Foreground Eclipse - From Under Cover (Caught Up In A Love S · forum

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-03-25T09:18:41+00:00

submited

move to pending!

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-03-31T10:36:25+00:00

Hihi OwO)/ Gomen for late mod ^^"

Let's go! >w<

Easy

Not much except that I found this slider too short for beginners 02:05:813 (1)

litoluna's Normal

00:12:863 (1) - This is really nazi. Bring the middle node closer to the end of (3) so that the blanketing is tighter

00:38:963 (1) - Put a whistle or finish here?

01:03:263 (1) - Missing whistle

01:05:663 (1) - Should have a whistle here instead of the ends of the slider

01:06:713 (2) - Remove whistle at end

^ if ur not making the above 2 changes, then you should at least add a whistle on 01:07:313 (3) 's tail for consistency

01:08:063 (1) - Whistle on head

01:12:863 (1) - ^

01:51:263 (1) - Stack isn't perfect

02:00:863 (1) - Whistle on head

03:05:663 (1) - ^

03:08:063 (1) - ^

03:10:463 (1) - ^

Seems like whenever you put a finish you don't put a whistle. I find that quite strange. There should be a whistle even though you have a finish there

Naryuga's Hard

00:47:663 (3) - Random whistle here lol. Was this intentional? Don't see anything here in the music

03:11:513 (1,2,3) - I found this a bit confusing. Though it's fine leaving it as it is ofc

Star for the Hard Diff :333333

And ofc, I'm too much of a noob to mod anything harder than this~ gieheheheh~

Have a nice day desu ^^)/

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-03-31T11:42:12+00:00

yurunneram wrote:
Hihi OwO)/ Gomen for late mod ^^"

Let's go! >w<

Easy

Not much except that I found this slider too short for beginners 02:05:813 (1)　This is spinner lol Maybe 02:05:363 (3) - ?

And ofc, I'm too much of a noob to mod anything harder than this~ gieheheheh~

Have a nice day desu ^^)/

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

thanks for modding & star

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-03-31T11:43:05+00:00

keeeeeeko wrote:
yurunneram wrote:
Hihi OwO)/ Gomen for late mod ^^"

Let's go! >w<

Easy

Not much except that I found this slider too short for beginners 02:05:813 (1)　This is spinner lol Maybe 02:05:363 (3) - ?

And ofc, I'm too much of a noob to mod anything harder than this~ gieheheheh~

Have a nice day desu ^^)/

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
thanks for modding & star

Oh yea whoops meant to say spinner

EDIT: btw are you gonna close bracket the title lol

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-04-01T17:03:49+00:00

m4m here

[Easy]
01:39:263 (1) - this slider doesn't fit vocal well imo, using 1/1 beats here is better
02:05:813 (1) - the spinner is a bit short for an Easy diff imo
02:33:863 (2) - this slider is too short to read the rhythm for newbies, I hope you can change the rhythm here

[litoluna's Normal]
01:54:413 (2,3,4) - this rhythm is a bit too hard to read as Normal diff imo(triple beats start at red line)
02:24:113 - add a note here to follow the drum?
03:04:763 (3) - hope you can move it down a bit or change a direction, it's really near the edge of the screen

[Naryuga's Hard]
01:30:863 (4,5) - move 5 to 01:30:863 - and 4 to 01:31:313 - , the spacing is more smooth imo
01:38:363 (2,3) - you can try to ctrl+g on them, and fix the stack/spacing. the pattern can be more fun to play and looks much better
the overall rhythm in this diff is kinda nice

[Insane]
00:15:113 - why not add a note? like 00:12:713 -
01:22:313 (1) - better to use 0.5x speed to make the patterns in this part more regular
02:33:113 (5,1,2) - this stack is really confusing to read the rhythm, the distance is the same but the time gap isn't. I hope you can increase the spacing between 02:33:113 (5,1) -
02:52:763 (4,1) - this jump is too huge imo
many of 1/2 sliders in diff play not that good, cuz some of their head aren't following heavy beats. circle, slider head and spinner end fits heavy beat, slider repeat, slider end and spinner head isn't. if you can know this point well and obey it when mapping, your map can be improved much

[Alter's Extra]
00:10:913 (3) - I highly suggest to put this slider in other place, it's hidden by some hitburst.. easy to read as it's a cicle imo
00:16:313 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 01:49:763 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge imo
02:52:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - well in fact this part is easier to play than 02:51:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
the diff's flow can be much better imo. but before flow, the most important things is about spacing balance.
I think you don't know what's jump's difficulty depends on, it depends on NOT ONLY spacing, BUT ALSO the kinds of what the objects are. for example, with same spacing and rhythm, a jump from slider to slider is much more easier than a jump from circle to circle, this is something about the spacing balance.
let's back to this diff, there's many huge jumps between circles in this diff, but slider jumps' spacing is smaller, the balance of spacing is really bad in this diff.. normally a jump with same spacing and time gap, the difficulty is like: CC(circle to circle)>>CS(circle to slider)>>>>>>>>>SC>>>>SS, when you know spacing balance well and obey it when mapping, your map can be much better, and you can start to learn what's flow then

good luck

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-01T18:08:39+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here

[Easy]
01:39:263 (1) - this slider doesn't fit vocal well imo, using 1/1 beats here is better
02:05:813 (1) - the spinner is a bit short for an Easy diff imo
02:33:863 (2) - this slider is too short to read the rhythm for newbies, I hope you can change the rhythm here

[Insane]
00:15:113 - why not add a note? like 00:12:713 -
01:22:313 (1) - better to use 0.5x speed to make the patterns in this part more regular
02:33:113 (5,1,2) - this stack is really confusing to read the rhythm, the distance is the same but the time gap isn't. I hope you can increase the spacing between 02:33:113 (5,1) -
02:52:763 (4,1) - this jump is too huge imo
many of 1/2 sliders in diff play not that good, cuz some of their head aren't following heavy beats. circle, slider head and spinner end fits heavy beat, slider repeat, slider end and spinner head isn't. if you can know this point well and obey it when mapping, your map can be improved much

good luck

All fixed & I will change some 1/2 sliders.
thanks for modding!

Alternative

348 posts

Joined June 2010

Alternative 2014-04-02T16:09:57+00:00

SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here

[Alter's Extra]
00:10:913 (3) - I highly suggest to put this slider in other place, it's hidden by some hitburst.. easy to read as it's a cicle imo
fixed
00:16:313 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 01:49:763 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing is too huge imo
fixed the former one
02:52:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - well in fact this part is easier to play than 02:51:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
wanna reserve just a little
the diff's flow can be much better imo. but before flow, the most important things is about spacing balance.
I think you don't know what's jump's difficulty depends on, it depends on NOT ONLY spacing, BUT ALSO the kinds of what the objects are. for example, with same spacing and rhythm, a jump from slider to slider is much more easier than a jump from circle to circle, this is something about the spacing balance.
let's back to this diff, there's many huge jumps between circles in this diff, but slider jumps' spacing is smaller, the balance of spacing is really bad in this diff.. normally a jump with same spacing and time gap, the difficulty is like: CC(circle to circle)>>CS(circle to slider)>>>>>>>>>SC>>>>SS, when you know spacing balance well and obey it when mapping, your map can be much better, and you can start to learn what's flow then
mm... I know that my slider to slider placement is the easiest. The reason why I don't like to make huge jump at slider to slider placement. That's why I made huge jumps circle to circle or slider. It seems that it isn't good... I will devote myself to my mapping.

good luck

Thanks for modding

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Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-04-03T00:01:09+00:00

たいへん遅くなりました、申し訳ないです
sorry for the huge delay ._. here's my reply

Vhy wrote:
[Naryuga's Hard]
00:14:963 (4) - remove whistle here - no, please listen to the back sound, there's cymbal sound at this point
00:37:463 (2) - ctrl+g - no, I set the direction of the 3 sliders to the center
00:47:663 (3) - this should be a clap right? - not really, but as it sounds kinda random, I added another whistle at 00:46:463 - so it sounds less random now
01:40:913 (6,7) - make this slider more curve so it makes the blanket looks better - fixed
02:23:813 (6) - NC here? - ok
02:30:863 (3) - ctrl+g this flows better - ok

yurunneram wrote:
Naryuga's Hard

00:47:663 (3) - Random whistle here lol. Was this intentional? Don't see anything here in the music - no this is not a random one at all but I add another whistle at 00:46:463 - (with low vol) so it sounds less random. you can hear a cymbal sound here anyways

03:11:513 (1,2,3) - I found this a bit confusing. Though it's fine leaving it as it is ofc - I'll keep this for now :p

Star for the Hard Diff :333333 - wow thanks <3333

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Naryuga's Hard]
01:30:863 (4,5) - move 5 to 01:30:863 - and 4 to 01:31:313 - , the spacing is more smooth imo - fixed
01:38:363 (2,3) - you can try to ctrl+g on them, and fix the stack/spacing. the pattern can be more fun to play and looks much better - ok I'll try to find more fun way with Ctrl+G.
the overall rhythm in this diff is kinda nice
good luck

Thank you guys!

