Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ [TV Size] [Osu|Taiko]

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Maboyu

minyeob wrote:

[Easy]
00:29:061 Green line -> Should be placed on 00:29:058 fixed

[Hard]
00:29:061 Green line -> Should be placed on 00:29:058 fixed
01:27:028 (1,2,3) - Maybe lower sound volume is needed fixed
Thank you ^^
happy623
irc modded \o\

01:32 AliomLoung: 安安><
01:33 happy623: 安w
01:34 AliomLoung: 想請你幫我MOD圖 Q_Q
01:34 happy623: ;w;
01:34 happy623: 什麼圖?
01:34 *AliomLoung is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/371521 Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)]
01:35 AliomLoung: 最後一次做圖了XD
01:35 happy623: 為什麼OAO
01:35 AliomLoung: 要去當兵了Q_Q
01:35 happy623: D:. . .
01:36 happy623: 加油 ;w;
01:36 AliomLoung: OK的XD4個月而已><
01:36 happy623: 現在看可以嗎
01:36 happy623: w
01:36 happy623: 不然之後我又懶了
01:36 happy623: irc
01:37 AliomLoung: 可以!
01:37 happy623: 好吧等等
01:37 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/371521 Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) [Easy]]
01:39 happy623: 沒Vid嗎0 0?
01:39 AliomLoung: 啊
01:39 AliomLoung: 慘
01:39 AliomLoung: 忘記放..
01:40 AliomLoung: 做完就把VID忘了
01:40 happy623: 不要緊w
01:40 happy623: 00:11:464 (2,1,2,3) -
01:40 happy623: 你會聽到不對後面音樂
01:41 happy623: 這樣會蠻難抓到note的
01:41 AliomLoung: 摁!
01:42 happy623: 懂的改嗎0 0
01:42 AliomLoung: 不太懂0.0
01:42 happy623: 不懂我可以試試做例子
01:42 happy623: 好的
01:43 happy623: http://puu.sh/76ejV.jpg
01:43 happy623: 試試這樣
01:45 AliomLoung: 好!
01:46 AliomLoung: OK就改這樣!^^
01:47 happy623: 00:47:103 (1) -
01:47 happy623: finish放頭看看?
01:47 happy623: 怕太大聲的話加綠線也可以0 0
01:49 AliomLoung: 感覺這邊+FINISH不是說很好><
01:49 happy623: 好的
01:49 happy623: 01:06:952 (1) -
01:49 happy623: 這個頭也可以加
01:49 happy623: 不過你會覺得怪怪的
01:49 happy623: 所以用這種的Finish
01:50 happy623: http://puu.sh/76eNY.jpg
01:50 AliomLoung: 怪了怎麼是照片
01:51 happy623: !?
01:51 happy623: 233
01:51 happy623: 等等
01:51 AliomLoung: http://puu.sh/76eUs.jpg
01:51 happy623: 我也開不了
01:51 AliomLoung: 囧!
01:51 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358238
01:51 happy623: 左上那個Addtion
01:51 happy623: addition*
01:52 AliomLoung: 摁
01:52 happy623: 01:21:389 (5) - 這個同樣也可以放剛剛那種的F
01:53 happy623: 好了到NC
01:53 happy623: 你這個diff的NC不太一致;w;
01:53 AliomLoung: !!!真假
01:53 happy623: 01:01:539 (1) - 這裡你放了NC 但同樣 01:05:148 (4) - 沒放
01:54 happy623: 01:15:975 (3) - 也是
01:54 happy623: 不
01:54 happy623: 要改就大改了
01:54 happy623: 我寧願你刪走 01:01:539 (1) - 的NC
01:55 AliomLoung: 摁
01:55 happy623: 好了刪了那個就不用大改了
01:55 AliomLoung: 好了:D
01:56 happy623: 00:30:862 (1) -
01:56 happy623: 刪走NC
01:56 AliomLoung: OK!
01:56 happy623: 同樣把圖的NC一致點
01:56 AliomLoung: 好的:D
01:57 happy623: 00:43:494 (1) - 這段不錯的
01:57 AliomLoung: 謝謝><
01:57 happy623: Easy應該沒什麼了
01:58 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/375051 Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) [Normal]]
01:58 happy623: 00:12:366 (1) -
01:58 happy623: 尾巴加個Clap?
01:59 AliomLoung: 好
01:59 happy623: 不要看排位
01:59 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358267
01:59 happy623: 這種節奏比較好點
02:00 happy623: 因為現在的沒反映到 00:13:945 - 的重音 感覺有點點違和;w;
02:01 AliomLoung: xd ok改了><
02:02 happy623: 00:42:817 (1) - 如果沒NC的需要就可以移走了0 0
02:03 AliomLoung: 好 !其實是故意留的xd
02:03 happy623: 01:01:539 (1) - 刪NC, 也是同樣NC pattern一致的問題
02:03 happy623: w
02:04 happy623: 感覺也可以試試放一下我建議的那種Finnish啊0 0
02:04 AliomLoung: 01:12:817 (1,2,3) - 那這邊也是要刪nc了
02:04 happy623: 不然個人感覺有點空虛;w;
02:04 happy623: 這個可以留
02:04 AliomLoung: 摁
02:06 happy623: normal也okay 了
02:07 AliomLoung: 其實nm比較不專心做...
02:07 happy623: 就感覺多點hitsound比較好w
02:07 AliomLoung: 好www
02:07 happy623: xD 我也沒多抓啦 blanket那些應該okay了
02:07 AliomLoung: 摁><
02:07 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/371522 Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) [Hard]]
02:08 happy623: 00:06:952 (4) -
02:08 happy623: 這是1/8啦
02:08 AliomLoung: 1/8?
02:08 happy623: 到 00:07:178 停0 0
02:08 happy623: 00:07:178 - *
02:08 happy623: 你現在是1/4
02:09 AliomLoung: 能變成1/8?
02:10 happy623: 右上改
02:10 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358294
02:11 AliomLoung: 變成好小一顆xd
02:11 happy623: 恩ww
02:11 happy623: 不要緊的
02:11 AliomLoung: 好了xd
02:12 happy623: 01:01:539 (7) -
02:12 happy623: 加NC
02:12 happy623: 同樣問題w
02:13 happy623: 01:08:982 (2) - 感覺ctrl+g 的flow會比較流暢0 0
02:13 happy623: 因為會跟前面的 01:07:855 (4,5) - 的Flow一樣
02:14 AliomLoung: 摁 好都改了 :D
02:15 happy623: 01:21:389 (5,1) - 不交換NC嗎? 0 0
02:15 AliomLoung: 阿勒 我怎跑到紅線NC...
02:15 AliomLoung: 好了
02:16 AliomLoung: 話說
02:16 AliomLoung: 01:01:539 (7) - 這邊NC的話 會不會太短??
02:16 happy623: 因為跟你的patten
02:16 happy623: 你都是在類似的地方放NC
02:16 happy623: 01:05:148 (1) -
02:16 happy623: 像這裡
02:16 happy623: 01:08:757 (1) -
02:17 happy623: 01:15:975 (1) -
02:17 happy623: 明白嗎;w;
02:17 AliomLoung: 摁明白了XD
02:17 happy623: 應該沒了
Evening
Whew mod by Requesto

