfer finish than clap to follow the music. where is 00:33:808 ? there is 00:33:802..
01:06:596(4) Add finish at end? no