Update: http://puu.sh/7TQLe.osu

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-04-03T10:29:37+00:00

hi~

[Easy]

01:38:963 (4,1) - blanketが不十分かも。sliderのcurveを少しきつくすると良いと思います

[Insane]

01:34:763 (2) - stack on the head of 01:33:863 (3) -

01:53:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ある程度対照的なpatternにした方が良いと思いました

SPOILER

496,36,113663,5,6,1:0:0:0:
496,174,113813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,105,113963,1,10,0:0:0:0:
485,105,114113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,174,114263,1,2,1:0:0:0:
369,36,114413,1,0,1:0:0:0:
485,105,114563,1,10,0:0:0:0:

02:12:863 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great!

02:16:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 少し整えて6角形とかどうでしょう

SPOILER

508,218,136613,5,0,1:0:0:0:
351,302,136763,1,10,0:0:0:0:
356,119,136913,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,119,136988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,119,137063,1,2,1:0:0:0:
451,303,137213,1,0,1:0:0:0:
461,125,137363,1,10,0:0:0:0:
300,206,137513,1,0,1:0:0:0:

02:26:513 (2,3) - このpartはstackをずらしているみたいですがこれはずらさない？
02:33:863 (3,4) - ＾

[litoluna's Normal]

00:42:263 (2) - ゲージにかぶり気味なのでもう少し下にずらした方が良いかも
02:56:513 (2,1) - stack少しずれてます

[Naryuga's Hard]

01:53:363 (6) - x:106 y:72で01:52:463 (4) - ときれいにstackできると思います

[Alter's Extra]

01:54:263 (3,4,5) - DS大きくした方が良いと思いました。1/4tripletと間違えそうなので
02:39:188 (7) - もう少し右（x:299くらい）できれいに見えると思います

よろしければM4M頼みます

"のうりん"の方も応援してます～
~Good Luck~

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-04-03T11:41:11+00:00

@yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:
Hihi OwO)/ Gomen for late mod ^^"

Let's go! >w<
litoluna's Normal

00:12:863 (1) - This is really nazi. Bring the middle node closer to the end of (3) so that the blanketing is tighter
ok~

00:38:963 (1) - Put a whistle or finish here?
nice
01:03:263 (1) - Missing whistle
umm keep it
01:05:663 (1) - Should have a whistle here instead of the ends of the slider
I feel this sound better this
01:06:713 (2) - Remove whistle at end

^ if ur not making the above 2 changes, then you should at least add a whistle on 01:07:313 (3) 's tail for consistency

01:08:063 (1) - Whistle on head
I think finish is better
01:12:863 (1) - ^
^
01:51:263 (1) - Stack isn't perfect
ok
02:00:863 (1) - Whistle on head
I think finish is better
03:05:663 (1) - ^
^
03:08:063 (1) - ^
^
03:10:463 (1) - ^
^
Seems like whenever you put a finish you don't put a whistle. I find that quite strange. There should be a whistle even though you have a finish there

Have a nice day desu ^^)/

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

@wcx19911123

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here

[litoluna's Normal]
01:54:413 (2,3,4) - this rhythm is a bit too hard to read as Normal diff imo(triple beats start at red line)
putting on hold~
02:24:113 - add a note here to follow the drum?
ok!
03:04:763 (3) - hope you can move it down a bit or change a direction, it's really near the edge of the screen
fixed
good luck

@RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
hi~

[litoluna's Normal]
00:42:263 (2) - ゲージにかぶり気味なのでもう少し下にずらした方が良いかも
今の流れ崩したくないので保留！
02:56:513 (2,1) - stack少しずれてます
直しました！！
よろしければM4M頼みます
"のうりん"の方も応援してます～
~Good Luck~

thanks modding!!!!
i was helpful

update:http://puu.sh/7UkL5.zip

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-03T12:44:42+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
hi~

[Easy]
01:38:963 (4,1) - blanketが不十分かも。sliderのcurveを少しきつくすると良いと思います　fixed
[Insane]
01:34:763 (2) - stack on the head of 01:33:863 (3) - 　fixed
01:53:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ある程度対照的なpatternにした方が良いと思いました　fixed
SPOILER
496,36,113663,5,6,1:0:0:0:
496,174,113813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,105,113963,1,10,0:0:0:0:
485,105,114113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,174,114263,1,2,1:0:0:0:
369,36,114413,1,0,1:0:0:0:
485,105,114563,1,10,0:0:0:0:
02:12:863 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great!
02:16:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 少し整えて6角形とかどうでしょう　fixed
SPOILER
508,218,136613,5,0,1:0:0:0:
351,302,136763,1,10,0:0:0:0:
356,119,136913,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,119,136988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,119,137063,1,2,1:0:0:0:
451,303,137213,1,0,1:0:0:0:
461,125,137363,1,10,0:0:0:0:
300,206,137513,1,0,1:0:0:0:
02:26:513 (2,3) - このpartはstackをずらしているみたいですがこれはずらさない？　fixed
02:33:863 (3,4) - ＾　ここは個人的にずらしたくないのでno change
よろしければM4M頼みます
"のうりん"の方も応援してます～
~Good Luck~

フォームのメールがなぜか届いてなくて、Request来てたのに今気づきました

少し忙しいので、来週頭までにpostできればと思います。

thanks for modding & star!

@Guestの方々
ここまでにpostしてある状態でアップデートしました。

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-04-11T02:15:03+00:00

Sorry for the super late mod.

[Easy]

00:46:763 - if this green line isn't used for anything, delete
00:14:963 (4,1) - blanket looks a too squished. Space out a little

[Normal]

Doesn't have video for some reason

[Hard]

02:55:763 (4,1) - i think the flow from (4) to (1) is weird. Should try placing (1) somewhere else.

[Alter's Extra]

Doesn't have video
00:35:063 (4) - i think Ctrl + G would flow better
01:22:313 (1) - slow SV would fit here too
02:39:263 (1) - move to (296. 304)

Ehh, sorry you waited so long for this short mod, not really a fan of this type of music. Map looks pretty clean though so you can have dis

Good Luck!

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-11T03:35:54+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

Btw is that BG Weiss from RWBY?

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs
[Insane]
00:25:763 (6,1) - I can see the consistent jumps you've been making for each combo split, but for this one the DS is just too wide.

00:55:313 (2,3) - Might as well make a triplet here instead, because this slider overlap sort of pattern looks random, since it kinda appears out of the blue?

01:42:563 (8) - Sounds a bit odd, because it runs over an important beat at 01:42:713. So, it should be shrinked to a 1/2 slider, ending at 01:42:713 so it hits that strong beat in the music. Then add a not at 01:42:863 or make a 1/2 sldier here too (replacing 01:43:013 (1) - ).

03:16:313 (1) - ^

[Naryuga's Hard]
Ar +1, the way as it is now doesn't really match the speed of the music's tempo (which is mainly made up of fast electric guitar notes).

00:30:113 (2,4) - Erm, move more apart please, so your objects will have consistent spacing in between each other as well.

01:20:513 (3) - Remove the note here, it ruins the consistency in this rhythm. This rhythm in the music is similar to the cycle at 01:17:513 - , where there is no note at 01:18:113 (the 3rd red tick mark). Now in this rhythm cycle (01:19:913), shouldn't it be the same?

02:27:863 (3,4) - Unstack please. after seeing how 02:27:263 (1,2) - is stacked, this may trick players into thinking that these notes are also 1 full beat apart (when really, they're only 1/2 beat apart).

[litoluna's Normal]
AR +1, same reason as the previous diff.

00:49:463 (3) - NC?

01:35:663 (3) - Make it a curved slider like this?

SPOILER

idk, it just looks a bit funny being straight, after seeing that the previous slider 01:34:163 (1) - was also straight.

Really nice mapset. Have a star

Good luck!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-11T06:01:16+00:00

Knotts wrote:
Sorry for the super late mod.