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

[JuDa's Oni]

00:18:231 - There seems to be a lack of kats here, even though the rhythm is continuous, also, I don't think it is good to end a kat rhythm on a blue line, it feels incomplete
01:07:178 - This break feels awkward and out of place for me I suggest to change 01:06:952 (303) - a finish

No other problems, the kat rhythm is very smooth and well spread here, I don't see much errors in that, you might consider some finishes to make the rhythm a bit more interesting though

[Ts8zs' Oni]
00:18:231 (4) - k > d | Using so many kats in succession feels as if a major rhythm ends here ( the rhythm continues instead ), I suggest to not have a kat here so that it feels as if the rhythm continues.
00:21:163 (3,4,5) - These triplets feels too isolated and it feels like it is overemphasizing this point here, I suggest to add a don on 00:20:937 to make the overall rhythm a bit less inconsistent
00:52:065 (137) - d > k | There seems to be a lack of kats at this point here, I suggest to add one in
01:14:170 (245) - k > K AND Modify| I strongly suggest a finish here since it is the start of another kiai time, you might also want to remove or shift some notes so as to fulfil the ranking criteria

The kat rhythm was pretty smooth except at some points, you might also want to override some patterns in order to fit in some major finishes so as to not make the chart unfitting to the music

[Muzu]
00:14:622 (45) - d > K OR D | This is the start of a major section here I suggest a big don or big kat so as to fit with the music
01:10:110 (118) - d > k | Your kat rhythm pattern suggests to have a kat here or else the rhythm will be ruined
01:14:170 (134) - d > D | This is the start of a kiai time, etc.

