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Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-03-01T06:37:24+00:00

hi alacat *3*

hmm I don't see the video :X please get the uncensored video if you would add a video :X so many censored

[Insane]

00:03:314 (2) - I think this rhythm should be 1/4 slider with double reverse, more fit the song imo.
00:09:589 (5,6,7,8,9) - I know you want to make it opposite way with slider but if you change like http://puu.sh/7euWC.jpg it will be nice flow too since the flow from 4 to 5 is up way so it will be good if keep it continue up way.
00:11:942 (1) - what about move it to about 424|176 since it's a strong note so better make a little jump to it and it will be a triangle with (2,3) too.
00:30:569 - what about change it to 1/1 slider like you usually do? more fit imo, I can't here triple ><
00:40:569 (3) - move to 248|124 looks better triangle.
00:52:334 (5) - 1 grid up for perfect stack.
00:52:530 (6) - I think move to 108|280 is better flow and be a square too.
00:58:805 (1) - hmm tail up 1 grid.
01:01:158 (2) - make it blanket like you do on 01:01:550 (3,1) too.
01:03:314 (6) - make triple on 6 instead like http://puu.sh/7ew6k.jpg the rhythm is really like this ;w; try 25-50% playrate.

[Hard]

00:02:530 (1,2) - swap NC? I think it's weird to see double (1) DX
00:08:412 (3) - you can make curve to blanket with (2)'s tail and it will more playable too because it will curve to the 00:08:805 (1)
00:22:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - is it possible to move them down like 3-4 grid :X (3,4,5) is touch almost half of hp bar.
00:32:922 (2) - 1 grid left is more symmetry.

[Normal]

00:13:511 (1,2,3) - move to 216|112 , 280|200 , 384|172 is better star imo.
hmm just that ;w;

[Easy]

00:22:138 (3) - 1 grid up would be better distance balance.
00:39:393 (2) - 1.01x from (1) and 0.98x to (3) a bit not balance for easy imo, move to 226|32?
01:10:765 (3) - 72|220 for better square?

that's all good luck >< always nice map

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-03-01T12:29:04+00:00

~~Just a reminder so I wont forget, will mod prob today~~~

Hello alacat o3o Requested a mod in-game

General thoughts

Clean :3

Insane

00:03:314 (2) - like Sonnyc said, this should be 1/4 instead of 1/3. When you change it, remember to add 1 repeat more to match the music better!
00:14:393 (4) - I like the movement a bit better that CTRL + G brings here. Try it!
00:15:275 (2,3,4) - Just my personal preference here I guess, but what about spacing the antijumps like this? I think it'd be a bit easier players to notice it and overall it plays (for me) a bit better.
00:24:295 (1) - Mm, I think you could make the waves a bit more smooth.. the redpoint again makes it a bit awkward D:
00:36:060 (3) - Again, just my personal opinion here but what about CTRL + G? I think it makes the movement more smooth here, atleast to 00:36:452 (4) -
00:47:628 (4) - I gotta agree with Fycho here, 2 notes would play a LOT better than just 1/2 slider. Some example placements for the notes if you decide to apply this suggestion:
Example
01:00:177 (5,6,7,8) - So, I think a curved stream would fit here better, imo it makes the movement between 00:59:981 (4,5) - kind of better and it'd fit your mapset overall better:
Example
01:09:981 (3) - Mm, I dislike the shape a bit because I wanted to see a blanket here. s: I think this kind of shape would fit better overall:
Example
01:16:256 (1,2) - The overlap is nice, I like it a lot but I have a reason why I brought this up here. 1's end is more placed to the right instead of the middle of 2's body. I know, really nazi but oh well, makes the mapset even more perfect:
Example
01:25:667 (3,4) - Just a really crazy idea here, what about changing the NC color to one that fits the video? Like 01:25:667 (3) - could be a pink note, 01:26:256 (4) - and this a yellow one. xD
Overall a really nice and clean Insane