[Easy]
00:46:763 - if this green line isn't used for anything, delete　deleted
00:14:963 (4,1) - blanket looks a too squished. Space out a little fixed
Ehh, sorry you waited so long for this short mod, not really a fan of this type of music. Map looks pretty clean though so you can have dis

Good Luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue

Btw is that BG Weiss from RWBY? Yes. but I didn't know about it lol
3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs
[Insane]
00:25:763 (6,1) - I can see the consistent jumps you've been making for each combo split, but for this one the DS is just too wide. fixed

00:55:313 (2,3) - Might as well make a triplet here instead, because this slider overlap sort of pattern looks random, since it kinda appears out of the blue?fixed

01:42:563 (8) - Sounds a bit odd, because it runs over an important beat at 01:42:713. So, it should be shrinked to a 1/2 slider, ending at 01:42:713 so it hits that strong beat in the music. Then add a not at 01:42:863 or make a 1/2 sldier here too (replacing 01:43:013 (1) - ). This slider is Lyrics follow . I think not weird.

03:16:313 (1) - ^ I use same pattern.
ex)00:11:513 (1) - 00:13:913 (1) - etc.

Really nice mapset. Have a star
Good luck!

thanks for modding & stars!

@りとるなさん、おるたさん
ビデオの設定は譜面更新する時にこちらでやります。

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-04-12T11:21:43+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
hi~
[Naryuga's Hard]
01:53:363 (6) - x:106 y:72で01:52:463 (4) - ときれいにstackできると思います - ok

Knotts wrote:
[Hard]
02:55:763 (4,1) - i think the flow from (4) to (1) is weird. Should try placing (1) somewhere else. - just come up with a new idea so lemme attempt
Good Luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue
[Naryuga's Hard]
Ar +1, the way as it is now doesn't really match the speed of the music's tempo (which is mainly made up of fast electric guitar notes). - keep AR7 for now. I didn't mapped this easier than other AR8 Hard maps. The jumps are not so big so players can be easily read with the current one, and in some parts AR8 is quite fast because of slow slider velocity. With AR8 the difficulty gap with Normal and Hard will be too much. If some other person tells me to do so I'd fix though

00:30:113 (2,4) - Erm, move more apart please, so your objects will have consistent spacing in between each other as well. - actually the spacing is quite consistent... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1504575

01:20:513 (3) - Remove the note here, it ruins the consistency in this rhythm. This rhythm in the music is similar to the cycle at 01:17:513 - , where there is no note at 01:18:113 (the 3rd red tick mark). Now in this rhythm cycle (01:19:913), shouldn't it be the same? - then... how about 01:21:713 - ?? ...Sorry but I didn't make change here, the additional drum sound is not that bad to me

02:27:863 (3,4) - Unstack please. after seeing how 02:27:263 (1,2) - is stacked, this may trick players into thinking that these notes are also 1 full beat apart (when really, they're only 1/2 beat apart). - unstacked 02:27:263 (1,2) - instead.

Good luck!

Thank you guys!

Update: http://puu.sh/85AlU.osu

難易度表記の仕様、中途半端に前のやつに戻ったんですかね

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2014-04-16T08:14:40+00:00

リクエストありがとうございます！遅くなってすみません

[General]
Insane,Extraで気合フラッシュを使いすぎかな？と思いました。

[Easy]
言うことがなかったです…

[litoluna's Normal]

00:59:663 (1) - add NC

[Hard]

01:17:363 (3) - delete note

[Insane]

01:10:463 (1) - ブランケットを丁寧にしましょ～
01:34:763 (2,3) - ctrl+G
02:17:363 (7,8) - ctrl+G
03:17:063 (4,5,6,7) - 流れが少し気になるので、こんな感じ(http://puu.sh/8aKFh.jpg)にしてみてはどうでしょう
03:20:888 (6,7) - 03:21:413 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - これにうまく被せるために x228,y186に移動させませんか？

Extraは疲れ果てたので省略します

Good luck

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-16T08:52:22+00:00

kaCha wrote:
リクエストありがとうございます！遅くなってすみません

[General]
Insane,Extraで気合フラッシュを使いすぎかな？と思いました。特に短時間にたくさん使っているわけではないので、BATに言われたら変えます。

[Easy]
言うことがなかったです…

[Insane]
01:10:463 (1) - ブランケットを丁寧にしましょ～ ok
01:34:763 (2,3) - ctrl+G　fixed
02:17:363 (7,8) - ctrl+G　fixed
03:17:063 (4,5,6,7) - 流れが少し気になるので、こんな感じ(http://puu.sh/8aKFh.jpg)にしてみてはどうでしょう　参考に前のスライダーから弄りました
03:20:888 (6,7) - 03:21:413 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - これにうまく被せるために x228,y186に移動させませんか？　ストリームの形を変えたので、座標は違いますが参考にfixed
Extraは疲れ果てたので省略します
Good luck

thanks for modding!

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-04-20T00:54:50+00:00

@kaCha
No change on my diff (おそらく次の(1)を強調させる感じの意見だと思いますが、このnoteで裏にあるデスボイスっぽい感じの"You"をフォローしてあげたいです、特に始まりのとこなので無いと寂しい……)

Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2014-04-23T12:19:34+00:00

Hi,
From M4M -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/164155 (or if you really don't like the song or something -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/132886)
Thank you to say what you change or not (if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
03:22:463 - Add a note?

[Insane]

00:11:513 (1) - add clap on the head. (or move this slider 00:11:363 (6) - here, it sounds better to me, in that case you can add a triple ended by this slider 00:11:963 (2) - )
00:21:113 (1) - ^
00:25:913 (1) - ^
00:41:513 (4) - I don't mind but this note is hard to read, really
00:59:213 (4,5) - CTRL+G those 2 selected notes?
01:06:113 (2) - I would put this slider in the direction of 01:06:413 (3) - like this:
01:14:963 (6) - this is also a bit hard to play, I would add this at the end of the 5 notes stream instead of the beginning (and adjust the hitsounds)
01:19:463 (3,4,1) - I love those things
02:39:263 (1,3,5) - looks a bit messy, I suggest you something like this (I lowered the AR for the screen) : http://puu.sh/8k6UC.jpg
03:22:463 - Add a note at the end of the slider?

That's it, I really like, good job.

[Alter's Extra]

01:25:913 (8) - This is following your style but putting this at the end of the stream looks better to me though and it's nicer to play imo.
02:03:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - I personally don't like those 2007/Eighto shape
02:43:613 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Arrange the shape a bit more like this maybe : http://puu.sh/8k7U6.jpg
02:51:263 (1) - I would lower the spacing a bit, and put a higher one for the next 1/4 sliders.
03:22:163 (7) - I would stack 2 notes here.

Last edited by Saoji 2014-04-23T17:28:23+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-23T16:11:50+00:00

Yales wrote:
Hi,
From M4M -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/164155 (or if you really don't like the song or something -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/132886)
Thank you to say what you change or not (if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
03:22:463 - Add a note? unnecessary I think

[Insane]
00:11:513 (1) - add clap on the head. (or move this slider 00:11:363 (6) - here, it sounds better to me, in that case you can add a triple ended by this slider 00:11:963 (2) - ) no change. Guitar sounds bit stronger on 01:11:363 (4) - imo.
00:21:113 (1) - ^ same above
00:25:913 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:513 (4) - I don't mind but this note is hard to read, really no change. I like this pattern.
00:59:213 (4,5) - CTRL+G those 2 selected notes? nice! fixed
01:06:113 (2) - I would put this slider in the direction of 01:06:413 (3) - like this: changed to curve slider
01:14:963 (6) - this is also a bit hard to play, I would add this at the end of the 5 notes stream instead of the beginning (and adjust the hitsounds) I think current state is no problem.
01:19:463 (3,4,1) - I love those things me too owo!
02:39:263 (1,3,5) - looks a bit messy, I suggest you something like this (I lowered the AR for the screen) : http://puu.sh/8k6UC.jpg I want keep parallels pattern.
03:22:463 - Add a note at the end of the slider? same above

That's it, I really like, good job. Thanks!

thanks for modding!
I will mod your map

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-04-24T06:23:03+00:00

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General

00:20:063 - Ask the BATs to put the title text here (if you haven't) until 00:24:863 -
The way you used the kickdrum as default hitnormal is wrong: Every hitsound now has a kick sound on it which made the hitsounds heavy and unclear every time. At least use it as a hitfinish or something, but not hitnormal.
Increase hitsounds volume 10%?