Smooth kat rhythm here no other problems

Good lucku
mingmichael
i will mod if it's already enough mods, sorry AliomLoung
around 2 until 3 mods again and call me back
Topic Starter
Maboyu

mingmichael wrote:

i will mod if it's already enough mods, sorry AliomLoung
around 2 until 3 mods again and call me back
OK^^
ts8zs
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少来点mod吧TAT
Koiyuki


From your request

[General]
  1. Add some audio-leadin to all diff, 1500ms is fine imo

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:140 - 这里背景的音其实很小,却用80%的finish,似乎有点过头
  2. 00:12:366 (3) - 头上忘了whistle?

[Normal]
  1. NC过多,两条长白线NC一次吧
  2. 00:39:885 (1) - repeat上也whistle
  3. 00:41:689 (4) - 尾巴whistle
  4. 00:42:817 (5) - 这上面就不加whi了?
  5. 01:12:140 (3) - 头上whistle?

[Hard]
  1. 00:42:592 (4,1) - blanket?
  2. 01:06:501 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:08:757 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:12:817 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:23:193 (6,1) - ^

挺简单的,我觉得没啥可挑
JUDYDANNY

lZenxl wrote:

Whew mod by Requesto

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

[JuDa's Oni]

00:18:231 - There seems to be a lack of kats here, even though the rhythm is continuous, also, I don't think it is good to end a kat rhythm on a blue line, it feels incomplete :arrow:nope. back sounds guitar still pitch not up ;w; and I make a strategy that this stream linked 00:19:358 (75,76,77) - kkk .
01:07:178 - This break feels awkward and out of place for me I suggest to change 01:06:952 (303) - a finish
:arrow:yes! good finisher :D
No other problems, the kat rhythm is very smooth and well spread here, I don't see much errors in that, you might consider some finishes to make the rhythm a bit more interesting though
:arrow:added 2 finishers on kiai as your suggestion. Thanks >w<

Good lucku
Thanks for mod lZenxl :):) and

toara_fixt wrote:

  1. BG 0.0 => BG 0.80
I agree "0,80". changed!
plz updalte ;)


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192,64,46426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,46539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,46652,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,46877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,47103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,47328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,47554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,47779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,48231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,48456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,48682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,48795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,48907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,49133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,49358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,49584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50261,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,50937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,51163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,51614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,51840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,52967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,53193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,53419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,53644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,53757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,53870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54208,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,54772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,55223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,55449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,55674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56125,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,56802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,57253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,57479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,57704,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,58155,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,58381,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,58607,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,58832,1,6,0:0:0:0:
155,87,59283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,59734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,64,59960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60637,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,60975,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,61990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,62892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,63,63118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,63343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,63569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,63795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,64020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,64133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,64246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,64471,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,64697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,75,64922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,63,65035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,65148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,65373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,65599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,65825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,65937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,66050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,63,66163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,66276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,75,66501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,66727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,66952,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,64,67404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,67629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,67855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68080,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68193,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,68982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,69208,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,69434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,69885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,69998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,33,70110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,70336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,70561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,70787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,71013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,71238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,71351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,71464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,33,71689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,71915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,72140,1,6,0:0:0:0:
208,33,72592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,72817,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,73043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,33,73155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,33,73268,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,73494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,73607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,73719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,73945,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,74170,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,64,74396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,74621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,74847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,74960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,75975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76652,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,76990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,77103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,77215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,77328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,63,77554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,77779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,78907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,79133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,75,79358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,79471,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,79584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,79809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,80035,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,80261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,63,80373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,80486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,80712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,75,80937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,32,81050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,81163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,81389,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,81840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,83193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,83644,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,84321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,84434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,84772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,85223,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,63,85449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,85674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,85787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,85900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,86351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,86802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,87028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,33,87479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,87704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,87930,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,88155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,64,88381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Cihyaa
hi. from game chat

Taiko mod ~

[General]
please remove 01:13:043 - , 01:14:170 - green line. this is taiko map.