Hard

00:03:314 (2) - I think you're skipping way too many beats with this slider, in fact here's an example rhythm how to follow the vocals + rhythm a bit better maybe?
Example
00:07:824 (2) - Move this slider to x:276 y:120 so 00:07:236 (1) - 's end hit 2's body in the middle perfectly?
Example
00:20:373 (2) - Turning this into a straight wave slider would fit better instead of curving it a bit downwards, just my opinion.
Example
00:22:530 (5,6,7) - This is pretty close to hit the HP bar, you might want to move this a bit down~
00:50:177 (3,4) - I think the gap between these notes are really empty and it makes it a bit dull to play. You could try to add a note at 00:50:373 - or 00:50:177 (3) - remove this and make it a 1/1 slider instead.
01:04:295 (4) - Move this slider to x:220 y:256? Same reason as my second suggestion in hard.
01:08:216 (1,2,3) - As you can see here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1378214 , it isn't really stacked with 01:07:432 (4,5) - in-game so this is why I suggest you moving 1,2 and 3 to x:120 y:292
Nice~

Normal

00:23:707 (2) - I think moving this slider to somewhere x:476 y:144 makes the movement between 00:22:922 (1,2) - better
01:28:020 (1) - There is a sound here, so consider adding a whistle in the head of this slider, would fit nicely imo
Yeaaah, this is really clean~

Easy

01:28:020 (1) - Same suggestion as in normal.
Besides the sliders that end on the big white tick which I dislike, this difficulty is fine and should be ready to go.

You got a nice mapset here, GL for rankings

~

alacat

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Topic Starter

alacat 2014-03-03T10:40:31+00:00

Thanks guys

It was very useful !　

Updated :3

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2014-03-05T04:30:47+00:00

in-game

[Easy]
00:03:314 (3) - sliderbodyにclapかwhistleつけませんか
00:30:765 (4) - remove whistle at end?
00:37:824 (5) - remove whistle
00:57:432 (1) - 下向き曲線のほうが好きです
01:15:471 (4,5) - 少しだけ左に移動させて01:14:295 (3,4,5,1) - を図形的に置きたい

[Normal]
00:03:314 (3) - Easyと同じ
01:21:746 (3,4) - 01:18:609 (4) - ここのようにはしないのですか
01:23:118 (3,4) - こういう音取りのほうが前後と合わせてみても自然な気がします

[Hard]
00:03:314 (2) - Easyと同じ
00:13:118 (8) - 私の好み

00:18:903 (7) - whistle
00:21:746 (5) - どうせジャンプしてるなら重ならないように置いたほうがいいと思います
00:22:628 (9) - whislte
00:23:511 (2) - 他の同じパターンのに合わせてちょっと傾かせましょう（個人的にはちょい右肩がbetter）
00:26:648 (2) - whistle?
01:21:354 (7) - 前述、でもここはジャンプしてないのでそこまで気にしなくてもいいと思ってます

[Insane]
00:03:314 (2) - Easyと同じ
00:17:432 (3,4) - whistle?
00:22:138 (4) - 少し左寄りへ？こんなにジャンプさせなくていいと思います
00:42:530 (3) - whistle at end
01:28:020 (3) - サークル2個にしません？
00:32:334 (1) - ~00:53:903 (7) - で他の部分や難度に比べてwhistle密度が少ないように感じます

あくまで参考までに...

00:36:060 (3) - end
00:36:452 (4) - start
00:36:452 (4) - end
00:44:099 (5) - start
00:45:471 (2) - start
00:46:060 (3) -
00:48:805 (3) - end
00:50:373 (5) - start
00:51:942 (3,5) -
00:52:922 (3) - start
00:53:314 (4,6) -

yoshi

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-03-10T19:23:59+00:00

Easy(*3*)
good job

Normal(*3*)
I think AR4 is enough for this diff. I feel AR5 is too fast.
00:22:922 (1) - around after these notes (in screenshot), I would use this kind of rhythm to follow up the vocal more precisely. They can fit like 00:26:060 (1,2,3) - fits with vocal very well here so let's see if you feel it's too hard for this diff.

SPOILER

Hard(*3*)
01:12:334 (2,3,4) - move down 2 grid and right 2 grid, the reason is you can see in test mode that stack leniency will move the note placement. To avoid this, it works like you did on 01:08:216 (7,8,9) -

Insane(*3*)
I personally feel it has some jumps that I think they are too huge. It might just be me thought but the diff is great!
Only what I'm concerned are about from 00:04:099 (1) - to 00:14:883 (6) - . The first part shouldn't have many jumps like this in my opinion. Just in case if you are ok about adjusting them a bit. (Optional)
Jump like 00:55:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is really great! as it fits so much with the song.

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