Easy

00:46:763 - Add note here?
00:51:263 - ^ especially because this is on a downbeat
02:20:063 (1,2) - It'll be better if you could merge these into a slider.
02:21:263 (3,4) - Make this into one slider with 3 repeats, this seems too much for easy
02:24:863 (1,1) - Avoid this on Easy diffs, just remove the circle and start the spinner right there
03:01:913 (2,3) - I'd rather merge these into a slider with a repeat
03:13:013 (1,1) - No please. Merge into one.
03:15:263 (1,1) - too far, put the circle more to the center

Normal

00:17:663 (1,2) - Please merge into one slider
00:30:863 (3) - This looks ugly. Remove the second sliderpoint to make it straight
00:47:663 (1) - Remove NC and
00:49:463 (3) - put NC here
01:16:313 (1) - Remove NC
02:03:863 (2) - Somehow sounds better if you use a doublet here (2 circle instead of this slider)

Naryuga did a good job on his Hard diff. Flawless.

Insane

00:36:563 (4,1) - Hmmmm I don't think a stack after a jump is a good idea
01:17:063 (1,2,3) - not good, flow is broken. Don't place jump right after streams
01:19:313 (2) - I'd rather use double notes instead of slider
01:22:013 (5,6) - Merge into slider?
01:26:513 (6,7) - Not a good jump; yet too far
02:51:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just too much to stack, I'd rather put them regularly
02:51:863 (1,2,3,4) - These are just too far.
02:52:763 (4,1) - especially this.

That's all I can mod, I can't stand the hitsounds any longer ;w;
Sorry, but I hope this helps!

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-04-24T06:48:40+00:00

Yales wrote:
Hi,

[General]
03:22:463 - Add a note? - I don't really think it is necessary as no drum sounds follow this

inverness wrote:
Mod request from my queue

General
00:20:063 - Ask the BATs to put the title text here (if you haven't) until 00:24:863 -
The way you used the kickdrum as default hitnormal is wrong: Every hitsound now has a kick sound on it which made the hitsounds heavy and unclear every time. At least use it as a hitfinish or something, but not hitnormal. - to me it is not that bad but... yea I can feel though
Increase hitsounds volume 10%? - keeeeeeeeeeeeko will decide whether the change is needed or not
Naryuga did a good job on his Hard diff. Flawless. - xD Thank you!

That's all I can mod, I can't stand the hitsounds any longer ;w;
Sorry, but I hope this helps!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-24T07:12:31+00:00

inverness wrote:
Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
00:20:063 - Ask the BATs to put the title text here (if you haven't) until 00:24:863 - ok!
The way you used the kickdrum as default hitnormal is wrong: Every hitsound now has a kick sound on it which made the hitsounds heavy and unclear every time. At least use it as a hitfinish or something, but not hitnormal. Umm There is no hitsounds that is vacant other. And Bass drum of this song is the beat of the most.
Increase hitsounds volume 10%? I think currently is fine.
Easy
00:46:763 - Add note here? nope
00:51:263 - ^ especially because this is on a downbeat added
02:20:063 (1,2) - It'll be better if you could merge these into a slider. ok changed
02:21:263 (3,4) - Make this into one slider with 3 repeats, this seems too much for easy I don't like 3 repeats slider
02:24:863 (1,1) - Avoid this on Easy diffs, just remove the circle and start the spinner right there ok fixed
03:01:913 (2,3) - I'd rather merge these into a slider with a repeat Sorry I want keep this pattern.previous is like this 01:54:713 (2) - but I want a bit change pattern.
03:13:013 (1,1) - No please. Merge into one. keep. I change it if pointed out to other people
03:15:263 (1,1) - too far, put the circle more to the center fixed
Insane
00:36:563 (4,1) - Hmmmm I don't think a stack after a jump is a good idea no change. I use same pattern.
01:17:063 (1,2,3) - not good, flow is broken. Don't place jump right after streams no change. I want to emphasize & this is fine I think.
01:19:313 (2) - I'd rather use double notes instead of slider ok changed.
01:22:013 (5,6) - Merge into slider? no change. I want to emphasize
01:26:513 (6,7) - Not a good jump; yet too far no change. I kike this placement.
02:51:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just too much to stack, I'd rather put them regularly
02:51:863 (1,2,3,4) - These are just too far. Sorry alredy changed this pattern. but I can't update cuz Server problems
02:52:763 (4,1) - especially this. Same above & 02:52:763 (2,3) - changed kick slider.
That's all I can mod, I can't stand the hitsounds any longer ;w;
Sorry, but I hope this helps!

thanks for modding!

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-04-25T11:07:07+00:00

thanks modding guys!!!!
I was helpful.
http://puu.sh/8mJyk.osu
sorry late.

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-25T11:15:35+00:00

Updated!

そして残念なお知らせですが、おるたさんがosuを引退してしまいゲストdiffの更新が私には難しくなりました。
なのでマップセットから削除することを決断しました。

I have bad news. Alternative has quit osu! and update of his guest diff is hard for me.
So I decided to remove it from mapset.

RIP Alternative
>>Download Alter's Extra<<
(Apr. 26, 2014 ver.)

Last edited by keeeeeeko 2014-06-20T10:05:30+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-04-30T13:52:33+00:00

[Insane]

00:43:913 このスライダーは曲に合わせて見たときに、音がないからとりあえずおいてみたみたいな感じがあるので、やめたほうがいいかと思います

00:58:988　ここにも音をいれてみてはいかがでしょう

01:05:663　Ctrl G で向き逆のほうがいいかもです

01:25:688　いちを前の譜面よりもう少しはなしたほうがいいと思います

01:34:313　Circle
01:34:388 Circle
01:34:463 赤までスタイダー

01:56:963　赤までスライダーに変更
01:57:263　Circle 配置

03:01:313　Circle 配置
03:01:463　赤までスライダーに変更
03:01:763　Circle 配置

03:02:288　Circle 配置
03:02:363　Circle配置

03:02:513　３連打もしくわ繰り返しを使った３連打

[Hard]

03:11:963 なるべくやめたほうがいいもです

[Nomal]

00:38:963 ここは色変更せずに00:39:863　ここから色変更がいいかと思います

00:48:563　ノーマルの譜面で重ねるのはNGだと思います

00:58:163　ここから　01:00:563　ここまで色変更無しで

以上です

参考になれば幸いです

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-30T14:48:57+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
[Insane]

00:43:913 このスライダーは曲に合わせて見たときに、音がないからとりあえずおいてみたみたいな感じがあるので、やめたほうがいいかと思います個人的に特に気にならないのと、00:44:213 (1) - からボーカルが入るタイミングで単発のパターンを始めたいのでno change

00:58:988　ここにも音をいれてみてはいかがでしょう特に必要と感じないのでno change

01:05:663　Ctrl G で向き逆のほうがいいかもですそうすると01:05:363 (5,6,1) - が直線になってしまうのでno change

01:25:688　いちを前の譜面よりもう少しはなしたほうがいいと思います少し上にあげてみました。

01:34:313　Circle
01:34:388 Circle
01:34:463 赤までスタイダー00:43:913 と同じです。

01:56:963　赤までスライダーに変更
01:57:263　Circle 配置　提案とは少し違いますがfixed

03:01:313　Circle 配置
03:01:463　赤までスライダーに変更
03:01:763　Circle 配置　ボーカルに合わせてスライダー置いてるのでno change

03:02:288　Circle 配置必要ないと思うのでno change
03:02:363　Circle配置

03:02:513　３連打もしくわ繰り返しを使った３連打ドラム聞けばわかりますがここは03:02:363 - から3連打になってます。

以上です

参考になれば幸いです

Random moddingありがとうございました

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-04-30T14:51:40+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
[Hard]

03:11:963 なるべくやめたほうがいいもです - 指摘もらったの初めてじゃないので結局やめました

以上です

参考になれば幸いです

http://puu.sh/8tvUu.osu　thanks!

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-05-05T20:13:00+00:00

Hi :3 from my modding queue ~

[General]

Ahh, okay! >w<

[Easy]

00:29:063 (3) - Remove clap. I thought it doesn't fit to use.
00:41:888 (1,2) - Make by this picture may cause look better and flow better?
SPOILER

02:40:463 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Slider 02:40:463 (3) - doesn't blanket slider end of 02:41:663 (1) - . You can do it by copy this code, then fix

Code

264,68,160463,2,0,P|312:92|332:152,1,120,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,161363,1,2,0:3:0:0:
265,289,161663,6,0,P|213:209|266:141,1,180,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
316,100,162863,2,0,P|280:72|232:72,2,89.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
254,147,164063,6,0,P|326:195|419:172,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,100,165263,2,0,P|480:132|492:192,1,120,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,166163,1,2,0:3:0:0:
408,320,166463,6,0,P|328:332|260:268,1,180,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:

02:57:563 (2) - It doesn't necessary to use curve slider. You may just use straight slider would be fine enough imo.
03:09:263 (2) - Move 2nd point of slider to up a bit and move last point of slider to right a bit to blanket slider of 03:08:063 (1) - that better.
03:15:263 (1) - Add finish in this spinner, too.
03:18:263 (1) - Remove clap? I felt it is weird a sound for here.