[Ts8zs's Oni]
  1. 00:00:186 (1) - change d
  2. 00:43:945 (102,103) - change k d
  3. 00:48:907 (124) - change d
  4. 01:14:058 (244) - rem , 01:14:170 (244) - change D


[Ts8zs's Muzu]
  1. 00:00:186 (1) - change d
  2. 01:03:118 add k
  3. 01:05:148 (105) - change k
  4. 01:06:727 add k
  5. 01:10:336 add k
  6. 01:14:170 (137) - change D


[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:13:945 (50,54) - add finish
  2. 00:47:103 (206,209,214,217) - change d d d d


nice song :3
go ~
Topic Starter
Maboyu

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



From your request

[General]
  1. Add some audio-leadin to all diff, 1500ms is fine imo
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:140 - 这里背景的音其实很小,却用80%的finish,似乎有点过头
  2. 00:12:366 (3) - 头上忘了whistle? 以補上

[Normal]
  1. NC过多,两条长白线NC一次吧 已更改><
  2. 00:39:885 (1) - repeat上也whistle 以加
  3. 00:41:689 (4) - 尾巴whistle 好!
  4. 00:42:817 (5) - 这上面就不加whi了?這個地方+whi不好 所以才沒有放..
  5. 01:12:140 (3) - 头上whistle?

[Hard]
  1. 00:42:592 (4,1) - blanket? 這邊感覺還好所以不改..
  2. 01:06:501 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  3. 01:08:757 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  4. 01:12:817 (3,4) - ^ fixed
  5. 01:23:193 (6,1) - ^ fixed

挺简单的,我觉得没啥可挑
Thanks m醬的mod ><
JUDYDANNY

Cihyaa wrote:

hi. from game chat

Taiko mod ~

[General]
please remove 01:13:043 - , 01:14:170 - green line. this is taiko map.
:arrow:agree. :D
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:13:945 (50,54) - add finish
    :arrow:50はfixed. 54はkeep. 旋律を意識したいのとAパートは落ち着いて繋ぎたいので1/4 stream keepで;;
  2. 00:47:103 (206,209,214,217) - change d d d d
    :arrow:ddk d d k d だと流石にドラムばかりっていうのもありますし、バックベースのピッチも若干の変化が感じられるので変化付けは残したかったです。その代わりに208,216をdに変えてddk d k d d k と終端をd kで直しました。
    確かにここは変だった;;ありがとうございます! :)


nice song :3
go ~
Thanks for mod Cihyaa :):)
I've already taken alimonLoung .osu file ;)
Atrue
Hello~
From ingame-pm

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
风格不错,简洁明快
[Easy]
General
也是没有太多要说
Beats
00:11:464 (2,3) - 不确定这种节奏是否适合新手
01:24:095 (1,2) - 同上
Hitsound
01:06:952 (1) - finish用的唐突
01:19:584 (2,3,4) - 强调这里也不要取消whistle
NCs
[Normal]
General
挺好的
Beats
00:32:667 (1,2,3) - 试试这个,减少vocal长音的空拍,显得更加丰满
Placement
00:29:509 (2,3) - 对称弄得更漂亮一点
01:14:847 (2,3) - 还是说不好看,有点斜
Hitsound
01:20:035 (1) - 音效弄得有点弱,这里已经是很重的音了,而打击感却有些缺失
[Hard]
General
没有很多可以说的
Placement
00:02:892 (1,2) - 对称的话我想也兼顾blanket比较好
00:24:998 (3,4) - 注意flow与jump的关系,一个跳和flow change合用可能不是很合适,况且这里没有很大的跳的感觉
Hitsound
01:25:449 - 音效不知为何出来一个drum,我还是觉得clap(哦。。用的是whistle)合适一些,有一点突然,想法是好的