[litoluna's Normal]

Umm... I felt you have used the hitsound in this diff is quite less. So you can use some slider-tick hitsound if you want, but it's up to you.
00:09:263 (2,3) - Using clap hitsound in these are too loud. So I thought that use whistle instead would be better, which I suggest that change in slider begin and end of (2), and slider begin of (3). Another one, to cause it's better than this, I suggest that add calp in slider end of (3), too.
00:30:863 (3) - Please remove clap in slider begin. It doesn't fit with the rhythm.
00:40:463 (3) - ^
00:42:263 (2) - This, too. Please remove clap here.
00:44:663 (2) - ^
00:45:263 (3) - Same with 00:09:863 (3) -
00:48:563 (2) - Please try to aviod stack with 00:47:063, because it looks too difficult for normal diff to read it.
00:49:463 (3) - Remove clap here, too.
00:50:063 (4) - Same with 00:09:863 (3) -
00:51:863 (2) - Remove clap.
00:54:263 (2,3) - Same with 00:49:463 (3) - and 00:40:463 (3) -
01:05:663 (1) - Please add finish to follow the rhythm.
00:58:463 (2,3) - Put these notes like this picture. I though it may be better to listen and play in normal diff.
SPOILER
01:12:863 (1) - Did you forget to add clap in slider end? Please add it.
01:30:863 (3) - I thought that using clap in slider repeat doesn't fit with the vocal imo. So please remove itin slider repeat. However, add it in slider end instead to follow the rhythm.
01:32:663 (2) - It doesn't fit with the rhythm. Please remove clap.
01:33:263 (3) - Add clap in slider repeat, too.
01:35:063 (2) - Remove clap. The reason same with 01:32:663 (2) - .
01:35:663 (3) - Same with 01:30:863 (3) -
01:37:463 (2) - This, too. Please remove clap.
01:40:463 (3) - Same with 01:30:863 (3) -
01:57:563 (3) - Please remove clap in slider repeat, but add it in slider begin and end instead, to follow the rhythm.
02:05:663 (1) - For this diff, you don't should use this spinner end in 02:06:863 - or follow the vocal, bacause it's too short. So please end spinner at 02:08:063 - like other diff, which it fit with playing, I think. Then if you fix it, please add finish in this spinner, too.
02:23:063 (3) - Add clap in slider end, too. This rhythm in the song is quite heavy.
02:24:113 (2,3) - Change these are 3/2 slider, which I thought slider begin of (3) doesn't fit with anything.
02:36:863 (1) - Umm...slider is so weird. If you want it to look better, you can use 02:35:663 (2) - then use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J.
02:41:663 (1) - Please use curve slider would be look better.

[Naryuga's Hard]

00:59:063 (3) - You have used normal sampleset in this slider end. Please change is soft sampleset.
02:33:563 (3) - Make this slider is a vertical like this picture would be better?
SPOILER
03:11:963 (2,3,4) - You can make this flow better by may use (3) symmetrical with (2), and move slider tail of (4) like this picture, which I thought it would flow better.
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:11:063 (3) - Reduce curvature by move 2nd pouint of slider to down a bit, and may move this slider a bit to cause it look better, which I suggest that move this slider to x:140 y:111.
00:14:913 (6,7,8) - I don't like a circle (7) stack with other slider end, because it cause me felt awkward. So please try aviod stacking or overlap it by I suggest that make by this picture, which I thought it would flow better.
SPOILER
00:35:963 (2) - Maybe move to x:76 y:172. It would flow better.
00:39:863 (3,4) - The reason same with 00:14:913 (6,7,8) - a circle (4) stack with other slider end. So if make by this picture would be better imo.
SPOILER
00:41:513 (4) - This, too. Please aviod stacking with slider end by may move to x:188 y:140.
00:41:813 (2) - Move to x:336 y:160 may be better than stacking with 00:40:463 (1) -
00:53:363 (5,6) - Umm... make like this picture may flow better imo.
SPOILER
00:58:163 (1,2,3,4,1) - I want (1) stack with previously notes (00:56:063 (1) - and 00:57:263 (1) -) to cause these are interrelated, and I want to use stream notes in this like this picture.
SPOILER
01:22:013 (5,6,1) - This flow is weird. You may move (5,6) to anywhere that cause flow better.
01:26:513 (6) - When I have compared with the melody or rhythm of song, think that making like this picture would be better? and I thought that you may add whistle and clap in slider end to follow the rhythm.
SPOILER
01:45:413 (1) - Move this to right and up a bit, to cause better stream.
01:45:788 (6,1) - Move (6) to right a bit, and move (1) to x:388 y:260, which which the reason same with previously.
02:16:163 (6,1) - Switch between notes both by use Ctrl+G ti follow the rhythm and melody.
02:54:713 (6) - Move this to x:352 y:144. I thought it would flow better than.
02:57:263 (1) - Switch head and tail of slider by use Ctrl+G would be better?
02:59:363 (7,8) - Please switch between notes both by use Ctrl+G, which it would flow better.
03:07:763 (6) - Move this to x:288 y:176 would flow better than.

I want this has more mods a bit in normal and insane diffs. Bacause for normal diff may necessary to check putting hitsound than this, and insane diff may have some weird flow, but however, This map is so fun and mapping is awesome >w< So I will give a star because I like this song

Good luck~

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-05-06T02:33:00+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3 from my modding queue ~

[General]
Ahh, okay! >w<
[Naryuga's Hard]
00:59:063 (3) - You have used normal sampleset in this slider end. Please change is soft sampleset. - fixed!
02:33:563 (3) - Make this slider is a vertical like this picture would be better? - ok I'll try it
SPOILER
03:11:963 (2,3,4) - You can make this flow better by may use (3) symmetrical with (2), and move slider tail of (4) like this picture, which I thought it would flow better. - changed into something which is almost like yours
SPOILER
I want this has more mods a bit in normal and insane diffs. Bacause for normal diff may necessary to check putting hitsound than this, and insane diff may have some weird flow, but however, This map is so fun and mapping is awesome >w< So I will give a star because I like this song

Good luck~

ty

UPDATE: http://puu.sh/8B1vd.osu

sionKotori

648 posts

Joined September 2011

sionKotori 2014-05-06T15:45:58+00:00

なるほど

for m4m

Easy,litoluna's Normalにつきましては、特に指摘箇所が無かったためSkipさせていただきました。神mapでした

[General]

BGとVideoが同じ絵(？)で、BGが1366x768、Videoが1280x720なので、どちらかに統一したほうがいいかも・・・？

[Naryuga's Hard]

00:29:663 (1) - を 00:28:913 (2) - にBlanket
00:30:113 (2) - を 00:29:663 (1) - にBlanket なーんかこの変ん？ってなる配置
00:30:863 (4) - これも
00:31:313 (5) - せっかく末端にかけて弧を描くようにスライダー作ってるんだから4の末端にBlanketさせるような配置でもいいかも？
01:08:063 (1) - Ctrl+G
プロマップでした見るところ無かった…(土下座

[Insane]

00:12:263 (4,5,6) - 4-5-6のSpacingを一定に
00:13:163 (2) - を 00:14:513 (3) - にStack
00:14:663 (5,6,7,1) - 5の末端-6-7-1で四角形に
SPOILER
00:24:263 (4,5,6) - 4の末端-5-6で綺麗な三角形に
00:30:113 (2) - 末端をx:280 y:40 にして00:29:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - をBlanketさせる
00:42:263 (4,5) - 4と5を入れ替えたほうがいいかも・・・？
00:49:388 (4,5) - を 00:48:113 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - にBlanket
00:53:363 (5,6,1) - Spacingを一定に
00:59:063 (3,4,5,6) - 菱形に
SPOILER
01:03:263 (1,3) - 1の角度を急にして3の始端を1にBlanket
SPOILER
01:05:513 (6) - remove
01:06:113 (2,3,4) - 2の末端-3-4で綺麗な三角形に
01:09:863 (5,6) - 5と6の入れ替え？
01:21:863 (4,5,6) - Spacingを一定に
01:34:613 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:56:063 (1) - 中央の節をx:292 y:48にすると前のストリームと合わさって見栄え良くなるかな～
SPOILER
02:53:363 - ノーツが欲しい
03:07:313 (3,4,5,6,7) - 星型配置とか example:
SPOILER
03:21:788 (7,8,9,10,11) - 2~6をコピペして点対称->Ctrl+G、7にあたるノーツをx:272 y:148 に配置するとこうなります見た目の違和感はなくなると思います
SPOILER
こういうBlanketが綺麗な譜面は大好きです

Rankまってます！

*Edit
20時間前に他の方がmodしてたみたいですね、気づかなくて申し訳ない･･･

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-05-07T02:32:15+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3 from my modding queue ~

[General]
Ahh, okay! >w<
[Easy]
00:29:063 (3) - Remove clap. I thought it doesn't fit to use.
00:41:888 (1,2) - Make by this picture may cause look better and flow better?
SPOILER
02:40:463 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Slider 02:40:463 (3) - doesn't blanket slider end of 02:41:663 (1) - . You can do it by copy this code, then fix
Code
264,68,160463,2,0,P|312:92|332:152,1,120,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,161363,1,2,0:3:0:0:
265,289,161663,6,0,P|213:209|266:141,1,180,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
316,100,162863,2,0,P|280:72|232:72,2,89.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
254,147,164063,6,0,P|326:195|419:172,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,100,165263,2,0,P|480:132|492:192,1,120,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,166163,1,2,0:3:0:0:
408,320,166463,6,0,P|328:332|260:268,1,180,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
02:57:563 (2) - It doesn't necessary to use curve slider. You may just use straight slider would be fine enough imo.
03:09:263 (2) - Move 2nd point of slider to up a bit and move last point of slider to right a bit to blanket slider of 03:08:063 (1) - that better.
03:15:263 (1) - Add finish in this spinner, too.
03:18:263 (1) - Remove clap? I felt it is weird a sound for here.
[Insane]
00:11:063 (3) - Reduce curvature by move 2nd pouint of slider to down a bit, and may move this slider a bit to cause it look better, which I suggest that move this slider to x:140 y:111.
00:14:913 (6,7,8) - I don't like a circle (7) stack with other slider end, because it cause me felt awkward. So please try aviod stacking or overlap it by I suggest that make by this picture, which I thought it would flow better.
SPOILER
00:35:963 (2) - Maybe move to x:76 y:172. It would flow better.
00:39:863 (3,4) - The reason same with 00:14:913 (6,7,8) - a circle (4) stack with other slider end. So if make by this picture would be better imo.
SPOILER
00:41:513 (4) - This, too. Please aviod stacking with slider end by may move to x:188 y:140.
00:41:813 (2) - Move to x:336 y:160 may be better than stacking with 00:40:463 (1) -
00:53:363 (5,6) - Umm... make like this picture may flow better imo.
SPOILER
00:58:163 (1,2,3,4,1) - I want (1) stack with previously notes (00:56:063 (1) - and 00:57:263 (1) -) to cause these are interrelated, and I want to use stream notes in this like this picture. Umm I want to keep. and currently is fine imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1581825
SPOILER
01:22:013 (5,6,1) - This flow is weird. You may move (5,6) to anywhere that cause flow better.
01:26:513 (6) - When I have compared with the melody or rhythm of song, think that making like this picture would be better? and I thought that you may add whistle and clap in slider end to follow the rhythm.
SPOILER
01:45:413 (1) - Move this to right and up a bit, to cause better stream.
01:45:788 (6,1) - Move (6) to right a bit, and move (1) to x:388 y:260, which which the reason same with previously.
02:16:163 (6,1) - Switch between notes both by use Ctrl+G ti follow the rhythm and melody.
02:54:713 (6) - Move this to x:352 y:144. I thought it would flow better than.
02:57:263 (1) - Switch head and tail of slider by use Ctrl+G would be better?
02:59:363 (7,8) - Please switch between notes both by use Ctrl+G, which it would flow better.
03:07:763 (6) - Move this to x:288 y:176 would flow better than.
I want this has more mods a bit in normal and insane diffs. Bacause for normal diff may necessary to check putting hitsound than this, and insane diff may have some weird flow, but however, This map is so fun and mapping is awesome >w< So I will give a star because I like this song

Good luck~

sionKotori wrote:
なるほど

for m4m

Easy,litoluna's Normalにつきましては、特に指摘箇所が無かったためSkipさせていただきました。神mapでした

[General]
BGとVideoが同じ絵(？)で、BGが1366x768、Videoが1280x720なので、どちらかに統一したほうがいいかも・・・？比率は同じなので現状で大丈夫だと思います
[Insane]
00:12:263 (4,5,6) - 4-5-6のSpacingを一定に
00:13:163 (2) - を 00:14:513 (3) - にStack 時間的に結構離れてるし特にスタックする必要もないと感じたのでno change
00:14:663 (5,6,7,1) - 5の末端-6-7-1で四角形に前のmodで配置自体を変えちゃいました;;
SPOILER
00:24:263 (4,5,6) - 4の末端-5-6で綺麗な三角形に多分できました多分
00:30:113 (2) - 末端をx:280 y:40 にして00:29:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - をBlanketさせる座標は少し違いますがfixed
00:42:263 (4,5) - 4と5を入れ替えたほうがいいかも・・・？うーん現状維持で
00:49:388 (4,5) - を 00:48:113 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - にBlanket
00:53:363 (5,6,1) - Spacingを一定にこれも前のmodでパターン変えました
00:59:063 (3,4,5,6) - 菱形に今のパターンが好みなのでこのままで
SPOILER
01:03:263 (1,3) - 1の角度を急にして3の始端を1にBlanket
SPOILER
01:05:513 (6) - remove 他の方にも言われたらそうします
01:06:113 (2,3,4) - 2の末端-3-4で綺麗な三角形に
01:09:863 (5,6) - 5と6の入れ替え？このままで
01:21:863 (4,5,6) - Spacingを一定に少しやり難いと思ってたのでスライダーに変えちゃいました
01:34:613 (1,2,3,4) - ^ わざとこの配置にしてます
01:56:063 (1) - 中央の節をx:292 y:48にすると前のストリームと合わさって見栄え良くなるかな～
SPOILER
02:53:363 - ノーツが欲しい前からドラムの音拾ってたし間を作りたかったのでno change
03:07:313 (3,4,5,6,7) - 星型配置とか example: これも前のmodで変えちゃったのと今のパターンが好みなのでno change
SPOILER
03:21:788 (7,8,9,10,11) - 2~6をコピペして点対称->Ctrl+G、7にあたるノーツをx:272 y:148 に配置するとこうなります見た目の違和感はなくなると思います
SPOILER
こういうBlanketが綺麗な譜面は大好きです
Rankまってます！頑張ります！

*Edit
20時間前に他の方がmodしてたみたいですね、気づかなくて申し訳ない･･･

no coment=fixed
thanks for modding! soooo helpful!

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-05-09T02:21:07+00:00

sioYakitori wrote:
なるほど

<3

[Naryuga's Hard]
00:29:663 (1) - を 00:28:913 (2) - にBlanket
00:30:113 (2) - を 00:29:663 (1) - にBlanket なーんかこの変ん？ってなる配置 - この(1)から垂直っぽい角度で(2)に入るのがｲｲ!って思ってるので前のもあわせていったん保留にしておきます._.
00:30:863 (4) - これも - ^
00:31:313 (5) - せっかく末端にかけて弧を描くようにスライダー作ってるんだから4の末端にBlanketさせるような配置でもいいかも？ - 00:32:513 (2) - でもblanket合わせてあるのでくどいかな...
01:08:063 (1) - Ctrl+G - distance云々言われそうですがどう見てもこっちの方がフローいいのでちょっとやってみます
プロマップでした見るところ無かった…(土下座
Rankまってます！

*Edit
20時間前に他の方がmodしてたみたいですね、気づかなくて申し訳ない･･･

ありがとめう(:3[_____]

Update: http://puu.sh/8ESTD.osu

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2014-05-09T18:21:47+00:00

こんばんはー

大変遅れて申し訳ないです(´；ω；｀)
Easy,Normalわからないのでそれ以外で..