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From ingame-pm

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
风格不错,简洁明快
[Easy]
General
也是没有太多要说
Beats
00:11:464 (2,3) - 不确定这种节奏是否适合新手 我覺得這個地方還好不是說很難 所以不改><
01:24:095 (1,2) - 同上 ^
Hitsound
01:06:952 (1) - finish用的唐突 感覺這樣+蠻適合的
01:19:584 (2,3,4) - 强调这里也不要取消whistle 好!
NCs
[Normal]
General
挺好的
Beats
00:32:667 (1,2,3) - 试试这个,减少vocal长音的空拍,显得更加丰满
就這樣改!
Placement
00:29:509 (2,3) - 对称弄得更漂亮一点 fixed
01:14:847 (2,3) - 还是说不好看,有点斜 fixed
Hitsound
01:20:035 (1) - 音效弄得有点弱,这里已经是很重的音了,而打击感却有些缺失 提升一點音效的聲音
[Hard]
General
没有很多可以说的
Placement
00:02:892 (1,2) - 对称的话我想也兼顾blanket比较好 這邊的話想保持現在這樣就好了
00:24:998 (3,4) - 注意flow与jump的关系,一个跳和flow change合用可能不是很合适,况且这里没有很大的跳的感觉 fixed
Hitsound
01:25:449 - 音效不知为何出来一个drum,我还是觉得clap(哦。。用的是whistle)合适一些,有一点突然,想法是好的 fixed

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thanks you ^^
yf_bmp
14:51 AliomLoung: !
14:51 yf_bmp: o.o
14:54 yf_bmp: 什么图
14:55 *AliomLoung is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/371521 Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)]
14:55 AliomLoung: XD
15:01 yf_bmp: ..
15:01 yf_bmp: 感觉没啥好摸
15:01 AliomLoung: !!
15:01 AliomLoung: ><
15:03 yf_bmp: 00:02:892 (1,2) - 第两个不如复制下(1) 然后再翻转
15:03 yf_bmp: 我就摸细节了
15:03 yf_bmp: 00:08:306 (4,1) - 平行一下
15:04 AliomLoung: 好
15:04 yf_bmp: 00:10:110 (4,1) - 包得更好些
15:05 yf_bmp: 00:12:592 (1,2) - 这两个距离看起来有些近 最好两个尾部也保持普通间距
15:05 yf_bmp: 00:28:381 (7,1) - 同上
15:06 AliomLoung: 這個是HARD?
15:06 yf_bmp: 嗯
15:06 yf_bmp: 00:35:825 (5,1) - 有些近
15:07 yf_bmp: 00:56:013 (1) - 取消NC 00:56:125 (2) - 这里NC
15:07 yf_bmp: 01:03:343 (3) - 这个稍微修修好些 接近尾部那里的白点
15:08 yf_bmp: 01:04:020 (4,5,7) - 让这三个看起来像正三角型 01:04:020 (4,5,6) - 就像这三个
15:10 AliomLoung: 好
15:11 yf_bmp: 01:19:584 (1) - 试试ctrl+G?
15:11 AliomLoung: OK !!!
15:12 yf_bmp: 差不多了
15:13 yf_bmp: normal
15:13 AliomLoung: WWW
15:13 AliomLoung: 謝謝><
15:13 yf_bmp: 00:25:449 (1,2) - 看起来有些挤
15:14 AliomLoung: 那這樣的話我把1包住 (2)尾巴
15:14 yf_bmp: ok
15:15 AliomLoung: 等下 那如果
15:15 AliomLoung: 把(2)尾巴
15:15 AliomLoung: 00:27:253 (3) -
15:15 AliomLoung: 疊到這邊呢
15:16 AliomLoung: 啊不好
15:16 yf_bmp: 00:25:449 (1) - 的角度转一下
15:16 AliomLoung: 還是(2)尾巴讓(1)包好了
15:17 yf_bmp: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1377219 可以试试这样
15:18 yf_bmp: 00:34:246 (3,4) - 包住?
15:18 AliomLoung: 好
15:20 yf_bmp: normal就这样
15:20 AliomLoung: 這邊不修了><
15:21 AliomLoung: WW好 XD
15:22 yf_bmp: easy
15:22 yf_bmp: 00:56:802 (2,3,4) - 距离排排好
15:23 AliomLoung: OK好了 這邊應該是NOTE的時候不小心關掉間距..
15:23 yf_bmp: 没别的什么了
15:23 AliomLoung: 摁謝謝YF RRRRRRRRRRRRR
15:23 yf_bmp: :D Nice
15:24 AliomLoung: 最後一張圖:D
15:24 yf_bmp: 还有?
15:24 AliomLoung: 沒了
Crystal
Hi~ in-game request~