[Naryuga's Hard]

00:06:113 (2) - Ctrl+G

00:57:863 (3) - ここに 00:58:163 (4) - これと同じリバースを入れてみては？

00:28:913 (1) - add NC

00:29:363 (1) - 同じくNCを入れて 00:29:663 (2) - こちらのNCを消してみては？

[Insane]
00:54:563 (6) - ここが00:54:863 (1) - に対して少々近すぎると思われるので
x:314 y:151　あたりに離してみてはどうでしょう？

01:10:463 (1) - 終点をx:216 y:248あたりになるように置くと綺麗かも

01:26:438 (6) - ここにNoteおいて連打でつなげてみては？

00:56:063 (1) - これより前のパートに割と置いてあったので
急に間が大きく空くとタイミングが、ずれそうなので
この間隔で単発を置いてみては？(日本語難しい)

SPOILER

00:57:263 (1) -
ここの後も空いてるので同じように

SPOILER

01:19:913 (1) - Ctrl+G

01:41:363 (5,6,7,1) - 3連打と単発の位置を逆にしたほうが流れがいいかもしれないです

02:01:163 (2,3,4) - ここはVoの声が伸びてるようなのでスライダーに変えてみては
どうでしょうか？

SPOILER

速いリズムなのに
どれも良かったと思います。
是非頑張ってください！

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-05-10T06:11:26+00:00

Lecana wrote:
こんばんはー

大変遅れて申し訳ないです(´；ω；｀) 大丈夫です！
Easy,Normalわからないのでそれ以外で..

[Insane]
00:54:563 (6) - ここが00:54:863 (1) - に対して少々近すぎると思われるので
x:314 y:151　あたりに離してみてはどうでしょう？ fixed

01:10:463 (1) - 終点をx:216 y:248あたりになるように置くと綺麗かも fixed

01:26:438 (6) - ここにNoteおいて連打でつなげてみては？ fixed

00:56:063 (1) - これより前のパートに割と置いてあったので
急に間が大きく空くとタイミングが、ずれそうなので
この間隔で単発を置いてみては？(日本語難しい) ここの間は個人的に気に入っているのと無理にボーカルに合わせなくてもいいかなぁと思うのでno change
SPOILER

00:57:263 (1) -
ここの後も空いてるので同じように^
SPOILER

01:19:913 (1) - Ctrl+G わざとこうしてます

01:41:363 (5,6,7,1) - 3連打と単発の位置を逆にしたほうが流れがいいかもしれないですそもそもドラム聞いたら3連打入ってなかったので単発のパターンに変更しました

02:01:163 (2,3,4) - ここはVoの声が伸びてるようなのでスライダーに変えてみては
どうでしょうか？自分でも無理に音作ってるなぁって思ってたのでこの通りにしました！
SPOILER
[/notice]
速いリズムなのに
どれも良かったと思います。
是非頑張ってください！[/color]

mod & starありがとうございました

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-05-11T01:14:45+00:00

Almost fixed~!
thanks guys!

http://puu.sh/8HqDk.zip

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-05-18T17:03:24+00:00

~~Posted as a reminder. 水曜か木曜あたりにニョキッときます。~~
ニョキッ

[Creator’s word]

さてらいとさんより祝辞のspoilerbox内に”全て僕のものになる（litoluna & Naryugaを生温かい目で見ながら）”を追加　文字の色、大きさ等のエフェクトは任せます

[General]

以下のヒットサウンドファイルってどこかで使われてますか？ツールを使わず、かなり原始的な方法で確認したので漏れがあるかもしれないんですけど、Alternativeさんの難易度が前にあったことを考えると、もしかしたら不要なファイルになってるかもしれません　Recheckのときにもう一度確認したいので、使ってある場合は場所を1箇所だけでもいいのでreplyに書いてもらえると嬉しいです！
[Drum]
1. drum-hitclap.wav
2. drum-hitfinish.wav
3. drum-whistle.wav
[Soft]
1. finish
2. slidertick6

[Easy]

00:47:663 (3) - このスライダー、ただ真っ直ぐに伸ばすよりは、ボーカルの抑揚に合わせて何か動きをつけてあげたほうがかっこいいと思う　例えば http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1618784
00:51:563 (1) - このスライダーを削除して、代わりにnoteを1つ00:51:863 - に追加
この周辺でこのスライダーだけ2番目と4番目の白線両方の上にオブジェクト（noteやスライダー始点/終点のこと）があって、周りに比べて音取りがやや激しい？ + 裏を取ってるみたいで少し違和感ありました
それとこれを修正したら00:51:263 (3) - からnew comboの方がいい、かな？
00:56:063 (1) - 姑さんレベルでかなり細かい内容なんだけど、今のranking criteriaでは「slidertickとsliderslide両方を無音にしてはいけない」っていうルールがあって、このスライダーの場合、N:C1は無音slidertickだから、この25%の音量変化は”sliderslideも聴こえない状態にしてしまう”ために、もしかしたらルールに引っかかるかもしれないグレーゾーンだと思う
曲の音が小さくなってるわけでもないし、低くするにしても25%はちょっと下げすぎかも（個人的には、返しのsamplesetがsoftで十分音量を下げてる状態になってるから、音量は100%のままでkiai effectのためだけに緑線を入れる形でも良さそうだなぁって思いました！）
03:18:863 (2) - *注意*少し好みが入ってるかもしれないです！
この1/1の返しスライダーを2/1スライダーにすると、03:20:063 (1) - 周辺からの1/1間隔で鳴るドラムの音を音取りのほうでももう少し強調できて綺麗じゃないかなぁって

[litoluna’s Normal]

ちょっと難易度の設定が低いと思う　Easy / Hardとの兼ね合いを考えると、少なくともARとODは+1していいんじゃないかな
00:00:863 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - この5%ずつ音量を上げていく音の付け方は綺麗だからこのままrankまで持っていって欲しいなぁって思うんだけど、最初の00:00:863 (1) - のオブジェクトからの音が聴こえ難くて、人によってはinaudibleでunrank判定されるかもしれない　全体的に少なくとも+5%することをオススメします！（それかInsaneみたいにwhistle付けてみるとか？）
00:59:663 (1) - 他のサビ部分みる限りここにはnew comboいらないように見えるから外しちゃおう
01:14:063 (3) - ドラムの音取ったのかなぁとも思ったんだけど、ここも(1,2)と同じようにボーカルフォローで3/2の返しスライダーにした方が合うはず
02:53:363 (4) - ボーカルはあるけど曲の音はないからclapあるのはちょっと違和感

[Naryuga’s Hard]

01:00:263 (3,4) - ここだけ大きいジャンプになってて少し変に目立ってると思う　こんな感じに調整してみない？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1626873
```
0,328,60563,2,0,L|72:336,1,70,10|0,2:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,60863,6,0,P|228:332|252:256,1,140,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
02:27:263 (1) - 前のスピナーのところと似たような音が鳴ってるからこっちもデフォルトのwhistle追加とか？
03:12:938 (1,1) - whistleの音にちょっと違和感　このスピナー2つはパターンから外していいと思う
それと、最初のスピナー終点（03:14:963 - ）のドラムスネアの音が他よりやや弱いから、それも拾えたら綺麗になりそう
例えば、03:14:963 - S:C1 clap, 03:17:363 - N:C1 clapとか

[Insane]

00:16:313 (1,2) - 今の(1) -> (2)の上に持っていく流れを作っちゃうと、(1)からのaimはもちろん、次の(3)までのaimも少し辛くなるんじゃないかなぁと思った　ここで下に向かう流れを作る方が気持ちよく叩けるんじゃないかな
単純に配置を移動したり（ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631611 ）しても修正できるし、下のスクリーンショットみたいにちょっと2014っぽさを出したりしても面白いよね
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631593
```
401,286,16313,6,0,B|381:350|381:350|344:244,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
258,318,16763,1,10,0:0:0:0:
```
00:48:563 (9,1) - この青線配置はちょっと違和感あるかも　曲を聴く限り00:48:713 - からドラムが3つ鳴るから、そのまま音を取って連打にしてもいいんじゃないかな
00:50:813 (5,6) - ここCtrl+Gしたらどうだろう　多少ではあるけど叩きやすくなると思う
00:55:463 (4,5,6,1) - 円を描くようにサークルが並んでるせいか、少し配置が平坦に感じる　(1)の位置に強いドラムの音があるから、(6,1)のスペーシングをもう少し広げてそれをもっと強調できたらプレイも楽しくなると思う　例えば https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631687
01:05:513 (6,1) - (1)の角度のせいで流れが悪くなってるからプレイしにくくなってるように見える　＋01:05:213 (4) - に強いドラムの音があるから、ここに(3,4)にジャンプを作ったほうが合うんじゃないかなぁと思う　音取りがスライダーになっちゃうけど、こんなのとかどうだろう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631929
```
136,92,65363,2,0,P|120:56|120:4,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,112,65663,6,0,L|4:204,2,90,6|0|10,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:50:963 (5) - (4)からの流れを考えると、このスライダーをCtrl+Hしたほうが叩きやすいよ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631988
それと01:50:063 (1) - 01:52:163 (5) - に微妙に被ってて少し見栄えが悪いから、被らないように微調整してあげるともっといいと思う
02:05:588 - ここにもドラムの音があるからnote追加した方が自然な音取りになるはず
03:02:438 (3) - 何をフォローしてclapを置いたかはわかるんだけど、その音って多分1/3 beat（03:02:463 - ）で鳴ってるから、このnoteにclapを置いちゃうとずれて聴こえて少し違和感があるかも　削除して(2)のclapの余韻だけ残す付け方にしたほうが綺麗なはず　もしもう一つどこかに追加したいのであれば、(4)の始点に置いてあげたほうが自然かな？

Take your time!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-05-22T15:54:03+00:00

KSHR wrote:
~~Posted as a reminder. 水曜か木曜あたりにニョキッときます。~~
ニョキッ何故か昔NHKでやってたニャッキ思い出しました

[Creator’s word]
さてらいとさんより祝辞のspoilerbox内に”全て僕のものになる（litoluna & Naryugaを生温かい目で見ながら）”を追加　文字の色、大きさ等のエフェクトは任せますこういうセンス皆無なので考えてみますlol
[General]
以下のヒットサウンドファイルってどこかで使われてますか？ツールを使わず、かなり原始的な方法で確認したので漏れがあるかもしれないんですけど、Alternativeさんの難易度が前にあったことを考えると、もしかしたら不要なファイルになってるかもしれません　Recheckのときにもう一度確認したいので、使ってある場合は場所を1箇所だけでもいいのでreplyに書いてもらえると嬉しいです！
[Drum]
drum-hitclap.wav
drum-hitfinish.wav この2つはデフォルトの音なのですが、00:27:113 (6) - 00:29:438 (4,5) - 等にAdditonsで使用してます。
drum-whistle.wav これも同様にAdditionsで02:35:363 (5) - 02:36:563 (4) - 等に使用してます。
[Soft]
finish 00:14:963 (6) - 01:18:263 (4) - 等で使用してます。
slidertick6 使用して無かったのでremoveしました。
[Easy]
00:47:663 (3) - このスライダー、ただ真っ直ぐに伸ばすよりは、ボーカルの抑揚に合わせて何か動きをつけてあげたほうがかっこいいと思う　例えば http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1618784
00:51:563 (1) - このスライダーを削除して、代わりにnoteを1つ00:51:863 - に追加
この周辺でこのスライダーだけ2番目と4番目の白線両方の上にオブジェクト（noteやスライダー始点/終点のこと）があって、周りに比べて音取りがやや激しい？ + 裏を取ってるみたいで少し違和感ありました
それとこれを修正したら00:51:263 (3) - からnew comboの方がいい、かな？
00:56:063 (1) - 姑さんレベルでかなり細かい内容なんだけど、今のranking criteriaでは「slidertickとsliderslide両方を無音にしてはいけない」っていうルールがあって、このスライダーの場合、N:C1は無音slidertickだから、この25%の音量変化は”sliderslideも聴こえない状態にしてしまう”ために、もしかしたらルールに引っかかるかもしれないグレーゾーンだと思う
曲の音が小さくなってるわけでもないし、低くするにしても25%はちょっと下げすぎかも（個人的には、返しのsamplesetがsoftで十分音量を下げてる状態になってるから、音量は100%のままでkiai effectのためだけに緑線を入れる形でも良さそうだなぁって思いました！）
03:18:863 (2) - *注意*少し好みが入ってるかもしれないです！
この1/1の返しスライダーを2/1スライダーにすると、03:20:063 (1) - 周辺からの1/1間隔で鳴るドラムの音を音取りのほうでももう少し強調できて綺麗じゃないかなぁって
[Insane]
00:16:313 (1,2) - 今の(1) -> (2)の上に持っていく流れを作っちゃうと、(1)からのaimはもちろん、次の(3)までのaimも少し辛くなるんじゃないかなぁと思った　ここで下に向かう流れを作る方が気持ちよく叩けるんじゃないかな
単純に配置を移動したり（ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631611 ）しても修正できるし、下のスクリーンショットみたいにちょっと2014っぽさを出したりしても面白いよね
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631593
401,286,16313,6,0,B|381:350|381:350|344:244,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
258,318,16763,1,10,0:0:0:0:
00:48:563 (9,1) - この青線配置はちょっと違和感あるかも　曲を聴く限り00:48:713 - からドラムが3つ鳴るから、そのまま音を取って連打にしてもいいんじゃないかな
00:50:813 (5,6) - ここCtrl+Gしたらどうだろう　多少ではあるけど叩きやすくなると思う
00:55:463 (4,5,6,1) - 円を描くようにサークルが並んでるせいか、少し配置が平坦に感じる　(1)の位置に強いドラムの音があるから、(6,1)のスペーシングをもう少し広げてそれをもっと強調できたらプレイも楽しくなると思う　例えば https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631687
01:05:513 (6,1) - (1)の角度のせいで流れが悪くなってるからプレイしにくくなってるように見える　＋01:05:213 (4) - に強いドラムの音があるから、ここに(3,4)にジャンプを作ったほうが合うんじゃないかなぁと思う　音取りがスライダーになっちゃうけど、こんなのとかどうだろう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631929
136,92,65363,2,0,P|120:56|120:4,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,112,65663,6,0,L|4:204,2,90,6|0|10,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:50:963 (5) - (4)からの流れを考えると、このスライダーをCtrl+Hしたほうが叩きやすいよ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631988
それと01:50:063 (1) - 01:52:163 (5) - に微妙に被ってて少し見栄えが悪いから、被らないように微調整してあげるともっといいと思う
02:05:588 - ここにもドラムの音があるからnote追加した方が自然な音取りになるはずスライダー消して単発+5連にしました。
03:02:438 (3) - 何をフォローしてclapを置いたかはわかるんだけど、その音って多分1/3 beat（03:02:463 - ）で鳴ってるから、このnoteにclapを置いちゃうとずれて聴こえて少し違和感があるかも　削除して(2)のclapの余韻だけ残す付け方にしたほうが綺麗なはず　もしもう一つどこかに追加したいのであれば、(4)の始点に置いてあげたほうが自然かな？
Take your time!

All fixedです！
あと、個人的に01:02:513 (3) - からの3連打のパターンがやり難かったので変更しました。
~~他に変更した部分はありません。~~ 部分的にすこしスペーシング変えたりした部分がありました。(多分2.3箇所です。)

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-05-23T00:16:37+00:00

KSHR wrote:
~~Posted as a reminder. 水曜か木曜あたりにニョキッときます。~~
ニョキッ

[Creator’s word]
さてらいとさんより祝辞のspoilerbox内に”全て僕のものになる（litoluna & Naryugaを生温かい目で見ながら）”を追加　文字の色、大きさ等のエフェクトは任せます - Satelliteさんの許可が必要になります！！！！！！
[Naryuga’s Hard]
01:00:263 (3,4) - ここだけ大きいジャンプになってて少し変に目立ってると思う　こんな感じに調整してみない？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1626873 - ok perfect
0,328,60563,2,0,L|72:336,1,70,10|0,2:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,60863,6,0,P|228:332|252:256,1,140,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:27:263 (1) - 前のスピナーのところと似たような音が鳴ってるからこっちもデフォルトのwhistle追加とか？ - うーん、ここにSpinnerと同じようにwhistleを置くほどの音があるわけでもないのでそのままにしてあります
03:12:938 (1,1) - whistleの音にちょっと違和感　このスピナー2つはパターンから外していいと思う
それと、最初のスピナー終点（03:14:963 - ）のドラムスネアの音が他よりやや弱いから、それも拾えたら綺麗になりそう
例えば、03:14:963 - S:C1 clap, 03:17:363 - N:C1 clapとか - whisleは両方削除しました。　あとHitsound-Additionalのやつを、前者のスピナーはSoft-Soft、後者はSoft-Normalに変えてみました、
その他の大きめの変更: 02:33:563 (3) - をDSに忠実に縦向きにしてたのを横向きにしました
Take your time!

Blue = done
Pink = not done

Thank you!

UPDATE:
http://puu.sh/8Xd1F.osu

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-05-23T04:30:03+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
KSHR wrote:
~~Posted as a reminder. 水曜か木曜あたりにニョキッときます。~~
ニョキッ

[Creator’s word]
さてらいとさんより祝辞のspoilerbox内に”全て僕のものになる（litoluna & Naryugaを生温かい目で見ながら）”を追加　文字の色、大きさ等のエフェクトは任せます - Satelliteさんの許可が必要になります！！！！！！

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