[General]
检查一下AiMod, 很多冲突

[Easy]
01:01:539 (3) - 感觉有点瘪;w; 这样感觉更好↓
01:21:389 (1) - 同上, 需要圆一点

[Normal]
感觉挺好的:D

[Hard]
00:06:952 (4) - 这个尾巴稍微往左边歪一点会更好看 (推荐尾巴在x:76 y:80)
00:45:298 (5,6) - blanket
01:18:456 (2) - 整拍的滑条后面紧跟1/2拍开始滑条..有点不太舒服 建议节奏上01:18:456 (2,3) Ctrl+G
01:25:674 (2) - ^,建议改成1circle+1slider


整体挺好的,加油~~
Mei
hi, as your request

[hard]
  1. 00:05:148 (4) - 在00:05:373 这里是有音的,所以我建议吧00:05:148 (4) - 移到 x188 y108. 在红线上加个note,位置就在你原来4的位置,这样就可以组成一个三角形~
  2. 00:10:561 (5,6,1) - 叠的太多我个人会觉得不好打,建议把 6移到x260 y276
  3. 00:12:592 (1,2) - 分别在滑条的头尾上加finish
  4. 00:13:945 (4) - 滑条头上finish
  5. 00:12:592 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段其实我感觉用clap的效果不如用whistle
  6. 00:28:381 (7) - 滑条头上加个whistle
  7. 01:02:892 (2) - ctrl+g
  8. 01:14:170 (1) - 这个滑条头上总觉到要加个音效。。。试试finish
[normal]
  1. 00:03:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 试试这个节奏
  2. 00:08:982 (5,4) - 不要这2个note><
  3. 00:12:366 (1,2,3,4) - 试试这个节奏
  4. 00:32:216 (5) - 不要这个note并且把前一个滑条延长
  5. 00:40:561 (2) - 移到x256y252
  6. 01:26:351 (5,1) - 把1去掉然后吧5变成1/2的折返滑条

没什么好说啊,节奏比较简单,排列也蛮工整, 加油rank吧 :)
Topic Starter
Maboyu

[_Crystal] wrote:

Hi~ in-game request~

[General]
检查一下AiMod, 很多冲突 都修好了!

[Easy]
01:01:539 (3) - 感觉有点瘪;w; 这样感觉更好↓ 感覺差不多>< 所以不改..
01:21:389 (1) - 同上, 需要圆一点 感覺這也還好所以不改!

[Normal]
感觉挺好的:D 謝謝><

[Hard]
00:06:952 (4) - 这个尾巴稍微往左边歪一点会更好看 (推荐尾巴在x:76 y:80) fixed
00:45:298 (5,6) - blanketixed 這邊沒有要blanketixed所以不改了!
01:18:456 (2) - 整拍的滑条后面紧跟1/2拍开始滑条..有点不太舒服 建议节奏上01:18:456 (2,3) Ctrl+G fixed
01:25:674 (2) - ^,建议改成1circle+1slider 好!


整体挺好的,加油~~
Thanks you ^^
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Mei wrote:

hi, as your request

[hard]
  1. 00:05:148 (4) - 在00:05:373 这里是有音的,所以我建议吧00:05:148 (4) - 移到 x188 y108. 在红线上加个note,位置就在你原来4的位置,这样就可以组成一个三角形~ 好!
  2. 00:10:561 (5,6,1) - 叠的太多我个人会觉得不好打,建议把 6移到x260 y276 ok><
  3. 00:12:592 (1,2) - 分别在滑条的头尾上加finish 聽起來怪怪的 不改了><
  4. 00:13:945 (4) - 滑条头上finish 好!
  5. 00:12:592 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段其实我感觉用clap的效果不如用whistle 這段沒用到clap說!
  6. 00:28:381 (7) - 滑条头上加个whistle 一樣聽起來怪怪的 >< 不改!
  7. 01:02:892 (2) - ctrl+g 感覺這樣就可以了!
  8. 01:14:170 (1) - 这个滑条头上总觉到要加个音效。。。试试finish fixed
[normal]
  1. 00:03:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 试试这个节奏 我覺得現在這樣就可以了!
  2. 00:08:982 (5,4) - 不要这2个note>< 為何呢?
  3. 00:12:366 (1,2,3,4) - 试试这个节奏 我覺得現在這樣就可以了!
  4. 00:32:216 (5) - 不要这个note并且把前一个滑条延长 感覺沒什麼差別Q_Q 不改><
  5. 00:40:561 (2) - 移到x256y252 改了打起來不習慣0.0 不改!
  6. 01:26:351 (5,1) - 把1去掉然后吧5变成1/2的折返滑条 ^

没什么好说啊,节奏比较简单,排列也蛮工整, 加油rank吧 :)
Thanks you ^^
mintong89
Taiko Mod Request from PM.
d - small red
k - small blue
D - big red
K - big blue
[JuDa's Oni]
I suggest you make HP Drain Rate to 6 to make it harder because it's Oni but it easy for me.

00:03:118 - Well, you can add a k to make the pattern more different, and it have a high pitch sound here.
00:06:727 - I suggest you to add a d here, because it almost want to change the level of difficulty at 00:06:952 - here, so add k can make player notice it.
00:08:080 (24) - It will better if you move to 00:08:080 - , because if you hear clearly the drum beat sound like ddd ddd ddd ddd, so the d d k d _ d k might be just like ddd ddk ddd ddk at this case. (or if you prefer, kkk kkd kkk kkd)
00:11:238 (40) - I suggest d here because it has a guitar sound and if you put d it will assign that it has a guitar. If you decline, at least make 00:11:464 (41) - as d.
00:13:494 - k here, has a high pitched-drum.
00:21:050 - add a d here as can make more fun.

Well, it's good diff for me, good job at this.
[Ts8zs' Oni]

00:05:148 (19,20,21) - kdk sound ugly here, i suggest you to make ddk and make 00:04:922 (18) - as k. It will sound more natural.
00:07:404 - Well, I think you can put more note here, since it just like "chorus" thing or something like that, so it might be weird if you didn't assign the note difficulty properly.
00:18:231 (4) - I might accept the k here, but not 00:16:426 (64) - here. Because it have same as this pitch because this k and you put as d, so i suggest to this note as d too.
00:28:381 (35,36,37) - It will be sound more good if you put kkk as ending of part.
00:29:058 (38) - D? to represent as a new part.
00:31:764 (51) - k here, to make like 00:29:734 (42,43) -
01:14:170 (245) - d? it really weird if didn't put the "stress" sound at here.

I want to emphasize again that the note difficulty, the diff seem didn't assign properly at these, some part just d d k d _ d k at "powerful sound" part, and pre-chorus with a lot of 1/4 note. So I wish you can notice these stuff.

Well, the Muzu is well-made so I think I don't want to point out the nazi stuff.
Good Luck!
YoshinoSakura
Hi
Ingame PM req

[General]
aimod里有些问题不知道影不影响
其实这歌可以做insane的

[Hard]
00:00:862 这里不来个note?
00:02:892 (1) - 这个不nc,下一个nc
00:05:148 (4,5) - 这里是三连吧
00:08:306 (4,1) - 不是平行的不好看啊
00:13:945 (4) - 头finish
00:18:231 (5) - nc
00:19:584 (1) - 这个nc就不要了
00:36:276 (1) - 像是blanket但又完全没包好
01:28:155 (3) - 个人觉得延长到01:28:607 更好

[Normal]
00:13:494 (3) - 尾finish
01:20:035 (1) - 这里开始的啪啪啪的鼓声怎么美丽了

[Easy]
00:11:464 (2,3) - 对于easy稍稍有些难,不过130左右的bpm可以接受

那个鼓声一会儿大一会儿小听着别扭,我推荐使用这个鼓声
图质量不错,我觉得可以找bat惹
GL :)
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